【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优北师大版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优北师大版
（2024）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．教育部将体育纳入中考并强调学校要保障学生在校的体育活动时间。这些政策的调整体现了社会对中学生身体健康及运动锻炼的关注。假如你是李明，请写一篇以“I Like Doing Sports”为题的短文，和同学们分享运动的体会。
提示：
(1) 何时、何地、做何喜欢的运动。
(2) 喜欢运动的原因：好处一：对身体健康的影响；好处二：学会团队精神；好处三：……
要求：
(1) 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
(2) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
(3) 词数80个左右。
I Like Doing Sports
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2．2024年12月4日，中国春节申遗成功。春节是中国传统节日，令人期待的蛇年 (Year of the Snake) 新春即将到来。假如你是腾飞，你的美国朋友Kate发来一封邮件，想了解春节传统食物和活动以及你家人的新年决心。请你根据以下内容回复一封英语邮件。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥；
(2) 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)；
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
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Yours,
Teng Fei
3．学校公众号正在征集以 “My Holiday Experience” 为主题的文章。假如你是李敏，暑假你和家人去了张家界旅行。请你根据以下提示，并结合旅行经历，写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意：1. 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
2. 写作词数不少于70，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My Holiday Experience
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4．养成良好的生活习惯对我们的成长至关重要。健康的习惯能让我们拥有强健的身体和充沛的精力，使学习和生活更轻松、更快乐。那么，如何才能培养健康的生活方式呢？请你以“Healthy Habits”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：1. 多吃蔬菜水果，不吃垃圾食品；
2. 保证充足的睡眠，早睡早起，不熬夜；
3. 多做运动；
4. 心态积极乐观。
写作要求：1. 文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70左右。
Healthy Habits
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5．请介绍一位你喜欢的名人，并阐述他的贡献或他对你的影响。你可以参考表格中的人物信息，也可以依据自己了解的名人进行写作。
Names 达芬奇 Da Vinci 袁隆平 屠呦呦
Basic information Born in 1452, died in 1519; an Italian painter, inventor, musician, engineer and scientist Born in 1930, died in 2021; a Chinese agricultural scientist Born in 1930, in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province; a physician (医学家)
Main achievements Famous paintings—Mona Lisa, The Last Supper; drawings of flying machines and other vehicles Developing different kinds of hybrid rice; the Medal of the Republic; Father of Hybrid Rice The 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine (October 5, 2015)
内容包括：(1)人物的基本信息；
(2)主要成就；
(3)对你的启示。
注意：(1)词数80~100；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My role model
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6．珠海是我国十大宜居宜游城市之一。暑假期间，李华和家人前往珠海，共同经历了一次愉快的旅行。假设你是李华，现在请你根据提示及要求写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的珠海之行。
内容包括：
活动 第一天 参观港珠澳大桥（Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge）、去景山公园(Jingshan Park）游玩
第二天 参观长隆海洋王国（Chimelong Ocean Kingdom）
第三天 乘坐地铁去湾仔海鲜街（Wanzai Seafood Street）品尝海鲜，在附近购物
写作要求：
（1）包含提示内容，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数
I traveled to Zhuhai with my parents during the summer holiday.
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7．秋冬季节是流感多发季，近来我校很多同学得了流感，为了让更多同学们更好地了解有效预防流感的措施，请你根据下面的提示，以“How to Prevent the Flu”为题，写一篇英文发言稿。
How to Prevent the Flu Living habits keep…clean, wash hands, crowded places, …
Eating habits fruit and vegetables, milk, hot food, …
Do sports build…up, …
Others ……
要求：
(1) 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(3) 80词左右，文章标题，开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How to Prevent the Flu
As the season changes, these days some students in our school have the flu. How can we prevent it Here is some advice.
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8．假设你对杨振宁教授很感兴趣，并通过阅读百科全书了解了他的事迹。请你根据所给的提示以“A Great Scientist: Yang Zhenning”为题，向你的同学们介绍他的有关信息。
姓名：杨振宁(Yang Zhenning)
出生日期：1922年10月1日
逝世日期：2025年10月18日
事迹：中国物理学家；从小就展现出对数学和物理的浓厚兴趣；在清华大学完成学业后赴美深造。
主要成就：1957年获得诺贝尔物理学奖；一生致力于物理学研究，为科学做出了巨大贡献。
你的感想：……（如让我对科学更感兴趣，想学习他的坚持与热爱并以他为榜样。）
词汇：1. 物理学家physicist 2. 深造further study 3. 诺贝尔物理学奖Nobel Prize in Physics
4. 贡献contribution 5. 坚持与热爱perseverance and passion 6. 榜样role model
题目：A Great Scientist: Yang Zhenning
要求：词数80～100个（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I read about Yang Zhenning in an encyclopedia recently. Now I’d like to share something about this great scientist with you.
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9．假如你是李华，你所在的国际学校将在下个月举行跑步比赛。作为一名跑步爱好者，你被邀请到晨会上进行赛前宣讲。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，告知同学们相关情况，呼吁同学们积极参赛。内容包括：
1.告知比赛时间：
2.参加跑步比赛的好处(保持健康；……)；
3.建议参赛前做哪些准备(每天练习；……)
写作要求：
1.内容必须包含写作要点的所有信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人信息；
4.词数80左右(短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：hold (举办)， running race (跑步比赛)，take part in (参加)
Hello, everyone. Here’s the good news.
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10．请你以“My favorite Chinese Festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，畅谈中国传统佳节，弘扬中华传统文化。
内容提示：（1）介绍节日的时间及意义等；（2）主要庆祝方式，如食物，活动等；（3）你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
写作要求：（1）内容包含以上要点，80词以上；（2）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清楚。
书写规范；（3）文中不得出现真实姓名，校名和地名。
参考词语：the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month（农历八月十五）
My favorite Chinese Festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival
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11．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter计划来中国体验城市生活，他来信希望你介绍大庆的特色生活和推荐值得做的事。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
提示：
1. 城市特色：大庆是著名油城，有独特的油田文化和优美的自然风景；
2. 推荐活动：参观油田历史博物馆(了解油田历史)、去湿地观鸟、在图书馆读书；
3. 生活感受：大庆人友善勤劳，生活舒适，你很热爱家乡；
4. 期待：欢迎他来大庆，你会带他感受大庆的魅力。
要求：
1. 词数：80-100词;
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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12．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jim对中国的旅游文化很感兴趣，他给你发来电子邮件，想了解你国庆期间的旅游经历以及你对当地特色景点的看法。请根据以下邮件内容，用英语回复。
To: LiHua@
From: Jim@Foreign.com
Subject: Travel in China
Dear LiHua,
I’ve heard that you traveled during the National Day holiday. Where did you go What interesting places did you visit What do you think of the local food and activities there
Looking forward to your reply.
Jim
注意：
1. 回复邮件须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
2. 词数在90个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 回复邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
4.参考词汇：国庆节National Day；古代的ancient；遗址relics
Dear Jim,
It’s nice to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best.
Li Hua
13．中国传统文化承载着独特的民族智慧，其中民间手工艺尤为引人注目。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry在邮件中提到对中国传统民间手工艺——糖画充满好奇，想了解它的相关情况。请你根据以下图表提示，用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍糖画的历史、呈现形式、文化意义，并表达你的期待。
Chinese Sugar Painting
History: date back to (追溯到) the Ming Dynasty
Form: both sugar and painting; melted sugar (糖浆); be made in different shapes like…
Meaning: a symbol of Chinese culture; carry people’s love for life;
Hope: …
注意：1. 词数100左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How are you doing these days I’m glad to hear you’re interested in the Chinese sugar painting. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
14．假如你是Li Hua，“望城教育”公众号的主编读了第一节（回答问题）中Gao Yuqi的故事后，深受启发，发起话题为“exercise”的英文征文活动，想了解雷小锋们目前的运动类型、运动频率、对运动的看法以及新年运动的决心。请根据以下表格内容和要求，谈谈你自己的情况，并适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
（1）80词左右；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Exercise Kinds: run, play volleyball, play basketball ...
Frequency(频率): every day / five times a day / often ...
Ideas: important, relaxing, keep healthy ...
Resolutions: start an exercise program, take up ...
Hello, I am Li Hua, a student from Wangcheng.
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15．伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒年少时目睹他人因高价截肢而陷入困境，这促使他投身研发。经过多年努力，他最终用3D打印技术造出轻便平价的机械手臂。请根据下面的提示，来介绍他的这项发明。字数90字左右，文中不得出现真实姓名。
发明的契机 早期使用的机械臂昂贵 ($80, 000) 且笨重
研发过程 用塑料块、鱼线等材料制作，16岁生日获得3D打印机
发明成果 成功造出轻便 (0.5kg)、价格低廉$500，能随脑信号活动的3D打印机械臂
发明的影响 无私分享：免费在网上公开设计，让更多人受益 总结意义： perseverance (坚持)的力量……
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them.
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16．千年古都，常来长安。西安某电台英文频道开设“Welcome to Xi’an”栏目，面向全网征集“微西安”英文简介。请你结合以下图示，写一篇简要的短文投稿。
Location (位置): the northwest of China
History: more than 3,000 years
Places to visit: Dayan Pagoda Terracotta Army (兵马俑)
Activities: eat different snacks: cold noodles, roujiamo wear Hanfu,…
要求：
1.参考提示，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于 70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
提示词（选用）：experience（体验） be located in（位于） ancient（古代的） A gaze spans eternity（一眼万年） dynasty（朝代）
Xi’an, also called Chang’an in ancient times, is a very famous city all over the world.
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17．学习了 inventions and inventors 的单元话题之后，请根据下面材料，写一篇介绍发明家爱迪生的文章。
1. Thomas Edison 是一位著名的美国发明家。他很小时就对事物的本质感到好奇。十岁时在家中建立了一个实验室，做了许多研究。没有好奇心，就不可能有他未来的发明。
2. 他最重要的发明是灯泡（light bulb），在那时，蜡烛的光很暗，还很危险，所以爱迪生希望制作一款安全持久的灯。在测试灯丝（filament）的过程中，他遇到了很多困难。但是他喜欢一个接一个地解决问题。最终，1879 年，他成功了！
3. 从爱迪生的故事中，你认为发明家具有哪些品质，列举两条作为文章结尾。
要求：
（1）80～120 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以增、删细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A great inventor
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18．今年是“体重管理年”，许多人都在通过各种方式管理自己的体重以保持健康。假如你是李华，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何保持健康的。注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息并进行适当发挥；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名；
4.开头已给出，词数80词左右，不计入总词。
How to Keep Healthy
This year is called the “Weight Management Year”. Nowadays, people pay more attention to health.
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19．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问你最喜欢的传统节日。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信，介绍你最喜欢的传统节日。
提示：
你最喜欢的传统节日是什么；
这个节日的时间和由来（简要介绍）；
人们在这个节日通常会做什么；
你喜欢这个节日的原因。
要求：
词数 80—100；
条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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20．2024年10月24日，你校对当前中小学生生活习惯进行了问卷调查。根据调查，你校公众号拟征集一批中小学生如何保持良好生活习惯的美文。根据下列思维导图，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你对保持良好生活习惯的看法。
要求：
1. 简要介绍调查情况，时间、对象及结果。
2. 对于如何保持良好生活习惯提出建议，包含以上三个方面，也可以适当发挥；
3. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
4. 词数为80词左右。
Good Living Habit
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
I Like Doing Sports
Today, doing sports is becoming more and more important to us. As for me, football is my favorite sport. I play it with my friends on the school playground for an hour after school every day.
I think doing sports is really fun. It can not only build up our bodies but also make us learn team spirit. What’s more, sports can help us relax. Also, it’s a good way to make friends when we do sports together.
Enjoy sports, and it will make us better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明运动的重要性和自己喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢运动的原因；
第三步，呼吁大家运动。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越多
②a good way to做某事的好方法
③build up our bodies强健身体
[高分句型]
①I think doing sports is really fun. (宾语从句)
②It can not only build up our bodies but also make us learn team spirit. (not only...but also...结构)
2．例文：
Dear Kate,
I’m happy to tell you something about the Spring Festival and my family’s New Year’s resolutions.
This Year of the Snake, we’ll have traditional food like dumplings—they’re wrapped with tasty fillings and symbolize good luck. Our activities include getting together with relatives to share stories, and watching the lively Spring Festival Gala on New Year’s Eve. My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. As for me, I plan to keep fit by exercising regularly, improve myself through better grades, and strengthen my relationships with family and friends.
I’m already looking forward to the warm festival!
Yours,
Teng Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的；
第二步，介绍春节期间的食物、活动，家人和自己的新年决心；
第三步，表达对春节的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①good luck好运
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
My parents’ resolutions are to work harder and make more money for a better life. （动词不定式作表语）
3．例文
My Holiday Experience
This summer holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Zhangjiajie with my parents. On the first day, we climbed the amazing Tianmen Mountain. The view from the top was fantastic! We also saw the famous Avatar Hallelujah Mountain. The strange and tall peaks were like a dream. Also, we took many photos of the amazing scenery. I enjoyed this trip very much. It was not only great exercise but also a chance to get close to nature. I will never forget the beauty of Zhangjiajie.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点（时间、地点、人物、活动、感受），并适当添加了细节（如攀登天门山、欣赏“阿凡达”山峰的感受）。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间（暑假）、人物（我和家人）及地点（张家界）；
第二步，详细描述在张家界的经历，如爬天门山、欣赏奇特山峰等；
第三步，结尾表达自己的感受（享受旅行、亲近自然、难忘回忆）。
[亮点词汇]
①had a wonderful trip有一个精彩的旅行
②get close to nature亲近自然
[高分句型]
①The strange and tall peaks were like a dream. (使用比喻修辞手法，生动形象)
②It was not only great exercise but also a chance to get close to nature. (使用“not only... but also...”结构，连接两个并列的好处)
4．
例文
Healthy Habits
Developing healthy habits is very important for us. First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. A balanced diet helps us grow stronger. Second, it’s necessary to get enough sleep. Going to bed early and waking up early gives us energy. Third, exercise regularly, such as running or playing basketball. Finally, always keep a positive mind. Smiling often makes life happier.
If we follow these tips, we will have a healthier and more wonderful life!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山说明健康习惯的重要性；
第二步，分点描述四个健康习惯（饮食、睡眠、运动、心态）；
第三步，总结健康习惯带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced diet均衡饮食
②wake up醒来
③positive mind积极心态
[高分句型]
①Going to bed early and waking up early gives us energy.（动名词短语作主语）
②If we follow these tips, we will have a healthier and more wonderful life!（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．
范文：
My Role Model
Among all the famous people, Yuan Longping is my role model. He was a great Chinese agricultural scientist, born in 1930 and passed away in 2021.
Professor Yuan was known for developing hybrid rice. His groundbreaking work significantly increased rice yield in China and around the world, earning him the title “Father of Hybrid Rice.” He was also awarded the Model of the Republic.
His lifelong dedication to solving the problem of hunger teaches me the importance of perseverance and contributing to society. He inspires me to study hard and use my knowledge to help others in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作需覆盖所有给定要点，并适当拓展，保证内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍人物的基本信息；
第二步，阐述人物的主要成就；
第三步，说明人物对自己的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①agricultural scientist农业科学家
②hybrid rice杂交水稻
③perseverance毅力
[高分句型]
①His groundbreaking work significantly increased rice yield in China and around the world, earning him the title “Father of Hybrid Rice.” (现在分词作状语表结果)
②His lifelong dedication to solving the problem of hunger teaches me the importance of perseverance and contributing to society. (动名词作介词宾语)
6．
例文
I traveled to Zhuhai with my parents during the summer holiday. On the first day, we visited the amazing Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge. It was very impressive. After that, we went to Jingshan Park and played there happily. On the second day, we went to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. We saw dolphins, sharks, and other sea animals. On the last day, we took the subway to Wanzai Seafood Street. We enjoyed delicious seafood and did some shopping nearby.
What a fantastic trip! We all had a wonderful time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，介绍旅行目的地；
第二步：详细介绍旅行活动；
第三步：书写结尾，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①on the first day在第一天
②impressive令人印象深刻的
③sea animals海洋动物
④do some shopping购物
[高分句型]
①What a fantastic trip!（感叹句）
7．参考范文：
How to Prevent the Flu
As the season changes, these days some students in our school have the flu. How can we prevent it Here is some advice.
First, good living habits are important. Keep our rooms clean and open the windows often to let fresh air in. Wash hands before meals and after using the toilet. Avoid going to crowded places where germs spread easily.
Second, healthy eating habits help. Eat more fruit and vegetables, drink milk and have hot food regularly.
Third, do sports regularly to build up our bodies and improve immunity.
Finally, wear enough clothes in cold weather and get enough sleep. Let’s follow these tips to stay healthy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中预防流感的措施，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“秋冬季节很多同学得了流感，如何预防”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活习惯、饮食习惯、运动习惯和其他注意事项”几个方面重点介绍预防流感的具体措施；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家遵循这些建议保持健康”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①avoid doing sth. 避免做某事
②spread easily容易传播
③regularly 定期地
[高分句型]
①Avoid going to crowded places where germs spread easily.（where引导的限制性定语从句）
②Let’s follow these tips to stay healthy!（祈使句）
8．例文
A Great Scientist: Yang Zhenning
I read about Yang Zhenning in an encyclopedia recently. Now I’d like to share something about this great scientist with you.
Yang Zhenning was a Chinese physicist. He was born on October 1st, 1922 and passed away on October 18th, 2025. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in mathematics and physics. After graduating from Tsinghua University, he went to the US for further study. In 1957, he won the Nobel Prize in Physics. He devoted his whole life to physics research and made great contributions to science.
Yang Zhenning’s perseverance and passion inspire me a lot. He makes me more interested in science, and I want to take him as my role model to pursue knowledge bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，介绍人物生平事迹，部分表达感受的内容用一般现在时；
③提示：向同学们介绍物理学家杨振宁的生平、成就及个人感想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇说明阅读渠道，引出介绍对象；
第二步，中间依次介绍杨振宁的身份、生卒时间、学习经历、主要成就（诺贝尔物理学奖、科学贡献）；
第三步，结尾表达杨振宁对自己的影响，包括激发科学兴趣、视其为榜样。
[亮点词汇]
①physicist物理学家
②further study深造
③Nobel Prize in Physics诺贝尔物理学奖
④contribution贡献
[高分句型]
He devoted his whole life to physics research and made great contributions to science.（运用“devote...to...”固定搭配，清晰体现其对科学的奉献。）
9．
例文
Hello, everyone. Here’s the good news. Our school will hold a running race next month. It’s a great chance to show your energy and love for sports!
Running is good for us in many ways. First, it helps us keep healthy and strong. Second, it makes us feel happy and relaxed. Why not join us and enjoy these benefits
Before the race, remember to practice every day. Wear comfortable shoes and drink enough water. Let’s get ready and have fun together!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，阐明跑步的好处并给出参赛建议，语言需具有号召力和实用性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山宣布活动，说明其意义；
第二步，阐述跑步的益处，增强说服力；
第三步，提出具体准备建议，鼓励大家参与。
[亮点词汇]
①hold a running race举办跑步比赛
②show your energy展现你的活力
③keep healthy and strong保持健康强壮
④have fun together一起享受乐趣
[高分句型]
①Running is good for us in many ways.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s get ready and have fun together!（祈使句表达倡议）
10．
例文
My favorite Chinese Festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. This festival is a time for family reunion and expressing love for family members.
On this day, people usually eat mooncakes, which are round and sweet. Some families enjoy a big dinner together. At night, we often admire the bright full moon and share stories about Chang’e.
I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because it makes me feel warm and happy. It brings my family closer. I really enjoy the peaceful and joyful atmosphere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括节日的时间及意义、主要庆祝方式以及个人对这个节日的感受和喜爱它的原因。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，使文章更加丰富和生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从三个方面详细介绍了中秋节；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①family reunion 家庭团聚
②express 表达
③admire the bright full moon 欣赏明亮的满月
[高分句型]
①On this day, people usually eat mooncakes, which are round and sweet.（定语从句）
②I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because it makes me feel warm and happy.（原因状语从句）
11．范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. My hometown, Daqing, is known as an oil city with rich oilfield culture and beautiful nature.
I suggest you visit the Oilfield History Museum to learn about its past. You can also go birdwatching in the wetlands or read in our modern library.
People here are friendly and hardworking, making life peaceful and comfortable. I love my city very much.
I can’t wait to show you around. I’m sure you’ll enjoy its unique charm!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需介绍城市特色、推荐活动、表达情感并发出邀请。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达欢迎并概括城市特色；
第二步，推荐具体体验活动；
第三步，描述城市生活氛围与个人情感；
第四步，表达期待并发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①oilfield culture油田文化
②birdwatching观鸟
③hardworking勤劳的
[高分句型]
①I suggest you visit the Oilfield History Museum to learn about its past. (提出建议的常用句式)
②People here are friendly and hardworking, making life peaceful and comfortable. (现在分词作结果状语)
12．例文：
Dear Jim,
It’s nice to hear from you. During the National Day holiday, I went to Jingzhou with my family.
Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history. We visited the Jingzhou Ancient City Wall. It’s very long and beautiful and we learned a lot about its history there. Then we also went to the Jingzhou Museum, where there are many interesting ancient relics. The local food there is delicious. We tried different kinds of food. We also watched wonderful shows. The shows enanleed us to better understand ancient culture.
How was your holiday
I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括旅游地点、参观的有趣地方、对当地食物和活动的看法等，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“It’s nice to hear from you. During the National Day holiday, I went to Jingzhou with my family.”简单回应收到邮件并引出国庆期间去了荆州这一重点介绍内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“荆州的历史文化、参观的景点、当地食物、活动”几个方面重点介绍荆州的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ancient古代的
②a long history悠久的历史
③interesting有趣的
④delicious美味的
[高分句型]
①Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history.（“with+名词短语”结构作后置定语）
②Then we also went to the Jingzhou Museum, where there are many interesting ancient relics.（定语从句）
13．Dear Henry,
How are you doing these days I’m glad to hear you’re interested in the Chinese sugar painting. Today, I’d like to share something about it with you.
Sugar painting is a form of traditional Chinese folk handwork. As its name suggests, it is a painting made of sugar. Dating back to the Ming Dynasty, it has a long history. Sugar painting is both sugar and painting, so people can not only watch it but also eat it. It is often made in different shapes like dragons and butterflies. As a symbol of Chinese culture, sugar painting is loved by people of all ages. It also carries Chinese people’s love for life.
I hope it will be passed down in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山表明将介绍中国的糖画；
第二步，从糖画的历史、形状、意义等方面具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②a symbol of……的象征
③pass down传承
[高分句型]
①Sugar painting is both sugar and painting, so people can not only watch it but also eat it. (not only…but also...结构)
②I hope it will be passed down in the future. (省略that的宾语从句)
14．例文:
Hello, I am Li Hua, a student from Wangcheng. Of all sports, I like basketball best. I play basketball four times a week. Doing sports is very important. It has many advantages. People who often exercise are not easy to get sick. Exercise can help us lose weight and control weight. Exercise can bring us good mood. I will start an exercise program to let more students take part in it.
Let’s take an active part in physical exercise to keep healthy! It’s necessary to exercise at least one hour every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖运动类型、频率、看法及新年决心，应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，使表述内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍身份，并说明运动类型。
第二步，描述运动频率和看法。
第三步，表达新年决心，并总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①four times a week 每周四次
②get sick 生病
③lose weight 减肥，减重
④take an active part in 积极参加
[高分句型]
①People who often exercise are not easy to get sick.（who引导定语从句修饰People）
②It’s necessary to exercise at least one hour every day.（运用固定句型“It’s＋形容词＋to do sth.”）
15．例文
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them. Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research. Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals. He selflessly shared the designs online for free, helping many. His story truly shows the power of perseverance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括发明的契机、研发过程、发明成果、发明的影响和总结意义，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，如发明成果和影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.”一句，借用“看到人们因昂贵的假肢而挣扎”这一契机来引出重点介绍的内容，即伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒的研发过程和发明成果；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“研发过程”和“发明成果”几个方面重点介绍这一发明的具体情况，同时提及了发明的影响；
第三步，书写结语。通过“His story truly shows the power of perseverance.”一句表达了对伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒坚持精神的赞扬，总结了这一发明的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①motivated by受……的激励
②struggle with与……斗争
③lightweight轻便的
④selflessly无私地
[高分句型]
①Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.（过去分词短语作状语）
②Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals.（现在分词短语作状语）
16．
例文
Xi’an, also called Chang’an in ancient times, is a very famous city all over the world. It is located in the northwest of China with a history of more than 3,000 years. Here you can visit the Dayan Pagoda and the amazing Terracotta Army. When you see the Terracotta Army, you may truly understand the meaning of “A gaze spans eternity”. Besides, you can experience the local culture by eating different snacks like cold noodles and roujiamo. Wearing Hanfu is also a special way to feel the beauty of ancient dynasties. Welcome to Xi’an and enjoy its charm!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：需涵盖位置、历史、景点、活动四大要素，并合理运用提示词。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山介绍西安的国际知名度和古称（首句已给出）；
第二步：分段描述位置与历史、景点与文化活动，适当加入提示词（如located in, experience, ancient）；
第三步：用邀请句结尾，呼应栏目主题。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing惊人的
②experience体验
③charm魅力
[高分句型]
①When you see the Terracotta Army, you may truly understand the meaning of “A gaze spans eternity”.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Wearing Hanfu is also a special way to feel the beauty of ancient dynasties.（动名词短语作主语）
17．
Thomas Edison was a famous American inventor. He showed great curiosity about how things worked from a very young age. At the age of ten, he built a laboratory at home and did many experiments. Without curiosity, he couldn’t have made his future inventions.
His most important invention was the light bulb. At that time, candlelight was dim and dangerous, so Edison wanted to create a safe and long-lasting light. While testing filaments, he faced many difficulties. However, he enjoyed solving problems one by one. Finally, in 1879, he succeeded!
From Edison’s story, I think inventors need two important qualities. First, they must be curious to explore new things. Second, they should never give up when facing challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：作文需涵盖材料中所有要点，包括爱迪生的童年、发明灯泡的过程，以及发明家的两条品质。
[写作步骤]
①第一步：表明写作意图。首段介绍爱迪生背景；
②第二步：具体阐述爱迪生的主要发明及过程。重点描述了他发明电灯泡的过程，包括面临的困难和最终的成功；
③第三步：总结发明家所需的重要品质。
[亮点词汇]
①curiosity好奇心
②long-lasting持久的
③facing challenges面对挑战
[高分句型]
①Without curiosity, he couldn’t have made his future inventions.（运用虚拟语气强调好奇心的重要性）
②While testing filaments, he faced many difficulties.（运用现在分词作时间状语，简化从句结构）
18．例文
This year is called the “Weight Management Year”. Nowadays, people pay more attention to health.
As we all know, it’s important for us to live a healthy lifestyle. But how can we do it Here is my advice.
To start with, we should do sports to build a strong body. We had better exercise at least three times a week. Second, having a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy. For example, we can eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. Last, remember to stay positive no matter what happens.
In a word, if you can follow my advice, I’m sure you will live a healthy lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需完整表达思维导图中“运动、均衡饮食、健康习惯”的内容，可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接开头，点明健康生活方式的重要性，并引出保持健康的建议；
第二步：分点阐述方法：先讲通过运动增强体质，再讲均衡饮食的具体做法，最后说明健康习惯（如保持积极心态）；
第三步：总结全文，强调遵循建议能拥有健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
①live a healthy lifestyle过健康的生活方式
②balanced diet均衡饮食
③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①As we all know, it’s important for us to live a healthy lifestyle.（it's+形容词+for sb. to do结构）
②We had better exercise at least three times a week.（had better do sth.用于给出建议）
19．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese traditional festivals. My favorite is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, with a history of thousands of years. It comes from the legend of Chang’e flying to the moon.
On this day, families gather to eat mooncakes and admire the full moon. We chat and share happy moments together.
I love it because it’s a time for family reunion. The warm atmosphere and delicious mooncakes always make me feel happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：需涵盖节日名称、时间由来、人们活动、喜欢原因四点，词数80-100。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇回应对方兴趣，点明自己最喜爱的传统节日是中秋节，开门见山，明确主题；
第二步，介绍节日的关键信息：具体日期、历史渊源，让读者对节日有基础认知；
第三步，描述节日的核心习俗：家庭团聚、吃月饼、赏月，以及习俗中蕴含的情感，展现节日的氛围；
第四步，表达个人对节日的喜爱之情及原因，紧扣 “家庭团聚” 的核心，升华情感，使文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional festivals传统节日
②have a history of有……的历史
③admire the full moon赏月
[高分句型]
①It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, with a history of thousands of years.（with复合结构作伴随状语，简洁说明节日的日期和历史）
②I love it because it’s a time for family reunion.（because引导原因状语从句）
20．参考范文
Good Living Habit
On October 24th, 2024, our school did a survey on the living habits of primary and middle school students. The results showed that many students don’t eat properly, lack exercise and often stay up late. To keep good living habits, we should eat healthily, such as having more fruit and vegetables and less junk food. Enough sleep is also important because it helps us stay active at school. Besides, doing exercise like running or playing ball games can make us strong and relaxed. Good habits lead to a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：说明文，围绕“保持良好生活习惯”提出建议；
②时态：一般现在时为主，介绍调查情况时用一般过去时；
③提示：紧扣三大方面：健康饮食、充足睡眠、坚持锻炼，语言简洁清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步：说明调查的时间、对象和简单结果；
第二步：提出保持良好生活习惯的建议（健康饮食、睡眠、运动）；
第三步：总结良好习惯的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①do a survey 做一项调查
②stay up late 熬夜
③junk food 垃圾食品
④stay active 保持精力充沛
⑤lead to 导致、带来
[高分句型]
①The results showed that many students don’t eat properly.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Enough sleep is also important because it helps us stay active at school.（because引导原因状语从句）
③Good habits lead to a better life.（普遍真理句型，简洁有力）
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