英语 选择性必修 第三册 WY
Period Ⅳ Writing读后续写——科幻故事
本单元的写作任务是续写一个科幻故事。在阅读给定材料时，除了要理清文章脉络以外，重点要落在如何在原文的基础上，续写出一个有逻辑、不偏离原文主题，同时又能体现自身写作水平的好文章。科幻故事的内容天马行空，但并不代表没有踪迹可循，想要写好科幻故事的续写，就要注意以下几点：
1．人物的塑造。如果该科幻故事以人为主，那么在续写时就要抓住主要人物的性格特征，可以利用对话、神态、外貌的描写，将读者吸引到自己的写作中。
2．故事的走向。科幻故事的续写，要结合提示句和前文获悉的线索，下笔前构思好写作内容的大方向，然后在细枝末节处形成自己的风格。虽然是以科幻故事为背景，但是如果过于肆意挥洒，难免会出现“四不像”的怪诞文章。所以，想要高质量地输出，就要定好文章的基调，才不会让文章整体跑偏。
3．档次的提高。想要完成一篇出众的读后续写作文，可以在句式结构上多做文章。多多运用倒装、非谓语、定语从句、强调句等，使文章的句式结构多样化，那么文章的档次自然就得到了提升。
(1)He slipped off his invisible cloak and jumped into bed.
他迅速脱下隐身斗篷，然后跳上了床。
(2)Finally, the long awaited flying car is almost here.
终于，人们期待已久的飞行汽车就要面世了。
(3)Sometimes I flew swiftly, and other times more slowly.
有时我飞得像风一样疾速，有时我又慢慢翱翔。
(4)He also owns a 105 foot, high tech catamaran called the Necker Nymph.
他还拥有一艘105英尺高的高科技双体船，名为Necker Nymph。
(5)As a kid, I would have said we'd be eating roast dinner in the space age capsules by 2036.
当我还是个孩子的时候，我就会说，到2036年，我们就能在太空时代的太空舱里吃烤肉晚餐了。
(6)She swallowed one of the cakes, and was delighted to find that she began shrinking directly.
她吞下了其中一块蛋糕，接着，高兴地发现自己马上开始变小了。
(7)Your friend is about to go on the spaceship, which is going to do the exploration of Jupiter or whatever.
你的朋友即将登上一艘宇宙飞船，要去探索木星或诸如此类的地方。
(8)My friends have been committed to exploring the mystery of the sea for many years. They will live under the sea in a few days.
我的朋友们多年来一直致力于探索海洋的奥秘。几天后他们将前往海底生活。
(9)They take their driverless car to an appointment and set the empty vehicle to circle the building to avoid paying for parking.
他们把自己的无人驾驶汽车开到约定的地方，然后让空车绕着大楼行驶，以避免支付停车费。
(10)When loneliness gets the better of him, he decides to build a robot out of washing machine parts and an old mannequin head, and, three days later, he has an artificially intelligent device.
当他孤独得受不了的时候，他决定用洗衣机零件和一个旧的人体模型头做一个机器人，三天后，他有了一个人工智能的机器人。
(11)Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its continuing mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no one has gone before.
宇宙，人类最后的边疆。这是星舰“进取号”的航程。它长期以来的使命是去探索未知的新世界，找寻新的生命和新的文明，勇敢地航向前人未至的区域。
(12)The unknown future rolls toward us. I face it, for the first time, with a sense of hope.
Because if a machine can learn the value of human life, maybe we can too.
未知的未来在我眼前展开。面对未来，我生平第一次感到充满了希望。因为如果一台机器都能懂得人生的价值，或许我们也能。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Derek and Shirley walked out of the airport building and into the bright sunshine. Looking up at the brilliant blue sky and then at the faraway mountains rising above the swaying palm trees, they couldn't wait to start their holiday.
A taxi pulled up swiftly and silently. Derek dropped their suitcases into the boot and joined Shirley in the back seat. “Palm Trees Hotel, please，” Derek said excitedly. “Certainly, sir，” replied the driver, as he turned around with a flashing white smile. Derek and Shirley gave each other a puzzled look as the taxi eased smoothly into the traffic. “Excuse me, er, your face seems very familiar—in fact, you remind us of that famous film star, Rocky Overton ... but of course, you can't be.”
Derek and Shirley sat in silent disbelief as the driver explained that he was not a real person, but a robot made to look like a famous actor. “Rocky” explained that the taxi company had purchased the latest model of robot drivers since they were programmed to be safer and more reliable than human drivers. “So, here I am，” “Rocky” continued, “your first robot taxi driver！”
Derek and Shirley held each other's hands more tightly. “Relax，” “Rocky” reassured them, “there is nothing for you to worry about. I can assure you that my driving skills are excellent. I'm equipped with perfect vision and superior reactions, and I know every street in the city. I am instantly updated with the latest traffic information so that I can avoid traffic jams and get you to your destination in the quickest and least stressful manner. Please sit back, relax and enjoy the journey.”
Derek and Shirley, feeling a little better, leaned back in their seats and closed their eyes. “And another thing，” “Rocky” added, “my line of robots represents the ultimate in computer technology. I am beautifully designed, made from only the best materials and subject to the strictest quality checks. Therefore, you are entirely safe with me. Nothing could possibly go wrong ... could possibly go wrong ... go wrong ... go wrong ...”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Derek and Shirley looked at each other with great fear in their eyes. “Don't worry, sir，” came the calm reply on the phone, “And your taxi is also a driverless car.”
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Derek and Shirley looked at each other with great fear in their eyes. The taxi was moving faster and faster, and “Rocky” seemed to be malfunctioning. “Slow down！” Derek shouted, but “Rocky” did not respond. The robot drove even faster than before and narrowly missed a car. Terrified, Derek grabbed his phone. With trembling fingers, he called the taxi company. “Hello？” Derek shouted into the phone, “Our robot driver is having a breakdown and he's completely out of control. We need help quickly！”
“Don't worry, sir，” came the calm reply on the phone, “And your taxi is also a driverless car.” The reply continued, “We have the authority to disable the robot driver. Let me switch your taxi to the driverless mode and get you to your destination safely.” The taxi immediately slowed down and continued as if nothing had happened, although its driver could be heard mumbling to himself, “... go wrong ... go wrong ...” When they finally arrived at their hotel, Derek and Shirley quickly got out of the taxi, relieved and grateful to be alive. As they watched the taxi move away, they agreed that for the rest of the holiday, they would walk everywhere!
总评 范文中运用了大量的动作和语言描写，精彩地呈现了Derek (德里克)和Shirley (雪莉)两人的惊险经历，使读者与作者的情绪一同起伏，是一篇充满幻想却又逻辑严谨的优秀作文。
[亮点呈现]
(1)The taxi immediately slowed down and continued as if nothing had happened, although its driver could be heard mumbling to himself, “... go wrong ... go wrong ...”使用了as if引导的方式状语从句和although引导的让步状语从句。
(2)As they watched the taxi move away, they agreed that for the rest of the holiday, they would walk everywhere！结尾使用了as引导的时间状语从句，幽默诙谐，给读者留下了深刻的印象。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Caught in “the Web”
Dave and Kelly loved their computer. Their parents got it for them a couple of months ago, and they had taught their kids how to use it. They bought some computer games for the kids to play and connected the computer to the Internet. The kids loved going on the Internet and visiting websites. They got to do research for their homework, play games, print colouring pages and read stories. They also got to email their friends and even chat with other kids, after getting their parents' permission.
Because the kids liked the Internet so much, they would finish their homework, and then go to surf the Internet. Very often, they didn't feel the passage of time and found themselves almost falling asleep in front of the computer screen.
One day they stayed up late surfing the Internet after they were done with their homework. They watched a video about a science fiction story, which described two alien species hunting human information, because aliens had a wicked intention to conquer the Earth. The species coming from a distance tried to collect every aspect of data about humans, but in vain. They were detected and driven away by watchful humans. After a while they started getting tired and they were almost falling asleep. While they were in the twilight between being asleep and being awake, they felt a strong suction coming from the computer screen. It felt like a huge vacuum cleaner!
By now, they were fully awake, but when they looked around, they did not see their living room anymore. Instead, they were drawn into the computer itself by that mysterious power. They were surrounded by a complex system of tubes and small boxes and columns. They were all in different shapes, such as being tall, short, wide, narrow, round, square, etc. More strangely, they all felt a little warm and some even were shining with real, blue or orange light. They saw themselves floating in a long tube with speeding chunks of alphabets, numbers, images and sounds. They were INSIDE the computer!
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun. But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Dave (戴夫)和Kelly (凯利)沉迷于电脑，一天他们发现自己被吸进了电脑里面。刚开始他们感到很新奇，接下来会发生什么？没有家人在身边，他们会有什么样的感受？
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灰度印刷 可临摹练习
6(共25张PPT)
WELCOME UNIT
Unit 4 A glimpse of the future
Period Ⅳ Writing读后续写——科幻故事
本单元的写作任务是续写一个科幻故事。在阅读给定材料时，除了要理清文章脉络以外，重点要落在如何在原文的基础上，续写出一个有逻辑、不偏离原文主题，同时又能体现自身写作水平的好文章。科幻故事的内容天马行空，但并不代表没有踪迹可循，想要写好科幻故事的续写，就要注意以下几点：
1．人物的塑造。如果该科幻故事以人为主，那么在续写时就要抓住主要人物的性格特征，可以利用对话、神态、外貌的描写，将读者吸引到自己的写作中。
2．故事的走向。科幻故事的续写，要结合提示句和前文获悉的线索，下笔前构思好写作内容的大方向，然后在细枝末节处形成自己的风格。虽然是以科幻故事为背景，但是如果过于肆意挥洒，难免会出现“四不像”的怪诞文章。所以，想要高质量地输出，就要定好文章的基调，才不会让文章整体跑偏。
3．档次的提高。想要完成一篇出众的读后续写作文，可以在句式结构上多做文章。多多运用倒装、非谓语、定语从句、强调句等，使文章的句式结构多样化，那么文章的档次自然就得到了提升。
(1)He slipped off his invisible cloak and jumped into bed.
他迅速脱下隐身斗篷，然后跳上了床。
(2)Finally, the long awaited flying car is almost here.
终于，人们期待已久的飞行汽车就要面世了。
(3)Sometimes I flew swiftly, and other times more slowly.
有时我飞得像风一样疾速，有时我又慢慢翱翔。
(4)He also owns a 105 foot, high tech catamaran called the Necker Nymph.
他还拥有一艘105英尺高的高科技双体船，名为Necker Nymph。
(5)As a kid, I would have said we'd be eating roast dinner in the space age capsules by 2036.
当我还是个孩子的时候，我就会说，到2036年，我们就能在太空时代的太空舱里吃烤肉晚餐了。
(6)She swallowed one of the cakes, and was delighted to find that she began shrinking directly.
她吞下了其中一块蛋糕，接着，高兴地发现自己马上开始变小了。
(7)Your friend is about to go on the spaceship, which is going to do the exploration of Jupiter or whatever.
你的朋友即将登上一艘宇宙飞船，要去探索木星或诸如此类的地方。
(8)My friends have been committed to exploring the mystery of the sea for many years. They will live under the sea in a few days.
我的朋友们多年来一直致力于探索海洋的奥秘。几天后他们将前往海底生活。
(9)They take their driverless car to an appointment and set the empty vehicle to circle the building to avoid paying for parking.
他们把自己的无人驾驶汽车开到约定的地方，然后让空车绕着大楼行驶，以避免支付停车费。
(10)When loneliness gets the better of him, he decides to build a robot out of washing machine parts and an old mannequin head, and, three days later, he has an artificially intelligent device.
当他孤独得受不了的时候，他决定用洗衣机零件和一个旧的人体模型头做一个机器人，三天后，他有了一个人工智能的机器人。
(11)Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its continuing mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no one has gone before.
宇宙，人类最后的边疆。这是星舰“进取号”的航程。它长期以来的使命是去探索未知的新世界，找寻新的生命和新的文明，勇敢地航向前人未至的区域。
(12)The unknown future rolls toward us. I face it, for the first time, with a sense of hope. Because if a machine can learn the value of human life, maybe we can too.
未知的未来在我眼前展开。面对未来，我生平第一次感到充满了希望。因为如果一台机器都能懂得人生的价值，或许我们也能。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Derek and Shirley walked out of the airport building and into the bright sunshine. Looking up at the brilliant blue sky and then at the faraway mountains rising above the swaying palm trees, they couldn't wait to start their holiday.
A taxi pulled up swiftly and silently. Derek dropped their suitcases into the boot and joined Shirley in the back seat. “Palm Trees Hotel, please，” Derek said excitedly. “Certainly, sir，” replied the driver, as he turned around with a flashing white smile. Derek and Shirley gave each other a puzzled look as the taxi eased smoothly into the traffic. “Excuse me, er, your face seems very familiar—in fact, you remind us of that famous film star, Rocky Overton ... but of course, you can't be.”
Derek and Shirley sat in silent disbelief as the driver explained that he was not a real person, but a robot made to look like a famous actor. “Rocky” explained that the taxi company had purchased the latest model of robot drivers since they were programmed to be safer and more reliable than human drivers. “So, here I am，” “Rocky” continued, “your first robot taxi driver！”
Derek and Shirley held each other's hands more tightly. “Relax，” “Rocky” reassured them, “there is nothing for you to worry about. I can assure you that my driving skills are excellent. I'm equipped with perfect vision and superior reactions, and I know every street in the city. I am instantly updated with the latest traffic information so that I can avoid traffic jams and get you to your destination in the quickest and least stressful manner. Please sit back, relax and enjoy the journey.”
Derek and Shirley, feeling a little better, leaned back in their seats and closed their eyes. “And another thing，” “Rocky” added, “my line of robots represents the ultimate in computer technology. I am beautifully designed, made from only the best materials and subject to the strictest quality checks. Therefore, you are entirely safe with me. Nothing could possibly go wrong ... could possibly go wrong ... go wrong ... go wrong ...”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Derek and Shirley looked at each other with great fear in their eyes. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
“Don’t worry, sir，” came the calm reply on the phone, “And your taxi is also a driverless car.” ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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Derek and Shirley looked at each other with great fear in their eyes. The taxi was moving faster and faster, and “Rocky” seemed to be malfunctioning. “Slow down！” Derek shouted, but “Rocky” did not respond. The robot drove even faster than before and narrowly missed a car. Terrified, Derek grabbed his phone. With trembling fingers, he called the taxi company. “Hello？” Derek shouted into the phone, “Our robot driver is having a breakdown and he's completely out of control. We need help quickly！”
“Don't worry, sir，” came the calm reply on the phone, “And your taxi is also a driverless car.” The reply continued, “We have the authority to disable the robot driver. Let me switch your taxi to the driverless mode and get you to your destination safely.” The taxi immediately slowed down and continued as if nothing had happened, although its driver could be heard mumbling to himself, “... go wrong ... go wrong ...” When they finally arrived at their hotel, Derek and Shirley quickly got out of the taxi, relieved and grateful to be alive. As they watched the taxi move away, they agreed that for the rest of the holiday, they would walk everywhere!
总评 范文中运用了大量的动作和语言描写，精彩地呈现了Derek (德里克)和Shirley (雪莉)两人的惊险经历，使读者与作者的情绪一同起伏，是一篇充满幻想却又逻辑严谨的优秀作文。
[亮点呈现]
(1)The taxi immediately slowed down and continued as if nothing had happened, although its driver could be heard mumbling to himself, “... go wrong ... go wrong ...”使用了as if引导的方式状语从句和although引导的让步状语从句。
(2)As they watched the taxi move away, they agreed that for the rest of the holiday, they would walk everywhere！结尾使用了as引导的时间状语从句，幽默诙谐，给读者留下了深刻的印象。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Caught in “the Web”
Dave and Kelly loved their computer. Their parents got it for them a couple of months ago, and they had taught their kids how to use it. They bought some computer games for the kids to play and connected the computer to the Internet. The kids loved going on the Internet and visiting websites. They got to do research for their homework, play games, print colouring pages and read stories. They also got to email their friends and even chat with other kids, after getting their parents' permission.
Because the kids liked the Internet so much, they would finish their homework, and then go to surf the Internet. Very often, they didn’t feel the passage of time and found themselves almost falling asleep in front of the computer screen.
One day they stayed up late surfing the Internet after they were done with their homework. They watched a video about a science fiction story, which described two alien species hunting human information, because aliens had a wicked intention to conquer the Earth. The species coming from a distance tried to collect every aspect of data about humans, but in vain. They were detected and driven away by watchful humans. After a while they started getting tired and they were almost falling asleep. While they were in the twilight between being asleep and being awake, they felt a strong suction coming from the computer screen. It felt like a huge vacuum cleaner!
By now, they were fully awake, but when they looked around, they did not see their living room anymore. Instead, they were drawn into the computer itself by that mysterious power. They were surrounded by a complex system of tubes and small boxes and columns. They were all in different shapes, such as being tall, short, wide, narrow, round, square, etc. More strangely, they all felt a little warm and some even were shining with real, blue or orange light. They saw themselves floating in a long tube with speeding chunks of alphabets, numbers, images and sounds. They were INSIDE the computer!
Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Dave(戴夫)和Kelly(凯利)沉迷于电脑，一天他们发现自己被吸进了电脑里面。刚开始他们感到很新奇，接下来会发生什么？没有家人在身边，他们会有什么样的感受？
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灰度印刷 可临摹练习
