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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 11 Photos 专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Write a letter of at least 60 words to the Helping Hands Club. （假设你是九3班的李华，学校的“爱心俱乐部”正在吸收新会员，你想加入该俱乐部。请根据下方表格和图示信息，用英语写一封自荐信。词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格。信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）
本人特点 身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学相处友好
平时表现 （至少写两幅图片中的内容）
加入目的 ……（写出两点）
Dear Helping Hands Club,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．你校英语网站正在就成立学校体育社团征集意见，请你根据要求写一篇短文，分享你的看法。要点如下：
(1)社团的必要性；(2)社团常规活动；(3)你的期待之情。
注意：
(1)词数为80~100；
(2)可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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3．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (请根据所给情景写一封不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
你校近期开设了三个英语项目化学习小组 (Project-based Study Group)，分别是“Science Exploration (科学探索)”“Cultural Discovery (文化发现)”“Mystery Reading (悬疑阅读)”小组，现面向全体学生招新。假设你是李华，得知此事后，决定给小组负责人Ms. Green写一封邮件，申请加入其中一个小组。请在邮件中说明你选择该小组的原因、自身具备的相关优势，并为小组未来的活动提出一条具体建议。
注意：照抄试卷中内容不得分。短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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4．假设你是李华，你校正在筹备校园文化节，学生会打算举办一个以“Dream Museum”为主题的设计活动，向全校同学征集创意。请用英语给学生会写一封邮件，介绍你设计的博物馆，并简要说明它会给同学们带来哪些好处。
提示词语：creative, display, learn, culture, experience
提示问题：● What is your dream museum like
● How can students benefit from your idea
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
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I hope my dream will come true.
5．假如你叫李华，是学校英语俱乐部的负责人。最近，你校英语俱乐部将举行一个“英语之夜 (English Evening) ”活动，请根据下面的内容，写一个英语通知。
1. 活动目的：提高英语听力和口语能力；
2. 活动内容：看英文电影，唱英语歌等；
3. 活动时间：星期五晚上7:00—9:00；
4. 活动地点：教室206室。
要求：信息表述完整，要点齐全；不少于40词。
Notice
Dear students,
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The English Club
6．假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团组织的社会实践活动 (Social Practical Program)，请在下表中选择1项或2项你喜欢的活动，给负责老师 Ms. Smith写封信，说明你的选择理由和行动计划，以供社团统计筛选。
Social Practical Program
□help animals in danger □volunteer at an old people’s home
□recycle useful and old things □be a guide in the museum
□……
要点提示：
(1) What social practical program do you choose (可选择一或两项活动)
(2) Why do you choose the program (s)
(3) What do you plan to do in the program (s)
写作要求：
(1) 短文内容应包括要点提示中所有信息，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
(2) 语句通顺，语法正确，80词左右。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
Dear Ms. Smith,
I’m interested in taking part in the Social Practical Program of our English club. I’d like to
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．Write an email of at least 60 words according to the situation given. (根据所给情境，写一封不少于60个词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格)
You are planning a reading club online, so you decide to invite a friend of yours to join you by email. (你正在筹备一个在线阅读社团，你决定通过电子邮件邀请一个朋友加入。)
In your email, you need to…
introduce your plan of the reading club.
talk about what kind of books you are going to read.
give the reason(s) why you want to run the club.
(注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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8．校园社团活动是校园生活的重要组成部分。假设你是李华，本学期参与了学校的两个社团，你的英国好友Alice很想了解相关情况。请你结合表格中的信息，给Alice写一封电子邮件，选取其中一个社团，介绍该社团的活动内容以及你参与其中的心得体会。
School Clubs Activities Feelings
Bird-watching Club 1. watch birds every Saturday morning; 2. collect information about birds in danger; 3. … …
Vegetable-planting Club 1. study plants and know about farming; 2. record the growth of vegetables; 3. … …
注意：
1. 邮件需包含所选社团的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右；邮件的首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是学生会主席李华。请为校英文报写一则招新启事，欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团，启事内容包括：
1.介绍社团的活动；
2.参加社团的好处；
3.加入社团的方式.
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Our English Club
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English club!
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English Club
10．假如你是李华。你校外教Ms. Green即将离开中国，返回英国。你校英语社团准备赠送给Ms. Green一件旗袍作为礼物，以表达对她的感谢及美好祝愿。请根据英语社团的要求，用英语写一封信，向社团投稿。
IDEAS NEEDEDOur foreign teacher Ms. Green will go back to the UK next month. Our English Club is planning to design a qipao (旗袍) for Ms. Green as a gift. We would like you to design the colors of qipao according to Ms. Green’s personality. Please describe Ms. Green’s personality in detail, design the colors of the qipao and provide at least two reasons why you think it would be a good choice.
注意：
1.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3.词数80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m sorry to hear that Ms. Green is leaving China next month. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
11．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是李华，你的作品在“The Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖，你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。请你介绍一下你拍这张照片的时间、地点、内容，以及你选这张照片的原因。
提示词语：park, flowers and trees, lively, environment
提示问题：1. When and where did you take this photo
2. What is in the photo
3. Why did you choose this photo for the photo competition
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12．Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club，从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英文短文。
In the past Now
性格 害羞、安静、容易变得紧张，与陌生人，脸变红…… 勇敢、外向……
爱好 阅读 阅读、唱歌、旅游…… (一次旅游经历：去年，北京，礼物，家人，衬衫，为自己，棉制的，上海制造的)
能力 —— 擅长跳舞、唱歌、写作……
要求：
1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；
2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly. Mary used to be
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Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
13．假如你是Daniel，你们学校正在招聘新的学生会主席，请你阅读以下招聘公告，并根据内容给校长写一封信，推荐你的好友Sandy。
Dear classmates:
We are looking for a chairperson of our Students’ Union. We want to know:
1. Who you’d like to recommend (name, age, hobbies );
2. What good qualities he/ she has for this position (please give us three of his/ her good qualities and examples);
3. Which two colours he/ she likes best and tell us the reasons.
Please write to us at Sunshineschool@. We are expecting your reply!
注意:
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容必须包括要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
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I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
14．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Tom很喜欢音乐，特别是对你们学校的音乐社团活动 (music club activities) 很感兴趣，请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，并说说听音乐对中学生的好处。写作要点：
1. 很高兴他对学校的音乐社团活动感兴趣；
2. 介绍一下学校的音乐社团活动；
3. 说说听音乐对中学生的好处。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Tom,
How are you
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
15．百川汇海可撼天，众志成城比金坚。假如你是英语社团的成员李华，下周英语社团的口语交流主题是“A Teamwork Experience”，请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，和大家分享你的经历。
写作要求:
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.词数不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇:
solution解决方法；deepen加深
Hello, everyone! I’d like to share a teamwork experience.
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That’s all. Thank you.
16．我校为弘扬中国传统文化，丰富同学们的课余生活，开设了一系列的中国传统文化社团。假设你是李华，请你根据下面的传统文化课程时间表及写作要点，选择2-3个社团，向同学们推荐社团课程。
Monday Wednesday Friday
5 p.m.-6 p.m. Paper cutting Club 4 p.m.-5 p.m. Clay Art Club 5 p.m.-6 p.m. Chinese Painting Club
要点：1) What clubs do you recommend (推荐)
2) Why do you choose to recommend them
要求：1) 文中须包含要点提示，可适当发挥；
2) 不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3) 词数100左右。
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17．假设你是张华，交换生Peter下个月将来你校学习，他想通过加入学校社团了解中国文化。请你根据以下信息，写一封邮件，向他推荐一个合适的社团。
I am interested in Chinese culture. I like drinking tea. I love reading Chinese folk stories.
Tea Club Place: Tearoom in the school Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday ● Activity: learn about the invention of tea; enjoy tea performance; … Story Telling Club Place: Room 304 Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday Activity: learn about Chinese folk stories; get to know some traditional Chinese festivals; ...
注意：
1. 短文需包含所选社团的所有相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
18．假如你是李华，你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访，届时举办一次“漫步中轴线”（Walking along the Beijing Central Axis）主题研学活动（study tour）。活动可以包括漫步永定门公园，参观钟鼓楼、什刹海及周边的胡同，了解中轴文化带的历史，欣赏自然景色和传统建筑等。请你给英语社团公众号留言，推荐一些活动景点并说明理由。
提示词语：Drum and Bell Towers, the Palace Museum, watch Beijing Opera, learn about history, culture
提示问题： What places do you suggest for the activity
Why do you suggest going there
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
19．学校英语校刊 Kids Post正在举办以“My favourite art club”为主题的征文活动。请按照活动要求用英文撰写一篇征文稿。
My favourite art clubWhere art meets beauty, life shines. There are three popular art clubs in our school. Which club are you in and why do you choose it What activity impressed you most Share your advice with new members (at least TWO tips).The closing date: 10 February, 2025 Your article should be sent to kidspost@.
Music ClubSinging competition ... Painting ClubOutdoor drawing ... Drama ClubSchool play ...
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，已给出的文章开头不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
My favourite art club
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20．假如你是第一中学的李雷，你的学校组织了丰富多彩的俱乐部活动。Eric是你们学校的一名来自英国的交换生。他向你询问有关学校俱乐部的情况。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封电子邮件，并祝他能够入选他感兴趣的俱乐部。
俱乐部的种类 足球俱乐部、手工俱乐部、音乐俱乐部……
俱乐部的活动 足球俱乐部：参加训练、比赛 手工俱乐部：制作手工艺品， 如陶艺 ……
参加俱乐部能给他带来的帮助 提升技能 ……
参考词汇：handicraft (n. 手工，手工艺品)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 字数100词左右。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Lei
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Helping Hands Club,
I am a student from Class 3, Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.
I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their studies. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always offer my seat to people who need help. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park.
If I join the club, I can do more for others. Besides, I will be able to make more friends.
I will be glad if I am accepted. I am waiting for your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格提示及图片内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，表达想要成为俱乐部的一员；
第二步，介绍自己的特点及平时的表现；
第三步，介绍自己加入俱乐部的目的；
第四步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和……相处得好
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①On the bus, I always offer my seat to people who need help. (who引导定语从句)
②If I join the club, I can do more for others. (if引导条件状语从句)
2．
例文
Our school plans to set up a sports club, which I think is necessary. First, it can help students relax after studying and improve their health. Second, we can make more friends through sports.
The club could organize activities like basketball matches, morning runs, and yoga classes. These activities would be fun and good for everyone. We can also hold monthly “sports challenges” to keep the excitement going.
I really look forward to joining the club. I hope it will start soon and become an important part of our school life. It will surely make our campus days more lively and memorable.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时；
③提示：需包含必要性、常规活动、期待之情三部分。
【写作步骤】第一步：开篇点题，说明成立体育社团的必要性。
第二步：具体描述社团可开展的常规活动，注意活动多样性。
第三步：表达个人期待之情，简要说明希望社团带来的积极影响。
【亮点词汇】① improve提升
② organize组织
③ look forward to期待
【高分句型】① Our school plans to set up a sports club, which I think is necessary.（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
3．
例文：
Dear Ms. Green,
I am Li Hua, a student from our school. I am writing to apply for the “Science Exploration” group. I choose it because I am very interested in science experiments. I often watch science programs and read books about technology. I think I can share useful ideas with the group. Also, I suggest we visit a science museum to do hands-on activities. I believe it will be fun and helpful.
Please consider my application. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕申请学校“科学探索”小组展开，包含申请理由、个人相关兴趣与能力以及活动建议等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇自我介绍，并直接点明目的；
第二步，详细说明申请该小组的原因及自身具备的相关优势；
第三步，提出建议，恳请对方考虑自己的申请并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②science exploration科学探索
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④hands-on activities实践活动
[高分句型]
①I choose it because I am very interested in science experiments. (because引导的原因状语从句)
4．
例文：
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My dream museum is called the “Museum of Future Life”. It will use creative technology like VR to display future inventions and global cultures. Students can learn about science and experience different traditions here. This museum will help everyone understand the world better and inspire new ideas.
I hope my dream will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件;
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于设计的博物馆的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍自己设计的博物馆”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“博物馆名字、使用技术、展示内容、带来的好处”几个方面重点介绍自己设计的博物馆的具体情况;
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望梦想成真”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①creative technology 创新技术
②display 展示
③learn about 了解
④inspire new ideas 激发新想法
[高分句型]
①It will use creative technology like VR to display future inventions and global cultures.（动词不定式作目的状语）
5．
NoticeDear students,
We are going to hold an English Evening. The main aim is to help you improve your English listening and speaking skills.
The activity will have two parts: watching interesting English movies and singing English songs. It will start at 7:00 PM and end at 9:00 PM this Friday evening, and it will be in Classroom 206.
All students are welcome to come and join us!
The English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，需涵盖活动目的、活动内容、活动时间和地点以及参与对象等信息，要确保不遗漏任何关键细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头直接点明活动主题——举办英语晚会；
第二步：详细介绍活动目的、具体内容、时间地点等关键信息；
第三步：结尾发出邀请，欢迎所有学生参加。
[亮点词汇]
①English Evening英语晚会
②improve your English listening and speaking skills提高你的英语听说能力
③watching interesting English movies观看有趣的英文电影
④singing English songs唱英文歌
⑤welcome to come and join us欢迎前来加入我们
[高分句型]
①The main aim is to help you improve your English listening and speaking skills. (不定式作表语，明确活动目的)
②The activity will have two parts: watching interesting English movies and singing English songs. (冒号用于引出具体活动内容，清晰明了)
6．例文
Dear Ms. Smith,
I’m interested in taking part in the Social Practical Program of our English club. I’d like to volunteer at an old people’s home.
Last summer, I went to an old people’s home. I learned that the old people there were very happy to see volunteers. They needed love and care.
As a volunteer, I will help the old people clean their rooms. Besides, I will chat with them. What’s more, I will care about their worries and unhappiness, so that they can live more easily. Most importantly, I will share my volunteer experiences with my classmates and call on them to care for the elderly around us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信;
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“对参加英语社团组织的社会实践活动感兴趣”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“选择的活动、选择的原因、行动计划”几个方面重点介绍具体情况;
第三步，书写结语。表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②care about关心
③what’s more另外
④call on呼吁
[高分句型]
①I learned that the old people there were very happy to see volunteers.（宾语从句）
②What’s more, I will care about their worries and unhappiness, so that they can live more easily.（目的状语从句）
7．
例文
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to invite you to join our new online reading club. We plan to read exciting books like adventure stories and science fiction every Friday evening. I want to start this club because reading together online is fun and helps us learn from each other.
If you are interested, please reply to me by this Friday. I believe we will have a wonderful time!
Yours,
June
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先介绍在线阅读社团的计划，如活动时间。
第二步：再根据提示内容描述打算阅读的书籍种类以及创办社团的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to 计划
②every Friday evening 每周五晚上
③learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
①We plan to read exciting books like adventure stories and science fiction. (使用like举例说明书籍种类)
②I want to start this club because reading together online is fun and helps us learn from each other. (because引导原因状语从句)
8．例文
Dear Alice,
How is everything going
I’d like to tell you about the Bird-watching Club I joined. We watch birds every Saturday morning in the park near our school. It’s amazing to see different kinds of birds there. We also collect information about birds in danger and try to find ways to help them. Through these activities, I’ve learned a lot about bird life and realized how important it is to protect them.
What about your school clubs Do tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，结合“现在完成时”；
③提示：向英国好友Alice介绍自己参与的校园社团（观鸟社团）的活动内容及心得体会。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头问候好友，引出介绍社团的主题。
第二步，中间介绍所选社团（观鸟社团）的活动内容，如每周六上午观鸟、收集濒危鸟类信息等，并阐述参与其中的心得体会。
第三步，结尾询问好友的学校社团情况，推动交流。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing 令人惊奇的
②collect 收集
③danger 危险
④protect 保护
[高分句型]
①We watch birds every Saturday morning in the park near our school.（简单句清晰描述社团常规活动，表达自然。）
②Through these activities, I’ve learned a lot about bird life and realized how important it is to protect them.（运用现在完成时总结收获，“how”引导的宾语从句强调保护鸟类的重要性，增强表达力度。）
9．例文：
Welcome to our English club!
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English club! Our club holds various activities, such as English corner, speech contests and movie nights. By joining us, you will benefit a great deal from different kinds of activities. You can not only improve your English skills but also make new friends. It is a wonderful place to practice and learn.
If you are interested, please sign up at the student union office before next Friday. For more information, feel free to contact us.
English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为启事。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中学校英语社团的招新启事的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请为校英文报写一则招新启事，欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团”来引出中重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“社团活动介绍、参加好处、加入方式等”几个方面重点介绍学校英语社团的招新启事的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，最后落款发布启事的组织。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如；
②by doing sth通过做某事；
③sign up报名；
④feel free to do sth随便做某事。
[高分句型]
①It is a wonderful place to practice and learn. (动词不定式作定语)
②If you are interested, please sign up at the student union office before next Friday. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m sorry to hear that Ms. Green is leaving China next month. I think a qipao in light blue and white is perfect.
Ms. Green is kind and patient. She always helps us with English problems patiently. Light blue stands for kindness and calm, which matches her gentle personality so well. She’s also wise and deeply loves different cultures—white represents purity and wisdom, fully showing our respect for her.
Last but not least, every time she wears this qipao, it will surely remind her of the happy time in China.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需注意书信格式规范、内容连贯与情感表达。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表达对Ms. Green即将离开的不舍，引出主题，提出礼物建议——浅蓝与白色相间的旗袍；
第二步：描述Ms. Green的性格特点，分析颜色象征意义，将颜色与人物特质、文化寓意紧密结合；
第三步：书写结语，表达礼物的情感意义，呼应开头，强化祝福与留念之情。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for象征
②match her personality与她的个性相配
③remind her of让她想起……
④show our respect表达我们的敬意
[高分句型]
①Light blue stands for kindness and calm, which matches her gentle personality so well.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②...white represents purity and wisdom, fully showing our respect for her.（现在分词做状语，表伴随）
11．例文
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to share some exciting news with you today.
Recently, my photograph won first prize in “The Beauty of Nature” photo exhibition. The picture was taken in a quiet park in our city early on a sunny morning in May. It shows the bright colors of flowers and green grass. If you look closely, you can find several birds jumping around in the grass, adding to the lively scene.
I chose this special photo for the exhibition because it shows the natural beauty that surrounds us every day. It reminds me of the importance of protecting our environment and appreciating the small wonders of nature. I hope this inspires all of us to value and protect our Earth.
That’s all for now! Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，介绍拍照的时间和地点；
第二步、介绍拍照的内容；
第三步、介绍自己选这张照片的原因，如：自然之美和环保意义，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①add to添加到；增加
②remind sb. of sth.使某人想起某事
③inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I chose this special photo for the competition because it shows the natural beauty that surrounds us every day.(because引导原因状语从句；that引导定语从句)
12．例文：
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly. Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She got nervous easily, especially when talking to strangers, and her face would turn red. Her only hobby was reading, because she felt more comfortable in the world of books.
However, after joining the Buddy Club, Mary changed a lot. Now she is brave and outgoing. She not only still loves reading but also develops new hobbies like singing and traveling. Last year, she went to Beijing. She bought gifts for her family there. She also bought a cotton shirt made in Shanghai for herself.
Moreover, she is good at dancing, singing and writing. She often takes part in various school activities and has made many friends.
Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本题是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍Mary过去的性格、爱好和能力；
第二步：介绍Mary在参加Buddy Club之后的性格、爱好和能力；
第三步：最后表达自己的观点（结尾已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②more comfortable更舒适的
③good at擅长
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Her only hobby was reading, because she felt more comfortable in the world of books.(because引导原因状语从句)
②She not only still loves reading but also develops new hobbies like singing and traveling.(not only...but also...连接两个并列成分)
13．例文：
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. Her name is Sandy. She is 15 years old. She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books.
I think she has many strong qualities for this position. Sandy is creative. She often comes up with good ideas. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for our class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do.
She loves yellow. She thinks yellow is the colour of wisdom. It can cheer her up when she hopes for success. She also likes blue because it brings peace to her mind and body.
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“被推荐人的基本信息和爱好”、“被推荐人的三个良好的品质”以及“被推荐人喜欢的颜色及原因”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
③comes up with提出
④cheer sb up使某人高兴起来
[高分句型]
①She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I think she has many strong qualities for this position. (省略that的宾语从句)
③She never forgets the things she needs to do. (定语从句)
④It can cheer her up when she hopes for success. (when引导的时间状语从句)
14．例文：
Dear Tom,
How are you I’m thrilled to know you’re interested in our school’s music club activities! Let me tell you more about them.
Our club meets every Friday afternoon. Members practice singing, playing instruments like guitars and pianos, or even creating original music. We also host small concerts every term, where everyone performs confidently. Last month, we shared traditional Chinese songs with exchange students—it was amazing!
Listening to music helps us middle schoolers relax after busy days and boosts creativity. It even improves focus during study breaks! Plus, making music together teaches teamwork and builds friendships.
I hope you’ll visit our club someday!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封回信，属于应用文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需涵盖三个写作要点：表达高兴、介绍社团活动、阐述听音乐的好处。需注意语言得体、信息连贯，并适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并直接回应对方兴趣，表达高兴之情。
第二步：具体介绍音乐社团的活动内容（时间、形式、特色活动等），并阐述听音乐对中学生的好处。
第三步：书写结语。表达欢迎并致以祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②share…with…和……分享……
③boost creativity激发创造力
[高分句型]
①We also host small concerts every term, where everyone performs confidently. (where引导定语从句)
②Listening to music helps us middle schoolers relax after busy days and boosts creativity. (动名词短语作主语)
15．例文:
Hello, everyone! I’d like to share a teamwork experience. Last month, we were divided into groups for a project on global warming. My team worked together to collect information and prepare our report, with each member responsible for different parts. I focused on the influence of global warming, while the others explored solutions. Everyone gave ideas to make the project perfect, which made it a great success.
This experience deepened my understanding of the power of teamwork. Working together, we could overcome difficulties, as each member played a role in our success. Moreover, we supported and encouraged one another, making us stronger as a whole.
As the saying goes, many hands make light work. Working well as a team is the key to success. Let’s value every opportunity to work together and grow as a team.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“经历的事件”以及“感受”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②divide into分成
③focus on集中于
[高分句型]
①Everyone gave ideas to make the project perfect, which made it a great success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Working together, we could overcome difficulties, as each member played a role in our success. (as引导原因状语从句)
16．例文
Dear fellow students,
I am honored to be chosen as the “Recommendation Office” for our school’s traditional culture clubs. Today, I would like to recommend two clubs that I believe will enrich your understanding of Chinese culture and enhance your skills.
Firstly, I recommend the Paper-cutting Club, which meets on Mondays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art form that requires precision and patience. By joining this club, you will not only learn the techniques of paper-cutting but also appreciate the beauty and depth of this art. It is a great way to improve your fine motor skills and attention to detail. Secondly, I suggest joining the Chinese Painting Cub, which is held on Fridays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. Chinese painting, or “guo hua”, is a unique and elegant art form that has been practiced for centuries. In this club, you will learn about the different styles of Chinese painting, such as landscape painting, flower-and-bird painting, and figure painting. You will also have the opportunity to practice using the brush and ink, which will help you to develop your artistic skills and appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.
In conclusion, I highly recommend the Paper-cutting Club and the Chinese Painting Club. These clubs will not only provide you with a fun and engaging way to spend your afternoons but also give you a deeper understanding and appreciation of Chinese culture. I hope you will consider joining one or both of these clubs and enjoy yourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己要推荐两个社团；
第二步，介绍剪纸社团和国画社团的详细信息及推荐的原因；
第三步，写出总结，并希望同学们加入这两个社团。
[亮点词汇]
①enhance your skills提高你的技能
②appreciate the beauty and depth of欣赏……的美和深度
③develop your artistic skills发展你的艺术技能
④In conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Today, I would like to recommend two clubs that I believe will enrich your understanding of Chinese culture and enhance your skills. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, I recommend the Paper-cutting Club, which meets on Mondays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
17．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. If you are interested in Chinese culture, I think the Tea Club is a better choice.
This club meets every Wednesday from 3:00 to 4:00 p.m. in the tearoom. Here, you can learn about the origin of Chinese tea and how it spread around the world. This will deepen your understanding of Chinese traditions. You can also enjoy tea performance and taste different kinds of Chinese tea. I believe you will fall in love with their flavors.
I believe joining the Tea Club will not only meet your interest in tea but also help you better understand Chinese culture. It’s a great chance to make new friends and have fun while learning.
I’m looking forward to seeing you! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括中文和英文提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇直接表明得知对方要来学校学习以及正在考虑选择社团的事情，引出推荐的社团；
第二步，介绍推荐的社团情况；
第三步，强调加入社团的好处和推荐的理由；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①feel free to do sth. 随意做某事
②look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①If you are interested in Chinese culture, I think the Tea Club is a better choice. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I believe you will fall in love with their flavors. (宾语从句)
18．P0ossible versions:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. For the activity, I suggest visiting the Drum and Bell Towers, Shichahai, and nearby Hutongs. These places show Beijing’s rich history and traditional culture. Students can enjoy scenic views, learn about the Central Axis, and explore the local lifestyle. Watching Beijing Opera could add a cultural highlight to the tour.
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息、你建议举办什么交流活动，引出下文；（开头已给出）
第二步，具体介绍参观景点并说明理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望方案能被考虑。（结尾已给出）
[亮点词汇]
①suggest doing sth.建议做某事
②traditional culture传统文化
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①For the activity, I suggest visiting the Drum and Bell Towers, Shichahai, and nearby Hutongs.（动名词短语作宾语）
②Watching Beijing Opera could add a cultural highlight to the tour.（动名词短语作主语）
19．例文
My favourite art club
I’m in the Painting Club. I choose it because I love painting and it gives me a chance to show my creativity. The activity that impressed me most was the landscape painting competition. We painted the beautiful scenery around our school.
For new members, I have some advice. First, don’t be afraid to try different painting styles. It can help you find your own way. Second, observe the details of things carefully. It will make your paintings more vivid.
In the Painting Club, I enjoy every moment of creating art. It enriches my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己参加的俱乐部及选择它的原因；
第二步、介绍给自己印象最深的活动；
第三步、和新成员分享自己的建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. a chance to do sth.给某人做某事的一个机会
②show my creativity展示我的创造力
③be afraid to害怕
④enrich my school life丰富了我的学校生活
[高分句型]
①The activity that impressed me most was the landscape painting competition.(that引导定语从句)
20．例文
Dear Eric,
I’m Li Lei. Our school has various clubs, such as the Football Club, the Handicraft Club, the Music Club, the English Club and so on.
In the Football Club, members can take part in training and competitions. The Handicraft Club offers the chance to make handicrafts like pottery. And in the Music Club, students can enjoy different kinds of music and learn to play instruments. In the English Club, members can talk with others in English and learn more about English culture.
Joining clubs can help you improve your skills and make more friends. You can choose the club you’re interested in. I wish you could be a member of your favorite club.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校俱乐部的种类；
第二步，介绍俱乐部的活动；
第三步，介绍参加俱乐部能给对方带来的帮助，并祝对方能够入选他感兴趣的俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③take part in参加
④talk with sb和某人谈话
⑤make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①You can choose the club you’re interested in.（省略引导词的定语从句）
②I wish you could be a member of your favorite club.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
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