【单元考点培优】Unit 8 Detective stories 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版
Unit 8 Detective stories
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．在你的生活中，一定会有榜样影响着你。他们或许是科学家、抗疫英雄，或许是你身边的亲人、老师、朋友……某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model（我的榜样）”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的榜样是谁，描述你的榜样所做的哪件或哪些事影响了你，以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意:
1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3）请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______.
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2．时光飞逝，初中生活已接近尾声。回顾初中生涯，你一定经历了成长的烦恼，也成就了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下四方格图，以“Growing Pains and Gains”为题写篇短文投稿。
What problem did you have Growing Pains and Gains Who/What either encouraged or helped you （friends/teachers/ heroes/music/films/books…）
How did you solve it What have you learned from it
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据四方格图自拟, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右；
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息：
4. 短文必须写指定的位置上。
Growing Pains and Gains
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3．根据中文提示，写一篇70词左右的短文：
昨天当王先生下班回家的时候，他在他家门外发现了一条项链，他想可能有人掉了项链。 他准备第二天把项链拿到警察局去，他想警察可能能够找到项链的主人。第二天当他到警察局的时候，他吃惊地看见了失主。失主非常感激他。
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4．请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的小故事。
提示：1.我妈妈一直和我们隔壁的一个邻居相处得不好。妈妈说他看起来很不友好。
2.一天，妈妈回到家，发现她昨天刚买的手表不见了。我们决定立刻报警。
3. 突然有人敲门，原来是我们的新邻居。他手里拿着手表，说昨天他在电梯里发现的，想问问是不是妈妈的。
4. 妈妈很感激他，最后他们成了好朋友。
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5．电影如同艺术家创造的魔法，为我们的生活增添色彩。有的电影让人轻松快乐，有的电影给人内心触动，有的电影带领我们走过大千世界。本次的写作任务是以“Movies”为主题，写一篇英语小短文。请你从以下两个方面任选其一，根据写作要求，简单介绍看电影的益处，或者一部电影激励你的经历，认真完成写作任务。
选择1:
How do movies influence our lives (make people happy, bring something good...)
What are the benefits of watching movies (relax ourselves, improve English...) What is your wish for the future (...)
选择2:
How do movies influence our lives (make people happy, bring something good...)
How did a movie change you (make me believe in myself, make me brave...)
How do you feel about the movie (...)
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给选择1或选择2中的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang；
4. 词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Movies are like magic created by artists to make our lives colorful.
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6．假如你是吴磊，你的学校为丰富学生校园生活，推出了校园电影放映活动，具体方案如下。 现学校向全校征询电影选片及方案改进意见，请根据方案内容，向教导处王老师写一封邮件，需包含以下要点：
1. 推荐一部电影，并说明理由；
2. 对方案提出一点改进建议，并解释原因。
校园电影放映活动方案
电影 □ Ne Zha 2 (哪吒之魔童闹海) 144 mins □ The Battle at Lake Changjin (长津湖) 176 mins □ Kung Fu Panda (功夫熊猫) 92 mins □ (Your choice)
时间 3:30 Monday afternoon
地点 School gym
观众 Ninth graders
注意：
● 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
● 照抄试卷中内容不得分。
● 邮件格式不计入总词数。
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7．齐齐哈尔市第二十九中学英语社团开展以“我心中的好电影”为主题的电影推介活动，假如你是社团成员，请围绕以下问题，写一篇影评：
1. What’s the name of the movie
2. What kind of movie is it
3. What’s the movie about
4. What do you think of the movie and the actors
5. What can you learn from the movie
要求：
1. 影评内容需根据以上五个问题进行展开，可适当发挥；
2. 书写工整，内容要点完整，语句通顺、意思连贯；
3. 字数：80-100词。
Word Bank: thrilling 惊险刺激的、touching 感人的、brutal 残酷的、tragic 悲惨的、humorous 幽默诙谐的、moving 动人的、gripping 扣人心弦的、 stunning sound音效震撼、 spectacular special effects特效华丽、historical costume drama 古装剧
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8．假如你是某英语写作俱乐部的成员李华，本周任务是请根据下图提示以“My Favorite Free Time Activity”为题写一篇短文。
要求：不少于80词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Free Time Activity
Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity
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9．假如你是校英语俱乐部的成员之一，上周末你和朋友观看了电影《狮子王》。请你根据以下要点提示，将这部电影推荐给俱乐部其他成员。
Director: Jon Favreau
Reviews:
★Compared with the cartoon with the same name, it was not that satisfying.
★The cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” for the cartoon. The Lion King (1994) was once their childhood dream.
要求：
1.包含要点提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右；
3.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息。
Last weekend, I watched the movie The Lion King with friends. Now I’d like to recommend it to you.
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10．假如你是2班班长李华，你班准备观看电影《1921》。外教Tom对中国历史感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1．邀请理由；
2．观影时间和地点；
3．交流观后感；
4．请回复。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假如你是小明，你的美国笔友Helen给你发来邮件，询问你喜欢的电影。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你喜欢的一部中国电影或者外国电影，并简要介绍这部电影的内容以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：
（1）favorite, about, character, interesting, meaningful
提示问题：
（2）What is your favorite movie
（3）What is the movie about
（4）Why is it your favorite
要求：（1）短文中需包括提示问题的所有信息，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）书写工整，字迹清晰，词数80左右。
Dear Helen,
How is it going I’m glad to hear from you.
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12．假如你是红星中学八年级一班学生李华，你的英国笔友Chris写信询问你的电影爱好。请你用英语给Chris回信，谈谈你最喜欢的一部电影，电影的主要内容以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：cartoon, educational, encourage, change, dream
提示问题：●What is your favorite movie
●What is the movie mainly about
●Why do you like it most
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．随着中国电影市场的发展，越来越多的人愿意走进电影院观看自己喜欢的电影。请根据以下提示向大家介绍你最喜欢的电影类型。
提示：
1. How often do you go to the movies
2. What kind of movie do you like best
3. Why do you like that kind of movie
4. Which movie is the best one that you have ever watched
要求：
1. 文中不要出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite kind of movie with you.
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14．随着中国电影市场的发展，越来越多的人愿意走进电影院观看自己喜欢的电影。请你根据以下写作要点向大家介绍你最喜欢的电影类型。
写作要点：
1. How often do you go to the movies
2. What kind of movies do you like best
3. Why do you like that kind of movies
4. Which movie is the best one you have ever watched
要求：
1. 文中不要出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数80~120，开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you.
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15．2025年贺岁电影《哪吒2》热播，哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one! )”极大鼓舞了很多人。假如你是李雷，观看完这部影片后，感触颇深，立志好好学习，健康生活，完善自我，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的理想和打算。
What do you think of the movie Ne Zha 2
What can you learn from it
What’s your dream in the future
How are you going to do that
要求：
1. 词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范；
2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me.
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16．2025年初，贺岁片《哪吒2》热播。哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one.)”极大地鼓舞了许多人。假如你是大明，你的笔友Tom给你写了一封关于哪吒的email，请阅读这封email，并根据相关信息给他回信。
Dear Daming, The movie Nezha 2 is so popular around the world that I can’t even get a ticket for it. I really want to know about Nezha: what’s Nezha like Why does everyone love Nezha What have you learned from Nezha I’m looking forward to your email! Yours, Tom
提示词：two buns (两个发髻), bracelets (手镯), Wind Fire Wheels (风火轮), the Universe Ring (乾坤圈), Red Armillary Sash (混天绫), strong-willed (意志力强), naughty (淘气的), evil (邪恶), never give up (永不放弃), find a way out (找到出路)
注意：
1. 回信需包含相关要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80-100。
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17．古代花木兰替父从军的故事感动了很多人。假如你是李华，最近观看了根据这个故事改编的动作片《花木兰》。请根据以下提示，用英语在网上发帖子，向国外网友推荐这部电影。
1.内容简介；
2.推荐的原因：1）演员们表演出色；2）花木兰爱国爱家、坚强勇敢的精神值得学习；
3.建议大家周末观看这部影片。
要求：
1.不少于80词；包含所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：brave勇敢
Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you.
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18．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Steve喜欢中国的神话故事，也是一个卡通迷，请你根据以下信息要点，写一封英语邮件向他推荐其中一部动画电影。
Film Nezha Conquers The Dragon King (哪吒闹海) 1979 Lotus Lantern (宝莲灯) 1999
Hero Nezha Chen Xiang
Story born with great power fight against dragons protect his village find his mother under Mount Hua fight against his uncle save his mother
Lesson trust myself … depend on myself …
注意：1. 邮件需包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
3. 词数80左右；邮件的开头和结尾已提供，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
19．电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》上映以后，一举打破多项影史记录，在国外也非常火爆。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Cindy想了解中国动漫，请你根据以下信息给她写一封邮件，介绍哪吒、木兰或其他一个卡通形象及理由。
Name: Ne Zha Appearance: big eyes, round face, magical wheels (风火轮) Reasons: naughty (淘气的), fight against bad people, protect... Name: Mulan Appearance: tall, long face, dress up... Reasons: smart, fight in the army, protect...
注意：（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100词左右，邮件中已给的句子不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假如你是张明，你们学校英语社正在举办关于影视作品的征文比赛。请你以“My Favorite Movie”为题写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影，包括电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及你喜欢它的原因，以下电影海报仅供参考：
要求：
1. 语句通顺，行文连贯，书写工整：
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息：
3. 100词左右，可适当发挥。
My Favorite Movie
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is my friend Tom.
He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I don’t do well in studying, so he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Tom’s help, I make great progress and I thank him very much.
I think I am lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，注意谓语动词的变化，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你的榜样是谁；
第二步，描述你的榜样所做的哪件或哪些事影响了你；
第三步，表达你从他/她身上学到了什么。
［亮点词汇］
① do well in 擅长
② in order to 为了，以便
③ catch up with 赶上
④ with one’s help 在某人的帮助下
［高分句型］
① At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
② And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.（宾语从句）
2．例文
Growing Pains and Gains
How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I had not only pains but also gains.
I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine. I always hated running, but I had no choice because of the sports exam. Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. I just wanted to give up. At that moment, the story about Spud Webb encouraged me. Through hard work, Spud Webb became the shortest player in the NBA. His story gave me courage to solve all kind of problems.
Now, I’m not afraid of 800-meter running any more. I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中提到的四个方面的要点，注意不要遗漏，可以适当补充；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍成长之路，既有痛苦，也有收获；
第二步，叙述过去的经历：发生了什么问题、受到谁的鼓励、如何解决问题、从中获得了什么；
第三步，表达现在的状况以及感受。
［亮点词汇］
① look back 回顾过去
② not only…but also… 不但……而且……
③ give up 放弃
④ come to an end 结束
［高分句型］
① Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam.（Although引导让步状语从句）
② I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily.（宾语从句、if引导条件状语从句）
3．例文
Yesterday when Mr Wang came home from work, he found a necklace outside his door. He thought maybe someone dropped the necklace. He planned to take it to the police station the next day. He thought the police would be able to find the owner. The next day when he went to the police station, he was surprised to see the owner. The owner was very grateful to him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：中文提示已给出，考生结合所学知识，写一篇作文，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先确定时间，地点，人物，以及发生的事情；
第二步，具体阐述所给的中文提示，按照时间顺序行文。
[亮点词汇]
①came home from work下班回家
②the next day第二天
③be able to能够
④be surprised to对……感到吃惊
[高分句型]
①Yesterday when Mr Wang came home from work, he found a necklace outside his door.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He thought maybe someone dropped the necklace（省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文
My mother didn’t get on well with my neighbour who lived next door. My mother said he seemed to be strange.
One day, when my mother came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new watch which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She wondered where she had been. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her watch. We planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone was knocking at the door. It was the young man, our new neighbour. I was shocked that my mother’s watch was in his hand. He told us that he found it in the lift. He wondered whether it belonged to my mother.
It is the watch that my mother lost. My mother was very thankful. At last, they became best friends.
【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据要点提示写一则语意连贯的100词左右的小故事。题目中提示的内容需要全部包括在内。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般过去时。要组织正确的语言，将句意完整地表达出来。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，尽量使用间接引语和定语从句等复合句。要特别注意间接引语的人称和时态以及定语从句的引导词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。
5．
例文
Movies are like magic created by artists to make our lives colorful.
When I watched Forrest Gump, it deeply inspired me. The main character, Forrest, faced many difficulties but never gave up. His story made me believe that courage can help us overcome any challenge. Because of this movie, I started to face my own problems bravely. For example, when I failed an exam, I remembered Forrest running through difficulties and tried harder.
Now, I feel movies not only bring joy but also teach us important life lessons.
I hope more people can find such powerful stories to light up their hearts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，引出话题；
第二步：详细描述电影对生活的影响以及对自己的改变和对电影的想法；
第三步：书写结尾，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①never gave up从不放弃
②Because of因为
③bring joy带来愉悦
④light up their hearts照亮他们的内心
[高分句型]
①His story made me believe that courage can help us overcome any challenge.（宾语从句）
②For example, when I failed an exam, I remembered Forrest running through difficulties and tried harder.（时间状语从句）
6．例文
Dear School Authority,
I’m writing to recommend Ne Zha 2. This movie is really great. The pictures in it are very beautiful and interesting. The story is exciting, too. It tells us how Ne Zha grows up and fights against his bad luck. We can learn a lot from him, like being brave and never giving up.
As for the improvement of the plan, I suggest changing the time. 3:30 on Monday afternoon is early as some students may still have after-class activities. Maybe we can choose a time on weekends so that more students can enjoy the film without rush.
Hope my suggestions can be considered.
Best regards,
Wu Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头表明身份，直接推荐电影；
第二步：说明推荐理由；
第三步：提出改进建议，解释原因。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②interesting有趣的
③suggestions建议
[高分句型]
①It tells us how Ne Zha grows up and fights against his bad luck. (宾语从句)
②Maybe we can choose a time on weekends so that more students can enjoy the film without rush. (so that引导目的状语从句)
7．
例文
The movie I want to share is “Forrest Gump”. It’s a touching comedy-drama that tells a wonderful story.
Forrest Gump, a man with low IQ, experiences an amazing life. He becomes a college football star, a war hero and even a successful businessman. I find the movie really moving. Tom Hanks, the actor, plays so well that Forrest becomes an unforgettable character.
From it, I learn to be kind and persistent. We should face all difficulties bravely and always keep moving forward, just like Forrest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏对电影相关内容的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头点明要分享的电影；
第二步：具体介绍电影主角阿甘的经历以及演员的出色表演；
第三步：总结全文，阐述从电影中学到的道理。
[亮点词汇]
①college football star大学橄榄球明星
②war hero战争英雄
③successful businessman成功商人
④unforgettable character令人难忘的角色
[高分句型]
①Tom Hanks, the actor, plays so well that Forrest becomes an unforgettable character. (so...that...引导结果状语从句)
②We should face all difficulties bravely and always keep moving forward, just like Forrest. (and连接两个并列的谓语动词)
8．例文：
My Favorite Free Time Activity
Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity It’s watching movies! I usually go to the cinema once or twice a week. My favorite cinema is Sunshine Cinema because it has the best sound, the biggest screen, and the most comfortable seats. Among all the movie characters, I like Pleasant Goat best. He is very clever and always brave enough to face dangers. His stories make me laugh and teach me how to be brave. Watching movies is a great way for me to relax and enjoy myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，介绍自己最喜欢的业余活动；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的活动、频率、去的电影院及原因、最喜欢的电影角色及原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity ”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“频率、去哪个电影院及原因、最喜欢哪个电影角色及原因”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“看电影是放松和享受的好方式”的总结。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite 最喜欢的
②once or twice 一两次
③among 在……之中
④brave enough to do 足够勇敢去做某事
⑤make sb do 使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①My favorite cinema is Sunshine Cinema because it has the best sound, the biggest screen, and the most comfortable seats.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②He is very clever and always brave enough to face dangers.（and连接的并列句）
9．范文：
Last weekend, I watched the movie The Lion King with friends. Now I’d like to recommend it to you.
The movie was directed by Jon Favreau. It tells the touching story of a young lion named Simba growing up and becoming king.
Some reviews say that compared with the 1994 cartoon, this film is not that satisfying. However, when we watched it, the cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” who loved the cartoon. The Lion King was once their childhood dream, and now it brings back sweet memories.
I think this movie is worth watching. It not only has beautiful scenes but also teaches us about responsibility.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，注意包含所有信息并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出推荐主题；
第二步，介绍电影基本信息；
第三步，描述影评和观影现象；
第四步，表达个人推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①directed by由……执导
②touching story感人的故事
③bring back唤回
④sweet memories甜蜜的回忆
⑤be worth watching值得观看
[高分句型]
①Some reviews say that compared with the 1994 cartoon, this film is not that satisfying. (宾语从句中含过去分词作状语)
②...the cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” who loved the cartoon. (who引导定语从句)
10．例文
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to see the film “1921”, which is about Chinese history. The film will be shown at Sunshine Cinema this Saturday.
For one thing, the beautiful language in this movie may contribute to your study of Chinese. For another thing, the cultural elements in the scene will help you know more about Chinese history.
Would you like to see this movie Afterwards, we’d love to hear your thoughts and share our reflections. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括邀请对方看电影、电影的内容和上映时间、看电影的好处以及询问对方意见等，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方并表明写信目的，即邀请对方看电影；
第二步，具体介绍电影的内容和上映时间，以及看电影的好处；
第三步，询问对方是否愿意观看，并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①contribute to有助于，对……做出贡献
②know more about了解更多关于……
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
I am writing to invite you to see the film “1921”, which is about Chinese history.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
11．例文
Dear Helen,
How is it going I’m glad to hear from you. My favorite movie is “My People, My Country”.
It is a Chinese movie made up of seven stories. Each story is about ordinary people and their connections with important historical moments in China. The characters are very real and touching.
I like it because it’s both interesting and meaningful. It makes me feel proud of my country. I think you will love it if you watch it.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕“喜欢的电影”展开，需介绍喜欢的一部电影，包括电影内容和喜欢的原因，需涵盖提示问题，运用提示词语，符合书信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并点明主题，说明自己最喜欢的电影名称；
第二步：介绍电影的内容，包括主题、主要角色等；
第三步：阐述喜欢这部电影的原因，总结对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① made up of由……组成
② ordinary普通的
③ historical moments历史时刻
[高分句型]
① I think you will love it if you watch it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12．例文
Dear Chris,
How is everything going My favorite movie is Zootopia, a fantastic cartoon. It’s mainly about a brave rabbit named Judy who becomes a police officer in a city full of animals. She works with a fox to solve a mystery and proves that anyone can make a change if they follow their dreams. I like it most because it’s very educational. The movie teaches me that we shouldn’t judge others by their looks. It also encourages me to never give up when facing difficulties. Judy’s story shows that hard work and kindness can help us achieve big things!
What about your favorite movie Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影；
第二步，介绍你喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②educational有教育意义的
③encourages me to鼓励我去
[高分句型]
①It’s mainly about a brave rabbit named Judy who becomes a police officer in a city full of animals.（定语从句）
②She works with a fox to solve a mystery and proves that anyone can make a change if they follow their dream.（宾语从句，条件状语从句）
13．例文
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite kind of movie with you. I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best. Here are three reasons why I like them so much.
Firstly, cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings.
Secondly, songs of cartoons are usually beautiful and easy to sing along with. My favorite song is Try Everything from my favorite cartoon Zootopia. And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever seen. It’s so funny and interesting.
Lastly, I can always learn something useful from cartoons. For example, I have learned from Zootopia that we should never give up when we meet difficulties.
What do you think of cartoons I think they are really worth watching. Have a try!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍自己最喜欢的电影类型；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需涵盖提示的4个问题，清晰阐述看电影的频率、最喜欢的电影类型、喜欢的原因及最佳影片，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主旨，引出观影频率和最喜欢的电影类型；
第二步，从三个方面阐述喜欢该电影类型的原因，介绍自最佳影片；
第三步，以问句互动，自然收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
②sing along with跟着唱
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Firstly, cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever seen. (宾语从句及定语从句)
③For example, I have learned from Zootopia that we should never give up when we meet difficulties. (when引导时间状语从句以及定语从句)
14．例文
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you. I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best. Here are three reasons why I like them so much.
Firstly, cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings.
Secondly, songs of cartoons are usually beautiful and easy to sing along with. My favorite song is Try Everything from my favorite cartoon Zootopia. And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. It’s so funny and interesting.
Lastly, I can always learn something useful from cartoons. For example, I have learned from Zootopia that we should never give up when we meet difficulties.
What do you think of cartoons I think they are really worth watching. Have a try!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是说明文。
②时态：以一般现在时为主。
③提示：文章涵盖写作要点里的观影频率、喜欢的电影类型、喜欢理由、最佳影片，内容完整，符合词数要求，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接给定开头，说明观影频率和最喜欢的电影类型，引出下文。
第二步，从三个方面阐述喜欢动画电影的原因。
第三步，以问句互动，表达对动画电影的认可并建议尝试，收尾自然。
[亮点词汇]
①twice a month一月两次
②funny dialogues有趣的对话
③worth watching值得观看
[高分句型]
①Here are three reasons why I like them so much. (“why”引导定语从句。)
②cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings. (“which”引导非限定性定语从句)
③And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. (“that”引导定语从句)
15．例文
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. I like it very much because in the movie when Ne Zha faces difficulties, he always tries his best. He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. From the movie, I can learn that we should try our best to face any difficulties.
As for me, I want to be a doctor in the future. When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to make three resolutions. Firstly, I’m going to study hard to get good grades so that I can go to a medical university. Secondly, I’m going to improve myself. For example, I will read more books on medicine in my free time to learn more about medicine. Finally, I’m going to play sports to keep healthy. It’s a good way to start an exercise program and eat less fast food.
I hope my dream can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由电影《哪吒 2》中的台词及哪吒面对困难的态度，引出应尽力面对挑战的感悟；
第二步，表明自己未来想成为医生，帮助病人的梦想；
第三步，列出实现医生梦想的三个计划——努力学习、提升医学知识、保持健康；
第四步，表达对梦想成真的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①come true 实现
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
[高分句型]
①He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. (even if引导的让步状语从句)
②When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people. (when引导的时间状语从句)
16．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re interested in Nezha.
Nezha has two buns, and he wears bracelets, Wind Fire Wheels, the Universe Ring, and Red Armillary Sash. He is naughty but strong-willed. People love Nezha because he never fears evil. No matter how hard the situation is, he tries to find a way out and never gives up. His spirit, which is embodied in the saying “If there is no path ahead, I will create one”, encourages us a lot.
From Nezha, I’ve learned that we should be brave to face difficulties and keep fighting.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：回复Tom的来信，回答他关于哪吒的问题，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很开心对方对哪吒感兴趣，引出下文；
第二步，介绍哪吒的外形和性格，阐述人们喜欢哪吒的原因，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第三步，分享自己从哪吒身上学到的东西，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第四步，表达期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in… 对……有兴趣
②no matter 不论
③be brave to do sth. 勇敢做某事
[高分句型]
①People love Nezha because he never fears evil.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②No matter how hard the situation is, he tries to find a way out and never gives up.（No matter how引导的让步状语从句）
17．例文
Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you.
Mulan is an exciting action movie. It comes from an old Chinese story. The movie is about a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army.
I think the actress plays Mulan’s role well. The other actors are also fantastic and do a good job in the movie. They bring the characters to life.
I like Mulan very much. Her love for her family and country is moving. As a brave girl, she never gives up when she is faced with difficulty.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主体使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍剧情；
第二步，给出自己的推荐原因；
第三步，总结建议。
[亮点词汇]
① dress up as 装扮成
② take one’s place 代替某人
③ bring…to life 生动呈现
④ be faced with 面对
[高分句型]
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan.（条件状语从句）
18．例文A
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you. It’s called Nezha Conquers The Dragon King 1979, and it has been popular for over forty-five years. The story is about a boy named Nezha, born with great power. He fights against bad dragons to protect the people in his village.
The movie is exciting and inspiring. Nezha has to face many problems, but he never gives up. The most important lesson from the film is to trust yourself, even when others don’t.
I think you’ll love it because of its beautiful pictures and touching story.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
例文B
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you. The film Lotus Lantern came out in 1999. The main character is a boy named Chen Xiang. His mother is taken away by his uncle under Mount Hua, so he starts a dangerous journey to save his mother.
Chen Xiang faces many difficulties, but he never depends on others. He learns to be brave and strong on his own. The movie teaches us to depend on ourselves when facing problems, which is very meaningful.
I believe you’ll enjoy this movie because of its touching story and beautiful music.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求选择要推荐的电影。
第二步，根据提示内容描述电影的英雄角色，故事情节及吸取的经验。
[亮点词汇]
①born with 与生俱来
②give up 放弃
③depends on 依赖
[高分句型]
①The story is about a boy named Nezha, born with great power.（动词过去分词作定语）
②The movie teaches us to depend on ourselves when facing problems, which is very meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
19．范文：
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Ne Zha.
Ne Zha is a cute boy with a round face and two big eyes. The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.
Ne Zha is sometimes naughty and makes his parents angry. I still like him because I think he is just like us. Another reason I like him is that he is really brave. He is always ready to fight against bad people and tries his best to protect his family and friends. I am often deeply moved by his spirits.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (105 words)
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Mulan.
Mulan is a beautiful girl who is tall and has a long face. Mulan takes her father’s place to fight in the army. The coolest thing is that she dresses up as a boy in the army for over ten years and nobody knows that Mulan is actually a girl.
The main reason I like Mulan is that she is really smart and brave. She is never afraid when she fights against the bad people. She just tries her best to protect her country and her people. Mulan is really a hero in my heart.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (104 words)
【详解】例文1为例作解析：
《关于哪吒的信件范文解析》
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
② 时态：全文采用 “一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章紧扣交流需求，先回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱，接着按顺序介绍哪吒外貌、性格特点和优秀品质，逻辑连贯，语言自然流畅，无语法错误，且通过提问引导朋友回信，增强互动性。
[写作步骤落实]
第一步：引入主题。 以回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱为切入点，自然引出要介绍的卡通人物哪吒，明确写作主题。
第二步：介绍人物。
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双
②be always ready to时刻准备着
③try one’s best to尽某人最大的努力去
[高分句型]
①The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.” （表语从句）
②I still like him because I think he is just like us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
20．例文
My Favorite Movie
Zootopia is my favorite movie. It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story.
The movie is about a young rabbit named Judy Hopps who dreams of becoming a police officer in the big city of Zootopia. There, she meets a clever fox named Nick Wilde. Together, they uncover a big mystery. The film is full of fun and excitement, but it also teaches us important lessons about friendship, perseverance, and believing in ourselves. I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are.
Zootopia is not just a movie. It is a story that makes me smile and think.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，电影的名称、类型、主要情节以及喜欢它的原因都要写清楚，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接表明《疯狂动物城》是自己最喜欢的电影，引出下文对电影的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述。先介绍电影的基本信息，如类型和故事背景；再详细讲述主角的故事和电影情节；接着分析电影所传达的深层含义，以及自己喜欢这部电影的原因；
第三步，书写结语。总结电影给自己带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①animated动画的
②comedy-adventure喜剧冒险
③dream of梦想
④police officer警察
⑤uncover揭开
⑥mystery谜团
⑦perseverance毅力
⑧achieve one’s dreams实现梦想
[高分句型]
①It is an animated comedy-adventure film that tells a wonderful story.（定语从句）
②I love it because it shows that anyone can achieve their dreams, no matter how big or small they are.（because引导原因状语从句；宾语从句；no matter how引导让步状语从句）
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