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Continuation
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Vicky
牛津译林版选择性必修一教材 U1&U2
Unit 1 Honesty and responsibility
教材语料
亮 词 情感描写:keen;burden;guilty;ashamed;disappointed;
discouraged;rejoice;mercy→merciful
动作描写:forgive (forgave,forgiven);cheat;bow;embrace
美 句 ①In the doorway of a store stood a man, with an unlit cigar in his
mouth.(场景描写)
②About twenty minutes later, a tall man in a long overcoat, with
collar turned up to his ears,hurried toward him.(人物描写)
拓展语料
修辞手法之“比喻”
明 喻 like像 The smile on the boy’s face shone like a diamond.
男孩脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
as ...as 和……一样 She walked as slowly as a snail.
她走得像蜗牛一样慢。
as if 好像 My father’s hair has turned gray,as if (it were) covered with snow and frost.
我父亲的头发变白了,简直像盖了一层皑皑的霜雪。
教材语料
亮 词 情感描写:keen;burden;guilty;ashamed;disappointed;
discouraged;rejoice;mercy→merciful
动作描写:forgive (forgave,forgiven);cheat;bow;embrace
美 句 ①In the doorway of a store stood a man, with an unlit cigar in his mouth.(场景描写)
②About twenty minutes later, a tall man in a long overcoat, with collar turned up to his ears,hurried toward him.
(人物描写)
情境导语 在和父母发生了激烈的争吵之后,汤姆愤怒地离开了
家……
第一步 完成句子
1. 汤姆像鸭子一样左摇右摆,漫无目的地走在大街上。
Tom swayed left and right
.(明喻)
like a duck, aimlessly walking on the
street
When looking up
which reminded him of his
mother’s love for him
an unexplored river
Everything
will turn out right
2. 一抬头,他看到了一个鸟巢。
,he caught sight of a bird nest.(状语从句
的省略)
3. 他看到鸟妈妈在喂它的孩子,这让他想起了他母亲对他的爱。
He saw a mother bird feeding her child,
.(非限制性定语从句)
4. “生活就是一条未被探索的河流,有各种曲折。一切都会好起来
的。”他自言自语地说。
“Life is ,full of twists and turns.
,” he said to himself.(暗喻;心理活动)
determined to say “sorry” to his parents
5. 最后,他高兴起来,决定对父母说声“对不起”。
At last he cheered up, .
(过去分词作状语)
第二步 连句成文
Tom swayed left and right like a duck, aimlessly walking on the
street.When looking up,he caught sight of a bird nest.He saw a mother
bird feeding her child, which reminded him of his mother’s love for
him.“Life is an unexplored river,full of twists and turns.Everything
will turn out right,” he said to himself.At last he cheered up,
determined to say “sorry” to his parents.
Unit 2
Understanding each other
教材语料
厚积薄发,下笔有神
亮 词 情感描写:gentle;empathy→empathize;sympathy;embarrassed;tolerate;pessimistic;sincerely
动作描写:react;obtain;fold;gain;gesture;recite;slip
美 句 ①A smile shows you are attentive to the issues being discussed, while looking away with your arms folded can indicate disinterest and create distrust or friction.(场景描写)
②If someone looks at you with a confused expression, this could
indicate that they have not completely understood your point.
(心理描写)
③Seek to understand the other person’s emotions,by putting
yourself in their shoes and looking at the situation from their
perspective.(主旨升华)
拓展语料
动作描写修辞手法之“拟人”
自然景物拟人 The little stars in the night sky are blinking their eyes, as
if smiling at you.
夜空中的小星星眨着眼睛,似乎在对你微笑。
物体拟人 In the morning, the alarm clock kept calling me
loudly, and I quickly got up.
早晨,闹钟不停地大声呼唤着我,我赶紧起了床。
情境导语 一家人决定做爆米花来帮助伯纳德,接下来是他们做爆米
花的激动人心的时刻……
第一步 完成句子
1. 经过几次尝试,他们终于成功了,爆米花在锅里欢快地歌唱。
with the popcorn singing
happily in the pan
After several attempts, they finally made it,
.(with复合结构;拟人的修辞手法)
beautiful flowers were smiling
standing at the door
skipped in the yard like birds
2. 孩子们开心地跳着出去给伯纳德送可口的爆米花,美丽的花儿
在微笑。
The children danced out happily/joyfully to send the tasty popcorn to
Bernard and .(拟人的修辞手法)
3. 他的母亲站在门口, 喜极而泣。
His mother, , wept for joy.(非谓语动
词作状语)
4. 孩子们开心地笑着,像鸟儿一样在院子里蹦蹦跳跳。
The children laughed happily, and .
(比喻的修辞手法)
情境导语 一只小蝴蝶正拼命扇动翅膀却无法从地面上飞起来。这时
一辆卡车驶来……
第一步 完成句子
1. 我不假思索地举起手示意卡车司机不要往前开,然后弯下腰去看那
只蝴蝶。
Without thinking, I
, and
.(动作描写)
held my hand up to signal the truck driver
not to move forward
bent down to look at the butterfly
5. 天上出现闪闪的繁星,高兴地向他们眨眼睛。
Stars appeared in the sky,
.(拟人的修辞手法)
twinkling their eyes at them with
happiness
My eyes shone brighter and my heart felt lighter
5. 看着它,我的目光似乎更加明亮,心里感到更加轻松了。
as I watched it.(并
列句;情感描写)
第二步 连句成文
After several attempts, they finally made it, with the popcorn
singing happily in the pan.The children danced out happily/joyfully to
send the tasty popcorn to Bernard and beautiful flowers were smiling.His
mother, standing at the door, wept for joy.The children laughed
happily, and skipped in the yard like birds.
Stars appeared in the sky, twinkling their eyes at them with
happiness.
THANK YOU!