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Unit 4 Writing
Traditional festivals
What Chinese traditional festivals do you know
Mid-autumn Festival
Dragon Boat Festival
Spring Festival
Lantern Festival
Spring Festival
clean the house
put up couplets
and hang lanterns
watch Spring Festival Gala
set off fireworks
have a traditional family dinner
buy lots of food
get hongbao
...
What do people usually do in the Spring Festival
visit relatives
Let’s write a passage about the Spring Festival.
1.审好题
2.列提纲（三段式）
3.写好句
4.成篇章
写作步骤
介绍习俗时，不仅说 “做什么”，还可以补充 “怎么做、看到什么、感受到什么”，比如写团圆饭：“The reunion dinner is so happy. We sit around the table, talk with each other and eat delicious food. My grandparents tell us stories about their Spring Festivals when they were kids”（通过 “围坐餐桌、聊天、听故事” 的场景，让读者身临其境）。
写作技巧：介绍传统节日类作文
1.结构模板：总起 + 分述（习俗 + 场景）+ 感悟 + 结尾
总起：点明节日名称、地位、时间；
分述：按 “节前准备→节日当天活动→特色习俗” 的时间顺序展开,每个 部分搭配 “具体行为 + 寓意”（如 “贴春联→辞旧迎新”）；
感悟：结合个人体验，表达对节日的情感或对节日意义的理解；
2. 细节描写：用 “感官 + 场景” 增强代入感
写作任务
最近，某英文报刊正在举办正文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My favourite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
要点：1. What festival is it
2. When is it
3. How do people celebrate it
4. Why do people celebrate it
5. How do you feel
要求：1. 内容包含以上提示要点；2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺，连贯；3.词数：60~80。
Step 1: 审好题
1.审人称：人称以第__________人称为主
2.审时态：时态以_________________为主
一/三
一般现在时
Spring Festival
结尾：表明喜欢的原因和感受
个人对春节的喜爱,强调传统习俗的意义
开头：开篇点题，介绍自己喜欢的节日及重要性
正文：介绍节日时间、相关的习俗和传统
介绍自己喜欢的节日，点明春节是中国最重要的传统节日之一
介绍节日时间
列出习俗 —— 春节前：打扫房屋、贴春联、吃团圆饭等；春节期间：收红包、放烟花等
说明习俗的意义
Beginning
Body
Ending
Step 2: 列提纲（三段式）
段落布局
1.发生，举行:_______________ 2. 传统节日:_________________
3.总所周知:________________ 4.聚在一起:_______________
5.吃一顿大餐:_______________ 6.放烟花:_________________
7.拜访亲戚:_________________ 8.收到压岁钱:______________
9.扫走:______________ 10. 最喜欢:_______________
11.不仅......而且......:_____________ 12.代表:__________
13.燃放烟花:_____________________________________
14.农历一月初一:__________________________________
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
sweep away
not only...but also...
set off fireworks
like...best
stand for
the first day of the first lunar month
take place
have a big meal
traditional festival
get together
set off the fireworks
as is known to all
visit relatives
get lucky money
15. ......之一:_______________ 16. 最重要:_________________
17.红灯笼:________________ 18. 对联:_______________
19.霉运:_______________ 20.好运气:_____________
21.用......装饰:_________________ 22.比如:__________
23.在春节前夕:_____________________________
24.春晚:_______________________
25.一个必做之事:_________
26. ...... 的重要性:_____________________
on the eve of the Spring Festival
the Spring Festival Gala
a must
the importance of ...
one of ...
bad luck
the most important
the couplets
good luck
red lanterns
decorate...with...
such as
Beginning
My favourite Chinese Festival
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__________________________________________________________________________________________
As is known to all, there are many traditional festivals in
关键词：
开头：开篇点题，介绍自己喜欢的节日及重要性
1. as is known to all;
traditional festival
there be;
众所周知，在中国有许多传统节日。
我最喜欢春节。
China.
2. like...best
I like the Spring Festival best.
It is one of the most
它是最重要的中国传统节
日之一。
3. one of...+名词复数;
the most important
important Chinese traditional festivals.
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关键词：
1. take place / fall / be + in/on/at +时间;
It always takes place on the first day of the first lunar month.
the first day of the first lunar month
Body
正文：介绍节日时间、相关的习俗和传统
它总是在农历正月初一。
是家人团聚的时候了。
2. It is a time...;
get together
It is a time for family members to get together.
在春节之前，
我们总是会买很多食物，并打扫房屋以驱除厄运。
Before the festival,
we always buy lots of food and clean our house to sweep away
the bad luck.
3. before;
sweep away;
bad luck
因为它们代表着好运。
Then, we decorate(装饰) the room with red
lanterns and the couplets.
Because they stand for good luck.
然后，我们用红灯笼和春联来装饰房间。
4. decorate...with...;
red lanterns;
the couplets;
5. stand for;
good luck
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关键词：
1. on the eve of the Spring Festival;
On the eve of the Spring Festival(在春节前夕), we have a big meal
have a big meal
在春节前夕，我们全家会聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的大餐。
餐桌上摆满了各种美味佳肴，如年糕、饺子等。
2. there be;
delicious food;
There is so much delicious food, such as rice
这些食物各自承载着不同的寓意。
They all have different meanings.
3. different meanings
After dinner, we usually watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
晚餐过后，我们通常会观看电视上的春节联欢晚会。
4. the Spring Festival Gala
with all family.
such as
cakes, dumplings and so on.
最有趣的事情就是走亲访友。
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1. what’s more;
a must;
关键词：
What’s more, it’s a must to set off fireworks to welcome a new
此外，在春节期间，燃放烟花爆竹也是迎接新年的必做之事。
Children can get lucky money from their elders.
year during the festival.
孩子们可以从长辈那里得到压岁钱。
The most interesting thing is visiting
relatives.
2. the most intereting thing;
visit relatives
3. get luck money
set off fireworks
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1. not only...but also...;
love and happiness;
关键词：
I enjoy the festival a lot because it’s very fun and meaningful.
2. enjoy... a lot;
meaningful
Ending
结尾：表明喜欢的原因和感受
我非常喜欢这个节日，因为它既有趣又有意义。
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and
春节不仅能让我们感受到爱与幸福，还能让我们明白家庭的重要性。
happiness, but also let us understand the importance of family.
the importance of...
Step 4: 成篇章→连句成篇
My favoutite Chinese Festival
_______________, there are many traditional festivals in China. I like_______ best. It is _______________Chinese traditional festivals.
It always _____________________________. ____________ for family members to _________. Before the festival, we always ______________and ____________________. Then, we ________________________. Because they _______________ good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we __________________. There is so much delicious food, _______________________.They all have different meanings. After dinner, we usually _____________________. What’s more, ________________________ during the festival. The most interesting thing is ____________. Children can ____________from the elders.
The Spring Festival can not only _______________, but also __________________. I enjoy the festival a lot because________________________.
Step 4: 成篇章→连句成篇
范文： My favoutite Chinese Festival
As is known to all(众所周知), there are many traditional festivals in China. I like the Spring Festival best. It is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals.
It always takes place on the first day of the first lunar month. It is a time for family members to get together. Before the festival, we always buy lots of food and clean our house to sweep away the bad luck. Then, we decorate(装饰) the room with red lanterns and the couplets. Because they stand for good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival(在春节前夕), we have a big meal with all family. There is so much delicious food, such as rice cakes, dumplings and so on.They all have different meanings. After dinner, we usually watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. What’s more, it’s a must to set off fireworks to welcome a new year during the festival. The most interesting thing is visiting relatives. Children can get lucky money from the elders.
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also let us understand the importance of family. I enjoy the festival a lot because it’s very fun and meaningful(有意义的).
评价标准 Yes No
1.格式、时态是否正确
2.主谓是否一致
3.要点是否齐全
4.人称是否正确
5.语序是否有问题
6.语言是否符合习惯
7.句子结构是否完整
8.固定短语是否恰当
9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
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1. 斜度
2. 字母形态
3. 字母比例
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