英语 选择性必修 第三册 WY
Period Ⅳ Writing介绍诗歌艺术
本单元的主题为介绍诗歌艺术。写作时应注意以下几点：
1．介绍诗歌艺术可以通过分析诗歌的写作特点、主要内容，或者结合作者写诗的时代背景对诗歌进行简练的描述。
2．如果要在作文中引用某一首诗歌，要确保中文转换成英文后的信息准确无误，否则不要轻易将完整诗歌加入自己的写作中，以免出现失误。
1．开头常用句式
①This poem is typical of the Romantic period.
这首诗是浪漫主义时期的典型之作。
②Your assignment is to dissect the poem.
你的任务是仔细分析这首诗。
③Her latest poem has remarkable depth.
她最近的那首诗极具深度。
2．主体段落常用句式
①If you know something about the author's family background, you will appreciate the poem on an even profounder level.
如果你对作者的家庭背景有所了解，你就会在更深的层面上欣赏这首诗。
②The subject of his poem is to chant the praise of labour heroes.
他的诗的主题是歌颂劳动英雄。
③This is another familiar and strange feature of this poem.
这是这首诗另一个熟悉却又奇特的特点。
④What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, in which he conveyed his strong love for nature, friends and the people.
我最欣赏的是他的山水诗，在诗中他表达了对自然、对朋友、对人民的强烈的爱。
⑤In poetry the rose is often a metaphor for love.
诗歌中常用玫瑰花来隐喻爱情。
⑥That's the wonder of poetry—you're always discovering something new.
这就是诗的奇妙之处——你总有新的发现。
3．结尾常用句式
①I hope you know some good poetry.
我希望您能了解一些好的诗作。
②These works bear witness to the creativeness of the Chinese people.
这些作品是中国人民创造性的见证。
③A willing mind is the good soil that we see in today's verse.
这种自发的精神是我们在今日的诗篇中看见的净土。
《咏水仙》是英国浪漫主义诗人——威廉·华兹华斯于1804年所作，请你在阅读后写一篇短文，向大家介绍这首诗歌。写作词数80个左右。
The Daffodils
William Wordsworth
I wondered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills，
When all at once I saw a crowd，
A host, of golden daffodils；
Beside the lake, beneath the trees，
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the Milky Way，
They stretched in never－ending line
Along the margin (边缘) of a bay：
Ten thousand saw I at a glance
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced, but they
Out－did the sparking waves in glee：
A Poet could not but be gay
In such a jocund company：
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought：
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood，
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude；
And then my heart with pleasure fills，
And dances with the daffodils.
[精彩范文]
The Daffodils was written by William Wordsworth, an English poet. The style of the poem is natural and pure, which conveys the poet's love to nature.
In the first and second parts of the poem, we can see wonderful scenery. In the third part, the poet describes his inner emotion that is joyful and peaceful. Through the first person, the poet uses analogy to a cloud with himself, overlooking daffodils. The final part is highlight in which the poet focuses on the importance of the past and tells us his vacant and pensive mood. The words “inward eye” stand for his past memory.
The whole poem displays a fresh and beautiful natural scenery, leading us to walk into a relaxing environment and telling us that when in a miserable situation, we can cure ourselves by natural scenery.
总评 本篇诗歌赏析的范文结构清晰，要点齐全，使用了多种句式，使文章层次丰富；承接性关联词的使用使句子与段落有效地整合在一起，让表达变得更具条理性与逻辑性。
[亮点呈现]
(1)in the first and second, in the third, the final等表示顺序的词的使用，使文章具有层次性，行文更加流畅。
(2)in which引导的定语从句，使句意更饱满、表达更清晰。
(3)The whole poem displays a fresh and beautiful natural scenery ... we can cure ourselves by natural scenery. 最后一段中连续使用非谓语动词、宾语从句、状语从句等多种复杂句式，体现了作者良好的写作功底。
假如你是李华。学校诗文报现面向全校学生征集英文诗歌赏析，请你阅读下面的优美诗文，写一篇80词左右的诗歌介绍。
The Pasture
Robert Frost
I'm going out to clean the pasture spring；
I'll only stop to rake the leaves away
(And wait to watch the water clear, I may)：
I shan't be gone long. — You come too.
I'm going out to fetch the little calf
That's standing by the mother. It's so young，
It totters when she licks it with her tongue.
I shan't be gone long. — You come too.
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WELCOME UNIT
Unit 6 Nature in words
Period Ⅳ Writing
介绍诗歌艺术
本单元的主题为介绍诗歌艺术。写作时应注意以下几点：
1．介绍诗歌艺术可以通过分析诗歌的写作特点、主要内容，或者结合作者写诗的时代背景对诗歌进行简练的描述。
2．如果要在作文中引用某一首诗歌，要确保中文转换成英文后的信息准确无误，否则不要轻易将完整诗歌加入自己的写作中，以免出现失误。
1．开头常用句式
①This poem is typical of the Romantic period.
这首诗是浪漫主义时期的典型之作。
②Your assignment is to dissect the poem.
你的任务是仔细分析这首诗。
③Her latest poem has remarkable depth.
她最近的那首诗极具深度。
2．主体段落常用句式
①If you know something about the author's family background, you will appreciate the poem on an even profounder level.
如果你对作者的家庭背景有所了解，你就会在更深的层面上欣赏这首诗。
②The subject of his poem is to chant the praise of labour heroes.
他的诗的主题是歌颂劳动英雄。
③This is another familiar and strange feature of this poem.
这是这首诗另一个熟悉却又奇特的特点。
④What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, in which he conveyed his strong love for nature, friends and the people.
我最欣赏的是他的山水诗，在诗中他表达了对自然、对朋友、对人民的强烈的爱。
⑤In poetry the rose is often a metaphor for love.
诗歌中常用玫瑰花来隐喻爱情。
⑥That's the wonder of poetry—you're always discovering something new.
这就是诗的奇妙之处——你总有新的发现。
3．结尾常用句式
①I hope you know some good poetry.
我希望您能了解一些好的诗作。
②These works bear witness to the creativeness of the Chinese people.
这些作品是中国人民创造性的见证。
③A willing mind is the good soil that we see in today's verse.
这种自发的精神是我们在今日的诗篇中看见的净土。
《咏水仙》是英国浪漫主义诗人——威廉·华兹华斯于1804年所作，请你在阅读后写一篇短文，向大家介绍这首诗歌。写作词数80个左右。
The Daffodils
William Wordsworth
I wondered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills，
When all at once I saw a crowd，
A host, of golden daffodils；
Beside the lake, beneath the trees，
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the Milky Way，
They stretched in never－ending line
Along the margin (边缘) of a bay：
Ten thousand saw I at a glance
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced, but they
Out－did the sparking waves in glee：
A Poet could not but be gay
In such a jocund company：
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought：
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood，
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude；
And then my heart with pleasure fills，
And dances with the daffodils.
﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
[精彩范文]
The Daffodils was written by William Wordsworth, an English poet. The style of the poem is natural and pure, which conveys the poet's love to nature.
In the first and second parts of the poem, we can see wonderful scenery. In the third part, the poet describes his inner emotion that is joyful and peaceful. Through the first person, the poet uses analogy to a cloud with himself, overlooking daffodils. The final part is highlight in which the poet focuses on the importance of the past and tells us his vacant and pensive mood. The words “inward eye” stand for his past memory.
The whole poem displays a fresh and beautiful natural scenery, leading us to walk into a relaxing environment and telling us that when in a miserable situation, we can cure ourselves by natural scenery.
[亮点呈现]
(1)in the first and second, in the third, the final等表示顺序的词的使用，使文章具有层次性，行文更加流畅。
(2)in which引导的定语从句，使句意更饱满、表达更清晰。
(3)The whole poem displays a fresh and beautiful natural scenery ... we can cure ourselves by natural scenery. 最后一段中连续使用非谓语动词、宾语从句、状语从句等多种复杂句式，体现了作者良好的写作功底。
总评 本篇诗歌赏析的范文结构清晰，要点齐全，使用了多种句式，使文章层次丰富；承接性关联词的使用使句子与段落有效地整合在一起，让表达变得更具条理性与逻辑性。
假如你是李华。学校诗文报现面向全校学生征集英文诗歌赏析，请你阅读下面的优美诗文，写一篇80词左右的诗歌介绍。
The Pasture
Robert Frost
I'm going out to clean the pasture spring；
I'll only stop to rake the leaves away
(And wait to watch the water clear, I may)：
I shan't be gone long. — You come too.
I'm going out to fetch the little calf
That's standing by the mother. It's so young，
It totters when she licks it with her tongue.
I shan't be gone long. — You come too.
﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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