练5 读后续写2 智慧教育 改变成长
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sophia was a teenager going through changes in her behaviour and dressing style. One day after school, Sophia’s mother prepared a plate of delicious vegetables and rice and asked Sophia to have dinner, but she refused to eat it, insisting it wasn’t what she liked. Then she absent-mindedly knocked over a vase filled with beautiful roses. Her mother ignored it, but moments later, Sophia asked loudly, “Mummy! Why did you throw away some of my clothes and change the setting of my room ” Her mother was shocked as Sophia had never raised her voice so high.
At night when Sophia’s father came home, her mother discussed the matter with him. He listened carefully and asked Sophia’s mother to remain calm, no matter what Sophia did. “It’s time that we stepped back. Don’t do anything for her—no cooking, no laundry (洗衣物), no searching for her missing things ...” he said.
The next day, Sophia overslept. Her mother didn’t wake her up or prepare breakfast, just putting some money on the table. Sophia grabbed the money and rushed to school. That afternoon, when Sophia returned home, she found there wasn’t any food prepared. Feeling unnoticed, Sophia went into her room, locked the door, and began to cry as if releasing the emotions she had bottled up for a long time.
After about 20 minutes, the doorbell rang. Quickly, Sophia dried her eyes and stepped out of her room. When she saw her mother return with a handful of shopping bags, she came in front of her, asking the reason for no breakfast or dinner. Her mother said gently, “Now that you have grown up and have your own thoughts, I’ll let you make some personal choices.” Then her mother headed to the kitchen, signaling Sophia to follow. Feeling confused, Sophia came into the kitchen with her mother.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Her mother opened the bags and asked Sophia to look and choose by herself.
The next morning, Sophia woke up with the determination to change.
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原文基本要素
主要人物:Sophia:①青春期叛逆:拒吃晚餐、质问时“raised her voice so high”;②渴望独立又依赖关爱:对无早餐/晚餐的错愕;“Feeling unnoticed”的失落、锁门哭泣。母亲:隐忍、智慧:对打翻花瓶“ignored it”;面对质问仅shocked未斥责。父亲:理性:“listened carefully”后提出“stepped back”策略;智慧:提出“no cooking/laundry/searching”的方案。
原文情节线:Sophia是个叛逆的青春期女孩,她拒绝母亲准备的晚餐,心不在焉打翻花瓶;高声质问母亲擅自处理她的衣物和房间布置→父母决定“放手”,不再替她做饭洗衣→次日母亲不叫早、不做早餐;Sophia拿钱冲去学校;放学回家发现无晚餐→饿着肚子的Sophia在房间痛哭→妈妈带回食材让她自己做饭。
主题:改变成长
续写情节
第一段:衔接①:衔接首句 “母亲打开购物袋,让Sophia自主选择食材”:购物袋子里有什么 过渡句:妈妈让Sophia自己做喜爱的食物→Sophia选择做什么 下厨过程中是否遇到困难 妈妈是否给予她帮助。衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句中的“醒来时决定改变”:她意识到做家务的困难。
第二段:衔接③:衔接首句中的“Sophia醒来时决心要改变”:Sophia为自己的行为向妈妈道歉。过渡句:妈妈接受Sophia的道歉→Sophia 开始帮助妈妈做更多的家务。尾句:场景描写+感悟升华:Sophia和妈妈一起做家务时的感悟。
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Her mother opened the bags and asked Sophia to look and choose by herself. Inside were fresh vegetables and grains that Sophia loved. “You’re old enough to decide what to eat and how to manage your time,” her mother said softly, handing her a recipe book. Excited but nervous, Sophia decided to make a beef sandwich. Having never cooked before, she naturally had difficulty throughout the process. Fortunately, her mother offered her helpful instructions, resulting in a not-so-good dinner. Sophia realized how hard the housework was.
The next morning, Sophia woke up with the determination to change. She went to the kitchen where her mother was making breakfast and apologized for her recent strange behavior. Her mother replied gently, “It’s okay. I’m just happy you’re better.” Sophia hugged her and promised to help with more chores. Later that day, she sorted out (整理) her clothes without complaining and bought a new vase for her mother after school. After dinner, as they washed the dishes together, Sophia understood that growing up meant learning to properly give rather than trying to take without any sense of gratitude (晚餐后,当她们一起洗碗时,索菲娅明白了:成长意味着学会恰当地给予,而非一味索取却不知感恩).(共13张PPT)
练5 读后续写2
智慧教育 改变成长
第四部分 写作满分练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sophia was a teenager going through changes in her behaviour and dressing style. One day after school, Sophia’s mother prepared a plate of delicious vegetables and rice and asked Sophia to have dinner, but she refused to eat it, insisting it wasn’t what she liked. Then she absent-mindedly knocked over a vase filled with beautiful roses. Her mother ignored it, but moments later, Sophia asked loudly, “Mummy! Why did
you throw away some of my clothes and change the setting of my room ” Her mother was shocked as Sophia had never raised her voice so high.
At night when Sophia’s father came home, her mother discussed the matter with him. He listened carefully and asked Sophia’s mother to remain calm, no matter what Sophia did. “It’s time that we stepped back. Don’t do anything for her—no cooking, no laundry (洗衣物), no searching for her missing things ...” he said.
The next day, Sophia overslept. Her mother didn’t wake her up or prepare breakfast, just putting some money on the table. Sophia grabbed the money and rushed to school. That afternoon, when Sophia returned home, she found there wasn’t any food prepared. Feeling unnoticed, Sophia went into her room, locked the door, and began to cry as if releasing the emotions she had bottled up for a long time.
After about 20 minutes, the doorbell rang. Quickly, Sophia dried her eyes and stepped out of her room. When she saw her mother return with a handful of shopping bags, she came in front of her, asking the reason for no breakfast or dinner. Her mother said gently, “Now that you have grown up and have your own thoughts, I’ll let you make some personal choices.” Then her mother headed to the kitchen, signaling Sophia to follow. Feeling confused, Sophia came into the kitchen with her mother.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Her mother opened the bags and asked Sophia to look and choose by herself.
The next morning, Sophia woke up with the determination to change.
原文基本要素
主要人物：Sophia：①青春期叛逆：拒吃晚餐、质问时“raised her voice so high”；②渴望独立又依赖关爱：对无早餐/晚餐的错愕；“Feeling unnoticed”的失落、锁门哭泣。母亲：隐忍、智慧：对打翻花瓶“ignored it”；面对质问仅shocked未斥责。父亲：理性：“listened carefully”后提出“stepped back”策略；智慧：提出“no cooking/laundry/searching”的方案。
答案与解析
原文情节线：Sophia是个叛逆的青春期女孩，她拒绝母亲准备的晚餐，心不在焉打翻花瓶；高声质问母亲擅自处理她的衣物和房间布置→父母决定“放手”，不再替她做饭洗衣→次日母亲不叫早、不做早餐；Sophia拿钱冲去学校；放学回家发现无晚餐→饿着肚子的Sophia在房间痛哭→妈妈带回食材让她自己做饭。
主题：改变成长
答案与解析
续写情节
第一段：衔接①：衔接首句 “母亲打开购物袋，让Sophia自主选择食材”：购物袋子里有什么 过渡句：妈妈让Sophia自己做喜爱的食物→Sophia选择做什么 下厨过程中是否遇到困难 妈妈是否给予她帮助。衔接②：尾句衔接第二段首句中的“醒来时决定改变”:她意识到做家务的困难。
答案与解析
第二段：衔接③：衔接首句中的“Sophia醒来时决心要改变”：Sophia为自己的行为向妈妈道歉。过渡句：妈妈接受Sophia的道歉→Sophia 开始帮助妈妈做更多的家务。尾句：场景描写+感悟升华：Sophia和妈妈一起做家务时的感悟。
答案与解析
Her mother opened the bags and asked Sophia to look and choose by herself. Inside were fresh vegetables and grains that Sophia loved. “You’re old enough to decide what to eat and how to manage your time,” her mother said softly, handing her a recipe book. Excited but nervous, Sophia decided to make a beef sandwich. Having never cooked before, she naturally had difficulty throughout the process. Fortunately, her mother offered her helpful instructions, resulting in a not-so-good dinner. Sophia realized how hard the housework was.
美文诵读
The next morning, Sophia woke up with the determination to change. She went to the kitchen where her mother was making breakfast and apologized for her recent strange behavior. Her mother replied gently, “It’s okay. I’m just happy you’re better.” Sophia hugged her and promised to help with more chores. Later that day, she sorted out (整理) her clothes without complaining and bought a new vase for
美文诵读
her mother after school. After dinner, as they washed the dishes together, Sophia understood that growing up meant learning to properly give rather than trying to take without any sense of gratitude (晚餐后，当她们一起洗碗时，索菲娅明白了：成长意味着学会恰当地给予，而非一味索取却不知感恩).
美文诵读
