英语 选择性必修 第四册[WY]
Section Ⅳ Writing概要写作
本单元的写作任务为概要写作。概要写作的特点是阅读与写作的融合，是一种对原文的基本内容进行浓缩并再加工的语言输出形式。概要写作题型的基本要求为：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
1．评分标准
(1)准确把握文章主旨及其所要表达的中心思想。
(2)对英语词汇和语法可以灵活准确地进行应用。
(3)文章句与句之间要有一定的连贯性。
(4)各语句间在连贯的基础上，也要具有一定的独立性。
2．写作步骤
(1)细读原文。首先要仔细阅读原文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。
(2)读懂要求。概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要。
(3)列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。
(1)Happiness is what we need most with the increase of pressure in modern life.
随着现代生活压力的增加，快乐是我们最需要的。
(2)Students are given access to e textbooks and people think that technology improves students' learning ability.
学生可以使用电子教科书，人们认为技术可以提高学生的学习能力。
(3)Additionally, he found napping would do harm to children's mental performance.
此外，他还发现打盹会损害孩子们的心理表现。
(4)Drier climates also easily result in water shortages; nonetheless, good management can guarantee enough water to satisfy our fundamental demands.
干燥的气候也很容易导致水资源短缺；然而，良好的管理可以保证有足够的水来满足我们的基本需求。
(5)There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine, ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.
无论从个人层面还是全球优势角度，在你的日常生活中进行回收利用有很多很好的理由。
(6)It can also help create jobs and keep people employed, generating employment.
它还可以帮助创造就业机会，让人们保持就业，促进就业。
(7)Fishes and birds migrate to feed, while some animals, such as a kind of mouse in Northern Europe, move for more spaces to live in.
鱼类和鸟类迁徙是为了觅食，而一些动物，比如北欧的一种老鼠，则是为了寻找更多的空间居住。
(8)This photo reminds us how one should learn to share what others are also interested in.
这张照片提醒我们，一个人应该如何学会分享别人也感兴趣的东西。
(9)People may employ wearable devices to help record their running, including distance and routes.
人们可以使用可穿戴设备来帮助记录他们的跑步情况，包括距离和路线。
(10)Its quantity demand has increased rapidly due to the convenient bottled water.
由于方便的瓶装水，其需求量迅速增加。
(11)Three types of loneliness are identified.
我们确定了三种孤独的类型。
(12)Though social contact is a vital factor, lonely people may find it inadequate.
虽然社会接触是一个至关重要的因素，但孤独的人可能会发现这是不够的。
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Most people want to be happy, but few know how to find happiness. Money and success alone do not bring lasting happiness. Aristotle, a Greek thinker, said, “Happiness depends upon ourselves.” In other words, we make our own happiness. Here are a few suggestions to help you be happier.
The first secret of happiness is to enjoy the simple things in life. Too often, we spend so much time thinking about the future—for example, getting into college or getting a good job—that we fail to enjoy the present. You should enjoy life's simple pleasures, such as reading a good book, listening to your favorite music, or spending time with close friends. People who have several close friends often live happier and healthier lives.
Another secret to living a happy life is to be active, and have hobbies where you forget your problems and time. Many people experience this by dancing, or playing a sport, such as swimming. You can forget about your problems, and only think about the activity.
Finally, many people find happiness in helping others.Studies show that people feel good when they spend their time helping others. If you want to feel happier, do good things for someone. You can help a friend with his or her studies, go shopping to buy food for an elderly person, or simply help out around the house by washing the dishes.
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Though many people want happiness, they don't know how to get it.(要点1) Firstly, you should enjoy simple pleasures in your daily life.(要点2) Secondly, you should take an active part in various activities and forget your worries.(要点3) Finally, you can get happiness from helping others in your daily life.(要点4)
总评 本文将文章所表达的信息完整地表述了出来，语法结构和词汇的使用恰到好处，语言简洁，逻辑清晰，上下文连贯。
[亮点呈现]
(1)Though many people want happiness, they don't know how to get it. 运用了though引导的让步状语从句，使句式灵活多变。
(2)firstly, secondly, finally等逻辑连接词的使用，使文章结构紧凑，条理清晰。
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Many people are longing for the benefits of living a healthy lifestyle, but what does that actually mean Healthy living is about taking responsibility for your decisions and making smart health choices for today and for the future. A healthy lifestyle is generally characterized as a “balanced life” in which one makes “wise choices”. A healthy lifestyle is a valuable resource for reducing health problems, for relieving life stress, and for improving quality of life.
The right nutrition is necessary to live a healthy lifestyle. Your body requires a well balanced diet every day in order to maintain (维持) the proper amounts of vitamins, nutrients and minerals needed to maintain a healthy body.
You will need to include fitness as part of your life. Physical fitness keeps your weight in check, helps you sleep better at night, prevents heart attacks and other health problems, and generally lives a longer life. Basically there are so many benefits of exercising that you really can't live a full life without it.
Emotional stress plays an important role in many illnesses, both directly and indirectly. People are also more likely to smoke, overeat, drink too much, work too hard, argue with others and so on, when they are feeling stressed. Thus, stress management is an important part of your new lifestyle, and relaxation techniques are truly a key part of living a healthy lifestyle.
Being healthy is so important. Just change one thing in your life today. Have a healthy life beginning now. Living a healthy lifestyle will bring you happiness, health and the life of your dreams. You can feel your best at all times of the day.
写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何拥有一个健康的生活方式。
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WELCOME UNIT
Unit 2 Lessons in life
Section Ⅳ Writing 概要写作
本单元的写作任务为概要写作。概要写作的特点是阅读与写作的融合，是一种对原文的基本内容进行浓缩并再加工的语言输出形式。概要写作题型的基本要求为：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
1．评分标准
(1)准确把握文章主旨及其所要表达的中心思想。
(2)对英语词汇和语法可以灵活准确地进行应用。
(3)文章句与句之间要有一定的连贯性。
(4)各语句间在连贯的基础上，也要具有一定的独立性。
2．写作步骤
(1)细读原文。首先要仔细阅读原文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。
(2)读懂要求。概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要。
(3)列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。
(1)Happiness is what we need most with the increase of pressure in modern life.
随着现代生活压力的增加，快乐是我们最需要的。
(2)Students are given access to e textbooks and people think that technology improves students' learning ability.
学生可以使用电子教科书，人们认为技术可以提高学生的学习能力。
(3)Additionally, he found napping would do harm to children's mental performance.
此外，他还发现打盹会损害孩子们的心理表现。
(4)Drier climates also easily result in water shortages; nonetheless, good management can guarantee enough water to satisfy our fundamental demands.
干燥的气候也很容易导致水资源短缺；然而，良好的管理可以保证有足够的水来满足我们的基本需求。
(5)There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine, ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.
无论从个人层面还是全球优势角度，在你的日常生活中进行回收利用有很多很好的理由。
(6)It can also help create jobs and keep people employed, generating employment.
它还可以帮助创造就业机会，让人们保持就业，促进就业。
(7)Fishes and birds migrate to feed, while some animals, such as a kind of mouse in Northern Europe, move for more spaces to live in.
鱼类和鸟类迁徙是为了觅食，而一些动物，比如北欧的一种老鼠，则是为了寻找更多的空间居住。
(8)This photo reminds us how one should learn to share what others are also interested in.
这张照片提醒我们，一个人应该如何学会分享别人也感兴趣的东西。
(9)People may employ wearable devices to help record their running, including distance and routes.
人们可以使用可穿戴设备来帮助记录他们的跑步情况，包括距离和路线。
(10)Its quantity demand has increased rapidly due to the convenient bottled water.
由于方便的瓶装水，其需求量迅速增加。
(11)Three types of loneliness are identified.
我们确定了三种孤独的类型。
(12)Though social contact is a vital factor, lonely people may find it inadequate.
虽然社会接触是一个至关重要的因素，但孤独的人可能会发现这是不够的。
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Most people want to be happy, but few know how to find happiness. Money and success alone do not bring lasting happiness. Aristotle, a Greek thinker, said, “Happiness depends upon ourselves.” In other words, we make our own happiness. Here are a few suggestions to help you be happier.
The first secret of happiness is to enjoy the simple things in life. Too often, we spend so much time thinking about the future—for example, getting into college or getting a good job—that we fail to enjoy the present. You should enjoy life's simple pleasures, such as reading a good book, listening to your favorite music, or spending time with close friends. People who have several close friends often live happier and healthier lives.
Another secret to living a happy life is to be active, and have hobbies where you forget your problems and time. Many people experience this by dancing, or playing a sport, such as swimming. You can forget about your problems, and only think about the activity.
Finally, many people find happiness in helping others.Studies show that people feel good when they spend their time helping others. If you want to feel happier, do good things for someone. You can help a friend with his or her studies, go shopping to buy food for an elderly person, or simply help out around the house by washing the dishes.
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[精彩范文]
Though many people want happiness, they don't know how to get it.(要点1) Firstly, you should enjoy simple pleasures in your daily life.(要点2) Secondly, you should take an active part in various activities and forget your worries.(要点3) Finally, you can get happiness from helping others in your daily life.(要点4)
总评 本文将文章所表达的信息完整地表述了出来，语法结构和词汇的使用恰到好处，语言简洁，逻辑清晰，上下文连贯。
[亮点呈现]
(1)Though many people want happiness, they don't know how to get it. 运用了though引导的让步状语从句，使句式灵活多变。
(2)firstly, secondly, finally等逻辑连接词的使用，使文章结构紧凑，条理清晰。
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Many people are longing for the benefits of living a healthy lifestyle, but what does that actually mean Healthy living is about taking responsibility for your decisions and making smart health choices for today and for the future. A healthy lifestyle is generally characterized as a “balanced life” in which one makes “wise choices”. A healthy lifestyle is a valuable resource for reducing health problems, for relieving life stress, and for improving quality of life.
The right nutrition is necessary to live a healthy lifestyle. Your body requires a well balanced diet every day in order to maintain (维持) the proper amounts of vitamins, nutrients and minerals needed to maintain a healthy body.
You will need to include fitness as part of your life. Physical fitness keeps your weight in check, helps you sleep better at night, prevents heart attacks and other health problems, and generally lives a longer life. Basically there are so many benefits of exercising that you really can't live a full life without it.
Emotional stress plays an important role in many illnesses, both directly and indirectly. People are also more likely to smoke, overeat, drink too much, work too hard, argue with others and so on, when they are feeling stressed. Thus, stress management is an important part of your new lifestyle, and relaxation techniques are truly a key part of living a healthy lifestyle.
Being healthy is so important. Just change one thing in your life today. Have a healthy life beginning now. Living a healthy lifestyle will bring you happiness, health and the life of your dreams. You can feel your best at all times of the day.
﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何拥有一个健康的生活方式。
[精彩范文]
灰度印刷 可临摹练习
