(共13张PPT)
write emails using appropriate expressions.
clearly state your choice and provide reasonable reasons.
use functional language such as "choice", "reason", and "comparison".
Step 1 Lead in
1.The school is going to hold an International Culture Festival. What activity would you like to participate in why
Fashion Show. The cultures of various countries are presented.
Crafts Exhibition. Broaden our horizons and develop our creativity.
Instrumental performance. To enjoy the beauty of different musical instruments.
Food Sharing. It will enable us to taste varieties of food.
Step 1 Lead in
2. How can you make your arguments /reasons convincing /persuasive
The statement should be specific and vivid.
For example, we don’t say "the Costume Show is educational" but “it allows us to study the history, symbolic meanings and traditional production techniques behind various kinds of clothing.”
Step 2 Writing
假定你是李华,学校国际文化节要新增一个互动环节,外教Jenny提出“Cultural Costume Show”和“Traditional Food DIY”两个方案供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:1.你的选择;2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3.
Yours,
Li Hua
Activity 1 Determining the topic
1.Which plan would you like to choose
Cultural Costume Show / Traditional Food DIY.
2.What should be written in the first paragraph
Intention of writing: Why I write to you.
3.What should be written in the second paragraph
My choice and reasons: Which is my choice any why I choose it.
(The reason must be state in detail to make it persuasive.)
4.What should be written in the third paragraph
My expectation /appreciation /hope /wishes /feeling….
5.What should be noted when we are writing a letter
The communicative nature.
It means that we need to pay more attention to politeness, gentleness, confidence and persuasiveness in our expressions.
Activity 2 Extract the key phrases and sentences
Para. 1 (Intention)
Phrases:
provided us with two wonderful interactive proposals 为我们提供了两个极好的互动方案
my views/ideas 我的观点/想法
……
Sentences:
1.I am so glad to learn that ….
2.Here are my views on it.
3.I am writing to share my ideas on ….
……
Activity 2 Extract the key phrases and sentences
Para. 2 (Choice and Reasons)
Phrases:
better than比……好
have a better understanding of 有更深入的理解
a great chance一个很好的机会
make and show创造并展示
developing their creativity and teamwork培养他们的创造力和团队合作能力
an amazing window 一扇神奇的窗户
an effective way of …一种有效的……方法
……
Activity 2 Extract the key phrases and sentences
Para. 2 (Choice and Reasons)
Sentences:
1.Personally, I would prefer ….
2.It seems to me that… is better than….
3.The reasons are as follows.
4.First of all, I feel/think it….
5.What’s more, it would be a great change for students to….
6. This activity would allow us to....
……
Para. 3 (appreciation & wishes)
1.It would be my great privilege if you could take my suggestion into account.
如果您能将我的建议纳入考虑之中,那将是我莫大的荣幸。
2.Best wishes!
Activity 2 Extract the key phrases and sentences
Step 3 Complete the first draft
Attentions
1. 工整书写。
2. 提供2-3个理由。
3. 合理运用学过词汇和句型。
4. 词数80左右。
Step 4 Evaluation
互评:两人一组,根据以下清单交换作文并进行互评。
【评价清单】
□ 段落分配是否合理 ?
□ 理由是否充分且有说服力?
□ 是否使用了学过的词汇和句型?
□ 逻辑是否合理?
□ 有无重大语法错误?
□ 时态语态是否正确?
□ 语言表达是否体现交际性?
Step 5 A possible version
Dear Jenny,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3. I am so glad to learn that you have provided us with two wonderful interactive proposals for the international cultural festival. Here are my views on it.
It seems to me that “Cultural Costume Show” is better than “Traditional Food DIY”. Through it, we will have a better understanding of the clothing cultures and history of different parts of the world. What’s more, it would be a great chance for us to make and show multi-cultural costume, which will help us develop the creativity and teamwork.
It would be my great privilege if you could take my suggestion into account. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 6 Assignment
1. 将修改后的作文工整地誊写在作业本上。
2. 完成翻译练习。