高考英语 二轮专题 真题淘金 12大续写杀手锏

真题淘金！高考英语读后续写12大杀手锏
杀手锏Ⅰ：Seeing /hearing sth , sb felt a great sense of + 情绪名词 + welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb . 看到/听到……，某人感觉一股强烈的... 在内心升腾，奔涌
语用功能：感官导入，描绘人物在特定触发下产生的澎湃内心情感。
g.（2025新高考Ⅱ卷）Hearing my named called, I felt a great sense of nervousness and excitement welling up in my heart and surging through me. (听到叫到我的名字，一股强烈的紧张与兴奋感在我心中翻涌升腾，席卷全身。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing his kind gesture, I felt a great sense of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me. I was so touched by his trust and generosity in this foreign land.（看到他友善的举动，一股强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。在这个异国他乡，他的信任和慷慨让我深受感动。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing the return address of the writing contest committee, I felt a great sense of anticipation welling up in my heart and surging through me. （看到写作比赛委员会的回信地址，一种强烈的期待感在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)Hearing my teacher’s voice calling me in, I felt a great sense of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me. （听到老师叫我进去，一种强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。）
杀手锏2:one’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm sweating (独立主格结构） , an inner voice told sb that ... 某人的心在跳，手掌在冒汗，心中有一个声音在说...
语用功能：展现人物内心的挣扎、决心等，强化戏剧冲突，深化人物刻画。
E.g.（2025新高考Ⅰ卷）My heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that I should knock at the door and apologized to my brother sincerely.(心跳如擂鼓，掌心汗湿，心底有个声音告诉我：该去敲门，向弟弟诚心道个歉。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Standing beside the taxi, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that this was a huge mess and I might lose this kind - hearted driver’s trust.（站在出租车旁，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒冷汗，内心有个声音在说，这下可糟透了，我可能会失去这位好心司机的信任。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)As I waited for Gunter to pick up the phone, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to show my gratitude properly.（在等待冈特接电话的时候，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，我必须好好表达自己的感激之情。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)My heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that this could be the result of the writing contest. （我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，这可能是写作比赛的结果。）
杀手锏3：Seeing ..., overwhelmed with ....（情感名词）， sb did sth . 看到……，充满……，某人做了某事。
语用功能：描绘人物在强烈情感驱动下的即时、非理性行为。
E.g.(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing his unwavering trust and kindness, overwhelmed with gratitude, I hugged him tightly and promised to repay him no matter what happened.（看到他眼中那份不变的信任与善意，感恩之情如潮水般将我淹没。我紧紧拥抱住他，并承诺无论未来发生什么，必将回报这份恩情。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing his familiar face, overwhelmed with a mix of joy and relief, I rushed to give him an envelope filled with the money and a handwritten thank - you note. （看到他熟悉的面容，喜悦与宽慰交织的情感瞬间将我淹没。我冲上前，将一个装满钱和手写感谢信的信封递给了他。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing the official seal of the writing contest committee on the envelope, overwhelmed with a mix of curiosity and nervousness, I tore it open with trembling fingers. （看到信封上写作比赛委员会的公章，我心中满是好奇与紧张，颤抖着手指将它拆开。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)Seeing my teacher sitting at his desk, overwhelmed with gratitude, I placed the medal gently on his desk. （看到老师坐在办公桌前，我心中满是感激之情，于是轻轻地把奖章放在了他的桌上。）
杀手锏4：The moment + 句子, sb did sth. / Hardly ... when ... / No sooner ... than ... /Barely…when .../Upon doing sth, sb did sth.
语用功能：某个场景一出现，人物动作或反应便紧随其后。
g.(2024新高考Ⅰ卷）Upon realizing I had no way to pay, Gunter reached into his pocket and pulled out some cash, which left me speechless with shock and gratitude. (冈特一意识到我没钱支付，就伸手从口袋里掏出一些现金，这让我震惊得说不出话，心中满是感激。)
（2024新高考Ⅰ卷）Hardly had his taxi pulled up when I rushed forward with a bouquet of flowers in hand, which brought a wide smile to his face.(他的黄色出租车一停下，我就手捧一束鲜花快步迎上前去，这让他脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。)
（2023新高考Ⅰ卷）The moment I saw the bold words "First Prize Winner" printed on the letter, I jumped out of my seat, which surprised my classmates sitting nearby. (我一看到信上印着醒目的 “一等奖获得者” 几个字，我就从座位上一跃而起，这一举动让坐在旁边的同学们大吃一惊。)
杀手锏5：动作A + 动作 B + and动作 C
语用功能：分解动作，形成动作链 ， 使之更加有画面感
E.g. (2025新高考Ⅰ卷)One evening, I picked up the phone ，left him a voice message and asked if we could meet.(一天傍晚，我拿起电话，给他留了一条语音信息，询问我们能否见一面。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)I searched every corner of my wallet, reached into my pockets, and even emptied my bag, hoping to find some cash hidden somewhere. （我翻遍了钱包的每个角落，翻找着口袋，甚至倒空了包，希望能找到藏在某个地方的现金。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)I picked up the phone, dialed Gunter's number, and waited anxiously for him to answer.（我拿起电话，拨通了 Gunter 的号码，焦急地等待他接听。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)I ran like crazy through the airport building, jumped into the first taxi on the rank and told the driver my destination.（我疯狂地跑过机场大楼，跳上排队的第一辆出租车并告诉司机我的目的地。）
杀手锏6： Doing sth(时间或原因状语), 主语+谓语动词..., +doing sth(伴随状语)/非限制性定语从句
语用功能：展现行为的背景、核心动作与伴随细节。
E.g.(2025新高考Ⅰ卷) Sitting on the porch with Toby resting beside us,we talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding what had been lost.（我们坐在门廊上，托比静静卧在一旁。我们聊了许久，时而开怀大笑，时而追忆往昔，那些曾失落的温情，也在话语间被慢慢寻回。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Rushing through the crowded terminal, I charged towards the taxi stand, gasping for breath as I waved down a cab.（在拥挤的航站楼里狂奔，我冲向出租车停靠点，一边大口喘气一边挥手拦车。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷）Staring at the empty wallet in disbelief, I stammered an apology to Gunter, feeling a wave of embarrassment wash over me.（难以置信地盯着空空的钱包，我结结巴巴地向冈特道歉，一阵羞愧感涌上心头。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷）Nodding gratefully at his understanding smile, I promised to pay him back, setting down my contact information on a napkin quickly.（感激地对他理解的微笑点头，我承诺还钱，同时在餐巾纸上匆匆写下联系方式。）
杀手锏7： Adj and adj as sb was/were (倒装）, sb did sth, doing短语(作状语) 虽然......，但是......
语用功能：即便怀着某种情绪，仍做出相反动作，充满反差感。
E.g.(2025新高考Ⅰ卷)Nervous and awkward as I was, I plucked up my courage and apologized to him.(尽管我内心紧张又笨拙，还是鼓起勇气，向他道了歉。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Grateful and relieved as I was, I returned to Vienna on schedule, contacting Gunter immediately to arrange the repayment.（尽管我满心感激与释然，还是按时回到维也纳，立即联系冈特安排还款。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Nervous and desperate as I was, I forced a smile at Gunter, explaining that I could transfer money via a mobile app.（尽管我紧张又绝望，还是朝冈特挤出一个微笑，解释说我可以用手机应用转账。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Exhausted and panicked as I felt, I rummaged through my bag frantically, hoping to find some forgotten coins.（尽管我疲惫又惊慌，还是疯狂地翻找背包，希望能找到几枚遗忘的硬币。）
杀手锏8：“...” sb said /其他说, his voice filled with 感情名词 “.....”
语用功能：对话自带肢体特效，说话时搭配动作或情绪。
E.g.(2025新高考Ⅰ卷)“Thank you,” he said quietly，his voice filled with relief.(“谢谢你。”他轻声说道，声音里满是如释重负。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷) “Don't worry about the fare. Just contact me when you're free.”Gunter said, his voice filled with warmth.(“别担心车费。有空联系我就行。”,他说道，声音里满是温暖。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷) "Congratulations," he said, his voice filled with delight and excitement.(“恭喜你。”他说，声音里满是高兴和兴奋。)
杀手锏9： it suddenly dawned on sb that sb should do sth ... 某人突然意识到……
语用功能：灵光乍现，瞬间明白某个道理或事实真相。
E.g.(2025新高考Ⅱ卷)It suddenly dawned on me that by embracing my cultural identity, I was not only preserving my heritage but also enriching the lives of those around me.(我忽然领悟到，拥抱自己的文化身份，不仅是在守护自身的传统，也是在丰富身边每一个人的生活。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Just as I was on the verge of tears, it suddenly dawned on me that I should call my friend in Vienna, who might be able to transfer money to Gunter. （就在我快要哭出来的时候，我突然想到，我应该给在维也纳的朋友打电话，他也许能给冈特转账。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)As the principal read out the list of the winners of the writing contest, my mind wandered—until I heard my name. Stunned, I dropped my pencil. It suddenly dawned on me that I should share this moment with the person who believed in me from the start: my teacher. （当校长宣读写作比赛的获奖者名单时，我思绪飘远 —— 直到听到了我的名字。我惊愕不已，手中的铅笔掉落在地。我突然意识到，我应该与那个从一开始就相信我的人分享这一刻：我的老师。）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)Holding the medal and certificate, I stepped into the room. My teacher looked up, his eyes brightening. It suddenly dawned on me that I should express not just thanks, but also how his encouragement had transformed my self - doubt into confidence. （我握着奖牌和证书，走进房间。老师抬起头，眼睛亮了起来。我突然意识到，我不仅应该表达感谢，还应该告诉他，他的鼓励是如何将我的自我怀疑转化为自信的。）
杀手锏10: What 情绪v. sb was that +从句
语用功能：解释一个强烈情绪反应的直接、具体原因。
E.g. （2025新高考Ⅱ卷）What surprised me was that when I spoke, my classmates fixed their attention on me,their eyes reflecting curiosity and respect.(让我惊讶的是，当我开口时，同学们都专注地望向我，他们的眼神里写满了好奇与尊重。)
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)What worried me was that I still had no idea how to pay Gunter back as I was short of money at that moment.(让我担心的是，由于当时我资金短缺，仍然不知道如何偿还甘特的车费。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)What astonished me was that I had been awarded the top prize in the writing contest. (令我惊讶的是，我在写作比赛中获得了一等奖。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)What overwhelmed me was that the judges praised my essay for its unique perspective and vivid storytelling from the horse’s point of view. (让我激动不已的是，评委们称赞了我的文章，说它视角独特，从马的视角进行的叙述生动形象。)
杀手锏11: with+宾语+宾语补足语 复合结构
语用功能：描绘背景画面或伴随情景
E.g.(2024新高考Ⅰ卷) When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, with a generous tip that he turned down.（当他把出租车停在机场外时，我为他“往返于机场和汽车站的载客服务”付了钱，并给了一笔慷慨的小费，却被他谢绝了。）
(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)With a nervous voice, I stammered out my situation to the driver. However, instead of getting angry, he just listened patiently. (我声音紧张，结结巴巴地向司机讲述了我的情况。然而，他没有生气，而是耐心地听着。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)With my heart pounding wildly, I opened the official letter and discovered that I had won first place in the writing contest. (我的心疯狂地跳动着，我打开了那封官方来信，然后发现自己在写作比赛中获得了第一名。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)With memories of countless late-night revisions flooding my mind, I realized how far I had come. (无数次深夜修改的记忆如潮水般涌上心头，我意识到自己已经取得了很大的进步。)
杀手锏12: 修辞手法
语用功能：从抽象到具象，化无形为有形
明喻
E.g.I feel as if I were floating in an ocean of sadness.(我感觉自己好像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。)
She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body.(她感觉自己的心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。)
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)My hands were shaking like leaves as I tore it open. Inside was a letter stating that I had won the first prize! （我撕开信封时，双手像树叶一样颤抖。里面是一封信，宣布我获得了一等奖！）
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)My heart leaped like a startled deer in my chest. （我的心在胸腔里像受惊的小鹿一样猛地跳动。）
暗喻
E.g.I felt a lump in my throat，tears welling up in my eyes.(我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。)
With the college entrance exam approaching, I often have butterflies in my stomach, but I try to calm myself by reviewing notes carefully.(随着高考临近，我常常感到紧张，但我会通过认真复习笔记来平复自己。)
拟人
E.g.A sense of fear seized/swallowed him.(恐惧把他吞噬了。)
Anger choked my words.(我气得说不出话来。)
A good idea suddenly struck me.(我突然想到一个好主意。)
夸张
E.g.My heart broke in about a million pieces.(我的心成了碎片。)
I almost laughed my head off.(我都快笑死了。)
When they told me the news，I was over the moon/on the top of the world.(当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。)
It brought my heart into my mouth.(它让我的心悬到了嗓子眼。)