人教新目标九年级英语Unit14主题写作：毕业演讲写作指南(基础版)(实用语言素材+满分范文+名师点评)

人教新目标九年级英语Unit14主题写作：毕业演讲
写作指南（基础版）
（实用语言素材+满分范文+名师点评）
Part 1.写作要求
Part2.主题相关的高级短语或表达
【短语】
look back at the past three years 回顾过去三年
overcome difficulties/fear 克服困难/恐惧
precious memories 珍贵的回忆
always stand by my side总是站在我身边
light up the path of life 点亮人生之路
develop teamwork spirit 培养团队精神
learn from mistakes 从错误中吸取教训
set out on new journey 踏上新的征程
the beginning of a new life 新生活的开始
lead to a brighter future引领更明亮的未来
【句子】
1.My junior high school life is busy but wonderful.
我的初中生活忙碌却精彩。
2.Every moment in the junior high school has become a precious memory in my life.
初中的每一刻都成了我生命里珍贵的回忆。
3.We understand the importance of teamwork and build a strong friendship with each other.
我们明白了团队合作的重要性，也彼此建立了深厚的友谊。
4.My teachers always encourage us to overcome difficulties and never give up.
我的老师们总是鼓励我们克服困难、永不放弃。
5.My teachers are always patient with us and spare no effort to help us.
我的老师们对我们总是很有耐心，还不遗余力地帮助我们。
6.They always give me a hand when I am in trouble.
当我遇到困难时，他们总会帮我一把。
7.We are always full of energy and thirsty for knowledge.
我们总是充满活力，对知识求知若渴。
8.My parents are the strongest supporters in my life,whose endless love makes me full of energy.
我的父母是我生命中最坚实的后盾，他们无尽的爱让我充满活力。
9.It's of great importance for us to express our thanks in such an important ceremony.
在这样一个重要的典礼上，表达我们的谢意对我们来说意义重大。
Part3.高分范文
Dear teachers, parents and students, it’s my great honor to give a speech in the graduation ceremony. Looking back at the past three years, I feel a deep sense of achievement. I have not only learned knowledge from books, but also developed the ability to solve problems by myself.
I would like to express my sincere gratitude to those who have supported me along the way. First of all, I am grateful to my teachers who have been responsible for us and help us overcome difficulties patiently. Besides, with the support of my parents, I have been able to study here without worrying about my daily life. It is their endless love that has made it possible for me to focus on my schoolwork. What’s far more important is that our school provides such a good environment for us to grow up, helping me become an all-round person.
All in all, I will always cherish these school memories no matter where I go. I sincerely wish everyone a brighter future.
Part4名师点评
这篇毕业演讲稿是一篇契合 “基础版写作指南” 的优质范文，在结构逻辑、内容呈现、语言运用三方面均贴合初中写作要求，具体亮点如下：
1. 结构逻辑：清晰完整，贴合演讲场景
严格呼应毕业演讲的核心框架：
开场：以 “it’s my great honor to give a speech” 快速切入，符合典礼演讲的正式开场礼仪；
收获：用 “Looking back at the past three years” 衔接，点明初中三年的双重收获（书本知识 + 独立解决问题的能力），紧扣 “成长” 主题；
感谢：通过 “First of all（老师）→ Besides（父母）→ What’s far more important is that（学校）” 的分层衔接词，清晰覆盖核心感谢对象，逻辑层次分明；
收尾：以 “cherish memories”+“wish a brighter future” 收束，既呼应开头的 “珍贵回忆”，又传递出毕业的正向期待，结构闭环完整。
2. 内容呈现：素材活用，真实贴合初中成长
内容紧扣 “基础版素材” 且落地具体：
收获部分：不仅提到 “learned knowledge from books”，还补充了 “developed the ability to solve problems by myself”“become an all-round person”，体现了初中阶段 “知识 + 能力 + 全面成长” 的真实收获；
感谢部分：每个对象都搭配了具体支撑（老师 “help us overcome difficulties patiently”、父母 “support my daily life”、学校 “provide a good environment”），避免了 “空泛感谢”，让内容更真实可感。
3. 语言运用：精准调用基础素材，句式丰富自然
灵活活用基础版短语与表达：
直接调用了指南中的核心短语（如 “look back at the past three years”“overcome difficulties”），契合 “基础版” 素材的应用要求；
句式有变化：既有简单句清晰表意，也用到了强调句 “It is their endless love that...” 增强情感力度，衔接词（“First of all, Besides”）让段落过渡自然，语言正式且符合演讲的口语化节奏（不生硬）。
4. 情感共鸣：贴合毕业心境，真挚不刻意
结尾 “cherish these school memories no matter where I go”“wish everyone a brighter future” 精准捕捉了毕业生的不舍与憧憬，情感真挚，能贴合典礼现场的氛围，易引发听众共鸣。