北大附中 2025—2026 学年度第一学期 12 月统练参考答案
2025.12
第一部分:知识运用(共两节,30 分)
第一节 完形填空(共 10 小题,每题 1.5 分)
1-5 BBABA 6-10 DACBD
第二节 语法填空(共 10 小题,每题 1.5 分)
11. shooting 12. was selected 13. my 14. things 15.
that/which
16. in 17. extremely 18. wins/will win 19. based 20. what/where
第二部分:阅读理解(共 19 小题,每题 2 分)
A 篇 21-23 CCB B 篇 24-27 CDDA C 篇 28-30 BAB
D 篇 31-34 BADB 七选五 35-39 CGDAB
第三部分:书面表达:(共 32 分)
第一节 阅读表达
40. Oversharing refers to a phenomenon in which people reveal too many personal or
private details, especially in situations where others might feel uncomfortable.
41. First, the more details people disclose, the less sympathy we express when things
go wrong. Second, the more we post on a platform, the more socially attractive we
become if the posts are positive.
42. According to Gwendolyn Seidman PhD, we should avoid being negative
online, so showing off our love lives makes sense.
We should steer clear of showing off, especially our love lives.
43. First, I would talk to my friend privately and gently, which can prevent
embarrassment and show that my concern is sincere. Moreover, I would try to
understand the reason behind their oversharing. By listening and asking a few caring
questions, I can figure out what they really need and offer more meaningful help.
第二节 应用文 (共 20 分)
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Greetings! I’m thrilled to hear you’re interested in our school’s digital campus
after seeing my Moments post about the online Spelling Bee contest. Let me share
some details.
Our most eye-catching digital application is the SubQuiz learning system
independently developed by the students of our school. It generates personalized
practice questions based on our test performances, helping us target weak points
efficiently. Beyond academics, the Smart Canteen digital screen also shows the
thoughtfulness of our digital campus design. It displays real-time data like food safety
checks, student meal preferences, and even canteen staff schedules.
To me, digital campus is a total game-changer. It makes daily school life way
more convenient and tailors learning to our needs. However, we also need to balance
screen time to avoid over-reliance.
What digital tools does your school use Looking forward to hearing your stories!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案解析
完形填空
文章导读:本文讲述了一个患病女孩 Cathy 的游泳追梦故事。经过多年治疗,
她终于康复,并将观看奥运的感动转化为加入泳队的决心。尽管训练初期异常艰
难,甚至因咳嗽几乎无法坚持,她却以惊人的毅力日复一日地练习。虽然比赛中
常是最后一名,她从未放弃。最终,在颁奖典礼上,教练授予了她最高荣誉,表
彰她所展现的非凡意志力与热情。
1. 答案: B. finally (最终)
上文提到“After years of regular treatment”(经过多年常规治疗),这表明一个
漫长而艰难的过程。因此,她变得健康是一个最终达成的结果。usually (通常)不
强调治疗后的结果状态。firstly (首先)与时间顺序不符,治疗后是“最后”的结
果,不是“第一步”。frequently (频繁地):描述频率,与“变得健康”这一最终
结果不匹配。
2. 答案: B. survive (熬过,幸存)
前文描述训练开始非常“rough”(艰难),她“coughed and choked”(咳嗽、呛
水)。因此,这里指她艰难地“挺过”或“熬过”最初几周。spend (度过)为中性
词,无法体现过程的艰难和挣扎。save (节省,挽救)与“几周时间”搭配后语义
不符。waste (浪费)感彩为负面,与文章对她努力坚持的赞扬基调矛盾。
3. 答案: A. pull (拉,引申为“使退出”)
母亲看到女儿咳嗽得厉害,心疼之下想让她脱离这种痛苦。固定短语“pull sb.
out of sth.”或“pull sb. from sth.”意为“使某人退出/脱离某处境”。tell (告诉/
辨别)意思不符且语气不够强烈。hide (隐藏)“hide her from it”意为把她藏起来
以躲避训练,不符合常理和上下文。fire (解雇)通常用于工作场合,指开除解雇,
不适用于母亲和女儿在训练中的关系。
4. 答案: B. determined (坚定的,下定决心的)
前文关键信息包括:她“refused to give up and insisted she would go”(拒绝放弃,
坚持要去);以及“She had a firm intention within herself”(她内心有坚定的意愿)。
这些都指向“determined”的品质。trusted (被信任的)文中未强调他人对她的信
任。experienced ( 经验丰富的) 十岁的孩子刚开始训练, 谈不上经验丰富。
embarrassed (尴尬的)与文中描述她积极、坚定的成长形象完全相反。
5. 答案: A. frustration (挫折,沮丧)
后文明确解释这些“moments”是什么:“often she would be the last swimmer in
the race”(她经常是比赛的最后一名),以及“It was difficult for Cathy to accept...”
这对她来说是难以接受的,所以这些时刻自然是令人沮丧的。delight (高兴)
excitement (兴奋)均表示积极情绪,与“最后一名”的负面结果矛盾。surprise (惊 讶)
可以好可以坏,但结合“difficult to accept”,更具体的情绪是沮丧而非单纯 的惊
讶。
6. 答案: D. winner (获胜者)
直接线索是前一句“she would be the last swimmer in the race”(她是比赛的最后
一名)。所以,她很难接受自己不是一个赢家。beginner (初学者) learner (学习者):
她已经通过努力加入了游泳队,并参加了多次比赛,身份上已不再是初学者。
partner (搭档)比赛强调的是个人名次和胜负,而非是否是一个好搭档。
7. 答案: A. cheer on (为…加油,欢呼)
根据“praise their accomplishments”(赞扬他们的成就)可知,她出席的目的是
支持和祝贺朋友们。因此是去为他们加油。compete with (与…竞争):她本身没
有期望获奖,所以去的目的不是竞争。respond to (回应):不能准确体现她主动
去支持朋友的意图。run after (追赶,追求):不符合颁奖典礼的场景和她的朋友
关系。
8. 答案: C. announcing (宣布)
这是在正式的“awards ceremony”(颁奖典礼)上,教练要公布获奖者。且下文
直接引用了他的话语,这是典型的公开宣布行为。admitting (承认):通常用于承
认事实或错误,不适合颁奖场合。explaining (解释):宣布奖项时可能会解释原
因,但此处的核心动作是“公布名字”。whispering (低语):与公开的颁奖仪式
氛围不符。
9. 答案: B. will (意志,决心)
全文的核心主题就是 Cathy 的坚持和不屈不挠的精神。前文反复出现“refused to
give up”、“firm intention”、“determined”、“didn’t stop her from trying”
等,这些都是“will”(坚强意志)的具体表现。humor (幽默)文中未体现她的幽
默感。honesty (诚实):虽然是很重要的品质,但并非文章强调的、推动她坚持游
泳的核心特质。wisdom (智慧):通常与经验、判断相关,对于一个十岁孩子的游
泳故事来说,不是最贴切的核心词。
10. 答案: D. moment (时刻)
文章最后两句明确点出:“this was the hour of true triumph”(这是真正成功的
时刻)。因此,颁奖的瞬间是她生命中最伟大的时刻。discovery (发现):这个奖
项不是她发现的某个东西。choice (选择):这个奖项是她坚持的结果,但本身不
是一个“选择”。influence (影响):这个时刻可能对她产生深远影响,但空格的
直接宾语是“my daughter’s life”,指的是她人生中的一个具体片段(时刻),
而不是“影响”本身。
语法填空
A
【文本解析】这是一篇记叙文,介绍来自浙江的 17 岁女孩黄雨婷在杭州亚运会
上获得了三枚射击金牌的故事,文章是一段对她的采访。
1. shooting。【考查动名词】句意:17 岁的浙江姑娘黄雨婷在杭州亚运会射击项目
中独揽三枚金牌。括号里给的是动词 shoot,但空格前面是介词 in,介词后面必
须接名词或动名词,所以要把 shoot 变成 shooting。
2. was selected【考查时态语态】句意:当她 10 岁时,她被选为当地一所儿童体
校射击队的成员。主语与谓语构成被动关系,根据上文 When she was 10 可知为
一般过去时的被动语态,主语为 she,谓语用单数。故填 was selected。
3. my【考查代词】句意:“我会一直努力工作,尽我最大的努力!”短语try
one’s best 表示“尽最大努力”。故填 my。
B
【文本解析】这是一篇说明文,文章主要介绍了伦敦的大本钟。
4. things【考查名词复数】句意:当你游览伦敦时,最先映入眼帘的景物之一就
是大本钟。括号里给的是单数名词 thing,但前面有 one of the first,表示“……
之一”,后面必须接复数名词,因此把 thing 变为 things。
5. which/that【考查定语从句】句意:当你游览伦敦时,首先看到的东西之一就
是大本钟,那座著名的大钟在英国广播公司的广播中全世界都能听到。定语从句
修饰先行词 the famous clock,在从句作主语,指物,故填 which/that。
6. in【考查介词】句意:如果不是国会大厦在1834 年被大火烧毁,这座大钟就永
远不会竖立起来。表示在哪一年,应用介词 in。故填 in。
7. extremely【考查副词】句意:它不仅体积巨大,而且极其精确。修饰形容词
accurate 应用副词 extremely,故填 extremely。
C
【文本解析】本文是一篇议论文。植物性肉类对环境有一定影响,但它对地球的
影响远不及肉类。要了解是什么决定了以上问题,我们必须了解环境影响的几个
关键要素:用水量、土地使用量和碳排放量。
18. wins【考查时态】句意:毫无疑问,就地球的健康而言,所谓的无肉肉类获
胜。此处在主句中作谓语,句子描述一般性事实,应用一般现在时,主语是meat,谓
语动词应用第三人称单数形式,故填 wins。也可以理解为将会获胜,填一般将来
时 will win
19. based【考查连词】句意:与所有食物一样,以植物为基础的肉类对环境有
一定影响,但它对地球的影响远不及肉类。本句话谓语动词的名额已经被 has 占
掉,所以base只能做非谓语动词,肉类以植物为基础应使用被动语态——meant
is based on plants,再变成非谓语动词为 based。
20. what【考查宾语从句】句意:要了解其中的差异,我们必须了解环境影响的
几个关键要素:用水量、土地使用量和碳排放量。空处引导宾语从句,连接词在
从句中作表语,指物,应用 what 引导宾语从句,故填 what。(也可以理解为区别
在哪里,填 where,但优先按照填 what 做表语这种思路理解,更为符合语法规则)
阅读理解 A 篇
【解析】本文是一篇应用文。文章主要介绍了 2018 年不同交通方式温室气体排
放占比,以及飞机、汽车等各类交通工具的未来绿色燃料路径。
【21 题详解】
细节理解题。根据图表信息ROAD VEHICLES部分中“ROAD (PASSENGER)
45.1% (道路(客运)45.1%)”以及“ROAD (GOODS) 29.4% (道路(货运)29.4%)”
可知,道路车辆总占比为 45.1%+29.4%=74.5%,即道路车辆在 2018 年全球交通
排放中占比 74.5%。故选 C 项。
【22 题详解】
细节理解题。根据图表信息TRAINS — Electricity部分中“Some trains are
already electrified through rails or wires; others can be made electric in pretty simple
ways. (一些列车已经通过轨道或电线实现了电气化;其他火车可以通过非常简单
的方式实现电动化)”可知,火车相较其他交通方式更易实现绿色化。故选 C 项。
【23 题详解】
细节理解题。根据最后一段中“We need to speed up the development of green
energy and it will all get used,” says Wipke. (Wipke 说:“我们需要加速绿色能源
的开发,而且这些能源都会被利用起来。”)”可知,Wipke 建议加大对可再生
能源的投入,即加大对绿色能源的投入。故选 B 项。
阅读理解 B 篇
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲的是作者在数学课上学了一个等式后的
一些感悟。
24. 本题为推理判断题。根据第一段“I used to believe that only words could catch
the essence of the human soul. The literary works contained such distinct stories that
they shaped the way we saw the world. Words were what composed the questions we
sought to uncover and the answers to those questions themselves. (我曾经相信,只有
语言才能捕捉到人类灵魂的本质。文学作品包含了如此独特的故事,它们塑造了
我们看待世界的方式。文字构成了我们试图揭示的问题,以及这些问题本身的答
案)”可推知,在第一段作者主要强调了语言的表达力量,故选 C。
25. 本题为细节理解题。题干关键词“troubled the author”和“thinking about the
equation”指向文中作者在数学课上产生的心理困惑。原文明确写道:“I thought
even though 0.99 is only 0.01 away from 1, there’s still a 0.01 difference. That means
even if two things are only a little different, they are still different, so doesn’t that
make them completely different ” 这表明作者的困扰在于,微小的差异是否仍意
味着两者是完全不同的,与 D 项表述一致。A 项“认为数学上不正确”与作者接受
该计算结果的事实不符;B 项“与老师之前所说的矛盾”在文中未提及,属于无中
生有;C 项“怀疑数学的精确性能否真正反映生活的现实”是作者在后续段落中从
等式引申出的哲学联想,并非他思考0.99≈1 时的直接困扰,属于移花接木的干扰
项。故选 D。
26. 本题为推理判断题。文章后半部分将等式左右两边分别比作生命的客观不变
性和无限可能性,并总结“Life is an equation with two sides that balances itself out”,
因此D 选项最全面准确地概括了这一比喻。A 项仅提及数学精确性,未涉及生命
比喻;B 项“现实与想象的冲突”并非文章重点;C 项“数字优于文字”过于绝对,
作者强调的是数字也能像文字一样表达思想。故选 D。
27. 本题为主旨大意题。文章通过作者从坚信文字到领悟数字也能表达深刻思想
的情感转变,核心启示是数字可以像文字一样有效表达理念或洞见,对应 A 选项。 B
项过度强调数学课的作用,而非普遍启示;C 项所表达的观点——“人生充满
了确定性和不可改变性“与文章主旨“人生充满生与死的确定性和过程中的无限
性”相悖;D 项“我们应经常质疑传统观念来找寻新知”属于将文章的关键词“数
字(数学等式)“概念扩大,与文章主旨“生命充满无限可能“相反;故选 A。
阅读理解 C 篇
28. 细节理解题。根据文章第 4 段描述,在模糊情境(ambiguous setting)下,决
策者最初不知道自己所处的具体情境,但可以通过点击按钮来消除这种模糊
性(resolve that ambiguity)。这意味着点击按钮后,他们将明确自己处于两
种可能情境中的哪一种,从而了解自己的选择会如何影响同伴的收益。选项
A“退出实验”、C“获得额外收益”和 D“切换到他们喜欢的情况”在文中
均未提及,因此正确答案为 B。
29. 词义猜测题。“altruistic”一词出现在第 5 段,用于描述透明情境下 55%的参
与者所做的选择。根据后面 however 说在模糊情境下 40%的人选择 ignorant,
可以知道透明情境中,人们做的是ignorant的反义词,也就是体现的是无私
(selfless)为他着想的品质。选项 B“不明智的”、C“公平的”和 D“不现实
的”均不符合上下文语义,故 A 为正确答案。
30. 推理判断题。文章通过实验发现,在信息不明确(ambiguous)的情况下,许
多人主动选择不去了解真相,并在这种“无知”的状态下做出损害他人、利
己的选择。也就是说,为了避免道德上的自责或负罪感,人们会刻意保持无
知。这正说明:对道德后果的评估,反而促使了一些人选择有意的无知,与 B
项表述一致。B 选项正确。A 错:获取额外信息的人更可能做出利他选择(甚
至比透明情境高 7 个百分点)。C 错:两种情境的收益结构本质相同,只是
信息是否透明不同。D 错:只有 40% 选择保持无知,并非“大多数”。故 B
为正确答案。
阅读理解 D 篇
【解析】本文是一篇议论文。文章探讨公众哀悼名人的现象,指出尽管缺乏私人
交集,人们因名人的精神滋养而感到真正的悲伤,并认为这种集体哀悼是个体之
间的情感连接契机。
31. 细节理解题。根据原文“the much loved poet (深受喜爱的诗人)”和“admirers (仰
慕者们)”可知,人们试图拉普希金的灵车是因为他们非常喜爱这位诗人。A 项
意为“因为他们住在普斯科夫省”,文中并未说明这些人住在哪里,更未和拉
车建立因果关系;C 项意为“因为他们对诗人的死感到愤怒”,文中并未体
现愤怒的情感;D 项意为“因为他们想亲自埋葬这位诗人”,原文未提及。
32. 推理判断题。根据第二段中“But people are passionate all the same. In 2023, grief
(悲痛) coursed around the Internet for Milan Kundera and Michael Gambon. (但
是人们仍然充满热情。2023 年,因米兰·昆德拉与迈克尔·甘本的离世,悲
痛之情在网络空间蔓延开来)”可知,作者以昆德拉和甘本为例,说明人们对
名人的哀悼热情不减,仍然对名人的葬礼怀有强烈的情感,故选A。B 项意为
“为了解释为何数字葬礼引起的公众悲痛少于传统葬礼”,与原文矛盾;C 项
意为“为了阐明人们为何对这些名人的离世表达悲伤”,第二段还在呈现现
象,并未开始阐明原因;D 项意为“为了证明人们对名人离世的悲伤是可笑
滑稽的”,原文仅说这样的悲痛可能看似奇怪、不合逻辑(“might seem odd,
even illogical”),并不是“可笑滑稽”。
33. 细节理解题。根据第五段“The grief can be seen as a form of gratitude (这种悲痛
可以被看作是一种感恩)”可知,人们对名人的悲伤,部分是一种感恩的表达,
故选D。A 选项意为“人们参加名人葬礼主要是为了表达他们的忠诚”,原文未
提到“忠诚”这一因素;B 选项意为“名人在高龄去世时人们感到悲伤是很
自然的”,与第四段的观点(英年早逝比寿终正寝更值得痛惜)矛盾;C 选项
意为“人们不会为名人感到难过,除非他们有个人交情”,与原文前三段
所描述的现象(与名人虽无个人交情,但仍对其离世感到悲伤)矛盾。
34. 推理判断题。根据最后一段“More importantly, the passing of an artist is an
occasion for exchanges of ideas. In societies that overemphasize individuality, a
beloved figure’s death is a chance to share positive feelings and memories with
fellow admirers. These sad occasions, though seemingly illogical, are the parting
gifts of these artists. (更重要的是,艺术家的逝去是思想交流的契机。在过分强
调个性的社会中,一位深受爱戴的人物的逝世,让追随者有机会分享积极的
情感与回忆。这些悲伤的时刻,虽貌似不合逻辑,却是这些艺术家给世人最
后的礼物。)”可知,作者肯定哀悼的合理性,认为这是精神联结的体现,态
度偏向支持,故选B。A 错:作者不仅描述现象,还给出了正面解读,超越了
中立立场。C 错:文章对公众哀悼名人的质疑基于的是表面的、貌似的看法,
而更重要的是解释并肯定其动因与意义。D 错:文中未表达任何忧虑,侧重
积极意义。
七选五
35. C。上文提到“Like your height or shoe size, the number of years that have passed
since you first entered the world is an unchangeable fact. (像身高或鞋码一样,自
你第一次进入这个世界以来经过的年数是一个不可改变的事实)”,这引出了
关于年龄的一个观点,即我们的年龄感受是基于内心的感受。而下文则进一
步探讨了科学家们对这个品质的兴趣,以及主观年龄与个性之间的关系。因
此,C选项“But it is also suggested that people often don’t experience ageing the
same way.(但人们往往不会以同样的方式体验衰老)”作为过渡句,既承接了上
文关于年龄感受的观点,又为下文的讨论奠定了基础,符合题意。故选 C。
36. G 。上文提到研究探索主观年龄与人格的相互作用,下文则指出“These
personality changes are often considered more obvious in the people with older
subjective ages. (这些人格变化在主观年龄较大的人身上更为明显)”。选项
G“People tend to become less extroverted and less open to new experiences as
they a g e(. 人们随着年龄增长往往变得更不外向,对新鲜经验的开放度降低)”
具体描述了人格变化的内容,与下文的“these personality changes(这些变化)”
直接呼应,符合语境。
37. D。上文指出感觉更年轻的人会随着生活经验增长变得更可靠、更少神经质,
同时保持年轻活力。选项 D“It’s not true that having a lower subjective age leaves
us in permanent immaturity. (主观年龄较低并不会使我们永远不成熟)”恰
好反驳了可能的误解,并与上文描述的“可靠、少神经质”等成熟特质形成
逻辑呼应,强调了主观年龄低不等于不成熟。
38. A。上文提到“Feeling younger than your years also seems to come with a lower
risk of depression and greater mental wellbeing as we age. (感觉比实际年龄年轻
似乎还伴随着较低的抑郁风险和更大的心理健康)”,这是在描述一种积极的
影响或结果。而 A 选项“It also means better physical health.(这也意味着更好的
身体健康)”则是对上文积极影响的进一步延伸或补充,i t 指代前文的“感觉
比实际年龄年轻”这个事实。同时下文指出主观年龄大带来的健康风险,侧
面补充了主观年龄小所带来的身体健康的益处。故选 A。
39. B。前文提到“Most people felt about eight years younger than their actual
chronological age ( 实际年龄). But some felt they had aged—and the
consequences were serious. Feeling between 8 and 13 years older than your actual
age resulted in an 18-25% greater risk of death over the study periods, and greater
disease burden—even when you control for other demographic (人口学的)
factors such as education, race or marital status.( 大多数人感觉比他们实际的年
龄年轻约八岁。但有些人却感到自己变老了——后果非常严重。感觉比实际年
龄大 8 到 13 岁的人,在研究期间死亡风险增加了 18%至 25%,患病负担也更重,
即使控制了其他人口学因素(如教育程度、种族或婚姻状况)也是如此。)”,这
是在列举了一些研究结果,最后指出这些发现具有重要意义。而 B 选项
“These findings can give us all a view of the way our own brains and bodies
endure the passing of time.(这些发现可以让我们更好地了解我们自己的大脑和
身体是如何随着时间的推移而衰老的)” 是对整段研究结果的总结性评价,既
呼应了前文的研究成果,也引出了其深层意义。故选 B。
阅读表达
40. What is oversharing
【参考答案】
Oversharing refers to a phenomenon in which people reveal too many personal or
private details, especially in situations where others might feel uncomfortable.
【原文出处】para.2
What is oversharing 【关键词】 The term has become associated with social
media, but it isn’t exclusive to this platform. Imagine you head to a party and you
meet someone. Within five minutes they have disclosed intimate details about their
life. Oversharing happens when people reveals too many personal or private details,
especially in situations where others might feel uncomfortable. While some of us may
try to escape these people, according to marriage therapist Carolyn Cole, this form of
oversharing could come from a strong desire to connect with someone. But how does
this translate to social media
【评分标准】
2 分档:粉色部分将 happens when 改为 refers to the phenomenon 等能够回答“概念
定义”问题的表述
1.5 分档:粉色部分照抄。
0 分档:绿色部分是对 oversharing 目前情况的一个简述,蓝色是一个具体的例子。
都不能解释说明 what is oversharing。答这两句话,0 分。
41. According to Dr Christopher Hand, what influences does oversharing in social
media have
【参考答案】
First, the more details people disclose, the less sympathy we express when things
go wrong. Second, the more we post on a platform, the more socially attractive we
become if the posts are positive.
【原文出处】para.3\4
Dr Christopher Hand【关键词】, a lecturer in cyberpsychology, says the more
details people disclose, the less sympathy they receive when things go wrong. This
could be due to a belief that we attract our own negative experiences the more we
share them. It seems that sadfishing, the idea of searching for sympathy by
oversharing, is generally perceived as negative rather than the cry for help it could
actually be.
However, Dr Hand’s research also seems to suggest that the more we post on a
platform, the more socially attractive we become—provided that the posts that we
sent are positive. Even back in 2015, Gwendolyn Seidman PhD, said that we should
steer clear of complaining and being negative online. We should also avoid showing
off, or bragging, as it’s now known—especially about our love lives. It makes
sense—if your date is going ‘that well’, would you really have time to share a photo
with text
【评分标准】
2 分档: 一共有两个要点(粉色部分),照抄原句,没有 first,second 衔接。也
可以给满分。
1.5 分档:两个要点都有,但多抄了绿色支撑部分,冗余。
1 分档:两个要点只写了一个。
0.5 分档:两个要点只写了一个,还多抄了绿色支撑细节部分,冗余。
0 分档:其他不符合题目的无关内容。
42. According to Gwendolyn Seidman PhD, we should avoid being negative
online, so showing off our love lives makes sense.
We should steer clear of showing off, especially about our love lives.
【原文出处】paras.5
However, Dr Hand’s research also seems to suggest that the more we post on a
platform, the more socially attractive we become—provided that the posts that we
sent are positive. Even back in 2015, Gwendolyn Seidman PhD, said that we should
steer clear of whining and being negative online.【关键词】 We should also avoid
showing off, or bragging, as it’s now known—especially about our love lives. It
makes sense—if your date is going ‘that well’, would you really have time to share a
photo with text
划线 1 分。以下划线方式均可:
so showing off our love lives makes sense.
so showing off our love lives makes sense.
so showing off our love lives makes sense.
so showing off our love lives makes sense.
so showing off our love lives makes sense.
解释 2 分。
2 分:We should avoid showing off, or bragging, as it’s now known -especially about
our love lives. 删除掉also,回答了问题即可满分。多抄“It makes sense — if
your date is going ‘that well’, would you really have time to share a photo with text ”
部分,如果修改了人称,即 you 转为 we,your 转为 our,也可以满分。
1.5分:照抄原文整段,没有删除also,或没有修改人称。“We should also avoid
showing off, or bragging, as it’s now known -especially about our love lives. It makes
sense — if your date is going ‘that well’, would you really have time to share a
photo with text ”
1 分:只抄原文“if your date is going ‘that well’, would you really have time to share
a photo with text ”没有抄原文中提到的“应该做什么”。
0 分:只否定,即写“showing off our love lives does not make sense.”不得分。
43.【评分标准】建议写 4-4.5 行, 超过 5 行扣 0.5 分。
【语料积累】
1. Talk to your friend privately and gently
Send a private message instead of commenting publicly.
This avoids embarrassing them and shows genuine care.
2. Try to understand the reason behind their oversharing
Oversharing can come from loneliness, a desire for connection, or
emotional stress.
Ask supportive questions: “Is something bothering you ”
Listening first makes your friend feel respected instead of judged.
3. Set healthy boundaries for yourself
If their constant posts make you uncomfortable, you can mute their stories
or limit notifications.
This protects your mental space without damaging the friendship.
4. Encourage healthier ways of expressing emotions
Suggest alternatives like journaling, talking to close friends, or seeking
professional help if needed.
5. Be a positive role model
Share responsibly yourself.
Your own online behavior can remind them what balanced posting looks
like.
【参考范文】
First, I would talk to my friend privately and gently, which can prevent
embarrassment and show that my concern is sincere.Moreover, I would try to
understand the reason behind their oversharing. By listening and asking a few caring
questions, I can figure out what they really need and offer more meaningful help.
【结构】
方法 1+解释+衔接词+方法 2+解释
应用文写作
【备考指导】
本题属于“介绍+看法”类书信,考查学生在真实语境中描述事物并表达个人
观点的能力。写作时应突出信息性与思辨性的结合,既要具体展示数字校园的应
用场景,又要体现高中生的理性分析和辩证思维。
要点一:介绍身边的数字校园应用场景
需结合高中生日常校园生活,选取 2-3 个典型、具体的场景,避免空泛描述。
优先选择贴近学习、生活的高频场景,重点在于体现“身边”二字的真实感与细节
感。例如:
● 教学场景:课堂互动平板、数字化学习平台、在线作业收发系统
● 生活场景:食堂扫码点餐、校园一卡通线上充值、线上社团活动
● 管理场景:智能选课系统、数字公告栏、校园活动线上报名
要点二:简述对数字校园的看法
看法需积极正面且有依据,可结合前文提到的应用场景,从“便捷性、效率、
体验感”等角度展开,也可补充少量待完善之处,以体现客观与思辨。
● 积极方面:提升学习效率、个性化教学、资源共享便捷
● 理性反思:过度依赖风险、屏幕时间控制、人际交往淡化
● 个人建议:平衡线上与线下、保持批判性使用态度
注意事项:
1. 场景描述需具体,说明“如何使用”或“带来什么好处”,避免仅罗列名词(如:
不仅仅说“我们有数字课堂”,而是说“老师会分享电子课件,我们能在线提交作
业并及时收到反馈” ) 。使用具象的动词和名词( 如: submit homework,
AI-powered platform,而非笼统的“use technology”)。
2. 观点表达有层次:看法部分应有理由支撑,并使用连接词展现逻辑层次
(However, Personally, On the other hand)。
3. 语气亲切自然,符合笔友间的交流氛围,可适当加入轻微感叹或共情表达(如
“It’s really convenient!”)。
【审题训练】
体裁 介绍类+看法类书信(回信)
对象 英国笔友 Jim,语气自然、亲切
主题 介绍数字校园应用场景并表达看法
人称 第一人称(I)、第二人称(you)
主要
一般现在时(描述现状与表达看法)
时态
结构
三段式:开头回应 → 主体(场景介绍 + 看法表达) → 结尾互动
建议
【范文解析】
Dear Jim,
Greetings! I’m thrilled to hear you’re interested in our school’s digital campus
after seeing my Moments post about the online Spelling Bee contest. Let me share
some details. (开篇回应兴趣,承接题干背景,语气热情自然,快速切入主题)
Our most eye-catching digital application is the SubQuiz learning system
independently developed by the students of our school. It generates personalized
practice questions based on our test performances, helping us target weak points
efficiently. (场景一:学习类应用,选取学生自主研发的 SubQuiz 系统,突出独
特性;详细说明 “根据测试表现生成个性化习题” 的功能及 “高效攻克薄弱点”
的优势,描述具体且有亮点) Beyond academics, the Smart Canteen digital screen
also shows the thoughtfulness of our digital campus design. It displays real-time data
like food safety checks, student meal preferences, and even canteen staff schedules.
(场景二:生活类应用,以智能食堂显示屏为例,补充非学习场景,体现数字校
园覆盖的全面性;列举 “食品安全检测、用餐偏好、员工排班” 等实时数据,细
节丰富,让外国笔友清晰感知其便利性)
To me, digital campus is a total game-changer. It makes daily school life way
more convenient and tailors learning to our needs. (正面看法:用 “game-changer”
形象突出数字校园的颠覆性影响,结合前文场景,从 “便捷性” 和 “个性化学习”
两方面总结核心优势,逻辑连贯) However, we also need to balance screen time to
avoid over-reliance. (客观补充:提及 “平衡屏幕时间、避免过度依赖”,看法全面
辩证,不片面夸大优势)
What digital tools does your school use Looking forward to hearing your stories!
(结尾以提问引发互动,符合笔友间交流的语境,既延续友好氛围,又自然收束
全文)
Yours,
Li Hua
【语料积累】
1. 介绍数字校园应用场景
1) 学习类:
In classrooms, we use ClassIn dual-screen interactive boards—one displays the
teacher’s slides, while the other lets us engage with quizzes or group tasks smoothly.
在教室里,我们使用 ClassIn 双屏互动白板——一块屏幕展示老师的幻灯片,另
一块则让我们顺畅地参与测验或小组任务。
Each student gets a tablet, which we use to access textbooks, submit homework, and
join online discussions.
每位学生都配有一台平板电脑,我们用它查阅课本、提交作业以及参与线上讨论。
Our digital campus includes an online learning platform where we watch lectures and submit
assignments.
我们的数字校园包含一个线上学习平台,我们可以在该平台观看课程讲座并提交
作业。
The AI-driven platform provides personalized learning paths based on our performance.
人工智能驱动的平台根据我们的表现提供个性化的学习路径。
2) 生活类:
Important notices about exams or activities are sent through the class digital group,
so we won’t miss any information.
考试、活动等重要通知会通过班级数字群发送,我们不会错过任何信息。
Through the school app, we receive notices, check schedules, and join virtual events
like English competitions.
通过学校的应用程序,我们接收通知、查询日程,还能参与英语竞赛等线上活动。
We use smart cards for everything—entering the campus, borrowing books, and even
buying meals.
我们的智能卡用途广泛——进出校园、借阅图书,甚至就餐消费都能用到。
Our campus ID card integrates payment, attendance, and access control functions.
我们的校园一卡通整合了支付、考勤和门禁功能。
The digital library offers instant access to e-books, academic journals, and multimedia
resources.
数字图书馆让我们能即时获取电子书、学术期刊和多媒体资源。
Online reservation systems allow us to book study rooms or equipment 24/7.
线上预约系统支持我们全天候预订自习室或各类设备。
2. 表达对数字校园的看法
1) 肯定优势:
Digital campus has revolutionized the way we learn, making education more
accessible and efficient.
数字校园彻底改变了学习方式,使教育更便捷高效。
It fosters self-directed learning and caters to individual needs through data analysis.
它通过数据分析促进自主学习并满足个性化需求。
The digital campus greatly improves our study efficiency and makes school life more
convenient.
数字校园极大地提高了我们的学习效率,让校园生活更便捷。
It provides us with more resources and flexible ways to study.
它为我们提供了更丰富的资源和灵活的学习方式。
I really appreciate the convenience brought by the digital campus—it connects study
and life closely and saves us much trouble.
我非常感谢数字校园带来的便利,它紧密连接了学习和生活,省去了很多麻烦。
2) 指出挑战:
However, excessive screen exposure may lead to digital addiction and health issues.
然而,过度接触屏幕可能导致数字成瘾和健康问题。
There’ s a risk that virtual interactions could replace meaningful face-to-face
communication.
虚拟交流存在取代有意义面对面沟通的风险。
While digital campus brings many benefits, we should also avoid over-reliance on
technology.
尽管数字校园带来了诸多益处,但我们也应避免对技术的过度依赖。
3)个人态度:
In my view, technology should serve as a tool, not dominate our lives.
在我看来,技术应作为工具而非主导我们的生活。
The key is to strike a balance between digital convenience and traditional learning
values.
关键在于平衡数字便利与传统学习价值。
We need to learn how to use these tools wisely to support rather than replace real
learning.
我们需要学会明智地使用这些工具,以辅助而非替代真正的学习。
While the digital campus has many advantages, we should also use electronic devices
properly to avoid distraction from study.
虽然数字校园有很多优势,但我们也应该合理使用电子设备,避免影响学习。
Overall, digital campus is a double-edged sword that requires wise use. I believe with
proper guidance, its benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.
总体而言,数字校园是把双刃剑,需要明智使用。我相信在适当引导下,其利远
大于弊。
3. 开头与结尾
1) 开头段:
I was happy to know you’re interested in our school’s digital campus, and I’d like to
share something about it with you.
得知你对我们学校的数字校园感兴趣,我很开心,想和你分享一些相关情况。
Thank you for asking about our digital campus! It’s such a useful part of our school
life that I’m glad to introduce it to you.
谢谢你询问我们的数字校园!它是我们校园生活中非常实用的一部分,我很乐意
介绍给你。
Thank you for your interest in our school’s tech transformation. I’d be happy to share
my experience.
感谢你对我们学校的技术变革感兴趣。我很乐意分享我的体验。
I was thrilled to learn that you’re curious about our digital campus initiatives. Here’s
an overview.
得知你对我们的数字校园相关举措充满好奇,我非常开心。以下是简要介绍。
Here are some concrete examples from my daily school life.
以下是我校园生活中的具体例子。
Let me walk you through several scenarios where technology plays a key role.
让我带你了解技术发挥关键作用的几个场景。
2) 结尾段:
I hope this introduction helps you understand our digital campus better. Feel free to
ask more if you’re curious—I’m happy to explain!
希望这份介绍能帮助你更好地了解我们的数字校园。如果还有好奇的地方,尽管
提问——我很乐意解答!
I hope this snapshot helps you understand our digital campus better. Let me know
what aspects you’d like to explore further!
希望这份简要介绍能帮助你更好地了解我们的数字校园。如果有想进一步了解的方
面,随时告诉我!
This is just the tip of the iceberg. I’m eager to hear about similar initiatives in your
school.
这仅仅是冰山一角。我很期待了解你们学校的类似举措。
Keep me posted about your thoughts! I’d love to exchange more ideas on this topic.
随时告诉我你的想法呀!我很乐意就这个话题和你交流更多见解。
【评标细则】