【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优北师大版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优北师大版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．为提升城市形象，很多城市已启动老小区出新改造工程。假设你是Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友Jack简单介绍你市的出新改造工程。
Purpose improve the environment
Changes to people’s life beautiful buildings, …
Problems lots of noise, rubbish
Your advice …
注意：1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in our city.
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2．某中学生英语学习网站正在开展以“English Learning”为主题的讨论活动，以下是Tina发的一个帖子，请根据帖子内容跟帖，谈谈你的看法。
How interesting! We had GROUP WORK in our English class today. We had a heated discussion. Some were sharing ideas while others were taking notes. I learned so much today! Do you often have group work in your English classes
要点如下：
1.回复Tina帖子中的问题；
2.你对英语小组学习的看法；
3.你喜欢的其它英语学习方式。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当拓展；
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4.80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
It seems that you enjoy your English class a lot.
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3．假如你是李斌，你校英文网站正在开展以“My favourite book”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一本书——《老人与海》！
Name The Old Man and the Sea
Writer Ernest Hemingway (an American writer)
Main characters an old fisherman and a huge fish
Stories the book tells the fisherman fought against fish and nature
Theme human nature and beliefs
The reason why I like the book meaningful, never give up, well-known sentence: “Man is not made for defeat (失败)”, …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today.
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4．请根据下面表格中的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍下列城市当天的天气状况及适宜的穿着。
城市 天气
北京 上午有点儿暖和，下午冷
上海 白天有风，晚上有雨
哈尔滨 一整天都有雪，寒冷
提示词语：take some clothes, take an umbrella, gloves
提示问题：What’s the weather like in Beijing/Shanghai/Harbin
Here is the weather report in some cities in China today.
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5．假如你是李华，本期你校英文报中的Famous People栏目将要介绍我国著名的短跑运动员苏炳添，现面向广大学生征稿。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
1. 1989年8月29日出生于广东省中山市。
2. 小时候喜欢跑步，于2009年加入国家队。
3. 在2018年雅加达亚运会男子100米比赛中夺得金牌。
4. 在2020年东京奥运会上，成为首位进入奥运百米决赛的中国人。
5. 你认为……
参考词汇：2018年雅加达亚运会 the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games
2020年东京奥运会 the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games
奥运100米决赛 Olympic 100-metre final
要求：
1. 词数：80—100。
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He
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6．绿水青山就是金山银山，形成绿色发展方式和生活方式，建设美丽中国。
某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对绿色生活的看法，简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法以及你对如何践行绿色生活的建议。
要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语:
important, protect the environment, divide the waste, save, recycle
提示问题:
What do you think of green life
How do you do to have a green life
What’s your advice about having a green life
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7．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你上个月完成了北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。
要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
提示词语：
practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地)
提示问题：
●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English
●What have you achieved
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在收集“时代呼唤英雄”的主题材料，计划做一期“英雄人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友 Peter 你推荐的心目中的英雄，他/她是谁，做了什么以及你的推荐理由。
要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语： love, train, study, never give up, take pride in
提示问题：Who is your hero
What did he/she do
Why do you want to recommend him/her
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart.
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假设你是李辉。张磊是你校一名九年级学生，由于学习方法不当，学习成绩不理想。他在学校的英语论坛发帖求助，想知道如何在学习上取得进步。请你根据下面的提示要点，用英语写一封回帖，针对他的求助给予合理的建议。
要点如下：
（1）回帖目的；
（2）给出建议；
（3）提出祝愿。
注意：
（1）词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
（4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies.
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10．生活中，有很多事情令我们开心，比如享受一次愉悦身心的旅行、阅读一本经典名著、参加一场酣畅淋漓的比赛、解决一个棘手的问题……它们带给我们快乐，也让我们成为更好的自己。本期学校英语论坛正在开展以“__________ Brought Me Happiness”为题的征文活动, 请你用英文写一篇短文投稿, 分享你的故事和感受。
要点如下:
（1）Who/What brought you happiness
（2）What have you learned from that
注意:
（1）词数80—100;
（2）可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
__________ Brought Me Happiness
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11．习近平主席曾寄语青少年：想象力、创造力从哪里来？要从刻苦的学习中来。既勤学书本知识，又多学课外知识，还要勤于思考，多想想，多问问，这样就能培养自己的创造精神。请你根据以下提示，结合自己的亲身经历，用英语写一篇小短文。
提示：
1. What have you ever created/made
2. What did you learn from that experience
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于70词。
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12．自从进入九年级以来，不少同学遇到了困惑、烦恼等麻烦事。面对这些麻烦事，聪明的你是怎么解决的呢？请以“That Day，I Solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题写一篇英语短文，向你校英文专刊投稿。The following questions are for your reference（参考）：
*What trouble did you meet with
*How did you solve the trouble
*What did you learn from this experience
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数100左右（已给出的开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
That Day, I Solved a Trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day,
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13．假如你是李华，本学期期中你被评为“优秀网课(Online classes)学生”。下周的英语课上，老师希望你给同学们分享一些网课学习建议，请根据以下信息准备你的发言稿。
Before class—制定学习计划，预习(preview)新课，早睡早起，锻炼身体。
In class—认真听讲，记笔记，积极参与课堂。
After class—认真完成作业，课后复习(review)，和父母交谈。
要求：
1.内容包含以上提示要点，可适当增加细节，使行文流畅；
2.语言表达要准确，语句要通顺，连贯；字数不少于90字。
Good morning, everyone!
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Thanks for your listening.
14．在学习和生活中，优秀人物是我们学习的榜样，激励我们确立学习目标，有意义地度过课余时间，为未来奠定基础。假如你是本年度市优秀学生李华，请向Teenage Magazine的读者介绍你的经验。
Improve study ● listen to the teacher carefully in class ● ...
Spend spare time ● art (music/film/TV programmes/...) ● sports (ball games/running/swimming/...) ● good relationship with others
Good example ...
要求：
(1)包含表格中所有信息，并适当发挥；
(2)表达清楚，连贯流畅，语法正确，字迹工整；
(3)词数：不少于90词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(4)不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名等。
Dear readers,
As this year’s Excellent Student, it is my honour to share my experiences with you.
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I hope my experiences are of help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
15．科学技术是第一生产力，现在我们处于一个科技飞速发展时代，科技产品就在我们身边，他们无时无刻都在影响着我们的生活，像冰箱、彩电、空调、计算机、机器人、数码相机、智能手机、汽车、无人驾驶汽车(driverless car)、高铁等等，在这些或其它你熟悉的科技产品中，哪一种对我们的生活产生了巨大影响，请以什么 ________ has influenced (影响) our life a lot为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
（1）科学技术的重要性；
（2）你认为什么科技影响了我们的生活，它是如何影响我们的生活的；
（3）对此你有什么感悟。
要求：
（1）把题目补充完整；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
（3）书写规范，100 词左右。
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16．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友James现在正在学习汉语，他来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据表格提示用英语写一封回信，为他提供一些学习建议。
Skills Ways to learn Chinese Examples or reasons
Listening &Speaking * watch Chinese movies; * have conversations with friends in Chinese; * watch movies like Mu Lan that…; * improve speaking skills;
Reading &Writing * read classic (经典) books; * keep diaries in Chinese; * The more you read, … * Practice makes perfect.
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
（3）词数：80-100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
I am so glad to hear from you.
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Why don’t you have a try and write to me in Chinese next time
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
17．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
1. 给出你的建议；
2. 谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
3. 结合自身经历，介绍至少两种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分。
Dear Tracy,
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Yours,
Li Hua.
18．2023年3月23日是第六十三个世界气象日，主题为“天气气候水，代代向未来”。习近平总书记强调：“地球是我们的共同家园。我们要秉持人类命运共同体理念，携手应对气候环境领域挑战，守护好这颗蓝色星球。”作为中学生，请你结合以下的思维导图用英语写一篇关于如何保护环境的文章。
注意：
（1）行文连贯，内容完整；
（2）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现任何有关姓名、校名和地名的真实信息。
……
How to Protect the Environment
If we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us. So it’s our duty to protect our environment. As a student,
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19．假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目征集稿件，请你以“One of my travel experiences”为题写一篇短文。
要点如下：
(1)旅游方式、时间和地点；
(2)旅游经历；
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
One of my travel experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone.
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20．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和 Chat GPT4的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
提示：
advantages disadvantages
1. chat with people 1. make people lazy in mind
2. help solve people’s problems 2. reduce people’s job opportunities
3. design pictures in a short time
要求：
1. 根据提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称：
3. 80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in our city. The purpose of it is to improve the environment. After the renovation, people’s lives have changed a lot. We now live in beautiful buildings with better facilities. There are some parks and a big shopping store. However, there are also some problems. During the construction, there’s lots of noise and rubbish everywhere. I think the workers should try to reduce the noise and clean up the rubbish in time. In this way, we can enjoy a better living environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括改造工程的目的、对人们生活带来的变化、存在的问题以及建议。考生在写作时应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，以突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头直接点明主题，即要向Jack介绍本市的老小区出新改造工程；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从改造工程的目的、对人们生活带来的变化、存在的问题以及建议等几个方面进行了详细阐述；
第三步，书写结语。结尾表达了希望改造工程能够带来更好的生活环境的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①renovation翻新，改造
②purpose目的
③facility设施
④however然而
⑤construction建设，施工
⑥in this way这样
[高分句型]
①The purpose of it is to improve the environment.（“The purpose of...is to...”的句型）
②During the construction, there’s lots of noise and rubbish everywhere.（时间状语）
2．
It seems that you enjoy your English class a lot. We seldom have group work in our English classes. But I think it is very interesting.
For me, I usually listen to English songs, watch English movies and read English books. Besides, I sometimes talk about different topics in English on the Internet with my net friends. They help me a lot with learning how to communicate with others. These ways can not only improve my listening and speaking skills but also develop my reading ability.
Hope to see more different and great opinions from other guys.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作时，考生应确保不遗漏任何关键信息，并适当添加细节以突出写作重点。同时，要注意标点符号、大小写以及语法错误等问题，确保上下文之间的逻辑关系清晰，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回复Tina帖子中的问题以及你对英语小组学习的看法；
第二步，具体阐述个人学习英语所采取的方式；
第三步，表达这些学习方式带来的效果，并期待看到更多不同的见解。
[亮点词汇]
① enjoy sth a lot 非常喜欢某物
② communicate with others 与他人交流
③ not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
These ways can not only improve my listening and speaking skills but also develop my reading ability.（not only...but also...结构的使用）
3．例文：
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today. It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer. The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish. During the fight, he faces not only the fish but also the power of nature.
This book explores human nature and beliefs. I love it because it is meaningful and teaches us never to give up. My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.” It always inspires me when I face difficulties. I think everyone should read this wonderful book!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于《老人与海》的介绍要点，包括作者、主角、故事内容、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想分享我最喜欢的一本书”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作者、主角、故事情节、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因”几个方面重点介绍《老人与海》这本书的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。总结对这本书的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③struggle to do sth.努力做某事
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer.（过去分词短语written by...作后置定语）
②The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish.（who引导的定语从句）
4．例文
Here is the weather report in some cities in China today.
In Beijing, it’s a bit warm in the morning, but it will get cold in the afternoon. You’d better take some warm clothes. Shanghai is windy during the day and it will rain at night. Remember to take an umbrella when you go out. In Harbin, it will snow all day long and it’s very cold. Wearing gloves is a good choice. People there should put on thick clothes to keep warm.
No matter where you are, be sure to pay attention to the weather and dress properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作目的，引入主题；
第二步：具体介绍北京、上海、哈尔滨三地当天的天气情况；
第三步：提醒大家穿合适的衣服。
[亮点词汇]
①had better do sth最好做某事
②remember to do sth记得做某事
③put on穿上
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Remember to take an umbrella when you go out.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
②No matter where you are, be sure to pay attention to the weather and dress properly.（“no matter +疑问词”引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country.
He was born on 29th August, 1989, in Zhongshan, Guangdong. When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day. In 2009, he joined the national team. And after that, he won lots of competitions. He won a gold medal in the men’s 100-metre race at the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games. At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.
I think he is a sports hero. Although he is over 30, he still continues running. I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当增加细节，行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍苏炳添的基本信息；
第二步，具体阐述苏炳添的参赛经历及所获奖项；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①practice doing sth.练习做某事
②so... that如此……以致于
③learn from向……学习
④so that以便于
[高分句型]
①When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.（so... that引导的结果状语从句）
③Although he is over 30, he still continues running.（although引导的让步状语从句）
④I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
6．例文
Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment. I think everyone should do something for the environment. We should turn off lights before leaving to save electricity. And we can use both sides of paper to save paper. What’s more, we can recycle old books and give them to the children in need. Everyone should take actions to live a green life, You can also start an Environmental Club at your school. It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对绿色生活的看法”；“在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法”；以及“对如何践行绿色生活的建议”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明绿色生活是很重要的。
第二步，介绍日常生活中如何具体践行绿色生活的。
第三步，给出绿色生活的建议并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②take action采取行动
③community社区
[高分句型]
①Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community.（it is+名词+to do的句型）
7．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking
I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. At the same time, I like listening to English songs and watching English movies. Now I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，一封书信。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：学习方法不唯一，言之有理即可，注意前后逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学习方法。
第二步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on doing坚持做某事
②At the same time同时
③communicate with foreigners和外国人交流
[高分句型]
①I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. (动词不定式表目的)
②I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. (宾语从句)
8．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart.
Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was five. She trained hard, so she became a great player later. She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. She began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and then attended university abroad. Seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University.
I recommend her because I think she is a good player as well as a good student. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best and she is a true hero. I take great pride in her.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己心目中的英雄，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己心目中的英雄；
第三步，介绍推荐她的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①stop doing sth.停止做某事
②as well as和
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9．例文
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies. I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.
First of all, you should make study plans and make good use of your time. Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today. Second, you should get ready for new lessons before class and listen to teachers carefully in class. Remember, it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class. Last but not least, try to think for yourself when you face a problem. If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，关于学习给张磊一些建议，也是材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。听说你学习有困难，我想给你一些学习方面好的建议，引出重点介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从制定学习计划并充分利用你的时间、上课前预习，课堂上认真听讲、向老师或家长寻求帮助等方面来介绍具体学习方法。
第三步，书写总结。表达希望，希望建议对他有用。
[亮点词汇]
First of all…Second...Last but not least…首先……第二，……最后但同样重要的是……
give sb. some suggestions给某人一些建议
make good use of充分利用
ask … for help向……寻求帮助
Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today 今天该做的事千万不要拖到明天
[高分句型]
I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.（动词不定式作宾语和目的状语）
it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class.（it句型和宾语从句）
try to think for yourself when you face a problem.（时间状语从句）
If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.（条件状语从句）
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you./Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today（宾语从句）
10．例文
A Piano Competition Brought Me Happiness
There are many beautiful things in my life. But I still remembered a piano competition two years ago. The competition did bring me happiness.
When I was young, I was a little shy and talked little. I was interested in playing the piano, so my parents bought an expensive piano for me. I practiced the piano for two hours every day. But I was afraid to play the piano in public. I often felt nervous.
Two years ago, my parents encouraged me to take part in a piano competition. The competition was held in the City Music Hall on October 15. On that day I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was afraid that I would make mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me—always believe in yourself; you are the best. His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn to play, I walked to the piano with confidence and performed well. You wouldn’t believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I learned I won the first prize, I hugged my parents in excitement.
The experience taught me that it’s very important to have confidence in yourself. The piano competition did make a big difference to me. I have changed a lot since then. I have been outgoing, confident and happy because of the piano competition.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括什么给你带来了快乐以及你的收获，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍什么给你带来了快乐，引出话题；
第二步，介绍事情的经过；
第三步，表达自己的收获以及现在的变化。
［亮点词汇］
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事
③ believe in oneself 相信自己
［高分句型］
① When I was young, I was a little shy and talked little. (when引导时间状语从句)
② The experience taught me that it’s very important to have confidence in yourself. (宾语从句)
11．范文：
Creativity is the key to human progress. Every major scientific discovery began with someone imagining the world in a creative way. With the development of society, it gets more and more important.
I am a big fan of science. Months ago, I wanted to make a model plane that could fly. At first, I thought it was easy. But during the process, I ran into many difficulties. Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading. Finally, after two weeks’ hard work, my model plane could fly for two minutes.
Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase your knowledge first. Or you can be hardly successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍创造力的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己创造过什么以及从那次经历中学到了什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of...随着……的发展
②run into many difficulties遇到了许多困难
③search online在线搜索
④increase one’s knowledge增加知识
[高分句型]
①Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading.（并列句）
②Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase your knowledge first.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文：
That Day, I Solved a Trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为投稿作文；
② 时态：时态叙述过去用“一般过去时”，得到的教训/学会的经验部分用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你遇到了什么麻烦；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括你是怎么解决这个麻烦的；
第三步，描述你从这次经历中得到的教训/学会的经验。
[亮点词汇]
① be occupied with忙于
② invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③ be faced with面对
④ hate doing讨厌做某事
⑤ mind washing介意做某事
[高分句型]
① Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake.（since引导的原因状语从句）
② However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.（so...that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
③ Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.（when引导的时间状语从句）
④ When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them.（when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的主语从句）
⑤ In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant.（when引导的定语从句）
⑥ And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
13．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’d like to share some advice on improving our online studies with you. First, we should make a study plan, and preview the new lesson before class. At the same time, not only do we need to go to bed early and get up early, but also we need to exercise. In class, we should listen carefully, take notes, and actively participate in the class. Finally, after class, we should finish our homework carefully and review what we have learned in time. We can also talk with our parents about our study.
I think online courses are very important and we should try our best to learn them well. I hope the advice is helpful.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达和同学们分享一些网课学习建议；
第二步，根据提示内容从课前、课上及课后三个方面给出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②participate in参与
③try one’s best to do sth尽最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①At the same time, not only do we need to go to bed early and get up early, but also we need to exercise. (not only ... but also连接的并列句)
②we should finish our homework carefully and review what we have learned in time. (what引导的宾语从句)
14．例文：
Dear readers,
As this year’s Excellent Student, it is my honour to share my experiences with you. Firstly, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. I review carefully after class. If I encounter problems that I don’t understand, I will seek help from teachers or classmates in a timely manner. Secondly, in my free time, I enjoy listening to music and watching movies to relax myself. Of course, I also enjoy playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. So I have a good relationship with others. I am also willing to help others, and I often help my classmates with their studies. No matter what difficulties they encounter, I will do my best to help them.
I hope my experiences are of help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍如何提高学习成绩；
第二步，介绍空余时间进行的活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①it is one’s honour to do sth 做某事是某人的荣幸
②take notes 记笔记
③seek help from sb 向某人需求帮助
④in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
⑤be willing to do 乐意做某事
⑥do one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①If I encounter problems that I don’t understand, I will seek help from teachers or classmates in a timely manner. (If引导条件状语从句)
②No matter what difficulties they encounter, I will do my best to help them. (no matter what引导让步状语从句)
15．例文
The smart phone has influenced our life a lot
Technology is important for the development of society. Some of them play an important role in our life and have greatly changed the world.
In my eyes, the smart phone has influenced us a lot. In our daily life, we use smart phones almost everywhere. Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us. We use smart phones to go shopping, order meals, watch movies and listen to music and so on. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. What’s more, during covid-19, we students have online courses with the smart phone. In one word, we almost can’t live without smart phones.
Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly. As students, we can’t play games or chat with others too long on it. It’s bad for our study and health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中给出的三个要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科学技术的重要性”来引出下文中对三个要点的描述；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“科技如何影响我们的生活”入手，重点介绍科技对我们生活的影响；
③第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
②even though 即使
③and so on 等等，诸如此类
④what’s more 此外
⑤in one word 总之
[高分句型]
①Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
②Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly.（though引导的让步状语从句）
16．例文
Dear James,
I am so glad to hear from you. Here is some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Firstly, I suggest that you can watch some Chinese movies like Mu Lan that have interesting stories. Listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning. More importantly, try to have conversations with your friends as much as possible to improve your speaking skills. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Besides, it’s also helpful for you to read classic Chinese books. Then you can learn how words are used. The more you read, the faster you will be. Finally, I think keeping a diary in Chinese is surely a good way to improve your writing. As you know, practice makes perfect.
It is normal to have difficulties in learning Chinese. As long as you you keep trying, you will be a successful Chinese learner.
Why don’t you have a try and write to me in Chinese next time
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学习汉语的建议；
第三步，鼓励对方。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②have conversations with与……交谈
③a good way to do sth做某事的好方法
[高分句型]
①Here is some advice on how to learn Chinese well.（倒装句）
②Firstly, I suggest that you can watch some Chinese movies like Mu Lan that have interesting stories.（宾语从句）
③The more you read, the faster you will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级）
17．例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to learn about Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中介绍至少两种学习汉语的方法，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，给出自己的建议：选择选修汉语；
第二步，介绍学习汉语的重要性；
第三步，结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到某人消息
②have an interest in sth.对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④share with sb.与某人分享
⑤in one’s opinion在某人看来
⑥what’s more除此之外还
⑦be supposed to do应该做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. (There be句型)
②Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new. (祈使句)
18．例文
How to Protect the Environment
If we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us. So it’s our duty to protect our environment. As a student, we should do our best to protect the environment. What should we do to protect the environment
First, we should put different rubbish into different dustbins. Second, we’d better ride bikes instead of driving cars. Third, every spring, we should plant many trees. Fourth, when we go out, we must remember to turn off the lights.
I think if you follow my suggestions, our environment will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出作为学生应该尽力保护环境；
第二步，具体介绍保护环境的一些建议；
第三步，最后总结并期望环境越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
① do our best to do尽我们最大的努力去做
② put...into...把……放入……里
③ turn off关闭
[高分句型]
① If we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② I think if you follow my suggestions, our environment will become better and better.（宾语从句）
19．例文
One of my travel experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We travelled there by plane.
After getting off the plane, we took a taxi to the hotel. During the following days, we visited many places of interest. The Great Wall made a deep impression on me. It is an ancient wall with a long history. We walked along the Great Wall and enjoyed the view. Though I was tired, I was happy.
I think travelling is relaxing and educational. I can not only enjoy myself, but learn a lot as well. It makes me realize China is really great.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时及一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己难忘的经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出旅游方式、时间和地点；
第二步，描述自己的经历；
第三步，讲述这次经历对自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②made a deep impression on留下深刻印象
③educational有教育意义的
[高分句型]
①Though I was tired, I was happy.（though引导的让步状语从句）
②I can not only enjoy myself, but learn a lot as well.（not only…but句型）
20．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.
Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, it can help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time.
However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，阐述对人工智能技术优劣势的看法；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述对人工智能技术的总体看法；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优势和劣势；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①science and technology 科学技术
②chat with 和……聊天
③in a short time 在短时间内
④depend on 依靠，依赖
[高分句型]
①With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.（“with＋ 名词短语”作状语；“比较级 and 比较级”表达“越来越……”）
②If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind.（if引导条件状语从句）
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