期末培优 读后续写专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语人教版(2019)

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 读后续写
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 徐汇区校级期中）Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
A Father's Influence Makes for Better Grades
Adolescents from low﹣income families in particular are more likely than their middle﹣class peers to underachieve and to drop out of school.Studies have shown that a positive attitude towards school work and the support and encouragement from their parents can help at﹣risk youngsters to overcome the economic barriers and lack of resources they face.Most of the evidence about the effects of parental involvement comes from research on mothers.Little is known，however，about how adolescents experience their fathers' warmth and the beliefs and behaviors that are most affected by it.
This new study is part of a larger one focusing on low﹣income families conducted in four middle schools in the southwestern United States.Data were analyzed from questionnaires completed by 183 sixth﹣graders about how optimistic and motivated they were about their schoolwork，and how they experienced their fathers.The questionnaires were completed primarily by respondents of Mexican American，African American and European American descent.Their maths and language arts grades were also obtained.
Their findings show how fathers can support their teenagers in ways that result in greater optimism，self﹣confidence，and，ultimately，higher achievement at school.
These positive effects extend to both sons and daughters，while in different ways.Experiencing their father's warmth first influences daughters' sense of optimism，and then spills over into their feeling more determined and certain about their academic abilities.This in turn leads to better math grades.There is a more direct link between their fathers' involvement and teenage boys' belief in their ability to succeed on the academic front.This strengthen self﹣confidence increased their success in English language arts classes.
Suizzo suggests that counselors and educators should encourage fathers to communicate warmth and acceptance to their children，because of the positive influence these emotions have on their well﹣being.
2．Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
Visitors to the UK，even from other English﹣speaking countries，often find it surprising （or funny） how many different ways Britons have invented to say"Thank you".Here are some of the most common words and phrases you'll hear people use.
You're likely to hear the shortened version"Thanks"more than you hear people say "Thank you".It's often combined with something else，like"Many thanks"or"Thanks so much".Also，people tend to add a friendly term for the person they are talking to on the end，like"mate".For example，"Thanks，Mate!"
In other parts of the English﹣speaking world，"cheers"is what you say when you clink glasses of alcohol drink together，but it's also one of the most popular colloquial ways of saying"Thank you"in England.Again，you're likely to hear people say"Cheers，Mate!"
"Nice one"is something people often say if someone does them a favour，finds something for them or gives them an unexpected gift.Usually it's followed by another way of saying"Thank you".For example，"Nice one，thanks!"or"Nice one!Cheers，Mate."
In casual speech，people often add "I appreciate it"onto a"Thank you"，for example， "Cheers for helping me move that piano.I really appreciate it".You also see"appreciated" used in formal speech or writing as a way of expressing thanks.For example，"Your donations to the fundraiser were much appreciated."
People often say"You shouldn't have!"when someone has bought them a present or done something nice for them as a surprise.It doesn't mean you really think the other person shouldn't have bought you the present.What it really means is"This is so generous.I wasn't expecting such a nice present."or even"I'm not sure I deserve it."For example， "What a beautiful necklace!You shouldn't have!"
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3． One day when I was 12，my mother gave me an order：I was to walk to the public library，and borrow at least one book for the summer.This was one more weapon for her to defeat my strange problem，my inability to read.
In the library，I found my way into the "Children's Room".I sat down on the floor and pulled a few books off the shelf at random.The cover of a book caught my eye.It presented a picture of a beagle.I had recently had a beagle，the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child.He was my secret sharer，but one morning，he was gone，given away to someone who had the space and the money to care for him.I never forgot my beagle.
There on the book's cover was a beagle which looked identical to my dog.I ran my fingers over the picture of the dog on the cover.My eyes ran across the title，Amos，the Beagle with a Plan.Unknowingly，I had read the title.Without opening the book，I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush，I started to read about Amos.I read very，very slowly with difficulty.Though pages were turned slowly，I got the main idea of the story about a dog who，like mine，had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home.That dog was my dog，and I was the little boy in the book.At the end of the story，my mind continued the final scene of reunion，on and on，until my own lost dog and I were，in my mind，running together.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
My mother's call brought me to the real world.I suddenly realised something.
And years later，she was proud that her son had read thousands of books，and was awarded a PhD in literature.
4． In a meeting room，I faced the judges seated behind a table holding my fate in their hands.These same judges had rejected me twice before.This was my last chance.Would it finally be my turn？
"Tell us，Jason，"one judge said，"why do you want to be Pistol Pete？"That summer I watched a cowboy football game.I was attracted by Pistol Pete.He was larger than our body.He could get everyone in the entire stadium on their feet shouting"Come on!"and make sure they had fun.Being the mascot（吉祥物） fitted my personality.I loved getting attention﹣and a laugh.I didn't have the leg or the speed to play football.But no one could top me when it came to school spirit.
I entered a national high school mascot competition and finished twelfth.When tryouts（选拔） for Pistol Pete were announced during my first year at university，my academic adviser encouraged me to work hard at the mascot training.Then came the interview with the judges.The main question was，"Why do you want to be Pistol Pete？"
"Because I've been training for this all my life，"I told the judges.
The judges gathered the candidates to announce their decision.They'd selected two students.I could only watch as those two students jumped into the air.
I talked about my dream to my co﹣workers at my part﹣time job，and they were behind me 100 percent.When tryouts came the following spring，I was more than ready.Then I stepped before the judges again.
"You know me from last year，"I said."You know how badly I want this.And you know how good I'd be."I thought it was a done deal that I'd spend my senior year being Pistol Pete，living my dream.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
The judges didn't call my name.
I added my name to the list one last time，
5．假设你是李华。你的法国笔友Anna今年暑假将开启她的首次中国之旅。她担心中国和法国的肢体语言有所不同，故写信向你咨询相关建议。请你给Anna回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
6．Lately，I had become so cynical（愤世嫉俗的） about finding goodness in people looking at the happenings around the world.But I have also been pleasantly surprised by goodness in unexpected people.I am beginning to realize that goodness still exists in the world if only we have the chance to be surprised by goodness from unexpected people.
A few weeks ago，I travelled by train to visit a friend in the comfort of a new air﹣conditioned coach while it was extremely hot outside.The journey was a long and lonely one，so I sat around the corner，bored with turning the pages of a book.After a few stations，the delivery man from the cafeteria in the train came around to deliver the pre﹣booked hot meals and drinks.Just behind him rushed in a young girl，maybe 9 or 10 years old，put out her hand begging for some food just with her gestures but no words.She kept standing in front of me and seemed to have no intention of leaving.
The food supplier was unsatisfied with this intrusion（闯入） and began to pull her out of the coach.Previously，I would have thought that it was a good help for me to get rid of trouble.However，something in me made me react，maybe the rude behavior of the man or the frightened look on the child's face.I stepped outside the door and saw the child still standing there and crying.I asked her if she was hungry and she nodded with her hand tapping her stomach.I asked her when she had her last meal and still without speaking a word she held up two and then three fingers.
I grabbed her hand and said I would buy her food and walked to the coach with the cafeteria.I could see the fear in her eyes and feel the trembling in her hand that I held.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
I held her hand and took her to the dining car.________________
I followed her and stepped off the train，but I saw a sight that left me shocked.________________
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
I was a mother of four children，working at a low﹣paid job.Money was always valuable，but we had a roof over our heads，food on the table，and clothes in the wardrobe.I always tell myself to be brave and strong.I hope all my efforts would be worthwhile，as long as my children can grow up healthily.It was Christmas time.We drove downtown to see the Christmas lights，and enjoyed a special dinner，but the big excitement for the kids was the fun of Christmas shopping at the mall.This was a tradition of my family，so they all looked forward to the coming of the season of goodwill.They talked and planned for weeks ahead of time，asking each other what they wanted for Christmas.
The big day arrived and we started out early.I gave each of the four kids a twenty ﹣dollar bill and asked them to search for gifts.Then everyone scattered（分散开）with the bill.I sat at a table in a café waiting for my children and enjoying an instant of silence.It must be a happy day.
Back in the car driving home，everyone was excited about Christmas，laughing and asking each other about what they had bought.I noted Ginger，my younger daughter had only one small and flat bag with her.I could see enough through the plastic bag to tell that she had bought candy bars﹣fifty﹣cent candy bars!What did she do with that twenty﹣dollar bill I had given her？I was so angry.After getting home，I called her into my bedroom and closed the door.I couldn't hold back my anger and shouted at her， "What about the rest of the money？No one would be convinced all these candies are worth 20 dollars.What do you want to do with the rest of the money？"
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She was shocked at my reaction and burst into tears.___________
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My anger disappeared.________
8．（2024秋 湖北期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
With time going by，Mother's Day was around the corner.Maybe it is the happiest day for every mother.Bruce，a boy of nine years old，with his little sister Alina，six years old，wanted to buy their mother carnations（康乃馨）.But they were too young to get a job，even if a part﹣time one.What could they do？There was only one week left.They felt sad whenever they thought their mother would spend her Mother's Day without carnations.
Money is hard to make.Buying a bunch of carnations would cost a large sum of money for them.One day when they were wandering at the street，they heard Mr Green was complaining that he had no time to wash those soda pop bottles.It is a kind of soda pop sold in bottles and the bottles can be washed and filled again.Mr Green ran that grocery shop by himself，so he had no time to wash them. "Would you like to try，Alina？" Bruce asked his sister suddenly.Alina nodded her head without hesitation.After all，both of them knew that maybe it was an opportunity for them to make money for the flowers.
They walked a few steps and came near Mr Green.They looked up at Mr Green and asked whether they could help him to wash those bottles.Mr Green looked at them curiously until he was told the reason.He agreed and promised that he would pay 0.1 dollar for every bottle.Bruce and Alina were very happy even though they knew they would have a busy week.
They came to Mr Green's shop in the next seven days when they came back from school.On the morning of Mother's Day，they got the pay ——6.1 dollars.The boy also had 0.3 dollar saved.
So with a total of 6.4 dollars they walked about a mile to where a flower shop was located.When they came inside，someone asked what they wanted.They told him they wanted to buy some carnations for their mother.The boy reached into his pocket and pulled out their cash，asking if that would be enough.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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"But your money is not enough!" said the shop assistant.______
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"Wait a moment，please!" another gentleman waved to them._______
9． Once upon a time，a cheerful ladybug（瓢虫） was in the park hopping from one flower to another and enjoying the nice sunny day.The ladybug was very curious and liked to check out anything new.
The ladybug flew across the road to look at the row of homes across from the park.Each home had a little yard with plenty of flowers.Her favourite flower was the red rose，so she went to the yard that had the most."Mmmmmm，"she went as she started munching."Such beautiful and delicious roses，"she thought.
While she was enjoying herself and hopping from one red rose to another，she noticed the front door opening and a man leaving the house.He left the door cracked open as he gathered his things，so the ladybug flew in.On her way she almost bumped into a woman who was heading out.The woman walked out of the door and slammed it shut.Oops，the ladybug was stuck inside!
The ladybug didn't care at first.She wanted to look around and explore.She flew into the bedroom.It was tidy and nice.She then flew to the bathroom and found it very boring，so she left right away.Then she flew into the kitchen where she nibbled on some crumbs she found on the table.She also licked a spot of maple syrup she found on the table.
Now that the ladybug had seen everything，she was ready to leave.But what could she do when all the doors and windows were closed？So the ladybug decided to wait until the people came home so that she could fly out of the crack again as they came in.
She waited，and waited until she got tired of waiting and got hungry too.She decided to fly back to the kitchen to take another lick of the maple syrup on the table."Yum，"she thought as she slurped up some maple syrup，"Mmmm." But just then the man and woman came home and shut the door behind them.The ladybug had missed her chance.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
She would have to try again the next day.
Then she noticed the man's hat，hoping that the man would wear it as he went to work the next day.
10．When the 6 a.m.alarm went off on Father's Day，Helen's parents were awakened with a loud bang as she smashed（打碎） the piggy bank with a hammer."What's wrong？" exclaimed by Helen's mother，but Helen said it was a secret.She picked up the money on the ground，and rushed to the shoe cabinet to find father's shoes secretly.Ten minutes later，Helen came out of the door with a piece of paper in her hand.
Helen hurried to a shoe shop and said to the salesman，"I want to buy a pair of shoes for adults.Can you recommend one for me？" The salesman said，"What size do you want？" Helen immediately took a piece of paper out of her bag and gave it to the assistant."Why are there shoes prints on the paper？" asked by the clerk curiously.Helen said，"It was my little idea.I drew a picture of my dad's shoes with a pen，and it was a great way to get the right shoes for him without letting him know."At the salesman's recommendation，Helen chose a pair of shoes，because her father had not bought a pair of good shoes for a long time，and his shoes were worn out and always wet on rainy days.The salesman took different sizes of shoes to make a comparison with the shoes on the paper，and finally decided on the right size.Then he smiled and handed it to Helen.
Helen took out a pile of one﹣dollar coins from her bag，and said to the clerk，"Here is all the pocket money I have saved."The salesman was amazed by this 6﹣year﹣old girl when counting the coins.He said to Helen，"Your money is just enough，you are a good girl and your father will be very happy for that."
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When Helen returned home，she found her father standing at the door curiously.________________
Helen took out the new shoes for her father from her bag.________________
11．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Growing up on a small farm，I lived a life that I took for granted.My father worked in the city as a plumber（水暖工）.He was not highly educated，but he was smart，looking at problems in an engineer's way.He was a man made of leather，brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things，including respect.He also had a temper and was strict with us，for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes.Sometimes，my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didn't like him very much.
One day I came home from primary school and his car was already there.Once inside，I was told by my mother that he didn't feel well.His back hurt.My father never missed work；in fact，when he came home，he went to the barn to work even more.I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day.
Later，my mother told me he got multiple myeloma（多发性骨髓瘤），a type of cancer.As the cancer grows，the person will shrink because the disease destroys the body's energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue.Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese，and when they break，they may never heal.But I didn't realize that my father's time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.
For the last year of my father's life，his entire day consisted of rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think.He was predictably in that chair when I came home one day during the ninth grade.I do not remember where my mother and brother were，but the two of us were alone.
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He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later._________.
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At that moment，I realized that he was doing more than telling._________.
12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Dark rain clouds were gathering in the sky.I was cycling as fast as I could to get home before the downpour.When I felt a few big drops on my head，I decided to head for a bus stop，about a hundred meters away.As I was nearing the bus stop，I saw a woman rushing towards it from the opposite direction，behind whom was a little boy.
Suddenly，a motorcycle sped past me，almost knocking me down. "Hey!Are you mad？" I shouted at the motorcyclist.He turned to look at me，saying， "Sorry." However，for a split second，he just sped on.Then he was heading right for the woman and little boy! "Watch out!Watch out!" I shouted.I saw the lady turn her head to look at the motorcyclist，with a look of shock on her face.
In an instant，the motorcyclist reached the woman and accidentally hit her.The hit made the woman move backward.The woman and the boy fell on the road，landing right in the path of a truck. "Stop!Stop!" I screamed at the motorcyclist and the truck driver，waving my arms wildly in the air.Thankfully，the truck driver had seen what was happening.With a sudden brake，the truck stopped a few meters from the spot where the woman and the boy had fallen.Meanwhile，the motorcyclist stopped.He kept apologizing，explaining he was in a hurry to the hospital to see his sick mother.
I saw the woman climbing towards the crying child.Pulling over to the side of the road，I ran to help them.By the time I get there，the truck driver had reached them.He picked up the child in his arms and examined his legs.
"I think your little boy is all right，" said the truck driver. "How about you？Do you feel any pain？" The lady replied anxiously， "Please help me.I am pregnant（怀孕的）."
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Don't panic.You'll be all right.I'll take you and your son to the hospital，" said the driver.___________
The driver，the motorcyclist and I got them to the hospital just in time.___________
13．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文．
Gold and brown leaves crunched（嘎吱响）under Dora's boots as she made her way down the sidewalk．She couldn't wait to be home．The autumn cold wind was bad，but it was not nearly as hard to bear as the cold she felt in her heart．
She couldn't forget the way she had frozen in front of the class today．Mr．Roberts divided the class into groups to do presentations．Each person in the group would speak for five minutes in front of the class．Today was Dora's turn．Her legs trembled（颤抖）all the way to the front of the classroom．Her hands shook so badly that she couldn't read her notes．As Dora spoke，her voice became softer．Mr．Roberts kindly ended Dora's part of the presentation even though she had clearly not finished．He also asked Dora to stay for a moment after class．
"Dora，I know you're shy，but you worked hard on this project．I'd hate to see you give up on yourself．" Mr．Roberts suggested，"If I give you another chance tomorrow，do you think you can find your courage？"
Dora nodded．She went as quickly as she could to her next class．She kept her head down and hoped the school day would end soon．
Arriving home，she found Mom baking in the kitchen．When Mom baked，Dora always watched and chatted with her．Mom always said it was Dora's company（陪伴）that made her baked goods taste so sweet．Mom studied Dora's face as she came into the kitchen．"What's wrong，Dora？"
Tears shone in Dora's eyes．She told the whole story．Mom was silent for a moment．"Why is it that you can talk to me about anything and everything，but you can't talk to your classmates？" Mom asked，sliding the round cake pans into the oven．She set the timer and then said，"Let me show you something．"
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好．
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Dora followed Mom to her room．______
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The next day Dora again walked to the front of the classroom to give her presentation．_______
14．阅读下面材料，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
People may complain that they have less leisure time than they used to，but today they spend far more money on ways to fill this time.Billions of dollars are spent on toys and games in the United States each year.Toy stores do a brisk（兴隆的） business at the end of the year.They can expect to sell more toys and games in this period than in the rest of the year.
The toy and game business is not casual.The companies compete to meet the enormous demand by engaging in a search for new products.They aren't interested in warmed﹣over（老一套的） ideas from previous years；they are looking for something unique.
Originality may be the main consideration，but the companies must also keep other factors in mind when deciding which games or toys to produce.First，the cost of producing a new product is very important；the less complicated the toy or game is，the lower the cost will be.The companies also take into account the age of the children for whom the toy or game is intended.If it is easy to understand，then younger children will be able to play with it，thus increasing the number of buyers.
Producing a new toy or game is risky.If a company makes a mistake by putting a lot of money into a new toy or game that fails to sell，the company can go bankrupt（破产的）.If it is successful，on the other hand，everyone is ecstatic（欣喜若狂）.Even success is not without risks.Should a game or toy catch on，the maker might not a position to meet the sudden demand.By the time the factory is able to turn out the items，the fad（短暂的狂热）may have died down，leaving the company with tens of thousands of items it cannot sell.
15．阅读下面材料，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Most people expose themselves to swimming situations according to their levels of skill and comfort.The same might be true as you assess your comfort level with different academic environments in search of a good college which fits you best.Just as you might figure out the temperature and depth of the water before venturing in，before you apply，you need to investigate the academic environment of a college and your ability to "keep your head above water" if admitted.
When looking at academic rigor（严谨）as an indication of "fit"，you are likely to find that you have the capacity to "get the job done" academically in a range of college environments.In other words，you are not likely to have difficulty with the "water" itself.You will fit best，however，at colleges and universities where your ability and preparation enable you to rise to new levels of challenge.Your goal should be to find academic environments where your levels of ability and preparation will enable you to achieve well as you stretch yourself intellectually.
The best sources of insight regarding your preparedness to meet the academic standards of various colleges and universities are your high school teachers，because they are familiar with your capabilities，and they can offer invaluable advice about identifying the colleges where you will find the best academic programs for you.
Assuming you are able to find appropriate academic environments，then you should be smart about choosing where to apply.Choose colleges and universities where you can be most competitive based on your skills and preparation.Whether you compete in the pool or on the stage or in the classroom，you have the best chance of finding success when your skills prove your capacity to do the work and you are competitive with those around you.Put yourself into competition at universities where you fit best and enjoy the success that is bound to come your way as a candidate.
期末培优 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 徐汇区校级期中）Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
A Father's Influence Makes for Better Grades
Adolescents from low﹣income families in particular are more likely than their middle﹣class peers to underachieve and to drop out of school.Studies have shown that a positive attitude towards school work and the support and encouragement from their parents can help at﹣risk youngsters to overcome the economic barriers and lack of resources they face.Most of the evidence about the effects of parental involvement comes from research on mothers.Little is known，however，about how adolescents experience their fathers' warmth and the beliefs and behaviors that are most affected by it.
This new study is part of a larger one focusing on low﹣income families conducted in four middle schools in the southwestern United States.Data were analyzed from questionnaires completed by 183 sixth﹣graders about how optimistic and motivated they were about their schoolwork，and how they experienced their fathers.The questionnaires were completed primarily by respondents of Mexican American，African American and European American descent.Their maths and language arts grades were also obtained.
Their findings show how fathers can support their teenagers in ways that result in greater optimism，self﹣confidence，and，ultimately，higher achievement at school.
These positive effects extend to both sons and daughters，while in different ways.Experiencing their father's warmth first influences daughters' sense of optimism，and then spills over into their feeling more determined and certain about their academic abilities.This in turn leads to better math grades.There is a more direct link between their fathers' involvement and teenage boys' belief in their ability to succeed on the academic front.This strengthen self﹣confidence increased their success in English language arts classes.
Suizzo suggests that counselors and educators should encourage fathers to communicate warmth and acceptance to their children，because of the positive influence these emotions have on their well﹣being.
【答案】Evidence shows that mothers can help children overcome difficulties，but a recent study finds that fathers also have positive influences.They can help children feel more optimistic and self﹣confident，which boosts the math scores of teenage girls and the language abilities of boys.Therefore，fathers should be encouraged to convey care and recognition to their children.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。介绍了父亲对孩子的积极的影响。
高分句型一：Evidence shows that mothers can help children overcome difficulties，but a recent study finds that fathers also have positive influences.
翻译：证据表明，母亲可以帮助孩子克服困难，但最近的一项研究发现，父亲也有积极的影响。
分析：句子里，that引导宾语从句mothers can help children overcome difficulties；that引导宾语从句fathers also have positive influences。
高分句型二：They can help children feel more optimistic and self﹣confident，which boosts the math scores of teenage girls and the language abilities of boys.
翻译：他们可以帮助孩子们感到更加乐观和自信，从而提高少女的数学成绩和男孩的语言能力。
分析：句子里，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句boosts the math scores of teenage girls and the language abilities of boys。
【解答】Evidence shows that mothers can help children overcome difficulties，but a recent study finds that fathers also have positive influences. 【高分句型一】（点明主题﹣﹣父亲对孩子也有积极的影响）They can help children feel more optimistic and self﹣confident，which boosts the math scores of teenage girls and the language abilities of boys. 【高分句型二】（列举父亲对孩子积极的影响）Therefore，fathers should be encouraged to convey care and recognition to their children. （鼓励父亲向孩子传达关怀和认可）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
2．Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
Visitors to the UK，even from other English﹣speaking countries，often find it surprising （or funny） how many different ways Britons have invented to say"Thank you".Here are some of the most common words and phrases you'll hear people use.
You're likely to hear the shortened version"Thanks"more than you hear people say "Thank you".It's often combined with something else，like"Many thanks"or"Thanks so much".Also，people tend to add a friendly term for the person they are talking to on the end，like"mate".For example，"Thanks，Mate!"
In other parts of the English﹣speaking world，"cheers"is what you say when you clink glasses of alcohol drink together，but it's also one of the most popular colloquial ways of saying"Thank you"in England.Again，you're likely to hear people say"Cheers，Mate!"
"Nice one"is something people often say if someone does them a favour，finds something for them or gives them an unexpected gift.Usually it's followed by another way of saying"Thank you".For example，"Nice one，thanks!"or"Nice one!Cheers，Mate."
In casual speech，people often add "I appreciate it"onto a"Thank you"，for example， "Cheers for helping me move that piano.I really appreciate it".You also see"appreciated" used in formal speech or writing as a way of expressing thanks.For example，"Your donations to the fundraiser were much appreciated."
People often say"You shouldn't have!"when someone has bought them a present or done something nice for them as a surprise.It doesn't mean you really think the other person shouldn't have bought you the present.What it really means is"This is so generous.I wasn't expecting such a nice present."or even"I'm not sure I deserve it."For example， "What a beautiful necklace!You shouldn't have!"
　The British people amaze us with varying versions of saying "thank you".Apart from the casual "Thanks，Mate!"， "Cheers，Mate!"， "Nice one，thanks!" and "I really appreciate it!"，there's also the "You shouldn't have!" to show genuine gratefulness for presents they receive.　 （60）
【答案】 The British people amaze us with varying versions of saying "thank you".Apart from the casual "Thanks，Mate!"， "Cheers，Mate!"， "Nice one，thanks!" and "I really appreciate it!"，there's also the "You shouldn't have!" to show genuine gratefulness for presents they receive.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了英国人发明了很多不同的方式来表达"谢谢"。
高分句型一：The British people amaze us with varying versions of saying "thank you".
翻译：英国人对"谢谢"的不同表达方式让我们感到惊讶。
分析：运用了动名词短语作宾语。
高分句型二：Apart from the casual "Thanks，Mate!"， "Cheers，Mate!"， "Nice one，thanks!" and "I really appreciate it!"，there's also the "You shouldn't have!" to show genuine gratefulness for presents they receive.
翻译：除了一句不经意的"谢谢，伙计！"、"欢呼，伙计!""不错，谢谢！"和"我真的很感激！"，对于收到的礼物，还有一句"你真不该！"来表达真诚的感激之情。
分析：运用了省略that或者which引导的定语从句。
【解答】 The British people amaze us with varying versions of saying "thank you". 【高分句型一】Apart from the casual "Thanks，Mate!"， "Cheers，Mate!"， "Nice one，thanks!" and "I really appreciate it!"，there's also the "You shouldn't have!" to show genuine gratefulness for presents they receive.【高分句型二】（英国人表达"谢谢"的不同方式）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
3． One day when I was 12，my mother gave me an order：I was to walk to the public library，and borrow at least one book for the summer.This was one more weapon for her to defeat my strange problem，my inability to read.
In the library，I found my way into the "Children's Room".I sat down on the floor and pulled a few books off the shelf at random.The cover of a book caught my eye.It presented a picture of a beagle.I had recently had a beagle，the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child.He was my secret sharer，but one morning，he was gone，given away to someone who had the space and the money to care for him.I never forgot my beagle.
There on the book's cover was a beagle which looked identical to my dog.I ran my fingers over the picture of the dog on the cover.My eyes ran across the title，Amos，the Beagle with a Plan.Unknowingly，I had read the title.Without opening the book，I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush，I started to read about Amos.I read very，very slowly with difficulty.Though pages were turned slowly，I got the main idea of the story about a dog who，like mine，had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home.That dog was my dog，and I was the little boy in the book.At the end of the story，my mind continued the final scene of reunion，on and on，until my own lost dog and I were，in my mind，running together.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
My mother's call brought me to the real world.I suddenly realised something.
And years later，she was proud that her son had read thousands of books，and was awarded a PhD in literature.
【答案】 My mother's call brought me to the real world.I suddenly realised something.The trick of reading is to put yourself into the story experiencing what the author goes through and appreciating its meaning in your heart.As long as I clung to the process，not only was my inability to read defeated，but also an inner aspiration to read was stimulated，which changed my life for the better.During the summer，I incredibly developed a special companionship with books，ranging from vivid story books to academic articles.My mother was more than delighted to see my change.
And years later，she was proud that her son had read thousands of books，and was awarded a PhD in literature.She proposed that my experience should be of magnificent use to others.So I set up a team to provide those who had difficulty reading with space to turn to，through which I myself also gained a better understanding of reading as well as my life.My first adventure of reading turned out to be a permanent treasure.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，作者12岁时，母亲让他去图书馆借书以克服阅读障碍。在图书馆，他偶然发现一本封面上的小狗与自己失去的宠物狗很像，便借走了这本书。尽管阅读艰难，但他被书中小狗与家人重逢的故事深深吸引，仿佛自己也在经历同样的重逢。
高分句型一：As long as I clung to the process，not only was my inability to read defeated，but also an inner aspiration to read was stimulated，which changed my life for the better.
翻译：只要我坚持这个过程，不仅我无法阅读，而且我内心对阅读的渴望也得到了激发，这让我的生活变得更好。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装；which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：So I set up a team to provide those who had difficulty reading with space to turn to，through which I myself also gained a better understanding of reading as well as my life.
翻译：所以我成立了一个团队，为那些阅读有困难的人提供求助的空间，通过这个团队，我自己也更好地了解了阅读和我的生活。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句；介词through+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 My mother's call brought me to the real world.I suddenly realised something.The trick of reading is to put yourself into the story experiencing what the author goes through and appreciating its meaning in your heart.As long as I clung to the process，not only was my inability to read defeated，but also an inner aspiration to read was stimulated，which changed my life for the better.【高分句型一】During the summer，I incredibly developed a special companionship with books，ranging from vivid story books to academic articles.My mother was more than delighted to see my change.（作者发生了变化）
And years later，she was proud that her son had read thousands of books，and was awarded a PhD in literature.She proposed that my experience should be of magnificent use to others.So I set up a team to provide those who had difficulty reading with space to turn to，through which I myself also gained a better understanding of reading as well as my life.【高分句型二】My first adventure of reading turned out to be a permanent treasure.（作者的阅读结果成为了永久的财富）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4． In a meeting room，I faced the judges seated behind a table holding my fate in their hands.These same judges had rejected me twice before.This was my last chance.Would it finally be my turn？
"Tell us，Jason，"one judge said，"why do you want to be Pistol Pete？"That summer I watched a cowboy football game.I was attracted by Pistol Pete.He was larger than our body.He could get everyone in the entire stadium on their feet shouting"Come on!"and make sure they had fun.Being the mascot（吉祥物） fitted my personality.I loved getting attention﹣and a laugh.I didn't have the leg or the speed to play football.But no one could top me when it came to school spirit.
I entered a national high school mascot competition and finished twelfth.When tryouts（选拔） for Pistol Pete were announced during my first year at university，my academic adviser encouraged me to work hard at the mascot training.Then came the interview with the judges.The main question was，"Why do you want to be Pistol Pete？"
"Because I've been training for this all my life，"I told the judges.
The judges gathered the candidates to announce their decision.They'd selected two students.I could only watch as those two students jumped into the air.
I talked about my dream to my co﹣workers at my part﹣time job，and they were behind me 100 percent.When tryouts came the following spring，I was more than ready.Then I stepped before the judges again.
"You know me from last year，"I said."You know how badly I want this.And you know how good I'd be."I thought it was a done deal that I'd spend my senior year being Pistol Pete，living my dream.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
The judges didn't call my name.
I added my name to the list one last time，
【答案】 The judges didn't call my name.This was supposed to be my turn!I left feeling cheated and defeated，lower than I'd ever felt in my life.I talked with my academic adviser. "If the pull of being Pistol Pete is still so strong，" he said， "maybe you are meant to try again.But you have to be prepared to accept the judges，decision，no matter what it is."
I added my name to the list one last time，went through mascot training again.All that was left was the interview.For a moment，I was puzzled.Then it occurred to me that the judges didn't want to hear about my accomplishments and experience.They wanted to hear from my heart.I took a deep breath and spoke from the heart. "Pistol Pete has attracted me since it has been my dream when I was eight years old." Later that day，one of the judges announced， "The Pistol Pete for this year are Steven and Jason."
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了作者在大学期间参加《手枪皮特》吉祥物选拔的经历。作者曾经两次被拒绝，但他还是坚持参加选拔活动。
高分句型一：But you have to be prepared to accept the judges，decision，no matter what it is.
译文：但你必须准备好接受法官的裁决，无论是什么。
分析：这句话使用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：All that was left was the interview.
译文：剩下的就是面试了。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 The judges didn't call my name.This was supposed to be my turn!I left feeling cheated and defeated，lower than I'd ever felt in my life.I talked with my academic adviser. "If the pull of being Pistol Pete is still so strong，" he said， "maybe you are meant to try again.But you have to be prepared to accept the judges，decision，no matter what it is.【高分句型一】"（作者又一次没有被选中后的心理活动及向指导老师求助的事情）
I added my name to the list one last time，went through mascot training again.All that was left was the interview. 【高分句型二】For a moment，I was puzzled.Then it occurred to me that the judges didn't want to hear about my accomplishments and experience.They wanted to hear from my heart.I took a deep breath and spoke from the heart. "Pistol Pete has attracted me since it has been my dream when I was eight years old." Later that day，one of the judges announced， "The Pistol Pete for this year are Steven and Jason."（作者再一次报名参加选拔后的准备、感悟，经过坚持，最终被选中）
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点：
（1）所需阅读的短文在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性。
5．假设你是李华。你的法国笔友Anna今年暑假将开启她的首次中国之旅。她担心中国和法国的肢体语言有所不同，故写信向你咨询相关建议。请你给Anna回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna，
Welcome to China!Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life，let me tell you some.
Like Frenchmen，we usually greet others by nodding，smiling or shaking hands.But different from your culture，Chinese people tend to stay closer to each other.In class，students are supposed to sit straight and raise their hands if they have questions.It's hard to list all the things I want you to know，so I downloaded an article introducing the topic.I suggest you reading it before coming to China.
Hopefully，my suggestions will be of help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life，let me tell you some.
译文：既然你想在日常生活中学习汉语肢体语言，让我告诉你一些。
分析：这句话使用了since引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：In class，students are supposed to sit straight and raise their hands if they have questions.
译文：在课堂上，学生们应该坐直，如果有问题就举手。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Anna，
Welcome to China!Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life，let me tell you some.【高分句型一】（表示欢迎）
Like Frenchmen，we usually greet others by nodding，smiling or shaking hands.But different from your culture，Chinese people tend to stay closer to each other.In class，students are supposed to sit straight and raise their hands if they have questions.【高分句型二】It's hard to list all the things I want you to know，so I downloaded an article introducing the topic.I suggest you reading it before coming to China.（提出建议）
Hopefully，my suggestions will be of help to you.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．Lately，I had become so cynical（愤世嫉俗的） about finding goodness in people looking at the happenings around the world.But I have also been pleasantly surprised by goodness in unexpected people.I am beginning to realize that goodness still exists in the world if only we have the chance to be surprised by goodness from unexpected people.
A few weeks ago，I travelled by train to visit a friend in the comfort of a new air﹣conditioned coach while it was extremely hot outside.The journey was a long and lonely one，so I sat around the corner，bored with turning the pages of a book.After a few stations，the delivery man from the cafeteria in the train came around to deliver the pre﹣booked hot meals and drinks.Just behind him rushed in a young girl，maybe 9 or 10 years old，put out her hand begging for some food just with her gestures but no words.She kept standing in front of me and seemed to have no intention of leaving.
The food supplier was unsatisfied with this intrusion（闯入） and began to pull her out of the coach.Previously，I would have thought that it was a good help for me to get rid of trouble.However，something in me made me react，maybe the rude behavior of the man or the frightened look on the child's face.I stepped outside the door and saw the child still standing there and crying.I asked her if she was hungry and she nodded with her hand tapping her stomach.I asked her when she had her last meal and still without speaking a word she held up two and then three fingers.
I grabbed her hand and said I would buy her food and walked to the coach with the cafeteria.I could see the fear in her eyes and feel the trembling in her hand that I held.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
I held her hand and took her to the dining car.________________
I followed her and stepped off the train，but I saw a sight that left me shocked.________________
【答案】I held her hand and took her to the dining car.I asked her to choose whatever she wanted from the food displayed on the shelves.As I pointed to each item，she kept nodding.The little girl could not hold all the food in her hands，so she raised the edge of her long dress to form a bag and piled everything into it.While I turned to pay the bill，she started hurrying down the train as fast as her little legs could carry after flashing a nervous big smile.
I followed her and stepped off the train，but I saw a sight that left me shocked.There was this little girl sitting in a circle with other poor kids who seemed almost the same age.The girl had put all the food in the center in a pile and was also putting food into the hand of a blind boy.Deeply moved by her actions，I could no longer hold back my tears.This little girl taught me that kindness springs from the richness of our soul，not the richness of our environment.Even in your poverty，you can offer a generous share.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者坐火车的过程中遇到了一个小女孩，以及两人之间发生的故事。
高分句型一：As I pointed to each item，she kept nodding.
翻译：当我指着每个东西时，她不停地点头。
分析：本句使用了as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：There was this little girl sitting in a circle with other poor kids who seemed almost the same age.
翻译：有一个小女孩和其他看起来几乎同龄的穷孩子坐在一起。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】I held her hand and took her to the dining car.I asked her to choose whatever she wanted from the food displayed on the shelves.As I pointed to each item，she kept nodding.【高分句型一】The little girl could not hold all the food in her hands，so she raised the edge of her long dress to form a bag and piled everything into it.While I turned to pay the bill，she started hurrying down the train as fast as her little legs could carry after flashing a nervous big smile.（作者给小女孩买食物）
I followed her and stepped off the train，but I saw a sight that left me shocked.There was this little girl sitting in a circle with other poor kids who seemed almost the same age.【高分句型二】The girl had put all the food in the center in a pile and was also putting food into the hand of a blind boy.Deeply moved by her actions，I could no longer hold back my tears.This little girl taught me that kindness springs from the richness of our soul，not the richness of our environment.Even in your poverty，you can offer a generous share.（作者跟小女孩下车后发生的事情以及作者的感悟）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
I was a mother of four children，working at a low﹣paid job.Money was always valuable，but we had a roof over our heads，food on the table，and clothes in the wardrobe.I always tell myself to be brave and strong.I hope all my efforts would be worthwhile，as long as my children can grow up healthily.It was Christmas time.We drove downtown to see the Christmas lights，and enjoyed a special dinner，but the big excitement for the kids was the fun of Christmas shopping at the mall.This was a tradition of my family，so they all looked forward to the coming of the season of goodwill.They talked and planned for weeks ahead of time，asking each other what they wanted for Christmas.
The big day arrived and we started out early.I gave each of the four kids a twenty ﹣dollar bill and asked them to search for gifts.Then everyone scattered（分散开）with the bill.I sat at a table in a café waiting for my children and enjoying an instant of silence.It must be a happy day.
Back in the car driving home，everyone was excited about Christmas，laughing and asking each other about what they had bought.I noted Ginger，my younger daughter had only one small and flat bag with her.I could see enough through the plastic bag to tell that she had bought candy bars﹣fifty﹣cent candy bars!What did she do with that twenty﹣dollar bill I had given her？I was so angry.After getting home，I called her into my bedroom and closed the door.I couldn't hold back my anger and shouted at her， "What about the rest of the money？No one would be convinced all these candies are worth 20 dollars.What do you want to do with the rest of the money？"
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She was shocked at my reaction and burst into tears.___________
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My anger disappeared.________
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She was shocked at my reaction and burst into tears.What she told me was that she was looking around，wondering what to buy at the mall when an old lady in ragged clothes came into her sight.It seemed that the old lady was homeless.With a strong sense of sympathy welling up in her，she thought the old lady needed a gift as well and took out her money to buy a pair of warm boots for her.Though she only left herself the money for some candy bars，she felt that it was worthwhile.
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My anger disappeared.Never had I thought my daughter had her own idea to help others.I felt regretful that I just had shouted at her.How I wish I had listened to her explanation.I said， "Oh，dear，it is your own right to deal with the money.Whatever you do I should be supportive and what you have done deserves a praise.Forgive me!" She said nothing but smiled at me.I had never felt so rich as I did that day.
【分析】作者是四个孩子的母亲，生活拮据。但作者觉得只要孩子能健康成长，她的一切努力都是值得的。圣诞节到了，作者给了四个孩子每人一张20美元的钞票，让他们去买喜欢的礼物。回来时，作者发现小女儿Ginger用20美元只买了50美分的棒棒糖。作者很生气，质问她拿剩下的钱都做了什么。
高分句型一：What she told me was that she was looking around，wondering what to buy at the mall when an old lady in ragged clothes came into her sight.
翻译：她告诉我的是，当一位衣衫褴褛的老太太出现在她眼前时，她正在四处张望，想在商场买什么。
分析：本句使用了what引导的主语从句；that引导的表语从句；现在分词做状语；第二个what引导的宾语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Never had I thought my daughter had her own idea to help others.
翻译：我从没想过我女儿会有自己的想法去帮助别人。
分析：本句使用了否定副词never位于句首的部分倒装。
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She was shocked at my reaction and burst into tears.What she told me was that she was looking around，wondering what to buy at the mall when an old lady in ragged clothes came into her sight.【高分句型一】It seemed that the old lady was homeless.With a strong sense of sympathy welling up in her，she thought the old lady needed a gift as well and took out her money to buy a pair of warm boots for her.Though she only left herself the money for some candy bars，she felt that it was worthwhile.（我的女儿看见一个无家可归的老太太，给老太太买了一双温暖的靴子）
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My anger disappeared.Never had I thought my daughter had her own idea to help others.【高分句型二】I felt regretful that I just had shouted at her.How I wish I had listened to her explanation.I said， "Oh，dear，it is your own right to deal with the money.Whatever you do I should be supportive and what you have done deserves a praise.【高分句型二】Forgive me!" She said nothing but smiled at me.I had never felt so rich as I did that day.（作者后悔对女儿大声叫喊，支持女儿所做的事情）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
（5）关键用词，标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到"字迹工整、清晰"。
8．（2024秋 湖北期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
With time going by，Mother's Day was around the corner.Maybe it is the happiest day for every mother.Bruce，a boy of nine years old，with his little sister Alina，six years old，wanted to buy their mother carnations（康乃馨）.But they were too young to get a job，even if a part﹣time one.What could they do？There was only one week left.They felt sad whenever they thought their mother would spend her Mother's Day without carnations.
Money is hard to make.Buying a bunch of carnations would cost a large sum of money for them.One day when they were wandering at the street，they heard Mr Green was complaining that he had no time to wash those soda pop bottles.It is a kind of soda pop sold in bottles and the bottles can be washed and filled again.Mr Green ran that grocery shop by himself，so he had no time to wash them. "Would you like to try，Alina？" Bruce asked his sister suddenly.Alina nodded her head without hesitation.After all，both of them knew that maybe it was an opportunity for them to make money for the flowers.
They walked a few steps and came near Mr Green.They looked up at Mr Green and asked whether they could help him to wash those bottles.Mr Green looked at them curiously until he was told the reason.He agreed and promised that he would pay 0.1 dollar for every bottle.Bruce and Alina were very happy even though they knew they would have a busy week.
They came to Mr Green's shop in the next seven days when they came back from school.On the morning of Mother's Day，they got the pay ——6.1 dollars.The boy also had 0.3 dollar saved.
So with a total of 6.4 dollars they walked about a mile to where a flower shop was located.When they came inside，someone asked what they wanted.They told him they wanted to buy some carnations for their mother.The boy reached into his pocket and pulled out their cash，asking if that would be enough.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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"But your money is not enough!" said the shop assistant.______
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"Wait a moment，please!" another gentleman waved to them._______
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"But，your money is not enough!" said the shop assistant. "Even for the smallest bunch？" Bruce asked quickly and eagerly，not believing his ears. "Not enough!" the shop assistant answered clearly，with the explanation that carnations were the most expensive flowers these days because of Mother's Day.They were too disappointed to hear that!Bruce hopelessly put the money back into his pocket．
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"Wait a moment，please!" another gentleman waved to them. "I just have some carnations on sale which are a little small but pretty.Would you like to have a look？Only two dollars!" Bruce nodded at once. "Just a minute!" He went in the back and came out with a bunch of carnations with paper wrapping around the pot.He took only two dollars，and also gave a Mother's Day card as a gift. "Thank you very much，" Bruce bowed to the gentleman and they walked home proudly carrying the flowers for Mum.They couldn't wait to see her smiling face.
【分析】本文讲述了两个孩子想要赚钱在母亲节这一天为母亲买康乃馨的故事。
高分句型一："Not enough!" the shop assistant answered clearly，with the explanation that carnations were the most expensive flowers these days because of Mother's Day.
翻译："不够！"店员回答的很清楚，解释说由于母亲节的缘故，康乃馨是最贵的花。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
高分句型二："Just a minute!" He went in the back and came out with a bunch of carnations with paper wrapping around the pot.
翻译："等一下！"他走到后面，拿出一束康乃馨，用纸包着花瓶。
分析：这句话使用了with的复合结构。
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"But，your money is not enough!" said the shop assistant. "Even for the smallest bunch？" Bruce asked quickly and eagerly，not believing his ears. "Not enough!" the shop assistant answered clearly，with the explanation that carnations were the most expensive flowers these days because of Mother's Day.【高分句型一】They were too disappointed to hear that!Bruce hopelessly put the money back into his pocket．（店员不同意卖给Bruce康乃馨）
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"Wait a moment，please!" another gentleman waved to them. "I just have some carnations on sale which are a little small but pretty.Would you like to have a look？Only two dollars!" Bruce nodded at once. "Just a minute!" He went in the back and came out with a bunch of carnations with paper wrapping around the pot.【高分句型二】He took only two dollars，and also gave a Mother's Day card as a gift. "Thank you very much，" Bruce bowed to the gentleman and they walked home proudly carrying the flowers for Mum.They couldn't wait to see her smiling face.（一个绅士帮助了Bruce）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
9． Once upon a time，a cheerful ladybug（瓢虫） was in the park hopping from one flower to another and enjoying the nice sunny day.The ladybug was very curious and liked to check out anything new.
The ladybug flew across the road to look at the row of homes across from the park.Each home had a little yard with plenty of flowers.Her favourite flower was the red rose，so she went to the yard that had the most."Mmmmmm，"she went as she started munching."Such beautiful and delicious roses，"she thought.
While she was enjoying herself and hopping from one red rose to another，she noticed the front door opening and a man leaving the house.He left the door cracked open as he gathered his things，so the ladybug flew in.On her way she almost bumped into a woman who was heading out.The woman walked out of the door and slammed it shut.Oops，the ladybug was stuck inside!
The ladybug didn't care at first.She wanted to look around and explore.She flew into the bedroom.It was tidy and nice.She then flew to the bathroom and found it very boring，so she left right away.Then she flew into the kitchen where she nibbled on some crumbs she found on the table.She also licked a spot of maple syrup she found on the table.
Now that the ladybug had seen everything，she was ready to leave.But what could she do when all the doors and windows were closed？So the ladybug decided to wait until the people came home s