【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优冀教版（2024）（含答案解析）
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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优冀教版（2024）
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是陈杰，在本周学校英语俱乐部的活动中，你要向大家介绍你在八年级的校园生活以及个人成长等方面的情况。请你根据下面的提示，结合自己的体验，用英语写一篇发言稿。
提示：(1)What do you think of your school life in Grade Eight
(2)What are your advantages and disadvantages now
(3)How can you get better in the following days
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone. I’m Chen Jie, I’m a student in Grade Eight.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
2．假如你是Li Hua，你校正在组织以“My Best Friend”为题的英文征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的好友Tom。
内容包括：1. 描绘特质；
2. 分享故事；
3. 表达期许。
注意：1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
My Best Friend
If I pick someone who makes my school days brighter, it must be my best friend, Tom.
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3．假如你是李华，你的笔友 David想了解你的好朋友李明。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的好朋友。
内容提示：
1. 李明比你高，也比你外向；
2. 李明喜欢跑步，他在你班中跑得最快；
3. 李明学习很努力，比你更擅长数学；
4. 你们喜欢一起阅读，经常分享有趣的书……
要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
3. 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m glad to tell you about my good friend Li Ming.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．学校英语角正在对学习成员进行梦想职业调查活动。请你围绕下图所示的问题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 根据上图所给提示，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone has their own dream jobs, and mine is to be
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5．一个国家有梦想，一个民族就有希望。作为时代青年，我们也应该有自己的梦想和职业规划！请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的理想职业并向校报投稿，
要点包括：1) What’s your dream job
2) Why do you want to do it
3) What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：1) 文中可包含所给的提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
My Dream Job
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6．假设你是李华，即将和父母一起外出度假，请你根据下面的内容要点，用给你的邻居一外国朋友Jim写一封邮件，请求他在你们外出度假期间帮忙照顾你家。
内容要点：(1)说明自己要去度假；
(2)提出希望Jim帮忙照顾的具体事项(不少于两项，如浇花、喂宠物等)；
(3)表达感谢。
注意：(1)包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称；
(3)词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词语：appreciate(v.感激)，worry-free(adj.无忧无虑的；无须担心的)。
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to tell you that
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Thanks again for your kindness.
Best,
Li Hua
7．假设你是李小明，英文名是Bob，今年寒假要去参加冬令营(winter camp)活动。请根据下列提示，用英文写一篇自我介绍。
提示：(1)来自信阳，每天吃大量水果、蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品；
(2)你认为健康是最重要的，所以每周锻炼两次，例如踢足球、游泳等；
(3)好友Jim比你高，比你外向，喜欢油画；
(4)以后想当一名科学家，为此你要努力学习，取得好成绩。
要求：(1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
(4)词数：90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob.
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8．假如你校英语社团正在开展主题为“友谊”的征文比赛，请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你最好的朋友并讲述一个发生在你们之间的故事。
提示：
①Appearance and personalities
②Similarities and differences
③A story between you and your friend
④Feelings
注意：(1) 短文须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
(2) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3) 词数70个左右。
My best friend
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9．假设你是李华，学校网站正在征集以“My Best Friend and I”为主题的稿件。请根据以下提示问题，给网站投递一篇英文稿件，内容包括介绍你的好友 (假设是刘宇)、你们的共同点与不同之处等方面，谈谈你对交友的看法。
内容提示：
Who is your best friend
Do you have something in common
How are you different from each other
Something more about the topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅80词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
My Best Friend and I
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10．“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”比喻接近好人可以使人变好，接近坏人可以使人变坏，说的就是选择朋友的重要性。请你以“My Best Friend”为题，结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文，向我们介绍一下你的好朋友。内容包括：
1.你最好朋友的基本信息。如：名字、外貌、性格、爱好等。
2.他/她的性格跟你的异同。
3.你对朋友的看法。
注意：
1.词数为70词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Best Friend
I have a best friend.
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11．友谊，因“同”而共鸣，因“异”而精彩。你校校刊英语专栏以“My Best Friend and I”为话题发起征文，请你从外貌、性格、爱好、特长、学习、生活习惯等方面描述你和你的一个好朋友。
内容包括：
1. 你们的相同之处；（至少两点）
2. 你们的不同之处；（至少三点）
3. 你如何看待这些异同。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outgoing (adj.外向的), difference (n.不同), be good at (擅长)
My Best Friend and I
Everyone has his or her best friend.
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12．你和Tina是好朋友，你们有一些共同之处，但也有一些不同之处，请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇小短文介绍你和你的朋友。
You Tina
外貌 长头发，又高又瘦 (long hair, tall and thin ) 长头发，比我高，有点儿胖 (fat)
性格 文静，害羞 (quiet, shy) 比我外向，比我聪明 (outgoing, smart)
兴趣爱好 每天阅读一小时，喜欢看新闻 (read books，watch news) 每周运动4次，喜欢看动作片 (do exercise, watch action movies)
理想 两人将去上同一所大学，都当记者。(go to university, journalist)
要求：1. 紧扣要点，语句通顺；
2. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名或校名。
Tina is my best friend. We have something in common,
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13．2024年12月4日，中国春节申遗成功。春节是中国传统节日，令人期待的蛇年 (Year of the Snake) 新春即将到来。假如你是腾飞，你的美国朋友Kate发来一封邮件，想了解春节传统食物和活动以及你家人的新年决心。请你根据以下内容回复一封英语邮件。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥；
(2) 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)；
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
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Yours,
Teng Fei
14．俗话说，同道为朋，同志为友。在茫茫人海中，能够遇到好朋友，是一种缘分，也是一种幸运。假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“My Best Friend and I”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据提示写一篇演讲稿。要求如下：
1.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.你和最好的朋友在外貌、性格、爱好和生活习惯方面的相同点和不同点；
3.谈谈你对友谊的看法；
4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Best Friend and I
Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to talk about my best friend and me today.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
15．共欢新故岁，迎送一宵中。寒假的脚步悄然而至，喜庆热闹的春节(the Spring Festival)也近在眼前。假如你是李华，今年春节，你的英国好友Mary也将在中国度过，你想邀请她一同参与你们家的迎春派对。请你根据以下要点写一封邀请函，简要介绍中国春节、迎春派对的信息并向Mary发出邀请。
派对信息时间：星期五下午 地点：李华家 活动：吃中国传统食物，玩游戏，分享新年决心……建议：穿红衣服
介绍春节中国的传统节日之一 一个家庭相聚时刻
相聚：reunion /get together
要求：
(1) 包含必要的信息点，需适当补充。
(2) 字数80词左右。开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I would like to invite you to the party to celebrate the Spring Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．你校英文月刊发起了题为“My Best Friend and I”的征文活动，请仔细阅读以下通知，并结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
NoticeWe can’t live without friends, but to get true friends is not easy. We expect you to say the following things:◆Who is your best friend ◆What does she/he look like ◆What’s her/his personality (性格) ◆Tell us a story between you and your friend. ◆What is the meaning (意义) of having good friends for you Share with us!ENGLISH MONTHLY
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须回应通知中所提到的信息；
2.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Best Friend and I
My best friend is
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17．有人认为朋友应该相似，有人认为朋友应该不同。你校校报英语专栏正开展主题为“How can teenagers make true friends ”的征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种观点中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对该问题的看法。
提示：
Opinion make friends who are the same as me make friends who are different from me
Reasons ★understand each other ★do something ... ★have a more interesting and colourful life ★learn something new ...
要求：1. 包含所选观点中的全部要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr Liu/Ms Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang;
4. 词数：不少于60。（标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How can teenagers make true friends
Friends are important for everyone.
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18．友谊是生活中不可或缺的部分。朋友就像夜空中最亮的星，照亮我们一路前行。请以“My friend and Me”为题目，写一篇短文介绍身边一位好友。
内容包括：
1. 你对友谊的看法；
2. 与他/她的相似及不同之处；
3. 一起经历的某件有意义之事及感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全并适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My friend and Me
Friendship is really important in our life.
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19．假如你是李平，本期英语社团的沙龙活动需要你围绕以下三句交友名言展开讨论，请结合内容提示写一篇发言稿。
A good friend is like a mirror.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
We are different, but we can be stronger together.
要点提示：1. 你最喜欢以上哪一条交友名言？这条名言让你想起了哪一个朋友
2. 简单介绍你和你朋友的相同之处和不同之处 (至少两处使用比较级)，并用过去的一次具体经历叙述他/她给你的帮助。
3. 对朋友的评价和祝愿。
要求：1.词数 80-100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Hello, my favorite saying is
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20．假如你是李华，请你根据下面的提示给你的Canada笔友Lucas写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的新学期第一周。
提示：
(1) How was your first week of the new term
(2) Do you have a new subject/classmate/teacher/…
(3) What is the new subject/classmate/teacher/…like
注意：
(1)电子邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(2)关于新学期的科目、活动、同学、老师等至少介绍 3 点；
(3)词数 80 左右（开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lucas,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Chen Jie, I’m a student in Grade Eight.
I think my school life is meaningful and busy. Although I have more subjects and homework, I enjoy studying with my classmates. I do well in English writing, but I need to improve my spoken English. Sometimes I feel too shy to speak up in class, worrying about making mistakes. To overcome this, my plan is to practice speaking English every day and talk with my friends in English after school. I believe I will do much better in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述现在的校园生活是怎样的；
第二步，说明自己的优缺点；
第三步，提出计划和展望。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②improve改善
③make mistakes犯错
④talk with sb.和某人谈话
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is meaningful and busy. (运用了宾语从句和并列形容词结构)
②Although I have more subjects and homework, I enjoy studying with my classmates. (Although引导让步状语从句)
③To overcome this, my plan is to practice speaking English every day and talk with my friends in English after school. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．例文
My Best Friend
If I pick someone who makes my school days brighter, it must be my best friend, Tom.
Tom likes reading and travelling. During his summer holiday, he often travels to places of interest to learn a lot about different cultures. He often goes to see giant pandas in the zoo. He puts many photos of pandas on his home page. Besides, he often plays basketball every weekend. He thinks doing sports can make him healthy.
Having a best friend like Tom makes me lucky. He teaches me to be kind, brave, and a good listener. I hope we’ll be friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，描绘朋友的特质并分享故事；
第三步，对彼此的友谊表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②places of interest名胜古迹
③do sports做运动
[高分句型]
①He thinks doing sports can make him healthy.（宾语从句）
②I hope we’ll be friends forever.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Dear David,
I’m glad to tell you about my good friend Li Ming. He is taller and more outgoing than me. Li Ming loves running and he is the fastest runner in our class. He studies very hard and is better at math than I am. We both enjoy reading and often share interesting books with each other. He is not only a great friend but also helps me a lot with my studies.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述李明的外貌、性格、运动能力、学习情况及共同爱好；
第三步，总结对李明的评价，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②each other互相
[高分句型]
①We both enjoy reading and often share interesting books with each other.（动名词作宾语）
②He is not only a great friend but also helps me a lot with my studies.（not only…but also结构）
4．例文：
Everyone has their own dream jobs, and mine is to be a doctor. I want to help people stay healthy and get better when they’re sick.
To make this come true, I’ll study hard at school, especially in science. Then I’ll go to college to learn medicine and practice my skills in hospitals.
In the future, I’ll move to a big city for further education. I’ll work to help more patients, and I believe I’ll live a comfortable life while doing something meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为 “一般现在时”和 “一般将来时”；
③提示：涵盖了“梦想职业、实现方式、未来生活”的所有要点，内容完整且细节合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明个人梦想职业，并简述职业初衷；
第二步，说明实现梦想的具体规划：在校努力学习、大学攻读医学、医院练习技能；
第三步，描述从事该职业后的未来生活：前往大城市深造、帮助更多患者、拥有有意义的舒适生活。
[亮点词汇]
①come true实现
②further education深造
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I’ll work to help more patients, and I believe I’ll live a comfortable life while doing something meaningful. (while引导的时间状语从句省略结构)
5．范文：
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.
In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. And I often go to the library to learn about medicine. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为短文投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“每个人都有梦想”来引出自己的梦想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现梦想”几个方面重点阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达“梦想终有一天会实现”的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③as much as possible尽可能多地
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.（since then现在完成时的标志词）
6．范文：
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to tell you that my parents and I will be going on a holiday next week.
Could you please give me a hand and help take care of my home while we’re away Firstly, could you please water the flowers in the garden every two days They need regular watering, especially in this hot weather. Secondly, could you feed our pet dog Lucky There is enough dog food in the box near the balcony.
I really appreciate your help. Your help will make our holiday worry-free.
Thanks again for your kindness.
Best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；
③提示：需包含三个要点（度假说明、具体请求、感谢），可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并说明度假计划；
第二步：具体说明需要帮助的事项；
第三步：表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①going on a holiday度假
②give me a hand帮助我
③regular有规律的
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you that my parents and I will be going on a holiday next week.（宾语从句）
②Could you please give me a hand and help take care of my home while we’re away （时间状语从句）
7．例文
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob. I come from Xinyang. I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day and hardly ever eat junk food. I think the most important thing is to keep healthy. So I exercise twice a week, such as playing football, going swimming, riding bikes and so on.
My good friend Jim is taller and more outgoing than me. And he likes paintings best. He thinks they are wonderful.
In the future, I want to be a scientist. So I must study hard and get good grades. I feel lucky to join you.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】第一步：介绍自己的个人背景、饮食和健康习惯；
第二步：介绍朋友Jim；
第三步：介绍自己未来目标。
【亮点词汇】①come from来自
②lots of许多
③hardly ever几乎不
④keep healthy保持健康
⑤such as例如
⑥and so on等等，诸如此类
【高分句型】①I think the most important thing is to keep healthy.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
8．例文
My best friend
My best friend, Lily, has short black hair. She is kind. We both love reading, but she is more outgoing than I am.
Last year, I was nervous about a school competition. Lily encouraged me every day. Her support made me feel confident. When I won third place, she was the first to congratulate me.
Lily’s friendship showed me it is important to keep trying. I feel lucky to have such a true friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的外貌和性格，以及自己和朋友的相同点和不同点；
第二步，介绍自己因比赛紧张，朋友鼓励自己的事情；
第三步，表示友谊让自己知道不断尝试是很重要的，且表明有这样一个真正的朋友，自己感到很幸运。
[亮点词汇]
①be nervous about对……感到紧张
②made me feel confident让我感到自信
③won third place获得第三名
④keep trying坚持尝试
[高分句型]
①When I won third place, she was the first to congratulate me. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②Lily’s friendship showed me it is important to keep trying. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文：
My Best Friend and I
My best friend is Liu Yu. We’ve known each other since primary school. We have a lot in common. Both of us are outgoing and love sports, especially basketball. We often play together after school. However, we also have differences. I’m more interested in history, while he prefers science. I’m good at drawing, but he does well in math. In my opinion, true friends accept each other’s differences and help each other grow. I’m lucky to have such a great friend!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，包括介绍好友、共同点、不同之处及交友看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“My best friend is Liu Yu”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“共同点、不同之处”几个方面重点介绍自己和好友的情况，并阐述自己对交友的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达“幸运有这样一位好友”的感慨。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lot in common 有很多共同点
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③do well in 在……方面做得好
[高分句型]
①Both of us are outgoing and love sports, especially basketball.（并列句结构）
②In my opinion, true friends accept each other’s differences and help each other grow.（宾语从句）
10．例文：
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Chen Jie. She is as tall as me. She likes reading books.
We are both helpful. But we’re different in many ways. I’m kind of shy and she is more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour. When I feel sad, she makes me laugh.
For me, I’d like friends who are different from me, because we can learn from each other and be stronger together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需涵盖朋友的基本信息、性格异同、个人看法，注意字数限制和匿名要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的基本信息，包括名字、外貌、爱好；
第二步，对比两人性格的异同，并举例说明。
第三步，表达对朋友的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①as...as...像……一样……
②in many ways在很多方面
③a great sense of humour极强的幽默感
④be different from与……不同
⑤learn from each other互相学习
[高分句型]
①When I feel sad, she makes me laugh. (when引导时间状语从句)
②For me, I’d like friends who are different from me, because we can learn from each other and be stronger together. (because引导原因状语从句)
11．例文:
My Best Friend and I
Everyone has his or her best friend. My best friend is Lucy. We are both outgoing and love reading books.
However, we have many differences, too. I am tall with short hair, while Lucy is shorter but has long hair. I like going to bed early, but she always stays up late. Also, she is good at math, while I do better in English.
I think our differences make our friendship wonderful. We can learn from each other. What’s more, we should respect each other’s habits. These similarities and differences help us grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，需涵盖相同点（至少两点）、不同点（至少三点）及个人观点，词数80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，简要介绍朋友并概括与朋友的相同之处；
第二步，介绍自己和朋友之间的不同之处；
第三步，表达对异同的看法，总结友谊的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① stay up late熬夜
② similarities相似点
[高分句型]
① She studies math well, while I do better in English.（运用while连接并列句，对比差异）
② I think our similarities make us closer, and our differences help us learn from each other.（运用and连接并列宾语从句，表达观点）
12．例文
Tina is my best friend. We have something in common, but we are also different in some ways.
Both of us have long hair, but Tina is taller and a little fat, while I am tall and thin. In personality, I am quiet and shy, but Tina is more outgoing and smarter than me.
Our hobbies are different too. I read books and watch news every day, but Tina exercises four times a week and enjoys action movies.
However, we share the same dream—we will go to the same university and both become journalists in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：紧扣表格要点，对比外貌（长头发、身高体型）、性格（文静害羞 vs 外向聪明）、兴趣爱好（阅读看新闻 vs 运动看动作片）和共同理想（上大学当记者），突出相似与不同。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍相似之处（外貌和理想），使用开头句衔接。
第二步：详细描述不同点（外貌、性格、兴趣爱好），用对比连词如“while”和“but”。
第三步：总结共同理想并表达友谊，确保覆盖所有表格内容。
[亮点词汇]
① outgoing 外向的
② action movies 动作片
③ journalists 记者
[高分句型]
① Both of us have long hair, but Tina is taller and a little fat, while I am tall and thin.（并列句）
② I am quiet and shy, but Tina is more outgoing and smarter than me.（比较级）
13．例文：
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
This Year of the Snake, we’ll have traditional food like dumplings—they’re wrapped with tasty fillings and symbolize good luck. Our activities include getting together with relatives to share stories, and watching the lively Spring Festival Gala on New Year’s Eve. My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. As for me, I plan to keep fit by exercising regularly, improve myself through better grades, and strengthen my relationships with family and friends.
I’m already looking forward to the warm festival!
Yours,
Teng Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的；
第二步，介绍春节期间的食物、活动，家人和自己的新年决心；
第三步，表达对春节的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①good luck好运
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. （动词不定式作表语）
14．
My Best Friend and I
Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to talk about my best friend and me today.
My best friend is Lucy. We both have black hair and dark eyes, but she is taller than me. In terms of personality, I am quiet while she is very outgoing. However, we share the same hobby—reading. We often exchange books and discuss stories. As for living habits, I go to bed early but she prefers staying up late.
I believe friendship means accepting differences and growing together. Though we are different in some ways, we always support each other. Treasure your friends because they make life colorful.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析］
① 题材：演讲稿；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需包含外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯的异同及对友谊的看法。
[写作步骤］
第一步：描述外貌、性格的异同（使用but/while对比）；
第二步：说明爱好和生活习惯的异同（用however/as for过渡）；
第三步：表达对友谊的看法（总结升华）。
[亮点词汇］
① In terms of谈及……方面
② prefer doing sth.更喜欢做某事
③ staying up late熬夜
④ in some ways在某些方面
⑤support each other互相支持
[高分句型］
① We both have black hair and dark eyes, but she is taller than me.（运用but连接的并列句表示对比）
② In terms of personality, I am quiet while she is very outgoing.（运用while连接并列句强调性格反差）
③Treasure your friends because they make life colorful.（运用祈使句+原因状语从句提出倡议）
15．例文
Dear Mary,
I would like to invite you to the party to celebrate the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which means reunion.
The party will be held at Li Hua’s house on Friday afternoon. There will be many activities, such as eating traditional Chinese food, playing games and sharing our New year’s resolutions. By the way, you had better wear red clothes as red is a symbol of luck.
In a word, the Spring Festival is a cheerful and meaningful festival and I sincerely hope that you can come to enjoy it with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇邀请函，属于应用文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括春节的介绍、派对的时间、地点、活动以及建议等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍春节的重要性和意义，引出邀请的主题；
第二步，具体阐述派对的时间、地点和活动安排，这是文章的核心部分；
第三步，给出穿红衣服的建议，并解释原因或意义；
第四步，最后表达期待Mary参加派对的愿望，并结束邀请函。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the most important traditional festivals 最重要的传统节日之一
② mean reunion 意味着团聚
③ be held at... 在……举行
④ such as 例如
⑤ had better do sth. 最好做某事
⑥ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which means reunion.（使用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
16．
范文：
My best friend is Lucy. She has short curly hair and bright eyes. She is very friendly and always ready to help others. Wherever she is, the laughter and smiles are there. For example, when I felt sad last week, she listened to me and cheered me up. I felt warm from the bottom of my heart at that time. And this made me realize how important friendship is.
Good friends bring joy and support. They help us face difficulties and make life more meaningful. Friendship is a precious gift.
【详解】总体分析
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”，故事部分用“一般过去时”；
③提示：需回应通知中的五点：谁是最好的朋友、外貌、性格、一个故事、好朋友的意义。
写作步骤
第一步：用开头句介绍朋友是谁（Lucy），并描述外貌（short curly hair, bright eyes）；
第二步：说明性格（friendly and helpful），并分享一个简短故事（when I felt sad, she cheered me up）；
第三步：解释好朋友的意义（bring joy and support, help face difficulties），并总结友谊的价值。
亮点词汇
①short curly hair短的卷发
②be ready to do乐于去做某事
③For example例如
高分句型
when I felt sad last week, she listened to me and cheered me up.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
17．
例文
How can teenagers make true friends
Friends are important for everyone. I think teenagers should make friends who are different from themselves. Firstly, friends with different hobbies and personalities make my life more interesting and colourful. For example, I’m quiet and love reading, but my friend Ma Li is outgoing and enjoys outdoor activities. She often invites me to go hiking or play badminton, which makes my daily life less boring. Also, we can learn something new from each other. Once, Ma Li taught me how to swim, and I helped her with English. This made us grow together. Remember, friendship is about accepting differences while growing together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，明确表达观点，选择与不同的人交朋友；
第二步、分点阐述理由，先说明不同朋友能让生活更有趣，再补充能相互学习新事物，论据真实具体；
第三步、书写结语，点明友谊的真谛是接纳差异、共同成长。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from不同于
②go hiking去徒步旅行
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①I think teenagers should make friends who are different from themselves.（宾语从句、定语从句）
②She often invites me to go hiking or play badminton, which makes my daily life less boring.（定语从句）
18．
例文
My friend and Me
Friendship is really important in our life. I think a true friend is like a mirror who helps us know ourselves better.
My best friend is Li Hua. We both love reading and playing basketball, but I am more outgoing while he is quieter. Last month, we joined a volunteer activity to clean up the city park. We worked hard together and we all felt proud to make our city cleaner.
I cherish our friendship because it brings me joy and strength.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：首段承接已给开头，简要表达对友谊的看法；
第二步：介绍朋友姓名，描述性格异同并用具体事例体现友谊的意义；
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①love doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②feel proud of sth. 为……感到自豪
③make sth. adj. 使某物……
④bring sb. sth. 带给某人某物
[高分句型]
①I think a true friend is like a mirror who helps us know ourselves better. (省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句)
②We both love reading and playing basketball, but I am more outgoing while he is quieter. (but引导转折关系的并列句；while引导让步状语从句)
③We worked hard together and we all felt proud to make our city cleaner. (and并列句)
④I cherish our friendship because it brings me joy and strength. (because引导原因状语从句)
19．One possible version
Hello, my favorite saying is “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart”. It always reminds me of my friend Lily.
Lily is more outgoing than me—she loves talking to people, while I’m a bit shy. She’s also more patient than I am in dealing with problems. Last month, I failed my math test and felt really sad. Lily sat beside me, held my hand, and helped me go over every mistake. Her words made me feel warm and confident again.
Lily is like a bright light in my life. I hope we’ll stay friends forever and support each other always.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：围绕朋友的性格差异、具体帮助事例以及友谊的意义展开，需体现格言与实际的结合。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引用格言引出朋友；
第二步，对比性格差异并叙述他/她给你的帮助；
第三步，表达对友谊的珍视与祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①go over仔细检查
②feel warm and confident感到温暖与自信
③support each other互相支持
[高分句型]
①She’s also more patient than I am in dealing with problems.（比较级结构）
②I hope we’ll stay friends forever and support each other always.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文
Dear Lucas,
How is everything going The first week of the new term was great!
We have a new classmate named Liu Yang. He is really friendly and full of energy. He quickly made friends with all of us. Also, we start a new subject—physics. Our physics teacher, Mr Wang, is so cool. He explains everything in an interesting way, making the lessons lively and easy to understand. I think physics is super interesting and challenging.
There are also some school activities this week. It seems that this term will be full of fun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开头问候并总述第一周感受；
第二步、分三点介绍新同学、新科目、新老师；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②made friends交朋友
③easy to understand易于理解
[高分句型]
I think physics is super interesting and challenging.(宾语从句)
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专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是陈杰，在本周学校英语俱乐部的活动中，你要向大家介绍你在八年级的校园生活以及个人成长等方面的情况。请你根据下面的提示，结合自己的体验，用英语写一篇发言稿。
提示：(1)What do you think of your school life in Grade Eight
(2)What are your advantages and disadvantages now
(3)How can you get better in the following days
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone. I’m Chen Jie, I’m a student in Grade Eight.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
2．假如你是Li Hua，你校正在组织以“My Best Friend”为题的英文征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的好友Tom。
内容包括：1. 描绘特质；
2. 分享故事；
3. 表达期许。
注意：1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
My Best Friend
If I pick someone who makes my school days brighter, it must be my best friend, Tom.
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3．假如你是李华，你的笔友 David想了解你的好朋友李明。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的好朋友。
内容提示：
1. 李明比你高，也比你外向；
2. 李明喜欢跑步，他在你班中跑得最快；
3. 李明学习很努力，比你更擅长数学；
4. 你们喜欢一起阅读，经常分享有趣的书……
要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
3. 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m glad to tell you about my good friend Li Ming.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．学校英语角正在对学习成员进行梦想职业调查活动。请你围绕下图所示的问题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 根据上图所给提示，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone has their own dream jobs, and mine is to be
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5．一个国家有梦想，一个民族就有希望。作为时代青年，我们也应该有自己的梦想和职业规划！请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的理想职业并向校报投稿，
要点包括：1) What’s your dream job
2) Why do you want to do it
3) What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：1) 文中可包含所给的提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
My Dream Job
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6．假设你是李华，即将和父母一起外出度假，请你根据下面的内容要点，用给你的邻居一外国朋友Jim写一封邮件，请求他在你们外出度假期间帮忙照顾你家。
内容要点：(1)说明自己要去度假；
(2)提出希望Jim帮忙照顾的具体事项(不少于两项，如浇花、喂宠物等)；
(3)表达感谢。
注意：(1)包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称；
(3)词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词语：appreciate(v.感激)，worry-free(adj.无忧无虑的；无须担心的)。
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to tell you that
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Thanks again for your kindness.
Best,
Li Hua
7．假设你是李小明，英文名是Bob，今年寒假要去参加冬令营(winter camp)活动。请根据下列提示，用英文写一篇自我介绍。
提示：(1)来自信阳，每天吃大量水果、蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品；
(2)你认为健康是最重要的，所以每周锻炼两次，例如踢足球、游泳等；
(3)好友Jim比你高，比你外向，喜欢油画；
(4)以后想当一名科学家，为此你要努力学习，取得好成绩。
要求：(1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
(4)词数：90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob.
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8．假如你校英语社团正在开展主题为“友谊”的征文比赛，请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你最好的朋友并讲述一个发生在你们之间的故事。
提示：
①Appearance and personalities
②Similarities and differences
③A story between you and your friend
④Feelings
注意：(1) 短文须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
(2) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3) 词数70个左右。
My best friend
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9．假设你是李华，学校网站正在征集以“My Best Friend and I”为主题的稿件。请根据以下提示问题，给网站投递一篇英文稿件，内容包括介绍你的好友 (假设是刘宇)、你们的共同点与不同之处等方面，谈谈你对交友的看法。
内容提示：
Who is your best friend
Do you have something in common
How are you different from each other
Something more about the topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅80词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
My Best Friend and I
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10．“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”比喻接近好人可以使人变好，接近坏人可以使人变坏，说的就是选择朋友的重要性。请你以“My Best Friend”为题，结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文，向我们介绍一下你的好朋友。内容包括：
1.你最好朋友的基本信息。如：名字、外貌、性格、爱好等。
2.他/她的性格跟你的异同。
3.你对朋友的看法。
注意：
1.词数为70词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Best Friend
I have a best friend.
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11．友谊，因“同”而共鸣，因“异”而精彩。你校校刊英语专栏以“My Best Friend and I”为话题发起征文，请你从外貌、性格、爱好、特长、学习、生活习惯等方面描述你和你的一个好朋友。
内容包括：
1. 你们的相同之处；（至少两点）
2. 你们的不同之处；（至少三点）
3. 你如何看待这些异同。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outgoing (adj.外向的), difference (n.不同), be good at (擅长)
My Best Friend and I
Everyone has his or her best friend.
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12．你和Tina是好朋友，你们有一些共同之处，但也有一些不同之处，请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇小短文介绍你和你的朋友。
You Tina
外貌 长头发，又高又瘦 (long hair, tall and thin ) 长头发，比我高，有点儿胖 (fat)
性格 文静，害羞 (quiet, shy) 比我外向，比我聪明 (outgoing, smart)
兴趣爱好 每天阅读一小时，喜欢看新闻 (read books，watch news) 每周运动4次，喜欢看动作片 (do exercise, watch action movies)
理想 两人将去上同一所大学，都当记者。(go to university, journalist)
要求：1. 紧扣要点，语句通顺；
2. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名或校名。
Tina is my best friend. We have something in common,
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13．2024年12月4日，中国春节申遗成功。春节是中国传统节日，令人期待的蛇年 (Year of the Snake) 新春即将到来。假如你是腾飞，你的美国朋友Kate发来一封邮件，想了解春节传统食物和活动以及你家人的新年决心。请你根据以下内容回复一封英语邮件。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥；
(2) 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)；
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
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Yours,
Teng Fei
14．俗话说，同道为朋，同志为友。在茫茫人海中，能够遇到好朋友，是一种缘分，也是一种幸运。假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“My Best Friend and I”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据提示写一篇演讲稿。要求如下：
1.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.你和最好的朋友在外貌、性格、爱好和生活习惯方面的相同点和不同点；
3.谈谈你对友谊的看法；
4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Best Friend and I
Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to talk about my best friend and me today.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
15．共欢新故岁，迎送一宵中。寒假的脚步悄然而至，喜庆热闹的春节(the Spring Festival)也近在眼前。假如你是李华，今年春节，你的英国好友Mary也将在中国度过，你想邀请她一同参与你们家的迎春派对。请你根据以下要点写一封邀请函，简要介绍中国春节、迎春派对的信息并向Mary发出邀请。
派对信息时间：星期五下午 地点：李华家 活动：吃中国传统食物，玩游戏，分享新年决心……建议：穿红衣服
介绍春节中国的传统节日之一 一个家庭相聚时刻
相聚：reunion /get together
要求：
(1) 包含必要的信息点，需适当补充。
(2) 字数80词左右。开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I would like to invite you to the party to celebrate the Spring Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．你校英文月刊发起了题为“My Best Friend and I”的征文活动，请仔细阅读以下通知，并结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
NoticeWe can’t live without friends, but to get true friends is not easy. We expect you to say the following things:◆Who is your best friend ◆What does she/he look like ◆What’s her/his personality (性格) ◆Tell us a story between you and your friend. ◆What is the meaning (意义) of having good friends for you Share with us!ENGLISH MONTHLY
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须回应通知中所提到的信息；
2.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Best Friend and I
My best friend is
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17．有人认为朋友应该相似，有人认为朋友应该不同。你校校报英语专栏正开展主题为“How can teenagers make true friends ”的征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种观点中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对该问题的看法。
提示：
Opinion make friends who are the same as me make friends who are different from me
Reasons ★understand each other ★do something ... ★have a more interesting and colourful life ★learn something new ...
要求：1. 包含所选观点中的全部要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr Liu/Ms Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang;
4. 词数：不少于60。（标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How can teenagers make true friends
Friends are important for everyone.
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18．友谊是生活中不可或缺的部分。朋友就像夜空中最亮的星，照亮我们一路前行。请以“My friend and Me”为题目，写一篇短文介绍身边一位好友。
内容包括：
1. 你对友谊的看法；
2. 与他/她的相似及不同之处；
3. 一起经历的某件有意义之事及感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全并适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My friend and Me
Friendship is really important in our life.
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19．假如你是李平，本期英语社团的沙龙活动需要你围绕以下三句交友名言展开讨论，请结合内容提示写一篇发言稿。
A good friend is like a mirror.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
We are different, but we can be stronger together.
要点提示：1. 你最喜欢以上哪一条交友名言？这条名言让你想起了哪一个朋友
2. 简单介绍你和你朋友的相同之处和不同之处 (至少两处使用比较级)，并用过去的一次具体经历叙述他/她给你的帮助。
3. 对朋友的评价和祝愿。
要求：1.词数 80-100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Hello, my favorite saying is
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20．假如你是李华，请你根据下面的提示给你的Canada笔友Lucas写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的新学期第一周。
提示：
(1) How was your first week of the new term
(2) Do you have a new subject/classmate/teacher/…
(3) What is the new subject/classmate/teacher/…like
注意：
(1)电子邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(2)关于新学期的科目、活动、同学、老师等至少介绍 3 点；
(3)词数 80 左右（开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lucas,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Chen Jie, I’m a student in Grade Eight.
I think my school life is meaningful and busy. Although I have more subjects and homework, I enjoy studying with my classmates. I do well in English writing, but I need to improve my spoken English. Sometimes I feel too shy to speak up in class, worrying about making mistakes. To overcome this, my plan is to practice speaking English every day and talk with my friends in English after school. I believe I will do much better in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述现在的校园生活是怎样的；
第二步，说明自己的优缺点；
第三步，提出计划和展望。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②improve改善
③make mistakes犯错
④talk with sb.和某人谈话
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is meaningful and busy. (运用了宾语从句和并列形容词结构)
②Although I have more subjects and homework, I enjoy studying with my classmates. (Although引导让步状语从句)
③To overcome this, my plan is to practice speaking English every day and talk with my friends in English after school. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．例文
My Best Friend
If I pick someone who makes my school days brighter, it must be my best friend, Tom.
Tom likes reading and travelling. During his summer holiday, he often travels to places of interest to learn a lot about different cultures. He often goes to see giant pandas in the zoo. He puts many photos of pandas on his home page. Besides, he often plays basketball every weekend. He thinks doing sports can make him healthy.
Having a best friend like Tom makes me lucky. He teaches me to be kind, brave, and a good listener. I hope we’ll be friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，描绘朋友的特质并分享故事；
第三步，对彼此的友谊表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②places of interest名胜古迹
③do sports做运动
[高分句型]
①He thinks doing sports can make him healthy.（宾语从句）
②I hope we’ll be friends forever.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Dear David,
I’m glad to tell you about my good friend Li Ming. He is taller and more outgoing than me. Li Ming loves running and he is the fastest runner in our class. He studies very hard and is better at math than I am. We both enjoy reading and often share interesting books with each other. He is not only a great friend but also helps me a lot with my studies.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述李明的外貌、性格、运动能力、学习情况及共同爱好；
第三步，总结对李明的评价，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②each other互相
[高分句型]
①We both enjoy reading and often share interesting books with each other.（动名词作宾语）
②He is not only a great friend but also helps me a lot with my studies.（not only…but also结构）
4．例文：
Everyone has their own dream jobs, and mine is to be a doctor. I want to help people stay healthy and get better when they’re sick.
To make this come true, I’ll study hard at school, especially in science. Then I’ll go to college to learn medicine and practice my skills in hospitals.
In the future, I’ll move to a big city for further education. I’ll work to help more patients, and I believe I’ll live a comfortable life while doing something meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为 “一般现在时”和 “一般将来时”；
③提示：涵盖了“梦想职业、实现方式、未来生活”的所有要点，内容完整且细节合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明个人梦想职业，并简述职业初衷；
第二步，说明实现梦想的具体规划：在校努力学习、大学攻读医学、医院练习技能；
第三步，描述从事该职业后的未来生活：前往大城市深造、帮助更多患者、拥有有意义的舒适生活。
[亮点词汇]
①come true实现
②further education深造
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I’ll work to help more patients, and I believe I’ll live a comfortable life while doing something meaningful. (while引导的时间状语从句省略结构)
5．范文：
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.
In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. And I often go to the library to learn about medicine. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为短文投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“每个人都有梦想”来引出自己的梦想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现梦想”几个方面重点阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达“梦想终有一天会实现”的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③as much as possible尽可能多地
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.（since then现在完成时的标志词）
6．范文：
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to tell you that my parents and I will be going on a holiday next week.
Could you please give me a hand and help take care of my home while we’re away Firstly, could you please water the flowers in the garden every two days They need regular watering, especially in this hot weather. Secondly, could you feed our pet dog Lucky There is enough dog food in the box near the balcony.
I really appreciate your help. Your help will make our holiday worry-free.
Thanks again for your kindness.
Best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；
③提示：需包含三个要点（度假说明、具体请求、感谢），可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并说明度假计划；
第二步：具体说明需要帮助的事项；
第三步：表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①going on a holiday度假
②give me a hand帮助我
③regular有规律的
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you that my parents and I will be going on a holiday next week.（宾语从句）
②Could you please give me a hand and help take care of my home while we’re away （时间状语从句）
7．例文
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob. I come from Xinyang. I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day and hardly ever eat junk food. I think the most important thing is to keep healthy. So I exercise twice a week, such as playing football, going swimming, riding bikes and so on.
My good friend Jim is taller and more outgoing than me. And he likes paintings best. He thinks they are wonderful.
In the future, I want to be a scientist. So I must study hard and get good grades. I feel lucky to join you.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】第一步：介绍自己的个人背景、饮食和健康习惯；
第二步：介绍朋友Jim；
第三步：介绍自己未来目标。
【亮点词汇】①come from来自
②lots of许多
③hardly ever几乎不
④keep healthy保持健康
⑤such as例如
⑥and so on等等，诸如此类
【高分句型】①I think the most important thing is to keep healthy.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
8．例文
My best friend
My best friend, Lily, has short black hair. She is kind. We both love reading, but she is more outgoing than I am.
Last year, I was nervous about a school competition. Lily encouraged me every day. Her support made me feel confident. When I won third place, she was the first to congratulate me.
Lily’s friendship showed me it is important to keep trying. I feel lucky to have such a true friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的外貌和性格，以及自己和朋友的相同点和不同点；
第二步，介绍自己因比赛紧张，朋友鼓励自己的事情；
第三步，表示友谊让自己知道不断尝试是很重要的，且表明有这样一个真正的朋友，自己感到很幸运。
[亮点词汇]
①be nervous about对……感到紧张
②made me feel confident让我感到自信
③won third place获得第三名
④keep trying坚持尝试
[高分句型]
①When I won third place, she was the first to congratulate me. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②Lily’s friendship showed me it is important to keep trying. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文：
My Best Friend and I
My best friend is Liu Yu. We’ve known each other since primary school. We have a lot in common. Both of us are outgoing and love sports, especially basketball. We often play together after school. However, we also have differences. I’m more interested in history, while he prefers science. I’m good at drawing, but he does well in math. In my opinion, true friends accept each other’s differences and help each other grow. I’m lucky to have such a great friend!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，包括介绍好友、共同点、不同之处及交友看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“My best friend is Liu Yu”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“共同点、不同之处”几个方面重点介绍自己和好友的情况，并阐述自己对交友的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达“幸运有这样一位好友”的感慨。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lot in common 有很多共同点
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③do well in 在……方面做得好
[高分句型]
①Both of us are outgoing and love sports, especially basketball.（并列句结构）
②In my opinion, true friends accept each other’s differences and help each other grow.（宾语从句）
10．例文：
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Chen Jie. She is as tall as me. She likes reading books.
We are both helpful. But we’re different in many ways. I’m kind of shy and she is more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour. When I feel sad, she makes me laugh.
For me, I’d like friends who are different from me, because we can learn from each other and be stronger together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需涵盖朋友的基本信息、性格异同、个人看法，注意字数限制和匿名要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的基本信息，包括名字、外貌、爱好；
第二步，对比两人性格的异同，并举例说明。
第三步，表达对朋友的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①as...as...像……一样……
②in many ways在很多方面
③a great sense of humour极强的幽默感
④be different from与……不同
⑤learn from each other互相学习
[高分句型]
①When I feel sad, she makes me laugh. (when引导时间状语从句)
②For me, I’d like friends who are different from me, because we can learn from each other and be stronger together. (because引导原因状语从句)
11．例文:
My Best Friend and I
Everyone has his or her best friend. My best friend is Lucy. We are both outgoing and love reading books.
However, we have many differences, too. I am tall with short hair, while Lucy is shorter but has long hair. I like going to bed early, but she always stays up late. Also, she is good at math, while I do better in English.
I think our differences make our friendship wonderful. We can learn from each other. What’s more, we should respect each other’s habits. These similarities and differences help us grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，需涵盖相同点（至少两点）、不同点（至少三点）及个人观点，词数80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，简要介绍朋友并概括与朋友的相同之处；
第二步，介绍自己和朋友之间的不同之处；
第三步，表达对异同的看法，总结友谊的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① stay up late熬夜
② similarities相似点
[高分句型]
① She studies math well, while I do better in English.（运用while连接并列句，对比差异）
② I think our similarities make us closer, and our differences help us learn from each other.（运用and连接并列宾语从句，表达观点）
12．例文
Tina is my best friend. We have something in common, but we are also different in some ways.
Both of us have long hair, but Tina is taller and a little fat, while I am tall and thin. In personality, I am quiet and shy, but Tina is more outgoing and smarter than me.
Our hobbies are different too. I read books and watch news every day, but Tina exercises four times a week and enjoys action movies.
However, we share the same dream—we will go to the same university and both become journalists in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：紧扣表格要点，对比外貌（长头发、身高体型）、性格（文静害羞 vs 外向聪明）、兴趣爱好（阅读看新闻 vs 运动看动作片）和共同理想（上大学当记者），突出相似与不同。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍相似之处（外貌和理想），使用开头句衔接。
第二步：详细描述不同点（外貌、性格、兴趣爱好），用对比连词如“while”和“but”。
第三步：总结共同理想并表达友谊，确保覆盖所有表格内容。
[亮点词汇]
① outgoing 外向的
② action movies 动作片
③ journalists 记者
[高分句型]
① Both of us have long hair, but Tina is taller and a little fat, while I am tall and thin.（并列句）
② I am quiet and shy, but Tina is more outgoing and smarter than me.（比较级）
13．例文：
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
This Year of the Snake, we’ll have traditional food like dumplings—they’re wrapped with tasty fillings and symbolize good luck. Our activities include getting together with relatives to share stories, and watching the lively Spring Festival Gala on New Year’s Eve. My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. As for me, I plan to keep fit by exercising regularly, improve myself through better grades, and strengthen my relationships with family and friends.
I’m already looking forward to the warm festival!
Yours,
Teng Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的；
第二步，介绍春节期间的食物、活动，家人和自己的新年决心；
第三步，表达对春节的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①good luck好运
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. （动词不定式作表语）
14．
My Best Friend and I
Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to talk about my best friend and me today.
My best friend is Lucy. We both have black hair and dark eyes, but she is taller than me. In terms of personality, I am quiet while she is very outgoing. However, we share the same hobby—reading. We often exchange books and discuss stories. As for living habits, I go to bed early but she prefers staying up late.
I believe friendship means accepting differences and growing together. Though we are different in some ways, we always support each other. Treasure your friends because they make life colorful.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析］
① 题材：演讲稿；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需包含外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯的异同及对友谊的看法。
[写作步骤］
第一步：描述外貌、性格的异同（使用but/while对比）；
第二步：说明爱好和生活习惯的异同（用however/as for过渡）；
第三步：表达对友谊的看法（总结升华）。
[亮点词汇］
① In terms of谈及……方面
② prefer doing sth.更喜欢做某事
③ staying up late熬夜
④ in some ways在某些方面
⑤support each other互相支持
[高分句型］
① We both have black hair and dark eyes, but she is taller than me.（运用but连接的并列句表示对比）
② In terms of personality, I am quiet while she is very outgoing.（运用while连接并列句强调性格反差）
③Treasure your friends because they make life colorful.（运用祈使句+原因状语从句提出倡议）
15．例文
Dear Mary,
I would like to invite you to the party to celebrate the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which means reunion.
The party will be held at Li Hua’s house on Friday afternoon. There will be many activities, such as eating traditional Chinese food, playing games and sharing our New year’s resolutions. By the way, you had better wear red clothes as red is a symbol of luck.
In a word, the Spring Festival is a cheerful and meaningful festival and I sincerely hope that you can come to enjoy it with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇邀请函，属于应用文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括春节的介绍、派对的时间、地点、活动以及建议等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍春节的重要性和意义，引出邀请的主题；
第二步，具体阐述派对的时间、地点和活动安排，这是文章的核心部分；
第三步，给出穿红衣服的建议，并解释原因或意义；
第四步，最后表达期待Mary参加派对的愿望，并结束邀请函。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the most important traditional festivals 最重要的传统节日之一
② mean reunion 意味着团聚
③ be held at... 在……举行
④ such as 例如
⑤ had better do sth. 最好做某事
⑥ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which means reunion.（使用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
16．
范文：
My best friend is Lucy. She has short curly hair and bright eyes. She is very friendly and always ready to help others. Wherever she is, the laughter and smiles are there. For example, when I felt sad last week, she listened to me and cheered me up. I felt warm from the bottom of my heart at that time. And this made me realize how important friendship is.
Good friends bring joy and support. They help us face difficulties and make life more meaningful. Friendship is a precious gift.
【详解】总体分析
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”，故事部分用“一般过去时”；
③提示：需回应通知中的五点：谁是最好的朋友、外貌、性格、一个故事、好朋友的意义。
写作步骤
第一步：用开头句介绍朋友是谁（Lucy），并描述外貌（short curly hair, bright eyes）；
第二步：说明性格（friendly and helpful），并分享一个简短故事（when I felt sad, she cheered me up）；
第三步：解释好朋友的意义（bring joy and support, help face difficulties），并总结友谊的价值。
亮点词汇
①short curly hair短的卷发
②be ready to do乐于去做某事
③For example例如
高分句型
when I felt sad last week, she listened to me and cheered me up.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
17．
例文
How can teenagers make true friends
Friends are important for everyone. I think teenagers should make friends who are different from themselves. Firstly, friends with different hobbies and personalities make my life more interesting and colourful. For example, I’m quiet and love reading, but my friend Ma Li is outgoing and enjoys outdoor activities. She often invites me to go hiking or play badminton, which makes my daily life less boring. Also, we can learn something new from each other. Once, Ma Li taught me how to swim, and I helped her with English. This made us grow together. Remember, friendship is about accepting differences while growing together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，明确表达观点，选择与不同的人交朋友；
第二步、分点阐述理由，先说明不同朋友能让生活更有趣，再补充能相互学习新事物，论据真实具体；
第三步、书写结语，点明友谊的真谛是接纳差异、共同成长。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from不同于
②go hiking去徒步旅行
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①I think teenagers should make friends who are different from themselves.（宾语从句、定语从句）
②She often invites me to go hiking or play badminton, which makes my daily life less boring.（定语从句）
18．
例文
My friend and Me
Friendship is really important in our life. I think a true friend is like a mirror who helps us know ourselves better.
My best friend is Li Hua. We both love reading and playing basketball, but I am more outgoing while he is quieter. Last month, we joined a volunteer activity to clean up the city park. We worked hard together and we all felt proud to make our city cleaner.
I cherish our friendship because it brings me joy and strength.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：首段承接已给开头，简要表达对友谊的看法；
第二步：介绍朋友姓名，描述性格异同并用具体事例体现友谊的意义；
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①love doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②feel proud of sth. 为……感到自豪
③make sth. adj. 使某物……
④bring sb. sth. 带给某人某物
[高分句型]
①I think a true friend is like a mirror who helps us know ourselves better. (省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句)
②We both love reading and playing basketball, but I am more outgoing while he is quieter. (but引导转折关系的并列句；while引导让步状语从句)
③We worked hard together and we all felt proud to make our city cleaner. (and并列句)
④I cherish our friendship because it brings me joy and strength. (because引导原因状语从句)
19．One possible version
Hello, my favorite saying is “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart”. It always reminds me of my friend Lily.
Lily is more outgoing than me—she loves talking to people, while I’m a bit shy. She’s also more patient than I am in dealing with problems. Last month, I failed my math test and felt really sad. Lily sat beside me, held my hand, and helped me go over every mistake. Her words made me feel warm and confident again.
Lily is like a bright light in my life. I hope we’ll stay friends forever and support each other always.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：围绕朋友的性格差异、具体帮助事例以及友谊的意义展开，需体现格言与实际的结合。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引用格言引出朋友；
第二步，对比性格差异并叙述他/她给你的帮助；
第三步，表达对友谊的珍视与祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①go over仔细检查
②feel warm and confident感到温暖与自信
③support each other互相支持
[高分句型]
①She’s also more patient than I am in dealing with problems.（比较级结构）
②I hope we’ll stay friends forever and support each other always.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文
Dear Lucas,
How is everything going The first week of the new term was great!
We have a new classmate named Liu Yang. He is really friendly and full of energy. He quickly made friends with all of us. Also, we start a new subject—physics. Our physics teacher, Mr Wang, is so cool. He explains everything in an interesting way, making the lessons lively and easy to understand. I think physics is super interesting and challenging.
There are also some school activities this week. It seems that this term will be full of fun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开头问候并总述第一周感受；
第二步、分三点介绍新同学、新科目、新老师；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②made friends交朋友
③easy to understand易于理解
[高分句型]
I think physics is super interesting and challenging.(宾语从句)
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