2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写课件(共26张PPT)
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(共26张PPT)
Powerpoint
读后续写
PART
01
一、故事基本要素剖析
一、审题立意
这是一篇续写类记叙文，核心是围绕 Eddy 的自行车赛车梦想展开。立意在于展现坚持与热爱的力量，即使面对外界质疑和多次失败，也要为梦想全力以赴，最终收获成长与喜悦。
二、梳理六要素（who,where,when,what,why,how）
who： 主角 Eddy，还有他的爸爸、爸爸的前队
友 Mark，以及其他参赛的骑手。
where：故事发生在比利时布鲁塞尔，涉及
当地赛车场、城镇和田野间的比赛路线等。
when：从 Eddy 四岁开始学骑车，到十六岁参
加各类本地比赛，时间跨度十几年，重
点聚焦在他十六岁时的一场 8 圈赛。
what：Eddy 从小热爱自行车，梦想成为职业车手。
他打工买赛车、刻苦训练，尽管多次比赛失利
仍不放弃，最终参加了一场难度不小的 8 圈赛。
why：Eddy热爱自行车运动，受爸爸和 Mark 的影响，
坚信自己有天赋，渴望成为最快的车手，所以
即使遭遇失败和质疑也坚持参赛。
how：Eddy 从四岁学骑车时的坚持不懈，到后来打工
攒钱买赛车、每晚训练，再到十六岁时在质疑
声中参加 8 圈赛，续写部分需要围绕他在这场
比赛中的表现（如何应对对手、如何坚持到最
后以及赛后的收获来展开。）
三、梳理情节脉络
1.童年启蒙阶段
四岁时看到新自行车，立刻学习骑行，尽管多次摔倒仍不放弃，很快掌握转弯、刹车等骑行技巧。
2.梦想萌芽阶段
受父亲影响观看本地赛车比赛，认识父亲的前赛车队友 Mark，在 Mark 职业规划的启发下，立志成为职业自行车手。
3.逐梦筹备阶段
做牛奶配送工，攒钱购买属于自己的赛车。
每天晚上在广场上刻苦训练，俯身车把模拟竞速场景。
4.参赛受挫阶段
十六岁后参加多场本地比赛，均未获得胜利，父亲曾建议他尝试做体育老师，但他因热爱和对自身天赋的坚信，拒绝转行，坚持继续参赛。
5.关键赛事阶段
报名参加一场穿越城镇和田野的 8 圈赛，父亲送他到起点，其他骑手因他身材瘦小而嘲笑他无法完赛。
Para 1: 发令枪响后，他将如何在比赛中应对对手、坚持赛程。
Para 2: 比赛结束后，他虽身体疲惫但内心充满幸福，这场比赛让他收获了什么。
四、伏笔与回扣点分析
伏笔 1：“He wobbled and fell off several times, but wouldn't give up.”
回扣点：续写中 Eddy 在比赛里即便面对强大对手和漫长赛程，也会像小时候学骑车一样，不因困难放弃，凭借坚持完成比赛。
伏笔 2：“Every evening, he'd ride it around the square, bending low over the handlebars to cut through the wind.”
回扣点：比赛中 Eddy 会运用每晚训练时练就的俯身减风阻技巧，在竞速中保持优势，体现训练的价值。
伏笔 3：“he felt a talent for it, and he wanted to be the fastest.”
回扣点：尽管赛前被其他骑手嘲笑，Eddy 仍会凭借对自身天赋的信念，在比赛中展现速度与技巧，证明自己。
伏笔 4：“Dad said. ‘I’m hoping to go fully professional next year,’ Mark added. Eddy's eyes lit up. ‘I want to be a professional too,’ he blurted out.”
回扣点：这场比赛的经历会让 Eddy 离职业车手的梦想更近一步，是他追梦路上的关键一步，呼应他最初的职业志向。
PART
02
二、语料表达积累
一、情感表达类
1．因多年热爱而满怀坚毅：
be full of resolve from years of passion
2．眼中闪耀对胜利的执着：
eyes shining with persistence for victory
3．心中因圆梦而激荡：heart surging with excitement from dream fulfillment
4．满是对永不言弃的感佩：overflowing with admiration for never giving up
1.A bright smile spread across his face, eyes glistening with the thrill of triumph and gratitude for his unyielding pursuit. His heart swelled with pride for the dream he’d held onto and the grit he’d displayed.（他脸上绽开灿烂的笑容，眼中闪烁着胜利的激动和对自己不懈追求的感激。他的心中因坚守的梦想和展现的勇气而满是自豪。）
二、动作描写类
1．强忍酸痛猛蹬踏板：
grit through muscle soreness to pedal fiercely
2．摇摇晃晃却咬牙稳住车身：
wobble but clench teeth to steady the bike
3．耗尽体力仍奋力摆臂加速：
exhaust energy yet swing arms to accelerate
4．顶着风阻俯身冲刺：
lean forward to sprint against wind resistance
1.Eddy’s legs screamed in pain, but he gritted through muscle soreness to pedal fiercely, each stroke a battle against exhaustion. When a rider tried to overtake him, he leaned forward to sprint against wind resistance, refusing to let up even for a second.（埃迪的双腿疼得尖叫，但他强忍酸痛猛蹬踏板，每一次蹬踏都是与疲惫的抗争。当有骑手试图超越他时，他俯身顶着风阻冲刺，一秒钟都不肯松懈。）
三、场景描写类
1．充满挑战与荣耀的赛场：
a racecourse full of challenges and glory
2．空气中弥漫着拼搏的热血：
the air permeated with the spirit of striving
3．赛道上镌刻着坚持的身影：
the track marked with a figure of persistence
4．父子与梦想交织的荣耀时刻：
a glorious moment where father and son
intertwine with dreams
1.The once-daunting race now seemed conquerable, and the racecourse was permeated with the spirit of striving and passion. Cheers erupted as he crossed the finish line, surrounded by the realization of his dream.
（曾经令人生畏的比赛现在似乎可以征服了，赛场上弥漫着拼搏与激情的气息。当他冲过终点线时，欢呼声爆发，他被梦想实现的喜悦环绕。）
四、主旨升华类
1．热爱为拼搏注入动能：
passion infusing energy into striving
2．坚持让梦想绽放：
persistence making dreams blossom
3．信念让突破成为必然：
faith making breakthroughs inevitable
4．骑行是热爱与成长的勋章：
cycling is a badge of passion and growth
5．勇气与坚持铸就的里程碑：
a milestone built on courage and persistence
1.This race not only marked his first triumph but also highlighted the power of passion and persistence. His unwavering resolve proved that no challenge is insurmountable when you cling to your dream.（这场比赛不仅标志着他的首次 胜利，也凸显了热爱和坚持的力量。他坚定不移的决心证明，当你坚守梦想时，没有什么挑战是无法克服的。）
PART
03
三、范文赏析
When the starting gun went off, the other riders rushed forward in a group. Eddy was immediately left behind, the older cyclists' mocking words echoing in his mind. For a moment, panic gripped him. But then he remembered all those evenings of practice, his dad's unconditional support, and the dream that had kept him going. He settled into a steady pace, leaning low over the handlebars as he always did. Through the town and into the fields, he began to gain ground. On the final lap, seeing a gap open between the leading riders, he pushed with all his might to cross the finish line.
Eddy got off his bike, his legs shaky and his body exhausted, yet filled with incredible happiness. Though he hadn't won, he'd finished a respectable third. An even greater reward came when the same riders who'd laughed at him now nodded in respect. His dad rushed over, eyes shining with pride. "You showed them what you're made of, son! Mark was here—he saw your finish!" In that moment, Eddy knew this was just the beginning. He hadn't just completed the race; he had proven that with enough determination, even the biggest dreams were within reach.
Powerpoint
读后续写
PART
01
一、故事基本要素剖析
一、审题立意
这是一篇续写类记叙文，核心是围绕 Eddy 的自行车赛车梦想展开。立意在于展现坚持与热爱的力量，即使面对外界质疑和多次失败，也要为梦想全力以赴，最终收获成长与喜悦。
二、梳理六要素（who,where,when,what,why,how）
who： 主角 Eddy，还有他的爸爸、爸爸的前队
友 Mark，以及其他参赛的骑手。
where：故事发生在比利时布鲁塞尔，涉及
当地赛车场、城镇和田野间的比赛路线等。
when：从 Eddy 四岁开始学骑车，到十六岁参
加各类本地比赛，时间跨度十几年，重
点聚焦在他十六岁时的一场 8 圈赛。
what：Eddy 从小热爱自行车，梦想成为职业车手。
他打工买赛车、刻苦训练，尽管多次比赛失利
仍不放弃，最终参加了一场难度不小的 8 圈赛。
why：Eddy热爱自行车运动，受爸爸和 Mark 的影响，
坚信自己有天赋，渴望成为最快的车手，所以
即使遭遇失败和质疑也坚持参赛。
how：Eddy 从四岁学骑车时的坚持不懈，到后来打工
攒钱买赛车、每晚训练，再到十六岁时在质疑
声中参加 8 圈赛，续写部分需要围绕他在这场
比赛中的表现（如何应对对手、如何坚持到最
后以及赛后的收获来展开。）
三、梳理情节脉络
1.童年启蒙阶段
四岁时看到新自行车，立刻学习骑行，尽管多次摔倒仍不放弃，很快掌握转弯、刹车等骑行技巧。
2.梦想萌芽阶段
受父亲影响观看本地赛车比赛，认识父亲的前赛车队友 Mark，在 Mark 职业规划的启发下，立志成为职业自行车手。
3.逐梦筹备阶段
做牛奶配送工，攒钱购买属于自己的赛车。
每天晚上在广场上刻苦训练，俯身车把模拟竞速场景。
4.参赛受挫阶段
十六岁后参加多场本地比赛，均未获得胜利，父亲曾建议他尝试做体育老师，但他因热爱和对自身天赋的坚信，拒绝转行，坚持继续参赛。
5.关键赛事阶段
报名参加一场穿越城镇和田野的 8 圈赛，父亲送他到起点，其他骑手因他身材瘦小而嘲笑他无法完赛。
Para 1: 发令枪响后，他将如何在比赛中应对对手、坚持赛程。
Para 2: 比赛结束后，他虽身体疲惫但内心充满幸福，这场比赛让他收获了什么。
四、伏笔与回扣点分析
伏笔 1：“He wobbled and fell off several times, but wouldn't give up.”
回扣点：续写中 Eddy 在比赛里即便面对强大对手和漫长赛程，也会像小时候学骑车一样，不因困难放弃，凭借坚持完成比赛。
伏笔 2：“Every evening, he'd ride it around the square, bending low over the handlebars to cut through the wind.”
回扣点：比赛中 Eddy 会运用每晚训练时练就的俯身减风阻技巧，在竞速中保持优势，体现训练的价值。
伏笔 3：“he felt a talent for it, and he wanted to be the fastest.”
回扣点：尽管赛前被其他骑手嘲笑，Eddy 仍会凭借对自身天赋的信念，在比赛中展现速度与技巧，证明自己。
伏笔 4：“Dad said. ‘I’m hoping to go fully professional next year,’ Mark added. Eddy's eyes lit up. ‘I want to be a professional too,’ he blurted out.”
回扣点：这场比赛的经历会让 Eddy 离职业车手的梦想更近一步，是他追梦路上的关键一步，呼应他最初的职业志向。
PART
02
二、语料表达积累
一、情感表达类
1．因多年热爱而满怀坚毅：
be full of resolve from years of passion
2．眼中闪耀对胜利的执着：
eyes shining with persistence for victory
3．心中因圆梦而激荡：heart surging with excitement from dream fulfillment
4．满是对永不言弃的感佩：overflowing with admiration for never giving up
1.A bright smile spread across his face, eyes glistening with the thrill of triumph and gratitude for his unyielding pursuit. His heart swelled with pride for the dream he’d held onto and the grit he’d displayed.（他脸上绽开灿烂的笑容，眼中闪烁着胜利的激动和对自己不懈追求的感激。他的心中因坚守的梦想和展现的勇气而满是自豪。）
二、动作描写类
1．强忍酸痛猛蹬踏板：
grit through muscle soreness to pedal fiercely
2．摇摇晃晃却咬牙稳住车身：
wobble but clench teeth to steady the bike
3．耗尽体力仍奋力摆臂加速：
exhaust energy yet swing arms to accelerate
4．顶着风阻俯身冲刺：
lean forward to sprint against wind resistance
1.Eddy’s legs screamed in pain, but he gritted through muscle soreness to pedal fiercely, each stroke a battle against exhaustion. When a rider tried to overtake him, he leaned forward to sprint against wind resistance, refusing to let up even for a second.（埃迪的双腿疼得尖叫，但他强忍酸痛猛蹬踏板，每一次蹬踏都是与疲惫的抗争。当有骑手试图超越他时，他俯身顶着风阻冲刺，一秒钟都不肯松懈。）
三、场景描写类
1．充满挑战与荣耀的赛场：
a racecourse full of challenges and glory
2．空气中弥漫着拼搏的热血：
the air permeated with the spirit of striving
3．赛道上镌刻着坚持的身影：
the track marked with a figure of persistence
4．父子与梦想交织的荣耀时刻：
a glorious moment where father and son
intertwine with dreams
1.The once-daunting race now seemed conquerable, and the racecourse was permeated with the spirit of striving and passion. Cheers erupted as he crossed the finish line, surrounded by the realization of his dream.
（曾经令人生畏的比赛现在似乎可以征服了，赛场上弥漫着拼搏与激情的气息。当他冲过终点线时，欢呼声爆发，他被梦想实现的喜悦环绕。）
四、主旨升华类
1．热爱为拼搏注入动能：
passion infusing energy into striving
2．坚持让梦想绽放：
persistence making dreams blossom
3．信念让突破成为必然：
faith making breakthroughs inevitable
4．骑行是热爱与成长的勋章：
cycling is a badge of passion and growth
5．勇气与坚持铸就的里程碑：
a milestone built on courage and persistence
1.This race not only marked his first triumph but also highlighted the power of passion and persistence. His unwavering resolve proved that no challenge is insurmountable when you cling to your dream.（这场比赛不仅标志着他的首次 胜利，也凸显了热爱和坚持的力量。他坚定不移的决心证明，当你坚守梦想时，没有什么挑战是无法克服的。）
PART
03
三、范文赏析
When the starting gun went off, the other riders rushed forward in a group. Eddy was immediately left behind, the older cyclists' mocking words echoing in his mind. For a moment, panic gripped him. But then he remembered all those evenings of practice, his dad's unconditional support, and the dream that had kept him going. He settled into a steady pace, leaning low over the handlebars as he always did. Through the town and into the fields, he began to gain ground. On the final lap, seeing a gap open between the leading riders, he pushed with all his might to cross the finish line.
Eddy got off his bike, his legs shaky and his body exhausted, yet filled with incredible happiness. Though he hadn't won, he'd finished a respectable third. An even greater reward came when the same riders who'd laughed at him now nodded in respect. His dad rushed over, eyes shining with pride. "You showed them what you're made of, son! Mark was here—he saw your finish!" In that moment, Eddy knew this was just the beginning. He hadn't just completed the race; he had proven that with enough determination, even the biggest dreams were within reach.