【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．为提升城市形象，很多城市已启动老小区出新改造工程。假设你是Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友Jack简单介绍你市的出新改造工程。
Purpose improve the environment
Changes to people’s life beautiful buildings, …
Problems lots of noise, rubbish
Your advice …
注意：1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in our city.
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2．假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及作为中学生应该怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示，以“Save the Earth： Let’s Do Our Part!”为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
写作要求：
（1）层次清晰，语言流畅；
（2）词数在90～100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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3．中国传统节日展现了中华文化的独特魅力，传承着中华民族的历史与价值观。某英语报“Culture”专栏正举行以“Traditional Chinese Festivals”为主题的征文比赛。请根据以下图表，简要介绍中国四大传统节日并投稿。
冬：春节 春：清明 夏：端午 秋：中秋
大扫除 …… 献花 …… 赛龙舟 …… 吃月饼 ……
总结：……
提示词语：paper-cuts，resting places of dead relatives，show respect，poet，reunion
要求：
（1）文中不能出现真实姓名、地名、学校名称；
（2）不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Traditional Chinese Festivals
In China, there are lots of important traditional festivals in a year.
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4．假如你是李华，暑假期间，英国交换生Jack将来中国参加游学活动并计划寄住在当地的中国家庭。请你根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向他推荐一个合适的家庭。
My family have a brother do sports every day like traveling … My uncle’s family have two dogs have lots of books like cooking …
注意：(1) 邮件需包含所选家庭的相关信息，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
(3) 词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．习近平总书记强调中华优秀传统文化是中华民族的文化根脉。文化自信是对中华优秀传统文化精髓的自信。阅读理解C篇讲述的是英国文化的重要组成部分——赛马文化，让我们耳目一新。你的英国笔友Mike也想了解中国传统文化，假设你是Li Mei，请联系所学内容，向他发一封邮件介绍你最喜欢的传统节日，并请他分享给更多人。
写作要点 参考词汇
1. Introduce your favorite traditional festival. falls on, food/ activities, celebrations, meanings, wishes...
2. Explain (解释) why you like it best.
3. Ask Mike to spread it to others.
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80-120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you want to know about Chinese traditional festivals.
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Yours,
Li Mei
6．假如你是李华，你的朋友田甜将去英国。请你将她的基本情况介绍给你的英国朋友Millie，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。请根据以下要点给Millie写一封信。
提示：（1）介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
（2）田甜将去英国的Woodland School学习一年，并将乘飞机于8月1日下午4时到达伦敦希思罗机场(Heathrow Airport)。
注意：词数80左右。
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7．假如你是李华，你和你的家人想在新家举办一次乔迁聚会 (a housewarming party)，请根据下面要点和要求，用英文给你的朋友们写一则不少于40词的邀请函。
要点：1. 新家地址—和平路5号；
2. 开始时间—本周日晚上7点；
3. 提供服务—美食和饮料；
4. 回复时间—本周五之前。
要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear friends,
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Li Hua
8．近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。请你写一篇演讲稿向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起。为保护环境尽一份力。
措施 1. 节约水电； 2. 少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾； 3. 绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等； 4. ……
提出希望 ……
要求：
1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和班级等）
4. 词数：不少于 70 词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
Fellow students,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
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9．转眼间，初中生活已过去两年多，回首过去的时光，你还记得对你影响最大的某个人或某件事吗？请以“I will never forget”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点： 1) 你不能忘记的是哪个人或哪件事；
2) 这个人或这件事是如何对你产生影响的；
3) 这个人或这件事给你带来的感受。
2. 要求：1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2) 词数100左右。
I will never forget ________
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10．假如你是李辉，你的一位英国笔友Kate发来电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，她向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下面提示给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关情况。词数80~ 100。参考词汇： toast (vt. 为……举杯敬酒)
提示：
1. 等大家都到齐了再开吃；
2. 让长辈或客人先动筷；
3. 不能用筷子敲碗；
4. 不要将手伸到饭桌对面夹菜；
5. 为主人的健康、成功干杯……
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners.
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Yours,
Li Hui
11．中华文化，博大精深。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Steve想了解更多的中国文化。请你给他写一封信，向他简单介绍中国的特色文化。
① Festivals the Spring Festival ② Traditional art forms paper-cutting
③ Music or traditional musical instruments erhu … ④ Others
要求：
1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
3. 请在表格中已给出的三项内容中选写两项，并添加一项其他内容。
Dear Steve,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假定你是李辉，开学准备参加学校英语社团组织的“春节的记忆”为主题的演讲活动，根据下面的写作要求写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。
注意：
1．短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hui.
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Thank you for listening.
13．上周你去市科技馆进行了参观，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课的值日生报告上向你班同学介绍它。请你以“Amazing Robot”为题，根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：
1. 外观：看起来像一位可爱的女孩；高1.2米；
2. 材料：再生材料，如玻璃、塑料等制成；
3. 功能：能做各种家务，会讲不同外语；在健康方面提建议；治疗普通的疾病（treat common diseases）；照顾老人和孩子。
要求：
1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达要准确，语句要通顺连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名，词数：80~100。
Amazing Robot
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14．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，介绍该节日。
the Spring FestivalTime: in January or February Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, get together… Meaning: the biggest day of the year, a new start.
the Mid-Autumn FestivalTime: in September or October Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon… Meaning: the symbol of being together, missing family members far away…
注意：1. 发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80—100；
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
15．假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明，今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes ”为题，写一篇英语短文。
赞同意见 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松，音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩
反对意见 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息
你的看法 . . . . . .
要求:
1）短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3）不少于 80 词。
Should music be played between classes
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16．地球一小时（Earth Hour） 是世界自然基金会（WWF）应对全球气候变化所提出的一项全球性节能活动（2023年地球一小时时间为3月25日晚上20:30—21:30），家庭及商界用户关上不必要的电灯及耗电产品一小时，以此来表明他们对应对气候变化行动的支持。
今年的 Earth Hour你是如何度过的？请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2023” 的短文。要点如下：
1. 你今年参加 Earth Hour这个活动了吗？ 请表达你参加或者没有参加的心情。
2. 请你描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事。
3. 请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事。
4. 号召大家加入明年的 Earth Hour活动中来。
注意：
1. 作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 词数80—100。作文的标题、开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Earth Hour 2023
The Earth Hour was from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on Saturday March 25th this year.
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17．绿水青山就是金山银山，形成绿色发展方式和生活方式，建设美丽中国。
某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对绿色生活的看法，简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法以及你对如何践行绿色生活的建议。
要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语:
important, protect the environment, divide the waste, save, recycle
提示问题:
What do you think of green life
How do you do to have a green life
What’s your advice about having a green life
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18．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来电子邮件，说他下周来中国，但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，告知相关信息。
注意：
（1）根据要求完成作文，词数80-100词；
（2）开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数；
（3）短文须包含所有提示内容，语言通顺，语意连贯，可适当发挥；
（4）文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you’ll come to China next week.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，你的好友Linda想了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据要点提示，给她写一封邮件。要点如下：
1. 最喜欢民间音乐；
2. 让你了解文化；
3. 多种不同乐器的音乐；
4. 自十岁开始喜欢。
要求：
1. 短文中要包括以上所有提示信息内容；
2. 内容可适当发挥，以保证短文内容的丰富、完整与流畅；
3. 词数：80～100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
20．节约资源，保护环境，应从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己“低碳生活”。
提示：1.每天步行上学；
2.离开教室时，关闭灯和电脑等；
3.不用水时，记住关水龙头，循环使用水；
4.充分使用纸张；
5.不使用塑料袋。
参考词汇：tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic
注意：1. 书写规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥，使行文连贯流畅；
2. 词数：80左右。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in our city. The purpose of it is to improve the environment. After the renovation, people’s lives have changed a lot. We now live in beautiful buildings with better facilities. There are some parks and a big shopping store. However, there are also some problems. During the construction, there’s lots of noise and rubbish everywhere. I think the workers should try to reduce the noise and clean up the rubbish in time. In this way, we can enjoy a better living environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括改造工程的目的、对人们生活带来的变化、存在的问题以及建议。考生在写作时应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，以突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头直接点明主题，即要向Jack介绍本市的老小区出新改造工程；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从改造工程的目的、对人们生活带来的变化、存在的问题以及建议等几个方面进行了详细阐述；
第三步，书写结语。结尾表达了希望改造工程能够带来更好的生活环境的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①renovation翻新，改造
②purpose目的
③facility设施
④however然而
⑤construction建设，施工
⑥in this way这样
[高分句型]
①The purpose of it is to improve the environment.（“The purpose of...is to...”的句型）
②During the construction, there’s lots of noise and rubbish everywhere.（时间状语）
2．例文
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution, and make sure to always throw trash in the proper bins. By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据海报完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，呼吁大家保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述作为中学生怎样保护环境；
第三步，最后宣讲环保的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference产生影响；有所作为
②instead of代替
③make a positive impact on对……产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution.（动词不定式作目的状语）
3．范文：
Traditional Chinese Festivals
In China, there are lots of important traditional festivals in a year.
The Spring Festival, in winter, marks the new year. People clean their houses, put up paper-cuts, and enjoy family reunions. In spring, Qingming Festival is a time when people visit the resting places of dead relatives to show respect and offer flowers. The Dragon Boat Festival in summer honors the ancient poet Qu Yuan. People eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. The Mid-Autumn Festival comes in autumn. Families get together to admire the full moon and share mooncakes.
These festivals show the beauty of Chinese culture and carry our history and values.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需覆盖四个节日及其主要活动，并适当总结。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起，点明中国有许多重要传统节日；
第二步，按季节顺序分别介绍春节、清明、端午、中秋；
第三步，总结文化意义。
[亮点词汇]
①mark the new year标志着新的一年
②show respect表示敬意
③admire the full moon赏月
[高分句型]
①Qingming Festival is a time when people visit the resting places of dead relatives… (when引导定语从句)
②These festivals show the beauty of Chinese culture and carry our history and values. (并列谓语，概括文化意义)
4．例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to recommend my uncle’s family for you to stay with. They have two lovely dogs, so if you like animals, you’ll enjoy their company. Also, they have lots of books, which suits your interest in reading. My uncle and aunt love cooking, so you can taste delicious Chinese food. They’re friendly and easy-going, too. I think you’ll have a great time living with them. Plus, they like traveling, so maybe you can explore some interesting places together during your stay.
Hope you’ll like my recommendation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件;
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中推荐家庭的相关信息，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很高兴得知Jack即将来中国”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家庭宠物、藏书、烹饪爱好和旅行爱好”几个方面重点介绍推荐家庭的具体情况;
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Jack喜欢这个推荐”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②lots of许多
③be suitable for适合
④Plus而且
[高分句型]
①Also, they have lots of books, which suits your interest in reading.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Plus, they like traveling, so maybe you can explore some interesting places together during your stay.（so引导的结果状语从句）
5．
例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you want to know about Chinese traditional festivals. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. During this time, we eat traditional dishes like dumplings and fish, which symbolize wealth and good luck. We also set off fireworks, paste red couplets, and give lucky money to children.
I like it best because it brings family members together. We share happiness and hopes for the new year. It shows the importance of family and traditional culture in China.
I hope you can spread it to others. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍最喜欢的传统节日的要点，包括节日时间、食物、活动、庆祝方式、意义等，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Mike想了解中国传统文化”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节日时间、食物、活动、庆祝方式、意义等”几个方面重点介绍最喜欢的传统节日的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Mike将节日分享给更多人”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①falls on 落在（某一天），指节日等在某一天
②set off fireworks放烟花
③spread...to... 把……传播给……
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you want to know about Chinese traditional festivals.（that引导的宾语从句）
②My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．范文
Dear Millie,
How is everything going I’d like to introduce my best friend Tian Tian to you.
She is 16 years old. She is a lovely girl with a round face and big eyes. She is very kind and easy to get along with. She likes reading and listening to music, and she is especially good at playing the piano. Her favorite subjects are physics and chemistry.
Now she is going to Woodland School in England to study for one year. I hope you two can be good friends. She is arriving at Heathrow Airport at 4 pm on August 1st. Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives Many thanks.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
第三步，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with相处
②listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I hope you two can be good friends. (宾语从句)
②Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives (when引导的时间状语从句)
7．
Dear friends,
We’re planning a housewarming party at our new house this Sunday. Can you come Our house is at 5 Heping Road. The party will begin at 7:00 p.m. We will serve delicious food and drink. Please let us know by Friday if you can come. Hope you can make it!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是邀请函；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你的家人和你想在新家举行一次乔迁聚会”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，分别从聚会的时间，地址，美食，饮料及回复时间等方面去叙述。
[亮点词汇]
①a housewarming party乔迁聚会
②serve上菜
[高分句型]
①Please let us know by Friday if you can come.（“if”引导宾语从句）
②Hope you can make it!（祈使句）
8．例文：
Fellow students,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go to school or go shopping. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s do it together from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意文章必须包括所给提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借由说明环境的问题号召大家为环保尽一份力；
第二步，具体阐述保护环境的建议和措施；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家从现在就做起。
[亮点词汇]
①throw rubbish everywhere 乱扔垃圾
②daily life 日常生活
③turn off 关掉
④be supposed to 应该
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life.（it固定句型）
②Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room.（祈使句、when引导时间状语从句）
③If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.（if引导条件状语从句）
9．例文
I will never forget my English teacher
Looking back to the past two years, we have experienced many unforgettable things. I will never forget the help my English teacher gave me.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it. I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher knew it, she had a long talk with me about how to learn English well. She always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. With her help, I was interested in English and improved myself a lot.
Though I have to say goodbye to her very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be her student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明“难忘的英语老师”；
第二步，具体阐述英语老师如何让作者难忘；
第三步，书写结语表达对老师的不舍和感谢之情。
[亮点词汇]
①look back to回顾
②give up放弃
③as soon as一……就……
[高分句型]
①She always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress.（whenever引导时间状语从句）
②Though I have to say goodbye to her very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be her student.（though引导让步状语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners.
In China, we must wait until everyone is at the table. And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. He waits for the guests and elders to dig in. We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. We shouldn’t reach across the table to get something to eat, because in that case, we may break or knock something over. Besides, we usually toast good health or success of the host and thank him for his treat.
Hope to see you in China and everything goes well.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使邮件内容意思完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，并按照内容提示，一一介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；
第二步，书写结语，表示期待见到Kate，并给予祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① in that case 在那种情况下
② at the table 在餐桌上
③ everything goes well 一切顺利
[高分句型]
① And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. (when引导时间状语从句)
② We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
11．例文：
Dear Steve,
How is everything going I’m glad you like China and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you something about Chinese culture.
There are several traditional festivals in China, among which the Spring Festival is my favorite. During the Spring Festival, we often get together as a family and eat dumplings, because it is a symbol of reunion and good luck. In terms of traditional art forms, paper-cutting is a beautiful craft that embodies our love for intricate designs and symbolism. It’s used for decorations during festivals and special occasions. When it comes to the national drink in China, it must be tea with pleasant scent and sweet taste.
Why not come to China to experience Chinese culture in person Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“提示信息”的几个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我来告诉你一些关于中国文化的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点：春节、传统剪纸艺术、喝茶一一阐述；
第三步：书写结语。表达“我期待早早收到你的来信”。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a symbol of……的象征
③In terms of在……方面
④be used for被用来
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I’m glad you like China and you are interested in Chinese culture.（省略that的宾语从句；and并列句）
②There are several traditional festivals in China, among which the Spring Festival is my favorite. (There be句型；非限制性定语从句)
12．例文：
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hui. I stand here with a heart full of warmth and memories. This past Spring Festival, my family and I gathered together, just like the reunion of a dragon dance, filled with energy and tradition. The wonderful fireworks, the laughter and joy, and the retelling of old tales—it was a celebration that filled our home with love. It reminded me of the power of family and the beauty of our rich cultural heritage. This unforgettable experience taught me that the simple moments with loved ones are the most precious.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，讲述自己对于春节的记忆。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②remind sb of sth使某人想起某事
③thank sb for doing sth因某事感谢某人
[高分句型]
①This unforgettable experience taught me that the simple moments with loved ones are the most precious.（宾语从句）
13．例文
Amazing Robot
Last week, I went to the science and technology museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot—Home Doctor. Home Doctor looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. It is made from recycled materials, like glass and plastic. Home Doctor can do all kinds of housework and speak different foreign languages. Home Doctor also has some new functions. It can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home. It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. What’s more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home.
I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使作文内容意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头描述背景，引出“家庭医生机器人”这一话题；
第二步，详述机器人的外观、材料和功能；
第三步，点评这款机器人应该会受到欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①be made from 由……制成
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③not only...but also 不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future. (宾语从句)
14．范文：
Ladies and gentleman,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of the year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给卡片信息完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据卡片信息，介绍中国的传统节日；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce介绍
②get together聚在一起
③stay up late熬夜
④bright有希望的；光明的
⑤wish each other good luck祝彼此好运
[高分句型]
Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(省略that的宾语从句)
15．例文
Should music be played between classes
We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class.
Some think listening to music between classes is a good idea. Music can make them feel happy and relaxed. Music can make their lives colorful. However, others are against the idea. They think music may have a bad influence because some music is too noisy and they may get too excited to take a break. In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. In this way, students can enjoy music as well as having a good rest. Besides, I suggest playing music that is suitable for middle school students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇议论文；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明班级开展了一次讨论，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①discussion讨论
②relaxed放松的
③take break休息
④suitable合适的
[高分句型]
①We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class. (whether引导的宾语从句）
②In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. (it句式结构)
16．例文
My Earth Hour 2023
The Earth Hour was from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on Saturday March 25th this year. I am very glad that I took part in this activity with my family. It was a warm and relaxing evening and we had dinner earlier so that we could enjoy the one-hour dark and energy-saving time with each other. We turned the lights and TV off and it was amazing to see that most of the lights in the neighborhood became dark during that period. We gathered together and told each other things that happened recently and we laughed a lot. I think it was really a meaningful activity.
In fact, there are lots of activities we can do to protect the environment, such as saving water or taking a bus to go out instead of taking a taxi.
I believe that we can make our earth a better place if everyone plays an active part in saving it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，注意文中要包含所有要点，可适当增加细节；注意时态，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头，介绍你参加的这次“地球一小时”的活动详情，并具体介绍自己做了哪些事；
第二步，介绍还可以做些什么有利于环保的事；
第三步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②protect the environment保护环境
③instead of代替
[高分句型]
①It was a warm and relaxing evening and we had dinner earlier so that we could enjoy the one-hour dark and energy-saving time with each other.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②we turned the lights and TV off and it was amzing to see that most of the lights in the neighborhood become dark during that period.（it作形式主语；宾语从句）
17．例文
Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment. I think everyone should do something for the environment. We should turn off lights before leaving to save electricity. And we can use both sides of paper to save paper. What’s more, we can recycle old books and give them to the children in need. Everyone should take actions to live a green life, You can also start an Environmental Club at your school. It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对绿色生活的看法”；“在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法”；以及“对如何践行绿色生活的建议”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明绿色生活是很重要的。
第二步，介绍日常生活中如何具体践行绿色生活的。
第三步，给出绿色生活的建议并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②take action采取行动
③community社区
[高分句型]
①Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community.（it is+名词+to do的句型）
18．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you’ll come to China next week. Let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
In our country, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time. Besides, when we are invited to someone’s house, we shouldn’t be late. We are expected to bring a small gift. We never visit a friend’s house without calling first. As for Chinese table manners, when we’re eating at the table, we aren’t expected to point at anybody with our chopsticks, or use our chopsticks to hit an empty bowl. We shouldn’t talk with full mouth.
I hope you have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时，一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示内容描述中国的见面礼仪，餐桌礼仪，风俗习惯。
第二步，表达祝福，希望Tom在中国玩的开心。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②for the first time第一次
③have a good time玩的开心
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to know that you’ll come to China next week.（宾语从句）
②In our country, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time.（时间状语从句）
19．例文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.
Importantly, it can help me learn more about our rich culture. In the folk music, I can hear the sound of different cultures. What’s more, I like the folk music by different musical instruments better than any other music. I especially like Erhu music. I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it. And I fell in love with it when I was only ten. At that time, my uncle played “Er Quan Ying Yue” with his Erhu. It’s really beautiful.
That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意表明自己最喜爱的音乐类型，介绍该音乐的相关常识，不要遗漏。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。表明自己喜欢民间音乐。
第二步，具体介绍民间音乐。包括其文化背景、乐器类型等常识，必要时可适当展开描述，让对方了解民间音乐。
第三步，介绍自己与民间音乐的渊源。从十岁就开始喜欢民间音乐，具体喜欢哪种乐器，对民间音乐的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①folk music 民间音乐
②musical instrument 乐器
[高分句型]
①I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.（原因状语从句句型）
②I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it.（时间状语从句句型）
20．例文
My Low-carbon Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse. We must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment.
First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving cars. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, computer and lights in time when we don’t use them. What’s more, water should be reused. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with a basket or a cloth bag rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take action.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍要保护环境；
第二步，从衣食住行等方面详细阐述如何践行“低碳生活”；
第三步，呼吁人们一起“低碳生活”。
[亮点词汇]
①in time 及时
②instead of 而不是
③make full use of 充分利用
[高分句型]
① I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, computer and lights in time when we don’t use them.（when引导时间状语从句）
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