分层练 第三部分 写作素养·拔高练--2026中考英语专题练(教师版+学生版)

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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2026中考英语专题练
第三部分 写作素养·拔高练
类型一 经历感受类
经历感受类作文一般要求考生先就某话题描述一段相关的自身经历,再写出自己的感受、收获。我们描述自身经历时通常使用一般过去时,表达自己的感受与收获可以使用现在完成时或一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 引出话题 ◇...is one of my favorite... ……是我最喜欢的……之一。 ◇There are countless interesting memories in... Let me tell you one of them. It's about... ……里有无数有趣的回忆。让我告诉你其中一个。它是关于…… ◇I have an interesting...to share with you. 我有一个有趣的……与你分享。 ◇For me, ...is the...I want to...most. 对于我来说,……是我最想……的……
中间: 叙述经历——起因、经过、结果 (5W1H: Who/When/Where/What/Why/How) ◇At first/To start with/In the beginning, ... 起初…… ◇After that, ... 然后…… ◇Finally/In the end, ... 最终…… ◇However, ... 然而…… ◇In fact/As a matter of fact, ... 事实上…… ◇Luckily/Unfortunately, ... 幸运的是……/不幸的是…… ◇Take me for example. ...used to be difficult for me. 以我为例。以前……对我来说很难。 ◇Gradually, I made great progress in... 逐渐地,我在……上取得了很大进步。 ◇I got strong feelings of... 我产生了强烈的……感。
结尾: 抒发感受,总结收获 ◇It was such an unforgettable experience that I... 这是一次如此难忘的经历,使我…… ◇This experience helps me know better about... 这次经历帮我更好地了解…… ◇From this experience, we have gained a lot. 从这次经历中,我们收获了很多。 ◇When doing sth., I learned how to... 当我在做某事的时候,我学会了如何…… ◇My...skills have improved a lot. 我的……能力提高了很多。 ◇What an enjoyment it is!这真是一件乐事啊! ◇In fact, there are many...waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering them, you will feel that...everywhere. 事实上,有很多……等着我们去发现。只要你认真去发现它们,你就会感觉到……无处不在。 ◇It had a positive impact on me, as it made me more interested in... 它对我有积极的影响,因为它使我对……更感兴趣。 ◇It has inspired me to pursue a career in...and make a difference to the world.它激励我从事……领域的职业,并对世界产生影响。 ◇...not only helps me..., but also helps me...I will keep...and try to be better. ……不仅帮我……,而且帮我……我会继续……并尽力变得更好。 ◇The...not only deepens our love for...but also enriches our understanding of... ……不仅加深了我们对……的热爱,而且丰富了我们对……的理解。 ◇This experience has taught me that... 这次经历教会了我…… ◇It's...that makes us better and better. 正是……让我们变得越来越好。
写作指导
话题1 体育活动
1.审清题·定方向
2025 四川南充 假如你是李明,你校英语网站正在征集故事。请你根据下面网页的内容写一篇短文投稿,分享你的故事。
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
2.巧立意·成佳作
①My favourite sport is basketball. ②I learned it under the influence and encouragement of my father.
③At first, I didn't love it at all, because I found it really hard to shoot the ball into the basket. ④However, my father told me “practice makes perfect” and to focus on the ball only. ⑤From then on, I practiced it two hours a day. ⑥Day by day, I could get more points and got interested in playing it.
⑦I come to realize that it takes us time to do well in a sport. ⑧Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of not giving up and brings me happiness. ⑨I love it and I will keep on doing it.
3.学佳作·促应用
学事件表述[例文中加粗内容]
·开端:③一开始,我一点儿也不喜欢它……_ _ _ _
·转折:④然而,我父亲告诉我…… _ _ _ _
·过程:⑤从那时起,我每天练习两个小时。_ _ _ _
·结果:⑥时间一天天过去,我能得到更多分数并且对打篮球感兴趣了。_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用介词短语增加细节:②在我父亲的影响和鼓励下 _ _ _ _
·使用原因状语从句丰富句式:③因为我觉得它真的很难_ _ _ _
·使用谚语:④熟能生巧_ _ _ _
·使用宾语从句:⑦我们要在一项运动中做得好需要花费时间_ _ _ _
·写收获:⑧打篮球教会了我不放弃的精神,还给我带来了快乐。_ _ _ _
话题2 体育精神
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
These days, we have more time to do sports. We experienced more and surely made progress. ①As for me, I think my P.E. teacher Mr. Liu helped me a lot, and I've learned a lot from him.
②He always trained me strictly but patiently. ③When I met any problems, he never showed any impatience. ④ Instead, he always encouraged me to never give up. ⑤The spirit had a great influence on me and changed me deeply.
⑥As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.” ⑦ Thanks to his strict training, I have become stronger and stronger, and because of his warm words, I feel more and more confident.
⑧Thank you very much, my dear teacher!
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·第一段引出主题或观点:①对于我来说,我觉得…… _ _ _ _
·第二段和第三段描述事件发展过程及自己的收获:②严格但耐心地训练我_ _ _ _ ③从不表现出任何不耐烦_ _ _ _ ④鼓励我永不放弃_ _ _ _ ⑦变得越来越强壮_ _ _ _ 感觉越来越自信_ _ _ _
·第四段表达感谢:⑧非常感谢您_ _ _ _
学衔接表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用表示转折的词:④反而_ _ _ _
·使用谚语:⑥正如谚语所说“不劳则无获”。_ _ _ _
·表达因果关系:⑦多亏;由于_ _ _ _ 因为_ _ _ _
话题3 社会实践
1.审清题·定方向
注意事项:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday. ①Let me tell you something about it.
②In the morning, we visited the History Museum. ③We learned about the history of the Long March. ④Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. ⑤After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. ⑥We also watched local opera performances that are educational.
⑦The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art!
⑧Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·引出主题:①_ _ _ _
·详述过程:通过②中的_ _ _ _ 和⑤中的_ _ _ _ 两个时间状语,厘清活动顺序。
·总结全文:用⑦中的_ _ _ _ (不仅……而且……)总结出实践的意义。
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句增加对活动过程的描述或补充细节信息:④_ _ _ _ greatly touched us⑤_ _ _ _ we enjoyed paper cutting art ⑥_ _ _ _ are educational
·使用动词短语表达此次实践活动的意义:⑦加深我们对祖国的爱_ _ _ _ 丰富我们对中国传统艺术的理解_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 学习体验
[2025云南]你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Unforgettable Class” 为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述令你难忘的一节课,并谈谈你从中获得的感受或受到的启发。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。

[答案]
An Unforgettable Class
Among all the classes I've taken, the science experiment last term remains unforgettable. Our teacher, Mr.Li, asked us to test how plants grew under different conditions.
We were divided into groups and set up three pots: one with sunlight and water, one in darkness with water, and one with sunlight but no water. For weeks, we watched the changes. To my surprise, the plant in darkness grew tall but turned pale, while the one without water dried out quickly. Only the plant with both sunlight and water stayed healthy.
This experiment taught me that living things need balanced conditions to live—just like our own growth requires both effort and support. It made me appreciate the importance of a healthy environment, not just for plants, but for humans too.
训练2 校园生活
[2025福建]假定你是某校学生李华,近日你校开展了以“共植诚信之树”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示,用英语给笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I'm glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school.

Yours,
Li Hua
[答案]
Dear Henry,
I'm glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school.
It was held on June 10th, 2025. First, we watched a video about our school model students, who always tell the truth and help others. Then, we listened to a speech about the importance of being honest. After that, we had a discussion on how to take action in our daily life and all promised to be honest in competitions and examinations. Finally, we planted an honest tree in our school.
We all think the event is educational and we will take good care of the tree.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
训练3 人际交往
[2025山西]生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
要求:
1.词数不少于80词;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

[答案]
Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect.
Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me.
Love is about caring about others' feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I'll do the same for them.
训练4 劳动实践
[2024陕西]假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇:
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn,...
要求:
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How's it going I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
[答案]
Hi Tom,
How's it going I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes.
I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put it into a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature.
Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
类型二 介绍说明类
介绍说明类作文大多围绕兴趣爱好、生活方式、学习方法、活动过程、传统文化或身边的事物等话题展开,主要考查考生用英语条理清晰地介绍某种事物或说明某个过程的能力,时态通常以一般现在时为主。
写作积累
开头: 点明主题,引出要介绍的内容 ◇Some students like... Others enjoy... As for me, I prefer... Let me tell you what I think. 有些学生喜欢……其他学生喜欢……至于我,我更喜欢……让我告诉你我的想法。 ◇Are you ready for an interesting and colorful... 你准备好参加一个有趣而丰富多彩的……了吗 ◇Now I'd like to introduce some of... 现在我想介绍一些…… ◇Among them, ...is my favorite because I like...and I want to... 其中,……是我的最爱,因为我喜欢……并且我想要…… ◇In May, our school organized many...activities. I was happy that I learned a lot. 在五月,我们学校组织了许多……活动。我很高兴我学到了很多东西。 ◇In my opinion, ...is much better. Here are some of my reasons. 在我看来,……更好。这是我的一些理由。 ◇I am quite interested in...and want to apply for it. 我对……很感兴趣,想申请这个职位。
中间: 详细介绍和说明 ◇I enjoy...because it brings me... 我喜欢……因为它给我带来…… ◇Firstly, it is necessary for me to... 首先,我有必要…… ◇Additionally/Besides/What's more, ... 此外…… ◇...brings me both pleasure and knowledge. ……给我带来快乐和知识。 ◇My favorite types of...are...and... 我最喜欢的……的类型是……和…… ◇I like...because it can not only make me...but also bring me... 我喜欢……因为它不仅能让我……而且能给我带来…… ◇We believe it can bring us good luck. 我们相信它能给我们带来好运。 ◇Make sure you choose the right...so that your...may look... 确保你选择了合适的……,以便你的……可能看起来…… ◇...is one of the most important festivals in China, which usually falls on the...day of the...lunar month. ……是中国最重要的节日之一,通常在农历的……月……日。 ◇On that day, people usually celebrate it in different ways, such as... 在那一天,人们通常用不同的方式来庆祝,比如…… ◇I usually...to relax myself. It's really a great thing after a long week's study. 我通常……来让自己放松。在漫长的一周的学习之后,这真的是一件很棒的事情。
结尾: 分享感受、建议等 ◇We can get close to...and relax by enjoying the beauty of... 我们可以接近……并通过享受……的美来放松。 ◇As mentioned above, ...can make me think more and achieve more, so I will keep on... 如上所述,……能让我思考更多,成就更多,所以我会继续…… ◇We can also learn more about...and spread them around the world. 我们还可以更多地了解……并将它们传播到世界各地。 ◇It can also open our eyes and enlarge our knowledge. 它也可以开阔我们的眼界,扩充我们的知识。 ◇Everyone has shining points as long as they take a close look at themselves. 只要仔细审视自己,每个人都有闪光点。 ◇We can take part in some activities that can help us find out what we are good at. 我们可以参加一些可以帮助我们发现自己擅长什么的活动。
写作指导
话题1 校园生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. ①It is on the third floor of Building 3.②It is large and bright. ③There are many kinds of books in the library, such as novels and magazines. ④I often read my favourite books there. ⑤Those books can help me explore different fields and increase my knowledge. ⑥To express my love for the library, I will be a volunteer to help organize the books and clean the library. ⑦I hope more and more students come to the library and enjoy the pleasure of reading.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主干表达[例文中加粗内容]
·位置:①它位于3号楼的三楼。_ _ _ _
·环境:②又大又明亮_ _ _ _
·图书种类:③许多种类的书_ _ _ _
·对“我”的帮助:④在那里读我最喜欢的书_ _ _ _
·“我”能为图书馆做的事:⑥成为一名志愿者来帮助整理图书和打扫图书馆_ _ _ _
学细节扩充[例文中画线内容]
·通过举例子的方法补充关于图书种类的细节:③比如小说和杂志_ _ _ _
·用and连接两个并列成分补充说明图书馆的功能:⑤帮我探索不同的领域并且增长我的知识 _ _ _ _
·动词不定式作目的状语引出下一个要点:⑥为了表达我对图书馆的爱_ _ _ _
·表达愿望:⑦我希望越来越多的学生来到图书馆,享受阅读的乐趣。_ _ _ _
话题2 人物描述
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Hello, everyone! I'm looking for a partner to sing the English song “Auld Lang Syne” with me at the graduation ceremony. ①As we all know, friends play an important role in our life, so does a partner. ②As for me, I'd like to find a girl of my age, so that we'll have no difficulty in communicating. ③Then, she should be good at singing and then we can well present the true feeling of the song. ④Also, she should have fluent spoken English, as it's a classic English song. ⑤Last but not least, she'd better be a good teammate, since good teamwork can help make our performance perfect. ⑥If you are interested in singing English songs and want to show your talent, please contact me. ⑦Let's create an unforgettable performance together. Thanks for listening!
3.学佳作·促应用
学要点表述[例文中加粗内容]
·强调重要性:①起重要作用_ _ _ _
·要点1 要找的搭档的性别与年龄:②找一个和我同龄的女孩_ _ _ _
·要点2 期望搭档擅长的事及原因:③擅长唱歌_ _ _ _ 完全呈现出歌曲中真正的情感_ _ _ _ ④英语口语流利_ _ _ _ 一首古典英文歌_ _ _ _
·要点3 期望搭档是什么样的人及原因:⑤是一名好队友_ _ _ _ 好的合作可以有助于使我们的表演很完美_ _ _ _
学衔接词块[例文中画线内容]
·引出主题:①众所周知_ _ _ _ 一位搭档也是如此_ _ _ _
·有逻辑地表达多个要点:②对我而言_ _ _ _ ③其次_ _ _ _ ④并且_ _ _ _
⑤最后但同样重要的是_ _ _ _
话题3 动手实践
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made. ①To make this fan, I first prepared materials like paper, scissors, a brush, and a stick. ②Next, I carefully cut out two circular pieces of paper, which would become the fan's surface. ③Finally, I used the brush to paint my design on the paper. ④The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees. ⑤This scene is not only pleasing to the eye but also deeply meaningful, symbolizing the ancient Chinese belief in harmony between nature and humanity. ⑥This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity. ⑦More importantly, it deepened my appreciation for our rich cultural heritage. ⑧I sincerely hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. ⑨Thank you!
3.学佳作·促应用
学要点表述[例文中加粗内容]
·按顺序描述扇子制作的过程:①准备材料_ _ _ _ ②剪出两片圆形的纸片_ _ _ _ ③用毛笔绘制出了我的设计_ _ _ _
·扇面内容及寓意:④以中国传统山水画为特色_ _ _ _ ⑤象征着中国古代对人与自然和谐共处的信仰_ _ _ _
·感受与愿望:⑥有趣的_ _ _ _ 教会了我要有耐心和创造力_ _ _ _ ⑦加深了我对我们丰富文化遗产的理解_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用介词短语增加细节:①比如纸、剪刀、一支毛笔和一根木棍_ _ _ _
·使用定语从句补充说明:②这将作为扇面部分_ _ _ _
·使用衔接词提升流畅度:⑥不仅……而且……_ _ _ _ ⑦更重要的是_ _ _ _
话题4 传统文化
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ①Among many traditional festivals, the Spring Festival is the most important one, which is also called the Chinese New Year. ②It usually falls in January or February. ③Before the Spring Festival, people usually come back to their hometown to get together with their family members. ④They clean up their houses and decorate them with red Chinese knots and paper cuttings, because red represents good luck in China. ⑤During the Spring Festival, family members gather together to have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. ⑥What's more, people usually visit relatives in their new clothes. ⑦Children are very happy to get red packets with best wishes. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country Yours truly, Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题词块[例文中加粗内容]
·描写春节的活动:③回到他们的家乡与他们的家人待在一起_ _ _ _ ④打扫他们的房子_ _ _ _ 用红色中国结和剪纸(窗花)装饰它们_ _ _ _ ⑤团聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐_ _ _ _ 看春晚_ _ _ _ ⑥拜访亲戚_ _ _ _ 收到红包_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句补充细节,说明春节的另一个名称:①_ _ _ _ is also called the Chinese New Year.
·表示节日在什么日期的句型:②It usually _ _ _ _ in+月份/on+日期.
·使用原因状语从句解释用红色中国结和窗花装饰房子的原因:④because _ _ _ _
·使用衔接词引出另一个活动:⑥_ _ _ _
·使用介词短语补充细节信息:⑦_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 自我提升
[2025湖南长沙]学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—steps towards success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示, 并结合自身感悟, 写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息, 并适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出, 不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Mistakes—steps towards success Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow.
[答案]
Mistakes—steps towards success
Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow.
Firstly, mistakes can help us learn. When we make a mistake, we can discover what goes wrong, guiding us to find better solutions. It can also work as a good chance for us to deepen our understanding about the world and sharpen our life skills.
Secondly, mistakes build resilience. Each mistake we overcome makes us stronger and more determined. Through mistakes, we can learn to stay positive and never give up, no matter how difficult things get.
Lastly, mistakes encourage creativity. Finding new solutions to solve problems helps us think outside the box. As we all know, Alexander Bell didn't invent the telephone overnight. He succeeded by trying many times and learning from his mistakes.
Remember, great success begins with small failures. Embrace mistakes—they are stepping stones to achievements!
训练2 运动与健康
[2025山东烟台]为保障学生身体健康,烟台市要求义务教育学校从2025年5月开始全面开展“双大课间”活动,上午和下午第二节课后各设30分钟运动大课间。为此,你校英语报以“Let's get moving”为题进行征稿,请你结合以下内容投稿:
1.“双大课间”活动简介;2.你参与的情况及感受;3.号召同学们积极参与。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
Let's get moving Recently, all primary and middle schools in Yantai have been required to carry out the “Double Long Breaks” activity.
[答案]
Let's get moving
Recently, all primary and middle schools in Yantai have been required to carry out the “Double Long Breaks” activity. This new rule introduces two 30-minute exercise breaks on every school day, one after the second class in the morning and the other after the second class in the afternoon. It aims to improve our health through more physical activities.
I really enjoy these breaks. I usually play badminton or do some running with my classmates on the playground. After moving around, I feel more energetic and my mind feels refreshed for the next class. It's a great way to relax and have fun.
So, let's all join in! Make the most of these breaks to get moving. Exercise is good for our bodies and minds. Let's build a healthy habit together!
训练3 学习体验
[2024湖北]学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I often read books in my free time.
[答案]I often read books in my free time. Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favorite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points and sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. This helps me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
训练4 多彩生活
[2024江西]我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间,增强时间管理意识,学校英语社团以“Making Better Use of Time”为题向学生征文,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:1.When do you have free time
2.What do you often do in your free time (Give 3 examples)
3.Do you think your free time is better used Why or why not
要求:1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.词数 80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Making Better Use of Time As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years.
[答案]
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years. I am free after school and on weekends. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. It makes me strong and healthy. On weekends, I usually listen to some light music to relax myself. It's really a great thing after a long week's study. Sometimes, I spend some time in reading books. Books can bring us to somewhere we have never been.It can also open our eyes and enlarge our knowledge.
Thanks to the “double reduction” policy, I can make better use of my free time. So many after-school activities make my school life colorful and meaningful!
类型三 建议做法类
建议做法类的题目一般要求考生对某个问题或某个重要的事提出自己的看法、建议并发出号召。该类型作文需要考生在作文开头点明主题,表达自己的看法,之后有条理、有逻辑地提出自己的建议,并给出支撑内容使自己的建议更有说服力,最后发出号召,时态多用一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 点明主题,表达观点 ◇It's important for us to learn to... 对我们来说,学习……是很重要的。 ◇As we all know, ...is important, so you should pay attention to... 众所周知,……很重要,因此你应该关注…… ◇...benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us... For another, it gives us the...we need. ……对我们有很多好处。一方面,它帮助我们……另一方面,它给了我们所需要的…… ◇Nowadays...is getting more and more popular. 如今,……正变得越来越流行。 ◇Now more and more people are interested in... 现在越来越多的人对……感兴趣。 ◇We are supposed to show respect for...because... 我们应该尊重……因为…… ◇Here are my suggestions for you. 这是我给你的建议。 ◇How can you become a good... I'll share some of my ideas with you. 你怎样才能成为一个好的…… 我将与你分享我的一些想法。
中间: 详述建议 ◇In order to..., we'd better... 为了……,我们最好…… ◇In my opinion, we need..., such as... 在我看来,我们需要……,比如…… ◇Firstly, I strongly advise you to... 首先,我强烈建议你(们)…… ◇First of all, we should... 首先,我们应该…… ◇Second, we are supposed to... 其次,我们应该…… ◇Third, we ought to... 第三,我们应该…… ◇At the same time, we should... 同时,我们应该…… ◇In addition/Moreover/Also/What's more/Besides, ... 此外,…… ◇...is/are also necessary. ……也有必要。 ◇It is helpful for you to... ……对你是有帮助的。 ◇Last but not least, ...also plays an important role in daily life. 最后但同样重要的是,……在日常生活中也扮演着一个重要的角色。 ◇When..., I realized I must... 在……的时候,我意识到我必须…… ◇...should also be stopped because... ……也应该被制止,因为……
结尾: 号召行动 ◇In short, the earlier we..., the better it is for our future. 总之,我们越早……,对我们的未来就越好。 ◇As long as we try our best and start now, beginning with ourselves, I believe...will become more and more beautiful... 只要我们竭尽全力,从现在开始,从自我做起,我相信……会变得越来越美…… ◇Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of... Also, we will... 通过这些活动,我们可以真正放松自己,体验……的乐趣。此外,我们会…… ◇By doing these, I'm sure you will become...and your life will be much better. 通过做这些,我相信你会变得……,你的生活会好得多。 ◇Let's take action right now. 让我们现在就行动起来。
写作指导
话题1 健康生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Eat Well
Eating well is important for health. ①As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” ②Eating properly is the key to health. ③I'd like to share my eating habits and how they can be improved.
④For breakfast, I usually have milk, eggs, and wholewheat bread. ⑤At noon, I enjoy rice, vegetables, and chicken or fish. ⑥When it comes to dinner, I prefer noodles or dumplings. ⑦These meals provide me with enough energy for daily study.
⑧I have both good and bad eating habits. ⑨On the one hand, I always eat a balanced diet with plenty of vegetables and fruits, and I drink enough water every day. ⑩On the other hand, I sometimes can't resist junk food like potato chips, and I eat too quickly, which may cause digestion problems.
To improve my eating habits, I've made a plan. First, I'll reduce the amount of junk food I take in and replace it with healthier snacks, such as nuts and yogurt. Second, I'll try to eat slowly to enjoy the food and improve my digestion. I believe these changes will make me healthier and keep me in good shape.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题表达[例文中加粗内容]
·引出主题:①俗话说……_ _ _ _ ③我想分享……_ _ _ _
·详述饮食:④早餐我通常吃……_ _ _ _ ⑤在中午,我喜欢……_ _ _ _
⑥提及晚餐,我更喜欢……_ _ _ _ ⑦这些饮食提供给我……_ _ _ _
·详述习惯:⑨一方面_ _ _ _ ⑩另一方面_ _ _ _
·详述措施: 为了改善我的饮食习惯_ _ _ _
首先,我会减少……且替换……_ _ _ _ 其次,我会尝试_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句增加细节:⑩_ _ _ _ may cause digestion problems
·使用介词短语补充示例: _ _ _ _ nuts and yogurt
话题2 人际交往
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Eric,
①I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble getting on with your classmates. ②It is understandable for new students to have such problems.
③I have some suggestions for you. ④Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling. ⑤It's a good way to show you're friendly. ⑥What's more, you are supposed to be helpful. ⑦Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others. ⑧Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest. ⑨If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about. ⑩Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you. I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming
3.学佳作·促应用
学主体句式[例文中加粗内容]
·表示理解:①我很遗憾听到……_ _ _ _ ②对于……来说有这样的问题是可以理解的_ _ _ _
·提出建议:④_ _ _ _ ⑥_ _ _ _ ⑧_ _ _ _
·表达祝福: _ _ _ _
学补充说明[例文中画线内容]
·补充说明每个建议:⑤_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _ ⑨_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 社会实践
[2025湖北]假如你是王华,你校英语报Happy Times 正在征集关于本学期社会实践(field trip) 方案的意见。请写一封邮件将你的意见发送到指定邮箱。邮件内容包括:
1.从下面两个方案中挑选一个并说明理由;
2.为该方案增补两项你喜欢的活动。
注意:1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[答案]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'd like to recommend Plan B (Visiting the Science Park) for our field trip. The reason is that many students, including me, are interested in science and technology. It's a great chance to explore programming and new technology, which are both educational and fun. Besides, learning about space can greatly broaden our horizons.
For additional activities, I suggest trying a virtual reality (VR) experience to learn about future technologies as well as attending a workshop to build simple robots. I believe these activities will make the trip more wonderful.
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
训练2 自我管理
[2024山东东营]假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself(照顾好自己)”为题举办征文活动,请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点:1.我们应从哪些方面做起,比如:身体健康(饮食、锻炼等)、生活技能(洗衣、做饭等)、心理健康(心态、抗挫等)……;
2.具体应该怎么做;
3.这样做的好处是什么。
要求:1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法;2.文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
Take care of yourself

[答案]
Take care of yourself
As we all know, good health is important. So you should pay attention to taking care of yourselves.
First, you should put physical health in the first place. As the saying goes, to have a healthy body is to have everything. You'd better have a balanced diet and do exercise regularly. Second, some life skills are also necessary. It's helpful for you to do some washing or cooking on weekends. Last but not least, mental health also plays an important role in daily life. A positive attitude is necessary for success. Turn to others for help when you have problems.
By doing these, I'm sure you will become more and more independent and responsible, and your life will be much better.
训练3 团队合作
[2024四川成都]你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Be a Good Team Member

[答案]
Be a Good Team Member
Teamwork has a great influence on students. What if you meet a problem Maybe you have a solution, but if you talk with your teammates, you will have better ideas. How can you be a good team member I'll share some of my ideas with you.
First, you should talk with your team actively and in a friendly way. You can broaden your thinking and inspire more ideas by communicating with others. Besides, it is rude to talk loudly with others. Everyone in the team should follow the team rules and respect each other. Second, when your teammates are in trouble, you should give them a hand. Third, when you disagree with each other about a problem, you can ask the teacher for help.
In my opinion,as a team member,everyone should be kind, helpful and nice to others. Only in this way can our team get better and better.
训练4 安全意识
[2023四川成都]你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意:1.请先填写图示中空格(一空一词); 2.须全面反映图文信息; 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4.词数80左右。
Stay Safe Online

[答案]
personal; links; Stay Safe Online
With the development of the Internet, we have easy access to almost everything we want to know. On the other hand, there are also hidden dangers that we can't see clearly. Then what should we do to stay safe online
First of all, protect our privacy. Don't give away our personal information like our name or address. Besides, don't believe any strange links or emails so as to avoid property loss. What's more, never meet strangers we know online. Last but not least, always be alert in the virtual world.
Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.
类型四 计划安排类
计划安排类作文一般要求写未来规划、职业梦想、近期计划、活动安排等,谈梦想是什么时,可能用到一般现在时、现在完成时,谈具体安排、打算或表达决心时,多用一般将来时或一般现在时,而谈理由或进行详细描述时会用到一般现在时、一般过去时等。
写作积累
开头: 引出主题或目的 ◇I want to do something meaningful for... 我想为……做一些有意义的事情。 ◇I'm writing to invite you to join us. 我写信是想邀请你加入我们。 ◇Let me introduce something about the activity to you. 让我来向你介绍一下这次活动的有关情况。 ◇I'm very glad to tell you something about... 我很高兴告诉你关于……的事情。
中间: 详写计划或安排 ◇In order to develop..., I plan to have a...activity. 为了培养……,我计划进行一个……活动。 ◇In order to make our school life more colorful, our school will hold a...competition. 为了使我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩,我们学校将举办一场……比赛。 ◇I'm going to take part in... 我要参加…… ◇First, I will...because... 首先,我要……因为…… ◇Also, I plan to... 此外,我打算…… ◇As knowledge is power, I will study harder than before. 知识就是力量,我会比以前更加努力学习。 ◇The theme of the activity is...and it will be held from...to...next Saturday. 这次活动的主题是……,它将会在下周六(几)点到(几)点举办。 ◇They will perform...at...on Saturday in... 他们周六(某时)会在(某地)表演…… ◇There will be many interesting activities. First, there will be... Besides, ...will be on, too. 会有很多有趣的活动。首先会有……除此之外,……也会举行。 ◇There will be different kinds of..., such as... You can choose the one you like. 将会有不同种类的……,例如……你可以选择你喜欢的那个。 ◇The main purpose is to increase students' interest in..., and encourage students to...actively. 主要目的是提高学生对……的兴趣,并鼓励学生积极……
结尾: 表达期待、决心等 ◇I think I will be a...because... 我觉得我会成为一名……因为…… ◇I hope I could try my best to help more people. 我希望尽我所能帮助更多的人。 ◇I believe these activities will not only make...happy but also help me learn a lot. 我相信这些活动不仅会使……快乐,同时也会帮我学到很多。 ◇I believe we all will have a great time. 我相信我们都会玩得很开心。 ◇I hope that we'll give a wonderful performance and win a prize in...competition. 我希望我们能在……比赛中表现优秀并得奖。 ◇If you want to take part, please let us know before... 如果你想参加,请在……之前通知我们。 ◇I am looking forward to your reply!我期待您的回复! ◇We are looking forward to your coming and we welcome your opinions and suggestions after this activity. 我们期待您的到来,也乐意接受您在此次活动结束后的意见和建议。 ◇I will work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in...years will be wonderful!我会努力实现我的梦想。我确信我的生活在(几)年后将会非常美好! ◇Although I know it is not easy to be..., I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream. 虽然我知道成为……并不容易,但我将加倍努力实现我的梦想。
写作指导
话题1 多彩生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
①In my opinion, both my parents and my friends are important parts of my life, so I will keep a balance between them. ②Here comes my plan.
③First, I plan to play basketball with my friends on weekends. ④I will also help babysit my little brother at home. ⑤Second, I will volunteer in the children's home with my friends. ⑥We can read stories to the kids and help with cleaning. ⑦When my parents have a long vacation, I will have fun with my parents, like travelling with them or visiting my grandparents.
⑧I really treasure the time with my parents and my friends.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题词块[例文中加粗内容]
·表示假期活动的短语③打篮球_ _ _ _ ④帮助照看我的小弟弟_ _ _ _ ⑤在儿童福利院做志愿者_ _ _ _ ⑥给孩子们读故事_ _ _ _ 帮忙打扫卫生_ _ _ _ ⑦和他们一起旅行_ _ _ _ 看望我的祖父母_ _ _ _
学通用句式[例文中画线内容]
·说明未来的计划安排的句式:②_ _ _ _ ③_ _ _ _ ④_ _ _ _ ⑤_ _ _ _ ⑥_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _
话题2 校园活动
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Sam,
How is it going I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school.
①In order to make our school life more colorful, our school will hold a textbook play competition. ②It will be held at 4 p.m. next Friday in the school hall. ③Everyone is preparing for it. ④Here are my plans. ⑤Firstly, I am going to read the text carefully and try to understand my role. ⑥Secondly, I plan to discuss how to act well with my classmates. ⑦Besides, I will practice acting skills hard together with them.
⑧In a word, we will work as a great team. ⑨I hope that we'll give a wonderful performance and win a prize in the textbook play competition. ⑩I can't wait!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题表达[例文中加粗内容]
·准备比赛的表达:⑤仔细阅读课文_ _ _ _ 尽力理解我的角色_ _ _ _ ⑥与我的同学讨论如何表演好_ _ _ _ ⑦刻苦练习表演技巧_ _ _ _
·表示期待的用语:⑨进行一场精彩的表演_ _ _ _ 得奖_ _ _ _
学通用句式[例文中画线内容]
·活动目的:①为了使我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩……_ _ _ _
·活动时间和地点:②它将会在……举办_ _ _ _
·多项计划和安排:⑤首先,我将会……_ _ _ _ ⑥其次,我计划……_ _ _ _ ⑦除此之外,我将要……_ _ _ _
·进行总结:⑧总而言之,我们会……_ _ _ _
·表达期待:⑨我希望……_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 校园生活
[2025江苏扬州]校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美”,你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动,请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。
提示:(1)What do you record (choose one point: views/people/activities...)
(2)How do you record and share it And why
(3)What do you expect to get from this group activity (list at least two points)
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record
[答案]
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record people—the heart of our campus. We will mainly focus on taking photos of teachers helping students and classmates working in groups or helping each other. We will also add simple notes to explain these warm moments. Photos can catch real smiles and actions easily, bringing these beautiful moments to life. Then we'll share them on the school website and our club's social media, so that more people both within and outside our school can see how good our school is.
Through this activity, we hope to gain a better understanding of our school community while learning to appreciate the kindness that surrounds us every day. More importantly, by working together on this project, we aim to strengthen our teamwork skills and create meaningful connections with one another.
训练2 职业启蒙
[2024山东临沂]假定你是李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求:1.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.
Li Ping
[答案]
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
训练3 未来畅想
[2024湖北武汉]本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow's Life”展开。请你根据以下提示从生活、工作、家庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
Where do you want to live and work
What will your family be like
How are you going to spend your free time
Something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
[答案]
My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I'll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to other places on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle first. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be wonderful!
训练4 动手实践
[2024辽宁]假定你是李辉,你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。你得知你的英国朋友Eric有意参与,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)告知你的打算;
(2)询问他的想法;
(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
[答案]
Dear Eric,
How is everything going We are going to design and make model planes during the summer vacation. I know that you are interested in it. You are welcome to join us. There are 20 teenagers in our club. We will be divided into 4 groups. We plan to spend 2 weeks on the activity. We will go to the Club Activity Room every day. What's more, the model planes will be shown to the students in our school.
What's your opinion on designing and making the model planes We want to know your thoughts on this project. Let's discuss them together. I will be very glad if you can let me know your views.
The activity is so meaningful that we will make an effort on it. We hope to work on this summer project with you and we are looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
类型五 图片图表类
该类型的题目一般要求考生对图片或图表所表示的内容进行详细描述,同时解释其所传递的信息。难点在于既要写出图片或图表的表面信息,又要给出其隐含的信息或自己的观点、感悟、建议等。该类型题目通常会用到一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 引出主题 ◇Our school did a survey among...students on the topic of... Here are the results. 我们学校就……话题对(多少名)学生做了一项调查。这是调查结果。
中间: 详述图表以及自己的观点、建议、感悟等 ◇...percent of the students believe..., while...percent consider... 百分之……的学生认为……,而百分之……(的学生)认为…… ◇As the...mentioned, about one third say...is their favorite. 正如……提到的,大约三分之一说……是他们最喜欢的。 ◇The number of students who choose...is almost the same as the number of those who choose..., accounting for 25% and 27% respectively. 选择……的学生人数和选择……的学生人数几乎相同,分别占25%和27%。 ◇Only 17% of the students consider...their favorite. 只有17%的学生认为……是他们最喜欢的。 ◇As far as I am concerned, ...is the most useful. 就我而言,……是最有用的。 ◇On the one hand, I am able to... On the other hand, it helps to improve...as well as...一方面,我能够……另一方面,它有助于提高……还有……
结尾: 再次点题 ◇In fact, it is...that brings... 事实上,正是……带来…… ◇...are important, so we had better make full use of them to make...more interesting. ……是很重要的,所以我们最好充分利用它们来使……更有趣。
写作指导
话题 学习体验
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading. ①12% don't know what to read. ②And 4% have other reasons. ③Most students, about 68%, think they have no time. ④However, I think if we truly want to read, we can always find time.
⑤First, we can use spare moments wisely. ⑥We can read during short moments while waiting for the bus. ⑦Also, always carrying a book makes it convenient to read. ⑧Every minute counts.
⑨Second, we can create an AI reading agent. ⑩It creates our own reading plans, records our reading time and reminds us about our reading tasks. It can help us manage time well.
Dear friends, time is like sunshine—if you look for it, you'll always find some. Let's swim together in the ocean of reading.
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·描述数据/图表内容转化:12%—I don't know what to read.→①12% _ _ _ _ .4%—others→②And 4% _ _ _ _ .68%—I don't have time to read books.→③Most students, about 68%, _ _ _ _ .
·表达观点:④然而,我觉得……_ _ _ _
·针对性建议:⑤首先,我们能……_ _ _ _ ⑨其次,我们能……_ _ _ _
·号召: 让我们……_ _ _ _
学细节扩充[例文中画线内容]
·支撑句子⑤中的“use spare moments wisely”的内容:⑥_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _ ⑧_ _ _ _
·支撑句子⑨中的“create an AI reading agent”的内容:⑩_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 劳动实践
[2025北京]假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
提示词语: show, chores, spend, tidy up, helpful
内容提示: ·What can you learn from the results
·Offer some advice to your classmates on doing housework.
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.
[答案]
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework. According to the results, 15% of them usually do housework, while 80% sometimes help with chores. Sadly, 5% seldom do any housework at all. This shows that most students are slow to take part in household tasks.
To improve this, I suggest my classmates spend some time every day doing simple chores, like tidying up their rooms or washing dishes. Housework is not only helpful for keeping our homes clean but also beneficial for teaching us responsibility. Let's all try to do more to help our families!
训练2 学习体验
[2025四川成都]英语课将围绕“你最喜欢的科学探究场所”开展讨论,以下图表为你所在小组针对本校八年级学生的调查结果。请根据图表信息写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述及评析;
2.你的选择及原因。
注意:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开展科学探究 do scientific exploration
Hello, everyone.
[答案]
Hello, everyone. Today, we are talking about our favorite places for scientific exploration. Here is the result of the survey.
In our survey, 62% of students in Grade 8 choose our school. It's because our school has many good labs and tools. It is convenient for them to do many different kinds of experiments. 18% of students like to do exploration in university. They think that they can learn from professors and have richer knowledge there. 14% of students choose other places, maybe museums or science centers. Only 6% do exploration at home. I think it's a little dangerous without help.
For me, I like doing scientific exploration at school best. It's safe and we can work with our classmates and teachers. We can learn a lot together.
训练3 安全意识
[2024安徽]假设你是李辉, 上周你在学校举行的“消防安全日”活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息, 写一篇英语短文, 给校英文报投稿。
要点:1.活动目的; 2.灭火器的使用方法; 3.你的体会。
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.
[答案]
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities I've learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
训练4 多彩生活
[2024重庆A]雨天总让人烦恼,下雨了,愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校,哪知随后却有惊喜发生……
发生了什么呢 请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。
要求:1.80—120词;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:

[答案]
Today it rained again. Upset as usual, Hannah took up her umbrella and rushed into the rain. She hurried to school, only to find an empty classroom. She was worried and angry. She was about to leave when she heard a loud “Surprise!” Her students jumped out from every corner of the classroom, telling her that they were planning this for her to bring some joy into her life. Hannah's face lit up. She walked out of the classroom with her students and they enjoyed a wonderful moment in the rain. She thought, “Rainy days will never trouble me any more.”
It's natural for us to feel bad sometimes. But a little creative surprise can cheer us up.
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第三部分 写作素养·拔高练
类型一 经历感受类
经历感受类作文一般要求考生先就某话题描述一段相关的自身经历,再写出自己的感受、收获。我们描述自身经历时通常使用一般过去时,表达自己的感受与收获可以使用现在完成时或一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 引出话题 ◇...is one of my favorite... ……是我最喜欢的……之一。 ◇There are countless interesting memories in... Let me tell you one of them. It's about... ……里有无数有趣的回忆。让我告诉你其中一个。它是关于…… ◇I have an interesting...to share with you. 我有一个有趣的……与你分享。 ◇For me, ...is the...I want to...most. 对于我来说,……是我最想……的……
中间: 叙述经历——起因、经过、结果 (5W1H: Who/When/Where/What/Why/How) ◇At first/To start with/In the beginning, ... 起初…… ◇After that, ... 然后…… ◇Finally/In the end, ... 最终…… ◇However, ... 然而…… ◇In fact/As a matter of fact, ... 事实上…… ◇Luckily/Unfortunately, ... 幸运的是……/不幸的是…… ◇Take me for example. ...used to be difficult for me. 以我为例。以前……对我来说很难。 ◇Gradually, I made great progress in... 逐渐地,我在……上取得了很大进步。 ◇I got strong feelings of... 我产生了强烈的……感。
结尾: 抒发感受,总结收获 ◇It was such an unforgettable experience that I... 这是一次如此难忘的经历,使我…… ◇This experience helps me know better about... 这次经历帮我更好地了解…… ◇From this experience, we have gained a lot. 从这次经历中,我们收获了很多。 ◇When doing sth., I learned how to... 当我在做某事的时候,我学会了如何…… ◇My...skills have improved a lot. 我的……能力提高了很多。 ◇What an enjoyment it is!这真是一件乐事啊! ◇In fact, there are many...waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering them, you will feel that...everywhere. 事实上,有很多……等着我们去发现。只要你认真去发现它们,你就会感觉到……无处不在。 ◇It had a positive impact on me, as it made me more interested in... 它对我有积极的影响,因为它使我对……更感兴趣。 ◇It has inspired me to pursue a career in...and make a difference to the world.它激励我从事……领域的职业,并对世界产生影响。 ◇...not only helps me..., but also helps me...I will keep...and try to be better. ……不仅帮我……,而且帮我……我会继续……并尽力变得更好。 ◇The...not only deepens our love for...but also enriches our understanding of... ……不仅加深了我们对……的热爱,而且丰富了我们对……的理解。 ◇This experience has taught me that... 这次经历教会了我…… ◇It's...that makes us better and better. 正是……让我们变得越来越好。
写作指导
话题1 体育活动
1.审清题·定方向
2025 四川南充 假如你是李明,你校英语网站正在征集故事。请你根据下面网页的内容写一篇短文投稿,分享你的故事。
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
2.巧立意·成佳作
①My favourite sport is basketball. ②I learned it under the influence and encouragement of my father.
③At first, I didn't love it at all, because I found it really hard to shoot the ball into the basket. ④However, my father told me “practice makes perfect” and to focus on the ball only. ⑤From then on, I practiced it two hours a day. ⑥Day by day, I could get more points and got interested in playing it.
⑦I come to realize that it takes us time to do well in a sport. ⑧Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of not giving up and brings me happiness. ⑨I love it and I will keep on doing it.
3.学佳作·促应用
学事件表述[例文中加粗内容]
·开端:③一开始,我一点儿也不喜欢它……_ _ _ _
·转折:④然而,我父亲告诉我…… _ _ _ _
·过程:⑤从那时起,我每天练习两个小时。_ _ _ _
·结果:⑥时间一天天过去,我能得到更多分数并且对打篮球感兴趣了。_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用介词短语增加细节:②在我父亲的影响和鼓励下 _ _ _ _
·使用原因状语从句丰富句式:③因为我觉得它真的很难_ _ _ _
·使用谚语:④熟能生巧_ _ _ _
·使用宾语从句:⑦我们要在一项运动中做得好需要花费时间_ _ _ _
·写收获:⑧打篮球教会了我不放弃的精神,还给我带来了快乐。_ _ _ _
话题2 体育精神
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
These days, we have more time to do sports. We experienced more and surely made progress. ①As for me, I think my P.E. teacher Mr. Liu helped me a lot, and I've learned a lot from him.
②He always trained me strictly but patiently. ③When I met any problems, he never showed any impatience. ④ Instead, he always encouraged me to never give up. ⑤The spirit had a great influence on me and changed me deeply.
⑥As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.” ⑦ Thanks to his strict training, I have become stronger and stronger, and because of his warm words, I feel more and more confident.
⑧Thank you very much, my dear teacher!
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·第一段引出主题或观点:①对于我来说,我觉得…… _ _ _ _
·第二段和第三段描述事件发展过程及自己的收获:②严格但耐心地训练我_ _ _ _ ③从不表现出任何不耐烦_ _ _ _ ④鼓励我永不放弃_ _ _ _ ⑦变得越来越强壮_ _ _ _ 感觉越来越自信_ _ _ _
·第四段表达感谢:⑧非常感谢您_ _ _ _
学衔接表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用表示转折的词:④反而_ _ _ _
·使用谚语:⑥正如谚语所说“不劳则无获”。_ _ _ _
·表达因果关系:⑦多亏;由于_ _ _ _ 因为_ _ _ _
话题3 社会实践
1.审清题·定方向
注意事项:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday. ①Let me tell you something about it.
②In the morning, we visited the History Museum. ③We learned about the history of the Long March. ④Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. ⑤After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. ⑥We also watched local opera performances that are educational.
⑦The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art!
⑧Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·引出主题:①_ _ _ _
·详述过程:通过②中的_ _ _ _ 和⑤中的_ _ _ _ 两个时间状语,厘清活动顺序。
·总结全文:用⑦中的_ _ _ _ (不仅……而且……)总结出实践的意义。
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句增加对活动过程的描述或补充细节信息:④_ _ _ _ greatly touched us⑤_ _ _ _ we enjoyed paper cutting art ⑥_ _ _ _ are educational
·使用动词短语表达此次实践活动的意义:⑦加深我们对祖国的爱_ _ _ _ 丰富我们对中国传统艺术的理解_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 学习体验
[2025云南]你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Unforgettable Class” 为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述令你难忘的一节课,并谈谈你从中获得的感受或受到的启发。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。

训练2 校园生活
[2025福建]假定你是某校学生李华,近日你校开展了以“共植诚信之树”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示,用英语给笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I'm glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school.

Yours,
Li Hua
训练3 人际交往
[2025山西]生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
要求:
1.词数不少于80词;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

训练4 劳动实践
[2024陕西]假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇:
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn,...
要求:
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How's it going I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
类型二 介绍说明类
介绍说明类作文大多围绕兴趣爱好、生活方式、学习方法、活动过程、传统文化或身边的事物等话题展开,主要考查考生用英语条理清晰地介绍某种事物或说明某个过程的能力,时态通常以一般现在时为主。
写作积累
开头: 点明主题,引出要介绍的内容 ◇Some students like... Others enjoy... As for me, I prefer... Let me tell you what I think. 有些学生喜欢……其他学生喜欢……至于我,我更喜欢……让我告诉你我的想法。 ◇Are you ready for an interesting and colorful... 你准备好参加一个有趣而丰富多彩的……了吗 ◇Now I'd like to introduce some of... 现在我想介绍一些…… ◇Among them, ...is my favorite because I like...and I want to... 其中,……是我的最爱,因为我喜欢……并且我想要…… ◇In May, our school organized many...activities. I was happy that I learned a lot. 在五月,我们学校组织了许多……活动。我很高兴我学到了很多东西。 ◇In my opinion, ...is much better. Here are some of my reasons. 在我看来,……更好。这是我的一些理由。 ◇I am quite interested in...and want to apply for it. 我对……很感兴趣,想申请这个职位。
中间: 详细介绍和说明 ◇I enjoy...because it brings me... 我喜欢……因为它给我带来…… ◇Firstly, it is necessary for me to... 首先,我有必要…… ◇Additionally/Besides/What's more, ... 此外…… ◇...brings me both pleasure and knowledge. ……给我带来快乐和知识。 ◇My favorite types of...are...and... 我最喜欢的……的类型是……和…… ◇I like...because it can not only make me...but also bring me... 我喜欢……因为它不仅能让我……而且能给我带来…… ◇We believe it can bring us good luck. 我们相信它能给我们带来好运。 ◇Make sure you choose the right...so that your...may look... 确保你选择了合适的……,以便你的……可能看起来…… ◇...is one of the most important festivals in China, which usually falls on the...day of the...lunar month. ……是中国最重要的节日之一,通常在农历的……月……日。 ◇On that day, people usually celebrate it in different ways, such as... 在那一天,人们通常用不同的方式来庆祝,比如…… ◇I usually...to relax myself. It's really a great thing after a long week's study. 我通常……来让自己放松。在漫长的一周的学习之后,这真的是一件很棒的事情。
结尾: 分享感受、建议等 ◇We can get close to...and relax by enjoying the beauty of... 我们可以接近……并通过享受……的美来放松。 ◇As mentioned above, ...can make me think more and achieve more, so I will keep on... 如上所述,……能让我思考更多,成就更多,所以我会继续…… ◇We can also learn more about...and spread them around the world. 我们还可以更多地了解……并将它们传播到世界各地。 ◇It can also open our eyes and enlarge our knowledge. 它也可以开阔我们的眼界,扩充我们的知识。 ◇Everyone has shining points as long as they take a close look at themselves. 只要仔细审视自己,每个人都有闪光点。 ◇We can take part in some activities that can help us find out what we are good at. 我们可以参加一些可以帮助我们发现自己擅长什么的活动。
写作指导
话题1 校园生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. ①It is on the third floor of Building 3.②It is large and bright. ③There are many kinds of books in the library, such as novels and magazines. ④I often read my favourite books there. ⑤Those books can help me explore different fields and increase my knowledge. ⑥To express my love for the library, I will be a volunteer to help organize the books and clean the library. ⑦I hope more and more students come to the library and enjoy the pleasure of reading.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主干表达[例文中加粗内容]
·位置:①它位于3号楼的三楼。_ _ _ _
·环境:②又大又明亮_ _ _ _
·图书种类:③许多种类的书_ _ _ _
·对“我”的帮助:④在那里读我最喜欢的书_ _ _ _
·“我”能为图书馆做的事:⑥成为一名志愿者来帮助整理图书和打扫图书馆_ _ _ _
学细节扩充[例文中画线内容]
·通过举例子的方法补充关于图书种类的细节:③比如小说和杂志_ _ _ _
·用and连接两个并列成分补充说明图书馆的功能:⑤帮我探索不同的领域并且增长我的知识 _ _ _ _
·动词不定式作目的状语引出下一个要点:⑥为了表达我对图书馆的爱_ _ _ _
·表达愿望:⑦我希望越来越多的学生来到图书馆,享受阅读的乐趣。_ _ _ _
话题2 人物描述
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Hello, everyone! I'm looking for a partner to sing the English song “Auld Lang Syne” with me at the graduation ceremony. ①As we all know, friends play an important role in our life, so does a partner. ②As for me, I'd like to find a girl of my age, so that we'll have no difficulty in communicating. ③Then, she should be good at singing and then we can well present the true feeling of the song. ④Also, she should have fluent spoken English, as it's a classic English song. ⑤Last but not least, she'd better be a good teammate, since good teamwork can help make our performance perfect. ⑥If you are interested in singing English songs and want to show your talent, please contact me. ⑦Let's create an unforgettable performance together. Thanks for listening!
3.学佳作·促应用
学要点表述[例文中加粗内容]
·强调重要性:①起重要作用_ _ _ _
·要点1 要找的搭档的性别与年龄:②找一个和我同龄的女孩_ _ _ _
·要点2 期望搭档擅长的事及原因:③擅长唱歌_ _ _ _ 完全呈现出歌曲中真正的情感_ _ _ _ ④英语口语流利_ _ _ _ 一首古典英文歌_ _ _ _
·要点3 期望搭档是什么样的人及原因:⑤是一名好队友_ _ _ _ 好的合作可以有助于使我们的表演很完美_ _ _ _
学衔接词块[例文中画线内容]
·引出主题:①众所周知_ _ _ _ 一位搭档也是如此_ _ _ _
·有逻辑地表达多个要点:②对我而言_ _ _ _ ③其次_ _ _ _ ④并且_ _ _ _
⑤最后但同样重要的是_ _ _ _
话题3 动手实践
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made. ①To make this fan, I first prepared materials like paper, scissors, a brush, and a stick. ②Next, I carefully cut out two circular pieces of paper, which would become the fan's surface. ③Finally, I used the brush to paint my design on the paper. ④The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees. ⑤This scene is not only pleasing to the eye but also deeply meaningful, symbolizing the ancient Chinese belief in harmony between nature and humanity. ⑥This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity. ⑦More importantly, it deepened my appreciation for our rich cultural heritage. ⑧I sincerely hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. ⑨Thank you!
3.学佳作·促应用
学要点表述[例文中加粗内容]
·按顺序描述扇子制作的过程:①准备材料_ _ _ _ ②剪出两片圆形的纸片_ _ _ _ ③用毛笔绘制出了我的设计_ _ _ _
·扇面内容及寓意:④以中国传统山水画为特色_ _ _ _ ⑤象征着中国古代对人与自然和谐共处的信仰_ _ _ _
·感受与愿望:⑥有趣的_ _ _ _ 教会了我要有耐心和创造力_ _ _ _ ⑦加深了我对我们丰富文化遗产的理解_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用介词短语增加细节:①比如纸、剪刀、一支毛笔和一根木棍_ _ _ _
·使用定语从句补充说明:②这将作为扇面部分_ _ _ _
·使用衔接词提升流畅度:⑥不仅……而且……_ _ _ _ ⑦更重要的是_ _ _ _
话题4 传统文化
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ①Among many traditional festivals, the Spring Festival is the most important one, which is also called the Chinese New Year. ②It usually falls in January or February. ③Before the Spring Festival, people usually come back to their hometown to get together with their family members. ④They clean up their houses and decorate them with red Chinese knots and paper cuttings, because red represents good luck in China. ⑤During the Spring Festival, family members gather together to have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. ⑥What's more, people usually visit relatives in their new clothes. ⑦Children are very happy to get red packets with best wishes. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country Yours truly, Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题词块[例文中加粗内容]
·描写春节的活动:③回到他们的家乡与他们的家人待在一起_ _ _ _ ④打扫他们的房子_ _ _ _ 用红色中国结和剪纸(窗花)装饰它们_ _ _ _ ⑤团聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐_ _ _ _ 看春晚_ _ _ _ ⑥拜访亲戚_ _ _ _ 收到红包_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句补充细节,说明春节的另一个名称:①_ _ _ _ is also called the Chinese New Year.
·表示节日在什么日期的句型:②It usually _ _ _ _ in+月份/on+日期.
·使用原因状语从句解释用红色中国结和窗花装饰房子的原因:④because _ _ _ _
·使用衔接词引出另一个活动:⑥_ _ _ _
·使用介词短语补充细节信息:⑦_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 自我提升
[2025湖南长沙]学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—steps towards success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示, 并结合自身感悟, 写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息, 并适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出, 不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Mistakes—steps towards success Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow.
训练2 运动与健康
[2025山东烟台]为保障学生身体健康,烟台市要求义务教育学校从2025年5月开始全面开展“双大课间”活动,上午和下午第二节课后各设30分钟运动大课间。为此,你校英语报以“Let's get moving”为题进行征稿,请你结合以下内容投稿:
1.“双大课间”活动简介;2.你参与的情况及感受;3.号召同学们积极参与。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
Let's get moving Recently, all primary and middle schools in Yantai have been required to carry out the “Double Long Breaks” activity.
训练3 学习体验
[2024湖北]学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I often read books in my free time.
训练4 多彩生活
[2024江西]我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间,增强时间管理意识,学校英语社团以“Making Better Use of Time”为题向学生征文,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:1.When do you have free time
2.What do you often do in your free time (Give 3 examples)
3.Do you think your free time is better used Why or why not
要求:1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.词数 80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Making Better Use of Time As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years.
类型三 建议做法类
建议做法类的题目一般要求考生对某个问题或某个重要的事提出自己的看法、建议并发出号召。该类型作文需要考生在作文开头点明主题,表达自己的看法,之后有条理、有逻辑地提出自己的建议,并给出支撑内容使自己的建议更有说服力,最后发出号召,时态多用一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 点明主题,表达观点 ◇It's important for us to learn to... 对我们来说,学习……是很重要的。 ◇As we all know, ...is important, so you should pay attention to... 众所周知,……很重要,因此你应该关注…… ◇...benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us... For another, it gives us the...we need. ……对我们有很多好处。一方面,它帮助我们……另一方面,它给了我们所需要的…… ◇Nowadays...is getting more and more popular. 如今,……正变得越来越流行。 ◇Now more and more people are interested in... 现在越来越多的人对……感兴趣。 ◇We are supposed to show respect for...because... 我们应该尊重……因为…… ◇Here are my suggestions for you. 这是我给你的建议。 ◇How can you become a good... I'll share some of my ideas with you. 你怎样才能成为一个好的…… 我将与你分享我的一些想法。
中间: 详述建议 ◇In order to..., we'd better... 为了……,我们最好…… ◇In my opinion, we need..., such as... 在我看来,我们需要……,比如…… ◇Firstly, I strongly advise you to... 首先,我强烈建议你(们)…… ◇First of all, we should... 首先,我们应该…… ◇Second, we are supposed to... 其次,我们应该…… ◇Third, we ought to... 第三,我们应该…… ◇At the same time, we should... 同时,我们应该…… ◇In addition/Moreover/Also/What's more/Besides, ... 此外,…… ◇...is/are also necessary. ……也有必要。 ◇It is helpful for you to... ……对你是有帮助的。 ◇Last but not least, ...also plays an important role in daily life. 最后但同样重要的是,……在日常生活中也扮演着一个重要的角色。 ◇When..., I realized I must... 在……的时候,我意识到我必须…… ◇...should also be stopped because... ……也应该被制止,因为……
结尾: 号召行动 ◇In short, the earlier we..., the better it is for our future. 总之,我们越早……,对我们的未来就越好。 ◇As long as we try our best and start now, beginning with ourselves, I believe...will become more and more beautiful... 只要我们竭尽全力,从现在开始,从自我做起,我相信……会变得越来越美…… ◇Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of... Also, we will... 通过这些活动,我们可以真正放松自己,体验……的乐趣。此外,我们会…… ◇By doing these, I'm sure you will become...and your life will be much better. 通过做这些,我相信你会变得……,你的生活会好得多。 ◇Let's take action right now. 让我们现在就行动起来。
写作指导
话题1 健康生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Eat Well
Eating well is important for health. ①As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” ②Eating properly is the key to health. ③I'd like to share my eating habits and how they can be improved.
④For breakfast, I usually have milk, eggs, and wholewheat bread. ⑤At noon, I enjoy rice, vegetables, and chicken or fish. ⑥When it comes to dinner, I prefer noodles or dumplings. ⑦These meals provide me with enough energy for daily study.
⑧I have both good and bad eating habits. ⑨On the one hand, I always eat a balanced diet with plenty of vegetables and fruits, and I drink enough water every day. ⑩On the other hand, I sometimes can't resist junk food like potato chips, and I eat too quickly, which may cause digestion problems.
To improve my eating habits, I've made a plan. First, I'll reduce the amount of junk food I take in and replace it with healthier snacks, such as nuts and yogurt. Second, I'll try to eat slowly to enjoy the food and improve my digestion. I believe these changes will make me healthier and keep me in good shape.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题表达[例文中加粗内容]
·引出主题:①俗话说……_ _ _ _ ③我想分享……_ _ _ _
·详述饮食:④早餐我通常吃……_ _ _ _ ⑤在中午,我喜欢……_ _ _ _
⑥提及晚餐,我更喜欢……_ _ _ _ ⑦这些饮食提供给我……_ _ _ _
·详述习惯:⑨一方面_ _ _ _ ⑩另一方面_ _ _ _
·详述措施: 为了改善我的饮食习惯_ _ _ _
首先,我会减少……且替换……_ _ _ _ 其次,我会尝试_ _ _ _
学优秀表达[例文中画线内容]
·使用定语从句增加细节:⑩_ _ _ _ may cause digestion problems
·使用介词短语补充示例: _ _ _ _ nuts and yogurt
话题2 人际交往
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Eric,
①I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble getting on with your classmates. ②It is understandable for new students to have such problems.
③I have some suggestions for you. ④Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling. ⑤It's a good way to show you're friendly. ⑥What's more, you are supposed to be helpful. ⑦Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others. ⑧Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest. ⑨If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about. ⑩Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you. I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming
3.学佳作·促应用
学主体句式[例文中加粗内容]
·表示理解:①我很遗憾听到……_ _ _ _ ②对于……来说有这样的问题是可以理解的_ _ _ _
·提出建议:④_ _ _ _ ⑥_ _ _ _ ⑧_ _ _ _
·表达祝福: _ _ _ _
学补充说明[例文中画线内容]
·补充说明每个建议:⑤_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _ ⑨_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 社会实践
[2025湖北]假如你是王华,你校英语报Happy Times 正在征集关于本学期社会实践(field trip) 方案的意见。请写一封邮件将你的意见发送到指定邮箱。邮件内容包括:
1.从下面两个方案中挑选一个并说明理由;
2.为该方案增补两项你喜欢的活动。
注意:1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
训练2 自我管理
[2024山东东营]假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself(照顾好自己)”为题举办征文活动,请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点:1.我们应从哪些方面做起,比如:身体健康(饮食、锻炼等)、生活技能(洗衣、做饭等)、心理健康(心态、抗挫等)……;
2.具体应该怎么做;
3.这样做的好处是什么。
要求:1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法;2.文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
Take care of yourself

训练3 团队合作
[2024四川成都]你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Be a Good Team Member

训练4 安全意识
[2023四川成都]你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意:1.请先填写图示中空格(一空一词); 2.须全面反映图文信息; 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4.词数80左右。
Stay Safe Online

类型四 计划安排类
计划安排类作文一般要求写未来规划、职业梦想、近期计划、活动安排等,谈梦想是什么时,可能用到一般现在时、现在完成时,谈具体安排、打算或表达决心时,多用一般将来时或一般现在时,而谈理由或进行详细描述时会用到一般现在时、一般过去时等。
写作积累
开头: 引出主题或目的 ◇I want to do something meaningful for... 我想为……做一些有意义的事情。 ◇I'm writing to invite you to join us. 我写信是想邀请你加入我们。 ◇Let me introduce something about the activity to you. 让我来向你介绍一下这次活动的有关情况。 ◇I'm very glad to tell you something about... 我很高兴告诉你关于……的事情。
中间: 详写计划或安排 ◇In order to develop..., I plan to have a...activity. 为了培养……,我计划进行一个……活动。 ◇In order to make our school life more colorful, our school will hold a...competition. 为了使我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩,我们学校将举办一场……比赛。 ◇I'm going to take part in... 我要参加…… ◇First, I will...because... 首先,我要……因为…… ◇Also, I plan to... 此外,我打算…… ◇As knowledge is power, I will study harder than before. 知识就是力量,我会比以前更加努力学习。 ◇The theme of the activity is...and it will be held from...to...next Saturday. 这次活动的主题是……,它将会在下周六(几)点到(几)点举办。 ◇They will perform...at...on Saturday in... 他们周六(某时)会在(某地)表演…… ◇There will be many interesting activities. First, there will be... Besides, ...will be on, too. 会有很多有趣的活动。首先会有……除此之外,……也会举行。 ◇There will be different kinds of..., such as... You can choose the one you like. 将会有不同种类的……,例如……你可以选择你喜欢的那个。 ◇The main purpose is to increase students' interest in..., and encourage students to...actively. 主要目的是提高学生对……的兴趣,并鼓励学生积极……
结尾: 表达期待、决心等 ◇I think I will be a...because... 我觉得我会成为一名……因为…… ◇I hope I could try my best to help more people. 我希望尽我所能帮助更多的人。 ◇I believe these activities will not only make...happy but also help me learn a lot. 我相信这些活动不仅会使……快乐,同时也会帮我学到很多。 ◇I believe we all will have a great time. 我相信我们都会玩得很开心。 ◇I hope that we'll give a wonderful performance and win a prize in...competition. 我希望我们能在……比赛中表现优秀并得奖。 ◇If you want to take part, please let us know before... 如果你想参加,请在……之前通知我们。 ◇I am looking forward to your reply!我期待您的回复! ◇We are looking forward to your coming and we welcome your opinions and suggestions after this activity. 我们期待您的到来,也乐意接受您在此次活动结束后的意见和建议。 ◇I will work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in...years will be wonderful!我会努力实现我的梦想。我确信我的生活在(几)年后将会非常美好! ◇Although I know it is not easy to be..., I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream. 虽然我知道成为……并不容易,但我将加倍努力实现我的梦想。
写作指导
话题1 多彩生活
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
①In my opinion, both my parents and my friends are important parts of my life, so I will keep a balance between them. ②Here comes my plan.
③First, I plan to play basketball with my friends on weekends. ④I will also help babysit my little brother at home. ⑤Second, I will volunteer in the children's home with my friends. ⑥We can read stories to the kids and help with cleaning. ⑦When my parents have a long vacation, I will have fun with my parents, like travelling with them or visiting my grandparents.
⑧I really treasure the time with my parents and my friends.
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题词块[例文中加粗内容]
·表示假期活动的短语③打篮球_ _ _ _ ④帮助照看我的小弟弟_ _ _ _ ⑤在儿童福利院做志愿者_ _ _ _ ⑥给孩子们读故事_ _ _ _ 帮忙打扫卫生_ _ _ _ ⑦和他们一起旅行_ _ _ _ 看望我的祖父母_ _ _ _
学通用句式[例文中画线内容]
·说明未来的计划安排的句式:②_ _ _ _ ③_ _ _ _ ④_ _ _ _ ⑤_ _ _ _ ⑥_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _
话题2 校园活动
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Sam,
How is it going I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school.
①In order to make our school life more colorful, our school will hold a textbook play competition. ②It will be held at 4 p.m. next Friday in the school hall. ③Everyone is preparing for it. ④Here are my plans. ⑤Firstly, I am going to read the text carefully and try to understand my role. ⑥Secondly, I plan to discuss how to act well with my classmates. ⑦Besides, I will practice acting skills hard together with them.
⑧In a word, we will work as a great team. ⑨I hope that we'll give a wonderful performance and win a prize in the textbook play competition. ⑩I can't wait!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.学佳作·促应用
学主题表达[例文中加粗内容]
·准备比赛的表达:⑤仔细阅读课文_ _ _ _ 尽力理解我的角色_ _ _ _ ⑥与我的同学讨论如何表演好_ _ _ _ ⑦刻苦练习表演技巧_ _ _ _
·表示期待的用语:⑨进行一场精彩的表演_ _ _ _ 得奖_ _ _ _
学通用句式[例文中画线内容]
·活动目的:①为了使我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩……_ _ _ _
·活动时间和地点:②它将会在……举办_ _ _ _
·多项计划和安排:⑤首先,我将会……_ _ _ _ ⑥其次,我计划……_ _ _ _ ⑦除此之外,我将要……_ _ _ _
·进行总结:⑧总而言之,我们会……_ _ _ _
·表达期待:⑨我希望……_ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 校园生活
[2025江苏扬州]校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美”,你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动,请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。
提示:(1)What do you record (choose one point: views/people/activities...)
(2)How do you record and share it And why
(3)What do you expect to get from this group activity (list at least two points)
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record
训练2 职业启蒙
[2024山东临沂]假定你是李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求:1.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail.
Li Ping
训练3 未来畅想
[2024湖北武汉]本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow's Life”展开。请你根据以下提示从生活、工作、家庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
Where do you want to live and work
What will your family be like
How are you going to spend your free time
Something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
训练4 动手实践
[2024辽宁]假定你是李辉,你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。你得知你的英国朋友Eric有意参与,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)告知你的打算;
(2)询问他的想法;
(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
类型五 图片图表类
该类型的题目一般要求考生对图片或图表所表示的内容进行详细描述,同时解释其所传递的信息。难点在于既要写出图片或图表的表面信息,又要给出其隐含的信息或自己的观点、感悟、建议等。该类型题目通常会用到一般现在时。
写作积累
开头: 引出主题 ◇Our school did a survey among...students on the topic of... Here are the results. 我们学校就……话题对(多少名)学生做了一项调查。这是调查结果。
中间: 详述图表以及自己的观点、建议、感悟等 ◇...percent of the students believe..., while...percent consider... 百分之……的学生认为……,而百分之……(的学生)认为…… ◇As the...mentioned, about one third say...is their favorite. 正如……提到的,大约三分之一说……是他们最喜欢的。 ◇The number of students who choose...is almost the same as the number of those who choose..., accounting for 25% and 27% respectively. 选择……的学生人数和选择……的学生人数几乎相同,分别占25%和27%。 ◇Only 17% of the students consider...their favorite. 只有17%的学生认为……是他们最喜欢的。 ◇As far as I am concerned, ...is the most useful. 就我而言,……是最有用的。 ◇On the one hand, I am able to... On the other hand, it helps to improve...as well as...一方面,我能够……另一方面,它有助于提高……还有……
结尾: 再次点题 ◇In fact, it is...that brings... 事实上,正是……带来…… ◇...are important, so we had better make full use of them to make...more interesting. ……是很重要的,所以我们最好充分利用它们来使……更有趣。
写作指导
话题 学习体验
1.审清题·定方向
2.巧立意·成佳作
According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading. ①12% don't know what to read. ②And 4% have other reasons. ③Most students, about 68%, think they have no time. ④However, I think if we truly want to read, we can always find time.
⑤First, we can use spare moments wisely. ⑥We can read during short moments while waiting for the bus. ⑦Also, always carrying a book makes it convenient to read. ⑧Every minute counts.
⑨Second, we can create an AI reading agent. ⑩It creates our own reading plans, records our reading time and reminds us about our reading tasks. It can help us manage time well.
Dear friends, time is like sunshine—if you look for it, you'll always find some. Let's swim together in the ocean of reading.
3.学佳作·促应用
学框架结构[例文中加粗内容]
·描述数据/图表内容转化:12%—I don't know what to read.→①12% _ _ _ _ .4%—others→②And 4% _ _ _ _ .68%—I don't have time to read books.→③Most students, about 68%, _ _ _ _ .
·表达观点:④然而,我觉得……_ _ _ _
·针对性建议:⑤首先,我们能……_ _ _ _ ⑨其次,我们能……_ _ _ _
·号召: 让我们……_ _ _ _
学细节扩充[例文中画线内容]
·支撑句子⑤中的“use spare moments wisely”的内容:⑥_ _ _ _ ⑦_ _ _ _ ⑧_ _ _ _
·支撑句子⑨中的“create an AI reading agent”的内容:⑩_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
写作训练
训练1 劳动实践
[2025北京]假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
提示词语: show, chores, spend, tidy up, helpful
内容提示: ·What can you learn from the results
·Offer some advice to your classmates on doing housework.
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.
训练2 学习体验
[2025四川成都]英语课将围绕“你最喜欢的科学探究场所”开展讨论,以下图表为你所在小组针对本校八年级学生的调查结果。请根据图表信息写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述及评析;
2.你的选择及原因。
注意:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开展科学探究 do scientific exploration
Hello, everyone.
训练3 安全意识
[2024安徽]假设你是李辉, 上周你在学校举行的“消防安全日”活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息, 写一篇英语短文, 给校英文报投稿。
要点:1.活动目的; 2.灭火器的使用方法; 3.你的体会。
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.
训练4 多彩生活
[2024重庆A]雨天总让人烦恼,下雨了,愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校,哪知随后却有惊喜发生……
发生了什么呢 请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。
要求:1.80—120词;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:

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