高中英语写作：应用文写作深度高阶解析

高中英语写作：应用文写作深度高阶解析
Ⅰ深度审题，理清文体特征
假定你是李华，你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者，一个为越野跑（cross-country running），另一个为书法比赛（calligraphy competition）。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：
给出建议；
说明理由。
注意：
写作词数应为80个左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you’re interested in being a volunteer.
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Yours,
Li Hua
体裁：建议信
人称：第一人称
要点：①明确活动选择（活动二选一）；
②深度说明理由：越野跑（cross-country running）属于体育活动类，须立足体育育人；书法比赛（calligraphy competition）属于艺术活动类，须立足美育育人。
Ⅱ写作思路
开篇句：写作背景（已给出）+清晰陈述选择
中间段：详细阐述理由
若选择越野跑（cross-country running），即选择体育，可以从感受运动的活力、增强体质、培养团队精神等方面展开，例如通过服务运动员等工作，能深入体验运动的激情和团队协作的重要性。
若选择书法比赛（calligraphy competition），即选择美育，可以从深度体验中国传统文化、提高组织协调能力、结识志趣相投的朋友等方面展开，例如通过近距离观摩创作过程，了解书法艺术，加深对中国传统文化的理解。
结尾段：
鼓励Peter参与，并表示愿意提供进一步帮助，或者再次重申所选活动能带来的成长，更具说服力，或者表达真诚的祝愿，一切顺利等。
Ⅲ实用词块
关于cross-country running的词块
sign up for 报名参加
participate in / take part in / engage in running 参与跑步（活动）
feel the excitement and popularity of running感受跑步的激情与流行热潮
serving the athletes为运动员服务
advocate the importance of keeping health 倡导保持健康的重要性
build up one’s body增强体质
keep sb refreshed 让人精神焕发
feel energetic and confident 感到有活力和自信
a positive attitude 积积的心态
ease/relief/alleviate pressure/stress缓解/减轻压力
foster a resilient mindset 培养顽强的意志力
promote team spirit 促进团队精神
become a better version of myself/ ourselves成为更好的自己
shed light on the sportsmanship perfectly 完美地诠释了体育精神
ignite your' passion for sports 点燃你对运动的热情
关于calligraphy competition的词块
your keen interest in Chinese culture 你对中国文化的浓厚兴趣
feel the charm and speciality of calligraphy感受书法的魅力和特殊性
appreciate extensive and time-honored Chinese culture欣赏博大精深、历史悠久的中国文化
be fully immersed in traditional Chinese culture 沉浸在中国传统文化中
closely observe the practice of calligraphy近距离观察书法实践
spread the essence of Chinese culture 传播中国文化的精髓
promote cultural exchange 促进文化交流
offer a unique glimpse into the rich cultural heritage of China 提供一个独特视角，领略中国丰富的文化遗产
enhance your patience and focus 提升你的耐心和专注力
enhance personal artistic taste 提升个人艺术品味
stimulate creative thinking 激发创造性思维
promote cultural understanding 促进文化理解
connect with people who share your interests结交志同道合的朋友
improve one's ability to organize and coordinate 提高组织协调能力
Ⅳ高分句式
开篇句式：提建议
基础句式：
I think it would be better if we （我认为如果我们……会更好。）
I would like to suggest/propose/recommend that we （我想建议我们……）
It is advisable that we （我们最好……）
As far as I’m concerned, I’d like to put forward a suggestion/make a proposal that （就我而言，我想提出一个建议，即……）
It is highly recommended that we （强烈建议我们……）
高级句式：
There is no denying that both options are well-received, but I see greater merit in opting for...（不可否认，这两种选择都很受欢迎，但我认为选择……有更大的价值。）
After weighing the pros and cons, my inclination leans towards ……. （在权衡利弊之后，我的倾向是……。）
Among the two alternatives put forward, A is undoubtedly the one I would advocate for, since it aligns better with...（在提出的两个备选方案中，A 无疑是我更倾向于支持的那一个，因为它更符合……）
中间句式：给出理由
基础句式：
The reason for my choice is that...（我这样选择的原因是……）
I think there are several compelling reasons for this.（我认为有几个令人信服的理由。）
First of all,... Secondly,... Finally,...（首先，……其次，……最后，……）
Moreover, / Furthermore, / Additionally, / What‘s more,...（而且，……）
The main reason why I... is that...（我……的主要原因是……）
From my perspective, the advantages of... are as follows...（从我的角度来看，……的优点如下。）
高级句式：
What underlies my preference is that... （我这一偏好背后的根本原因是……）
I am convinced that several persuasive factors account for this choice. （我确信，有几个具有说服力的因素促成了这一选择。）
To begin with,... In addition,... Last but not least,... （首先，……。此外，……。最后但同样重要的是，……。）
Initially,... Moreover,... Ultimately,... （最初/首先，……。而且，……。最终，……。）
The primary factor that drives me to... is that... （驱使我……的首要因素是……。）
尾段句式：
基础句式：
I hope my suggestion will be taken into consideration.（我希望我的建议能被考虑。）
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account.（如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。）
I‘m looking forward to your reply.（我期待着你的回复。）
I hope that my suggestion will be of some help to you.（我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。）
高级句式：
I trust this proposal will merit your thoughtful consideration. （我相信此提案值得您深思熟虑。）
I am at your disposal should you wish to explore any of these points in greater depth. （若您希望就其中任何一点进行更深入的探讨，我随时恭候。）
Ⅴ下水作文
选择越野跑（cross-country running）
基础版：
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. In order to help you better adapt yourself to your new life here,I would like to recommend that you should sign up for the cross-country running for the following reasons.
First of all, it is an excellent chance for you to feel the excitement and popularity of running in China. Secondly, by serving the athletes, you can easily build up your body and feel refreshed. Nothing will be more important than keeping healthy. Finally, you will be provided with a novel platform to foster a resilient mindset. Ｉfirmly believe that with you effort, you will become a better version of yourself.
May you enjoy the new experience brought by your new status.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级版：
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer.There is no denying that both options are well-received, but I see greater merit in opting for the upcoming cross-country running event, for the following compelling reasons.
Initially, this event offers a unique glimpse into the vibrant running culture, allowing you to be immersed in its dynamic atmosphere. Moreover, by serving the athletes, you will engage in sustained physical activity. I think it is the effective way to shed light on the sportsmanship perfectly.Ultimately, the challenges provide an ideal environment to foster a resilient mindset.
I am confident that, through your dedication, this experience will contribute meaningfully to your personal growth. I am at your disposal should you wish to explore any of these points in greater depth.
Yours,
Li Hua
选择书法比赛（calligraphy competition）：
基础版：
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, it is advisable that you participate in the calligraphy competition for the following reasons.
To begin with, it is an excellent chance for you to feel the charm and speciality of calligraphy in China. Furthermore, by serving the contestants, you can easily make some new friends. Additionally, you will be provided with a novel platform to spread traditional Chinese culture, because with you effort, more foreigners will form a new habit of using characters.
May you enjoy the new experience brought by your new status.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级版：
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer.After weighing the pros and cons, my inclination leans towards the upcoming calligraphy competition. The rationale for this recommendation is threefold.
The primary factor that drives me to choose calligraphy is that the event offers an immersive introduction to appreciate extensive and time-honored Chinese culture. What’s more, by closely observe the practice of calligraphy, you will have a golden chance to enhance your patience and focus. And the event also provides a platform for you to connect with people who share your interests. Ultimately, through your devotion, you can help spread the essence of Chinese culture and promote cultural exchange.
I am confident that, through your dedication, this experience will contribute meaningfully to your personal growth. I am at your disposal should you wish to explore any of these points in greater depth.
Yours,
Li Hua