英语 选择性必修 第二册 WY
Section Ⅳ Writing 读后续写——一个有关变化的事件
本单元的写作项目是读后续写，主题为一个有关变化的事件，属于记叙文。写作时应注意以下几个方面：
1．后续情节的设计，应衔接所给出的第一句话这条线索，根据所给定的开头，自然续写内容。
2．后续情节的设计，可根据所写文章的内容变化时态，不必与原文时态完全一致。
3．后续情节结果要体现“变化”，把握现在、展望未来。结尾应积极向上，无论续写的内容多么曲折离奇、惊心动魄，结尾部分一定要正面、乐观。
4．后续情节要遵循原文的写作风格。
(1)Time flies, and the new Olympics is coming very soon!
时间过得真快，新一届奥运会马上就要举行了！
(2)The quality of human life has improved greatly over the past few centuries, but Earth is being harmed more and more by human activities.
在过去几个世纪里，人类的生活质量有了很大提高，然而地球正越来越多地受到人类活动的危害。
(3)Computers have brought about many changes in the workplace.
电脑给工作场所带来了诸多变化。
(4)As we all know, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to global climate change.
众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。
(5)With the development of science and technology, more and more scientific inventions are being made, which brings great convenience to our daily life.
随着科技的发展，越来越多的科学发明正在被创造出来，这给我们的日常生活带来了巨大的便利。
(6)I'm convinced that it will be more convenient for people to shop online in the future.
我相信未来人们网上购物会变得更加方便。
(7)Computers have replaced humans in many areas of our life, making our work much easier and more efficient.
电脑已经在我们生活的很多领域取代了人类，使我们的工作变得更加轻松和高效。
(8)There are more people than ever, living longer than ever.
现在的人口比以往任何时候都多，人们的寿命也比以往更长。
(9)There is a new shopping area on every corner and new houses, townhouses and apartments everywhere.
每个角落都有一个新的购物区，到处都是新房子、联排别墅和公寓。
(10)In a word, the changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.
总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。
(11)As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.
只要我们一起努力，就能把不可能变成可能。
(12)Therefore, I think it is a good change, as the students are full of passion and they enjoy doing morning exercises.
所以，我认为这是一个好的改变，因为学生们充满了热情，他们喜欢做早操。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What's worse, he found that he only had one dime (十分硬币) left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn't eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door.
“What can I do for you？” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some ... a drink of water？” The boy dared not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You don't owe me anything，” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically. It also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give her the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dressed in his doctor's gown, he went in to see her. The bill was sent to her room.
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Dressed in his doctor's gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lying on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she opened it, on the side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words, “Paid in full with a glass of milk.” signed by Dr Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God.”
总评 本文时态把握准确，语法结构和词汇的使用恰到好处，续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰，表达完整。
[亮点呈现]
(1)at once, give attention to, request sb to do sth, pay off等短语的使用，凸显出作者灵活运用语言的能力。
(2)Her lovely face looked pale.和Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently中关于外貌和情感的描写，准确到位。
(3)from that day on, hesitantly, finally等连接词的使用，使文章前后连贯、逻辑性强。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Her name was Mrs Thompson. And as she stood in front of the 5th grade class on the very first day she looked at her students and said that she loved them all the same. But that was impossible because there in the front row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard. Mrs Thompson had watched Teddy the year before and noticed that he didn't play well with the other children, that his clothes were messy and that he constantly needed a bath. She paid no attention to Teddy.
However, when she read his file, she was in surprise. Teddy's first grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is a bright child with a ready laugh. He does his work neatly and has good manners ... he is a joy to be around.” His second grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is an excellent student, well liked by his classmates. But he is troubled because his mother has a deadly illness and life at home must be a struggle.” His third grade teacher wrote, “His mother's death has been hard on him. He tried to do his best but his father doesn't show much interest.” Teddy's fourth grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is withdrawn and doesn't show much interest in school. He doesn't have many friends and sometimes sleeps in class.” By now, Mrs Thompson realized the problem and she was ashamed of herself. She thought that she could make a difference.
She felt even worse when her students brought her Christmas presents, wrapped in beautiful paper and tied with pretty ribbons, except for Teddy's. His present was clumsily wrapped in the heavy, brown paper that he got from a grocery bag. Mrs Thompson opened it in the middle of the other presents. Some of the children started to laugh when she found a stone bracelet (手镯) with some of the stones missing, and a bottle that was one quarter full of perfume.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Mrs Thompson, her voice choked up with tears, thanked her students for their presents. Ten years later, Teddy invited Mrs Thompson to attend his wedding as groom's mother.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。起初，Thompson (汤普森)老师并未特别关注学生Teddy (特迪)，后来了解到Teddy曾是一位非常优秀的学生，家庭变故对他影响很大。一次圣诞节，Thompson老师收到了Teddy的礼物后，深受感动，并开始关注他。此后Teddy发生了哪些改变？十年后，Teddy邀请Thompson老师以新郎母亲的身份来参加自己的婚礼，婚礼上又会发生什么呢？
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Unit 3 Times change!
Section Ⅳ Writing 读后续写——一个有关变化的事件
本单元的写作项目是读后续写，主题为一个有关变化的事件，属于记叙文。写作时应注意以下几个方面：
1．后续情节的设计，应衔接所给出的第一句话这条线索，根据所给定的开头，自然续写内容。
2．后续情节的设计，可根据所写文章的内容变化时态，不必与原文时态完全一致。
3．后续情节结果要体现“变化”，把握现在、展望未来。结尾应积极向上，无论续写的内容多么曲折离奇、惊心动魄，结尾部分一定要正面、乐观。
4．后续情节要遵循原文的写作风格。
(1)Time flies, and the new Olympics is coming very soon!
时间过得真快，新一届奥运会马上就要举行了！
(2)The quality of human life has improved greatly over the past few centuries, but Earth is being harmed more and more by human activities.
在过去几个世纪里，人类的生活质量有了很大提高，然而地球正越来越多地受到人类活动的危害。
(3)Computers have brought about many changes in the workplace.
电脑给工作场所带来了诸多变化。
(4)As we all know, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to global climate change.
众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。
(5)With the development of science and technology, more and more scientific inventions are being made, which brings great convenience to our daily life.
随着科技的发展，越来越多的科学发明正在被创造出来，这给我们的日常生活带来了巨大的便利。
(6)I'm convinced that it will be more convenient for people to shop online in the future.
我相信未来人们网上购物会变得更加方便。
(7)Computers have replaced humans in many areas of our life, making our work much easier and more efficient.
电脑已经在我们生活的很多领域取代了人类，使我们的工作变得更加轻松和高效。
(8)There are more people than ever, living longer than ever.
现在的人口比以往任何时候都多，人们的寿命也比以往更长。
(9)There is a new shopping area on every corner and new houses, townhouses and apartments everywhere.
每个角落都有一个新的购物区，到处都是新房子、联排别墅和公寓。
(10)In a word, the changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.
总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。
(11)As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.
只要我们一起努力，就能把不可能变成可能。
(12)Therefore, I think it is a good change, as the students are full of passion and they enjoy doing morning exercises.
所以，我认为这是一个好的改变，因为学生们充满了热情，他们喜欢做早操。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What's worse, he found that he only had one dime (十分硬币) left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn't eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door.
“What can I do for you？” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some ... a drink of water？” The boy dared not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You don't owe me anything，” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically. It also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give her the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dressed in his doctor's gown, he went in to see her.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
The bill was sent to her room.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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Dressed in his doctor's gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lying on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she opened it, on the side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words, “Paid in full with a glass of milk.” signed by Dr Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God.”
[亮点呈现]
(1)at once, give attention to, request sb to do sth, pay off等短语的使用，凸显出作者灵活运用语言的能力。
(2)Her lovely face looked pale.和Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently中关于外貌和情感的描写，准确到位。
(3)from that day on, hesitantly, finally等连接词的使用，使文章前后连贯、逻辑性强。
总评 本文时态把握准确，语法结构和词汇的使用恰到好处，续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰，表达完整。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Her name was Mrs Thompson. And as she stood in front of the 5th grade class on the very first day she looked at her students and said that she loved them all the same. But that was impossible because there in the front row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard. Mrs Thompson had watched Teddy the year before and noticed that he didn't play well with the other children, that his clothes were messy and that he constantly needed a bath. She paid no attention to Teddy.
However, when she read his file, she was in surprise. Teddy's first grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is a bright child with a ready laugh. He does his work neatly and has good manners ... he is a joy to be around.” His second grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is an excellent student, well liked by his classmates. But he is troubled because his mother has a deadly illness and life at home must be a struggle.” His third grade teacher wrote, “His mother's death has been hard on him. He tried to do his best but his father doesn't show much interest.” Teddy's fourth grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is withdrawn and doesn't show much interest in school. He doesn't have many friends and sometimes sleeps in class.” By now, Mrs Thompson realized the problem and she was ashamed of herself. She thought that she could make a difference.
She felt even worse when her students brought her Christmas presents, wrapped in beautiful paper and tied with pretty ribbons, except for Teddy's. His present was clumsily wrapped in the heavy, brown paper that he got from a grocery bag. Mrs Thompson opened it in the middle of the other presents. Some of the children started to laugh when she found a stone bracelet (手镯) with some of the stones missing, and a bottle that was one quarter full of perfume.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Mrs Thompson, her voice choked up with tears, thanked her students for their presents.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Ten years later, Teddy invited Mrs Thompson to attend his wedding as groom's mother.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。起初，Thompson (汤普森)老师并未特别关注学生Teddy (特迪)，后来了解到Teddy曾是一位非常优秀的学生，家庭变故对他影响很大。一次圣诞节，Thompson老师收到了Teddy的礼物后，深受感动，并开始关注他。此后Teddy发生了哪些改变？十年后，Teddy邀请Thompson老师以新郎母亲的身份来参加自己的婚礼，婚礼上又会发生什么呢？
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