【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优沪教牛津版（含答案解析）
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优沪教牛津版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．俗话说，“无规矩不成方圆”。良好的家规，可以营造和谐的家庭氛围，使子女养成良好的生活习惯。假如你是李华，在下周的主题班会课上，你班将就“家规”展开讨论。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，向大家介绍你家的家规。内容包括：
1. 你在家中必须做的事情；
2. 你在家中不能做的事情；
3. 你的想法（观点）。
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含以上所有信息，可根据需要作适当的发挥。
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Every family has its own rules.
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2．假如你是英语校报的编辑李华老师，九年级学生王小明向校报的Problems&Advice栏目写了一封求助信，信中提及进入九年级以来所遇到的问题，如作业太多、考试压力大感到焦虑、无法平衡娱乐与学习的关系等问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，提出你的建议和解决方法。
内容要点：
● Show understanding ● Give advice 1. plan your homework time well 2. don’t stay up late 3. …● Hope
写作要求：
（1）包含表格的全部内容要点，可进行适当拓展；
（2）书写工整，80词左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Wang Xiaoming,
I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
3．假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的美国笔友Jack得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是他给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。
提示：
1. 潍坊被誉为“世界风筝之都”，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 制作需要竹子、纸、细绳等材料，形状有花、动物等，造型精美，色彩鲜艳；
3. 风筝过去用于送信，而现在用来娱乐和锻炼；
4. 每年4月，潍坊都会举办国际风筝节，吸引来自世界各地的风筝爱好者；
5. 风筝不仅是一件传统艺术品，也象征着人们对美好生活的祝愿。
要求：
1. 文章包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：世界风筝之都The Kite Capital of the World, 细绳string
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．体育运动在我们初中学生的生活中扮演非常重要的角色，它对我们的身体健康非常有益，同时有助于调节学习情绪和释放学习压力。现正值中考体育备考阶段，请以“The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你体育中考三个运动项目1000米/800米长跑、50米短跑、跳绳 (跳远、引体向上) 等备考训练情况。
提示：
1.谈谈你为什么进行这些项目的训练。
2.重点描述你每天训练这些体育项目的情况。
3.对于体育备考，谈谈你训练后的感受。
要求：
1.内容完整，语句通顺;
2.可适当发挥，行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等信息;
4.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：prepare (准备)，1,000-meter run (1000米长跑)，50-meter sprint (50米短跑)，rope skipping (跳绳)，standing long jump (立定跳远)，pull-up (引体向上)，endurance (耐力)，steady pace (匀速)，coordination (协调)，rhythm (节奏)，confident (自信的)
The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam
The PE test is very important for us,
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5．你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“我的家庭生活（My family life）”。请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.内容包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My family life
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6．为了建立新中国，无数中国人民曾在战火中浴血奋战；为了守护和平、捍卫家国，又有太多英雄儿女奔赴前线，无畏冲锋。今天，我们用英语来讲述这些英雄队伍中令人敬仰的一位——李延年。
1. 李延年是一位了不起的英雄，还获得了共和国勋章。
2. 他于1928年11月出生于河北省，在抗日战争时期，年轻的他就参军了。在1951年他参加了抗美援朝战争，他不顾危险带领士兵们夺回山头。凭无畏英勇，获得“一级英雄”称号。晚年，他常给青少年们讲战斗故事，还把珍贵的奖章捐给了博物馆。
3. 你认为……
参考词汇：1. 中国人民抗日战争：the Chinese people’s War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression 2. 抗美援朝战争：the War to Resist U.S. Aggression and Aid Korea 3. 一级：first-class
A hero in my heart—Li Yannian
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7．假设你是张明，你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统文化和自然保护很感兴趣。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍齐齐哈尔的鹤文化及相关保护措施。
提示：
1. 鹤文化：丹顶鹤是齐齐哈尔的象征，代表纯洁、忠诚和长寿，融入当地艺术、节日等；
2. 保护措施：建立自然保护区、治理污染、禁止捕猎、宣传环保理念；
3. 感受：鹤文化是城市灵魂，保护丹顶鹤就是保护城市文化，希望更多人参与。
要求：
4. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
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If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
8．健康是成长的基石，是幸福的源泉。假如你是张皓，你们学校将要举行“我的健康我做主”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇演讲稿，说说你是如何保持健康的。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数100词左右；开头已经给出，但不计入词数。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hao. It’s a great honor to stand here and share my ways to keep healthy. As we all know, …
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9．你的外国朋友Mike对中国文化很感兴趣，他在电子邮件里请你介绍一下你最喜爱的中国节日，你可以从以下几个方面写一份邮件回复他，100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
What’s your favorite festival When is it celebrated
What do people eat/do Why do you like it
Word bank: Chinese lunar calendar 中国农历
Dear Mike,
My favorite festival is
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Yours truly
Li Hua
10．假如你要向国际友人介绍中国传统艺术——剪纸。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1. Some information about paper cutting ... have a... history of...
... be used to...
... be put on...
2. How to make paper cutting be made of
Firstly, fold... into a certain shape. Secondly, draw a pattern on... paper. Finally, cut... with scissors.
3. The reasons why you want to introduce it ... a symbol of...
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce
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11．近期，学校英语报围绕“The biggest Challenges You Are Facing”这一主题进行了问卷调查，结果如下面饼状图所示。请根据以上图表信息，针对其中占比最高的两项挑战，写一篇短文提出你的建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80~100词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school newspaper did a survey about the biggest challenges for Grade 9 students, and here are the results.
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12．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据表格内容给他回一封信帮助他了解“中国红”。
地位 最能代表中国的颜色
意义 象征幸福，可以带来好运
使用场合 婚礼、春节等
载体 剪纸、灯笼、中国结、红包
要求：
1. 信件须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 80 词左右 (信件格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：stand for 代表；wedding 婚礼；Chinese knot 中国结；red packet 红包
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope I can help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．健康的生活习惯对青少年的成长至关重要。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
提示:1. A balanced diet. 2. Do exercise. 3. A good living habit.
要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右。
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14．近期，你校报社的小记者在校园采访时发现，不少同学午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食。这导致部分同学体重下降、体能变差，甚至在体育测试中感到吃力。基于上述现象，报社现以“Health and Growth”为主题发起征稿，请你撰写短文，投稿分享你的见解。
1.短文需包含征稿要求的三部分内容，并适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
Health and Growth
A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．你认为青少年应该被允许使用互联网吗 最近你和父母针对这个话题进行了讨论。请以“Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet ”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
（1）你父母的观点和理由；
（2）说说互联网在学习和生活中的实用性（至少两点）；
（3）倡导青少年正确使用互联网。
作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80左右；作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet
Recently, I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should use the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途有美丽的风景，也有困惑与烦恼。回首这两个月的初三时光， 你的好朋友Simon有一些困惑，请根据表格内容介绍Simon，并根据相应的问题给出你的建议。
Name Simon
Animal sign Tiger
Favorite colour yellow, because ……
Qualities confident, hard-working;
Problems * too much homework; * not enough sleep;
Advice ……
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Simon is my best friend.
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17．假如你是李辉，你的美国笔友琳达(Linda) 打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。
要点提示：1. 赴宴要准时，见面要微笑、握手；
2. 每次不要吃太多；
3. 当你吃饱时，对主人的劝菜应礼貌回拒；
4. 告别时，要对主人表示感谢。
要求：1. 内容包括所有提示要点，但不要逐词翻译；
2. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名等信息；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hui
18．“惑而不从师，其为惑也，终不解矣。”如今你是李辉，心中或许也萦绕着一句难以说出口的“我到底该怎么办？”——这困惑（如“学习压力”“朋友矛盾”“兴趣与学业平衡”等），如同一处他人看不见的暗礁，却是你每天都要航行其上的急流。请以此为题，给Aunt Linda写一封求助信。
内容包括：1.说明困惑；2.描述烦恼；3.礼貌求助。
注意：1.词数为80—100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hui
19．“惑而不从师，其为惑也，终不解矣。”假如你是李辉，心中或许也萦绕着一句难以说出口的“我到底该怎么办？”——这困惑（如‘学习压力’‘朋友矛盾’‘兴趣与学业平衡’等），如同一处他人看不见的暗礁，却是你每天都要航行其上的急流。请以此为题，给Aunt Linda写一封求助信。
内容包括：1. 说明困惑；2. 描述烦恼；3. 礼貌求助。
注意：1. 词数为80—100左右；开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hui
20．中国传统艺术具有独特的东方韵味。假如你是来自中国的交换生陈华，现就读于英国的一所学校，文化课上老师邀请各位同学分享自己国家的一项特色艺术。请你就此写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一项中国传统艺术；
2. 谈谈这项艺术对于中国人的意义。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hua from China. Today, I would like to introduce a traditional Chinese form of art to you.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Every family has its own rules. My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some rules for me.
Firstly, I must come back home as soon as the school is over. Secondly, I am not allowed to play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed, tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished.
I think I should be allowed to organize my own life. If so, I can do even better in my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括必须做的事情、不能做的事情以及个人想法，考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容，同时突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作背景，引出自己家的家规情况；
第二步，具体阐述家规内容；
第三步，谈谈个人的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb.对某人要求严格
②as soon as一……就……
③be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some rules for me.（并列句）
②If I break one of them, I will be punished.（条件状语从句）
2．
例文
Dear Wang Xiaoming,
I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper. I totally understand your feelings. Many students face similar problems in Grade 9. Here is my advice.
First, plan your homework time well. For example, finish difficult tasks first. Second, don’t stay up late. Enough sleep helps you study better. Third, try to relax by listening to music or doing sports. It can reduce your stress.
I hope my advice will help you. Stay positive and work hard!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，需包含理解、建议（三点）和希望，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头表明身份并表达理解，用简单句直接回应问题；
第二步：分点给出建议，使用序数词（First, Second, Third）使结构清晰，并补充第三点（放松方式）；
第三步：结尾表达希望和鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①totally完全地
②stay up熬夜
③stay positive保持积极
[高分句型]
①Many students face similar problems in Grade 9.（运用了简单句的主谓宾结构，清晰表达普遍性）
②Stay positive and work hard!（运用了祈使句，简洁有力地表达鼓励）
3．
例文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city. Weifang is known as The Kite Capital of the World with a history of over 2,000 years. Kites are usually made of bamboo, paper and string. They come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals, with bright colors. In the past, kites were used for sending messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here, attracting kite lovers from all over the world. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also symbolize people’s wishes for a better life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍潍坊风筝的地位和历史；
第二步、说明制作材料、形状及用途演变；
第三步、描述风筝节和象征意义。
[亮点词汇]
①is known as被称为
②be made of…由……制成
③not only…but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
In the past, kites were used for sending messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. (并列句)
4．
例文
The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam The PE test is very important for us, because it not only helps us stay healthy but also makes us feel relaxed. I am preparing for the 1,000-meter run, 50-meter sprint and rope skipping.
First, I run long distance every morning to improve my endurance. Then, I practice sprinting to increase my speed. After that, I do rope skipping to train my balance and rhythm.
Though it’s tiring, I feel stronger and more confident every day. I believe hard work will help me do well in the test.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需覆盖训练原因、项目描述、个人感受三部分，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明训练原因；
第二步：分项目描述训练内容；
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②prepare for为……准备
③balance平衡
[高分句型]
①The PE test is very important for us, because it not only helps us stay healthy but also makes us feel relaxed. (because引导原因状语从句)
②First, I run long distance every morning to improve my endurance. (不定式作目的状语)
③Though it’s tiring, I feel stronger and more confident every day. (运用though引导让步状语从句)
5．例文
My family life
There are three people in my family: my parents and me. We have a cozy apartment with a small bookshelf full of storybooks.
We often cook dinner together on weekends—my mom teaches me to make dumplings, and we chat while preparing food. It always makes me feel warm and loved.
Our family rule is “no phones during meals” to keep our talks lively. I think my family life is full of happiness, and I’m lucky to have such a sweet family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：材料所给提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明家庭成员及家庭物品；
第二步：详细描述常做的家庭活动及感受；
第三步：说明家庭规则并总结对家庭生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cozy舒适的
②prepare food准备食物
③lively热闹的
④happiness幸福
[高分句型]
①We often cook dinner together on weekends—my mom teaches me to make dumplings, and we chat while preparing food. (并列结构)
②Our family rule is “no phones during meals” to keep our talks lively. (动词不定式表目的)
6．例文：
A hero in my heart—Li Yannian
Li Yannian is a great hero who received the Medal of the Republic. He was born in Hebei in November 1928. During the Chinese people’s War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, he joined the army. In 1951, he fought bravely in the War to Resist U.S. Aggression and Aid Korea, leading soldiers to retake a hill. He was awarded the “first-class hero” title. Later, he told stories to young people and donated his precious medals to the museum.
I think he is brave and selfless. We should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕李延年的英雄事迹展开，包括出生、参军、战争成就、晚年活动，最后表达个人观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍李延年的英雄身份和基本背景（如获得勋章、出生信息）；
第二步，详细叙述他的主要经历，如参军和战争事迹；
第三步，表达个人观点和启示。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②tell stories to sb.给某人讲故事
③learn from sb.向某人学习
[高分句型]
①Li Yannian is a great hero who received the Medal of the Republic. (who引导定语从句)
②I think he is brave and selfless. (宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity. They are deeply integrated into local art, festivals and so on. To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting. We also promote environmental protection concepts to let more people join in.
Crane culture is the soul of the city. Protecting red-crowned cranes is protecting Qiqihar’s culture. I hope more people will take part in it and we should try our best to protect them.
If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“现在完成时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍鹤文化，说明其象征、意义及融入艺术节日；
第二步：详细描述保护措施；
第三步：表达感受，强调文化重要性，呼吁更多人参与保护。
[亮点词汇]
①purity纯洁
②loyalty忠诚
③longevity长寿
④the soul of the city城市的灵魂
[高分句型]
①Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity.（现在分词短语作后置定语）
②To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting.（动词不定式短语作目的状语）
8．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hao. It’s a great honor to stand here and share my ways to keep healthy. As we all know, health is the greatest wealth in life.
To keep my body strong, I eat healthily. I have plenty of vegetables and fruits every day. It is also important to exercise regularly, such as playing basketball and running. Besides, I make sure to get enough sleep every night.
Mental health is equally important. I always try to stay positive and talk to my parents or friends when I feel stressed. Moreover, I develop a habit of reading books, which helps me relax and learn new things.
Remember, a healthy body and a peaceful mind are the real wealth that no one can take away.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明健康的重要性；
第二步：从身体和心理两方面阐述如何保持健康；
第三步：总结全文，重申健康的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①wealth财富
②plenty of大量，许多
③make sure确保
④positive积极的
[高分句型]
①It is also important to exercise regularly, such as playing basketball and running. (it作形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语)
②Moreover, I develop a habit of reading books, which helps me relax and learn new things. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③Remember, a healthy body and a peaceful mind are the real wealth that no one can take away. (that引导限制性定语从句)
9．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. Before the festival, people usually clean their houses and buy new clothes for a new year’s coming. On the eve, family members get together and have a big dinner. We usually have dumplings, fish and a great many dishes.
On the first day of our New Year, people wear new clothes, visit relatives and friends and express best wishes. Children may receive red packets filled with “lucky” money. That’s one of my favorite parts of this festival.
It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives. It makes me feel very warm and happy!
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者最喜欢的传统节日；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍该节日的相关内容；
第三步，书写结语。总结并说明作者喜欢该节日的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 聚在一起，相聚
②have dinner 吃晚餐
③enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
④spend time with sb. 与某人共度时光
⑤make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calender. (一般现在时的被动语态)
②Children may receive red packets filled with “lucky” money. (过去分词作后置定语)
③It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives. (because引导原因状语从句)
10．例文
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce a traditional Chinese art—paper cutting to you.
Paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. It is usually made of red paper and is used to decorate homes during festivals and celebrations. People often put paper cuttings on windows, doors, and walls.
Do you know how to make paper cutting Firstly, fold a piece of red paper into a certain shape. Secondly, draw a pattern on the folded paper. Finally, cut the paper along the pattern with scissors. Then a beautiful paper cutting is done.
I want to introduce it because paper cutting is a symbol of good luck and happiness in Chinese culture. It’s a part of Chinese history.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：语句通顺，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明要介绍的传统艺术——剪纸；
第二步：分别介绍剪纸的历史、用途等信息；
第三步：介绍如何制作剪纸；
第四步：说明介绍剪纸的理由；
第五步：书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①a piece of red paper一张红纸
②good luck好运
③a part of……的一部分
[高分句型]
①I want to introduce it because paper cutting is a symbol of good luck and happiness in Chinese culture.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．例文
Our school newspaper did a survey about the biggest challenges for Grade 9 students, and here are the results. The two biggest problems are having too much stress and having too little time.
First, we need to learn to relax. When you feel stressed, it is helpful to talk to your parents or close friends about your worries. Also, doing some sports like running or playing basketball, or even listening to your favorite music can help you clear your mind and feel better. Second, manage our time wisely. We should make a practical study plan for each week, listing all the tasks we need to do.
By taking these steps, we will become better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，描述主要的两项挑战；
第二步，针对性给出自己的建议；
第三步，给出鼓励，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②too much太多
[高分句型]
①When you feel stressed, it is helpful to talk to your parents or close friends about your worries.（时间状语从句，it is adj to do sth固定句型）
②Also, doing some sports like running or playing basketball, or even listening to your favorite music can help you clear your mind and feel better.（动名词作主语）
12．例文
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
Chinese red is a symbolic color in China and very popular among Chinese people. It usually means happiness and we believe it can bring good luck.
We use many red things in important events. For example, brides wear red wedding dresses and wedding rooms are decorated with red items. During Spring Festival, houses have red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese knots. Children also get red packets for good wishes. Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope I can help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格内容”中关于中国红的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头已给出，为下文介绍中国红作铺垫；
第二步：具体介绍中国红，包括其象征意义、在重要事件中的运用等内容；
第三步：总结全文，希望帮助对方更好地理解中国红。
[亮点词汇]
①symbolic color象征性颜色
②bring good luck带来好运
③red wedding dresses红色婚纱
④plays an important role扮演重要角色
⑤enjoys the highest popularity享有最高人气
[高分句型]
①It usually means happiness and we believe it can bring good luck. (and连接两个并列的宾语从句，结构清晰。)
②Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. (plays an important role“扮演重要角色”)
13．
例文
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. Here is my advice.
First, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, do exercise every day, such as running or playing basketball, to keep us energetic. Third, form a good living habit. Go to bed early and get enough sleep.
In a word, if we follow these steps, we will be healthier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖均衡饮食、锻炼、良好生活习惯三点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出健康生活方式的重要性；
第二步，分三点展开，分别对应提示内容，并补充具体建议（如多吃蔬果、运动类型、早睡）；
第三步，总结全文，强调遵循建议的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡饮食
②energetic精力充沛的
③essential必不可少的
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to have a healthy lifestyle.（it固定句式）
②In a word, if we follow these steps, we will be healthier and happier.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．One possible version
Health and Growth
A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. They rely on instant noodles, bread and snacks.
This unhealthy habit causes big problems. First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker. Second, they often feel tired in PE tests and even struggle to finish basic sports tasks.
To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice. Besides, we can prepare homemade lunches to ensure freshness. What’s more, we should join nutrition lectures to learn more about healthy eating. Let’s choose health for better growth!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明校园现象：用学校调查结果引出许多学生午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食的不健康选择；
第二步，阐述不良影响：说明该习惯导致学生不健康减重、体能下降，以及体育测试难以完成基础任务的问题；
第三步，提出解决办法：从均衡饮食、自备午餐、参加营养讲座三方面给出建议，呼吁重视健康。
[亮点词汇]
①unhealthy choices不健康的选择
②physical strength体能
③balanced meals均衡饮食
④nutrition lectures营养讲座
[高分句型]
①First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker.（and并列句）
②To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice.（不定式作目的状语）
15．范文：
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet
Recently, I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should use the Internet.
My parents worry that it might expose us to unhealthy information or cause addiction. However, I believe the Internet is a useful tool when used properly. Firstly, it helps us study by providing rich learning resources and online courses. Secondly, it makes daily life more convenient, such as allowing us to read news and connect with friends.
Therefore, teenagers should be guided to use the Internet correctly. We can set time limits, choose positive content, and balance online and offline activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需包含父母观点、互联网实用性及正确使用倡导。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述父母担忧的理由；
第二步，阐述互联网的积极用途；
第三步，提出正确使用互联网的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①expose...to...使……暴露于……
②cause addiction导致上瘾
③learning resources学习资源
④set time limits设定时间限制
[高分句型]
①However, I believe the Internet is a useful tool when used properly. (省略句，相当于when it is used properly)
②Therefore, teenagers should be guided to use the Internet correctly. (被动语态表示建议)
16．
例文：
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he’s always been confident and hard-working. His favorite color is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the sun. However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really tough for him. He’s swamped with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn’t get enough sleep. I suggest he manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍朋友Simon的情况并给出建议；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括Simon的基本信息、性格、喜好、面临的问题以及给出的建议，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过介绍Simon是自己的好朋友来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生肖、性格、喜好、面临的问题以及给出的建议”几个方面重点介绍Simon的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。希望Simon能够采纳建议，改善现状。
[亮点词汇]
①be swamped with忙于做……，被……淹没
②leave sb. little time to do sth.让某人几乎没有时间做某事
③unwind放松
[高分句型]
①His favorite color is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the sun.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I suggest he manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
17．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It’s good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth. When you are full, but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say “Thank you. It’s delicious, but I’m full.” It’s polite to say thanks while leaving. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③ 提示：考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以“得知对方要来度假”开篇，引出“不同国家有不同礼仪”的主题；
第二步，按“赴宴前—用餐中—用餐后”的顺序，分点介绍中国的餐桌礼仪（准时赴约、用餐举止、吃饱后的回应等）；
第三步，以“旅途愉快”的祝福收尾。
[亮点词汇]
① table manners 餐桌礼仪
② help yourself 请自便
③ polite to… 对……有礼貌
[高分句型]
① In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile.（含有条件状语从句的复合句）
② It’s good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth.（不定式短语作目的状语）
18．例文
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m struggling with balancing my schoolwork and my hobby.
I really love playing the piano, which helps me relax. However, I have a lot of homework every day, especially in math, which I find quite challenging. I feel stuck because when I practice piano, I worry about my studies. But if I only study, I feel tired and unhappy. I don’t know how to manage my time well to enjoy both.
Could you please give me some advice I would really appreciate your valuable suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌问候并直接说明困惑；
第二步，具体描述烦恼的表现；
第三步，礼貌请求建议并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①balance使保持平衡
②challenging具有挑战性的
③appreciate感谢
[高分句型]
①I really love playing the piano, which helps me relax.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②But if I only study, I feel tired and unhappy.(if引导的条件状语从句)
19．例文
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to ask for your help because I’m stuck in some troubles.
I feel great pressure from my studies—there are too many tasks every day and I can’t keep up with my classmates. Also, I had a fight with my best friend and we haven’t talked for a few days. Besides, I can’t balance my hobby of drawing with my schoolwork. I’m so confused and don’t know what to do.
Could you give me some advice I’d really appreciate it.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：书信作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山说明困惑，直接点题；
第二步：具体描述烦恼；
第三步：礼貌请求帮助，表达感谢，符合书信礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for请求
②too many太多
③keep up with跟上
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to ask for your help because I’m stuck in some troubles.（原因状语从句）
②Also, I had a fight with my best friend and we haven’t talked for a few days.（and连接两个句子）
20．例文
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hua from China. Today, I would like to introduce a traditional Chinese form of art to you. It is called paper cutting.
Paper cutting has a long history in China. It is mainly used for celebration or decoration. During the Spring Festival, Chinese people always put paper cuttings on doors and windows. It is a symbol of good luck and a happy New Year.
For Chinese people, paper cutting carries our wishes. It reflects our love for beauty and our hope for a better life. It is a vivid expression of Chinese culture.
I hope you will enjoy our traditional Chinese art.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据内容提示写作，不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，点明要介绍剪纸；
第二步：介绍剪纸的历史、用途及其代表的含义；
第三步：介绍剪纸反映了中国人对美的热爱和对美好生活的希望；
第四步：表达“大家喜欢中国传统艺术”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① has a long history 有着悠久的历史
② a symbol of ……的象征
③ carries our wishes 承载着我们的愿望
④ our hope for a better life 我们对美好生活的希望
[高分句型]
① It is mainly used for celebration or decoration. (一般现在时的被动语态)
② I hope you will enjoy our traditional Chinese art. (省略that的宾语从句)
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优沪教牛津版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．俗话说，“无规矩不成方圆”。良好的家规，可以营造和谐的家庭氛围，使子女养成良好的生活习惯。假如你是李华，在下周的主题班会课上，你班将就“家规”展开讨论。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，向大家介绍你家的家规。内容包括：
1. 你在家中必须做的事情；
2. 你在家中不能做的事情；
3. 你的想法（观点）。
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含以上所有信息，可根据需要作适当的发挥。
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Every family has its own rules.
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2．假如你是英语校报的编辑李华老师，九年级学生王小明向校报的Problems&Advice栏目写了一封求助信，信中提及进入九年级以来所遇到的问题，如作业太多、考试压力大感到焦虑、无法平衡娱乐与学习的关系等问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，提出你的建议和解决方法。
内容要点：
● Show understanding ● Give advice 1. plan your homework time well 2. don’t stay up late 3. …● Hope
写作要求：
（1）包含表格的全部内容要点，可进行适当拓展；
（2）书写工整，80词左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Wang Xiaoming,
I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
3．假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的美国笔友Jack得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是他给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。
提示：
1. 潍坊被誉为“世界风筝之都”，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 制作需要竹子、纸、细绳等材料，形状有花、动物等，造型精美，色彩鲜艳；
3. 风筝过去用于送信，而现在用来娱乐和锻炼；
4. 每年4月，潍坊都会举办国际风筝节，吸引来自世界各地的风筝爱好者；
5. 风筝不仅是一件传统艺术品，也象征着人们对美好生活的祝愿。
要求：
1. 文章包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：世界风筝之都The Kite Capital of the World, 细绳string
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．体育运动在我们初中学生的生活中扮演非常重要的角色，它对我们的身体健康非常有益，同时有助于调节学习情绪和释放学习压力。现正值中考体育备考阶段，请以“The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你体育中考三个运动项目1000米/800米长跑、50米短跑、跳绳 (跳远、引体向上) 等备考训练情况。
提示：
1.谈谈你为什么进行这些项目的训练。
2.重点描述你每天训练这些体育项目的情况。
3.对于体育备考，谈谈你训练后的感受。
要求：
1.内容完整，语句通顺;
2.可适当发挥，行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等信息;
4.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：prepare (准备)，1,000-meter run (1000米长跑)，50-meter sprint (50米短跑)，rope skipping (跳绳)，standing long jump (立定跳远)，pull-up (引体向上)，endurance (耐力)，steady pace (匀速)，coordination (协调)，rhythm (节奏)，confident (自信的)
The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam
The PE test is very important for us,
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5．你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“我的家庭生活（My family life）”。请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.内容包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My family life
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6．为了建立新中国，无数中国人民曾在战火中浴血奋战；为了守护和平、捍卫家国，又有太多英雄儿女奔赴前线，无畏冲锋。今天，我们用英语来讲述这些英雄队伍中令人敬仰的一位——李延年。
1. 李延年是一位了不起的英雄，还获得了共和国勋章。
2. 他于1928年11月出生于河北省，在抗日战争时期，年轻的他就参军了。在1951年他参加了抗美援朝战争，他不顾危险带领士兵们夺回山头。凭无畏英勇，获得“一级英雄”称号。晚年，他常给青少年们讲战斗故事，还把珍贵的奖章捐给了博物馆。
3. 你认为……
参考词汇：1. 中国人民抗日战争：the Chinese people’s War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression 2. 抗美援朝战争：the War to Resist U.S. Aggression and Aid Korea 3. 一级：first-class
A hero in my heart—Li Yannian
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7．假设你是张明，你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统文化和自然保护很感兴趣。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍齐齐哈尔的鹤文化及相关保护措施。
提示：
1. 鹤文化：丹顶鹤是齐齐哈尔的象征，代表纯洁、忠诚和长寿，融入当地艺术、节日等；
2. 保护措施：建立自然保护区、治理污染、禁止捕猎、宣传环保理念；
3. 感受：鹤文化是城市灵魂，保护丹顶鹤就是保护城市文化，希望更多人参与。
要求：
4. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
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If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
8．健康是成长的基石，是幸福的源泉。假如你是张皓，你们学校将要举行“我的健康我做主”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇演讲稿，说说你是如何保持健康的。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数100词左右；开头已经给出，但不计入词数。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hao. It’s a great honor to stand here and share my ways to keep healthy. As we all know, …
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9．你的外国朋友Mike对中国文化很感兴趣，他在电子邮件里请你介绍一下你最喜爱的中国节日，你可以从以下几个方面写一份邮件回复他，100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
What’s your favorite festival When is it celebrated
What do people eat/do Why do you like it
Word bank: Chinese lunar calendar 中国农历
Dear Mike,
My favorite festival is
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Yours truly
Li Hua
10．假如你要向国际友人介绍中国传统艺术——剪纸。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1. Some information about paper cutting ... have a... history of...
... be used to...
... be put on...
2. How to make paper cutting be made of
Firstly, fold... into a certain shape. Secondly, draw a pattern on... paper. Finally, cut... with scissors.
3. The reasons why you want to introduce it ... a symbol of...
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce
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11．近期，学校英语报围绕“The biggest Challenges You Are Facing”这一主题进行了问卷调查，结果如下面饼状图所示。请根据以上图表信息，针对其中占比最高的两项挑战，写一篇短文提出你的建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80~100词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school newspaper did a survey about the biggest challenges for Grade 9 students, and here are the results.
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12．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据表格内容给他回一封信帮助他了解“中国红”。
地位 最能代表中国的颜色
意义 象征幸福，可以带来好运
使用场合 婚礼、春节等
载体 剪纸、灯笼、中国结、红包
要求：
1. 信件须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 80 词左右 (信件格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：stand for 代表；wedding 婚礼；Chinese knot 中国结；red packet 红包
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope I can help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．健康的生活习惯对青少年的成长至关重要。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
提示:1. A balanced diet. 2. Do exercise. 3. A good living habit.
要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右。
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14．近期，你校报社的小记者在校园采访时发现，不少同学午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食。这导致部分同学体重下降、体能变差，甚至在体育测试中感到吃力。基于上述现象，报社现以“Health and Growth”为主题发起征稿，请你撰写短文，投稿分享你的见解。
1.短文需包含征稿要求的三部分内容，并适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
Health and Growth
A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．你认为青少年应该被允许使用互联网吗 最近你和父母针对这个话题进行了讨论。请以“Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet ”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
（1）你父母的观点和理由；
（2）说说互联网在学习和生活中的实用性（至少两点）；
（3）倡导青少年正确使用互联网。
作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80左右；作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet
Recently, I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should use the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途有美丽的风景，也有困惑与烦恼。回首这两个月的初三时光， 你的好朋友Simon有一些困惑，请根据表格内容介绍Simon，并根据相应的问题给出你的建议。
Name Simon
Animal sign Tiger
Favorite colour yellow, because ……
Qualities confident, hard-working;
Problems * too much homework; * not enough sleep;
Advice ……
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Simon is my best friend.
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17．假如你是李辉，你的美国笔友琳达(Linda) 打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。
要点提示：1. 赴宴要准时，见面要微笑、握手；
2. 每次不要吃太多；
3. 当你吃饱时，对主人的劝菜应礼貌回拒；
4. 告别时，要对主人表示感谢。
要求：1. 内容包括所有提示要点，但不要逐词翻译；
2. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名等信息；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hui
18．“惑而不从师，其为惑也，终不解矣。”如今你是李辉，心中或许也萦绕着一句难以说出口的“我到底该怎么办？”——这困惑（如“学习压力”“朋友矛盾”“兴趣与学业平衡”等），如同一处他人看不见的暗礁，却是你每天都要航行其上的急流。请以此为题，给Aunt Linda写一封求助信。
内容包括：1.说明困惑；2.描述烦恼；3.礼貌求助。
注意：1.词数为80—100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hui
19．“惑而不从师，其为惑也，终不解矣。”假如你是李辉，心中或许也萦绕着一句难以说出口的“我到底该怎么办？”——这困惑（如‘学习压力’‘朋友矛盾’‘兴趣与学业平衡’等），如同一处他人看不见的暗礁，却是你每天都要航行其上的急流。请以此为题，给Aunt Linda写一封求助信。
内容包括：1. 说明困惑；2. 描述烦恼；3. 礼貌求助。
注意：1. 词数为80—100左右；开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
20．中国传统艺术具有独特的东方韵味。假如你是来自中国的交换生陈华，现就读于英国的一所学校，文化课上老师邀请各位同学分享自己国家的一项特色艺术。请你就此写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一项中国传统艺术；
2. 谈谈这项艺术对于中国人的意义。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hua from China. Today, I would like to introduce a traditional Chinese form of art to you.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Every family has its own rules. My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some rules for me.
Firstly, I must come back home as soon as the school is over. Secondly, I am not allowed to play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed, tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished.
I think I should be allowed to organize my own life. If so, I can do even better in my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括必须做的事情、不能做的事情以及个人想法，考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容，同时突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作背景，引出自己家的家规情况；
第二步，具体阐述家规内容；
第三步，谈谈个人的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb.对某人要求严格
②as soon as一……就……
③be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some rules for me.（并列句）
②If I break one of them, I will be punished.（条件状语从句）
2．
例文
Dear Wang Xiaoming,
I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper. I totally understand your feelings. Many students face similar problems in Grade 9. Here is my advice.
First, plan your homework time well. For example, finish difficult tasks first. Second, don’t stay up late. Enough sleep helps you study better. Third, try to relax by listening to music or doing sports. It can reduce your stress.
I hope my advice will help you. Stay positive and work hard!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，需包含理解、建议（三点）和希望，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头表明身份并表达理解，用简单句直接回应问题；
第二步：分点给出建议，使用序数词（First, Second, Third）使结构清晰，并补充第三点（放松方式）；
第三步：结尾表达希望和鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①totally完全地
②stay up熬夜
③stay positive保持积极
[高分句型]
①Many students face similar problems in Grade 9.（运用了简单句的主谓宾结构，清晰表达普遍性）
②Stay positive and work hard!（运用了祈使句，简洁有力地表达鼓励）
3．
例文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city. Weifang is known as The Kite Capital of the World with a history of over 2,000 years. Kites are usually made of bamboo, paper and string. They come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals, with bright colors. In the past, kites were used for sending messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here, attracting kite lovers from all over the world. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also symbolize people’s wishes for a better life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍潍坊风筝的地位和历史；
第二步、说明制作材料、形状及用途演变；
第三步、描述风筝节和象征意义。
[亮点词汇]
①is known as被称为
②be made of…由……制成
③not only…but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
In the past, kites were used for sending messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. (并列句)
4．
例文
The PE Test For The High School Entrance Exam The PE test is very important for us, because it not only helps us stay healthy but also makes us feel relaxed. I am preparing for the 1,000-meter run, 50-meter sprint and rope skipping.
First, I run long distance every morning to improve my endurance. Then, I practice sprinting to increase my speed. After that, I do rope skipping to train my balance and rhythm.
Though it’s tiring, I feel stronger and more confident every day. I believe hard work will help me do well in the test.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需覆盖训练原因、项目描述、个人感受三部分，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明训练原因；
第二步：分项目描述训练内容；
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②prepare for为……准备
③balance平衡
[高分句型]
①The PE test is very important for us, because it not only helps us stay healthy but also makes us feel relaxed. (because引导原因状语从句)
②First, I run long distance every morning to improve my endurance. (不定式作目的状语)
③Though it’s tiring, I feel stronger and more confident every day. (运用though引导让步状语从句)
5．例文
My family life
There are three people in my family: my parents and me. We have a cozy apartment with a small bookshelf full of storybooks.
We often cook dinner together on weekends—my mom teaches me to make dumplings, and we chat while preparing food. It always makes me feel warm and loved.
Our family rule is “no phones during meals” to keep our talks lively. I think my family life is full of happiness, and I’m lucky to have such a sweet family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：材料所给提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明家庭成员及家庭物品；
第二步：详细描述常做的家庭活动及感受；
第三步：说明家庭规则并总结对家庭生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cozy舒适的
②prepare food准备食物
③lively热闹的
④happiness幸福
[高分句型]
①We often cook dinner together on weekends—my mom teaches me to make dumplings, and we chat while preparing food. (并列结构)
②Our family rule is “no phones during meals” to keep our talks lively. (动词不定式表目的)
6．例文：
A hero in my heart—Li Yannian
Li Yannian is a great hero who received the Medal of the Republic. He was born in Hebei in November 1928. During the Chinese people’s War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, he joined the army. In 1951, he fought bravely in the War to Resist U.S. Aggression and Aid Korea, leading soldiers to retake a hill. He was awarded the “first-class hero” title. Later, he told stories to young people and donated his precious medals to the museum.
I think he is brave and selfless. We should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕李延年的英雄事迹展开，包括出生、参军、战争成就、晚年活动，最后表达个人观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍李延年的英雄身份和基本背景（如获得勋章、出生信息）；
第二步，详细叙述他的主要经历，如参军和战争事迹；
第三步，表达个人观点和启示。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②tell stories to sb.给某人讲故事
③learn from sb.向某人学习
[高分句型]
①Li Yannian is a great hero who received the Medal of the Republic. (who引导定语从句)
②I think he is brave and selfless. (宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity. They are deeply integrated into local art, festivals and so on. To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting. We also promote environmental protection concepts to let more people join in.
Crane culture is the soul of the city. Protecting red-crowned cranes is protecting Qiqihar’s culture. I hope more people will take part in it and we should try our best to protect them.
If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“现在完成时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍鹤文化，说明其象征、意义及融入艺术节日；
第二步：详细描述保护措施；
第三步：表达感受，强调文化重要性，呼吁更多人参与保护。
[亮点词汇]
①purity纯洁
②loyalty忠诚
③longevity长寿
④the soul of the city城市的灵魂
[高分句型]
①Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity.（现在分词短语作后置定语）
②To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting.（动词不定式短语作目的状语）
8．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hao. It’s a great honor to stand here and share my ways to keep healthy. As we all know, health is the greatest wealth in life.
To keep my body strong, I eat healthily. I have plenty of vegetables and fruits every day. It is also important to exercise regularly, such as playing basketball and running. Besides, I make sure to get enough sleep every night.
Mental health is equally important. I always try to stay positive and talk to my parents or friends when I feel stressed. Moreover, I develop a habit of reading books, which helps me relax and learn new things.
Remember, a healthy body and a peaceful mind are the real wealth that no one can take away.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明健康的重要性；
第二步：从身体和心理两方面阐述如何保持健康；
第三步：总结全文，重申健康的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①wealth财富
②plenty of大量，许多
③make sure确保
④positive积极的
[高分句型]
①It is also important to exercise regularly, such as playing basketball and running. (it作形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语)
②Moreover, I develop a habit of reading books, which helps me relax and learn new things. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③Remember, a healthy body and a peaceful mind are the real wealth that no one can take away. (that引导限制性定语从句)
9．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. Before the festival, people usually clean their houses and buy new clothes for a new year’s coming. On the eve, family members get together and have a big dinner. We usually have dumplings, fish and a great many dishes.
On the first day of our New Year, people wear new clothes, visit relatives and friends and express best wishes. Children may receive red packets filled with “lucky” money. That’s one of my favorite parts of this festival.
It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives. It makes me feel very warm and happy!
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者最喜欢的传统节日；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍该节日的相关内容；
第三步，书写结语。总结并说明作者喜欢该节日的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 聚在一起，相聚
②have dinner 吃晚餐
③enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
④spend time with sb. 与某人共度时光
⑤make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calender. (一般现在时的被动语态)
②Children may receive red packets filled with “lucky” money. (过去分词作后置定语)
③It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives. (because引导原因状语从句)
10．例文
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce a traditional Chinese art—paper cutting to you.
Paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. It is usually made of red paper and is used to decorate homes during festivals and celebrations. People often put paper cuttings on windows, doors, and walls.
Do you know how to make paper cutting Firstly, fold a piece of red paper into a certain shape. Secondly, draw a pattern on the folded paper. Finally, cut the paper along the pattern with scissors. Then a beautiful paper cutting is done.
I want to introduce it because paper cutting is a symbol of good luck and happiness in Chinese culture. It’s a part of Chinese history.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：语句通顺，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明要介绍的传统艺术——剪纸；
第二步：分别介绍剪纸的历史、用途等信息；
第三步：介绍如何制作剪纸；
第四步：说明介绍剪纸的理由；
第五步：书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①a piece of red paper一张红纸
②good luck好运
③a part of……的一部分
[高分句型]
①I want to introduce it because paper cutting is a symbol of good luck and happiness in Chinese culture.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．例文
Our school newspaper did a survey about the biggest challenges for Grade 9 students, and here are the results. The two biggest problems are having too much stress and having too little time.
First, we need to learn to relax. When you feel stressed, it is helpful to talk to your parents or close friends about your worries. Also, doing some sports like running or playing basketball, or even listening to your favorite music can help you clear your mind and feel better. Second, manage our time wisely. We should make a practical study plan for each week, listing all the tasks we need to do.
By taking these steps, we will become better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，描述主要的两项挑战；
第二步，针对性给出自己的建议；
第三步，给出鼓励，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②too much太多
[高分句型]
①When you feel stressed, it is helpful to talk to your parents or close friends about your worries.（时间状语从句，it is adj to do sth固定句型）
②Also, doing some sports like running or playing basketball, or even listening to your favorite music can help you clear your mind and feel better.（动名词作主语）
12．例文
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
Chinese red is a symbolic color in China and very popular among Chinese people. It usually means happiness and we believe it can bring good luck.
We use many red things in important events. For example, brides wear red wedding dresses and wedding rooms are decorated with red items. During Spring Festival, houses have red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese knots. Children also get red packets for good wishes. Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope I can help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格内容”中关于中国红的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头已给出，为下文介绍中国红作铺垫；
第二步：具体介绍中国红，包括其象征意义、在重要事件中的运用等内容；
第三步：总结全文，希望帮助对方更好地理解中国红。
[亮点词汇]
①symbolic color象征性颜色
②bring good luck带来好运
③red wedding dresses红色婚纱
④plays an important role扮演重要角色
⑤enjoys the highest popularity享有最高人气
[高分句型]
①It usually means happiness and we believe it can bring good luck. (and连接两个并列的宾语从句，结构清晰。)
②Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. (plays an important role“扮演重要角色”)
13．
例文
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. Here is my advice.
First, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, do exercise every day, such as running or playing basketball, to keep us energetic. Third, form a good living habit. Go to bed early and get enough sleep.
In a word, if we follow these steps, we will be healthier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖均衡饮食、锻炼、良好生活习惯三点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出健康生活方式的重要性；
第二步，分三点展开，分别对应提示内容，并补充具体建议（如多吃蔬果、运动类型、早睡）；
第三步，总结全文，强调遵循建议的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡饮食
②energetic精力充沛的
③essential必不可少的
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to have a healthy lifestyle.（it固定句式）
②In a word, if we follow these steps, we will be healthier and happier.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．One possible version
Health and Growth
A recent school survey has found that many students make unhealthy choices for lunch. They rely on instant noodles, bread and snacks.
This unhealthy habit causes big problems. First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker. Second, they often feel tired in PE tests and even struggle to finish basic sports tasks.
To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice. Besides, we can prepare homemade lunches to ensure freshness. What’s more, we should join nutrition lectures to learn more about healthy eating. Let’s choose health for better growth!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明校园现象：用学校调查结果引出许多学生午餐依赖泡面、面包和零食的不健康选择；
第二步，阐述不良影响：说明该习惯导致学生不健康减重、体能下降，以及体育测试难以完成基础任务的问题；
第三步，提出解决办法：从均衡饮食、自备午餐、参加营养讲座三方面给出建议，呼吁重视健康。
[亮点词汇]
①unhealthy choices不健康的选择
②physical strength体能
③balanced meals均衡饮食
④nutrition lectures营养讲座
[高分句型]
①First, some students lose weight in an unhealthy way and their physical strength becomes weaker.（and并列句）
②To improve this, we should have balanced meals with vegetables, lean meat and rice.（不定式作目的状语）
15．范文：
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Use the Internet
Recently, I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should use the Internet.
My parents worry that it might expose us to unhealthy information or cause addiction. However, I believe the Internet is a useful tool when used properly. Firstly, it helps us study by providing rich learning resources and online courses. Secondly, it makes daily life more convenient, such as allowing us to read news and connect with friends.
Therefore, teenagers should be guided to use the Internet correctly. We can set time limits, choose positive content, and balance online and offline activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需包含父母观点、互联网实用性及正确使用倡导。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述父母担忧的理由；
第二步，阐述互联网的积极用途；
第三步，提出正确使用互联网的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①expose...to...使……暴露于……
②cause addiction导致上瘾
③learning resources学习资源
④set time limits设定时间限制
[高分句型]
①However, I believe the Internet is a useful tool when used properly. (省略句，相当于when it is used properly)
②Therefore, teenagers should be guided to use the Internet correctly. (被动语态表示建议)
16．
例文：
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he’s always been confident and hard-working. His favorite color is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the sun. However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really tough for him. He’s swamped with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn’t get enough sleep. I suggest he manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍朋友Simon的情况并给出建议；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括Simon的基本信息、性格、喜好、面临的问题以及给出的建议，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过介绍Simon是自己的好朋友来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生肖、性格、喜好、面临的问题以及给出的建议”几个方面重点介绍Simon的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。希望Simon能够采纳建议，改善现状。
[亮点词汇]
①be swamped with忙于做……，被……淹没
②leave sb. little time to do sth.让某人几乎没有时间做某事
③unwind放松
[高分句型]
①His favorite color is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the sun.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I suggest he manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
17．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It’s good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth. When you are full, but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say “Thank you. It’s delicious, but I’m full.” It’s polite to say thanks while leaving. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③ 提示：考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以“得知对方要来度假”开篇，引出“不同国家有不同礼仪”的主题；
第二步，按“赴宴前—用餐中—用餐后”的顺序，分点介绍中国的餐桌礼仪（准时赴约、用餐举止、吃饱后的回应等）；
第三步，以“旅途愉快”的祝福收尾。
[亮点词汇]
① table manners 餐桌礼仪
② help yourself 请自便
③ polite to… 对……有礼貌
[高分句型]
① In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile.（含有条件状语从句的复合句）
② It’s good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth.（不定式短语作目的状语）
18．例文
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m struggling with balancing my schoolwork and my hobby.
I really love playing the piano, which helps me relax. However, I have a lot of homework every day, especially in math, which I find quite challenging. I feel stuck because when I practice piano, I worry about my studies. But if I only study, I feel tired and unhappy. I don’t know how to manage my time well to enjoy both.
Could you please give me some advice I would really appreciate your valuable suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌问候并直接说明困惑；
第二步，具体描述烦恼的表现；
第三步，礼貌请求建议并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①balance使保持平衡
②challenging具有挑战性的
③appreciate感谢
[高分句型]
①I really love playing the piano, which helps me relax.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②But if I only study, I feel tired and unhappy.(if引导的条件状语从句)
19．例文
Dear Aunt Linda,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to ask for your help because I’m stuck in some troubles.
I feel great pressure from my studies—there are too many tasks every day and I can’t keep up with my classmates. Also, I had a fight with my best friend and we haven’t talked for a few days. Besides, I can’t balance my hobby of drawing with my schoolwork. I’m so confused and don’t know what to do.
Could you give me some advice I’d really appreciate it.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：书信作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山说明困惑，直接点题；
第二步：具体描述烦恼；
第三步：礼貌请求帮助，表达感谢，符合书信礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for请求
②too many太多
③keep up with跟上
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to ask for your help because I’m stuck in some troubles.（原因状语从句）
②Also, I had a fight with my best friend and we haven’t talked for a few days.（and连接两个句子）
20．例文
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hua from China. Today, I would like to introduce a traditional Chinese form of art to you. It is called paper cutting.
Paper cutting has a long history in China. It is mainly used for celebration or decoration. During the Spring Festival, Chinese people always put paper cuttings on doors and windows. It is a symbol of good luck and a happy New Year.
For Chinese people, paper cutting carries our wishes. It reflects our love for beauty and our hope for a better life. It is a vivid expression of Chinese culture.
I hope you will enjoy our traditional Chinese art.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据内容提示写作，不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，点明要介绍剪纸；
第二步：介绍剪纸的历史、用途及其代表的含义；
第三步：介绍剪纸反映了中国人对美的热爱和对美好生活的希望；
第四步：表达“大家喜欢中国传统艺术”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① has a long history 有着悠久的历史
② a symbol of ……的象征
③ carries our wishes 承载着我们的愿望
④ our hope for a better life 我们对美好生活的希望
[高分句型]
① It is mainly used for celebration or decoration. (一般现在时的被动语态)
② I hope you will enjoy our traditional Chinese art. (省略that的宾语从句)
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