【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优仁爱科普版（含答案解析）
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优仁爱科普版专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．发明深刻地改变了世界和我们的生活。在这些智慧成果的推动下，我们的生活正变得 越来越便利和舒适。请你根据表格信息，以“The Most Useful Invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者、手机的用途 (至少三个)，并谈一谈作为青少年应该如何合理地使用手机。
Invention Inventor Time Usage(用途) Your opinions
Mobile phone American, Martin Cooper 1973 1. communicate with people 2. …… 3. …… ...
要求：
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数：不少于70。
The Most Useful Invention
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2．学好英语的条件之一是科学的方法。请你以“The Change(s) in My English Learning Way(s)”为主题，写一篇短文向英语杂志社投稿。
内容：
1. 你英语学习方法有什么变化；
2. 学习方法的改变给你带来的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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3．假设你是李华，近日你的社区开展了垃圾分类的宣传活动。请你结合以下提示，用英文给笔友Jessie写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Jessie,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Garbage Classification” in our community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter对中国城市的可持续发展很感兴趣，他想了解齐齐哈尔在这方面的做法。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。
提示：
1. 生态保护：保护扎龙湿地，扩大绿化面积，控制污染；
2. 产业升级：传统工业转型，发展高科技产业和智能农业；
3. 文化传承：举办国际鹤文化节，保护非物质文化遗产；
4. 感受：为家乡骄傲，相信未来更美好。
要求：
5. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
6. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share with you Qiqihar’s efforts in sustainable development.
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I’m proud of my hometown’s achievements and believe it will have a brighter future. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是张明，你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统文化和自然保护很感兴趣。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍齐齐哈尔的鹤文化及相关保护措施。
提示：
1. 鹤文化：丹顶鹤是齐齐哈尔的象征，代表纯洁、忠诚和长寿，融入当地艺术、节日等；
2. 保护措施：建立自然保护区、治理污染、禁止捕猎、宣传环保理念；
3. 感受：鹤文化是城市灵魂，保护丹顶鹤就是保护城市文化，希望更多人参与。
要求：
4. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
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If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
6．初中阶段的学习与生活宛如一幅徐徐展开的多彩画卷，其间既有成功时绽放的璀璨荣光，亦有失败中沉淀的深刻砥砺。例如，一次演讲比赛的成功，或是一场足球比赛的失利，这些经历相互交织，共同勾勒出我们独特的成长轨迹。你校英文报刊现正举办主题为“成长路上的我”的征文活动，现从以下两个征稿要求中任选其一，写一篇文章投稿。
Through Success, I Grow √一次促进你成长进步的成功经历； √你的体会或收获。 Through Failure, I Grow √一次令你奋发向上的失败经历； √你的体会或收获。
注意：
1．词数100左右，须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Through ______, I Grow
Throughout our life, we may experience successes or failures that help us grow up.
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7．假如你是Jane，以下是你的笔友李华向你表达学习和生活方面的问题，想向你请教如何成为更优秀的学生，请根据他的问题和以下要点，适当添加内容，写一封回信跟李华分享你的想法并鼓励他。词数90左右，文章开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going These days, I am quite sad because I have some trouble in life. I make many mistakes in the English exams and I don’t know how to make more friends because of shyness. What should I do Hope to hear from you soon.
Li Hua
要点：
Li Hua’s problems Ways to be better
English learning Listen to English songs or tapes Learn from mistakes
Making friends Be polite and helpful to others Hang out with classmates
Dealing with shyness Join some clubs Try to give a speech in public
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in life.
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Yours,
Jane
8．中国式现代化是人与自然和谐共生的现代化，绿色低碳是中国式现代化的底色。为大力弘扬绿色低碳的理念，学校英语俱乐部开展以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿，参与比赛。
注意事项：
1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，词数80字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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Thank you for listening!
9．假设你是校英文杂志The Whispering Woods的专栏编辑Amy，请根据收到的信件，用英文进行回复。
Dear Amy, I am a Grade 9 student. I have worked really hard since the beginning of the term. However, I still got low marks in my English exams. I feel down. What can I do Best wishes, Sad Xinyue
1．内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；
2．词数80词左右（已给出的文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Xinyue,
Thank you for your letter.
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Best wishes,
Amy
10．环境污染是人类面临的一个严重的问题。我们应该从身边的小事做起，节约能源，保护环境。请以How to Protect Our Environment为题，写一篇作文描述自己在日常生活中是如何保护环境的。
要求：
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右。
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11．世界人口已超过80亿，人类活动对地球环境造成了巨大压力。与此同时，中国正积极推动“绿色发展”和“美丽中国”建设。作为新时代青少年，我们的每一个选择都关乎地球的未来。请以“People and Our Planet”为题，写一篇80—100词的英语短文，内容包括：
1.简述人口增长给环境带来的一个具体问题(如垃圾增多、空气污染、资源紧张等)。
2.建议一两种我们青少年能力所及的保护行动。
3.解释你为什么认为这些行动很重要。
People and Our Planet
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12．独学而无友，则孤陋而寡闻。加入学习小组是解决“无友”和“寡闻”的重要手段。假如你和几位同学组成了英语学习小组，昨天你和她们聊了你的变化，以及你以前不爱学英语，在意识到英语的重要性后变得非常喜欢英语，并和他们一起探讨了如何提高英语阅读和写作能力。请你根据下面的笔记写一篇英语短文。
1. What changes do you have ★used to ★shy→outing and confident ★be interested in ★be made to ★realize ★ be used to ★ the importance of 2. How to improve English reading and writing abilities ★read often ★join a reading club ★keep a diary ★write passages and ask the teacher to correct mistakes
要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于100词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
There is an old saying that goes. “He who learns alone without friends feels isolated and poorly informed.” To change this, I joined an English study group, and it has helped me improve greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________
Thanks to the study group, I no longer feel lonely in learning. With my friends’ support, I enjoy English more and keep making progress every day.
13．潼南秀美涪江穿城而过，江水、岸线、沿江平坝形成“天然宽谷”，生态田园、未来乡村、千年古镇、文化古迹与现代化城区相融共生。为了将潼南(Tongnan)打造成独具特质的“世界宽谷·田园城市”，在环境保护方面，我们中学生可以做些什么呢？
请以“My Hometown’s Green Dream”为题，结合潼南建设“世界宽谷·田园城市”目标，写一篇英文短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述潼南的自然与人文特色（如涪江、古镇、田园等）；
2. 谈谈如何通过环保行动（如减少污染、植树等）助力这一目标；
3. 表达你对家乡未来发展的期待。
参考词汇与短语：
the Fujiang River, ancient towns, protect the environment, reduce waste, reuse, save water and electricity, plant trees, duty, hope, better and more beautiful
要求：
1.词数：80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Hometown’s Green Dream
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with
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14．假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Nancy给你发来一封电子邮件（内容如下），请你根据邮件内容回复她。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing In your last e-mail, you told me how you have changed since you started junior high school. This time, I also have some questions for you: What do you think is the most important and useful thing in your daily life, though it is seen everywhere What is it used for Why do you like it Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Nancy
要求：1. 词数80~100；电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 内容需包含邮件中提及的全部问题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Nancy,
It’s good to hear from you! I’m very glad to tell you my answers to your questions. There are many useful things around us and they play an important role in our lives. For me,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊 (2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动，现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开，让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你 (李华) 写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长 (Mr. Li)，信的内容应包括：你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”？它有什么功能和特点？你为何选择这件物品？
以下物品供参考：一张纸币 (a banknote)；一支中性笔 (a gel pen)；一辆共享单车 (a shared bicycle)；一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)；一份印刷的报纸 (a printed newspaper) …… (注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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16．学校科技社团最近举办了一次 “科技与生活” 展览，展示了自行车从过去到现在的演变历史。展览结束后，学校英语社团以 “The Evolution of Bicycles” 为题向学生征文。请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. What were the old bikes from the 20th century like (heavy, with no gears…)
2. What are the modern bikes like (lighter, with many gears, with electric motors...)
3. What’s your feeling
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：evolution演变；gear档；齿轮；electric motor电动机
The Evolution of Bicycles
Last week, the Science Club held a tech exhibition about “Technology and Life”. I was crazy about the show on the evolution of bicycles.
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17．随着科技的快速发展，诸多发明让人们的生活变得更便捷、更丰富，如智能手机。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，从学生角度谈谈科技发明对你日常生活的影响。
内容包括：talk about one invention that changes your life; explain how this invention helps you in daily life; share how life was different without this invention.
要求：1.内容积极向上，词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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18．美丽石狮，人人有责。英语周报社拟举办以“How to Make a Beautiful Shishi”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿，描述一下石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士守护我们美丽的家园。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
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19．你们学校的英语俱乐部正在开展以“科技与学习”为主题的征文比赛，征集使用 AI 工具 (如DeepSeek、 Kimi、豆包等) 辅助学习的体验。请根据以下要点提示 (也可自行拓展)，以“Using AI tools to learn”为题写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
Using AI tools to learn
AI 可以怎么帮助我们学习？ 1、给我们提建议 2、……
使用 AI 学习的时候我们要注意什么？ 1、不能过分依赖 AI 2、……
你的看法和理由 ……
注意事项：1. 词数：80-100 词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways.
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20．为践行“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念，近日我校在土海湿地公园举办以“兰庐家乡，为环保出力”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英文写一篇文章，分享本次活动的内容及活动的感受。词数80词左右。
Time: October 1st, 2025 Place: Tuhai Wetland Park Activities: ※pick up rubbish ※make a poster ※give a speech ※…Feeling (s) : …
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
The Most Useful Invention
Among all the great inventions, I think the mobile phone is the most useful one.
It was invented by an American named Martin Cooper in 1973. The mobile phone has many important usages. First, it is used to communicate with people anytime and anywhere. Second, we can use it to look up information and learn new things. Third, we can also use it to relax by listening to music or playing games.
As teenagers, we should learn to use mobile phones in a wise way. We should avoid spending too much time on it. Also, we must remember that studying and real-life communication should always come first.
【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇说明文；
时态：主要使用一般现在时（描述发明用途和发表观点）和一般过去时（描述发明时间和发明者）；
提示：需包含手机发明时间（1973）、发明者（Martin Cooper）、至少三个用途，并谈论青少年如何合理使用手机。
【写作步骤】第一步：开门见山，点明主题——手机是最有用的发明之一；
第二步：根据表格提供的信息，详细介绍手机的发明者、时间，并至少扩展三个具体用途；
第三步：发表个人观点，重点论述作为青少年应如何合理使用手机，并总结全文。
【亮点词汇】① properly得体地，恰当地
②wisely聪明地，明智地
③communicate交流
【高分句型】①It was invented by an American named Martin Cooper in 1973.（一般过去时的被动语态）
②It’s important to control the time we spend on them.（It is + adj. + to do sth.）
2．
例文
The Changes in My English Learning Ways
In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient. However, I have made some changes recently. Now, I learn English by watching English movies, listening to English songs, and practicing speaking with friends. These methods help me remember words better.
The changes have brought me great benefits. My English has improved a lot, and I find learning English more enjoyable. I am also more confident in speaking English. I believe that using scientific methods is the key to learning English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、描述过去的低效方法；
第二步、介绍近期的方法改变，列举具体新方式，体现“科学方法”的主题；
第三步、阐述变化带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①grammar rules语法规则
②practicing speaking练习口语
③scientific methods科学方法
[高分句型]
In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．范文：
Dear Jessie,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Garbage Classification” in our community. It was on June 18th, 2025.
We watched a video and it showed us how to sort waste. Then, we listened to a speech. The expert explained the importance of sorting waste in detail. After that, we practiced sorting different kinds of waste. What’s more, we had a discussion about how to sort garbage in our daily lives better.
It was really a meaningful experience. The activity not only made me understand more about garbage classification but also helped me to take action to protect our environment.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出垃圾分类的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细讲述垃圾如何分类；
第三步，书写结语。总结垃圾分类的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of doing sth.做某事的重要性
②help sb. to do sth.帮助某人做某事
③have a discussion about sth.讨论某事
[高分句型]
①We watched a video and it showed us how to sort waste. (并列句)
②The activity not only made me understand more about garbage classification but also helped me to take action to protect our environment. (not only…but also…；不定式“to take action“作宾语补足语；不定式“to protect our environment”作目的状语)
4．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share with you Qiqihar’s efforts in sustainable development.
Qiqihar takes ecological protection very seriously. It has been protecting Zhalong Wetland carefully, making more green areas in the city, and controlling all kinds of pollution strictly. For industrial development, traditional industries have changed a lot to improve themselves. At the same time, high-tech industries and smart agriculture are growing fast with government support. Culturally, the city holds the International Crane Culture Festival every year to help cultural exchange. Also, traditional arts such as crane-shaped paper-cuttings are well protected by local people.
I’m proud of my hometown’s achievements and believe it will have a brighter future. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中齐齐哈尔在生态保护、工业发展、文化方面的努力等要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头已给出，为下文介绍齐齐哈尔在可持续发展方面的努力作铺垫；
第二步：具体介绍齐齐哈尔在生态保护、工业发展、文化方面的努力等内容；
第三步：总结全文，表达对齐齐哈尔成就的自豪和对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①ecological protection生态保护
②green areas绿地
③controlling all kinds of pollution strictly严格控制污染
④smart agriculture智慧农业
⑤traditional arts传统艺术
[高分句型]
①It has been protecting Zhalong Wetland carefully, making more green areas in the city, and controlling all kinds of pollution strictly. (现在完成进行时，强调动作的持续性和对现在的影响，making和controlling为现在分词作结果状语，表明生态保护带来的结果。)
②At the same time, high-tech industries and smart agriculture are growing fast with government support. (with复合结构作伴随状语，表明高科技产业和智慧农业发展的条件。)
5．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity. They are deeply integrated into local art, festivals and so on. To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting. We also promote environmental protection concepts to let more people join in.
Crane culture is the soul of the city. Protecting red-crowned cranes is protecting Qiqihar’s culture. I hope more people will take part in it and we should try our best to protect them.
If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“现在完成时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍鹤文化，说明其象征、意义及融入艺术节日；
第二步：详细描述保护措施；
第三步：表达感受，强调文化重要性，呼吁更多人参与保护。
[亮点词汇]
①purity纯洁
②loyalty忠诚
③longevity长寿
④the soul of the city城市的灵魂
[高分句型]
①Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity.（现在分词短语作后置定语）
②To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting.（动词不定式短语作目的状语）
6．
例文
Through Failure, I Grow Throughout our life, we may experience successes or failures that help us grow up.
I still remember the time when I failed an important English speech contest. I prepared for it for weeks. However, on the stage, I was extremely nervous and forgot my words. I felt very embarrassed and sad at that moment. After the competition, my teacher comforted me and encouraged me to practice more. I took her advice. I practiced in front of my classmates every day to build up my confidence.
This failure taught me a valuable lesson. I learned that failure is not the end of the world. The most important thing is to learn from mistakes and never give up. Now, I am not afraid of speaking in public anymore.
【详解】【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章需包含两个提示点，注意行文连贯，无明显拼写或语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题立意，从两个标题中任选一个，填写所选标题；
第二步：引出一次具体的失败经历，为比赛做的准备、失败时的情景和感受，并写出失败后如何振作；
第三步：升华主题，总结从这次失败中学到的道理。
【亮点词汇】
①extremely非常地
②embarrassed尴尬的
③build up建立
④valuable lesson宝贵的一课
【高分句型】
①I still remember the time when I failed an important English speech contest. (when引导的定语从句)
②I learned that failure is not the end of the world. (that引导的宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having some problems. Don’t worry—I will share some easy ways to help you.
First, for English, you can listen to English songs every day. It’s fun and helpful. Also, when you make mistakes, write them down and learn from them. Second, to make more friends, always be kind and smile. Join your classmates when they play or talk. You can also join a club to meet new people. Third, if you feel shy, try to speak more. Start by talking to one person, or read aloud at home.
I believe you can do it. Just take small steps every day!
Yours,
Jane
【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
时态：一般现在时。
提示：根据李华的问题（英语学习、交友、害羞）和给定要点展开，适当补充内容。
【写作步骤】第一步：回应李华的问题，表达关心，并用过渡词（Firstly, Secondly, Finally）分点给出建议。
第二步：针对每个问题，结合题目提供的要点展开，补充具体做法。
第三步：用鼓励性语句结尾。
【亮点词汇】① improve提升
② confidence信心
③ helpful乐于助人的
【高分句型】① You can listen to English songs or tapes to improve your listening.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② Try to give a speech in public to build confidence.（祈使句）
8．例文
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
First, we can plant more trees because they can release oxygen and prevent strong winds, keeping our air clean. Second, we should save energy daily. For example, we should turn off taps while brushing teeth, switch off unused lights and so on. Third, we can choose green travel, like walking or using public transport instead of cars to reduce emissions. Last but not least, we can reduce waste, such as reusable cloth bags, paper and other materials in our daily life. Let’s act together!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。引出低碳生活的话题；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述应该采取哪些措施来过低碳生活；
第三步：书写结语。总结并感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sth. adj.保持某物……的状态
②switch off 关闭 (电器)
③instead of 而不是，代替
[高分句型]
①First, we can plant more trees because they can release oxygen and prevent strong winds, keeping our air clean. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Let’s act together! (祈使句的肯定形式)
9．例文
Dear Xinyue,
Thank you for your letter. I understand how disappointed you must feel after working so hard. Many students face similar challenges in English learning.
First, identify your weak areas—grammar, vocabulary, or reading—and focus on them. Try keeping a notebook for useful expressions and review it often. Also, practice listening and speaking by watching English videos or talking with classmates.
Remember, progress takes time. Don’t compare yourself with others. Celebrate small improvements, and be consistent. I’m sure your efforts will pay off soon.
Best wishes,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：需理解对方困境，提供学习方法并给予鼓励。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达理解与安慰；
第二步，提出具体学习建议；
第三步，给予心理鼓励；
第四步，传递信心与祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①identify找出
②consistent一致的
③pay off有回报
[高分句型]
①I understand how disappointed you must feel after working so hard. (宾语从句)
②I’m sure your efforts will pay off soon. (表达信心，传递希望)
10．例文：
How to Protect Our Environment
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.
First of all, I think we should turn off the lights to save energy when we leave the room. Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars. Third, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving.
We can make the world a better place to live if everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作话题已明确给出，考生需确保要点紧扣主题，可适当补充细节或理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出环境问题的严重性，进而表明学生应尽的责任；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节约能源、植树、建议乘坐公共交通”三个方面给出具体的保护措施，并解释了每项措施的原因或好处；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁每个人贡献的重要性，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①serious严重的
②save energy节约能源
③make a contribution to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.（In order to表目的，引导目的状语从句）
②Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars.（not only ... but also ... 连接两个并列谓语，which引导定语从句修饰carbon dioxide）
11．例文
People and Our Planet
With over 8 billion people worldwide, our planet faces problems like growing waste. More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.
As teenagers, we can take simple active actions. We should cut down on plastic bags, recycle empty bottles and used paper.
These small acts matter a lot—they reduce pollution and save resources. If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live. Let’s work together for a beautiful China and a green world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作需围绕“人与地球”展开，说明人口增长带来的问题，并提出青少年可行的环保行动，注意结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出全球人口众多导致废弃物增加、环境污染加剧的问题；
第二步，以青少年身份提出具体可行的环保行动（减少塑料袋、回收利用、节约用电）；
第三步，强调个人行动的重要性，并呼吁共同努力，共建美丽中国与绿色世界。
[亮点词汇]
①take active actions采取积极行动
②cut down on减少
③make an effort作出努力
④work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文：
There is an old saying that goes. “He who learns alone without friends feels isolated and poorly informed.” To change this, I joined an English study group, and it has helped me improve greatly.
In the past, I used to be very shy and was afraid of speaking English. I didn’t like English at first and was made to do exercises. But after realizing the importance of English, I became really interested in it. Now, I am used to practicing reading English every day and have grown more outgoing and confident when using English.
Yesterday, our group discussed how to improve reading and writing. We agreed that we should read often—for example, by joining a reading club to learn different expressions. As for writing, I think keeping a diary in English is useful. But writing short passages and asking the teacher to correct mistakes is even more useful.
Thanks to the study group, I no longer feel lonely in learning. With my friends’ support, I enjoy English more and keep making progress every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主
③提示：需包含个人变化和提升英语能力的方法
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题：加入学习小组（开头已给出）；
第二步，描述个人英语学习的变化；
第三步，分享提升读写能力的具体方法；
第四步，总结学习小组带来的积极影响（结尾已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①study group 学习小组
②be used to 习惯于
③the importance of ... ……的重要性
④keep a diary 记日记
[高分句型]
①Yesterday, our group discussed how to improve reading and writing.（疑问词+动词不定式）
②As for writing, I think keeping a diary in English is useful.（省略that的宾语从句）
13．例文
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with the Fujiang River, ancient towns and peaceful countryside around it.
To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown. What can we do First, we ought to reduce waste, and we should put the rubbish in the dustbin. Second, we can also reuse plastic bags. Third, we can save water and electricity at home and at school. For example, turn off the lights when we leave. Fourth, planting more trees is also a good way to make our city greener.
I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：结合潼南自然人文特色（涪江/古镇/田园），提出环保行动（减污/植树等），展望未来。
[写作步骤]
第一步：描述潼南特色（涪江穿城、古镇田园），接续题干开头；
第二步：列举环保行动（减废、节水电、植树）；
第三步：表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce waste减少垃圾
②turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．范文
Dear Nancy,
It’s good to hear from you! I’m very glad to tell you my answers to your questions. There are many useful things around us and they play an important role in our lives. For me, the most important and useful thing is water.
We can see water everywhere in our daily life. It is important because all life needs water. It is used for drinking, cooking, washing and many other things. Without water, we cannot live.
I like water not only because it is necessary for life, but also because it teaches us a lot. For example, it is soft but can be very strong. It reminds me to be kind and persistent.
Let’s value water and use it wisely!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件，为应用文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需回答物品名称、用途和喜欢原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并引入话题；
第二步，说明最重要的物品及其用途；
第三步，解释喜欢的原因；
第四步，发出倡议并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role 发挥重要作用
②daily life 日常生活
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I like water not only because it is necessary for life, but also because it teaches us a lot.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．
例文：
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to put a gel pen into the “2040 Time Capsule”. This pen writes smoothly and has a comfortable grip. It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing. I choose it because it represents our daily learning tools. In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信;
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中放入“时间胶囊”的物品的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’d like to put a gel pen into the ‘2040 Time Capsule’.”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“物品的功能和特点以及选择该物品的原因”几个方面重点介绍放入“时间胶囊”的物品的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望2040年的青少年打开胶囊后能有所了解”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②smoothly顺畅地
③comfortable舒适的
④represent代表
[高分句型]
①It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing.（被动语态）
②In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item.（时间状语从句和宾语从句）
16．
例文
Last week, the Science Club held a tech exhibition about “Technology and Life”. I was crazy about the show on the evolution of bicycles.
In the past, bicycles in the 20th century were heavy and had no gears. They were difficult to ride, especially on hills. However, modern bikes are much lighter and have many gears. Some even have electric motors to help people ride faster and farther.
I think the evolution of bicycles is amazing. It shows how technology makes our life easier and more convenient. I hope bicycles will become even better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，说明展览内容，呼应已给开头；
第二步，分段描述过去和现代自行车的特点，使用对比结构；
第三步，表达个人感受，总结科技带来的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①had no gears没有齿轮
②faster and farther更快更远
③in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①However, modern bikes are much lighter and have many gears.（运用了转折连词however的对比结构）
②It shows how technology makes our life easier and more convenient.（how引导的宾语从句）
17．
The smartphone is one of the greatest inventions that has changed my daily life. It helps me in many ways. First, I can use it to study anytime, anywhere. For example, I look up new words, watch educational videos, and even take online courses. Second, it makes communication easier. I can text my friends, call my parents, or share photos instantly.
Before smartphones, life was different. I had to carry heavy dictionaries and wait to use a computer for research. Calling someone required finding a telephone. Now, everything is faster and more convenient.Smartphones bring knowledge and connection to my fingertips. They truly make my life better!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，如举例说明智能手机在学习和交流方面的具体帮助，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明主题，说明智能手机是改变自己日常生活的一项伟大发明，并引出下文对它如何帮助自己的阐述；
第二步，具体阐述智能手机在学习和交流方面对自己的帮助，如随时随地进行学习、使交流更便捷等；
第三步，对比没有智能手机时生活的不同，突出智能手机带来的便利；
第四步，总结全文，表达智能手机给自己生活带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
① look up查阅
② take online courses上在线课程
③ instantly立即，马上
[高分句型]
The smartphone is one of the greatest inventions that has changed my daily life.（“one of the + 形容词最高级 + 名词复数”结构，以及that引导的定语从句）
18．
例文
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty. But now, the streets are clean and there are more nice parks with colorful flowers. The rivers get cleaner too, and we can see more green trees around our community. As middle school students, we can be environmental guardians. We won’t throw rubbish everywhere. We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly. We can also plant small trees.
Let’s make Shishi more beautiful together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，搭配一般过去时；
③提示：描述石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，并谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士。
[写作步骤]
第一步：对比过去与现在环境的变化；
第二步：具体谈谈中学生环保行动的做法；
第三步：最后倡议大家一起行动，共创美好家园。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental guardians 环境监护人
②throw rubbish everywhere 乱扔垃圾
③turn off the tap quickly 快速关掉水龙头
[高分句型]
①Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty.（运用and连接的并列句，描述过去环境的两个问题）
②We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly.（运用“by+动名词”结构说明节约用水的具体方式）
19．
例文：
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways. Firstly, they can give us useful advice on study problems. For example, when I’m stuck on a math question, AI can provide step-by-step solutions. Secondly, AI can help us check grammar mistakes in English writing quickly.
However, we shouldn’t rely too much on AI. We must think independently and use our own brains. Also, we should check the information AI gives because it may not always be correct.
In my opinion, AI is a great helper, but it can’t replace our own efforts. Only by combining AI with our hard work can we learn better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括AI如何帮助学习、使用AI时的注意事项以及个人看法和理由。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways”来引出下文重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“提建议、检查语法错误”等方面重点介绍AI如何帮助学习，并从“不能过分依赖AI、检查AI提供的信息”等方面介绍使用AI学习时的注意事项；
第三步，书写结语。表达“AI是很好的助手，但不能取代我们自己的努力”的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be helpful for 对……有帮助
②for example 例如
③be stuck on 陷入困境
④step-by-step 逐步的
[高分句型]
①For example, when I’m stuck on a math question, AI can provide step-by-step solutions.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only by combining AI with our hard work can we learn better.（倒装句）
20．
例文
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
First, we picked up rubbish near the lake. Then, we made posters about protecting wetlands. Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important. I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment. I hope to have more activities to protect the environment in the future and encourage more people to join in these activities.
This activity made me understand the meaning of “clear waters and green mountains are invaluable assets”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出活动主题；
第二步，具体阐述活动开展的内容；
第三步，谈谈活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②clean up清理
③pick up捡拾
[高分句型]
①Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期末复习考点培优仁爱科普版专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．发明深刻地改变了世界和我们的生活。在这些智慧成果的推动下，我们的生活正变得 越来越便利和舒适。请你根据表格信息，以“The Most Useful Invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者、手机的用途 (至少三个)，并谈一谈作为青少年应该如何合理地使用手机。
Invention Inventor Time Usage(用途) Your opinions
Mobile phone American, Martin Cooper 1973 1. communicate with people 2. …… 3. …… ...
要求：
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数：不少于70。
The Most Useful Invention
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2．学好英语的条件之一是科学的方法。请你以“The Change(s) in My English Learning Way(s)”为主题，写一篇短文向英语杂志社投稿。
内容：
1. 你英语学习方法有什么变化；
2. 学习方法的改变给你带来的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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3．假设你是李华，近日你的社区开展了垃圾分类的宣传活动。请你结合以下提示，用英文给笔友Jessie写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Jessie,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Garbage Classification” in our community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter对中国城市的可持续发展很感兴趣，他想了解齐齐哈尔在这方面的做法。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。
提示：
1. 生态保护：保护扎龙湿地，扩大绿化面积，控制污染；
2. 产业升级：传统工业转型，发展高科技产业和智能农业；
3. 文化传承：举办国际鹤文化节，保护非物质文化遗产；
4. 感受：为家乡骄傲，相信未来更美好。
要求：
5. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
6. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share with you Qiqihar’s efforts in sustainable development.
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I’m proud of my hometown’s achievements and believe it will have a brighter future. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是张明，你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统文化和自然保护很感兴趣。请根据以下提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍齐齐哈尔的鹤文化及相关保护措施。
提示：
1. 鹤文化：丹顶鹤是齐齐哈尔的象征，代表纯洁、忠诚和长寿，融入当地艺术、节日等；
2. 保护措施：建立自然保护区、治理污染、禁止捕猎、宣传环保理念；
3. 感受：鹤文化是城市灵魂，保护丹顶鹤就是保护城市文化，希望更多人参与。
要求：
4. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 必须包括所有提示信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
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If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
6．初中阶段的学习与生活宛如一幅徐徐展开的多彩画卷，其间既有成功时绽放的璀璨荣光，亦有失败中沉淀的深刻砥砺。例如，一次演讲比赛的成功，或是一场足球比赛的失利，这些经历相互交织，共同勾勒出我们独特的成长轨迹。你校英文报刊现正举办主题为“成长路上的我”的征文活动，现从以下两个征稿要求中任选其一，写一篇文章投稿。
Through Success, I Grow √一次促进你成长进步的成功经历； √你的体会或收获。 Through Failure, I Grow √一次令你奋发向上的失败经历； √你的体会或收获。
注意：
1．词数100左右，须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Through ______, I Grow
Throughout our life, we may experience successes or failures that help us grow up.
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7．假如你是Jane，以下是你的笔友李华向你表达学习和生活方面的问题，想向你请教如何成为更优秀的学生，请根据他的问题和以下要点，适当添加内容，写一封回信跟李华分享你的想法并鼓励他。词数90左右，文章开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going These days, I am quite sad because I have some trouble in life. I make many mistakes in the English exams and I don’t know how to make more friends because of shyness. What should I do Hope to hear from you soon.
Li Hua
要点：
Li Hua’s problems Ways to be better
English learning Listen to English songs or tapes Learn from mistakes
Making friends Be polite and helpful to others Hang out with classmates
Dealing with shyness Join some clubs Try to give a speech in public
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in life.
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Yours,
Jane
8．中国式现代化是人与自然和谐共生的现代化，绿色低碳是中国式现代化的底色。为大力弘扬绿色低碳的理念，学校英语俱乐部开展以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿，参与比赛。
注意事项：
1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，词数80字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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Thank you for listening!
9．假设你是校英文杂志The Whispering Woods的专栏编辑Amy，请根据收到的信件，用英文进行回复。
Dear Amy, I am a Grade 9 student. I have worked really hard since the beginning of the term. However, I still got low marks in my English exams. I feel down. What can I do Best wishes, Sad Xinyue
1．内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；
2．词数80词左右（已给出的文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Xinyue,
Thank you for your letter.
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Best wishes,
Amy
10．环境污染是人类面临的一个严重的问题。我们应该从身边的小事做起，节约能源，保护环境。请以How to Protect Our Environment为题，写一篇作文描述自己在日常生活中是如何保护环境的。
要求：
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右。
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11．世界人口已超过80亿，人类活动对地球环境造成了巨大压力。与此同时，中国正积极推动“绿色发展”和“美丽中国”建设。作为新时代青少年，我们的每一个选择都关乎地球的未来。请以“People and Our Planet”为题，写一篇80—100词的英语短文，内容包括：
1.简述人口增长给环境带来的一个具体问题(如垃圾增多、空气污染、资源紧张等)。
2.建议一两种我们青少年能力所及的保护行动。
3.解释你为什么认为这些行动很重要。
People and Our Planet
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12．独学而无友，则孤陋而寡闻。加入学习小组是解决“无友”和“寡闻”的重要手段。假如你和几位同学组成了英语学习小组，昨天你和她们聊了你的变化，以及你以前不爱学英语，在意识到英语的重要性后变得非常喜欢英语，并和他们一起探讨了如何提高英语阅读和写作能力。请你根据下面的笔记写一篇英语短文。
1. What changes do you have ★used to ★shy→outing and confident ★be interested in ★be made to ★realize ★ be used to ★ the importance of 2. How to improve English reading and writing abilities ★read often ★join a reading club ★keep a diary ★write passages and ask the teacher to correct mistakes
要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于100词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
There is an old saying that goes. “He who learns alone without friends feels isolated and poorly informed.” To change this, I joined an English study group, and it has helped me improve greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________
Thanks to the study group, I no longer feel lonely in learning. With my friends’ support, I enjoy English more and keep making progress every day.
13．潼南秀美涪江穿城而过，江水、岸线、沿江平坝形成“天然宽谷”，生态田园、未来乡村、千年古镇、文化古迹与现代化城区相融共生。为了将潼南(Tongnan)打造成独具特质的“世界宽谷·田园城市”，在环境保护方面，我们中学生可以做些什么呢？
请以“My Hometown’s Green Dream”为题，结合潼南建设“世界宽谷·田园城市”目标，写一篇英文短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述潼南的自然与人文特色（如涪江、古镇、田园等）；
2. 谈谈如何通过环保行动（如减少污染、植树等）助力这一目标；
3. 表达你对家乡未来发展的期待。
参考词汇与短语：
the Fujiang River, ancient towns, protect the environment, reduce waste, reuse, save water and electricity, plant trees, duty, hope, better and more beautiful
要求：
1.词数：80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Hometown’s Green Dream
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with
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14．假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Nancy给你发来一封电子邮件（内容如下），请你根据邮件内容回复她。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing In your last e-mail, you told me how you have changed since you started junior high school. This time, I also have some questions for you: What do you think is the most important and useful thing in your daily life, though it is seen everywhere What is it used for Why do you like it Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Nancy
要求：1. 词数80~100；电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 内容需包含邮件中提及的全部问题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Nancy,
It’s good to hear from you! I’m very glad to tell you my answers to your questions. There are many useful things around us and they play an important role in our lives. For me,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊 (2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动，现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开，让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你 (李华) 写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长 (Mr. Li)，信的内容应包括：你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”？它有什么功能和特点？你为何选择这件物品？
以下物品供参考：一张纸币 (a banknote)；一支中性笔 (a gel pen)；一辆共享单车 (a shared bicycle)；一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)；一份印刷的报纸 (a printed newspaper) …… (注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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16．学校科技社团最近举办了一次 “科技与生活” 展览，展示了自行车从过去到现在的演变历史。展览结束后，学校英语社团以 “The Evolution of Bicycles” 为题向学生征文。请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. What were the old bikes from the 20th century like (heavy, with no gears…)
2. What are the modern bikes like (lighter, with many gears, with electric motors...)
3. What’s your feeling
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：evolution演变；gear档；齿轮；electric motor电动机
The Evolution of Bicycles
Last week, the Science Club held a tech exhibition about “Technology and Life”. I was crazy about the show on the evolution of bicycles.
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17．随着科技的快速发展，诸多发明让人们的生活变得更便捷、更丰富，如智能手机。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，从学生角度谈谈科技发明对你日常生活的影响。
内容包括：talk about one invention that changes your life; explain how this invention helps you in daily life; share how life was different without this invention.
要求：1.内容积极向上，词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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18．美丽石狮，人人有责。英语周报社拟举办以“How to Make a Beautiful Shishi”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿，描述一下石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士守护我们美丽的家园。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
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19．你们学校的英语俱乐部正在开展以“科技与学习”为主题的征文比赛，征集使用 AI 工具 (如DeepSeek、 Kimi、豆包等) 辅助学习的体验。请根据以下要点提示 (也可自行拓展)，以“Using AI tools to learn”为题写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
Using AI tools to learn
AI 可以怎么帮助我们学习？ 1、给我们提建议 2、……
使用 AI 学习的时候我们要注意什么？ 1、不能过分依赖 AI 2、……
你的看法和理由 ……
注意事项：1. 词数：80-100 词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways.
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20．为践行“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念，近日我校在土海湿地公园举办以“兰庐家乡，为环保出力”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英文写一篇文章，分享本次活动的内容及活动的感受。词数80词左右。
Time: October 1st, 2025 Place: Tuhai Wetland Park Activities: ※pick up rubbish ※make a poster ※give a speech ※…Feeling (s) : …
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
The Most Useful Invention
Among all the great inventions, I think the mobile phone is the most useful one.
It was invented by an American named Martin Cooper in 1973. The mobile phone has many important usages. First, it is used to communicate with people anytime and anywhere. Second, we can use it to look up information and learn new things. Third, we can also use it to relax by listening to music or playing games.
As teenagers, we should learn to use mobile phones in a wise way. We should avoid spending too much time on it. Also, we must remember that studying and real-life communication should always come first.
【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇说明文；
时态：主要使用一般现在时（描述发明用途和发表观点）和一般过去时（描述发明时间和发明者）；
提示：需包含手机发明时间（1973）、发明者（Martin Cooper）、至少三个用途，并谈论青少年如何合理使用手机。
【写作步骤】第一步：开门见山，点明主题——手机是最有用的发明之一；
第二步：根据表格提供的信息，详细介绍手机的发明者、时间，并至少扩展三个具体用途；
第三步：发表个人观点，重点论述作为青少年应如何合理使用手机，并总结全文。
【亮点词汇】① properly得体地，恰当地
②wisely聪明地，明智地
③communicate交流
【高分句型】①It was invented by an American named Martin Cooper in 1973.（一般过去时的被动语态）
②It’s important to control the time we spend on them.（It is + adj. + to do sth.）
2．
例文
The Changes in My English Learning Ways
In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient. However, I have made some changes recently. Now, I learn English by watching English movies, listening to English songs, and practicing speaking with friends. These methods help me remember words better.
The changes have brought me great benefits. My English has improved a lot, and I find learning English more enjoyable. I am also more confident in speaking English. I believe that using scientific methods is the key to learning English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、描述过去的低效方法；
第二步、介绍近期的方法改变，列举具体新方式，体现“科学方法”的主题；
第三步、阐述变化带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①grammar rules语法规则
②practicing speaking练习口语
③scientific methods科学方法
[高分句型]
In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．范文：
Dear Jessie,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Garbage Classification” in our community. It was on June 18th, 2025.
We watched a video and it showed us how to sort waste. Then, we listened to a speech. The expert explained the importance of sorting waste in detail. After that, we practiced sorting different kinds of waste. What’s more, we had a discussion about how to sort garbage in our daily lives better.
It was really a meaningful experience. The activity not only made me understand more about garbage classification but also helped me to take action to protect our environment.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出垃圾分类的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细讲述垃圾如何分类；
第三步，书写结语。总结垃圾分类的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of doing sth.做某事的重要性
②help sb. to do sth.帮助某人做某事
③have a discussion about sth.讨论某事
[高分句型]
①We watched a video and it showed us how to sort waste. (并列句)
②The activity not only made me understand more about garbage classification but also helped me to take action to protect our environment. (not only…but also…；不定式“to take action“作宾语补足语；不定式“to protect our environment”作目的状语)
4．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share with you Qiqihar’s efforts in sustainable development.
Qiqihar takes ecological protection very seriously. It has been protecting Zhalong Wetland carefully, making more green areas in the city, and controlling all kinds of pollution strictly. For industrial development, traditional industries have changed a lot to improve themselves. At the same time, high-tech industries and smart agriculture are growing fast with government support. Culturally, the city holds the International Crane Culture Festival every year to help cultural exchange. Also, traditional arts such as crane-shaped paper-cuttings are well protected by local people.
I’m proud of my hometown’s achievements and believe it will have a brighter future. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中齐齐哈尔在生态保护、工业发展、文化方面的努力等要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头已给出，为下文介绍齐齐哈尔在可持续发展方面的努力作铺垫；
第二步：具体介绍齐齐哈尔在生态保护、工业发展、文化方面的努力等内容；
第三步：总结全文，表达对齐齐哈尔成就的自豪和对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①ecological protection生态保护
②green areas绿地
③controlling all kinds of pollution strictly严格控制污染
④smart agriculture智慧农业
⑤traditional arts传统艺术
[高分句型]
①It has been protecting Zhalong Wetland carefully, making more green areas in the city, and controlling all kinds of pollution strictly. (现在完成进行时，强调动作的持续性和对现在的影响，making和controlling为现在分词作结果状语，表明生态保护带来的结果。)
②At the same time, high-tech industries and smart agriculture are growing fast with government support. (with复合结构作伴随状语，表明高科技产业和智慧农业发展的条件。)
5．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share something about Qiqihar’s crane culture and the protection of red-crowned cranes with you.
Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity. They are deeply integrated into local art, festivals and so on. To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting. We also promote environmental protection concepts to let more people join in.
Crane culture is the soul of the city. Protecting red-crowned cranes is protecting Qiqihar’s culture. I hope more people will take part in it and we should try our best to protect them.
If you have a chance to visit Qiqihar, you’ll experience the charm of crane culture firsthand.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“现在完成时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍鹤文化，说明其象征、意义及融入艺术节日；
第二步：详细描述保护措施；
第三步：表达感受，强调文化重要性，呼吁更多人参与保护。
[亮点词汇]
①purity纯洁
②loyalty忠诚
③longevity长寿
④the soul of the city城市的灵魂
[高分句型]
①Red-crowned cranes are the precious symbol of Qiqihar, representing purity, loyalty and longevity.（现在分词短语作后置定语）
②To protect them, the government has built nature reserves, strictly controlled pollution and completely banned hunting.（动词不定式短语作目的状语）
6．
例文
Through Failure, I Grow Throughout our life, we may experience successes or failures that help us grow up.
I still remember the time when I failed an important English speech contest. I prepared for it for weeks. However, on the stage, I was extremely nervous and forgot my words. I felt very embarrassed and sad at that moment. After the competition, my teacher comforted me and encouraged me to practice more. I took her advice. I practiced in front of my classmates every day to build up my confidence.
This failure taught me a valuable lesson. I learned that failure is not the end of the world. The most important thing is to learn from mistakes and never give up. Now, I am not afraid of speaking in public anymore.
【详解】【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章需包含两个提示点，注意行文连贯，无明显拼写或语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题立意，从两个标题中任选一个，填写所选标题；
第二步：引出一次具体的失败经历，为比赛做的准备、失败时的情景和感受，并写出失败后如何振作；
第三步：升华主题，总结从这次失败中学到的道理。
【亮点词汇】
①extremely非常地
②embarrassed尴尬的
③build up建立
④valuable lesson宝贵的一课
【高分句型】
①I still remember the time when I failed an important English speech contest. (when引导的定语从句)
②I learned that failure is not the end of the world. (that引导的宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having some problems. Don’t worry—I will share some easy ways to help you.
First, for English, you can listen to English songs every day. It’s fun and helpful. Also, when you make mistakes, write them down and learn from them. Second, to make more friends, always be kind and smile. Join your classmates when they play or talk. You can also join a club to meet new people. Third, if you feel shy, try to speak more. Start by talking to one person, or read aloud at home.
I believe you can do it. Just take small steps every day!
Yours,
Jane
【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
时态：一般现在时。
提示：根据李华的问题（英语学习、交友、害羞）和给定要点展开，适当补充内容。
【写作步骤】第一步：回应李华的问题，表达关心，并用过渡词（Firstly, Secondly, Finally）分点给出建议。
第二步：针对每个问题，结合题目提供的要点展开，补充具体做法。
第三步：用鼓励性语句结尾。
【亮点词汇】① improve提升
② confidence信心
③ helpful乐于助人的
【高分句型】① You can listen to English songs or tapes to improve your listening.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② Try to give a speech in public to build confidence.（祈使句）
8．例文
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
First, we can plant more trees because they can release oxygen and prevent strong winds, keeping our air clean. Second, we should save energy daily. For example, we should turn off taps while brushing teeth, switch off unused lights and so on. Third, we can choose green travel, like walking or using public transport instead of cars to reduce emissions. Last but not least, we can reduce waste, such as reusable cloth bags, paper and other materials in our daily life. Let’s act together!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。引出低碳生活的话题；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述应该采取哪些措施来过低碳生活；
第三步：书写结语。总结并感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sth. adj.保持某物……的状态
②switch off 关闭 (电器)
③instead of 而不是，代替
[高分句型]
①First, we can plant more trees because they can release oxygen and prevent strong winds, keeping our air clean. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Let’s act together! (祈使句的肯定形式)
9．例文
Dear Xinyue,
Thank you for your letter. I understand how disappointed you must feel after working so hard. Many students face similar challenges in English learning.
First, identify your weak areas—grammar, vocabulary, or reading—and focus on them. Try keeping a notebook for useful expressions and review it often. Also, practice listening and speaking by watching English videos or talking with classmates.
Remember, progress takes time. Don’t compare yourself with others. Celebrate small improvements, and be consistent. I’m sure your efforts will pay off soon.
Best wishes,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：需理解对方困境，提供学习方法并给予鼓励。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达理解与安慰；
第二步，提出具体学习建议；
第三步，给予心理鼓励；
第四步，传递信心与祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①identify找出
②consistent一致的
③pay off有回报
[高分句型]
①I understand how disappointed you must feel after working so hard. (宾语从句)
②I’m sure your efforts will pay off soon. (表达信心，传递希望)
10．例文：
How to Protect Our Environment
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.
First of all, I think we should turn off the lights to save energy when we leave the room. Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars. Third, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving.
We can make the world a better place to live if everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作话题已明确给出，考生需确保要点紧扣主题，可适当补充细节或理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出环境问题的严重性，进而表明学生应尽的责任；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节约能源、植树、建议乘坐公共交通”三个方面给出具体的保护措施，并解释了每项措施的原因或好处；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁每个人贡献的重要性，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①serious严重的
②save energy节约能源
③make a contribution to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something we can to protect the environment.（In order to表目的，引导目的状语从句）
②Second, we had better plant more trees because they can not only beautify our environment but also absorb carbon dioxide which is produced by cars.（not only ... but also ... 连接两个并列谓语，which引导定语从句修饰carbon dioxide）
11．例文
People and Our Planet
With over 8 billion people worldwide, our planet faces problems like growing waste. More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.
As teenagers, we can take simple active actions. We should cut down on plastic bags, recycle empty bottles and used paper.
These small acts matter a lot—they reduce pollution and save resources. If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live. Let’s work together for a beautiful China and a green world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作需围绕“人与地球”展开，说明人口增长带来的问题，并提出青少年可行的环保行动，注意结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出全球人口众多导致废弃物增加、环境污染加剧的问题；
第二步，以青少年身份提出具体可行的环保行动（减少塑料袋、回收利用、节约用电）；
第三步，强调个人行动的重要性，并呼吁共同努力，共建美丽中国与绿色世界。
[亮点词汇]
①take active actions采取积极行动
②cut down on减少
③make an effort作出努力
④work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①More population means more rubbish, which badly pollutes the environment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If everyone makes an effort, we can make our planet a better place to live.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文：
There is an old saying that goes. “He who learns alone without friends feels isolated and poorly informed.” To change this, I joined an English study group, and it has helped me improve greatly.
In the past, I used to be very shy and was afraid of speaking English. I didn’t like English at first and was made to do exercises. But after realizing the importance of English, I became really interested in it. Now, I am used to practicing reading English every day and have grown more outgoing and confident when using English.
Yesterday, our group discussed how to improve reading and writing. We agreed that we should read often—for example, by joining a reading club to learn different expressions. As for writing, I think keeping a diary in English is useful. But writing short passages and asking the teacher to correct mistakes is even more useful.
Thanks to the study group, I no longer feel lonely in learning. With my friends’ support, I enjoy English more and keep making progress every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主
③提示：需包含个人变化和提升英语能力的方法
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题：加入学习小组（开头已给出）；
第二步，描述个人英语学习的变化；
第三步，分享提升读写能力的具体方法；
第四步，总结学习小组带来的积极影响（结尾已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①study group 学习小组
②be used to 习惯于
③the importance of ... ……的重要性
④keep a diary 记日记
[高分句型]
①Yesterday, our group discussed how to improve reading and writing.（疑问词+动词不定式）
②As for writing, I think keeping a diary in English is useful.（省略that的宾语从句）
13．例文
Tongnan, my hometown, is trying to become a “World Wide Valley·Garden City”. It is a beautiful city with the Fujiang River, ancient towns and peaceful countryside around it.
To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown. What can we do First, we ought to reduce waste, and we should put the rubbish in the dustbin. Second, we can also reuse plastic bags. Third, we can save water and electricity at home and at school. For example, turn off the lights when we leave. Fourth, planting more trees is also a good way to make our city greener.
I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：结合潼南自然人文特色（涪江/古镇/田园），提出环保行动（减污/植树等），展望未来。
[写作步骤]
第一步：描述潼南特色（涪江穿城、古镇田园），接续题干开头；
第二步：列举环保行动（减废、节水电、植树）；
第三步：表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce waste减少垃圾
②turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①To make the dream come true, I think it’s our duty to protect our hometown.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I love my hometown and I hope it will be a better city.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．范文
Dear Nancy,
It’s good to hear from you! I’m very glad to tell you my answers to your questions. There are many useful things around us and they play an important role in our lives. For me, the most important and useful thing is water.
We can see water everywhere in our daily life. It is important because all life needs water. It is used for drinking, cooking, washing and many other things. Without water, we cannot live.
I like water not only because it is necessary for life, but also because it teaches us a lot. For example, it is soft but can be very strong. It reminds me to be kind and persistent.
Let’s value water and use it wisely!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件，为应用文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需回答物品名称、用途和喜欢原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并引入话题；
第二步，说明最重要的物品及其用途；
第三步，解释喜欢的原因；
第四步，发出倡议并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role 发挥重要作用
②daily life 日常生活
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I like water not only because it is necessary for life, but also because it teaches us a lot.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．
例文：
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to put a gel pen into the “2040 Time Capsule”. This pen writes smoothly and has a comfortable grip. It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing. I choose it because it represents our daily learning tools. In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信;
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中放入“时间胶囊”的物品的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’d like to put a gel pen into the ‘2040 Time Capsule’.”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“物品的功能和特点以及选择该物品的原因”几个方面重点介绍放入“时间胶囊”的物品的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望2040年的青少年打开胶囊后能有所了解”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②smoothly顺畅地
③comfortable舒适的
④represent代表
[高分句型]
①It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing.（被动语态）
②In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item.（时间状语从句和宾语从句）
16．
例文
Last week, the Science Club held a tech exhibition about “Technology and Life”. I was crazy about the show on the evolution of bicycles.
In the past, bicycles in the 20th century were heavy and had no gears. They were difficult to ride, especially on hills. However, modern bikes are much lighter and have many gears. Some even have electric motors to help people ride faster and farther.
I think the evolution of bicycles is amazing. It shows how technology makes our life easier and more convenient. I hope bicycles will become even better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，说明展览内容，呼应已给开头；
第二步，分段描述过去和现代自行车的特点，使用对比结构；
第三步，表达个人感受，总结科技带来的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①had no gears没有齿轮
②faster and farther更快更远
③in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①However, modern bikes are much lighter and have many gears.（运用了转折连词however的对比结构）
②It shows how technology makes our life easier and more convenient.（how引导的宾语从句）
17．
The smartphone is one of the greatest inventions that has changed my daily life. It helps me in many ways. First, I can use it to study anytime, anywhere. For example, I look up new words, watch educational videos, and even take online courses. Second, it makes communication easier. I can text my friends, call my parents, or share photos instantly.
Before smartphones, life was different. I had to carry heavy dictionaries and wait to use a computer for research. Calling someone required finding a telephone. Now, everything is faster and more convenient.Smartphones bring knowledge and connection to my fingertips. They truly make my life better!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，如举例说明智能手机在学习和交流方面的具体帮助，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明主题，说明智能手机是改变自己日常生活的一项伟大发明，并引出下文对它如何帮助自己的阐述；
第二步，具体阐述智能手机在学习和交流方面对自己的帮助，如随时随地进行学习、使交流更便捷等；
第三步，对比没有智能手机时生活的不同，突出智能手机带来的便利；
第四步，总结全文，表达智能手机给自己生活带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
① look up查阅
② take online courses上在线课程
③ instantly立即，马上
[高分句型]
The smartphone is one of the greatest inventions that has changed my daily life.（“one of the + 形容词最高级 + 名词复数”结构，以及that引导的定语从句）
18．
例文
How to Make a Beautiful Shishi
Shishi, which is our beloved hometown in Fujian, has changed greatly these years.
Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty. But now, the streets are clean and there are more nice parks with colorful flowers. The rivers get cleaner too, and we can see more green trees around our community. As middle school students, we can be environmental guardians. We won’t throw rubbish everywhere. We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly. We can also plant small trees.
Let’s make Shishi more beautiful together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，搭配一般过去时；
③提示：描述石狮发展的现状和环境的改善，并谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士。
[写作步骤]
第一步：对比过去与现在环境的变化；
第二步：具体谈谈中学生环保行动的做法；
第三步：最后倡议大家一起行动，共创美好家园。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental guardians 环境监护人
②throw rubbish everywhere 乱扔垃圾
③turn off the tap quickly 快速关掉水龙头
[高分句型]
①Before, there was rubbish on the streets and the rivers looked dirty.（运用and连接的并列句，描述过去环境的两个问题）
②We can save water when washing hands by turning off the tap quickly.（运用“by+动名词”结构说明节约用水的具体方式）
19．
例文：
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways. Firstly, they can give us useful advice on study problems. For example, when I’m stuck on a math question, AI can provide step-by-step solutions. Secondly, AI can help us check grammar mistakes in English writing quickly.
However, we shouldn’t rely too much on AI. We must think independently and use our own brains. Also, we should check the information AI gives because it may not always be correct.
In my opinion, AI is a great helper, but it can’t replace our own efforts. Only by combining AI with our hard work can we learn better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括AI如何帮助学习、使用AI时的注意事项以及个人看法和理由。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways”来引出下文重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“提建议、检查语法错误”等方面重点介绍AI如何帮助学习，并从“不能过分依赖AI、检查AI提供的信息”等方面介绍使用AI学习时的注意事项；
第三步，书写结语。表达“AI是很好的助手，但不能取代我们自己的努力”的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be helpful for 对……有帮助
②for example 例如
③be stuck on 陷入困境
④step-by-step 逐步的
[高分句型]
①For example, when I’m stuck on a math question, AI can provide step-by-step solutions.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only by combining AI with our hard work can we learn better.（倒装句）
20．
例文
On October 1st, 2025, I took part in a volunteer activity to clean up Tuhai Wetland Park.
First, we picked up rubbish near the lake. Then, we made posters about protecting wetlands. Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important. I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment. I hope to have more activities to protect the environment in the future and encourage more people to join in these activities.
This activity made me understand the meaning of “clear waters and green mountains are invaluable assets”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出活动主题；
第二步，具体阐述活动开展的内容；
第三步，谈谈活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②clean up清理
③pick up捡拾
[高分句型]
①Finally, I gave a speech to tell people why nature is important.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I felt tired but proud because I learned that small actions can help our environment.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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