中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
高考英语写作50组高级套用句型(下)—安排 建议 流程类提分讲义
【第21-30组:建议与流程描述类表达】
26. 提出建议(建议信)
初阶: Try reading more books. (你应该多读书。)
中阶: It would be beneficial for you to expand your reading extensively. (广泛阅读对你有益。)
It would be beneficial for you to... 对你而言……将是有益的
expand your reading extensively 广泛扩展你的阅读
高阶: I strongly recommend that you immerse yourself in a diverse range of literature to cultivate critical thinking skills. (我强烈建议你涉猎各类读物以培养批判性思维能力。)
immerse yourself in 沉浸于;潜心钻研
a diverse range of literature 各类文学作品/读物
cultivate critical thinking skills 培养批判性思维能力
赏析: 高阶句式采用“主谓+宾语从句”结构,运用“immerse yourself in”这一生动短语强调深度投入,并使用“cultivate critical thinking skills”精准表述。
27. 说明活动目的(通知/邀请信)
初阶: The activity is to celebrate the festival. (这项活动是为了庆祝节日。)
中阶: The event is organized to commemorate the festival and foster a festive atmosphere. (本次活动旨在纪念节日并营造节日氛围。)
commemorate v. 为了纪念;用以纪念
foster a festive atmosphere 营造节日氛围
高阶: The event has been meticulously crafted to commemorate the festival while strengthening community spirit among participants. (本次活动旨在纪念节日并加深参与者间的联系。)
craft v. (尤指用手工)精心制作
strengthen community spirit 增强社区/集体精神
赏析: 高阶句式使用现在完成时的被动语态“has been meticulously crafted”,突出活动筹备的精心与专业;“while”连接两个并列目的。
28. 描述具体内容(邀请信/通知)
初阶: There will be games and singing. (会有游戏和唱歌。)
中阶: The event will feature engaging games and a lively singing performance. (本次活动将包含有趣的游戏和热烈的歌唱表演。)
feature v. 以……为特色;以……为主体
engaging games 引人入胜的游戏
高阶: A variety of interactive games coupled with dynamic singing performances will surely captivate the audience. (多样化的互动游戏和动感十足的歌唱表演必将吸引观众。)
a variety of interactive games 多样的互动游戏
coupled with 把……与……结合
captivate the audience 吸引观众
赏析: 高阶句式采用“主语+谓语”结构,主语由“coupled with”连接两个核心内容,表达更显凝练;“captivate the audience”更具表现力。
29. 说明组织者(通知)
初阶: The event is organized by the Students’ Union. (该活动由学生会组织。)
中阶: The event is hosted by the Students’ Union. (学生会负责主办此次活动。)
be hosted by 由……主办
高阶: This event is spearheaded by the Students’ Union, aiming to deliver an unforgettable experience. (本次活动由学生会牵头,旨在带来难忘的体验。)
be spearheaded by 由……牵头/主导
赏析: 高阶句式使用“is spearheaded by”这一形象动词,凸显学生会的领导作用;现在分词短语“aiming to...”作伴随状语。
30. 说明交通方式(邀请信/通知)
初阶: You can take the subway to get there. (你可以乘地铁到达那里。)
中阶: It is recommended that you reach the venue by subway. (建议你乘坐地铁前往会场。)
It is recommended that ... 建议……
reach the venue 到达会场
高阶: We strongly recommend taking the subway for a quick and hassle-free journey. (强烈建议各位参加者选择地铁出行,以便捷高效地到达会场。)
strongly recommend 强烈建议
a quick and hassle-free journey 快捷无忧的行程
赏析: 高阶句式采用“主谓+动名词宾语+目的状语”结构,“strongly recommend”语气坚定,“quick and hassle-free”精准概括了地铁出行的核心优势,表达直接有效。
【第31-40组:活动描述与支持请求类表达】
31. 安排接送(邀请信/通知)
初阶: We’ll meet you at the station. (我们会在车站接你。)
中阶: We will arrange to meet you at the station upon your arrival. (我们将在你到达时安排接站。)
upon your arrival 在你抵达时
高阶: Transportation arrangements have been carefully made to ensure your smooth pick-up upon arrival at the station. (已精心安排交通接送,确保您抵达车站后顺利接应。)
transportation arrangements 交通安排
smooth pick-up 顺利接应
赏析: 高阶句式使用现在完成时的被动语态,强调安排已就绪且细致周到;不定式“to ensure ...”点明了安排的目的。
32. 说明需要提前通知(通知/邀请信)
初阶: Please tell us if you can’t come. (如果不能来,请告诉我们。)
中阶: Kindly inform us in advance if you are unable to attend. (如若无法出席,请提前通知我们。)
in advance 提前
高阶: Kindly notify us as soon as possible if you cannot attend, so we can make necessary arrangements. (若您无法出席,烦请尽早通知,以便进行必要调整。)
as soon as possible 尽快
赏析: 高阶句式通过“as soon as possible”强调时效性,并使用“so we can...”引导的目的状语从句。
33. 提到参观内容(邀请信)
初阶: We will visit the museum. (我们将参观博物馆。)
中阶: We have arranged a guided museum tour. (我们将组织一次博物馆导览。)
a guided museum tour 有导览的博物馆参观
高阶: A special guided tour to the museum has been meticulously scheduled to enrich your visit experience. (精心安排了博物馆特别导览,以丰富您的参观体验。)
enrich your visit experience 丰富您的参观体验
赏析: 高阶句式采用被动语态,将“special guided tour”置于句首作为焦点;“to enrich your visit experience”点明了精心安排的目的。
34. 描述食宿安排(邀请信/通知)
初阶: We will provide food and rooms. (我们会提供食物和住宿。)
中阶: Accommodation and meals will be provided for all participants. (所有参与者将提供住宿与餐食。)
accommodation and meals 食宿
高阶: We have arranged comfortable accommodation and meals for all attendees. (为所有来宾妥善安排了住宿与用餐服务,以确保舒适体验。)
arrange comfortable accommodation 已安排舒适的住宿
赏析: 高阶句式使用现在完成时,表明安排已落实,给参与者以确定感;形容词“comfortable”直接点明食宿标准。
35. 说明参会对象(通知/邀请信)
初阶: All students can join. (所有学生都可以参加。)
中阶: The event is open to all students who are interested. (该活动向所有感兴趣的学生开放。)
be open to ... 对……开放
高阶: The event warmly welcomes the enthusiastic participation of all students who want to learn more. (此次活动热忱欢迎所有渴望开拓视野的学生积极参与。)
warmly welcome 热烈欢迎
enthusiastic participation 热情的参与
赏析: 高阶句式运用拟人化动词“welcomes”,赋予活动以人情味;“enthusiastic participation”和“who want to learn more”等表述。
36. 引出活动环节(邀请信)
初阶: After the speech, we will play games. (演讲后我们将玩游戏。)
中阶: Following the keynote speech, a series of interactive games will be conducted. (主旨演讲后,将进行一系列互动游戏。)
高阶: After the keynote speech, everyone can join in our carefully planned interactive games. (主旨演讲结束后,将邀请参与者参加一系列精心准备的互动游戏。)
赏析: 高阶句式通过“carefully planned”凸显了活动环节设计的用心;“everyone can join in”创造了包容且具邀请性的氛围。
37. 描述文艺表演(邀请信)
初阶: We’ll have singing and dancing performances. (将有歌唱与舞蹈表演。)
中阶: The event will feature captivating singing and dancing performances. (活动将展现精彩的歌唱与舞蹈表演。)
captivating adj. 有吸引力的;迷人的
高阶: Attendees will be treated to an array of splendid singing and dancing performances that promise to dazzle. (观众将欣赏到一系列精彩绝伦的歌舞表演,定会令人眼前一亮。)
will be treated to 将享受到……的款待
an array of splendid ... 一系列精彩的……
dazzle v. 使赞叹不已;使惊奇;使眼花缭乱
赏析: 高阶句式使用“will be treated to”这一地道表达,将观看表演提升至一种享受;“that promise to dazzle”定语从句增强了表现力。
38. 提供联系方式(邀请信/通知)
初阶: You can call me at this number. (你可以拨打这个号码联系我。)
中阶: Should you have any inquiries, please feel free to contact me via the number provided. (如有疑问,请随时通过提供的电话与我联系。)
feel free to contact me 随时联系我
高阶: For further details, please do not hesitate to contact me through the designated contact channels. (如需进一步了解,请尽早通过指定联系方式与我取得联系。)
the designated contact channels 指定的联系渠道
赏析: 高阶句式以“For further details”开头,直接切入主题;“do not hesitate to contact”是非常地道且礼貌的邀请性用语。
39. 安排志愿者(邀请信/通知)
初阶: Some students will help as volunteers. (一些学生将作为志愿者协助。)
中阶: A group of student volunteers will help organize the event. (已有数名学生自愿协助活动组织。)
a group of 一组
高阶: A team of dedicated volunteers has been assembled to facilitate the smooth running of the event. (一支由热心志愿者组成的团队已组建,确保活动顺利进行。)
dedicated adj. 尽心尽力的;一心一意的
assemble v. 聚集;集合;收集
facilitate the smooth running 保障顺利运行
赏析: 高阶句式选用“dedicated”一词高度赞扬了志愿者的奉献精神;“has been assembled”表明团队已就位;“facilitate the smooth running”是正式且专业的表达,体现了组织的专业性。
40. 强调遵守秩序(通知)
初阶: Please keep order during the event. (请在活动期间保持秩序。)
中阶: Participants are requested to maintain order throughout the event. (要求参与者在活动期间保持秩序。)
be requested to 被要求……
高阶: All participants are earnestly urged to maintain proper behavior and adhere to the event guidelines to ensure its success. (所有参与者被诚挚地要求保持礼仪并遵守活动指引,以确保活动圆满成功。)
earnestly adv. 诚挚地
adhere to 遵守,遵行(规则、信念、承诺等)
赏析: 高阶句式使用被动语态“are earnestly urged to”,语气庄重;“maintain proper behavior”和“adhere to the event guidelines”表述具体。
【第41-50组:困难表述与请求支持类表达】
41. 表达面临问题(求助信)
初阶: I have some problems. (我遇到了一些问题。)
中阶: I am currently facing certain difficulties. (我目前正面临一些困难。)
高阶: I am presently confronted with a number of complex problems that demand immediate attention. (我目前正面临一系列复杂且亟待解决的挑战。)
confront v. 面对
a number of complex problems 一系列复杂问题
demand immediate attention 亟待解决
赏析: 高阶句式通过“am presently confronted”和“complex problems”强化了问题的严峻性,定语从句“that demand immediate attention”。
42. 请求理解(求助信/道歉信)
初阶: I hope you can understand my situation. (我希望你能理解我。)
中阶: I sincerely hope for your understanding and support. (我真诚地希望得到你的理解与支持。)
I sincerely hope for 我真诚地希望……
高阶: I earnestly request your utmost understanding and kind support during this challenging time. (在这段困难时期,我真诚请求您给予最大程度的理解与支持。)
I earnestly request 我诚挚地请求
your utmost understanding 您最大程度的理解
赏析: 高阶句式使用“earnestly request”和“utmost”等词汇,增强了请求的诚意;“during this challenging time”为请求提供了合理的背景。
43. 描述期待的支持(求助信)
初阶: I want your help. (我想要你的帮助。)
中阶: I’d be very grateful for your help.(我将非常感激你的帮助。)
I’d be very grateful for ... 我将非常感激……
高阶: Your generous assistance would be instrumental in enabling me to overcome current obstacles. (您的慷慨协助将对我战胜当前困难起到至关重要的作用。)
generous assistance 慷慨协助
be instrumental in 对……起到关键作用
赏析: 高阶句式采用“would be instrumental in”这一高级表达,有力地说明了对方帮助的宝贵价值。
44. 说明时间紧迫(求助信)
初阶: There is not much time left. (时间不多了。)
中阶: Time is running short, necessitating urgent action. (时间紧迫,需要立即采取行动。)
necessitate v. 使成为必需
高阶: With time running out, we need to act quickly and decisively. (鉴于时间极为紧迫,亟需迅速果断地采取措施。)
run out 耗尽;用完
act quickly and decisively 迅速果断地行动
赏析: 高阶句式以“With time running out”独立主格结构开头,简洁有力地烘托出紧迫氛围;“quickly and decisively”两个副词的连用。
45. 请求协助完成任务(求助信)
初阶: Please help me finish it. (请帮我完成它。)
中阶: Would you please assist me in completing the task (能否请你协助我完成任务?)
高阶: I would be sincerely grateful if you could lend your invaluable support to complete this task. (若您能给予宝贵帮助我顺利完成此项任务,我将不胜感激。)
I would be sincerely grateful if ... 如果……我将衷心感激
lend your invaluable support 给予您宝贵的支持
赏析: 高阶句式运用“I would be sincerely grateful if you could ...”这一经典虚拟语气句型,表达了非常委婉与尊敬的请求;“invaluable support”极大地肯定了对方帮助的价值。
46. 强调困难的重要性(求助信)
初阶: It is very difficult for me. (这对我来说很难。)
中阶: It poses a considerable challenge for me. (这对我构成了相当大的挑战。)
pose a considerable challenge 构成了相当大的挑战
高阶: This is a major challenge that will need significant support to overcome. (此事构成了需要大量支持才能克服的重大障碍。)
a major challenge 一个重大挑战
赏析: 高阶句式使用“major challenge”和“significant support”等词汇,准确量化了困难的规模和所需支持的力度。
47. 表达急需援助(求助信)
初阶: I really need your help right now. (我现在需要你的帮助。)
中阶: I am in urgent need of your assistance. (我急需你的帮助。)
in urgent need of 急需……
高阶: At this critical juncture, your timely intervention would be greatly valued and deeply appreciated. (在此关键时刻,您的及时介入将倍加珍贵并深受感激。)
at this critical juncture 在此关键时刻
timely intervention 及时的介入
赏析: 高阶句式以“At this critical juncture”开场,营造出严峻的语境;“timely intervention”是精准的专业术语;“would be greatly valued and deeply appreciated”叠加使用近义词,极大强化了感激之情。
48. 请求尽快回复(求助信)
初阶: Please reply to me soon. (请尽快回复我。)
中阶: I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience. (如果你能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。)
I would appreciate it if ... 如果……我将不胜感激
at your earliest convenience 在您最早方便的时候
高阶: I eagerly anticipate your prompt and positive response to facilitate timely arrangements. (我殷切期盼您的及时回复,以便及早安排相关事宜。)
anticipate v. 期待;盼望
your prompt and positive response 您及时且积极的回复
facilitate timely arrangements 便于及时安排
赏析: 高阶句式选用“eagerly anticipate”表达强烈的期望;“prompt and positive”双重修饰回应,表述精准;不定式“to facilitate ...”。
49. 说明影响(求助信/通知)
初阶: If I fail, it will be bad for me.(如果我失败了,对我来说很糟糕。)
中阶: Failure may lead to undesirable consequences for me. (失败可能对我造成不良后果。)
undesirable consequences 不良后果
高阶: Should I fail, it would exert serious negative impacts on my academic and personal pursuits. (若我失败,必将对我的学业与个人发展产生深远的不利影响。)
Should I fail 倘若我失败(虚拟语气倒装)
exert serious negative impacts 产生严重的负面影响
赏析: 高阶句式采用倒装虚拟语气“Should I fail”开头;使用“exert serious negative impacts”正式搭配,并具体到“academic and personal pursuits”,使后果描述更全面、更具说服力。
50. 请求耐心(求助信)
初阶: Please be patient with me. (请对我耐心一点。)
中阶: Please be patient with me as I work through this. (我真诚请求您在这一过程中给予耐心与理解。)
work through 解决(难题);处理(不快的事)
高阶: Your continued patience and unwavering support throughout this endeavor would mean a great deal to me. (在此过程中,您的持续耐心与坚定支持对我而言意义重大。)
continued patience and unwavering support 持续的耐心与坚定的支持
endeavor n. (尤指新的或艰苦的)努力,尝试
赏析: 高阶句式通过“continued”和“unwavering”两个形容词,强调了对耐心和支持的长期性;“would mean a great deal to me”真挚地表达了对方支持对个人的重要价值,情感诉求强烈。
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