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Welcome to 高 考 英 语
书 面 表 达 写 作 技 巧
Writing skills:
What makes a better composition
A Letter of Suggestion
Step 1. Lead-in: Picture showing
①
②
Good handwriting
首尾句精彩
三四个关联词
①②
要点齐全
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第一段
第二段
第三段
首尾句精彩
Step2 What makes a better composition
三段十句
要点齐全
首尾句精彩
二三复合句
三四个关联词
书写规范工整
全国高考书面表达涉及的建议信
试 卷 命题形式 体 裁 话题
2008山东卷 汉语+提纲 书信(建议信) 给无法融入新班级的张明同学写一封建议信
2008全国Ⅱ卷 汉语+提纲 书信(建议信) 给Peter回信建议如何学好中文
2011新课标Ⅱ卷 汉语+提纲 书信(建议信) 你喜欢的Globle Mirror周报五周年之际征求意见,给编辑写信
2014安徽卷 汉语 + 提纲 书信(建议信) 给中学生Worried提出建议如何解决他的困扰
2018全国1卷 汉语 + 提纲 书信(建议信) 新西兰朋友Terry要去中国家庭做客,要你给他回信提一些建议
2019北京卷 汉语 + 提纲 书信(建议信) 英国好友Jim将来中国旅游给他回信提些建议
You asked me about……,now let me give you some advice.
Step3 Reviewing: 建议信的写作步骤
1. I would like to suggest that ...①
2.Why not ...②/ Why don‘t you...?
3.I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could...③
4.It's important to ...④
It helps to...
/ It should be a good idea to...
第一段2句: 直入正题/写信的目的
第二段6句:列出所提建议及这样做的好处
第三段2句:写出写信人的希望
I hope you will find these recommendations /suggestions helpful.
I am looking forward to receiving your letter.
Step4. How to make a better composition
小结1 审: 审体裁、主题、时态和人称
2018全国I卷
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向
你询问有关习俗,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;
2.合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
体裁
信:建议信
一般将来时
一般现在时
主题/话题
时态
什么事
你
第几人称
小结2 抓: 根据内容抓出汉语主要要点及次要点
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发
邮件向你询问有关习俗,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;
2.合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪。
3个要点
次要点
小结3:表 用英文单词或短语把要点表述出来
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件
向你询问有关习俗,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;
2.合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪。
arrive early, arrive on time, at least don’t be late; …
bring some proper gifts
avoid making noise, speaking mouthfully or rummaging in the
plate…..
小结4:扩 扩词成句,将英文要点的词或短语扩展成句子。
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;Arrive early/arrive on time, at least don’t be late; …
You can arrive early.
First, it is polite for you to arrive early.
加主语:
套用句型和顺序词:
换高级词汇及短语:
To begin with, it is polite for you to arrive early.
To begin with, it is polite for you to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner.
加从句表目的/原因/条件等:
妙用介词和非谓语动词:
To begin with, arriving early, you can help the family prepare the dinner.
小结4:扩 扩词成句,将英文要点的词或短语扩展成句子。
扩句练习:
2.合适的礼物;bring some proper gifts
You can bring some proper gifts.
加主语:
换高级词汇及短语:
You had better bring some proper gifts.
增加细节等(带什么礼物):
加各种从句(表目的/原因/条件等)
You had better bring some proper gifts,for example you can take along a bunch of flowers or a book.
You had better bring some proper gifts,for example you can take along a bunch of flowers or a book, which can delight your hosts.
小结4:扩 扩词成句,将英文要点的词或短语扩展成句子。
扩句练习:
3.餐桌礼仪avoid making noises/ speaking mouthfully / rummaging in the plate
You need to avoid making noises
加主语:
换高级词汇及短语:
增加细节等(什么时候?):
When you are eating, you need to avoid making noises.
When you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises.
小结5:连 用各种关联词连句成文
Dear Terry,
How are you doing In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
To begin with, it is polite for you to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner.
You had better bring some proper gifts,for example you can take along a bunch of flowers or a book, which can delight your hosts.
When you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. May you have a great time.
Best wishes!
Additionally,
Besides,
What’s more,
In addition,
小结: Remember seven steps!“七字诀”
Don’t forget :
6. 改 修改检查 1.拼写和标点 2.语法和逻辑是否有误
3.要点是否全面 4.措辞及句式是否恰当
7. 抄 誊抄时书写规范,正确,美观,卷面整洁。
部分关联词:
First, then / next, after that ,Besides / what's more /
in addition / furthermore/
for instance/to sum up/ generally speaking/ in my opinion
Step5 writing
Group work
(2008全国Ⅱ卷)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。
(1) 参加中文学习班;(2) 看中文书刊、电视
(3) 学唱中文歌曲; (4) 交中国朋友。
注意:词数100词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
体裁
主题
时态?
人称
抓——内容要点
主要要点
次要点
1、参加中文学习班
2、看中文书刊、电视
3、学唱中文歌曲
4、交中国朋友
(1)、英国朋友
(2)、来信咨询
“七字诀” 之
表——表述要点、次要点
问候英国朋友:
来信咨询:
1、参加中文学习班:
read some Chinese books and magazines
learn to sing some Chinese songs
4、交中国朋友:
用英语词组
用英语单词
“七字诀” 之
How is it going?
receive your letter.
take a Chinese course
2、看中文书刊、电视:
3、学唱中文歌曲:
make some Chinese friends
扩——扩词成句
1、参加中文学习班
You can take a Chinese course
2、看中文书刊、电视
you can read some Chinese books and magazines
3、学唱中文歌曲
You can learn to sing some Chinese songs
4、交中国朋友
You can make some Chinese friends
第三段
第二段
“七字诀” 之
第一段
英国朋友
How is it going?
来信咨询
I'm glad to receive your letter asking me...
I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial
连——连句成文
注意以下几点
主谓一致
时态
背景(添时间地点条件等)
逻辑关系
语篇衔接
“七字诀” 之
Step6 presentation
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking . Here are some suggestions.
You can take a Chinese course.
you can read some Chinese books and magazines.
You can learn to sing some Chinese songs
You can make some Chinese friends
I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese. Looking forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese.
Best wishes.
Step7 Summary and Homework
Summary
What have you learnt in this class
1.高分写作要求
2.建议信写作步骤 :
3.书面表达技巧:
Homework
(2019年北京卷)假设你是高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件咨询相关事情。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行; 2.必备衣物;3.其他。
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
三段十句, 要点齐全, 首尾句精彩 , 二三复合句, 三四个关联词 ,书写规范工整
开头段2句,直入正题。
主题段6句,列出所提建议及这样做的好处。
结尾段2句,写出写信人的希望。
“七字诀” :“审、抓、表、扩、连、改、抄”
Thank you
for listening
“Rome wasn't built in a day!”
So keep trying to write a better composition.