英语 选择性必修 第一册 WY
Section Ⅳ Writing应用文写作——观察日记
本单元的写作任务是观察日记。观察日记是一种常见的应用文，主要是用来记录作者近日经历的事情，在此基础上，作者还要发表自己对这件事情的看法和理解，这样才能突出写观察日记的本质所在。
基本结构：
1．标题
标题可分成两类：一是注明日记的来源，如A Page from Tom's Diary/One Diary Record from Churchill；二是概括日记的内容，如The Travel to the Chinatown。标题有时可省略。
2．时间和天气情况
时间通常写在正文的左上角。它们的写作顺序必须符合英文习惯，如Tuesday, December 8th, 2024。天气情况应该写在正文的右上角。
3．正文
正文一般用第一人称。由于日记的内容涉及个人经历，所以作者会不可避免地产生一些与之相关的感情。为此，作者要擅长通过主观性的词语(组)来增添日记语言的情感性。
4．时态
在日记中，动词多用过去时态；但当表示习惯性动作、客观事实、普遍真理、名言或谚语时，可以使用一般现在时；当发表自己的感想、打算、期望或决心时，可以使用一般将来时。
1．开头常用句式
①The competition began at 2：00 pm and lasted two hours, during which time 15 well－prepared contestants delivered their speeches.
比赛于下午两点钟开始，持续了两个小时，在此期间有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表了演讲。
②We started at 8：00 am and arrived there at 9：00.
我们在上午八点出发，九点到达了那里。
③Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the tea culture.
上周，我们带领我们学校的外国学生去体验茶文化。
2．主体段落常用句式
①We set off early in the morning and it took us more than two hours to get there.
我们一大早就出发了，花了两个多小时才到达那里。
②We began our activities as soon as we got off the bus.
我们一下车就开始了活动。
③We gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.
我们在大青山脚下集合，情绪高昂地向山顶出发。
④While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently.
当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。
⑤They were so amazed at tea culture that they couldn't help taking pictures from time to time.
他们对茶文化很是惊叹，以至于时不时地忍不住拍照。
⑥In the evening, when it was about the time for leaving, we were unwilling to go, because the beautiful sea scenery deeply attracted us.
晚上，当我们即将离开的时候，我们被这里的海边美景深深吸引，不忍离去。
3．结尾常用句式
①Tired as we were, we enjoyed ourselves very much.
尽管很累，但我们玩得很开心。
②How unforgettable a day! However busy we are, we should show love for the elderly.
多么令人难忘的一天！不管多忙，我们都应该表达对老人的爱。
③From this experience, I learned that being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful, especially in examinations.
从这次经历中，我学到了细心非常重要，尤其在考试时，我们怎样细心都不为过。
观察下面四幅图，以图中小女孩为第一人称，写一篇日记。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．日记须包括所有图画的内容，可稍增加细节，使日记通顺连贯；
3．日记格式已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：希望工程 the Hope Project；零花钱 pocket money
July 3rd, Tuesday Sunny
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July 3rd, Tuesday Sunny
This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, “Now many children still can't go to school because of poverty. Can you help them？”
After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. I decided to give away my money to the rural children who were eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them. Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.
I feel very happy today because I've done a good deed.
总评 本篇范文结构紧凑，要点全面。文中运用了大量的短语，使用了三段式结构。第一段开门见山地点明捐款的原因。第二段描述了捐款的过程。第三段描写了做好事后的心情。
[亮点呈现]
(1)because of, be eager to等短语的运用，为文章增添了亮色。
(2)When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money.定语从句的运用，提升了文章的档次。
(3)Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.现在分词完成式作时间状语，显示出作者扎实的语言功底。
假设星期天你带外国朋友在我市游览，请根据图中游览顺序写一则观察日记。日记须包括图中所有内容。
活动顺序：
①友谊饭店。上午8：10出发。
②中山公园(看花展)。
③市博物馆。
④金山寺(观江景)。
⑤海鲜酒楼(the Seafood Restaurant)。
下午1：20返回原处。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节和感想，使日记连贯完整；
3．日记格式已经写好，不计入总词数。
May 5, Sunday Fine
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WELCOME UNIT
Unit 5 Revealing nature
Section Ⅳ Writing
应用文写作——观察日记
本单元的写作任务是观察日记。观察日记是一种常见的应用文，主要是用来记录作者近日经历的事情，在此基础上，作者还要发表自己对这件事情的看法和理解，这样才能突出写观察日记的本质所在。
基本结构：
1．标题
标题可分成两类：一是注明日记的来源，如A Page from Tom's Diary/One Diary Record from Churchill；二是概括日记的内容，如The Travel to the Chinatown。标题有时可省略。
2．时间和天气情况
时间通常写在正文的左上角。它们的写作顺序必须符合英文习惯，如Tuesday, December 8th, 2024。天气情况应该写在正文的右上角。
3．正文
正文一般用第一人称。由于日记的内容涉及个人经历，所以作者会不可避免地产生一些与之相关的感情。为此，作者要擅长通过主观性的词语(组)来增添日记语言的情感性。
4．时态
在日记中，动词多用过去时态；但当表示习惯性动作、客观事实、普遍真理、名言或谚语时，可以使用一般现在时；当发表自己的感想、打算、期望或决心时，可以使用一般将来时。
1．开头常用句式
①The competition began at 2：00 pm and lasted two hours, during which time 15 well－prepared contestants delivered their speeches.
比赛于下午两点钟开始，持续了两个小时，在此期间有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表了演讲。
②We started at 8：00 am and arrived there at 9：00.
我们在上午八点出发，九点到达了那里。
③Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the tea culture.
上周，我们带领我们学校的外国学生去体验茶文化。
2．主体段落常用句式
①We set off early in the morning and it took us more than two hours to get there.
我们一大早就出发了，花了两个多小时才到达那里。
②We began our activities as soon as we got off the bus.
我们一下车就开始了活动。
③We gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.
我们在大青山脚下集合，情绪高昂地向山顶出发。
④While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently.
当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。
⑤They were so amazed at tea culture that they couldn't help taking pictures from time to time.
他们对茶文化很是惊叹，以至于时不时地忍不住拍照。
⑥In the evening, when it was about the time for leaving, we were unwilling to go, because the beautiful sea scenery deeply attracted us.
晚上，当我们即将离开的时候，我们被这里的海边美景深深吸引，不忍离去。
3．结尾常用句式
①Tired as we were, we enjoyed ourselves very much.
尽管很累，但我们玩得很开心。
②How unforgettable a day! However busy we are, we should show love for the elderly.
多么令人难忘的一天！不管多忙，我们都应该表达对老人的爱。
③From this experience, I learned that being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful, especially in examinations.
从这次经历中，我学到了细心非常重要，尤其在考试时，我们怎样细心都不为过。
观察下面四幅图，以图中小女孩为第一人称，写一篇日记。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．日记须包括所有图画的内容，
可稍增加细节，使日记通顺连贯；
3．日记格式已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：希望工程 the Hope Project；
零花钱 pocket money
July 3rd, Tuesday Sunny
﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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July 3rd, Tuesday Sunny
This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, “Now many children still can't go to school because of poverty. Can you help them？”
After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. I decided to give away my money to the rural children who were eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them. Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.
I feel very happy today because I've done a good deed.
[亮点呈现]
(1)because of, be eager to等短语的运用，为文章增添了亮色。
(2)When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money.定语从句的运用，提升了文章的档次。
(3)Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.现在分词完成式作时间状语，显示出作者扎实的语言功底。
总评 本篇范文结构紧凑，要点全面。文中运用了大量的短语，使用了三段式结构。第一段开门见山地点明捐款的原因。第二段描述了捐款的过程。第三段描写了做好事后的心情。
假设星期天你带外国朋友在我市游览，请根据图中游览顺序写一则观察日记。日记须包括图中所有内容。
活动顺序：
①友谊饭店。上午8：10出发。
②中山公园(看花展)。
③市博物馆。
④金山寺(观江景)。
⑤海鲜酒楼(the Seafood Restaurant)。
下午1：20返回原处。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节和感想，使日记连贯完整；
3．日记格式已经写好，不计入总词数。
May 5, Sunday Fine
﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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灰度印刷 可临摹练习
