【单元考点培优】Module 12 Save our world 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 12 Save our world 专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．环境污染是人类面临的一个严重的问题。我们应该从身边的小事做起，节约能源，保护环境。请以How to Protect Our Environment为题，写一篇作文描述自己在日常生活中是如何保护环境的。
要求：
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右。
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2．世界人口已超过80亿，人类活动对地球环境造成了巨大压力。与此同时，中国正积极推动“绿色发展”和“美丽中国”建设。作为新时代青少年，我们的每一个选择都关乎地球的未来。请以“People and Our Planet”为题，写一篇80—100词的英语短文，内容包括：
1.简述人口增长给环境带来的一个具体问题(如垃圾增多、空气污染、资源紧张等)。
2.建议一两种我们青少年能力所及的保护行动。
3.解释你为什么认为这些行动很重要。
People and Our Planet
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3．潼南秀美涪江穿城而过，江水、岸线、沿江平坝形成“天然宽谷”，生态田园、未来乡村、千年古镇、文化古迹与现代化城区相融共生。为了将潼南(Tongnan)打造成独具特质的“世界宽谷·田园城市”，在环境保护方面，我们中学生可以做些什么呢？
请以“My Hometown’s Green Dream”为题，结合潼南建设“世界宽谷·田园城市”目标，写一篇英文短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述潼南的自然与人文特色（如涪江、古镇、田园等）；
2. 谈谈如何通过环保行动（如减少污染、植树等）助力这一目标；
3. 表达你对家乡未来发展的期待。
参考词汇与短语：
the Fujiang River, ancient towns, protect the environment, reduce waste, reuse, save water and electricity, plant trees, duty, hope, better and more beautiful
要求：
1.词数：80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Hometown’s Green Dream
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with
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4．美丽石狮，人人有责。英语周报社拟举办以“How to Make a Beautiful Shishi”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿，描述一下石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士守护我们美丽的家园。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
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5．为配合我市开展“创建卫生城市”活动，学校发起了以“Keep Our City Clean and Beautiful”为主题的活动。假设你是李华，现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇90词左右的倡议书。
提示：
1. 最好乘坐…或者…去上学，减少空气污染；
2. 不到处乱扔垃圾，经常打扫…，保持环境卫生；
3. 不践踏草坪，不乱摘花朵；
4. 回收利用纸盒和塑料瓶；
5. ……（请适当发挥）
要求：短文必须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Keep Our City Clean and Beautiful
Dear friends,
Longyan is our home, so it’s our duty to protect it.
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That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
6．为践行“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念，近日我校在土海湿地公园举办以“兰庐家乡，为环保出力”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英文写一篇文章，分享本次活动的内容及活动的感受。词数80词左右。
Time: October 1st, 2025 Place: Tuhai Wetland Park Activities: ※pick up rubbish ※make a poster ※give a speech ※…Feeling (s) : …
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
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7．假定你是某校学生李华，近日你校开展了以“Green School Day”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语给笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
Time: November 7, 2025 Activities: ●8:00-11:30 plant trees and flowers; pick the litter up ●14:00-17:30 listen to a speech about saving energy; learn many ways to protect the environment Feeling(s): …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，是学校环保组织的成员，平时主要负责宣传环保信息。为了本周的宣传活动，你打算给全校同学写一封倡议书，呼吁大家不管是在学校还是在家里，都要从身边小事做起，保护环境。请用英语完成这封倡议书。
要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和班级。
3. 100词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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9．长寿区“生态小公民”活动正在全区中小学开展，鼓励青少年关注家乡环境，践行环保行动。近年来，长寿生态环境有喜有忧：既有新增城市公园、优化滨江步道等积极变化，也存在部分社区垃圾分类不足、郊区小河水质变差等问题。保护环境是每位市民的责任，中学生更应在活动中积极参与，用实际行动为家乡添绿。请结合长寿实际，写一篇80-120词的英语短文 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)，内容需包括：
1. 描述一个家乡环境的积极变化和一个待改善的问题 (可涉及社区、学校周边等熟悉区域)。
2. 列举2-3件中学生在日常生活中可践行的具体环保行动，体现对“生态小公民”活动的响应。
要求：1. 词数：80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
In recent years, Changshou’s environment has seen both good and bad changes.
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10．保护环境，从我做起。作为一名中学生，我们如何用实际行动来保护我们的家园？请根据下面的提示，以“To Be a Greener Person”为题，用英语写一篇短文、号召大家从小事做起，为保护环境做贡献。
内容要点：
注意：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，条理清晰，语句通顺，适当发挥；
2.词数100左右（文章的标题已给出，不计入总词数）。
To Be a Greener Person
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11．我校English Corner将以 “绿色生活，从我做起” 为主题，组织全校英语征文比赛。请你以 “Going Green Starts with Small Things” 为题，根据以下要点信息，用英语写一篇短文参赛。词数100左右。
内容要点 具体做法
绿色出行 步行或骑自行车上学
厉行节约 节约用电 (水、纸等)
其他方式 ……
提出倡议 ……
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名及校名。
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Going green sounds like a big task, but in fact, it begins with small actions in our daily lives. It means protecting our environment by changing some of our habits.
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12．近期，你校与英国友好学校开展“校园环保实践”国际交流项目，对方学校将同步发起“绿色校园”行动。为了向国际伙伴展示我校的环保理念与行动，校英语社团邀请你以学生代表的身份，撰写一封英语倡议书，号召全校师生参与“Creating a Green Campus”系列活动。
请结合以下要点完成倡议：
Creating a Green Campus Importance raise our awareness (意识) of environmental protection
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Activities plant trees and flowers
save water and electricity
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Proposals (倡议)
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Teachers and Fellow Students,
Creating a green campus is of great importance in many ways. First, it helps to raise our awareness of environmental protection.
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Sincerely,
The Student Union
13．近日，学校开展“保护环境，从我做起”的主题英语演讲活动。请以参赛选手李华这一身份，写一份倡议书，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。内容必须包括表格信息。
注意：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，表达清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及相关提示信息。
内容要点
环境保护 厉行节约 节约用水，节约用电
减少污染 避免使用塑料袋
绿色出行 选择走路，骑自行车等对环境友好的出行方式
（补充1~2点） ……
提出希望 共同保护环境
Dear friends,
The environment has been changed for the better nowadays. However, as students, we still need to protect the environment.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14．保护环境是我们共同的使命和责任。你校将于下周六组织主题为“Lucid Waters and Lush Mountains”（绿水青山）的志愿服务活动，你想邀请来自英国的朋友 Mandy来参加这次活动。假如你是李华，请你根据表格内容用英文写一封电子邮件，向她介绍活动的安排。
Lucid Waters and Lush Mountains
Time 8:30a. m.—11:30 a. m., next Saturday
Place Green Park
Activity collect rubbish, plant trees...
Meaning …
注意事项：
1.邮件应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mandy,
I would like to invite you to join us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
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I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．绿水青山，就是金山银山，为了践行绿色发展理念，假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“A green life”为题的英语征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示，结合自己的生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈绿色生活的具体做法。词数80-120词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
—出行类：ride bikes (骑自行车), walk to school (步行上学), take public transport (乘坐公共交通), reduce car rides (减少开车)
—节约类：save water (节约用水，如turn off taps in time), save electricity (节约用电，如turn off lights), reuse bottles/bags (重复使用瓶子/袋子)
—环保类：sort rubbish (垃圾分类), plant trees (植树), pick up litter (捡拾垃圾), avoid disposable products (避免一次性用品)
要求：
1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文章中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A green life
In order to protect the environment, it’s necessary for us to live a green life. First,
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16．保护地球，人人有责！你们班将举行“地球是我家，维护靠大家”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据下图所给提示，用英文写一篇主题为“Small Actions for Our Big Earth”的演讲稿。
写作要求：
1. 演讲稿必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名等信息。
3. 首句已给出，不算词数；词数要求80词左右。
Small Actions for Our Big Earth
Habits Save water Walk to school Use handmade bag Activities Tree planting Waste sorting Beach cleanup Thoughts What I learned How I influenced others …
As a student, I believe small actions can protect our planet.
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17．近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。
提示： (一) 措施： (1) 节约水电； (2) 少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾； (3) 绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等；
(二) 提出希望。
注意： (1) 文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
(2) 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
(3) 词数80-100左右。
Dear friend,
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The Students’ Union
18．地球是我们的家园，我们要好好爱护它。当今世界上存在各种环境问题，为了让我们的家园变得更绿色环保，请根据以下提示写一篇讲稿，谈一谈当下的环境问题，并向同学们倡导低碳生活(low-carbon life)。要求：适当发挥个人观点，80词左右。
注意事项：
(1)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(2)不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3)必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入词数。
Low-carbon Life
Nowadays, the environment is becoming worse and worse.
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19．假设你是李华，上周六你校环保社团开展了以“Green School Day”为主题的实践活动。请结合以下提示，用英语给朋友Judy写一封邮件，分享活动的目的、内容、感受以及你的校园环保行动计划。
Green School Day Purpose: raise environmental awareness (意识)
Activities:◆listen to a speech ◆watch some videos ◆make posters
Your feelings: ...
Your plans: ...
注意事项：
(1) 邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3) 词数80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Judy,
How’s it going I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day. It’s part of the environmental education in our school.
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Yours
Li Hua
20．近年来，我国全面开展蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s Go Green”的英语征文比赛。请根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语文章投稿。要点：
1. 谈谈你为环保具体做过什么；
2. 说说你行动后的感受；
3. 制定你接下来的环保计划。
要求：
1. 文中须包含以上全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Let’s Go Green
As we all know, China makes every effort to protect the environment.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
How to Protect Our Environment
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.
First of all, I think we should turn off the lights to save energy when we leave the room. Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars. Third, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving.
We can make the world a better place to live if everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作话题已明确给出，考生需确保要点紧扣主题，可适当补充细节或理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出环境问题的严重性，进而表明学生应尽的责任；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节约能源、植树、建议乘坐公共交通”三个方面给出具体的保护措施，并解释了每项措施的原因或好处；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁每个人贡献的重要性，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①serious严重的
②save energy节约能源
③make a contribution to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.（In order to表目的，引导目的状语从句）
②Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars.（not only ... but also ... 连接两个并列谓语，which引导定语从句修饰carbon dioxide）
2．例文
People and Our Planet
With over 8 billion people worldwide, our planet faces problems like growing waste. More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.
As teenagers, we can take simple active actions. We should cut down on plastic bags, recycle empty bottles and used paper.
These small acts matter a lot—they reduce pollution and save resources. If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live. Let’s work together for a beautiful China and a green world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作需围绕“人与地球”展开，说明人口增长带来的问题，并提出青少年可行的环保行动，注意结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出全球人口众多导致废弃物增加、环境污染加剧的问题；
第二步，以青少年身份提出具体可行的环保行动（减少塑料袋、回收利用、节约用电）；
第三步，强调个人行动的重要性，并呼吁共同努力，共建美丽中国与绿色世界。
[亮点词汇]
①take active actions采取积极行动
②cut down on减少
③make an effort作出努力
④work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with the Fujiang River, ancient towns and peaceful countryside around it.
To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown. What can we do First, we ought to reduce waste, and we should put the rubbish in the dustbin. Second, we can also reuse plastic bags. Third, we can save water and electricity at home and at school. For example, turn off the lights when we leave. Fourth, planting more trees is also a good way to make our city greener.
I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：结合潼南自然人文特色（涪江/古镇/田园），提出环保行动（减污/植树等），展望未来。
[写作步骤]
第一步：描述潼南特色（涪江穿城、古镇田园），接续题干开头；
第二步：列举环保行动（减废、节水电、植树）；
第三步：表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce waste减少垃圾
②turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．
例文
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty. But now, the streets are clean and there are more nice parks with colorful flowers. The rivers get cleaner too, and we can see more green trees around our community. As middle school students, we can be environmental guardians. We won’t throw rubbish everywhere. We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly. We can also plant small trees.
Let’s make Shishi more beautiful together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，搭配一般过去时；
③提示：描述石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，并谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士。
[写作步骤]
第一步：对比过去与现在环境的变化；
第二步：具体谈谈中学生环保行动的做法；
第三步：最后倡议大家一起行动，共创美好家园。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental guardians 环境监护人
②throw rubbish everywhere 乱扔垃圾
③turn off the tap quickly 快速关掉水龙头
[高分句型]
①Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty.（运用and连接的并列句，描述过去环境的两个问题）
②We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly.（运用“by+动名词”结构说明节约用水的具体方式）
5．
例文：
Dear friends,
Longyan is our home, so it’s our duty to protect it.
First, we should take buses or bikes to school instead of cars to reduce air pollution. Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere, and clean our classrooms and streets often. Third, we must not step on the grass or pick flowers in parks. Also, remember to recycle paper and plastic bottles. Moreover, we can plant more trees to make our city greener. Let’s work together to keep our city clean and beautiful.
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，为书信格式，围绕保持城市清洁美丽展开。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含所有提示信息，适当添加细节，使倡议书内容连贯且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出保护城市的责任。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从出行方式、垃圾处理、爱护绿化、回收利用、额外行动几方面，提出倡议。
第三步，书写结语。结束倡议书。
[亮点词汇]
①take buses or bikes乘公交或自行车
②reduce air pollution减少空气污染
③throw rubbish everywhere到处扔垃圾
④step on the grass践踏草坪
⑤recycle paper and plastic bottles回收纸盒和塑料瓶
[高分句型]
①First, we should take buses or bikes to school instead of cars to reduce air pollution. (提出出行倡议，说明目的，体现合理性)
②Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere and clean our classrooms and streets often. (提出垃圾处理倡议，明确行动)
③Third, we must not step on the grass or pick flowers in parks. Also, remember to recycle paper and plastic bottles. (提出爱护绿化和回收倡议，条理清晰)
6．
例文
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
First, we picked up rubbish near the lake. Then, we made posters about protecting wetlands. Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important. I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment. I hope to have more activities to protect the environment in the future and encourage more people to join in these activities.
This activity made me understand the meaning of “clear waters and green mountains are invaluable assets”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出活动主题；
第二步，具体阐述活动开展的内容；
第三步，谈谈活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②clean up清理
③pick up捡拾
[高分句型]
①Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Our school held a “Green School Day” on November 7, 2025, and I want to share it with you.
From 8:00 to 11:30, we planted trees and flowers on the campus and picked up litter around it. In the afternoon, from 14:00 to 17:30, we listened to a speech about saving energy and learned many practical ways to protect the environment.
I felt proud to make our school greener and realized the importance of everyone’s effort.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍活动的过程和感悟，不可遗漏提示信息，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间，主题；
第二步，具体介绍活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share with分享
②pick up捡起
③from…to…从……到……
④the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
①In the afternoon, from 14:00 to 17:30, we listened to a speech about saving energy and learned many practical ways to protect the environment.(并列句)
②I felt proud to make our school greener and realized the importance of everyone’s effort. (用“and”连接两个并列谓语，同时体现行动带来的感受与认知，结构简洁且信息完整)
8．
例文
Dear schoolmates,
Our planet is facing environmental challenges, and it needs our help! As a member of the school’s Environmental Club, I want to encourage everyone to protect the environment by starting with small things around us.
At school, we can do many simple things. Please turn off the lights and fans when we leave the classroom. Always put rubbish into the right bins for recycling.
At home, we should turn off the tap while brushing our teeth to save water. Also, we can help plant trees or flowers in our gardens or balconies.
Protecting the environment is protecting our future. If everyone does their part, we can make a big difference!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作身份是李华，学校环保组织成员。写作目的是呼吁大家从身边小事做起，保护学校及家庭环境。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明身份和写作目的；
第二步：提出具体建议；
第三步：总结并发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②turn off关闭
③do one’s part尽某人的职责
②make a big difference发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
①Protecting the environment is protecting our future.（动名词作主语和表语）
9．例文
In recent years, Changshou’s environment has seen both good and bad changes. On the one hand, new parks and better roads have been built, making our city more beautiful. On the other hand, there are still issues like waste sorting problems in some communities and polluted rivers in the suburbs. What’s more, the air quality has improved noticeably.
As middle school students, we should actively respond to the “Eco-Citizen” activity. We can reduce the use of plastic bags and use reusable shopping bags instead. We should also reuse electric devices as much as possible. Besides, we can recycle paper, bottles and other recyclable materials.
I hope that through our efforts, Changshou will become a cleaner and greener place. Let’s take action to protect our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时态”、“一般现在时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，介绍家乡的现状；
第二步：详细描述具体的环保意见；
第三步：表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①more beautiful更漂亮
②What’s more此外
③actively respond积极响应
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, new parks and better roads have been built, making our city more beautiful. （现在分词作结果状语）
②On the other hand, there are still issues like waste sorting problems in some communities and polluted rivers in the suburbs. （There be句型）
10．例文
To Be a Greener Person
As we know, the environment is getting worse and worse and it is our duty to take action to protect our environment.
We should save water, electricity and paper. When we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the tap. When we leave the room, we should shut off the electricity. We should also use both sides of the paper. We can take a cloth bag when we go shopping. Don’t buy unnecessary things in the supermarket. It’s good for our health to walk or ride to school. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere.
Let’s act now and make our world more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、点明环境现状（日益恶化），引出话题；
第二步、分点列举具体环保行动，结合生活场景（刷牙、离开房间、购物、上学等）说明做法；
第三步、发出呼吁，表达让世界更美好的愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①take action采取行动
②turn off关闭
③shut off关闭
[高分句型]
When we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the tap.(when引导时间状语从句)
11．
例文：
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Going green sounds like a big task, but in fact, it begins with small actions in our daily lives. It means protecting our environment by changing some of our habits.
First, we can choose green ways to travel. For example, walking or riding a bike to school instead of taking a car can reduce air pollution. Second, we should save resources. Remember to turn off lights when leaving a room, and try to reuse water and paper. Besides, we can also plant trees or use both sides of paper to help the environment.
If everyone makes a small effort, our world will become a better place. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写倡议，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体阐述做法 (绿色出行、厉行节约、多种树等) 和原因；
第三步，提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of相反
②turn off关闭
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①For example, walking or riding a bike to school instead of taking a car can reduce air pollution. (动名词短语作主语)
②Remember to turn off lights when leaving a room, and try to reuse water and paper. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③If everyone makes a small effort, our world will become a better place. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12．例文：
Dear Teachers and Fellow Students,
Creating a green campus is of great importance in many ways. First, it helps to raise our awareness of environmental protection. Second, it provides us with a good environment for our study.
With the purpose of creating a green campus, various kinds of activities are going to be held in our school. Firstly, all of us are encouraged to plant trees and flowers around our school. Secondly, it is necessary for us to save water and electricity when we are not using them. Besides, we should go to school on foot or by bike to reduce air pollution.
We hope everyone can take part in the activities. Every small effort we make will turn our campus into a greener and more comfortable place to study and grow.
Sincerely,
The Student Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文（倡议书）；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”（说明重要性、提出倡议）和“一般将来时”（号召行动）；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，扩展重要性。除提示中的“raise awareness”外，补充“使校园更美、更环保”等内容。
第二步，列举具体活动。结合提示（植树、节水节电）并补充“回收废纸和瓶子”等常见校园环保行动。
第三步，提出倡议。号召从小事做起，强调集体行动的力量。
[亮点词汇]
①environmentally friendly环保的
②take part in参与
③contribute to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
Second, it makes our school more beautiful and environmentally friendly.（运用了“make + 宾语 + 形容词”结构，表示“使……变得……”）
13．（One possible version）
Dear friends,
The environment has been changed for the better nowadays. However, as students, we still need to protect the environment. Here is some advice.
First, it’s very important to save water and electricity in our daily life. Turn off the lights or taps when you are not using them. Next, we are supposed to reduce the pollution. Avoid using plastic bags and take a cloth bag when shopping. Besides, we should choose environmentally friendly ways of traveling, such as walking, riding a bike or taking the bus. Last, planting more trees and flowers will make air fresher.
I hope all of us can work together to protect our environment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
提示：需包含表格中“厉行节约”“减少污染”“绿色出行”三点，并补充1~2条建议（如植树、垃圾分类）。
【写作步骤】
第一步，直接承接已给开头句，强调保护环境的必要性。
第二步，按表格顺序分点说明具体做法（节约水电、避免塑料袋、绿色出行），并补充植树和垃圾分类。
第三步，用激励性语言号召行动，呼应主题。
【亮点词汇】
①save water and electricity节约用水、用电
②reduce pollution减少污染
③work together共同努力
【高分句型】
①First, it’s very important to save water and electricity in our daily life.（it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语）
②Besides, we should choose environmentally friendly ways of traveling, such as walking, riding a bike or taking the bus.（举例说明）
14．
例文
Dear Mandy,
I would like to invite you to join us in our voluntary work next Saturday. The activity is called “Lucid Waters and Lush Mountains”, and it aims to protect our environment. It will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. at Green Park. We will collect rubbish, plant trees, and do other eco-friendly tasks. This event is very meaningful because it helps to keep our planet clean and promotes sustainability. It can also make us realize the importance of the environment to human beings. I think it will be a fun and rewarding experience. I hope you can come and participate.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作围绕“环保志愿活动邀请”展开，涵盖邀请目的、活动核心信息、活动意义及对活动的期待，考生应注意适当补充任务细节，确保不遗漏关键邀请信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以“邀请Mandy参加下周六志愿活动”开篇，直接点明核心目的，引出活动名称“绿水青山”及“保护环境”的主题，让对方快速了解邀请核心；
第二步，具体阐述活动细节与意义。先明确活动关键信息，再说明活动意义；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Mandy能来参与”的期待。
［亮点词汇］
①voluntary work志愿工作
②the importance of the environment环境的重要性
［高分句型］
This event is very meaningful because it helps to keep our planet clean and promotes sustainability.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．例文
A green life
In order to protect the environment, it’s necessary for us to live a green life.
First, you ought to choose the right way to travel around. Walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car if you travel a short distance. It will reduce air pollution. Then, in order to save energy, you should turn off the lights and the tap when you don’t use them. In addition, why not plant more trees and flowers They can make the air fresher and bring you good feelings, too. Last, when you go shopping, you can use cloth bags rather than plastic bags.
I think all of these can be helpful to us to live a green life, and our environment will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中的重要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图；
第二步：展开阐述绿色生活的具体做法；
第三步：阐述你的感想，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②turn off关闭
③rather than而不是
[高分句型]
①Walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car if you travel a short distance. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Last, when you go shopping, you can use cloth bags rather than plastic bags. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I think all of these can be helpful to us to live a green life, and our environment will be better and better. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．参考范文
Small Actions for Our Big Earth
As a student, I believe small actions can protect our planet. I save water by turning off the tap when not in use. Walking to school and using handmade bags are my green habits.
I also take part in activities like tree-planting and beach cleanups. Every week, I help with waste sorting at school.
These experiences taught me: everyone’s effort matters. I influenced my family and friends a lot. My family now uses handmade bags, and my friends are in my cleanup team. Start protecting the environment with small actions. Let’s act together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括个人习惯、参加的活动以及从中获得的感悟和影响他人的方式，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，突出个人对环保的认识和行动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“作为学生，我相信小行动能保护我们的星球”来引出下文对个人环保习惯的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人习惯（节约用水、步行上学、使用手工袋）、参加的活动（植树、海滩清理、垃圾分类）”几个方面来介绍自己为保护地球所做的努力；
第三步，书写结语。表达“从小事做起保护环境，呼吁大家一起行动”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off the tap关掉水龙头
②take part in参加
③help with sth.帮助做某事
④matter重要，有关系
[高分句型]
①I save water by turning off the tap when not in use.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）
②Walking to school and using handmade bags are my green habits.（动名词短语作主语）
③These experiences taught me: everyone’s effort matters.（冒号用于引出解释或说明）
17．
例文
Dear friends,
Environmental problems are becoming more serious nowadays. As students, we should take action to protect our planet. Here are some suggestions:
First, save water and electricity. Turn off lights and taps when not in use. Second, use fewer plastic bags and never litter. Bring your own shopping bags instead. Third, choose green travel like taking buses, riding bikes or walking to school or shops.
If everyone makes a small effort, we can make a big difference. Let’s start from small things and build a sustainable future together!
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意文章必须包括所给提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头说明背景和目的（环境问题严重，呼吁行动）；
第二步，分点列出具体措施（节约水电、减少塑料、绿色出行）；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家从现在就做起。
[亮点词汇]
①take action采取行动
②turn off lights and taps关闭灯光和水龙头
③make a big difference产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①Turn off lights and taps when not in use.（祈使句）
②If everyone makes a small effort, we can make a big difference.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
Low-carbon Life
Nowadays, the environment is becoming worse and worse. So it’s necessary for us to live a low-carbon life. As students, what should we do
First, we should turn off the electricity when we leave a room. It’s a good way for us to save the resources. Second, recycle the boxes and the plastic bottles. Third, try to ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Fourth, plant more trees to freshen the air. Finally, we had better use both sides of paper to save paper.
Let’s try our best to protect the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，引出话题；
第二步，介绍作为学生如何保护环境、节约资源；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②instead of代替
③try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力
[高分句型]
①So it’s necessary for us to live a low-carbon life.(it固定句型)
②First, we should turn off the electricity when we leave a room.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let’s try our best to protect the environment.(祈使句)
19．范文：
Dear Judy,
How’s it going I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day. It’s part of the environmental education in our school.
The purpose of the activity was to raise our environmental awareness. We listened to a speech about plastic pollution, watched some videos on protecting wildlife, and made posters to call for a greener lifestyle.
To me, the activity was of great meaning. It made me realize that everyone can help protect the Earth. From now on, I plan to save water and electricity, and sort waste every day.
What is your school doing for the environment Write back soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；
③提示：需包含活动目的、内容、感受及个人计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明活动目的；
第二步，介绍三项活动内容；
第三步，表达个人感受；
第四步，提出环保行动计划；
第五步，结尾询问对方情况。
[亮点词汇]
①raise environmental awareness提高环保意识
②call for呼吁
③sort waste垃圾分类
[高分句型]
①It made me realize that everyone can help protect the Earth. (宾语从句)
②We listened to a speech about plastic pollution, watched some videos on protecting wildlife, and made posters to call for a greener lifestyle. (and并列结构)
20．
例文
Let’s Go Green As we all know, China makes every effort to protect the environment. I have done some things to help. For example, I often pick up litter in my neighborhood and sort garbage for recycling. I also save water by turning off the tap when it is not in use.
By doing these, I feel very happy and proud because I know I am doing my part to protect our planet. It makes me realize that everyone’s small actions can make a big difference. I plan to plant more trees and encourage my friends to go green together in the future. Let’s work together for a greener world!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：需围绕“做过什么、感受、计划”三个要点展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步：审题并规划结构，确保覆盖所有要点；
第二步：分步写作，先写行动，然后写感受，最后写计划；
第三步：检查与修改，确保语法正确、要点齐全。
[亮点词汇]
① pick up litter 捡垃圾
② sort garbage 分类垃圾
③ make a big difference 产生很大影响
[高分句型]
① I feel very happy and proud because I know I am doing my part to protect our planet.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
② It makes me realize that everyone’s small actions can make a big difference.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
③ I plan to plant more trees and encourage my friends to go green together in the future.（运用了动词不定式作宾语）
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