【增分亮点】2026届高考英语二轮复习之应用文写作专项句句通学案(含答案)

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【增分亮点】2026届高考应用文写作专项句句通 学案版
技法1 锤词炼句——精准表达,亮点提分
语言规范是满分作文的特点。考生要在没有错误的基础上,增添亮点表达。首先,要规范拼写,规避简单错误;其次,词汇基础要扎实,能够灵活使用高级词汇及语块;再次,语法知识要系统,确保正确使用各种语法结构。
增分亮点1 锤词炼句,地道准确
一、精准多样的动词
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。精准的动词能够有效勾画交际场景,多样化的动词能够增加文章的生动性,恰如其分地传递信息和态度。
1.(普通表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has caused reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development.
→(高级表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has ___________ reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development.(2024·全国甲卷)
2.(普通表达)These advancements show China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system.
→(高级表达)These advancements ___________China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system.(2024·全国甲卷)
3.(普通表达)Today I want to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.
→(高级表达)Today ______________________ some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.(2024·全国甲卷)
二、充满表达力的名词
灵活使用一些充满表达力的名词,包括抽象意义的名词、常见动词的同根名词形式或名词词组,能够出众脱俗,为文章增色,成为得分的亮点。
1.(普通表达)The sunlight and the light wind made the whole scene come to life.
→(高级表达)The sunlight and the ___________ made the whole scene come to life.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he did a lot for society.
→(高级表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he _________________________________ society.(2023·全国甲卷)
三、丰富多彩的形容词
形容词是用来描述人或者事物的特征、性质、属性或状态的修饰性词汇,最主要的功能是修饰或者限定名词或代词。形容词的恰当使用能够为文章增色。
1.(普通表达)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it in my mind.
→(高级表达)It was such an ___________/a ___________ experience that I would always keep it in my memory.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by lively flowers and thick trees.
→(高级表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by ___________ flowers and thick trees.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
四、灵活多变的副词
副词指在句中表示行为或状态特征的词汇,主要用来作状语,修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或句子。副词的恰当使用能够提高得分的档次。
(普通表达)Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances.
→(高级表达) ___________, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances.(2024·全国甲卷)
增分亮点2 丰富表达,妙笔生花
高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句、复合句及含有非谓语动词的高级句式,能彰显考生丰富的语言内涵。但是,在使用这些句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。考生平时要注重有意识地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子和文章,有意识地尝试使用或模仿。
一、非谓语动词,神采飞扬
1.(普通表达)The Students' Union wanted to spark the interest in the plants around us. Last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.
→(高级表达) ______________________ in the plants around us, last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.(动词不定式作目的状语)(2023·浙江卷1月)
2.(普通表达)I was inspired by the fantastic scenery and decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
→(高级表达) ______________________, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, ______________________.(过去分词短语作状语、定语)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
3.(普通表达)Besides, China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively and has greatly saved travel time and promoted economic development.
→(高级表达)Besides, China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, ___________ travel time and promoting economic development.(现在分词短语作状语)(2024·全国甲卷)
二、三大从句,绽放精彩
1.(普通表达)I painted the scenery of the park and in the park the willow branches were dancing in the breeze and several ducks were swimming in the river peacefully and happily.
→(高级表达)I painted the scenery of the park, ___________ the willow branches were dancing in the breeze and several ducks were swimming in the river peacefully and happily.(定语从句)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)We all know that changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.
→(高级表达) ______________________, changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.(定语从句)(2024·全国甲卷)
3.(普通表达)When I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs-up.
→(高级表达) ___________ I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs-up.(时间状语从句)(2023·全国乙卷)
4.(普通表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement to know that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
→(高级表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement ______________________an oral English class will be arranged for us.(同位语从句)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
5.(普通表达)It was very meaningful and interesting and you cannot imagine it.
→(高级表达)You cannot imagine ______________________!(宾语从句)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
6.(普通表达)It's a simple and inexpensive activity and you can do it anywhere, even in a small space.
→(高级表达)It's ___________ a simple and inexpensive activity _________________________________.(结果状语从句)(2024·浙江卷1月)
三、妙用it,巧做点睛
1.(普通表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider it is important to protect them.
→(高级表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider ___________ significant to protect them.(it作形式宾语)(2022·全国甲卷)
2.(普通表达)To improve your coordination, flexibility, and balance is also helpful.
→(高级表达) ______________________ your coordination, flexibility, and balance. (it作形式主语)(2024·浙江卷1月)
四、倒装句式,更胜一筹
1.(普通表达)It not only provided me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, but also enhanced my willingness to take inspiration from nature in the future.
→(高级表达) ______________________ me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, ______________________ my willingness to take inspiration from nature in the future.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.
→(高级表达) _________________________________ he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.(2023·全国甲卷)
五、强调句型,词若千钧
1.(普通表达)However, I have some suggestions for the present grouping scheme.
→(高级表达)However, I ___________ some recommendations for the present categorization scheme.(强调谓语)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Through this experience I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine.
→(高级表达) ___________ through this experience ___________ I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine. (强调句型)(2023·全国乙卷)
技法2 衔接过渡——构建逻辑,完美行文
满分作文的最大特点就是清晰流畅,一气呵成。巧妙的衔接与过渡就是其中的关键。用过渡衔接词把句与句、段与段巧妙地连接在一起,文章才会更加连贯、自然和紧凑,段落或文章的发展脉络也会更清晰,中心思想也会更明确。
用法 过渡词 典例
用在段落起始的过渡词 generally speaking, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, as we know, as is known to all, as is shown in...等 ___________, online learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.一般来说,在线学习已经日益成为人们获取知识和解决问题的一种重要方式。
用在段落结尾进行总结的过渡词 to sum up, in conclusion, in a word, in the long run, in summary, all in all等 ___________, it was a valuable and enriching experience, leaving a lasting impression on all of us. 总之,这是一次宝贵而充实的经历,给我们所有人留下了深刻的印象。
用以表达时间顺序的过渡词 现在: nowadays, at present等 最近:lately, recently等 首先/: at first, first of all等 后来: after, later on, soon等 与此同时: at the same time等 最后: finally, in the end, at last等 Seeing people doing warm-up exercises with great enthusiasm, we couldn't wait to join them. ___________, the signal fired, we began our cross-country race. 看到人们热情地做热身运动,我们迫不及待地加入他们。不久之后,信号响起,我们开始了越野比赛。
用以表达空间顺序的过渡词 on one side...on the other side..., on the opposite side, in front of, in the center of, in the distance, at the back of等 ___________ the valley runs a clear, fast stream in which one may fish. In the low land along the stream are the farmlands; beyond them is the grassland. ___________ the first hills are the big mountains.一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着,人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下,低地处是农田;越过农田是草原。一群小山的山顶后面是一座座大山。
用以表示因果的过渡词 because, because of, as a result, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore, now that, consequently等 Our programme is designed to enhance students' awareness of environmental protection. ___________, the topic of the coming show will be environmental protection in our daily life.我们的节目旨在增强学生们的环境保护意识。因此,即将到来的演出的主题将是我们日常生活中的环境保护。
用以表示强调的过渡词 undoubtedly, certainly, indeed, above all, definitely, surely, to tell the truth等 ___________, never have I seen such an exceptional city with so many historic sites.毫无疑问,我从未见过一个如此独特并拥有如此多的历史遗迹的城市。
用以表示递进或补充的过渡词 in addition, additionally, furthermore, also, moreover, what's more, besides, not only...but also..., to make matters worse, worse still, last but not least等 This activity holds great significance as it ___________ fosters cultural understanding ___________ allows me to share my own culture and learn from others. 这项活动具有重要意义,因为它不仅促进文化理解,而且让我分享自己的文化并了解其他的文化。
用以举例的过渡词 including, for example, for instance, such as等 There are various themes for us to choose from, ___________ calligraphy, martial arts and papercutting.有各种各样的主题供我们选择,包括书法、武术和剪纸。
用以表示让步或转折的过渡词 but, however, nevertheless, although, though, yet, on the contrary, otherwise, despite, in spite of, regardless of, instead of, unfortunately,等 ___________ frustrated, I didn't lose heart. Instead, I sought advice from my teacher and practiced more.尽管很沮丧,但我没有丧失信心。相反,我向我的老师寻求建议并多加练习。
用以表示比较和对比的过渡词 like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, as for, in contrast, whereas, on the one hand...on the other hand..., while等 To be more exact, those who make good use of the smart phones benefit greatly___________ those who cannot resist the temptation get addicted.更确切地说,那些恰当地利用智能手机的人受益匪浅,而那些无法抵制智能手机的诱惑的人则会上瘾。
用以表示观点的过渡词 personally, I think, in my opinion, I'm afraid, as far as I'm concerned等 ___________, the absolute most important that I learn when I play sports is how to stay strong even in tough situations. 在我看来,我从体育运动中学到的最重要的东西是如何在困难的情况下保持强壮。
[高考典例]
(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题,“三段”谋篇
定体裁 电子邮件
定时态 陈述过去的经历用一般过去时;表达感受可用一般过去时或一般现在时
定人称 第 一□二□三人称为主
定要点, 定结构 三段 谋篇 第一段开篇点题 表明写信的目的:分享在公园上美术课的经历;概括介绍这次经历
第二段3个要点缺一不可 1.简要介绍背景; 2.详细介绍自己完成的作品; 3.表达自己的感想
第三段巧妙收尾 表达希望及期待
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,话题表达成就亮点
1.我们被要求画出给我们留下最深刻印象的东西。(被动语态+what引导宾语从句)
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2.我的绘画主要是关于一个开心的场景,孩子们在绿草地上玩得很开心。(where引导定语从句)
My picture was mainly about _________________________________________________________________
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3.孩子们又跑又跳,脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。(with复合结构)
The children were running and jumping, ________________________________

4.运用所学的各种绘画技能,我不仅展示了生命的活力,还展示了人与自然的和谐关系。(动词-ing形式作状语+“not only...but also...”结构)
______________________________,I showed ___________________________________________.
5.这堂美术课给我留下了深刻的印象,它总是提醒我生活充满了美好。(which引导定语从句)
The art class left a lasting impression on me _________________________________________________

满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡,完美成篇
高考英语高频句式一句多译50句150例
一句多译(1)
1.我叫李华,来自中国,一名在伦敦参加暑期课程的交换生。
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2.我能胜任这个职位,理由如下。
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3.比赛将于周五下午三点举行,五点结束。
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4.比赛的细节如下。
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5.比赛机会难得你可不容错过。
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6.盼望你积极参加比赛。
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7.很高兴得知你要参加这个汉语成语大赛。
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8.首先,建议你从现在起多练习说汉语。
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9.咱们何时何地见面切磋表演的细节?
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10.祝愿你演讲比赛获得一等奖。
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11.如果你能考虑我的申请不胜感激。
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12.如果有什么我能帮忙的,请随时告诉我。
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13.为了激发学生对英语的兴趣,将举办一场英语演讲比赛。
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14.三岁以下孩子是否需要买票?
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15.得知贵公司招聘英语导游,我特此写信应聘该职位。
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一句多译(4)
16.当我以为我把钥匙弄丢的时候,我吓死了。
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17.我们怎么能克服这些困难呢
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18.我成为医生的梦想终于实现了。
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19.现在,我的家乡再也不是10年前的景象了。
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20.老师的一席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。
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一句多译(5)
21.他不仅是我们的老师,还是我们的朋友。
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22.他的成功归功于他受过良好的教育。
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23.他把一生都献给了那些贫困的孩子。
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24.海洋的味道,让我想起了童年。
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25.不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些迷茫。
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26.她惊奇地发现几乎所有的邻居都来了。
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27.听到这个消,息,她陷入极度的悲伤之中。
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28.凯西一看到熟悉的字迹,便热泪盈框。
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29.能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。
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30.我们应该采取行动来保护环境,这是至关重要的。
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31.良好的学习习惯有助于提高我们的学习效率。
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32.我们要鼓励青少年培养自己的兴趣爱好。
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33.我们要关注社会热点问题,增强社会责任感。
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34.由于没有公共汽车,我们只好步行回家。
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35.他们马上动身去寻找那失踪的孩子。
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36.你应该为你那些无礼的话向她道歉。
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37.在强光下读书会对你的眼睛造成伤害。
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38.我们要倡导绿色生活方式,减少能源消耗。
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39.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去电影院。
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40.众所周知,台湾是中国的一部分。
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41.英语演讲比赛结果很成功。
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42.我发现他正坐在教室的后面。
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43.穿着红色羊毛衫的那个女孩是我们班长。
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44.你能告诉我去邮局的路吗?
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45.我收到你的来信有三天了。
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46.世界上没有什么东西能够替代母爱。
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47.参加社会实践能够拓宽我们的视野。
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【增分亮点】2026届高考应用文写作专项句句通 教师版
技法1 锤词炼句——精准表达,亮点提分
语言规范是满分作文的特点。考生要在没有错误的基础上,增添亮点表达。首先,要规范拼写,规避简单错误;其次,词汇基础要扎实,能够灵活使用高级词汇及语块;再次,语法知识要系统,确保正确使用各种语法结构。
增分亮点1 锤词炼句,地道准确
一、精准多样的动词
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。精准的动词能够有效勾画交际场景,多样化的动词能够增加文章的生动性,恰如其分地传递信息和态度。
1.(普通表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has caused reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development.
→(高级表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has contributed/led to reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development.(2024·全国甲卷)
2.(普通表达)These advancements show China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system.
→(高级表达)These advancements highlight China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system.(2024·全国甲卷)
3.(普通表达)Today I want to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.
→(高级表达)Today I'd like to concentrate/centre on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.(2024·全国甲卷)
二、充满表达力的名词
灵活使用一些充满表达力的名词,包括抽象意义的名词、常见动词的同根名词形式或名词词组,能够出众脱俗,为文章增色,成为得分的亮点。
1.(普通表达)The sunlight and the light wind made the whole scene come to life.
→(高级表达)The sunlight and the gentle breeze made the whole scene come to life.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he did a lot for society.
→(高级表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.(2023·全国甲卷)
三、丰富多彩的形容词
形容词是用来描述人或者事物的特征、性质、属性或状态的修饰性词汇,最主要的功能是修饰或者限定名词或代词。形容词的恰当使用能够为文章增色。
1.(普通表达)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it in my mind.
→(高级表达)It was such an extraordinary/a memorable experience that I would always keep it in my memory.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by lively flowers and thick trees.
→(高级表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by vibrant flowers and thick trees.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
四、灵活多变的副词
副词指在句中表示行为或状态特征的词汇,主要用来作状语,修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或句子。副词的恰当使用能够提高得分的档次。
(普通表达)Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances.
→(高级表达)To begin/start with, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances.(2024·全国甲卷)
增分亮点2 丰富表达,妙笔生花
高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句、复合句及含有非谓语动词的高级句式,能彰显考生丰富的语言内涵。但是,在使用这些句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。考生平时要注重有意识地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子和文章,有意识地尝试使用或模仿。
一、非谓语动词,神采飞扬
1.(普通表达)The Students' Union wanted to spark the interest in the plants around us. Last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.
→(高级表达)To spark the interest in the plants around us, last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.(动词不定式作目的状语)(2023·浙江卷1月)
2.(普通表达)I was inspired by the fantastic scenery and decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
→(高级表达)Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.(过去分词短语作状语、定语)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
3.(普通表达)Besides, China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively and has greatly saved travel time and promoted economic development.
→(高级表达)Besides, China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development.(现在分词短语作状语)(2024·全国甲卷)
二、三大从句,绽放精彩
1.(普通表达)I painted the scenery of the park and in the park the willow branches were dancing in the breeze and several ducks were swimming in the river peacefully and happily.
→(高级表达)I painted the scenery of the park, where the willow branches were dancing in the breeze and several ducks were swimming in the river peacefully and happily.(定语从句)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)We all know that changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.
→(高级表达)As we all know, changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.(定语从句)(2024·全国甲卷)
3.(普通表达)When I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs-up.
→(高级表达)The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs-up.(时间状语从句)(2023·全国乙卷)
4.(普通表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement to know that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
→(高级表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us.(同位语从句)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
5.(普通表达)It was very meaningful and interesting and you cannot imagine it.
→(高级表达)You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!(宾语从句)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
6.(普通表达)It's a simple and inexpensive activity and you can do it anywhere, even in a small space.
→(高级表达)It's such a simple and inexpensive activity that you can do it anywhere, even in a small space.(结果状语从句)(2024·浙江卷1月)
三、妙用it,巧做点睛
1.(普通表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider it is important to protect them.
→(高级表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider it significant to protect them.(it作形式宾语)(2022·全国甲卷)
2.(普通表达)To improve your coordination, flexibility, and balance is also helpful.
→(高级表达)It is also helpful to improve your coordination, flexibility, and balance. (it作形式主语)(2024·浙江卷1月)
四、倒装句式,更胜一筹
1.(普通表达)It not only provided me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, but also enhanced my willingness to take inspiration from nature in the future.
→(高级表达)Not only did it provide me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, but it also enhanced my willingness to take inspiration from nature in the future.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.
→(高级表达)Such a role model is Fan Zhongyan that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.(2023·全国甲卷)
五、强调句型,词若千钧
1.(普通表达)However, I have some suggestions for the present grouping scheme.
→(高级表达)However, I do have some recommendations for the present categorization scheme.(强调谓语)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.(普通表达)Through this experience I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine.
→(高级表达)It is through this experience that I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine. (强调句型)(2023·全国乙卷)
技法2 衔接过渡——构建逻辑,完美行文
满分作文的最大特点就是清晰流畅,一气呵成。巧妙的衔接与过渡就是其中的关键。用过渡衔接词把句与句、段与段巧妙地连接在一起,文章才会更加连贯、自然和紧凑,段落或文章的发展脉络也会更清晰,中心思想也会更明确。
用法 过渡词 典例
用在段落起始的过渡词 generally speaking, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, as we know, as is known to all, as is shown in...等 Generally speaking, online learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.一般来说,在线学习已经日益成为人们获取知识和解决问题的一种重要方式。
用在段落结尾进行总结的过渡词 to sum up, in conclusion, in a word, in the long run, in summary, all in all等 In conclusion, it was a valuable and enriching experience, leaving a lasting impression on all of us. 总之,这是一次宝贵而充实的经历,给我们所有人留下了深刻的印象。
用以表达时间顺序的过渡词 现在: nowadays, at present等 最近:lately, recently等 首先/: at first, first of all等 后来: after, later on, soon等 与此同时: at the same time等 最后: finally, in the end, at last等 Seeing people doing warm-up exercises with great enthusiasm, we couldn't wait to join them.Soon afterwards, the signal fired, we began our cross-country race. 看到人们热情地做热身运动,我们迫不及待地加入他们。不久之后,信号响起,我们开始了越野比赛。
用以表达空间顺序的过渡词 on one side...on the other side..., on the opposite side, in front of, in the center of, in the distance, at the back of等 Down the middle of the valley runs a clear, fast stream in which one may fish. In the low land along the stream are the farmlands; beyond them is the grassland. Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains.一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着,人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下,低地处是农田;越过农田是草原。一群小山的山顶后面是一座座大山。
用以表示因果的过渡词 because, because of, as a result, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore, now that, consequently等 Our programme is designed to enhance students' awareness of environmental protection. Therefore, the topic of the coming show will be environmental protection in our daily life.我们的节目旨在增强学生们的环境保护意识。因此,即将到来的演出的主题将是我们日常生活中的环境保护。
用以表示强调的过渡词 undoubtedly, certainly, indeed, above all, definitely, surely, to tell the truth等 Undoubtedly, never have I seen such an exceptional city with so many historic sites.毫无疑问,我从未见过一个如此独特并拥有如此多的历史遗迹的城市。
用以表示递进或补充的过渡词 in addition, additionally, furthermore, also, moreover, what's more, besides, not only...but also..., to make matters worse, worse still, last but not least等 This activity holds great significance as it not only fosters cultural understanding but also allows me to share my own culture and learn from others. 这项活动具有重要意义,因为它不仅促进文化理解,而且让我分享自己的文化并了解其他的文化。
用以举例的过渡词 including, for example, for instance, such as等 There are various themes for us to choose from, including calligraphy, martial arts and papercutting.有各种各样的主题供我们选择,包括书法、武术和剪纸。
用以表示让步或转折的过渡词 but, however, nevertheless, although, though, yet, on the contrary, otherwise, despite, in spite of, regardless of, instead of, unfortunately,等 Though frustrated, I didn't lose heart. Instead, I sought advice from my teacher and practiced more.尽管很沮丧,但我没有丧失信心。相反,我向我的老师寻求建议并多加练习。
用以表示比较和对比的过渡词 like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, as for, in contrast, whereas, on the one hand...on the other hand..., while等 To be more exact, those who make good use of the smart phones benefit greatly while those who cannot resist the temptation get addicted.更确切地说,那些恰当地利用智能手机的人受益匪浅,而那些无法抵制智能手机的诱惑的人则会上瘾。
用以表示观点的过渡词 personally, I think, in my opinion, I'm afraid, as far as I'm concerned等 In my opinion, the absolute most important that I learn when I play sports is how to stay strong even in tough situations. 在我看来,我从体育运动中学到的最重要的东西是如何在困难的情况下保持强壮。
[高考典例]
(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题,“三段”谋篇
定体裁 电子邮件
定时态 陈述过去的经历用一般过去时;表达感受可用一般过去时或一般现在时
定人称 第 一□二□三人称为主
定要点, 定结构 三段谋篇 第一段开篇点题 表明写信的目的:分享在公园上美术课的经历;概括介绍这次经历
第二段3个要点缺一不可 1.简要介绍背景; 2.详细介绍自己完成的作品; 3.表达自己的感想
第三段巧妙收尾 表达希望及期待
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,话题表达成就亮点
1.我们被要求画出给我们留下最深刻印象的东西。(被动语态+what引导宾语从句)
We were asked to paint what impressed us most.
2.我的绘画主要是关于一个开心的场景,孩子们在绿草地上玩得很开心。(where引导定语从句)
My picture was mainly about a happy scene where children enjoyed themselves on the green grass.
3.孩子们又跑又跳,脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。(with复合结构)
The children were running and jumping, with big smiles on their faces.
4.运用所学的各种绘画技能,我不仅展示了生命的活力,还展示了人与自然的和谐关系。(动词-ing形式作状语+“not only...but also...”结构)
Using various painting skills I had learned,I showed not only the vitality of life but also the harmonious relationship between humans and nature.
5.这堂美术课给我留下了深刻的印象,它总是提醒我生活充满了美好。(which引导定语从句)
The art class left a lasting impression on me which always reminds me that life is full of beauty.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡,完美成篇
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. You cannot imagine how interesting it was and I could hardly wait to share it with you.
After we arrived at the park, the teacher gave a brief introduction. Then, we were asked to paint what impressed us most. My picture was mainly about a happy scene where children enjoyed themselves on the green grass. A big tree stood in the middle, casting a pleasant shade. The children were running and jumping, with big smiles on their faces. Using various painting skills I had learned, I showed not only the vitality of life but also the harmonious relationship between humans and nature. The art class left a lasting impression on me which always reminds me that life is full of beauty.
I hope we can have such an experience together someday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语高频句式一句多译50句150例
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1.我叫李华,来自中国,一名在伦敦参加暑期课程的交换生。
①I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China taking a summer course in London.
②I’m Li Hua, who takes a summer course in London as an exchange student from China.
③My name is Li Hua, who is an exchange student from China attending a summer course in London.
2.我能胜任这个职位,理由如下。
①The reasons why I am qualified for this position are as follows.
②The factors that qualify me for this position are as follows.
③The reasons that make me qualified for this position are listed below.
3.比赛将于周五下午三点举行,五点结束。
①The competition is due to start at 3:00 pm on Friday, lasting approximately two hours.
②The competition is scheduled to begin at 3:00 pm on Friday and end at 5:00 pm.
③As scheduled, the contest is to be launched at 3:00 pm on Friday, ending at 5:00 pm.
4.比赛的细节如下。
①The detailed information concerning the competition is as follows.
②The following is the detailed information with regard to the competition.
③I’d like to share with you the specific information relevant to the competition as follows.
5.比赛机会难得你可不容错过。
①The contest is such a golden chance that you can’t afford to miss it.
②The contest is such a precious opportunity that you can’t afford to miss it.
③So valuable a chance is the competition that you can’t afford to miss it.
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6.盼望你积极参加比赛。
①Whoever is interested in Chinese culture is welcome to get involved.
②Looking forward to your participation in the competition as soon as possible.
③Earnestly looking forward to your involvement in the competition with great expectation.
7.很高兴得知你要参加这个汉语成语大赛。
①How delighted I'm to learn that you're to be involved in the Chinese Idiom Competition.
②Words fail to convey my delight on hearing you’ll compete in the Chinese Idiom Competition.
③Great joy wells up from the bottom of my heart on learning you are to sign up for the contest.
8.首先,建议你从现在起多练习说汉语。
①First of all, I suggest you start practicing speaking Chinese more from now on.
②To begin with, it’s advisable for you to speak Chinese more regularly starting today.
③Firstly, I recommend that you put more effort into practicing spoken Chinese from now.
9.咱们何时何地见面切磋表演的细节?
①I wonder when and where you are available for a face-to-face conversation.
②When and where shall we meet to discuss the details of our performance
③Could we decide on a time and place to go over the performance details
10.祝愿你演讲比赛获得一等奖。
①Wish you best luck in the speech contest.
②May you land the first prize in the speech competition.
③I hope you secure the first prize in the speech tournament.
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11.如果你能考虑我的申请不胜感激。
①I would be very grateful if you could consider my application.
②Should you take my application into consideration, I would be highly thankful.
③I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into account.
12.如果有什么我能帮忙的,请随时告诉我。
①If there’s anything I can do to help, please feel free to let me know.
②Should you need any help from me, don’t hesitate to let me know.
③If I can be of help with anything, please let me know whenever you want.
13.为了激发学生对英语的兴趣,将举办一场英语演讲比赛。
①An English speech contest will be organized to arouse students' interest in English.
②To stimulate students' enthusiasm for English, we will organize an English speech competition.
③We plan to hold an English speech contest with the aim of inspiring students' passion for English.
14.三岁以下孩子是否需要买票?
①How much do you charge for children under three
②Should children under three buy tickets Is there any discount
③I wonder whether the tickets are free for children under three.
15.得知贵公司招聘英语导游,我特此写信应聘该职位。
①On learning that an English guide is wanted in your company, I'm writing to take up this role.
②Informed of your company’s recruitment for an English guide, I’m writing to apply for the post.
③Having learned your company is recruiting an English guide, I’m writing to apply for this position.
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16.当我以为我把钥匙弄丢的时候,我吓死了。
①When I thought I had lost my key, a wave of fear seized me.
②At the thought of losing my key, I was so scared that my heart was thumping wildly.
③At the thought of my lost key, I was overwhelmed by a strong feeling of fear, my palms sweating.
17.我们怎么能克服这些困难呢
①How can we get rid of the difficulties
②What should we do to overcome the difficulties
③What measures should we take to overcome the difficulties
18.我成为医生的梦想终于实现了。
①At last, I have realized my dream of becoming a doctor.
②My dream of becoming a doctor has finally come true.
③I finally turned my dream of becoming a doctor into reality.
19.现在,我的家乡再也不是10年前的景象了。
①My hometown is no longer what it used to be.
②My hometown is no longer the same village as it was 10 years ago.
③Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past 10 years.
20.老师的一席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。
①Deeply touched by what the teacher said, I’m determined to learn English harder.
②What the teacher said deeply affected me, so I was determined to study English harder.
③It was the teacher’s moving words that made me determined to focus more on my English.
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21.他不仅是我们的老师,还是我们的朋友。
①He is more than our teacher. He is also our friend.
②Not only is he our teacher, but also he is our friend.
③As a teacher, he makes us feel that he is more like our friend.
22.他的成功归功于他受过良好的教育。
①His success was due to the good education he had got.
②His success resulted from the good education he had received.
③He owed his success to the good education he had received.
23.他把一生都献给了那些贫困的孩子。
①He devoted all his life to helping the needy children.
②He was devoted to helping the needy children in his whole life.
③He occupied himself in helping the needy children throughout his life.
24.海洋的味道,让我想起了童年。
①The smell of the sea called up memories of my childhood.
②Memories of my childhood were brought back by the smell of the sea.
③The memories of my childhood flooded back to my mind when I smelt the sea.
25.不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些迷茫。
①She was at a loss, wondering how to get on with her classmates.
②Not knowing how to get on with her classmates, she felt as if she were at sea.
③She didn’t know how to get along with her classmates, feeling kind of confused.
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26.她惊奇地发现几乎所有的邻居都来了。
①She was surprised to find that almost all the neighbors had come.
②To her amazement, she discovered that almost all the neighbors had arrived.
③Amazingly, she was aware that nearly all her neighbors had gathered.
27.听到这个消,息,她陷入极度的悲伤之中。
①Hearing the news, she was totally overwhelmed by grief.
②Upon hearing the news, she was plunged into profound sorrow.
③She was overcome with immense sorrow upon hearing the news.
28.凯西一看到熟悉的字迹,便热泪盈框。
①Kathy's eyes filled with tears upon seeing the familiar handwriting.
②At the sight of the familiar handwriting, tears welled up in Kathy's eyes.
③Kathy's eyes brimmed with tears as she recognized the familiar handwriting.
29.能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。
①It is a great honor to give a speech here, as a representative of all the students of our school.
②I am honored to be on behalf of all the students of our school to address a speech here.
③I feel privileged to deliver a speech here on behalf of all the students of our school.
30.我们应该采取行动来保护环境,这是至关重要的。
①It is essential for us to take steps to protect the environment.
②It is crucial that we should take actions to protect the environment.
③We ought to take measures to protect the environment, which is of great importance.
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31.良好的学习习惯有助于提高我们的学习效率。
①Excellent learning habits can help to boost our learning efficiency.
②Good learning habits contribute to improving our learning efficiency.
③Fine learning habits are helpful to enhance our learning effectiveness.
32.我们要鼓励青少年培养自己的兴趣爱好。
①We should encourage teenagers to cultivate their hobbies.
②We ought to inspire youngsters to develop their interests.
③It is necessary for us to urge adolescents to foster their hobbies.
33.我们要关注社会热点问题,增强社会责任感。
①We should pay attention to social hot issues and enhance our social responsibility.
②It is necessary for us to be concerned about social issues and boost our social responsibility.
③We ought to focus on social problems and strengthen our sense of social responsibility.
34.由于没有公共汽车,我们只好步行回家。
①There was no bus, so we had to walk home.
②As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
③There being no bus, we had to walk home.
35.他们马上动身去寻找那失踪的孩子。
①They set off to look for that missing boy at once.
②They set out to search for that missing boy immediately.
③They started out in search of that missing boy right now.
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36.你应该为你那些无礼的话向她道歉。
①You should say sorry to her for your rude words.
②You should apologize to her for your rude words.
③You should make an apology to her for your rude words.
37.在强光下读书会对你的眼睛造成伤害。
①It will harm your eyes reading in the strong light.
②Readingin the strong light will do harm to your eyes.
③Readingin the strong light will be harmful to your eyes.
38.我们要倡导绿色生活方式,减少能源消耗。
①We should advocate a green lifestyle and reduce energy consumption.
②We ought to promote a green way of life and cut down on energy consumption.
③It is necessary for us to encourage a green living pattern and decrease energy consumption.
39.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去电影院。
①I would ratherstay at home than go to the cinema.
②I prefer staying at home to going to the cinema.
③I prefer to stay at home rather than go to the cinema.
40.众所周知,台湾是中国的一部分。
①As is known to all, Taiwan belongs to China.
②It is known to us all that Taiwan belongs to China.
③It is universally acknowledged that Taiwan belongs to China.
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41.英语演讲比赛结果很成功。
①The English Speaking Contest turned out to be a success.
②The English Speaking Contest proved to be successful.
③It turned out that The English Speaking Contest was a success.
42.我发现他正坐在教室的后面。
①I found him sitting at the back of our classroom.
②I found him seated at the back of our classroom.
③I found that he was sittingat the back of our classroom.
43.穿着红色羊毛衫的那个女孩是我们班长。
①The girl in a red sweater is our monitor.
②The girl dressed in a red sweater is our monitor.
③The girl who is wearing a red sweater is our monitor.
44.你能告诉我去邮局的路吗?
①Can you show me the way tothe post office
②Can you tell me how to get tothe post office
③Can you tell me where the post office is
45.我收到你的来信有三天了。
①Your letter reached me three days ago.
②It is three days since I received your letter.
③It was three days ago that I received your letter.
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46.世界上没有什么东西能够替代母爱。
①Nothing else in the world can replace a mother’s love.
②Mother’s love cannot be substituted by anything else in the world.
③There is nothing else under the sun that can take the place of a mother’s love.
47.参加社会实践能够拓宽我们的视野。
①Participating in social practice can broaden our horizons.
②Taking part in social activities can widen our field of vision.
③Engaging in social practice is able to expand our outlook.
48.友谊是人生中最宝贵的财富之一。
①Friendship is one of the most precious treasures in life.
②Friendship is among the most valuable assets in one's life.
③Friendship ranks as one of the most priceless riches in life.
49.良好的沟通是解决问题的关键。
①Good communication is the key to solving problems.
②Effective communication is the crucial factor in resolving issues.
③Fine communication is the essential element for settling problems.
50.健康的饮食对我们的身体健康至关重要。
①A healthy diet is crucial to our physical health.
②A sound diet is essential for our physical well-being.
③A wholesome diet is of great importance to our bodily health.