期末培优 应用文写作专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语人教版(2019)
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 丰城市校级期中）假定你是李华，你正在为你校校园网招聘英语编辑．你校留学生Leo来信表示对该职位感兴趣，请给他回信，告诉他该职位的相关要求．内容要点如下：
1．写信目的；
2．职位要求；
3．报名方式．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：简历resume
2．（2024秋 图木舒克校级期末）如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 海南）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
4．（2024秋 连城县校级月考）假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到地震侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
（1）得知情况及感受；
（2）表达安慰和鼓励；
（3）打算提供的帮助。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
5．（2024秋 罗湖区校级期中）假如你是一名记者，请根据以下提示，用英语向China Daily写一篇有关台湾大地震的报道．
时间：1999年9月21日凌晨1时47分
震级：7.6级
人员损失：到当晚22时，已有1670人死亡，3924人受伤，2000多人被困，数百人失踪，许多人无家可归．
设施破坏：停电，房屋、桥梁倒塌，交通受阻．
严重性：是台湾百年未遇的强烈地震．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．生词提示：7.6级 magnitude7.6
6．（2024秋 凤城市校级月考）假定你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假了一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待你．
请给他写一封信，表示感谢．
包括下列要点：1．感谢他的热情招待2．了解了美国文化3．邀请他来中国旅游．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行为流畅；
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
7．（2024秋 全国卷Ⅱ、Ⅲ模拟）水是生命之源，但水资源短缺和水污染已成为世界最严重的资源环境问题之一，需要引起极大关注．假如你是李华，请你给 China Daily投稿，表达一名中学生对此问题的关心．要点如下：
1．世界人口增多，工农业发展需要越来越多的水；
2．河流、湖泊污染严重；
3．全民动员，保护水资源．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
8．（2024秋 江西）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动．假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动．内容包括：
1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2．活动的过程；
3．你对于这次活动的评论．
注意：1．词数120左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
9．假定你是李华， 在英国做交换生， 昨天你的室友Tony在去教室的路上跌倒了， 一个中国女孩救了他．请给校求助中心写一封邮件， 寻求那名帮助Tony的中国女学生．
提示词： exchange student交换生； roommate室友
fall down跌倒； express表达
注意： 1． 词数100左右；
2． 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3． 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数．
Dear Sir/Madam，
____________
Yours，
Li Hua
10．5月25日，你校学生会组织了为地震灾区捐款的活动．同学们踊跃参加，共筹得善款35000元．假如你是校英语报的记者李华，请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道．
1．时间、地点、任务、活动；2．同学们的反应．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计入总词数）；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
．
11．（2024秋 鞍山一模）假如你是李华，正在给你的美国朋友Jack写一封信，推荐他使用微信软件．内容要点包括：
1．微信是由中国人研发的一款软件，现在在国内非常受欢迎；
2．它有很多实用的功能，例如：可以发送文字、图片、视频等；
3．人们可以通过微信了解新闻、学习课外知识；
4．它可以帮助你们了解彼此生活中发生的事，更方便交流思想、分享心情。
注意：1．词数为100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you．
12．（2024秋 山东）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖．校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1．参加英语角的益处；
2．坚持写英语日记的作用；
3．英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．
注意：1．词数：120﹣150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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13．你班准备召开How to learn English in a fun way"的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享两个学习方法并解释原因。内容包括：
（1）下载一些应用程序。原因：1）扩大词汇量 2）增强听力、口语或写作技能 3）提供有趣的学习方式
（2）结交外国笔友。原因：1）了解外国文化 2）练习使用英语
（3）表达希望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
Thank you for your listening!
14．假定你是李华，你班里有些同学在英语学习上有些困难。写一篇博客，提出一些英语学习建议，内容要点如下：
1．收听英语节目；
2．看英语电视节目和电影；
3．多读，多讲，多练。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．假设你是红星中学的学生李明，上周你在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。老师请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你课外学习英语的经验并发表在你的博客上，以供其他人借鉴。内容如下：
1.参加英语角的益处；
2.坚持写英语日记的作用；
3.英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。
注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.________
期末培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 丰城市校级期中）假定你是李华，你正在为你校校园网招聘英语编辑．你校留学生Leo来信表示对该职位感兴趣，请给他回信，告诉他该职位的相关要求．内容要点如下：
1．写信目的；
2．职位要求；
3．报名方式．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：简历resume
【答案】Dear Leo，
Leaning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it.
Firstly，it is a must for the applicants to be expert in English writing.Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed.By the way，you'd better send your resume before May 20 to me if you want to be one of us.
If you have any other questions，don't forget to drop me a line.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it.
译文：得知你有兴趣成为我们学校网站的英文编辑，我写信告诉你一些情况。
分析：这句话使用现在分词作伴随状语。
高分句型二：Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed.
译文：第二，既关心时事又对新闻有浓厚兴趣的人受到欢迎。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句修饰people。
【解答】Dear Leo，
Learning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it. 【高分句型一】（写信目的）
Firstly，it is a must for the applicants to be expert in English writing.Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed. 【高分句型二】（职位要求）By the way，you'd better send your resume before May 20 to me if you want to be one of us.（报名方式）
If you have any other questions，don't forget to drop me a line.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
2．（2024秋 图木舒克校级期末）如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．
句子里，With 的复合结构swimming sweeping nationwide做伴随状语．
随着游泳运动席卷全国，我们学校最近成立了一个游泳俱乐部．
2．In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
句子里， 现在分词ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches做伴随状语；关系词 which 引导非限制性定语从句cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
此外，还举办了多种多样的水上活动，从日常练习到定期组织的比赛，既培养了体育精神，又提高了游泳技能．
【解答】Dear Peter，
With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．【高分句型一】 In light of your great passion about it， I'm writing to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
In order to enrich our campus life， the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle．（组建俱乐部的目的） In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．【高分句型二】 More appealing water games are arranged for us to get entertained and refreshed． Amazing， isn't it？ （俱乐部的主要活动）Please sign up in Mr． Smith's office before next Friday．（报名的时间和地点）
Such a great chance is it that you can't afford to miss it． I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations．（再次邀请）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
3．（2024秋 海南）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．
译文：参与者包括来自各个年级的学生和对田径运动热情高涨的教职员工．
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．
译文：在赛后采访了一些参赛者，我们发现这次比赛受到了好评．
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成式作时间状语．
【解答】A Cross﹣Country Running Race
To promote healthy lifestyles in the campus and around the city，Red Star Secondary School organized a cross﹣country running race last Sunday．（活动目的）
Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．【高分句型一】（参加人员） The route of the race started from the school's gate and ended at the foot of the Southern Mountain．（跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下） Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．【高分句型二】 "I felt like I have achieved something great when I reached the goal line，" said a 9th﹣grade student．（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
4．（2024秋 连城县校级月考）假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到地震侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
（1）得知情况及感受；
（2）表达安慰和鼓励；
（3）打算提供的帮助。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.I am writing to express my deepest sympathy for you.
You must feel sad now.However，life isn't so bad.As long as you remain optimistic，you will get through this difficult period.As a strong﹣willed man，you will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the earthquake brought about.If I can be of any help，please don't hesitate to let me know.If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.
翻译：听说你的家乡发生了一场可怕而严重的地震，造成了巨大损失，我感到非常遗憾。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.
翻译：如果有必要，我会号召我的同学向你捐款，帮助你度过难关。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.【高分句型一】I am writing to express my deepest sympathy for you.（得知情况及感受）
You must feel sad now.However，life isn't so bad.As long as you remain optimistic，you will get through this difficult period.As a strong﹣willed man，you will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the earthquake brought about.If I can be of any help，please don't hesitate to let me know.（表达安慰和鼓励）If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.【高分句型二】（打算提供的帮助）
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】书信类作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5．（2024秋 罗湖区校级期中）假如你是一名记者，请根据以下提示，用英语向China Daily写一篇有关台湾大地震的报道．
时间：1999年9月21日凌晨1时47分
震级：7.6级
人员损失：到当晚22时，已有1670人死亡，3924人受伤，2000多人被困，数百人失踪，许多人无家可归．
设施破坏：停电，房屋、桥梁倒塌，交通受阻．
严重性：是台湾百年未遇的强烈地震．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．生词提示：7.6级 magnitude7.6
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．By 22： 00 p．m．the number of people who were killed in the earthquake had reached 1670．
句子里，修饰先行词people，关系词 who引导定语从句 were killed in the earthquake．
截至22时，地震遇难人数已达1670人．
2．It is the strongest earthquake that has ever hit Taiwan in a century．
句子里，强调句式It is the strongest earthquake that，强调主语．
这是台湾百年来最强烈的地震．
【解答】At 1：47 a．m．on September 21st 1999， a terrible earthquake of magnitude 7.6 shook Taiwan． （交代时间，地点以及事件）By 22： 00 p．m．the number of people who were killed in the earthquake had reached 1670．【高分句型一】 As many as 3924 people were injured．Over 2000 people were trapped in the fallen buildings and hundreds of people were still missing． A great number of people had lost their homes． The earthquake had the electricity cut off， the traffic stopped and a great many buildings and bridges were destroyed． It is the strongest earthquake that has ever hit Taiwan in a century．【高分句型二】（叙述台湾大地震的相关情况）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程．积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效．
6．（2024秋 凤城市校级月考）假定你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假了一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待你．
请给他写一封信，表示感谢．
包括下列要点：1．感谢他的热情招待2．了解了美国文化3．邀请他来中国旅游．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行为流畅；
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一：Besides，It was the food you cooked for me that impressed me deeply．另外，是你为我做的食物给我留下了深刻的印象．本句是强调句，被强调部分是the food you cooked for me．
高分句型二：More importantly，our conversation was wonderful，which made me aware of English culture and customs．更重要的是，我们的谈话非常精彩，这让我了解了英国的文化和风俗．本句是非限制性定语从句．which指代前文整个句子的意思．
【解答】Dear Luke，
How is it going？I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality when I was on holiday in America．【写信目的】
Firstly，I want to say how much I enjoyed the stay with you at your home．Besides，It was the food you cooked for me that impressed me deeply．（高分句型一） More importantly，our conversation was wonderful，which made me aware of English culture and customs．（高分句型二） By the way，would you like to pay a visit to China．【了解美国文化】
I'd be extremely delighted if you can accept my invitation．Looking forward to your early reply．【邀请来中国】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
7．（2024秋 全国卷Ⅱ、Ⅲ模拟）水是生命之源，但水资源短缺和水污染已成为世界最严重的资源环境问题之一，需要引起极大关注．假如你是李华，请你给 China Daily投稿，表达一名中学生对此问题的关心．要点如下：
1．世界人口增多，工农业发展需要越来越多的水；
2．河流、湖泊污染严重；
3．全民动员，保护水资源．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
As we all know， no life can live without water． Water is of great importance to all living things． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water．
However， as the population grows and industry and agriculture develop， more and more water is needed and used． Besides， many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories， and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things．
Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth． Otherwise， the last drop of water on the earth will be human's tear!
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇关于水资源短缺和水污染问题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．
高分句型
1． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water．句子里 Not only位于句首，句子 do people need water用部分倒装．
人们不仅需要水，而且植物和动物也需要水．
2．Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth．
句子里it's high time 后的句子用we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， 表示"早该做某事了"．
因此，我们应该采取措施防止水被污染，尽可能地节约用水，保护地球上的水源．
【解答】Dear Editor，
As we all know， no life can live without water． Water is of great importance to all living things． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water【高分句型一】．（水的重要性）
However， as the population grows and industry and agriculture develop， more and more water is needed and used． Besides， many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories， and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things．（水资源短缺和水污染的现状）
Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth．【高分句型二】 Otherwise， the last drop of water on the earth will be human's tear!（号召人们保护水资源）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
8．（2024秋 江西）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动．假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动．内容包括：
1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2．活动的过程；
3．你对于这次活动的评论．
注意：1．词数120左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，报道星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行的一次登山活动．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
写作要点：1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；2．活动的过程；3．你对于这次活动的评论．
重要短语：in order to（为了），encourage sb to do sth（鼓励某人做某事），organize sth（组织某事），take part in （参加），set out for（开始做某事），enjoy sth （享受某事），fall behind（落后），offer help（提供帮助），be bathed in（沐浴在），cheer with joy（高兴地欢呼），benefit sb（对某人有利），get close to nature （接近大自然），promote sth（提升某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10．
此处是动词不定式短语"in order to do sth"作目的状语，主句为"our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10"．
【高分句型二】
2．Bathed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy．
此处是由过去分词短语"Bathed in sunshine"作时间状语，主句为"we jumped and cheered with joy"，主句的主语为"we"与所给动词"bathe"构成逻辑上的被动关系．
【高分句型三】
3．Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，it also promoted the friendship among us．
此处是由部分倒装结构，结构为"Not only+一般疑问句形式，but also+句子"，意为"不但…而且…"．
【解答】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10．Hundreds of us took part in it．【高分句型一】（时间与地点）
It was a nice day．At 8：00 am，we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits．All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery．When some fell behind，others would come and offer help．About 2 hours later，we all reached the top．Bathed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy．【高分句型二】（活动的过程）
The activity benefited us a lot．Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，it also promoted the friendship among us．【高分句型三】What a wonderful time!（评论）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
9．假定你是李华， 在英国做交换生， 昨天你的室友Tony在去教室的路上跌倒了， 一个中国女孩救了他．请给校求助中心写一封邮件， 寻求那名帮助Tony的中国女学生．
提示词： exchange student交换生； roommate室友
fall down跌倒； express表达
注意： 1． 词数100左右；
2． 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3． 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数．
Dear Sir/Madam，
____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是半开放式作文．你是在伦敦做交换生的李华，昨天你的室友Tony在校园摔倒后住院．要求你给校求助中心写封邮件，寻找帮助Tony的中国学生．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．
重要短语：look for （寻找），on the way to…（在去…的路上），fall down （跌倒），Thanks to（由于），in time（及时），be eager to （渴望做某事），look forward to （期望，渴望），
高分句型：
1．Yesterday， my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．
昨天，我的室友托尼在去教室的路上，他摔倒了，几乎动弹不了．
①句子看似简单却，其实用了同位语；②when引导一个时间状语．
2．Thanks to the kind girl， Tony was sent to hospital in time．
幸亏一位好心的女孩，托尼被及时送到了医院．
使用一般过去时态的被动语态，显得句子丰富多彩，Thanks to 是一个介词短语，表示原因
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua， an exchange student from China． I am writing to ask you to look for a Chinese student．Yesterday， my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．（高分句型一）（写信目的）
Just at that moment， a Chinese girl came to him． She gave him first aid and called an ambulance． Thanks to the kind girl， Tony was sent to hospital in time． （高分句型二）But the girl left quietly before Tony could express his thanks． The girl is about 18 years old and of medium height with short hair． Tony is eager to meet her to express his sincere thanks． Could you please help find her？（事情经过及寻找好心人的迫切心情）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
10．5月25日，你校学生会组织了为地震灾区捐款的活动．同学们踊跃参加，共筹得善款35000元．假如你是校英语报的记者李华，请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道．
1．时间、地点、任务、活动；2．同学们的反应．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计入总词数）；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
On May 25，an activity to donate money to the disaster area in Tibet was held by the Students' Union in our school．（简要介绍内容）
As we know，a big earthquake hit Nepal on April 25．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．It started from eight o'clock and lasted two hours．In the end，35，000 yuan was collected and given to the Red Cross in our city．（介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果）
We were very glad to give our pocket money away．（学生的感受）
By Li Hua，School Newspaper ．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一则新闻报道．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般过去时态为主．内容包括：一简要新闻内容；二介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果；三学生的反应．
高分句型：
1．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．句子里And some houses in Tibet是主语，which代指先行词some houses in Tibet，引导非限制性定语从句 is close to Nepal，主句的谓语动词是were destroyed表示"被毁坏"．
西藏的一些靠近尼泊尔的房子也在这个事故里被破坏了．
2．Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．句子里Therefore表示"因此"，动词不定式短语to show our concern to the victims做目的状语，took part in表示"参加"；过去分词短语held in our library做 the donation activity 的定语．
因此，为了显示我们队灾民的关心，我们学校所有的学生都参加了在图书馆举办的捐款活动．
【解答】Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
On May 25，an activity to donate money to the disaster area in Tibet was held by the Students' Union in our school．（简要新闻内容）
As we know，a big earthquake hit Nepal on April 25．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．【高分句型一】Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．【高分句型二】It started from eight o'clock and lasted two hours．In the end，35，000 yuan was collected and given to the Red Cross in our city．（介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果）
We were very glad to give our pocket money away．（学生的反应）
By Li Hua，School Newspaper
【点评】考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．
11．（2024秋 鞍山一模）假如你是李华，正在给你的美国朋友Jack写一封信，推荐他使用微信软件．内容要点包括：
1．微信是由中国人研发的一款软件，现在在国内非常受欢迎；
2．它有很多实用的功能，例如：可以发送文字、图片、视频等；
3．人们可以通过微信了解新闻、学习课外知识；
4．它可以帮助你们了解彼此生活中发生的事，更方便交流思想、分享心情。
注意：1．词数为100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you． It is invented by Chinese and quite popular in China now．Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on．In this way，it is convenient to know we are getting along and what happened to each other．Besides，we can know the latest news and learn various knowledge that is out of our textbooks through WeChat as well．With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．
Therefore，isn't it a wise choice for us to communicate through it？
Looking forward to meeting you on WeChat．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on． （高分句型一）句中Having a lot of practical functions为现在分词作状语
有很多实用功能，它可以发送文本，图片和视频等．
With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．（高分句型二）句中as意为"尽管"，句子部分倒装
在我们的帮助下，我们可以彼此交流思想，尽管距离遥远，但是可以及时分享感受．
【解答】Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you．It is invented by Chinese and quite popular in China now．Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on． （高分句型一）In this way，it is convenient to know we are getting along and what happened to each other．Besides，we can know the latest news and learn various knowledge that is out of our textbooks through WeChat as well．With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．（高分句型二）（介绍微信）
Therefore，isn't it a wise choice for us to communicate through it？Looking forward to meeting you on WeChat．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
12．（2024秋 山东）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖．校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1．参加英语角的益处；
2．坚持写英语日记的作用；
3．英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．
注意：1．词数：120﹣150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
As a high school student，I consider English a very important subject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took an active part in English corner and other after﹣class English activities，which benefit me a lot．
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who share the same interest with me．Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oral English improved a lot．I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only by practice will we make more progress．Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but I believe hard work pays off． ．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一篇稿件，介绍课外学习英语的经验．要点包括：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：learn words by heart （用心背单词），feel nervous （觉得紧张），give sb good advice on （给某人关于…的建议），chances to do sth （做某事的机会），make much progress （取得很大进展），memorize new words （记忆新单词）．
【解答】As a high school student，I consider English a very important subject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took an active part in English corner and other after﹣class English activities，which benefit me a lot．【高分句型】（开头﹣﹣﹣引出话题）
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who share the same interest with me．【高分句型】Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oral English improved a lot．（参加英语角的益处） I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only by practice will we make more progress．【高分句型】（坚持写日记的作用） Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．【高分句型】（英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）的帮助）
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but I believe hard work pays off．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
13．你班准备召开How to learn English in a fun way"的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享两个学习方法并解释原因。内容包括：
（1）下载一些应用程序。原因：1）扩大词汇量 2）增强听力、口语或写作技能 3）提供有趣的学习方式
（2）结交外国笔友。原因：1）了解外国文化 2）练习使用英语
（3）表达希望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
Thank you for your listening!
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills.What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.Secondly，making foreign pen pals is also a good way to make us understand foreign culture more easily.And we can have more opportunities to practice using English with them.
As we all know，learning English in a fun way can improve our efficiency.Hopefully my tips will be of some help to you.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】高分句型一
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills.
翻译：首先，我们可以下载一些应用程序，通过这些应用程序，我们不仅可以扩大词汇量，还可以提高听、说或写技能。
分析：句子里，介词by后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills。
高分句型二
What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.
翻译：更重要的是，应用程序可以提供有趣的学习方法。
分析：句子里，What引导主语从句is more important；that引导表语从句the applications can provide interesting learning methods。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.（点明主题）
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills. 【高分句型一】What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.【高分句型二】 （下载一些应用程序以及原因）Secondly，making foreign pen pals is also a good way to make us understand foreign culture more easily.And we can have more opportunities to practice using English with them.（结交外国笔友以及原因）
As we all know，learning English in a fun way can improve our efficiency.Hopefully my tips will be of some help to you.（表达希望）
Thank you for your listening!（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
14．假定你是李华，你班里有些同学在英语学习上有些困难。写一篇博客，提出一些英语学习建议，内容要点如下：
1．收听英语节目；
2．看英语电视节目和电影；
3．多读，多讲，多练。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】I know some classmates have trouble in learning English.Don't worry，and here are some advice for your reference.
First，if you want to improve your listening ability，you may listen to some tapes and radio programs in English.You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.Last but not least，try to read aloud and practice speaking English.I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.
I believe you'll make great progress following the above advice.
【分析】高分句型一
You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.
分析：句子里，which引导非限制性定语从句is very helpful。
翻译：你也可以看英语电视节目或电影，这很有帮助。
高分句型二
I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.
分析：句子里，用两个比较级the more ，the better表示"越......，越......"
翻译：我相信你练习得越多，你会说得越好。
【解答】I know some classmates have trouble in learning English.Don't worry，and here are some advice for your reference.（介绍主题）
First，if you want to improve your listening ability，you may listen to some tapes and radio programs in English.（收听英语节目）You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.【高分句型一】（看英语电视节目和电影）Last but not least，try to read aloud and practice speaking English.I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.【高分句型二】（多读，多讲，多练）
I believe you'll make great progress following the above advice.（表示鼓励）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
15．假设你是红星中学的学生李明，上周你在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。老师请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你课外学习英语的经验并发表在你的博客上，以供其他人借鉴。内容如下：
1.参加英语角的益处；
2.坚持写英语日记的作用；
3.英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。
注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.________
【答案】My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you.
Firstly，I think，taking part in English Corners is helpful.So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.Secondly，I keep on writing English diaries and in this way I can practise my written English.Thirdly，what interests me most is to surf Enjoy Reading.As we all know，we need extensive reading which is a better way to broaden our horizons.
In conclusion，Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.
【分析】高分句型一
I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.
分析：句子里，修饰名词the English Speech Contest，过去分词held by our school not long ago作定语。
翻译：不久前，我在学校举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
高分句型二
So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.
分析：句子里，whenever引导让步状语从句there is an opportunity。
翻译：所以只要有机会，我就会抓住来发展我学习英语的兴趣。
【解答】My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.【高分句型一】Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you. （自我介绍以及文章主题）
Firstly，I think，taking part in English Corners is helpful.So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.【高分句型二】（参加英语角的益处）Secondly，I keep on writing English diaries and in this way I can practise my written English.Thirdly，what interests me most is to surf Enjoy Reading.（坚持写英语日记的作用）As we all know，we need extensive reading which is a better way to broaden our horizons.（英文阅读网站的帮助）
In conclusion，Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
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期末培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 丰城市校级期中）假定你是李华，你正在为你校校园网招聘英语编辑．你校留学生Leo来信表示对该职位感兴趣，请给他回信，告诉他该职位的相关要求．内容要点如下：
1．写信目的；
2．职位要求；
3．报名方式．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：简历resume
2．（2024秋 图木舒克校级期末）如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 海南）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
4．（2024秋 连城县校级月考）假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到地震侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
（1）得知情况及感受；
（2）表达安慰和鼓励；
（3）打算提供的帮助。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
5．（2024秋 罗湖区校级期中）假如你是一名记者，请根据以下提示，用英语向China Daily写一篇有关台湾大地震的报道．
时间：1999年9月21日凌晨1时47分
震级：7.6级
人员损失：到当晚22时，已有1670人死亡，3924人受伤，2000多人被困，数百人失踪，许多人无家可归．
设施破坏：停电，房屋、桥梁倒塌，交通受阻．
严重性：是台湾百年未遇的强烈地震．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．生词提示：7.6级 magnitude7.6
6．（2024秋 凤城市校级月考）假定你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假了一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待你．
请给他写一封信，表示感谢．
包括下列要点：1．感谢他的热情招待2．了解了美国文化3．邀请他来中国旅游．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行为流畅；
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
7．（2024秋 全国卷Ⅱ、Ⅲ模拟）水是生命之源，但水资源短缺和水污染已成为世界最严重的资源环境问题之一，需要引起极大关注．假如你是李华，请你给 China Daily投稿，表达一名中学生对此问题的关心．要点如下：
1．世界人口增多，工农业发展需要越来越多的水；
2．河流、湖泊污染严重；
3．全民动员，保护水资源．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
8．（2024秋 江西）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动．假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动．内容包括：
1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2．活动的过程；
3．你对于这次活动的评论．
注意：1．词数120左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
9．假定你是李华， 在英国做交换生， 昨天你的室友Tony在去教室的路上跌倒了， 一个中国女孩救了他．请给校求助中心写一封邮件， 寻求那名帮助Tony的中国女学生．
提示词： exchange student交换生； roommate室友
fall down跌倒； express表达
注意： 1． 词数100左右；
2． 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3． 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数．
Dear Sir/Madam，
____________
Yours，
Li Hua
10．5月25日，你校学生会组织了为地震灾区捐款的活动．同学们踊跃参加，共筹得善款35000元．假如你是校英语报的记者李华，请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道．
1．时间、地点、任务、活动；2．同学们的反应．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计入总词数）；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
．
11．（2024秋 鞍山一模）假如你是李华，正在给你的美国朋友Jack写一封信，推荐他使用微信软件．内容要点包括：
1．微信是由中国人研发的一款软件，现在在国内非常受欢迎；
2．它有很多实用的功能，例如：可以发送文字、图片、视频等；
3．人们可以通过微信了解新闻、学习课外知识；
4．它可以帮助你们了解彼此生活中发生的事，更方便交流思想、分享心情。
注意：1．词数为100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you．
12．（2024秋 山东）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖．校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1．参加英语角的益处；
2．坚持写英语日记的作用；
3．英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．
注意：1．词数：120﹣150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
．
13．你班准备召开How to learn English in a fun way"的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享两个学习方法并解释原因。内容包括：
（1）下载一些应用程序。原因：1）扩大词汇量 2）增强听力、口语或写作技能 3）提供有趣的学习方式
（2）结交外国笔友。原因：1）了解外国文化 2）练习使用英语
（3）表达希望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
Thank you for your listening!
14．假定你是李华，你班里有些同学在英语学习上有些困难。写一篇博客，提出一些英语学习建议，内容要点如下：
1．收听英语节目；
2．看英语电视节目和电影；
3．多读，多讲，多练。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．假设你是红星中学的学生李明，上周你在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。老师请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你课外学习英语的经验并发表在你的博客上，以供其他人借鉴。内容如下：
1.参加英语角的益处；
2.坚持写英语日记的作用；
3.英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。
注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.________
期末培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 丰城市校级期中）假定你是李华，你正在为你校校园网招聘英语编辑．你校留学生Leo来信表示对该职位感兴趣，请给他回信，告诉他该职位的相关要求．内容要点如下：
1．写信目的；
2．职位要求；
3．报名方式．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：简历resume
【答案】Dear Leo，
Leaning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it.
Firstly，it is a must for the applicants to be expert in English writing.Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed.By the way，you'd better send your resume before May 20 to me if you want to be one of us.
If you have any other questions，don't forget to drop me a line.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it.
译文：得知你有兴趣成为我们学校网站的英文编辑，我写信告诉你一些情况。
分析：这句话使用现在分词作伴随状语。
高分句型二：Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed.
译文：第二，既关心时事又对新闻有浓厚兴趣的人受到欢迎。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句修饰people。
【解答】Dear Leo，
Learning that you are interested in being an English editor of our school website，I'm writing to tell you some information about it. 【高分句型一】（写信目的）
Firstly，it is a must for the applicants to be expert in English writing.Secondly，people who not only care about current affairs but also take great interest in journalism are very welcomed. 【高分句型二】（职位要求）By the way，you'd better send your resume before May 20 to me if you want to be one of us.（报名方式）
If you have any other questions，don't forget to drop me a line.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
2．（2024秋 图木舒克校级期末）如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．
句子里，With 的复合结构swimming sweeping nationwide做伴随状语．
随着游泳运动席卷全国，我们学校最近成立了一个游泳俱乐部．
2．In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
句子里， 现在分词ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches做伴随状语；关系词 which 引导非限制性定语从句cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
此外，还举办了多种多样的水上活动，从日常练习到定期组织的比赛，既培养了体育精神，又提高了游泳技能．
【解答】Dear Peter，
With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．【高分句型一】 In light of your great passion about it， I'm writing to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
In order to enrich our campus life， the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle．（组建俱乐部的目的） In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．【高分句型二】 More appealing water games are arranged for us to get entertained and refreshed． Amazing， isn't it？ （俱乐部的主要活动）Please sign up in Mr． Smith's office before next Friday．（报名的时间和地点）
Such a great chance is it that you can't afford to miss it． I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations．（再次邀请）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
3．（2024秋 海南）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．
译文：参与者包括来自各个年级的学生和对田径运动热情高涨的教职员工．
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．
译文：在赛后采访了一些参赛者，我们发现这次比赛受到了好评．
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成式作时间状语．
【解答】A Cross﹣Country Running Race
To promote healthy lifestyles in the campus and around the city，Red Star Secondary School organized a cross﹣country running race last Sunday．（活动目的）
Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．【高分句型一】（参加人员） The route of the race started from the school's gate and ended at the foot of the Southern Mountain．（跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下） Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．【高分句型二】 "I felt like I have achieved something great when I reached the goal line，" said a 9th﹣grade student．（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
4．（2024秋 连城县校级月考）假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到地震侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
（1）得知情况及感受；
（2）表达安慰和鼓励；
（3）打算提供的帮助。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
________
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.I am writing to express my deepest sympathy for you.
You must feel sad now.However，life isn't so bad.As long as you remain optimistic，you will get through this difficult period.As a strong﹣willed man，you will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the earthquake brought about.If I can be of any help，please don't hesitate to let me know.If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.
翻译：听说你的家乡发生了一场可怕而严重的地震，造成了巨大损失，我感到非常遗憾。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.
翻译：如果有必要，我会号召我的同学向你捐款，帮助你度过难关。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake hit your hometown unexpectedly and caused a great loss.【高分句型一】I am writing to express my deepest sympathy for you.（得知情况及感受）
You must feel sad now.However，life isn't so bad.As long as you remain optimistic，you will get through this difficult period.As a strong﹣willed man，you will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the earthquake brought about.If I can be of any help，please don't hesitate to let me know.（表达安慰和鼓励）If necessary，I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the tough time.【高分句型二】（打算提供的帮助）
Never give up hope and be strong!Longing for good news from you!
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】书信类作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5．（2024秋 罗湖区校级期中）假如你是一名记者，请根据以下提示，用英语向China Daily写一篇有关台湾大地震的报道．
时间：1999年9月21日凌晨1时47分
震级：7.6级
人员损失：到当晚22时，已有1670人死亡，3924人受伤，2000多人被困，数百人失踪，许多人无家可归．
设施破坏：停电，房屋、桥梁倒塌，交通受阻．
严重性：是台湾百年未遇的强烈地震．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．生词提示：7.6级 magnitude7.6
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．By 22： 00 p．m．the number of people who were killed in the earthquake had reached 1670．
句子里，修饰先行词people，关系词 who引导定语从句 were killed in the earthquake．
截至22时，地震遇难人数已达1670人．
2．It is the strongest earthquake that has ever hit Taiwan in a century．
句子里，强调句式It is the strongest earthquake that，强调主语．
这是台湾百年来最强烈的地震．
【解答】At 1：47 a．m．on September 21st 1999， a terrible earthquake of magnitude 7.6 shook Taiwan． （交代时间，地点以及事件）By 22： 00 p．m．the number of people who were killed in the earthquake had reached 1670．【高分句型一】 As many as 3924 people were injured．Over 2000 people were trapped in the fallen buildings and hundreds of people were still missing． A great number of people had lost their homes． The earthquake had the electricity cut off， the traffic stopped and a great many buildings and bridges were destroyed． It is the strongest earthquake that has ever hit Taiwan in a century．【高分句型二】（叙述台湾大地震的相关情况）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程．积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效．
6．（2024秋 凤城市校级月考）假定你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假了一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待你．
请给他写一封信，表示感谢．
包括下列要点：1．感谢他的热情招待2．了解了美国文化3．邀请他来中国旅游．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行为流畅；
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一：Besides，It was the food you cooked for me that impressed me deeply．另外，是你为我做的食物给我留下了深刻的印象．本句是强调句，被强调部分是the food you cooked for me．
高分句型二：More importantly，our conversation was wonderful，which made me aware of English culture and customs．更重要的是，我们的谈话非常精彩，这让我了解了英国的文化和风俗．本句是非限制性定语从句．which指代前文整个句子的意思．
【解答】Dear Luke，
How is it going？I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality when I was on holiday in America．【写信目的】
Firstly，I want to say how much I enjoyed the stay with you at your home．Besides，It was the food you cooked for me that impressed me deeply．（高分句型一） More importantly，our conversation was wonderful，which made me aware of English culture and customs．（高分句型二） By the way，would you like to pay a visit to China．【了解美国文化】
I'd be extremely delighted if you can accept my invitation．Looking forward to your early reply．【邀请来中国】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
7．（2024秋 全国卷Ⅱ、Ⅲ模拟）水是生命之源，但水资源短缺和水污染已成为世界最严重的资源环境问题之一，需要引起极大关注．假如你是李华，请你给 China Daily投稿，表达一名中学生对此问题的关心．要点如下：
1．世界人口增多，工农业发展需要越来越多的水；
2．河流、湖泊污染严重；
3．全民动员，保护水资源．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
As we all know， no life can live without water． Water is of great importance to all living things． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water．
However， as the population grows and industry and agriculture develop， more and more water is needed and used． Besides， many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories， and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things．
Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth． Otherwise， the last drop of water on the earth will be human's tear!
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇关于水资源短缺和水污染问题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．
高分句型
1． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water．句子里 Not only位于句首，句子 do people need water用部分倒装．
人们不仅需要水，而且植物和动物也需要水．
2．Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth．
句子里it's high time 后的句子用we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， 表示"早该做某事了"．
因此，我们应该采取措施防止水被污染，尽可能地节约用水，保护地球上的水源．
【解答】Dear Editor，
As we all know， no life can live without water． Water is of great importance to all living things． Not only do people need water， but also plants and animals need water【高分句型一】．（水的重要性）
However， as the population grows and industry and agriculture develop， more and more water is needed and used． Besides， many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories， and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things．（水资源短缺和水污染的现状）
Therefore， it's high time we took measures to prevent water from being polluted， to save water as much as possible and to protect the water source on the earth．【高分句型二】 Otherwise， the last drop of water on the earth will be human's tear!（号召人们保护水资源）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
8．（2024秋 江西）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动．假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动．内容包括：
1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2．活动的过程；
3．你对于这次活动的评论．
注意：1．词数120左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，报道星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行的一次登山活动．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
写作要点：1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；2．活动的过程；3．你对于这次活动的评论．
重要短语：in order to（为了），encourage sb to do sth（鼓励某人做某事），organize sth（组织某事），take part in （参加），set out for（开始做某事），enjoy sth （享受某事），fall behind（落后），offer help（提供帮助），be bathed in（沐浴在），cheer with joy（高兴地欢呼），benefit sb（对某人有利），get close to nature （接近大自然），promote sth（提升某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10．
此处是动词不定式短语"in order to do sth"作目的状语，主句为"our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10"．
【高分句型二】
2．Bathed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy．
此处是由过去分词短语"Bathed in sunshine"作时间状语，主句为"we jumped and cheered with joy"，主句的主语为"we"与所给动词"bathe"构成逻辑上的被动关系．
【高分句型三】
3．Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，it also promoted the friendship among us．
此处是由部分倒装结构，结构为"Not only+一般疑问句形式，but also+句子"，意为"不但…而且…"．
【解答】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain﹣climbing on April 10．Hundreds of us took part in it．【高分句型一】（时间与地点）
It was a nice day．At 8：00 am，we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits．All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery．When some fell behind，others would come and offer help．About 2 hours later，we all reached the top．Bathed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy．【高分句型二】（活动的过程）
The activity benefited us a lot．Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，it also promoted the friendship among us．【高分句型三】What a wonderful time!（评论）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
9．假定你是李华， 在英国做交换生， 昨天你的室友Tony在去教室的路上跌倒了， 一个中国女孩救了他．请给校求助中心写一封邮件， 寻求那名帮助Tony的中国女学生．
提示词： exchange student交换生； roommate室友
fall down跌倒； express表达
注意： 1． 词数100左右；
2． 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3． 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数．
Dear Sir/Madam，
____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是半开放式作文．你是在伦敦做交换生的李华，昨天你的室友Tony在校园摔倒后住院．要求你给校求助中心写封邮件，寻找帮助Tony的中国学生．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．
重要短语：look for （寻找），on the way to…（在去…的路上），fall down （跌倒），Thanks to（由于），in time（及时），be eager to （渴望做某事），look forward to （期望，渴望），
高分句型：
1．Yesterday， my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．
昨天，我的室友托尼在去教室的路上，他摔倒了，几乎动弹不了．
①句子看似简单却，其实用了同位语；②when引导一个时间状语．
2．Thanks to the kind girl， Tony was sent to hospital in time．
幸亏一位好心的女孩，托尼被及时送到了医院．
使用一般过去时态的被动语态，显得句子丰富多彩，Thanks to 是一个介词短语，表示原因
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua， an exchange student from China． I am writing to ask you to look for a Chinese student．Yesterday， my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．（高分句型一）（写信目的）
Just at that moment， a Chinese girl came to him． She gave him first aid and called an ambulance． Thanks to the kind girl， Tony was sent to hospital in time． （高分句型二）But the girl left quietly before Tony could express his thanks． The girl is about 18 years old and of medium height with short hair． Tony is eager to meet her to express his sincere thanks． Could you please help find her？（事情经过及寻找好心人的迫切心情）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
10．5月25日，你校学生会组织了为地震灾区捐款的活动．同学们踊跃参加，共筹得善款35000元．假如你是校英语报的记者李华，请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道．
1．时间、地点、任务、活动；2．同学们的反应．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计入总词数）；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
On May 25，an activity to donate money to the disaster area in Tibet was held by the Students' Union in our school．（简要介绍内容）
As we know，a big earthquake hit Nepal on April 25．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．It started from eight o'clock and lasted two hours．In the end，35，000 yuan was collected and given to the Red Cross in our city．（介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果）
We were very glad to give our pocket money away．（学生的感受）
By Li Hua，School Newspaper ．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一则新闻报道．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般过去时态为主．内容包括：一简要新闻内容；二介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果；三学生的反应．
高分句型：
1．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．句子里And some houses in Tibet是主语，which代指先行词some houses in Tibet，引导非限制性定语从句 is close to Nepal，主句的谓语动词是were destroyed表示"被毁坏"．
西藏的一些靠近尼泊尔的房子也在这个事故里被破坏了．
2．Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．句子里Therefore表示"因此"，动词不定式短语to show our concern to the victims做目的状语，took part in表示"参加"；过去分词短语held in our library做 the donation activity 的定语．
因此，为了显示我们队灾民的关心，我们学校所有的学生都参加了在图书馆举办的捐款活动．
【解答】Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
On May 25，an activity to donate money to the disaster area in Tibet was held by the Students' Union in our school．（简要新闻内容）
As we know，a big earthquake hit Nepal on April 25．And some houses in Tibet，which is close to Nepal，were destroyed in the accident．【高分句型一】Therefore，to show our concern to the victims，all of the students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library．【高分句型二】It started from eight o'clock and lasted two hours．In the end，35，000 yuan was collected and given to the Red Cross in our city．（介绍为地震灾区捐款的活动起因，目的，时间以及结果）
We were very glad to give our pocket money away．（学生的反应）
By Li Hua，School Newspaper
【点评】考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．
11．（2024秋 鞍山一模）假如你是李华，正在给你的美国朋友Jack写一封信，推荐他使用微信软件．内容要点包括：
1．微信是由中国人研发的一款软件，现在在国内非常受欢迎；
2．它有很多实用的功能，例如：可以发送文字、图片、视频等；
3．人们可以通过微信了解新闻、学习课外知识；
4．它可以帮助你们了解彼此生活中发生的事，更方便交流思想、分享心情。
注意：1．词数为100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you． It is invented by Chinese and quite popular in China now．Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on．In this way，it is convenient to know we are getting along and what happened to each other．Besides，we can know the latest news and learn various knowledge that is out of our textbooks through WeChat as well．With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．
Therefore，isn't it a wise choice for us to communicate through it？
Looking forward to meeting you on WeChat．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on． （高分句型一）句中Having a lot of practical functions为现在分词作状语
有很多实用功能，它可以发送文本，图片和视频等．
With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．（高分句型二）句中as意为"尽管"，句子部分倒装
在我们的帮助下，我们可以彼此交流思想，尽管距离遥远，但是可以及时分享感受．
【解答】Dear Jack，
How are you going？I would like to recommend a software called WeChat to you．It is invented by Chinese and quite popular in China now．Having a lot of practical functions，it can send texts，pictures and videos and so on． （高分句型一）In this way，it is convenient to know we are getting along and what happened to each other．Besides，we can know the latest news and learn various knowledge that is out of our textbooks through WeChat as well．With its help，far as we are from each other，we can exchange thoughts and share feelings as soon as possible．（高分句型二）（介绍微信）
Therefore，isn't it a wise choice for us to communicate through it？Looking forward to meeting you on WeChat．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
12．（2024秋 山东）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖．校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1．参加英语角的益处；
2．坚持写英语日记的作用；
3．英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．
注意：1．词数：120﹣150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
As a high school student，I consider English a very important subject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took an active part in English corner and other after﹣class English activities，which benefit me a lot．
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who share the same interest with me．Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oral English improved a lot．I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only by practice will we make more progress．Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but I believe hard work pays off． ．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一篇稿件，介绍课外学习英语的经验．要点包括：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：learn words by heart （用心背单词），feel nervous （觉得紧张），give sb good advice on （给某人关于…的建议），chances to do sth （做某事的机会），make much progress （取得很大进展），memorize new words （记忆新单词）．
【解答】As a high school student，I consider English a very important subject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took an active part in English corner and other after﹣class English activities，which benefit me a lot．【高分句型】（开头﹣﹣﹣引出话题）
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who share the same interest with me．【高分句型】Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oral English improved a lot．（参加英语角的益处） I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only by practice will we make more progress．【高分句型】（坚持写日记的作用） Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．【高分句型】（英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）的帮助）
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but I believe hard work pays off．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
13．你班准备召开How to learn English in a fun way"的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享两个学习方法并解释原因。内容包括：
（1）下载一些应用程序。原因：1）扩大词汇量 2）增强听力、口语或写作技能 3）提供有趣的学习方式
（2）结交外国笔友。原因：1）了解外国文化 2）练习使用英语
（3）表达希望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
Thank you for your listening!
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills.What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.Secondly，making foreign pen pals is also a good way to make us understand foreign culture more easily.And we can have more opportunities to practice using English with them.
As we all know，learning English in a fun way can improve our efficiency.Hopefully my tips will be of some help to you.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】高分句型一
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills.
翻译：首先，我们可以下载一些应用程序，通过这些应用程序，我们不仅可以扩大词汇量，还可以提高听、说或写技能。
分析：句子里，介词by后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills。
高分句型二
What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.
翻译：更重要的是，应用程序可以提供有趣的学习方法。
分析：句子里，What引导主语从句is more important；that引导表语从句the applications can provide interesting learning methods。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!I'm glad to share with you how I learn English in a fun way.（点明主题）
First of all，we can download some applications，by which we can not only expand vocabulary but also improve listening，speaking or writing skills. 【高分句型一】What is more important is that the applications can provide interesting learning methods.【高分句型二】 （下载一些应用程序以及原因）Secondly，making foreign pen pals is also a good way to make us understand foreign culture more easily.And we can have more opportunities to practice using English with them.（结交外国笔友以及原因）
As we all know，learning English in a fun way can improve our efficiency.Hopefully my tips will be of some help to you.（表达希望）
Thank you for your listening!（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
14．假定你是李华，你班里有些同学在英语学习上有些困难。写一篇博客，提出一些英语学习建议，内容要点如下：
1．收听英语节目；
2．看英语电视节目和电影；
3．多读，多讲，多练。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】I know some classmates have trouble in learning English.Don't worry，and here are some advice for your reference.
First，if you want to improve your listening ability，you may listen to some tapes and radio programs in English.You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.Last but not least，try to read aloud and practice speaking English.I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.
I believe you'll make great progress following the above advice.
【分析】高分句型一
You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.
分析：句子里，which引导非限制性定语从句is very helpful。
翻译：你也可以看英语电视节目或电影，这很有帮助。
高分句型二
I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.
分析：句子里，用两个比较级the more ，the better表示"越......，越......"
翻译：我相信你练习得越多，你会说得越好。
【解答】I know some classmates have trouble in learning English.Don't worry，and here are some advice for your reference.（介绍主题）
First，if you want to improve your listening ability，you may listen to some tapes and radio programs in English.（收听英语节目）You can also watch English TV programs or films，which is very helpful.【高分句型一】（看英语电视节目和电影）Last but not least，try to read aloud and practice speaking English.I'm sure the more you practice，the better you'll speak.【高分句型二】（多读，多讲，多练）
I believe you'll make great progress following the above advice.（表示鼓励）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
15．假设你是红星中学的学生李明，上周你在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。老师请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你课外学习英语的经验并发表在你的博客上，以供其他人借鉴。内容如下：
1.参加英语角的益处；
2.坚持写英语日记的作用；
3.英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。
注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.________
【答案】My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you.
Firstly，I think，taking part in English Corners is helpful.So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.Secondly，I keep on writing English diaries and in this way I can practise my written English.Thirdly，what interests me most is to surf Enjoy Reading.As we all know，we need extensive reading which is a better way to broaden our horizons.
In conclusion，Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.
【分析】高分句型一
I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.
分析：句子里，修饰名词the English Speech Contest，过去分词held by our school not long ago作定语。
翻译：不久前，我在学校举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
高分句型二
So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.
分析：句子里，whenever引导让步状语从句there is an opportunity。
翻译：所以只要有机会，我就会抓住来发展我学习英语的兴趣。
【解答】My name is Li Ming，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held by our school not long ago.【高分句型一】Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you. （自我介绍以及文章主题）
Firstly，I think，taking part in English Corners is helpful.So whenever there is an opportunity，I will grasp it and develop my interest to study English.【高分句型二】（参加英语角的益处）Secondly，I keep on writing English diaries and in this way I can practise my written English.Thirdly，what interests me most is to surf Enjoy Reading.（坚持写英语日记的作用）As we all know，we need extensive reading which is a better way to broaden our horizons.（英文阅读网站的帮助）
In conclusion，Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
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