【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优仁爱科普版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优仁爱科普版
（2024）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒年少时目睹他人因高价截肢而陷入困境，这促使他投身研发。经过多年努力，他最终用3D打印技术造出轻便平价的机械手臂。请根据下面的提示，来介绍他的这项发明。字数90字左右，文中不得出现真实姓名。
发明的契机 早期使用的机械臂昂贵 ($80, 000) 且笨重
研发过程 用塑料块、鱼线等材料制作，16岁生日获得3D打印机
发明成果 成功造出轻便 (0.5kg)、价格低廉$500，能随脑信号活动的3D打印机械臂
发明的影响 无私分享：免费在网上公开设计，让更多人受益 总结意义： perseverance (坚持)的力量……
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them.
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2．千年古都，常来长安。西安某电台英文频道开设“Welcome to Xi’an”栏目，面向全网征集“微西安”英文简介。请你结合以下图示，写一篇简要的短文投稿。
Location (位置): the northwest of China
History: more than 3,000 years
Places to visit: Dayan Pagoda Terracotta Army (兵马俑)
Activities: eat different snacks: cold noodles, roujiamo wear Hanfu,…
要求：
1.参考提示，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于 70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
提示词（选用）：experience（体验） be located in（位于） ancient（古代的） A gaze spans eternity（一眼万年） dynasty（朝代）
Xi’an, also called Chang’an in ancient times, is a very famous city all over the world.
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3．学习了 inventions and inventors 的单元话题之后，请根据下面材料，写一篇介绍发明家爱迪生的文章。
1. Thomas Edison 是一位著名的美国发明家。他很小时就对事物的本质感到好奇。十岁时在家中建立了一个实验室，做了许多研究。没有好奇心，就不可能有他未来的发明。
2. 他最重要的发明是灯泡（light bulb），在那时，蜡烛的光很暗，还很危险，所以爱迪生希望制作一款安全持久的灯。在测试灯丝（filament）的过程中，他遇到了很多困难。但是他喜欢一个接一个地解决问题。最终，1879 年，他成功了！
3. 从爱迪生的故事中，你认为发明家具有哪些品质，列举两条作为文章结尾。
要求：
（1）80～120 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以增、删细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A great inventor
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4．2024年10月24日，你校对当前中小学生生活习惯进行了问卷调查。根据调查，你校公众号拟征集一批中小学生如何保持良好生活习惯的美文。根据下列思维导图，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你对保持良好生活习惯的看法。
要求：
1. 简要介绍调查情况，时间、对象及结果。
2. 对于如何保持良好生活习惯提出建议，包含以上三个方面，也可以适当发挥；
3. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
4. 词数为80词左右。
Good Living Habit
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5．假设你是中国宇航员李华，正在中国太空站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在太空站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名；
4．提示词语：experiment实验
Dear young friends,
I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today.
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6．假设你是Mike，你朋友Jack在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到紧张和郁闷。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信，给他提一些建议，帮助他克服困难，轻松愉快地学习和生活。
提示：1. 每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候；
2. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通；
3. 关于如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活提一至两条建议。
要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校和自己的真实名字；
2. 80词左右。已给出部分，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries.
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Yours,
Mike
7．9月15日，汝南县举行2025年下半年新兵入伍欢送活动，130名新兵肩负期望和重托，奔赴军营。保卫祖国、报效国家，人人都需要有健康的体魄。假如你是李华，请你以“How to be a healthy student”为主题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈如何成为一名健康的学生。词数100词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Be a Healthy Student
Boys and girls,
Everyone wants to be a healthy student. What should we do to be healthy I’m glad to share my opinions (观点) with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
8．如今，健康生活理念已深入人心。正如古罗马哲学家西塞罗所言：“运动是健康的源泉。”学校英语报正围绕运动是保持健康的重要方式这一话题征集稿件。请以“Let’s Do Sports for Health”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。词数90词左右。
提示：
1.运动的益处：例如强健身体、…… （至少补充一点）；
2.运动注意事项：例如咨询医生、做好热身、……（至少补充两点）；
3.呼吁大家积极参加运动。
要求：
1.结构清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Let’s Do Sports for Health
Health is of great importance to everyone.
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9．假如你是李华，收到来自英国朋友Peter的一封邮件，请根据邮件的内容给他回复。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing these days I hope everything is going well. Thank you for your e-mail. I am happy to hear that you made a new friend, Gina, at school. Could you tell me more about her Is she the same as you or different You also said that you had a trip to Ningbo with Gina during the National Day holiday. So what did you do during the trip And how did you feel about it I really hope that I can go to China soon. Yours, Peter
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
4. 参考词汇：天一阁Tianyi Pavilion, 东钱湖Dongqian Lake
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to get your e-mail.
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I’m looking forward to your visit to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．家，对每个人而言都有着独特的意义。它可能是一种味道，一种声音，一个让你安心的角落，或是一份无条件的支持。你校英语校刊现征集以“What Home Means to Me”为主题的短文，请你分享你的个人感悟。
内容包括：●Describe a special thing that shows what home means to you.
●Share a short story or feeling about it.
●Explain what you learn about home from it.
要求：1.词数不少于70词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
What Home Means to Me
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11．你校英文报新开设了“百科知识”栏目，请你写一篇英语短文介绍发明家爱迪生 (Edison)，向该栏目投稿。短文须包括以下要点：
简介 ①生卒年份1847-1931，美国著名发明家。
经历 ①出生在乡下；从小展现出聪明才智与创造性，却因为经常提奇怪问题而被迫退学 ②长大后自己学习各种事物
成就 ①1879年发明了实用的白炽灯 ②一生有一千多种发明
你的看法 ①他是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一 ②……
参考词汇：创造性creativity，实用的practical
要求：①可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
②词数80左右 (文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
③不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
American Inventor—Edison
Edison was
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12．假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，写一封邮件和你的外国笔友Tom分享一下你刚结束的假期生活。
内容提示：
——看书，做家务，去旅行……
——你的感受如何？
——你学到了什么？
——与上一个假期相比有何不同？
注意：可在内容提示的基础上适当增加内容；文中不得透露个人信息；不少于80词；首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：go on a trip; learn... from; bring joy
Dear Tom,
How is everything
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What about your holiday I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．中国幅员辽阔，山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出“一生必去的50个地方”，松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观，写一篇英语短文介绍。
The Songhua River ▲ North-east China; 2,300 kilometers long ▲ large farms; grow corn; interesting ▲ What we should do to protect it; …
Yulong Snow Mountain ▲ Yunnan Province; special animals and plants ▲ look like Chinese dragon; snow on the top; exciting ▲ What we should do to protect it; …
写作要求：
1. 必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数100左右。
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14．2025年9月15日，平潭综合实验区在龙凤头海渔广场举行入伍新兵欢送大会，50名新兵肩负期望和重托奔赴军营，保卫祖国、报效国家。人人都需要有健康的体魄。假如你是李华，请你以“How to be a healthy student”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈如何成为一名健康的学生。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Boys and girls,
Everyone wants to be a healthy student. What should we do to be healthy I’m glad to share my opinions (观点) with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
15．健康是最宝贵的财富。近期，学校校报就“健康生活”这一话题向全校同学征文，请你根据以下图片，并结合自身经历，以“My Healthy Lifestyle”为题，写一篇英语短文参加此次征文活动，分享你的健康生活。
参考词汇：eat healthily, exercise, enough sleep, ...
要求：1. 短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My Healthy Lifestyle
As the saying goes, “Health is the first wealth”.
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16．青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设社会主义现代化的未来栋梁，拥有一个积极向上、幸福快乐有意义的人生至关重要，China Daily英文网站正开展以“How to live a happy life”为主题的征文活动，请从中学生的角度，结合以下提示，谈谈你的看法和做法，用英语撰写一篇短文投稿。词数80词左右。
要求：
1. 必须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考信息：
Sound Mind Healthy Body Favorite Hobby Great Dream
communicate with, love ourselves … keep a healthy lifestyle … take up a hobby … dream of …, keep going …
How to Live a Happy Life
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17．假如你是“校园之声”广播电台的知心姐姐Andy。今天你收到了一封来自中学生李文的诉说信，请根据以下内容写一封回信帮助李文。
烦恼 1. 内向，交朋友不易，没有很多朋友； 2. 几乎不怎么运动； 3. 学习因为无计划性，成绩较差。
建议 1. 朋友不在多而在于精； 2. 每周跟朋友或同学打一次排球； 3. 制定周计划并努力提高成绩。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包括以上内容要点，不必逐句翻译，可适当拓展，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校信息。
Dear Li Wen,
I’m sorry to hear that these days you have some problems. I’m willing to help you.
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I hope that you can feel better soon.
Yours,
Andy
18．假如你叫李平。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
Survey
Names Hobbies Dream jobs Reasons
Yi Ke writing writer make her happy
Zheng Yong traveling guide experience different lives and learn about different cultures
Meng Xin looking after animals zookeeper help animals live in peace
I (Li Ping) … … …
要求：
(1) 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
(2) 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
Everyone has hobbies and dreams. Now let me share ours with you.
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I hope our dreams can come true.
19．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jim对中国的旅游文化很感兴趣，他给你发来电子邮件，想了解你国庆期间的旅游经历以及你对当地特色景点的看法。请根据以下邮件内容，用英语回复。
To: LiHua@
From: Jim@Foreign.com
Subject: Travel in China
Dear LiHua,
I’ve heard that you traveled during the National Day holiday. Where did you go What interesting places did you visit What do you think of the local food and activities there
Looking forward to your reply.
Jim
注意：
1. 回复邮件须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
2. 词数在90个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 回复邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
4.参考词汇：国庆节National Day；古代的ancient；遗址relics
Dear Jim,
It’s nice to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best.
Li Hua
20．一个国家有梦想，一个民族就有希望。作为时代青年，我们也应该有自己的梦想和职业规划！请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的理想职业并向校报投稿，
要点包括：1) What’s your dream job
2) Why do you want to do it
3) What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：1) 文中可包含所给的提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
My Dream Job
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them. Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research. Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals. He selflessly shared the designs online for free, helping many. His story truly shows the power of perseverance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括发明的契机、研发过程、发明成果、发明的影响和总结意义，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，如发明成果和影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.”一句，借用“看到人们因昂贵的假肢而挣扎”这一契机来引出重点介绍的内容，即伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒的研发过程和发明成果；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“研发过程”和“发明成果”几个方面重点介绍这一发明的具体情况，同时提及了发明的影响；
第三步，书写结语。通过“His story truly shows the power of perseverance.”一句表达了对伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒坚持精神的赞扬，总结了这一发明的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①motivated by受……的激励
②struggle with与……斗争
③lightweight轻便的
④selflessly无私地
[高分句型]
①Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.（过去分词短语作状语）
②Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals.（现在分词短语作状语）
2．
例文
Xi’an, also called Chang’an in ancient times, is a very famous city all over the world. It is located in the northwest of China with a history of more than 3,000 years. Here you can visit the Dayan Pagoda and the amazing Terracotta Army. When you see the Terracotta Army, you may truly understand the meaning of “A gaze spans eternity”. Besides, you can experience the local culture by eating different snacks like cold noodles and roujiamo. Wearing Hanfu is also a special way to feel the beauty of ancient dynasties. Welcome to Xi’an and enjoy its charm!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：需涵盖位置、历史、景点、活动四大要素，并合理运用提示词。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山介绍西安的国际知名度和古称（首句已给出）；
第二步：分段描述位置与历史、景点与文化活动，适当加入提示词（如located in, experience, ancient）；
第三步：用邀请句结尾，呼应栏目主题。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing惊人的
②experience体验
③charm魅力
[高分句型]
①When you see the Terracotta Army, you may truly understand the meaning of “A gaze spans eternity”.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Wearing Hanfu is also a special way to feel the beauty of ancient dynasties.（动名词短语作主语）
3．
Thomas Edison was a famous American inventor. He showed great curiosity about how things worked from a very young age. At the age of ten, he built a laboratory at home and did many experiments. Without curiosity, he couldn’t have made his future inventions.
His most important invention was the light bulb. At that time, candlelight was dim and dangerous, so Edison wanted to create a safe and long-lasting light. While testing filaments, he faced many difficulties. However, he enjoyed solving problems one by one. Finally, in 1879, he succeeded!
From Edison’s story, I think inventors need two important qualities. First, they must be curious to explore new things. Second, they should never give up when facing challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：作文需涵盖材料中所有要点，包括爱迪生的童年、发明灯泡的过程，以及发明家的两条品质。
[写作步骤]
①第一步：表明写作意图。首段介绍爱迪生背景；
②第二步：具体阐述爱迪生的主要发明及过程。重点描述了他发明电灯泡的过程，包括面临的困难和最终的成功；
③第三步：总结发明家所需的重要品质。
[亮点词汇]
①curiosity好奇心
②long-lasting持久的
③facing challenges面对挑战
[高分句型]
①Without curiosity, he couldn’t have made his future inventions.（运用虚拟语气强调好奇心的重要性）
②While testing filaments, he faced many difficulties.（运用现在分词作时间状语，简化从句结构）
4．参考范文
Good Living Habit
On October 24th, 2024, our school did a survey on the living habits of primary and middle school students. The results showed that many students don’t eat properly, lack exercise and often stay up late. To keep good living habits, we should eat healthily, such as having more fruit and vegetables and less junk food. Enough sleep is also important because it helps us stay active at school. Besides, doing exercise like running or playing ball games can make us strong and relaxed. Good habits lead to a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：说明文，围绕“保持良好生活习惯”提出建议；
②时态：一般现在时为主，介绍调查情况时用一般过去时；
③提示：紧扣三大方面：健康饮食、充足睡眠、坚持锻炼，语言简洁清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步：说明调查的时间、对象和简单结果；
第二步：提出保持良好生活习惯的建议（健康饮食、睡眠、运动）；
第三步：总结良好习惯的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①do a survey 做一项调查
②stay up late 熬夜
③junk food 垃圾食品
④stay active 保持精力充沛
⑤lead to 导致、带来
[高分句型]
①The results showed that many students don’t eat properly.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Enough sleep is also important because it helps us stay active at school.（because引导原因状语从句）
③Good habits lead to a better life.（普遍真理句型，简洁有力）
5．范文：
Dear young friends,
I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. Let me share my daily life on the space station.
In the morning, I exercise with special machines to stay healthy. Sleeping here is fun, too. I sleep in a sleeping bag tied to the wall! During work hours, I do experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. After work, I read books or talk with my family through video calls. Though I miss the Earth, the views of stars outside are amazing.
My life here is busy but meaningful. I feel proud to be part of this journey.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，突出太空生活的独特性与个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点明要介绍太空站上的日常生活；
第二步，具体介绍太空站上的日常生活，包括：早晨锻炼、太空睡眠、工作时间、工作后休闲等；
第三步，书写结语。表示虽然忙碌但充满意义，并为自己能参与这一旅程感到自豪，最后以感谢结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①special machines特殊机器
②tie...to...把……绑在……
③go for spacewalk进行太空行走
④feel proud to do sth.为做某事感到自豪
[高分句型]
①During work hours, I do experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. (并列句)
②Though I miss the Earth, the views of stars outside are amazing. (让步状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Jack,
It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. But I think talking to someone helps a lot. First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it. Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Last, it’s best to smile at yourself and never keep problems to yourself.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候；
第二步，就面对的问题或烦恼给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.与某人交流
②cut...in half 把……切成两半
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.（动名词作主语）
7．例文
How to Be a Healthy Student
Boys and girls,
Everyone wants to be a healthy student. What should we do to be healthy I’m glad to share my opinions with you.
First, we should keep doing exercise every day. For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us study better. Second, healthy eating habits are important. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t go to school without breakfast. Third, happiness is important for our health, so always be happy. We should be kind to others and try to get along well with them. Finally, staying up late is bad for our health so we should go to bed early.
Let’s follow these tips to be healthy students! That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何成为健康学生”的话题，表明将分享建议；
第二步，从锻炼、饮食、情绪、作息四个方面，具体说明成为健康学生的方法；
第三步，呼吁大家践行这些方法，结束演讲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不但……而且……
②get along well with sb.与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
①Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help us study better. (动名词短语作主语)
8．
例文：
Let’s Do Sports for Health Health is of great importance to everyone. Doing sports is a key way to stay healthy. First, sports can help us build a strong body and reduce stress. For example, running makes our hearts stronger and swimming improves our flexibility.
However, we should pay attention to some tips when doing sports. It’s important to consult a doctor before starting a new sport, especially if you have health problems. Always warm up properly to prevent injuries. Also, choose sports that suit your age and fitness level, and avoid overexertion to stay safe.
Let’s get active and make sports a part of our daily life for better health!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：材料作文
时态：主要使用一般现在时，因为是在讨论一般事实和建议。
提示：作文覆盖了所有提示点：运动的益处、注意事项以及呼吁大家运动。
[写作步骤]
第一步：以给出的开头引入主题，强调健康的重要性。
第二步：正文部分先阐述运动的益处，包括强健身体和补充的一点（减轻压力），并用例子支持；然后写注意事项，包括咨询医生、做好热身，并补充两点（选择适合运动和避免过度运动）。
第三步：结尾呼吁大家积极参与运动，形成号召。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce stress 减轻压力
②improve flexibility 改善灵活性
③prevent injuries 预防伤害
[高分句型]
①It’s important to consult a doctor before starting a new sport, especially if you have health problems.（it作形式主语的固定句型和if引导的条件状语从句）
②Also, choose sports that suit your age and fitness level, and avoid overexertion to stay safe. (动词原形开头的祈使句和that引导的定语从句)
③Let’s get active and make sports a part of our daily life for better health!（Let引导的祈使句）
9．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to get your email. Everything is going well.
Gina is warm and outgoing. We’re different—she loves sports while I enjoy reading. We still have one thing in common. We both like pop music and often share favorite songs.
During the National Day holiday, we went to Ningbo together. On the first day, we visited Tianyi Pavilion, amazed by its ancient books and buildings. On the second day, we went to the seafood market. We tasted fresh yellow croaker and juicy shrimp. The whole trip was full of fun.
I’m looking forward to your visit to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍Gina的性格、与自己的异同；
第二步、描述宁波之行的活动和感受；
第三步、说些结语。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
②full of充满
③looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
We’re different—she loves sports while I enjoy reading. (连词“while”表“对比”，精准体现“两人差异”)
10．One possible version:
What Home Means to Me
The special thing in my home is my father’s old bicycle. It looks old, but it is very important to me.
Every evening after school, my father waits for me on that bicycle at the school gate. Rain or shine, he is always there. I sit on the back, telling him about my day. He doesn’t talk much, but I feel safe.
This bicycle helps me understand what home means. It is not just a building. It is a safe and warm feeling and a quiet love that is always there for you, just like my father’s old bicycle. It shows me that home is about the people who wait for you and the love that is always with you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，通过“父亲的老自行车”这一具体物品引出主题；
第二步，具体描写日常场景；
第三步，将“家”的含义从具体的建筑引申为“安全温暖的感觉”和“无声的爱”。
[亮点词汇]
①special thing特别之物
②rain or shine无论晴雨
③safe and warm feeling安全温暖的感觉
[高分句型]
①This bicycle helps me understand what home means. (what引导的宾语从句)
②It is a safe and warm feeling and a quiet love that is always there for you, just like my father’s old bicycle. (that引导的定语从句)
11．例文
American Inventor—Edison
Edison was an American inventor who lived from 1847 to 1931. He was born in the countryside. When he was young, he showed great creativity but he was forced to leave school because he often asked strange questions. Later, he taught himself various things. In 1879, he invented the practical incandescent light bulb. During his life, he had over a thousand inventions.
I think he is one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. His creativity and perseverance inspire us to pursue our dreams bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：需覆盖所有给定要点 (生卒年份、经历、成就、看法)，适当拓展，词数80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细介绍爱迪生的个人信息，包括其经历和成就。
第二步，表达个人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①creativity创造性
②practical实用的
③teach himself自学
[高分句型]
①When he was young, he showed great creativity but he was forced to leave school because he often asked strange questions. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think he is one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. (运用了宾语从句)
12．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How is everything I am so glad to tell you something about my holiday. I had great fun during this holiday. First, I read several interesting books. They made me very happy. I also helped my parents with housework, like cooking and cleaning. It was a little tiring but fun. Besides, I went on a short trip with my family to the seaside. We swam in the sea and tasted delicious seafood. It was really exciting. I learned that helping others brings joy from this holiday. Compared with last holiday, which was boring because I stayed at home all the time, this one was more exciting and educational.
What about your holiday I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据内容提示完成写作，注意要点齐全，可适当增加细节，需突出重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步：开头问候并引入主题，表明写作意图。
②第二步：详细描述假期活动、感受、学到的东西、与上一个假期的比较。
③第三步：结尾询问Tom的假期，并表达期待回复，保持友好语气。
[亮点词汇]
① had great fun玩得非常开心
② help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I learned that helping others brings joy from this holiday.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Compared with last holiday, which was boring because I stayed at home all the time, this one was more exciting and educational.（which引导的非限制性定语从句+because引导的原因状语从句）
13．范文：
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometers long, lies in North-east China.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a perfect view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It’s really interesting to see such a view.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should clean their waste well before letting it out.
In a word, the Songhua River is special and important. We need to protect it so that it can stay a wonderful place for a long time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为一般现在时；
③提示：围绕松花江展开介绍，既描述其相关特征，又强调保护它的重要性及具体措施，需清晰呈现松花江特点与保护核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍松花江的基础信息，明确指出松花江位于中国东北且长度为 2300 公里；
第二步，描述松花江沿岸的景象，提及沿岸有种植玉米的大型农场，还夸赞秋季金色玉米地景色极佳；
第三步，先点明保护松花江的重要性，接着给出具体保护举措，最后总结强调松花江特殊且重要，要对其进行保护以维持其良好状态。
[亮点词汇]
①of great importance至关重要；
②stop...from...阻止……做……；
③clean up清理
[高分句型]
①The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometers long, lies in North-east China. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②We need to protect it so that it can stay a wonderful place for a long time. (so that引导目的状语从句)
14．参考范文
Boys and girls,
Everyone wants to be a healthy student. What should we do to be healthy I’m glad to share my opinions (观点) with you.
First, we should keep doing exercise every day. For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Exercising helps us keep fit and study better. Second, healthy eating habits are important. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables and never go to school without breakfast. Third, happiness is important for our health, so always be happy. We should be kind to others and try to get along well with them. Finally, don’t stay up late—it’s bad for you. Go to bed early to keep healthy.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点围绕成为健康学生的方法，包括锻炼、饮食习惯、保持快乐和作息规律等方面，考生需围绕要点展开，适当补充细节使内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引入话题，表明要分享成为健康学生的观点；
第二步，从锻炼、饮食习惯、保持快乐、作息规律四个方面具体阐述成为健康学生的方法；
第三步，结尾总结发言，感谢听众。
[亮点词汇]
①on foot步行
②keep fit保持健康
③healthy eating habits健康的饮食习惯
④stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
We should be kind to others and try to get along well with them.（and连接并列句）
15．范文：
My Healthy Lifestyle
As the saying goes, “Health is the first wealth”. To have a healthy lifestyle, I focus on three main ways: eating healthily, exercising regularly, and getting enough sleep.
I try to have a healthy diet. I have milk every day and always remind myself to eat fruits and vegetables. Also, I keep doing exercise. Whenever I have time, I practice volleyball or go running. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. I manage my time properly and plan my day carefully. As a result, I seldom stay up late.
I believe that a healthy lifestyle can help me live better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括健康饮食、规律锻炼和充足睡眠，考生应注意不要遗漏这些内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明健康生活方式的重要性，并引出自己的健康生活方式；
第二步，具体阐述自己健康生活方式的三个方面：健康饮食、规律锻炼和充足睡眠；
第三步，总结健康生活方式的好处，表达自己的信念。
[亮点词汇]
① focus on 专注于
② remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事
③ manage my time properly 合理安排我的时间
④ live better 生活得更好
[高分句型]
① To have a healthy lifestyle, I focus on three main ways: eating healthily, exercising regularly, and getting enough sleep.（动词不定式作目的状语，引出自己健康生活方式的三个方面）
② Whenever I have time, I practice volleyball or go running.（whenever引导的时间状语从句，表示“无论何时我有时间”）
16．
例文
How to Live a Happy Life
To live a happy life, we need a sound mind, a healthy body, a favorite hobby and a great dream.
First, we should communicate with others and love ourselves to keep a positive attitude. Second, it’s important to keep a healthy lifestyle by eating healthily and exercising regularly. Besides, taking up a hobby like reading or sports can bring us joy. Finally, we should dream of being useful to society and keep going even when facing difficulties.
If we follow these steps, we will find true happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明写作主题，概括“如何快乐生活”的四个要点；
第二步：从四个方面分点展开叙述；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a positive attitude 保持积极的态度
②exercising regularly 定期锻炼
③be useful to 对……有用
[高分句型]
①To live a happy life, we need a sound mind, a healthy body, a favorite hobby and a great dream.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②If we follow these steps, we will find true happiness.（条件状语从句）
17．范文：
Dear Li Wen,
I’m sorry to hear that these days you have some problems. I’m willing to help you.
First, don’t be sad about having few friends. Just remember, having a few good friends is much better than having lots of ordinary ones. Try to be more open and share your feelings honestly with others. Second, doing sports is great for you. Why not play volleyball with friends or classmates once a week It’s fun and keeps you healthy. Lastly, make a study plan and follow it. Plan your week and work hard to make your grades better little by little.
I hope that you can feel better soon.
Yours,
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“听说李文有烦恼，愿意提供帮助”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交朋友、运动、学习计划”几个方面针对李文的烦恼提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望李文尽快好起来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to愿意
②share...with...与……分享……
③make a study plan制定学习计划
④little by little逐渐地
[高分句型]
①Just remember, having a few good friends is much better than having lots of ordinary ones.（动名词作主语）
②Why not play volleyball with friends or classmates once a week （Why not do sth.句型，用于提建议）
18．例文
Boys and girls,
Everyone has hobbies and dreams. Now let me share ours with you.
Yi Ke likes writing. She wants to be a writer because she thinks writing can make her happy.
Zheng Yong likes traveling best. He hopes to be a guide. Because he looks forward to experiencing different lives and learning about different cultures.
Meng Xin enjoys looking after animals. When she grows up, she wants to be a zoo-keeper to help animals live in peace.
My name is Li Ping. My hobby is palying sports. I want to be a teacher because I like playing with children.
I hope our dreams can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为调查报告；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按表格要求写，不要遗漏成员的爱好、理想职业及原因等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明分享小组成员的爱好和梦想的意图；
第二步，依次介绍小组成员Yi Ke、Zheng Yong、Meng Xin及自己的爱好、理想职业和原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达对大家梦想成真的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① like doing 喜欢做
② want to be 想成为
③ make sb. happy 使某人开心
④ look forward to doing 期待做
⑤ look after 照顾
⑥ grow up 长大
[高分句型]
① She wants to be a writer because she thinks writing can make her happy. (含有原因状语从句的复合句)
② When she grows up, she wants to be a zoo-keeper to help animals live in peace. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
19．例文：
Dear Jim,
It’s nice to hear from you. During the National Day holiday, I went to Jingzhou with my family.
Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history. We visited the Jingzhou Ancient City Wall. It’s very long and beautiful and we learned a lot about its history there. Then we also went to the Jingzhou Museum, where there are many interesting ancient relics. The local food there is delicious. We tried different kinds of food. We also watched wonderful shows. The shows enanleed us to better understand ancient culture.
How was your holiday
I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括旅游地点、参观的有趣地方、对当地食物和活动的看法等，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“It’s nice to hear from you. During the National Day holiday, I went to Jingzhou with my family.”简单回应收到邮件并引出国庆期间去了荆州这一重点介绍内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“荆州的历史文化、参观的景点、当地食物、活动”几个方面重点介绍荆州的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ancient古代的
②a long history悠久的历史
③interesting有趣的
④delicious美味的
[高分句型]
①Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history.（“with+名词短语”结构作后置定语）
②Then we also went to the Jingzhou Museum, where there are many interesting ancient relics.（定语从句）
20．范文：
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.
In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. And I often go to the library to learn about medicine. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为短文投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“每个人都有梦想”来引出自己的梦想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现梦想”几个方面重点阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达“梦想终有一天会实现”的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③as much as possible尽可能多地
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.（since then现在完成时的标志词）
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