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My family
U3 Writing
家对于每个人来说都至关重要。假如你们下周英语角活动的主题是“my family”，请用英语写一篇短文，和同学们介绍自己的家庭和发生在家庭成员之间的感人时刻。
要求：
1. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 80词左右。
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家对于每个人来说都至关重要。假如你们下周英语角活动的主题是“my family”，请用英语写一篇短文，和同学们介绍自己的家庭和发生在家庭成员之间的感人时刻。
要求：
1. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 80词左右。
Writing task
What to write 写作内容
my family
basic information
基本信息
family traditions
家庭传统
a touching moment
感人时刻
thoughts about family
对家庭的想法
basic information 基本信息
What is your family like
I have a ___________ family.
I have a big _____warm family.
I have a warm family.
and
big
I have a small family.
I have a warm family.
I have a small _____ warm family.
big small happy warm
...
1. Use conjunctions(使用连词)
but
How many people are there in your family
There are ___________ people in my family.
They are ___________________________ and me.
four
my parents, my sister/brother
I have a _____ and/but _____ family.
basic information 基本信息
There are ___________ people in my family.
They are ___________________________ and me.
I have a _____ and/but _____ family.
family traditions(家庭传统)
What do you usually do together on weekends
We usually _________ together on weekends.
have a picnic
do sports
share our life
go shopping
How do you feel
It’s very ____________. / I feel/am so ___________.
interesting
exciting
relaxing
relaxed/happy/excited
It feels great to spend time with them(与他们度过时光）.
Practice
I have a/an _______ family. There are _______ people in my family. They are _________ and me. We usually _________ together at the weekends. It’s very ____________.
A touching moment (版本1)
There _____ a touching moment bewteen my ______ and me.
was
father
Use conjunctions(连词)
it was difficult for me to _____________________.
Last Sunday,
finish my math homework
My father ______ me ______ the math problem. I ______ my homework on time.
helped
solve
finished
_____, my father helped me solve the math problem. _______, I finished my homework on time.
Then
At last
Finally
Use “ at first, then, at last(finally)” to show the time order（时间顺序）.
There _____ a touching moment bewteen my ______ and me. Last Saturday, ...
was
father
it was difficult for me to finish my math homework.
My father ______ me ______ the math problem. I ______ my homework on time.
Use conjunctions(连词)
Use “ at first, then, at last(finally)” to show the time order.
A touching moment (V1)
helped
solve
finished
= finally
There _____ a touching moment bewteen my ______ and me. Last Saturday, ...
was
father
it was difficult for me to finish my math homework.
My father ______ me ______ the math problem. I ______ my homework on time.
Use conjunctions(连词)
Use “ at first, then, at last(finally)” to show the time order.
A touching moment (V1)
helped
solve
finished
Then, my father helped me solve the math problem. At last, I finished my homework on time.
= finally
A touching moment (版本2)
There was a touching moment bewteen my _____ and me.
Last Saturday, ...
I _____ my leg when I _____ my bike.
My mother ___________ me.
Use conjunctions(连词)
took care of
How did you feel
Show your feelings
(表达你的情感。）
It warmed my heart.
It made me so warm.
rode
hurt
Last Saturday, I hurt my leg when I rode my bike. Then my mother took care of me.
I felt so ____________.
touched/warm
A touching moment (版本3)
There was a touching moment bewteen my _____ and me.
Last Saturday, I decided to ____________ the school art festival.
I was __________.
My father saw my sad face and __________________________.
I was ___________ and ___________ my guitar.
Use conjunctions(连词)
nervous
on the stage
take part in
helped me practise the show
fired up
_______, I was nervous.
____, my father saw my sad face and helped me practise the show.
______, I was on the stage and fire up my guitar.
At first
Then
Finally
Practice
V1: There was a touching moment bewteen my ______ and me. Last ______, it was difficult for me to ______. Then, my ______ helped me ________. At last, I _______.
V2: There was a touching moment bewteen my ______ and me. Last ______, I hurt ______ when I ______. Then my _________. I felt so _______.
V3: There was a touching moment between my ______ and me. Last Saturday, I wanted to _______ the school art festival. At first, I was _______. Then, My ______ saw my sad face and helped me _______. Finally, I was ________.
Thoughts about your family
What is your father’s/mother’s love like Why
My father’s/mother’s love is like _____, because he/she ______.
My father’s love is like an umbrella/a big tree, because he protects me from winds and rains.
My mother’s love is like the sun, because it makes me so warm.
My mother’s love is like the sea, because it is wide and deep.
How do you feel about your family
I am __________to have a family like this.
lucky/glad
I love my family.
分段：
Para1
Para 2
Para 3
basic information 基本信息
family traditions 家庭传统
a touching moment 感人的时刻
thoughts about family 对家庭的想法
时态
一般现在时
一般现过去时
一般现在时
Practice
Family’s love is like __________, because it __________.
I am _______to have a family like this./I ______ my family.
Introduce your family
What to write
a. What is your family like
b. How many people are there in your family
c. What do you usually do with your family
A touching family moment
Feelings & Thoughts
A loving family moment
When was it
What happened
How did you feel
Para 1
introduce your family
Para 2
the moment
Para 3
thoughts and ideas
1. What’s your family like
2. How many people are there in your family
3. What do you usually do with
① When I was ten years old, ...
② When I was in Grade six, ...
③ Two years ago, ...
④ During the summer holiday, ...
When was it
Para 2
Who was there
What happened
Sample 1
① climb a mountain
② fall on the ground and hurt my legs
③ carry me on the back
④ get to the mountain top together
phrases
② I fell on the ground and hurt my legs.
③ My father carried me on his back.
④ We got to the mountain top together.
Para 2
① I climbed a mountain with my family.
sentences
时态
主语+Ved+其他
主语+was/were+其他
Sample 1
I climbed a mountain with my family. I fell on the ground and hurt my legs. My father carried me on his back. We got to the mountain top together.
at first,
then,
after that,
right at this
moment,
suddenly,
at last(finally),
...
I climbed a mountain with my family. At first, we talked happily. Suddenly, I fell on the ground and hurt my legs. Right at this moment, my father came to me and carried me on his back. At last, we got to the mountain top together.
Tip 1 Use conjunctions to show the order:
Who was there
What happened
Para 2
Who was there
What happened
Sample 2
phrases
Para 2
① an art festival
② play the guitar
③ nervous, comfort me
④ on the stage, fire up my guitar
③ I was very nervous. My family comforted me a lot.
④ I was on the stage and fired up my guitar.
① There was an art festival in our school.
② I decided to play the electric guitar in it.
sentences
Sample 1
There was an art festival in our school. I decided to play the guitar in it. I was very nervous. My family comforted me a lot. I was on the stage and fired up my guitar.
at first,
then,
at last(finally),
after that,
right at this
moment,
suddenly,
...
Tip 1 Use conjunctions to show the order:
Who was there
What happened
Para 2
There was an art festival in our school. I decided to play the electric guitar in it. At first, I was very nervous. Then, my family comforted me a lot. Finally, I was on the stage and fired up my guitar.
Write about the moment.
Let’s practice!
① Use the right tense
主语+Ved+其他; 主语+was/were+其他
② Set the time
③ Use conjunctions
When I was ten years old, ...
When I was in Grade six, ...
Two years ago, ...
During the summer holiday, ...
at first, then, at last(finally), after that, right at this moment, suddenly, ...
Sample 1
I fell on the ground and hurt my legs. Tears ran down my face.
My father carried me on his back. I felt so warm/touched on his back.
We got to the mountain top together. We were so exticed.
I climbed a mountain with my family. At first, we talked happily. Suddenly, I fell on the ground and hurt my legs. Right at this moment, my father carried me on his back. At last, we got to the mountain top together.
How did you feel
Para 3
Sample 2
My family comforted me a lot. It warmed my heart.
I was on the stage and fired up my guitar. I was so excited. Everybody moved with my music.
There was an art festival in our school. I decided to play the electric guitar in it. At first, I was very nervous. Then, my family comforted me a lot. Finally, I was on the stage and fired up my guitar.
How did you feel
Para 3
Write about your feelings.
Let’s practice!
① words to show feelings
... warm my heart
Tears ran down my face.
shake one’s head
move with...
be happy about...
see into each other’s hearts
enjoy the time together
it was a sad/... moment
do sth happily
...
adj.
happy,
excited,
touched,
surprised,
sad,
lonely,
nervous,
worried,
...
v.
rush,
hug,
kiss,
smile,
laugh,
...
② phrases to show feelings
thoughts and ideas
Para 3
① What is the father’s love like
My father’s love is like a mountain and it’s always there. I hope I can be his mountain too in the future.
② What do you think of family
Family is important to everyone. We should always support each other. With our families, we can go higher.
Family is like an umbrella for everyone. ...
The love from my family powers my guitar. When I face problems, I can always turn to my family for help. I love my family.
I have a happy family and we have many loving family moments. Let me share one of them with you.
Two years ago, I climbed a mountain with my family. At first, we talked with each other happily. Suddenly, I fell on the ground and hurt my legs. Tears ran down my face. Right at this moment, my father came to me and carried me on his back. I felt so warm on his back. At last, we got to the mountain top together. We were so exticed.
Family is important to everyone. We should always support each other. With our family, we can go higher.
参考U3 Writing lesson
家对于每个人来说都至关重要。假如你们下周英语角活动的主题是“my family”，请用英语写一篇短文，和同学们介绍自己的家庭和发生在家庭成员之间的感人时刻。
要求：
1. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 80词左右。
写作内容：
写作语言：
Basic information（基本信息）
What is your family like
I have a _______ and______ family. /I have a ______ but ______ family.
How many people are there in your family Who are they
There are_______people in my family.
They are __________,___________ and me.
Family traditions（家庭传统）
What do you usually do together on weekends
We usually _________________ together on weekends.
It’s very ____________./I feel so _________.
______________ _______________ _______________ _______________
A touching moment （感人的时刻）
版本1: There was a touching moment between my ____________ and me.
Last _____________, it was difficult for me to _______________.
_____ my_________ helped me ______________.
________, I ______________________.
版本2: There was a touching moment between my __________ and me. Last _______________, I hurt my________ when I _______________.
______ my ______________________________. I felt so _______________.
版本3: There was a touching moment between my ____________ and me.
Last Saturday, I decided to ____________________ the school art festival.
_______, I was ______________________.
______my _______________ saw my sad face and helped me _______________. _________, I _______________________________.
Thoughts about your family 对于你家人的想法
What is your father’s/mother’s love like Why
My father’s love is like_______________because he ___________________.
My mother’s love is like _____________because it ____________________.
My mother’s love is like ____________ because it _____________________.
How do you feel about your family
I _______________ my family.
I am _______________ to have a family like this.
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