【单元考点培优】Module 10 Australia 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（含答案解析）

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Module 10 Australia 专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是李华，寒假到了，你打算邀请你的美国笔友Peter来北京游玩。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你打算带他去哪个地方玩，为什么选择那里，以及在那里做些什么。
提示词语：choice, a long history, climb, take photos
提示问题：1. Which place are you going to
2. Why do you choose that place
3. What can you do there
Dear Peter,
How is it going
I’m writing to invite you to visit Beijing this winter holiday.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的日记。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
假如你是李明，今天游览了世界自然奇观之黄山。黄山位于安徽省南部，每年都吸引数百万的游客来游览。清晨，你乘汽车到达黄山，那时天正在下雨。你一下车就开始登山。大约半小时后，云开始散开，雨停了，太阳也出来了。在登山过程中，你领略了云海、奇松( wondrous pines)、怪石( unique rocks)等美景。
Monday, August 13 Rainy &. Fine
Today I visited Mount Huang, one of the wonders of the natural world
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3．最近，用手机app买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富，洗净配好，预约送菜……外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。请你以A new use of the mobile phone为题，写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
A new use of the mobile phone
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4．林娜和父母正在澳大利亚悉尼旅游。今天是他们到达悉尼的第二天。他们游览了悉尼著名的城市动物园——塔龙加动物园(Taronga Zoo)。假如你是林娜，请根据下面表格中给出的提示写一篇日记，简要介绍塔龙加动物园并描述自己在园中的活动。
塔龙加动物园
历史及规模 1916年开放；拥有4000余只动物
地理位置 位于悉尼市，临近悉尼歌剧院(Sydney Opera House)
活动 1.参观了来自世界各地的动物，如大象、长颈鹿、老虎等 2.参观了澳大利亚本土动物卡拉(koala)、袋鼠及鸸鹋(emu)等 3.欣赏了动物园著名的鸟类及海狮(sea lion)表演　　
要求：1.日记必须包含表格中所给出的全部内容； 2.词数：不少于80词。
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5．假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给David发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游地。80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
北京 中国的首都，历史悠久，名胜古迹不胜枚举，如长城、故宫(the Forbidden City)、颐和园(the Summer Palace)等。夏天和秋天是来北京的最佳时节。
大连、青岛 夏季比较适宜游玩，可以在海滨冲浪。
海南 四季如春，是潜水(scuba diving)的好地方
Dear David,
From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea.
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I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
6．假如你是Helen，Sophia是你的外国好友，她准备来中国旅游，让你给她推荐一个城市。你推荐她来北京旅游。根据表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文向她介绍一下北京。
地理位置 在中国的北部(north)，是中国的首都(the capital of China)
名胜古迹(places of interest) 长城，故宫(the Palace Museum)， 天安门广场(Tiananmen Square)……
美食小吃 北京烤鸭……
写作要求：80词以上；包含表格中所有提示，并进行适当发挥。（开头已经给出不计算词数）
Dear Sophia,
Glad to get your e-mail. You told me that you wanted to visit China. Welcome to China. I think you should choose to visit Beijing.
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Yours,
Helen
7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank假期要来中国旅游，不知道选择哪个城市。请根据以下相关信息，给Frank写一封邮件，向他推荐一座城市。
注意：
1. 邮件中要包括所选城市的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a trip to China. Here is my suggestion.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．作为甘肃的一名中学生，假如你有机会为学校的英语角撰写一篇短文，向来自世界各地的朋友们介绍你的家乡。请根据以下思维导图，以 “Discover the Charm of Gansu” 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，描述甘肃的著名旅游景点及其特色，同时推荐一种当地的美食。记得让你的短文既有趣又具有吸引力，让读者对甘肃产生兴趣。
提示词：attraction 景点 treasure珍宝
要求：1. 内容包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
Discover the Charm of Gansu
Welcome to Gansu, a province full of natural beauty and historical treasures in Northwest China.
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Come and experience the wonders and flavors of Gansu, my hometown!
9．中国的长城是世界古代奇观之一，请根据以下提供的信息写一篇英语短文介绍长城。
内容包括：(1) 世界上最长的墙(六千多千米长，四至五米宽，能供四匹马或十个人并排走过)；
(2) 长城有两千多年的历史，它建于秦朝(Qin Dynasty)，成千上万的中国人为它付出了生命；
(3) 全世界闻名，每年有许多游客来参观，他们都惊叹中国人的创造力。
参考词汇：be amazed about... 对……感到惊讶
写作要求：(1) 围绕主题展开写作，包含所给出的全部信息，可适当发挥；
(2) 词数：80~100词左右；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
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10．假如你是李华，本周学校将迎来一位来自英国的交换生Tony。他发来电子邮件，想了解一些关于安阳、中文学习方法和中国节日等方面的信息。请根据以下内容提示，给Tony回封邮件。
内容提示：
1) What do you think of Anyang and the people here
2) How can he learn Chinese well
3) Which Chinese festival do you think is interesting
注意：(1) 文中不得透露个人真实信息；
(2) 不少于100个词；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your e-mail and looking forward to meeting you soon!
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．读万卷书不如行万里路，假如你是Li Ming，你的笔友Peter想来中国旅游，他想了解你暑假出游的情况，请以下面的表格为线索，写一封e-mail给Peter，描述你的北京之游。
要求：
1. 所给要点都用上，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80词以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Where Beijing
Who with parents
How train
Weather sunny, hot
Place the Great Wall, the Palace Museum (故宫), hutong
Food Beijing duck, noodles
Feeling (感受) excited, happy, tired
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to write this letter to you and let you know more about my last summer trip.
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Yours,
Li Ming
12．2025年8月14日晚，四川省文化厅和旅游厅正式向全球发布 “锦绣天府·安逸四川” 的文旅品牌标识，请基于以下图片，以Sichuan Ease为题写一篇宣传四川的文案，向世界展示四川独特的魅力。
Sichuan Ease
* Location: southwest of China * Population: over 83 million * Recommendations for __________ and __________:
*Other: …
要求：
1. 补全图中两个空格的内容，一空一词；
2. 必须包含图片所有提示信息，词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇：Leshan Giant Buddha (乐山大佛), recommend v. (推荐)。
Sichuan Ease
On the evening of August 14, 2025, Sichuan shared a new logo for tourism. It means “Sichuan Ease”. It invites
everyone to come and experience the ease of life here.
Let me tell you something about Sichuan.
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13．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友John下个月要来南平旅游。请你根据以下提示，写一封信给他，向他介绍你的家乡。词数80左右。
Basic information 1. Location (位置): north 2. Population: about 2.63 million 3. History: more than 4,000 years 4. Tourism (旅游): Mount Wuyi, ancient towns
Changes Pastroad: narrow communication: by letter… Now …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Nanping. Now let me tell you something about it.
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I feel very proud of the great changes in my hometown. I believe you will enjoy your visit here.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
14．假如你是李华，本周学校将迎来一位来自英国的交换生Tony。他发来电子邮件，想了解一些关于武汉、中文学习方法和中国节日等方面的信息。请根据以下内容提示，给Tony回封邮件。
内容提示：
What do you think of Wuhan and people here
How can he learn Chinese well
Which festival do you think is interesting
Something more about them.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出；不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your E-mail.
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I'm looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的名胜古迹很感兴趣，他计划明年暑假来中国旅游，想请你给他推荐一处你最喜欢的名胜古迹。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件：
介绍你推荐的名胜古迹(名称、位置等);
说明你推荐的理由(历史、文化价值、景色等);
给出旅游建议(最佳旅游时间、注意事项等)。
要求：
词数 80-100;
语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范;
不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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16．假如你是Helen，你暑假时认识了一个美国网友Hansel。昨天Hansel发来邮件说他最近开始学习汉语，但是他遇到了很多困难，希望你能针对他的问题给他一些建议。同时，国庆长假刚刚结束，他想了解今年你怎么过国庆节的。并且，他还希望你能介绍一个广元有趣的地方。请回一封邮件，具体内容见下表。
Problems Festival Somewhere interesting
1. 写不好汉字 2. 读不懂汉语文段 1. Time 2. Things you did 3. feeling ...
要求：
1. 作文必须包括表格中所有要点，并且有适当过渡；
2. 行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范；
3. 100词左右；
4. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和自己学校的真实名称。
参考词汇：Chinese character 汉字；National Day 国庆节；剑门关Jianmen Pass
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17．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris给你发来邮件，询问在你生活的城市里，你最喜欢的一个公园是什么样的，请你用英文描述一下给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你喜欢的这个公园有什么特点；
2．谈谈你经常在公园里边做的事情；
3．说明你喜欢它的理由。
注意：1．词数为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实的姓名及地名。
4．首句已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：peaceful (adj.平静的)，relaxed (adj.放松的)
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to tell you about my favourite park in my city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给David发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游胜地。
要点如下：
Beijing the capital of China; places of interest: the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace…
Dalian, Qingdao surf in summer
Harbin go skiing or skating in winter
写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 词数为100词左右。
Dear David,
From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea.
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I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
19．假如你是李华，读了关于廉颇与蔺相如的故事后，心绪难平，不禁联想到了最近你与挚友Tom在学习旅程中遭遇的一次小风波——Tom欲抄袭你的作业，而你坚守原则予以拒绝，却因此招致了Tom的误解与不满。现在，请你提笔给Tom写一封诚挚的信，内容包括：
（1）详细阐述你拒绝他抄袭请求的缘由；
（2）进一步探讨如何在学习上给予他有效的帮助，并提出几点切实可行的建议。
要求：
（1）必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
（3）词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’ve been thinking about what happened between us recently.
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．在科技发达的时代，人们有多种多样的学习方式，比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志，在线阅读，使用app看视频学习和在旅行中学习的方式。请你用英语写一篇文章，结合自己的经历谈谈你对在旅行中学习的看法。
写作要点：
1. What kinds of learning methods do people usually use
2. What do you think of learning while traveling
3. What’s your personal experience with this learning method
写作要求：
1.短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.短文不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going
I’m writing to invite you to visit Beijing this winter holiday.
As one of the greatest wonders in the world, the Great Wall is our first choice to have a visit. It was built in ancient times and was used to stop the enemies. It has not only a long history but also a splendid view. Just as a saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” So I will take you there when you are in Beijing.
We’re going to climb to the top and have a close look at the ancient building. And then we will have lunch on the top. At the same time, we will take some photos and enjoy nature. I’m sure we will have a good time there.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于北京游玩地点的介绍要点，包括地点、选择理由及活动，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过询问Peter的近况，引出邀请Peter寒假来北京游玩的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“选择的地点、选择理由、在那里可以做的活动”几个方面重点介绍游玩计划的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达期待Peter的回复，并表达希望他能来北京的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②as one of... 作为……之一
③be used to do sth. 被用来做某事
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑤have a close look at 仔细看看
[高分句型]
It has not only a long history but also a splendid view.（not only...but also...）
2．例文：
Monday, August 13 Rainy &. Fine
Today I visited Mount Huang, one of the wonders of the natural world. Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui Province and attracts millions of tourists every year. Early in the morning, when I arrived there by car, it was raining. As soon as I got out of the car, I began to climb the mountain. About half an hour later, the clouds suddenly began to clear and the rain stopped. The sun also rose. While I was climbing the mountain, I enjoyed the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks. I really had a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求我们以李明的身份来叙述去黄山的一次旅行，简单介绍一下黄山的风景。在题目中给出了我们具体的写作的提纲，包括黄山的地理位置，黄山的风景特色，旅游的行程等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来，注意书写时要有条理，按照时间的顺序来写。同时还有去黄山的交通工具、当时的天气情况等这些小的要点，不要遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述，且因为这里是记叙一次旅行，故本篇短文应该使用一般过去时态，所以要注意每句话中的谓语动词的形式，同时要注意语句之间的衔接，使文章表达完整、流畅。
3．例文：
A new use of the mobile phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化，要写明这种应用软件的功能及好处，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时，叙述要完整，保证条理清晰，写作中注意运用代词，多种句式交替运用，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
4．例文
Sydney is really a beautiful city. This is my second day here. I visited Taronga Zoo together with my parents today. Taronga Zoo, which is very close to the Sydney Opera House, is a city zoo. It opened in 1916 and is the home to over 4,000 animals. It is such a nice place to visit that we spent the whole day there. In the zoo we saw a lot of animals from all over the world such as elephants, giraffes and tigers. We also saw many local animals such as strong kangaroos, cute koalas and large emus. Besides, we watched the famous bird show and sea lion show in the zoo.
In a word, it was a nice day for me. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's trip to other places in Sydney.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作；要按照所给材料，介绍塔龙加动物园的历史及规模、地理位置以及参加的活动。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描述故事时，场景应描写细致；并且故事发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
5．例文：
Dear David,
From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea.As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. In Beijing there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The best time to come here is summer and autumn.
It’s fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao in summer. Besides, you can visit Hainan. It’s like spring all the year round there. And you can go scuba diving. I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封回信，信中主要是向朋友介绍中国的一些旅游地，表格中给出了北京、大连、青岛和海南这四个地方以及它们的特点，在写作时，每个城市的特点都要描述，不要遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文是一封回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出。文章主要是推荐一些中国的旅游地，用一般现在时。第一段讲述北京的特点；第二段主要介绍其他地方的特点。在写作时，要注意运用连接词以及不同的句式介绍各个城市的特点，使文章逻辑清楚，流畅自然。
6．
例文
Dear Sophia,
Glad to get your e-mail. You told me that you wanted to visit China. Welcome to China. I think you should choose to visit Beijing.
It is the capital of China and lies in the north. There are many famous places of interest here, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tiananmen Square. You can learn about Chinese history and culture by visiting them. Besides, you must try Beijing Duck. It is delicious and popular. Beijing’s subway is convenient and can take you to most scenic spots easily if you want to travel around on your own. If you come, I will show you around the city.
I’m sure you will have a wonderful time here.
Yours,
Helen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开头问候并直接表明推荐北京，简要说明其地理位置和首都地位；
第二步、详细列举北京的名胜古迹（长城、故宫、天安门广场），并补充文化价值；提到美食北京烤鸭；
第三步、表达个人邀请（带朋友游览）和美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①choose to do sth.选择做某事
②on your own独自
③show sb. around带某人四处看看
[高分句型]
If you come, I will show you around the city.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a trip to China. Here is my suggestion.
I think you should visit Beijing—it’s perfect for you! As a northern Chinese city, it has fantastic outdoor activities: climbing the winding Great Wall is super exciting (you’ll get breathtaking views along the way). For special food, you can’t miss Beijing Duck—its crispy golden skin and tender juicy meat make it a must-try. Also, Beijing has lively cultural festivals, like the Spring Festival Temple Fair, where you can watch traditional folk shows and join interesting activities.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第二、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇问候，点明写作目的——给Frank推荐中国旅行城市；
第二步，推荐北京，分别从“户外项目 (长城)”、“特色美食 (北京烤鸭)”、“文化节日 (庙会)”三个维度，对应Frank的兴趣点说明推荐理由；
第三步，结尾祝福，期待Frank拥有愉快的旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①a must-try必尝之物；必试的事物
②outdoor activities户外活动
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here! (宾语从句)
②Also, Beijing has lively cultural festivals, like the Spring Festival Temple Fair, where you can watch traditional folk shows and join interesting activities. (where引导的定语从句)
8．范文：
Discover the Charm of Gansu
Welcome to Gansu, a province full of natural beauty and historical treasures in Northwest China.
One famous attraction is the Mogao Grottoes, a real treasure of art. You can see fantastic wall paintings and wonderful Buddha statues there. Another amazing place is Crescent Lake near Mingsha Mountain. It’s a moon-shaped lake lying in the desert—so magical!
After a long journey, you must be a bit hungry. Don’t forget to try our special food: Lanzhou Beef Noodles. The noodles come in different shapes and are served with unique soup. It’s delicious and popular all over China.
Come and experience the wonders and flavors of Gansu, my hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需涵盖所有思维导图要点，语言生动有吸引力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎语引入主题；
第二步，依次介绍两处景点及其特色；
第三步，推荐当地美食并说明特点；
第四步，结尾发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①natural beauty自然美景
②historical treasures历史宝藏
③amazing place神奇的地方
④moon-shaped月牙形的
⑤special food特色美食
[高分句型]
①It’s a moon-shaped lake lying in the desert—so magical! (现在分词作定语)
②The noodles come in different shapes and are served with unique soup. (被动语态)
9．范文：
The Great Wall of China is one of the wonders of the ancient world. It is the longest wall in the world, stretching over 6,000 kilometers long and 4 to 5 meters wide. It’s wide enough for four horses or ten people to walk side by side. Built during the Qin Dynasty, it has a history of more than 2,000 years. Thousands of Chinese people gave their lives to build it. Now, it is famous all over the world. Every year, many tourists come to visit it and they are all amazed about Chinese people’s creativity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，用于介绍中国的长城；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括长城的长度、宽度、历史、建造时期以及游客对其的赞叹等，考生需确保涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“中国的长城是世界古代奇观之一”，引出下文对长城的具体介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“长城的长度、宽度、历史背景、建造过程以及游客的反应”等几个方面详细介绍长城；
第三步，书写结语。以游客对长城的赞叹作为结尾，强调长城的魅力和中国人的创造力。
[亮点词汇]
①stretch over延伸，绵延
②side by side并排
③give one’s life to do sth. 为做某事献出生命
④be famous all over the world全世界闻名
[高分句型]
①It is the longest wall in the world, stretching over 6,000 kilometers long and 4 to 5 meters wide.（现在分词作伴随状语，描述长城的长度和宽度）
②Every year, many tourists come to visit it and they are all amazed about Chinese people’s creativity.（and连接两个并列的句子，表达游客对长城的赞叹）
10．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your e-mail and looking forward to meeting you soon!
About Anyang, it’s an ancient city with a long history, like the Yin Ruins. You will see many interesting things here. People in Anyang are very friendly and warm-hearted. They are always ready to help others.
To learn Chinese well, I think speaking and listening are very important. You can practice with classmates every day. Watching Chinese movies or listening to Chinese songs can also help a lot. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes, just keep trying!
As for Chinese festivals, I think the Spring Festival is the most interesting one. It’s the most important holiday here. During this time, families get together, eat dumplings, and children get lucky money. You can see red decorations everywhere. It’s very lively and fun!
I hope this information is helpful. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask me. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表达自己对安阳及当地人的看法；
第二步，介绍学习中文的方法；
第三步，介绍自己认为有趣的中国节日；
第四步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth准备好做某事
②be afraid of害怕
③feel free to do sth随意做某事
[高分句型]
①As for Chinese festivals, I think the Spring Festival is the most interesting one. (宾语从句)
②Watching Chinese movies or listening to Chinese songs can also help a lot. (动名词短语作主语)
③If you have any other questions, feel free to ask me. (if引导条件状语从句)
11．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to write this letter to you and let you know more about my last summer trip. Let me tell you.
I went to Beijing with my parents last summer vacation. We went there by train. The weather was sunny and hot. First we went to the Great Wall. It was so great. Then we visited the Palace Museum and some other places of interest. We also went to the supermarket and bought some gifts for our friends. What’s more, we visited Beijing hutong to experience local culture deeply. In addition, we ate Beijing duck and Beijing noodles. They were so delicious that I wanted to eat them again. We felt tired, but we were very happy.
Welcome to China. I hope you can have a good time.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列内容要点，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，要介绍自己的北京之旅；
第二步，介绍在北京游玩的具体信息；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②delicious美味的
③have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①They were so delicious that I want to eat them again. (状语从句)
②I hope you can have a good time. (宾语从句)
12．travel；fun
例文：
Sichuan Ease On the evening of August 14, 2025, Sichuan shared a new logo for tourism. It means “Sichuan Ease”. It invites everyone to come and experience the ease of life here. Let me tell you something about Sichuan.
Sichuan is in the southwest of China, and it has a population of over 83 million. There are many great recommendations for travel and fun. If you like big statues, you can go to see the Leshan Giant Buddha in Leshan. It’s so huge that you’ll be amazed by it. In Zigong, you can visit the lantern fair. You can find a great variety of beautiful lanterns. And Chengdu is also a nice place because you can feel relaxed there and enjoy delicious food too.
Welcome to Sichuan.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：材料所给图片和提示信息内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主旨——介绍四川；
第二步，详细介绍四川值得体验旅行和玩乐的地方；
第三步，总结全文，欢迎来四川。
[亮点词汇]
①great recommendations for travel and fun值得旅游和玩乐的推荐
②so...that...如此……以至于……
③a great variety of各种各样的
④enjoy delicious food享受美食
[高分句型]
①If you like big statues, you can go to see the Leshan Giant Buddha in Leshan. (if引导条件状语从句)
②And Chengdu is also a nice place because you can feel relaxed there and enjoy delicious food too. (because引导原因状语从句)
13．例文:
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Nanping. Now let me tell you something about it.
Nanping is located in the north of Fujian Province. It has a population of about 2.63 million and a history of more than 4,000 years. There are many famous tourist attractions here, such as Mount Wuyi and ancient towns. You can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery.
Great changes have taken place in Nanping. In the past, the roads were narrow and people mainly communicated by letter. But now, the roads are wide and smooth, and people can communicate with each other easily by phone or the Internet.
I feel very proud of the great changes in my hometown. I believe you will enjoy your visit here.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，特别注意不要遗漏表格中需自行补充的内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“向对方介绍南平的相关信息”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从地理位置、人口数量、悠久的历史、旅游景点四个方面介绍南平的基本信息，从道路、交通两个方面介绍南平的变化；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对家乡变化的感受并祝愿对方在南平过得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①have a population of有……人口
②more than超过
③such as例如
④in the past在过去
⑤communicate with each other相互交流
[高分句型]
There are many famous tourist attractions here, such as Mount Wuyi and ancient towns. (there be句型)
14．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your E-mail. Wuhan is a beautiful city with a long history. The people here are very friendly. I think watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn Chinese. You can also make some Chinese friends. They can help you learn Chinese. There are many interesting festivals in China. I think the Mid-Autumn Festival is very interesting. We can eat delicious moon cakes. The Dragon Boat Festival is also interesting. We can eat Zongzi and watch the dragon boat race. I hope you can experience these festivals in Wuhan.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：材料所给内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主旨，提出向对方介绍武汉；
第二步，详细介绍武汉、学习汉语的方法以及中国的节日；
第三步，总结全文，期待见到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①with a long history有悠久历史
②good ways to learn Chinese学汉语的好方法
③make some Chinese friends交一些中国朋友
④looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I hope you can experience these festivals in Wuhan. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
②I think watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn Chinese. (动名词作主语)
15．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m really excited to know you’ll visit China next summer! I’d like to recommend the Great Wall in Beijing—it’s my favorite historic site. Stretching over 21,000 kilometers, it’s a world-famous wonder with a history of over 2,000 years, built to protect ancient China and to show amazing ancient Chinese wisdom.
July is good for visiting, as the summer sun makes the mountain views clear, but do take a hat to avoid sunburn. Wear comfy shoes (you’ll walk a lot on the steps) and book tickets online ahead—there are always many visitors. Also, don’t litter to keep this treasure clean. Hope you love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文（电子邮件）；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般将来时”为辅。
③提示：需紧扣“介绍名胜基本信息、说明推荐理由、给出旅游建议”三大核心要点；语言要简洁自然，符合邮件的友好语气；控制词数在80-100之间，避免冗余，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇问候并点明主题，表达对笔友来访的期待，直接推荐所选名胜古迹。
第二步，介绍其位置、历史或文化价值，再补充景色亮点，阐述推荐理由；接着给出具体旅游建议，包括最佳时间和注意事项。
第三步，表达对笔友旅途愉快的祝愿，呼应开篇的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①historic site名胜古迹
②world-famous wonder世界著名奇观
③cultural heritage文化遗产
④ancient wisdom古代智慧
⑤stunning scenery迷人景色
⑥ideal time最佳时间
⑦book tickets ahead提前订票
⑧avoid sunburn避免晒伤
⑨keep clean保持整洁
[高分句型]
①Stretching over 21,000 kilometers, it’s a world-famous wonder with a history of over 2,000 years, built to protect ancient China and to show amazing ancient Chinese wisdom.（现在分词作状语）
②July is good for visiting, as the summer sun makes the mountain views clear, but do take a hat to avoid sunburn. （as引导原因状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear Hansel,
I’m glad to give you some advice on learning Chinese. Learning Chinese, just like learning any other foreign language, is hard work. Use Chinese whenever you can. Writing skills are so important that you should practice writing Chinese characters every day. And you’d better watch Chinese films and TV programs, which can help you understand Chinese well.
During the National Day holiday, I went hiking at a nearby mountain and attended a family reunion party. It was interesting and made me feel grateful for family time.
I strongly recommend you go to the Jianmen Pass in Guangyuan. There you can appreciate the ancient buildings and enjoy the local delicious food near the town. Hope this helps!
Yours,
Helen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意，表格提示中的内容要一一阐述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，针对汉语学习给出建议；
第二步：阐述国庆节的活动和感受；
第三步：推荐有趣的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①practice doing sth.练习做某事
②any other其他任何
③go hiking去远足
[高分句型]
①Writing skills are so important that you should practice writing Chinese characters every day. (so...that..引导的结果状语从句)
②Learning Chinese, just like learning any other foreign language, is hard work. (动名词作主语)
17．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to tell you about my favourite park in my city.
It’s a park near my home. The park is very beautiful with many trees and flowers. There is also a small lake in it. I go to the park at least once a week. I take a walk and run around the lake with my parents. Sometimes I play sports there with my friends to keep healthy. What I like most is bringing a book to read under the tree. I like the park very much because I can enjoy the fresh air and peaceful environment there. Besides, I feel relaxed each time I go there. I hope you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件回复；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据题干要求描述公园特点、活动及喜欢理由，注意词数限制（80词左右），避免真实姓名和地名。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题；
第二步：描述公园特点和常做的活动；
第三步：总结喜欢该公园的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②Besides而且
③fresh air 新鲜空气
[高分句型]
①What I like most is bringing a book to read under the tree.（what引导主语从句）
②I feel relaxed each time I go there.（each time引导时间状语从句）
18．One possible version:
Dear David,
From your email I know you want to go to China. That’s a good idea.
As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. In Beijing there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The best time to come here is summer and autumn. It’s fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao in summer. Besides, you can visit Harbin in winter. It’s a world of ice and snow. It’s a great place to go skiing or skating. You can also visit the Ice and Snow World that is famous around the world. I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：围绕大卫想去中国的想法，介绍中国的旅游相关情况，包含北京的历史与名胜、适合旅游的季节、其他城市的特色活动等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明知晓大卫想去中国的想法，并对此表示肯定；
第二步，先介绍中国首都北京，包括其悠久历史和众多名胜古迹，如长城、故宫、颐和园，再说明来北京的最佳时间为夏季和秋季；
第三步，介绍中国其他城市的旅游特色，如夏季在大连或青岛冲浪，冬季在哈尔滨感受冰雪世界、滑雪滑冰以及参观闻名世界的冰雪大世界；
第四步，结尾表达希望大卫尽快来中国并祝其玩得愉快的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②the best time最佳时间
③go surfing去冲浪
④enjoy yourself玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①It’s a great place to go skiing or skating. (动词不定式作后置定语)
19．例文
Dear Tom,
I’ve been thinking about what happened between us recently. I refused to let you copy my homework, not because I didn’t trust you, but because I believe it’s important for us to earn our achievements honestly. Copying means missing out on learning and growing, which is more valuable than any grade.
To support you better, I’m happy to study together. Let’s make a schedule to review challenging topics together, and you can take the lead in the areas you’re confident about. I’m sure that by helping each other, we can both improve and achieve fantastic results.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：书信作文
时态：“一般现在时为主”（说明观点、提出建议），“现在完成时”（开头句）
提示：需包含拒绝抄袭的原因及具体帮助建议，词数80-100
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头承接已给句子，直接说明拒绝抄袭的原因（诚信、真实学习的重要性）；
第二步：提出具体帮助方式（一起学习、讲解难题、分享方法），并用谚语强化说服力；
第三步：结尾表达对友谊的珍视，呼应廉颇蔺相如故事中的和解精神。
[亮点词汇]
① honest work诚实的工作
② progress in the long run长期的进步
③ practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
① Copying may bring short-term benefits, but it harms your progress in the long run.（运用了but连接的并列句）
② We can study together after class, and I will explain difficult problems to you.（运用了and连接的并列句）
20．例文
Nowadays, there are many ways of studying. Some people learn by reading books, newspapers or magazines. Some are studying online or watching videos on apps. However, there is a different way: Learning while traveling.
In my eyes, it is really interesting and fun. On the one hand, we students now just study in the classroom day by day, tired and bored. On the other hand, we cannot learn everything from the textbook.
Last summer, I had a trip to Jinggang Mountain. While climbing, I experienced the difficulties the revolutionary martyrs had faced. I learned a lot from the trip.
I think this is the best way to learn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：需包含人们常用的学习方式、对旅行中学习的看法及个人旅行学习经历等信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数不少于80词，开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题，说明如今有多种学习方式，引出旅行中学习这一方式；
第二步：阐述对旅行中学习的看法（有趣且有意义，能弥补课堂和书本学习的不足）；
第三步：分享个人旅行学习的经历（去井冈山旅行，体会革命先烈的艰辛并学到知识）。
[亮点词汇]
①online reading在线阅读
②learning while traveling旅行中学习
③revolutionary martyrs革命先烈
[高分句型]
①Some people learn by reading books, newspapers or magazines. Some are studying online or watching videos on apps. (说明人们常用的学习方式，对比引出话题)
②In my eyes, it is really interesting and fun. On the one hand ... On the other hand ... (分点阐述旅行学习的优势)
③Last summer, I had a trip to Jinggang Mountain. While climbing, I experienced the difficulties the revolutionary martyrs had faced. (while引导时间状语从句，说明旅行中的学习经历)
④I think this is the best way to learn. (宾语从句总结对旅行学习的认可)
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