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大连市 2024～2025 学年度第一学期期末考试
高一英语参考答案及评分标准
听力（1.5×20=30）
1—5 ABBAB 6—10 BCCAA 11—15 BACBC 16—20 BCAAC
阅读理解（2.5×20=50）
21—25 BDCCD 26—30BABAA 31—35 CBCDD 36—40 EFGBC
完形填空（1×15=15）
41—45 ACBCD 46—50 BACAD 51—55 DBCBD
语法填空（1.5×10=15）
56. as 57. observed 58. a 59. consumption 60. following
61. featured 62. and 63. perfectly 64. that 65. to enjoy
写作
第一节（满分 15 分）
依据高考作文评分标准
One possible version
Dear Tim,
Our school will hold a campus activity to introduce traditional Chinese operas. It will be
held in the school auditorium at 8:00 am. next Friday. I can’t wait to invite you to appreciate
diverse, time-honored traditional operas, especially Peking Opera.
Dating back to the 18th century, Peking Opera has over two hundred years of history. With
an orchestra playing traditional Chinese instruments, the main characters will come on the
stage and do exaggerated movements and mime, wearing amazing costumes and masks.
If you’re eager to see an opera that combines music, singing, drama, poetry and costume
design with explosive effect, Peking Opera will tick all the right boxes! Join us and enjoy it
together!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节（满分 25 分）
依据高考作文评分标准
One possible version
My mom’s words weighed heavily on me and I couldn't get them out of my mind. The road
seemed endless before me and my legs were getting heavier. The weight of exhaustion pressed
down on me, and I felt more discouraged. I was about to give up and head back home when the
elderly Chinese gentleman approached me, his face lit up with a warm smile, as familiar and
comforting as ever. Though he wasn’t fluent in English, he eagerly pointed to the letters on my
T-shirt, his eyes sparkling with enthusiasm as he exclaimed, “You very good.... you very fast!”
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Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step. His words
were like a warm ray of sunshine piercing through the darkest clouds, instantly cheering me up.
Thanks to his encouragement, I gathered all my courage and pushed myself through mile one,
mile two … mile six. With each step, I could feel the solid ground beneath my feet and the
steady beat of my heart. My bad mood was completely replaced by a sense of accomplishment
and pleasure. From then on, whenever I faced self-doubt or negativity, I would remember his
words and find the courage to keep going, knowing that a kind word could make all the
difference.
写作第一节
【评分标准】
1．评分原则
（1）本题总分为 15分，按五个档次进行评分。
（2）评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
◆ 对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
◆ 使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
◆ 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
（3）评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来
综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
（4）评分时还应注意：
◆ 词数少于 60的，酌情扣分。
◆ 单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程
度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
◆ 书写较差以致影响交际的，可将分数降低一个档次。
2. 内容要点
（1）活动的时间、地点；
（2）具体介绍一种戏曲。
第五档（13～15 分）
－ 覆盖了所有内容要点，表述清楚、合理。
－ 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响理解。
－ 有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（10～12 分）
－ 覆盖了所有内容要点，表述比较清楚、合理。
－ 使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。
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－ 比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（7～9 分）
－ 覆盖了大部分内容要点，有个别地方表述不够清楚、合理。
－ 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。
－ 基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（4～6 分）
－ 遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点，或一些内容与写作目的不相关。
－ 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。
－ 几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。
未能达到预期的写作目的。
第一档（1～3 分）
－ 遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。
－ 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。
－ 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
完全未达到预期的写作目的。
零分
未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
写作第二节
【评分标准】
1．评分原则
（1）本题总分为 25分，按五个档次进行评分。
（2）评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
◆ 创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。
◆ 使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
◆ 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
（3）评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来
综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
（4）评分时还应注意：
◆ 词数少于 130的，酌情扣分。
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◆ 单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程
度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
◆ 书写较差以致影响交际的，可将分数降低一个档次。
2.内容要点
本文主要讲述了在跑步时，主人公身着中文 T 恤遇华人老者，他的鼓励帮助主人公
克服自身消极情绪，坚持跑完全程，并深刻体会到鼓励和温暖话语的价值。
第一段：
（1）妈妈的担忧萦绕在我的心头；
（2）我想要放弃跑步；
（3）再次遇到华人老者，给予我鼓励：“You very good.... you very fast!”
第二段：
（1）老人的鼓励让我重拾勇气；
（2）我努力跑完了全程；
（3）体会到鼓励和温暖话语的价值。
3．各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档（21～25 分）
－ 创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。
－ 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响理解。
－ 有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。
第四档（16～20 分）
－ 创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽
度较高。
－ 使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。
－ 比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第三档（11～15 分）
－ 创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。
－ 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。
－ 基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第二档（6～10 分）
－ 内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。
－ 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。
－ 未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。
第一档（1～5 分）
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－ 内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情
境基本脱节。
－ 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。
－ 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
零分
未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题
目要求完全不相关。
听力原文
Text 1
M: Hi, Jenny. Is that your dog
W: No, it’s my sister’s. I’m just taking care of him for a week.
M: Did she go somewhere
W: Yeah. She’s visiting her friends in Boston.
Text 2
M: Why don’t you put that bag up here
W: Thanks. How long is this flight going to last
M: We’ll arrive at our destination in one and a half hours.
Text 3
W: Did you go to the Yellowstone Park for vacation last year
M: I couldn’t make it last December. But I finally went there three months later. I plan to visit
again next year.
Text 4
W: Mr Edwards, I’m going to be in an English speech competition, and I need to practice.
Could you please listen to my speech
M: Of course, Kaori. Just come to my office tomorrow.
W: Thank you.
Text 5
W: Aren’t you finished with your dinner yet
M: No, I’m not! I just want to enjoy life and not have to rush all the time.
W: But they’re waiting for us.
M: Oh, that’s right. I almost forgot. I’ll be done in a second.
Text 6
M: So What are you doing this weekend, Adriana
W: I’m flying to Fukuoka to meet my friend, Maria.
M: Oh, cool. Did she go to university with you
W: Yeah. We always took the bus to school together then.
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M: What’s she doing in Fukuoka
W: She’s on the Jet Program teaching.
M: Wow. Does she like her job
W: Yeah, I think she likes it because it’s a really long way on the subway every day. And this is
her third year.
M: Excellent.
Text 7
M: Jenny, do you remember that I told you I was having problems with my old computer It
sometimes went black of made noise. Well, now it’s stopped working altogether.
W: Really So, are you going to get a new one soon
M: Yeah. I also have to take my old one to the electronics store to have it recycled.
W: Make sure you tell them to delete all of the data on it, too.
Text 8
W: Hi, Sam.
M: Maria Is that you
W: Yeah. It’s been years since college, uh
M: Yeah. Good to see you again.
W: Good to see you. So did you just arrive here
M: Yeah, I arrived last week.
W: How do you like it
M: It’s much busier than the last city I lived in. I was working in Seattle.
W: It really is very busy. I moved here from Atlanta three years ago and I still have trouble
sometimes. Did you move here with your wife
M: Actually, I’m not married. I moved here with my dog, Charles. We are very close.
W: Oh, I see.
M: What about you
W: I’m married and I have two children. I take care of their life and study and I have a
part-time job in a restaurant. My husband works in New York all the time.
M: That’s not easy, I guess.
W: You can say that again.
Text 9
W: Excuse me, Mr Henderson
M: Yes, Diana. How can I help you
W: I’m sorry, but I can’t come to class next Wednesday. I have a doctor’s appointment.
M: OK. Thanks for letting me know.
W: Is there anything to do at home
M: Let me just check my notebook. OK, first of all, you need to read chapters 17, 19 and 20 in
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the book. There are also some articles and a video to watch—those are online. I’ll post the links
online in the usual place.
W: Chapters 17 to 20.
M: Yes, except Chapter 18.
W: Ah, OK. Um... is there a deadline
M: Yes, this Friday. But there’s something else. I was going to give you all a practice test.
W: A practice test
M: Yes, to help people prepare for the mid-term exam. Don’t worry, I can send you the practice
test by email on Wednesday. Can you send it to me before Friday
W: Sure, no problem.
M: And don’t forget to bring a sick note from the doctor to the office.
W: Thanks, Mr Henderson. I’ll do that.
Text 10
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the Friendship Club! You will meet many new people here and
make a lot of friends. We have some advice for you.
First, be friendly and polite to everyone in the club. That will make people comfortable
when they talk to you. Rude people are not welcome here.
Second, be honest and truthful. We hope that our members can trust each other. If we find
you are telling lies to other club members, we will ask you to leave.
Third, be a good listener and keep your friends’ secrets. That will make your friends trust
you and it will help you know more about your friends. If you share your friends’ secrets with
anyone else, you will hurt their feelings.
Last but not least, be generous and helpful to your friends. Sharing thoughts, ideas and
opinions will help you become close friends.
Please remember our advice when you come to the club. We meet every Friday afternoon
and I hope to see you here soon!
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