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题型分析
投稿是向报刊、杂志、电(视)台有目的性地、具有较强针对性地发表自己看法的一种应用文体。常见的作文形式是“征文”和“参赛”,内容分为写人和叙事。
投稿的时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。
思维导图
写作方法
第一段:引出话题,点明主题。→主题呈现
第二段:叙述具体情况,列出层次一二三。→事件描述
第三段:总结(发出呼吁、号召;表达感谢、祝福与祝愿),升华意义。→呼应主题
(2021新高考I卷)你校英文报Younth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期待与祝福。
投稿:记叙+说明
(2022全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。
(2023全国甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为 “用英文讲中国故事” 的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1. 人物简介及事迹; 2. 意义或启示。
(2023全国乙卷)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。
投稿:议论
投稿:说明
投稿:记叙
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Dear Editor,
I’d like to submit an article entitled .... which I’m sure will catch your attention.
Nowadays, when .... , .... appeared in our view. More and more .... are becoming increasingly interested in .... The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing, .... . For another, .... Even more impressive is that .... .
In my view, it’s .... that ....
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
My Favorite Extracurricular Activity
Dear Editor,
I’d like to submit an article entitled My Favorite Extracurricular Activity which I’m sure will catch your attention.
Nowadays, when we are talking about the preference for extracurricular activities, calligraphy appeared in our view. More and more students are becoming increasingly interested in calligraphy. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing, added to the World Intangible Heritage list, calligraphy has a long history. For another, practicing calligraphy cultivates my patience and observation ability, which in turn can be transferred to my study and benefit me a lot. Even more impressive is that practicing calligraphy relieves my stress while studying and pushes me to make use of fragment time, making it more efficient for me to study.
In my view, it’s practicing calligraphy that balanced my study and play and strengthened my confidence, killing two birds with one stone!
(2024年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试一)
你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文,
内容包括:1.课外活动简介;
2.你最喜爱的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Extracurricular Activity
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Dear Editor,
When it comes to________________(当 谈 到.时). it is widely acknowledged that_________________(众所周知).
For one thing ,__________________(主题特色一).Not only_________________but also__________________(具体特点)For anther, there is no doubt that_________________(主题特色二)
I do hope that_________________(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ________________.
Classics and Me
Dear Editor,
When it comes to the vast library of ancient wisdom, it is widely acknowledged that the Art of War by Sun Tzu stands out, becoming my favorite classic.
For one thing, flipping through the pages, I was fascinated by the words of wisdom in the classic.Not only did I become obsessed with the book and immersed myself in it, but also it has been accompanying me through different stages of my life. For anther, there is no doubt that the great wisdom in the small book has had a profound influence on my study and my approach to life.
(湖南省2024届新高考教学教研联盟高三第二次联考)
你校英文报正在举办主题为“经典作品进校园”的征文活动。请你以“Classics and Me”为题写一篇短文投稿,
内容包括:1.作品名称;
2.阅读经历;
3.对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Classics and Me
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【2024·浙江1月卷】请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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审题
体裁
主题
时态人称
要点
短文投稿
记叙类
运动与健康
Sports and Health
1.一般过去时
&一般现在时
2.第三人称
1.活动的内容;
2.你的心得。
列纲
Para1: 介绍这项运动
Para2: 推荐活动的原因、目的
Para3: 个人成长的影响(价值观、态度、行为方式)+情感描述(感激/自豪/希望)
激活
1.精通知识 have a good command of knowledge
2.不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ...
3.共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do...
4. 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to...
5. 谈到、提到 When it comes to...
6. 不可否认...... There is no denying that...
7. 人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that...
8.引起社会的关注 arouse social concerns
1.引出话题/主题呈现
I’d like to submit an article entitled ....(主题) which I’m sure will
catch your attention.
我想提交一篇题为....的文章,我相信会引起你的注意。
v. 递交;主张;建议
I’d like to submit an article entitled _________________________________ ________ which I’m sure will catch your attention.
我想提交一篇题为英语写作技巧的核心的文章,我相信会引起你的注意。
Core of English Writing
Skills
我观察到我们社会最近的一个趋势,越来越多的人沉迷于他们的手机。
2.事件/现象描述
① I've observed a recent trend in ......(地点)where ... .
我在......观察到了一个趋势......
I've observed a recent trend in _______________ where ________________ _______________________ are obsessed with their phones.
我观察到我们社会最近的一个趋势,越来越多的人沉迷于他们的手机。
our society
the increasing
number of people
I've observed a recent trend in _____________ where ___________________
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我在我们班观察到了一个趋势,很多学生花费太多的时间练习英文书写。
our class
many students
spend too much time in practicing their English handwriting.
on phenomenon in ...... (地点) that ...... (现象)
2.事件/现象描述
② It is a common phenomenon in ...... (地点) that ...... (现象)
在 ...... (地点) ...........(现象)是一个普遍现象。
It is a common phenomenon in ____________ that ______________________
_________________________________________________________________________
在我们班,许多学生花太多时间练习英语书写是一个普遍的现象。
our class
spend too much time in practicing their English handwriting.
many students
on phenomenon in ...... (地点) that ...... (现象)
2.事件/现象描述
③ There is no denying that ... plays an important role in ... .
不可否认的是 ......在 ...... 中扮演了一个重要的角色。
There is no denying that __________________________ plays an important
role in ______________________
不可否认的是,英文书写在英语学习中扮演一个重要的角色。
English handwriting
English learning.
it's essential to remember that the core of writing skills lies in content, not the form.
2.事件/现象描述
④ It is + adj. for sb. to do sth..
对某人来说......是.......的。
It is ___________ for ___ to_____________________________________________.
对我们来说,记得写作技巧的核心是必不可少的。
essential
remember the core of writing skills
us
It is essential for us to remember that the core of writing skills lies in ____________, not the _________.
对我们来说,记住写作技巧的核心在于内容,而不是形式是必不可少的。
form
content
it's essential to remember that the core of writing skills lies in content, not the form.
2.事件/现象描述
⑤ Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症,这引起了社会的关注。
Nowadays, with the development of _______________, an increasing number of ______________________________________________________________, which arouses social concerns.
如今,随着科技的发展,越来越多的人忽视了手写的重要性,这引起了社会的关注。
technology
people overlook the importance of handwriting
it's essential to remember that the core of writing skills lies in content, not the form.
2.事件/现象描述
⑥ First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.
首先,我们能做的就是重视我们的日常行为。
First of all, what we can do is __________________________________________
____________________________________.
首先,我们能做的就是提升人们的环境保护意识。
to improve people’s awareness
of environmental protection
3.总结,期望
① I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest
convenience.
如果您能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。
② All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
总之,现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
1. (2023·全国甲卷) 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2. 意义或启示。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【范文】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
巩固
2. (2023·全国甲卷)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【范文】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
巩固
3.(2022·全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 海洋的重要性;
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【范文】
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
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