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Continuation Writing
牛津译林版必修三教材 U1&U2
Unit 1 Nature in the balance
教材语料
亮
词 动作描写:defence→defend;survive;come up with;call for;
spring to mind
环境描写:hardwood; track; consequence
美
句 ①Above that is the mass of leaf litter on the dark forest floor.(环境描写)
②The Amazon rainforest breathes life into the planet by fixing carbon and producing over 20 per cent of all the Earth’s oxygen.(环境描写)
③When I first moved here, the air was fresh, the grass green and
the water clear.(环境描写)
④It’s our duty to protect the environment while we aim for economic development.It’s our duty to leave a better,cleaner and healthier planet to our children.It’s our duty to build a human community with a shared future.(排比句式)
情感描写之“怜悯、同情、帮助”
词汇 单
词 ①sympathy n.同情→sympathetic adj.同情的
②pity n.同情,怜悯;仁慈 v.同情→pitiful adj.可怜的;令人同情或怜悯的
③mercy n.宽容;怜悯→merciful adj.仁慈的,宽恕
的→mercifully adv.幸运地;宽大地;仁慈地
④supportive adj.支持的,拥护的
⑤helpful adj.给予帮助的;有帮助的
⑥gentle adj.温和的;轻柔的→gently adv.温柔地;轻轻地
⑦warm-hearted adj.热心的,富有同情心的,慈爱的
情感描写之“怜悯、同情、帮助”
拓展语料
词汇 词
块 ①have mercy on sb 怜悯某人
②feel pity/mercy/sorry for同情
③express sympathy表示同情
④out of sympathy/pity出于同情
⑤a surge of mercy sweeps over sb怜悯之情涌上某人心头
⑥lend a helping hand伸出援助之手,助一臂之力
⑦a random act of kindness不经意的善举
美句
①His lightweight jacket was a poor protection against cold.His face and hands were red and damaged.People around focused on him with pity and whispered at this sad sight.
他穿的轻便夹克根本无法御寒。他的脸和手都被冻得通红并受了冻伤。周围的人们用同情的目光注视着他,看着这悲惨的一幕窃窃私语。(人物描写)
②Approaching the poor boy,she gathered him into her arms in sympathy.
她走近那个可怜的男孩,同情地把他抱在怀里。(动作描写)
美句
③At the sight of the scene,he felt a wave of sympathy welled up in his heart, his heart aching for the injured dog.
看到这一幕,他心中涌起了一股怜悯之情,他为受伤的狗而心痛。(独立主格)
④It dawned on me that a random act of kindness can make such a great difference.
我突然意识到,一个不经意的善举就可以产生如此大的影响。(主旨升华)
情境导语 我被邀请去一个老朋友的农场。当我走过一个挤奶房
时……
第一步 完成句子
When I walked past a milking house,a
humming bird spider-webs
caught my attention.(非谓语动词作定语)
desperately trying to escape from
1. 当我走过一个挤奶房时,一只拼命想从蜘蛛网中逃脱的蜂鸟引起了
我的注意。
her painful eyes seemed to beg me for my
sympathy
a wave of sympathy welled up
in my heart
putting her into my hand
2. 她看着我的眼睛,她那双痛苦的眼睛似乎在乞求我的同情。
She looked into my eyes and
.(并列句)
3. 看到她的情况,我立刻感到怜悯之情涌上心头。
Seeing her condition,I immediately felt
.
4. 我轻轻地帮助她从网里面出来,把她放在我的手中。
I gently helped her get out of the web, .
(非谓语动词作状语)
as if expressing her gratitude to
me
it dawned on me that
5. 很长一段时间,这个小家伙看着我的眼睛,把头从一边转到另一
边,好像在向我表达她的感激。
For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes and
turned her head from side to side,
.(状语从句的省略)
6. 就在那一刻,我突然意识到,一个不经意的善举就可以产生很大的
影响。
Just at the moment, a random act of kindness
can make a great difference.(it作形式主语)
When I walked past a milking house,a hummingbird desperately
trying to escape from spider-webs caught my attention.
She looked into my eyes and her painful eyes seemed to beg me for
my sympathy.Seeing her condition,I immediately felt a wave of
sympathy welled up in my heart.I gently helped her get out of the web,
putting her into my hand.For a very long moment,this tiny creature
looked into my eyes and turned her head from side to side, as if
expressing her gratitude to me.Just at the moment, it dawned on me that
a random act of kindness can make a great difference.
第二步 连句成文
2. 妈妈坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营,她的眼里闪烁着兴奋。
Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, and
.(动词+介词短语)
→Mom in the next
village, .
(insist on; with复合结构)
→
(独立主格结构)
her eyes
glittered/twinkled with excitement
insisted on going camping
with her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement
Mom insisted that we (should) go camping in the next village,
her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement.
3. 一到露营地,妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去,兴奋地催促我们搭
帐篷。
When we arrived at the camping place,
and .(动作描写+副词)
4. 妈妈朝湖走去,远处传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声。
Mom walked towards the lake, and
.(倒装句)
Mom couldn’t wait to storm
out
excitedly urged us to put up the tent
from the distance came an excited
scream/from the distance came a scream of excitement
5. 欣赏着美景,妈妈兴奋得难以自抑。
Enjoying the beautiful view,
.(名词作宾语)
6. 因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭,我和哥哥也感到很兴奋。
As it was the first time that we had helped father cook food
outdoors, .(形容词作表语)
7. 呼吸着新鲜空气、闻着美味的食物,我们兴奋地欢欣雀跃。
Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food,
.(动作描写+介词短语)
Mom could hardly contain her
excitement
my brother and I also felt thrilled
we jumped up
and down with excitement
第二步 连句成文
On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of
Mom.Mom insisted that we (should) go camping in the next village,
her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement.When we arrived at the
camping place, Mom couldn’t wait to storm out and excitedly urged us
to put up the tent.Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and from the
distance came an excited scream/from the distance came a scream of
excitement.Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her
excitement.As it was the first time that we had helped father cook food
outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled.Breathing the fresh air and
smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement.
Unit 2 Natural disasters
教材语料
亮
词 情感描写:odd;relief;shock;scare;curious
动作描写:crash;confirm; inform; occur to;keep one’s head
美
句 ①Her students’ reaction was quick and correct — they moved under
their desks, head first, and held on to the legs of the desks.(动作
描写)
②There were loud crashes of glass breaking and things falling to the
ground,but the students remained still and waited calmly and quietly.
(环境描写)
③Within one minute and twenty seconds,the whole class went down
the stairs and rushed to the playground.(动作描写)
④People were walking, running or simply sitting on the sandy
beach, enjoying the warm sea air and the soft wind that brushed their
hair.(动作描写)
词汇 单
词 ①guilt n.内疚;罪行;罪责→guilty adj.有罪的;内疚的;感到惭愧的→guiltily adv.内疚地;有罪地
②regret n.& vt.后悔;遗憾;惋惜→regretful adj.遗憾的;后悔的;失望的→regretfully adv.遗憾地;后悔地;失望地
③self-condemned adj.自我谴责的;自责的
情感描写之“后悔、内疚、自责”
拓展语料
拓展语料
词汇 词
块 ①feeling of guilt 内疚感
②a guilty look on one’s face脸上露出惭愧的表情
③a regretful smile 歉意的微笑
④regretful tears 悔恨的泪水
⑤be full of guilt/regret满心愧疚/充满遗憾
⑥much to one’s regret/to one’s great regret
令某人深感遗憾的是
⑦with deep/great regret 很遗憾地
美句
①Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food at the food court.What my neighbour said exactly spoke my mind.With regret, I felt obliged to do the same.
当我去美食广场买食物时,泪水模糊了我的视线。我的邻居所说的话正合我意。带着遗憾,我觉得自己也不得不这么做。
②I deeply regret not having spent more time with my family before they moved away.
我非常后悔在家人搬走前没有多花时间陪陪他们。(动词-ing形式)
美句
③Every time I think about how I hurt her feelings, I am filled with regret.
每当我想到如何伤害了她的感情,我就充满了后悔。(时间状语从句)
④I can’t shake off the feeling of guilt and self-blame for not being
there for my friend when she needed me most.
我无法摆脱因在朋友最需要我时没能在她身边而产生的内疚和自责感。(动词-ing形式)
情境导语 社会学老师告诉我,不是我的女儿莉莉先动手打了她的同
学,我后悔打了她……
第一步 完成句子
1. 一放下电话,我就飞奔到她的房间。
, I rushed to her room.(on doing ...)
2. 看着莉莉泪流满面,我脸上写满愧疚。
Looking at Lily’s face wet with tears, I
.(神态描写+情感描写)
On putting down the phone
had guilt written all over my
face
3. 我还没来得及解释,她就冲出去了。
Before I could explain, .(动作描写)
4. 我愣住了,沉浸在对她的内疚感中。要是我没误解她多好啊!
I froze, .If only I had not
mistaken her!(非谓语动词作状语)
5. 我眼里涌出懊悔的泪水,冲下楼向她道歉。
, I dashed downstairs to
apologize to her.(with复合结构)
she rushed out
drowning in feelings of guilt about her
With regretful tears welling up in my eyes
第二步 连句成文
On putting down the phone, I rushed to her room.Looking at
Lily’s face wet with tears, I had guilt written all over my face.Before I
could explain, she rushed out.I froze, drowning in feelings of guilt
about her.If only I had not mistaken her! With regretful tears welling up
in my eyes, I dashed downstairs to apologize to her.
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