2017年高考英语错竞技场：短文改错3.语篇型错误

Do
great
things!
（Ⅰ）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When
I
was
a
very
young
children，
my
father
created
a
regular
practice
I
remember
well
years
late.
Every
time
he
arrived
home
at
end
of
the
day，
we’d
greet
her
at
the
door.
He
would
ask
who
we
was
and
pretend
not
to
knowing
us.
Then
he
and
my
mother
would
have
had
a
drink
while
she
prepared
dinner
and
they
would
talk
about
his
day
and
hers.
While
they
chat，
my
father
would
lift
my
sister
and
me
up
to
sit
in
the
top
of
the
fridge.
It
was
both
excited
and
frightening
to
be
up
there!
My
sister
and
I
thought
he
was
so
cool
for
putting
us
there.
【答案】
When
I
was
a
very
young
，my
father
created
a
regular
practice
I
remember
well
years
.Every
time
he
arrived
home
at
end
of
the
day，we’d
greet
at
the
door.
He
would
ask
who
we
and
pretend
not
to
us.
Then
he
and
my
mother
would
have
a
drink
while
she
prepared
dinner
and
they
would
talk
about
his
day
and
hers.
While
they
，my
father
would
lift
my
sister
and
me
up
to
sit
the
top
of
the
fridge.
It
was
both
and
frightening
to
be
up
there!
My
sister
and
I
thought
he
was
so
cool
for
putting
us
there.
【解析】
1．children→child　[因为前面有不定冠词a，所以这里用单数。故children改成child。]
2．late→later　[late是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later”，表示“……时间以后”。故late改成later。]
3．at后面加the　[at
the
end
of
为固定搭配。]
4．her→him　[根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。用him指代my
father，作greet的宾语。故her改成him。]
5．was→were　[这句话的主语是we，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。故was改成were。]
6．knowing→know　[pretend后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式pretend
not
to
do。故knowing改成know。]
7．去掉had　[would
do
表示“过去常常做”。]
8．chat→chatted　[根据主句内容my
father
would
lift
my
sister
可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。故chat改成chatted。]
9．in→on　[on
the
top
of...为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。故in改成on。]
10．excited→exciting　[这句话的主语是形式主语it，真正的主语是to
be
up
there，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。故excited改成exciting。]
（Ⅱ）
Dear
Jeremy
and
Alice，
Although
we’ve
been
delighted
to
have
you
as
neighbors，
we’re
hoping
to
settle
something
that
bothers
to
us.
In
a
word，
your
dog—Cleo.
We’ve
called
several
time
about
Cleo’s
early
morning
barking.
It
is
difficult
to
understanding
why
she
barks
every
minute
she’s
outside.
The
early
morning
barking
have
been
disturbing
us
as
we
are
often
up
all
night
with
the
baby.
Beside，
Cleo
tends
to
bark
a
average
of
six
hours
a
day.
This
morning
she
starts
barking
even
before
5
o’clock.
That
is
too
much
for
us，
considering
how
closely
the
houses
are.
We
appreciate
our
apologies
and
goodwill，
but
we
hope
that
you
can
figure
a
good
way
of
settling
the
matter.
Sincerely，
Jack
and
Rose
【答案】
Dear
Jeremy
and
Alice，
Although
we’ve
been
delighted
to
have
you
as
neighbors，
we’re
hoping
to
settle
something
that
bothers
us.
In
a
word，
your
dog—Cleo.
We’ve
called
several
about
Cleo’s
early
morning
barking.
It
is
difficult
to
why
she
barks
every
minute
she’s
outside.
The
early
morning
barking
been
disturbing
us
as
we
are
often
up
all
night
with
the
baby.
，Cleo
tends
to
bark
average
of
six
hours
a
day.
This
morning
she
barking
even
before
5
o’clock.
That
is
too
much
for
us，
considering
how
the
houses
are.
We
appreciate
apologies
and
goodwill，
but
we
hope
that
you
can
figure
a
good
way
of
settling
the
matter.
Sincerely，
Jack
and
Rose
【答案与解析】
1．去掉to　[bother为及物动词，无需加to。]
2．time→times　[当“次数”讲时，time为可数名词。]
3．understanding→understand　[动词不定式符号to后跟动词原形。]
4．have→has　[主谓一致问题。主语为单数，谓语动词用单数形式。]
5．Beside→Besides　[besides除此之外，连词。beside在……一边，介词。]
6．a→an
7．starts→started　[考查时态。今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时。]
8．closely→close　[考查形容词close和closely的区别，房子距离近用close，具体意义；closely表抽象意义。]
9．our→your　[考查人称代词。我们感激你的歉意，后句的you给本题提供了答案。]
10．figure后加out　[考查固定搭配。figure
out找出。]
【专题探究】
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
语篇型错误
1.I
was
taking
a
train
to
London’s
Victoria
Station.
I
had
noticed
that
the
carriage
was
noise
(noisy)
and
filled
with
people.________
【答案】去掉had　[考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。]
2.Then
everyone
in
the
carriage
began
searching
(∧
for)
the
ticket，which
was
eventually
found
under
a
seat
several
rows
from
his
owner.________
【答案】his→its　[此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。]
3.
As
(∧
a)
result，the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.________
【答案】somewhere→everywhere　[根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。]
（Ⅲ）
After
school，I
was
about
to
enter
into
my
apartment
when
I
saw
a
little
dirty
dog
lie
beside
the
dustbin.
He
looked
extremely
weak.
Immediately
the
homeless
dog
filled
me
of
sympathy.
So
I
decided
to
take
him
home.
I
gave
him
some
food
and
a
bath.
After
the
bath
he
looked
energy
and
refreshed.
What
a
lovely
dog!
When
my
parents
got
home，I
asked
that
I
could
keep
the
dog.
To
my
surprised
and
joy，they
agreed.
Up
to
now，he
has
become
member
of
our
family
and
everyone
had
enjoyed
his
company.
Looked
at
the
cute
and
happy
dog
today，I
realize
that
I
was
right
to
help
him.
I
offered
him
a
shelter
and
he
brought
ourselves
great
happiness
and
laughter.
【解析】
1．考查介词。enter
表示进入某个具体处所时，不需要加介词；enter
into后多跟抽象名词，表示进入某种状态。
【答案】删除into
2．考查非谓语动词。see
sb
doing
sth
意为“看到某人正在做某事”，符合语境，故用现在分词作宾语补足语。
【答案】lie→lying
3．考查介词。fill...with...意为“用……充满……”，为固定搭配，故用介词with。
【答案】of→with
4．考查形容词。look是系动词，后跟形容词作表语，故用形容词形式，即energetic。
【答案】energy→energetic
5．考查连词。根据语境可推知，作者当时是要征询父母的意见，表示是否，故用if或whether引导宾语从句。
【答案】that→if/whether
6．考查名词。根据and
joy和my可知，此处应用名词形式。
【答案】surprised→surprise
7．考查冠词。a
member
of...表示“……中的一员”。
【答案】become后加a
8．考查动词时态和主谓一致。根据and前的has
become可知，此处应用现在完成时，且与主语everyone保持数的一致性，故用has。
【答案】had→has
9．考查非谓语动词。look和句子谓语realize之间没有连词，故用非谓语动词，且look和句子主语I构成逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。
【答案】Looked→Looking
10．考查代词。此处为固定搭配bring
sb
sth
，此处的sb
应用代词的宾格形式，即us。
【答案】ourselves→us
（Ⅳ）
Trying
to
come
to
a
decision
complete
on
your
own
can
be
risky.
Some
decisions
are
very
important
that
they
shouldn’t
be
made
without
talking
to
others
first.
There
have
several
advantages
if
you
consult
the
persons
you
trust.
For
one
thing，they
can
give
you
valuable
advices
and
they
may
point
out
some
things
you
may
have
been
overlooked.
For
another，friends
may
stop
you
make
big
mistakes.
When
consulting
others
about
important
decisions，you
should
keep
two
things
of
mind.
The
first
one
is
that
you
need
to
find
someone
whom
you
respect
enough
to
trust
their
judgment.
The
second
thing
to
consider
is
how
to
do
if
you
disagree
with
this
person.
Maybe
turning
to
a
third
or
fourth
person
for
help
is
a
good
choice
.In
word，making
any
big
decision
alone
can
lead
to
problems.
Talking
to
friends
or
family
members
first
are
always
a
good
idea.
【解析】
1．此处修饰谓语动词，所以用副词形式。
【答案】complete→completely
2．
so...that...句式，表示“如此……以至于……”。
【答案】very→so
3．there
be句型表示“某地有某物/某人”。
【答案】have→are
4．advice为不可数名词，没有复数形式。
【答案】advices
→advice
5．句意：他们可能会指出你所忽视的东西。由句意及句子结构可知是主动意义，不可用被动语态。
【答案】去掉been
6．stop
sb
doing
sth阻止某人做某事。
【答案】make→making
7．keep
sth
in
mind为固定句式，意为“牢记某事”。
【答案】of→in
8．本句为一个表语从句，从句中缺少宾语，故应当用what。
【答案】how→what
9．in
a
word为固定搭配，意思是“简而言之”。
【答案】word前加a
10．talking
to
friends
or
family
members
first为现在分词做主语，谓语动词应当用单数。
【答案】are→is
（Ⅴ）
Good
morning，everyone.
It’s
great
honor
for
me
to
speak
here.
My
name’s
Li
Xiaojun，born
in
a
harmonious
family.
My
father
and
mother
are
all
high
school
teachers.
Influenced
by
them，I
read
widely
during
my
early
age，but
I’ve
developed
a
great
interest
in
arts
and
sports.
I’m
easy－going，get
along
well
with
my
classmates.
It
is
this
personality
which
helps
me
win
over
all
my
classmates’
friendships，and
also
help
me
overcome
many
difficulties
both
in
academic
and
personal
life.
Being
admitted
in
your
university
has
always
been
a
beautiful
dream
for
me.
I
dream
constantly
that
I，along
with
mine
classmates，will
study
happy
with
the
help
of
the
respectable
professors.
I
dream
that
I
will
swim
freely
in
the
sea，enjoying
the
waves
of
knowledge.
I
hope
all
my
dream
will
come
true
in
the
near
future.Thank
you.
【解析】
1．考查抽象名词具体化。honor此处用作可数名词。
【答案】It’s
∧a
2．考查不定代词的用法。爸爸和妈妈，是两个人。both两者都；all
三者或以上都。
【答案】all→both或去掉all
3．考查行文间的逻辑关系。根据意思，两个分句之间是并列关系。
【答案】but→and
4．考查非谓语动词或动词的用法。前面是系表结构，故get应当为非谓语形式getting，也可理解为并列谓语，故也可添加and。
【答案】get→getting/and
get
5．考查强调句型。这里是强调结构，强调主语this
personality。
【答案】which→that
6．考查主谓一致。根据并列连词and可知此空与前面的谓语动词helps应当一致。
【答案】help→helps
7．考查固定短语中的介词。“被……接纳或录取”通常译为be
admitted
to。
【答案】in→to
8．考查名词性物主代词与形容词性物主代词的用法。名词前应当使用形容词性物主代词。
【答案】mine→my
9．考查形容词与副词的转换。副词作状语，修饰动词study。
【答案】happy→happily
10．考查语境中名词的用法。dream为可数名词，限定词all之后的可数名词要用复数形式。
【答案】dream→dreams
（Ⅵ）
It’s
very
kind
for
you
to
let
me
know
about
your
beautiful
city.
Now
I’d
like
to
tell
you
something
about
your
beautiful
hometown.
It
located
on
the
bank
of
a
river
and
it
is
a
beautiful
place
to
live
in.
Its
economy
has
been
developing
rapid
in
the
past
two
decades.
More
schools
and
hospitals
are
available
to
people.
Besides，there
are
some
problems，such
as
water
and
air
pollution
and
heavy
traffics
in
rush
hours.
In
my
opinion，my
hometown
should
develop
its
economy
scientifically.
Something
must
be
doing
to
prevent
water
and
air
pollution
or
the
growth
of
its
population
should
be
brought
under
the
control
so
that
we’ll
have
a
better
hometown.
【解析】
1．考查介词。It
is
kind
of
sb
to
do
sth某人做某事真是太好了。
【答案】for→of
2．考查代词。根据Now
I’d
like
to可知要介绍的是“我”家乡的情况。
【答案】your→my
3．考查固定表达。be
located
in/on
坐落于……。本文用的是一般现在时，根据主谓一致原则在located前加is。
【答案】located前加is
4．考查副词。修饰动词develop应该用副词形式。
【答案】rapid→rapidly
5．考查介词。更多学校和医院可以让人们使用。be
available
for有效；对……有用。
【答案】to→for
6．考查副词。根据前后句内容可知此处是表示转折关系。
【答案】Besides→However
7．考查名词。traffic是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
【答案】traffics→traffic
8．考查非谓语动词。此处表示被动。
【答案】doing
→done
9．考查连词。根据内容可知此处是并列句，都是需要控制的问题。
【答案】or→and
10．考查冠词。under
control在控制下。
【答案】去掉control前的the
（Ⅶ）
Dear
Sir/Madam，
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
will
organize
an
adventure
trip.
I’m
interested
on
adventure
and
extreme
sports
so
much.
When
travelling，we
will
enjoy
ourselves
and
learn
everything
from
the
exploration，which
attracts
me
very
much.But
I
wonder
that
if
the
trip
will
be
exciting
and
relaxing.Personally，I
think
it’s
important
that
there
will
an
experienced
guide
in
the
group，whom
will
be
helpful
to
us.Beside，how
can
you
make
extreme
sports
like
bungee
jumping
easy
accepted
and
even
more
attractive
I
hope
that
all
the
adventure
would
be
interesting，fascinating
but
meaningful.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Hua
【解析】
1．考查固定短语中的介词。be
interested
in
(对……感兴趣)为固定短语。
【答案】on→in
2．考查不定代词的用法。根据句意并联系生活常识可知，我们在旅行中可学到某些东西，并非一切。
【答案】everything
→
something
3．考查宾语从句的连接词。宾语从句中只能用一个连词。wonder含有疑问的意思，后面的宾语从句也不能用that引导。
【答案】去掉if之前的that
4．考查there
be的用法。There
be句型的一般将来时是There
will
be
或There
is/are
going
to
be。
【答案】will∧be
5．考查代词主、宾格的用法。此定语从句的先行词指人，关系代词作主语，应当用主格形式。
【答案】whom→who
6．考查形近异义词的用法。beside是介词，“在……旁边”；besides是副词，“此外，再者”。
【答案】Beside→Besides
7．考查副词和形容词的用法区别。这里的意思是“很容易被接受”，修饰动词要用副词。
【答案】easy→easily
8．考查名词复数。adventure是可数名词。
【答案】adventure→adventures
9．考查行文间时态的一致性。根据I
hope可知，adventure活动尚未进行，显然是表达对将来的愿望。
【答案】would→will
10．考查逻辑关系的判断能力。interesting，fascinating和meaningful三个词之间是并列关系。
【答案】but→and
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