2017年高考英语错竞技场：短文改错1.词法型错误

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
old
classroom
was
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interesting
because
three
side
of
the
classroom
were
made
from
glass.I
enjoyed
sit
close
to
the
windows
and
looking
at
the
view.On
the
left－hand
side
of
the
class，I
could
easy
see
the
football
field.In
the
mornings，it
was
full
of
students
exercising.The
view
from
the
back
of
the
classroom
is
also
splendid.Close
to
the
school
there
was
a
beautiful
park
with
many
trees
around
them.Farther
in
the
distance，I
could
not
enjoy
the
view
of
snowy
mountains.On
the
right
side
of
the
class
was
the
road.I
was
always
interested
to
see
the
drivers
in
hurry
in
the
morning.The
position
of
the
classroom
with
its
view
made
me
felt
like
I
was
dreaming.If
I
was
only
a
child
when
I
studied
in
that
classroom，I
will
never
forget
it.
【答案】
My
old
classroom
was
interesting
because
three
of
the
classroom
were
made
glass.I
enjoyed
close
to
the
windows
and
looking
at
the
view.On
the
left－hand
side
of
the
class，I
could
see
the
football
field.In
the
mornings，it
was
full
of
students
exercising.The
view
from
the
back
of
the
classroom
also
splendid.Close
to
the
school
there
was
a
beautiful
park
with
many
trees
around
.Farther
in
the
distance，I
could
not
enjoy
the
view
of
snowy
mountains.On
the
right
side
of
the
class
was
the
road.I
was
always
interested
to
see
the
drivers
in
hurry
in
the
morning.The
position
of
the
classroom
with
its
view
made
me
like
I
was
dreaming.
I
was
only
a
child
when
I
studied
in
that
classroom，I
will
never
forget
it.
【解析】
1．side→sides　[考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。]
2．from→of　[考查固定表达。be
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of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be
made
from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。]
3．sit→sitting　[考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。]
4．easy→easily　[考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。]
5．is→was　[考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。]
6．them→it　[考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a
beautiful
park要用it。]
7．去掉not　[考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。]
8．in后加a　[考查固定表达。in
a
hurry匆匆忙忙。]
9．felt→feel　[考查非谓语动词。make
sb
do...使某人做某事。]
10．If→Although/Though　[考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。]
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
father
too
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me
out
camping
for
the
first
time
when
I
was
seven.He
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.My
uncles
all
come
along
with
bows
and
arrows
for
hunting.
One
evening
at
suns
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sat
by
the
fire，have
our
barbecue.Just
then
a
bird
was
flying
over
us.My
uncles
immediate
jumped
up
and
shot
their
arrows
on
the
bird.Neither
of
the
arrows
hit
the
target.Suddenly
the
arrows
was
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky－they
were
looked
like
rain！We
ran
to
escape
but
fortunately
no
one
was
injured.
That
day
I
didn’t
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learn
much
about
animals，insects
or
trees，but
I
learnt
a
impressive
lesson
about
gravity!
【答案】
My
father
took
me
out
camping
for
the
first
time
when
I
was
seven.He
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.My
uncles
all
along
with
bows
and
arrows
for
hunting.
One
evening
at
su
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sat
by
the
fire，
our
barbecue.Just
then
a
bird
was
flying
over
us.My
uncles
jumped
up
and
shot
their
arrows
the
bird.
of
the
arrows
hit
the
target.Suddenly
the
arrows
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky—they
were
looked
like
rain！We
ran
to
escape
fortunately
no
one
was
injured.
That
day
I
didn’t
lear
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much
about
animals，insects
or
trees，but
I
learnt
impressive
lesson
about
gravity!
【解析】
1．He
wanted后加to　[考查非谓语动词。want
to
do
sth想要做某事，为固定搭配。]
2．come→came　[考查动词时态。本文的主体时态为一般过去时。]
3．have→having　[考查非谓语动词。一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，因此此处应为非谓语动词作伴随状语。]
4．immediate→immediately　[考查形容词副词修饰关系。副词修饰后面的动词jumped
up。]
5．on→at　[考查介词
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的使用。shoot
at...朝……射击。下文的Suddenly
the
arrows
was
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky.也给本句提供了答案。]
6．Neither→No
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne　[考查不定代词。根据前文的arrows一词可以看出，此处不是只有两只箭，因此把Neither改为None，表示三支以上。]
7．was→were　[考查主谓一致。主语为复数形式arrows，谓语动词应用复数。]
8．去掉were　[考查语态。look作为系动词，无需用被动语态。]
9．but→and　[考查连词。根据句意：我们跑开了，幸运的是，没有人受伤。可以看出，此处为承接关系，并非转折关系。]
10．a→an　[考查冠词的使用。后面的impressive一词第一个读音为元音，因此用an。]
【专题探究】
从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
词法型错误
1.冠词
冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
1.After
a
hour
or
so
we
began
to
feel
very
frightened.________
【答案】a→an　[因hour以元音音素开头。]
2.I
decided
to
climb
the
tree
to
see
where
we
were.________
【答案】the→a　[因此处并非特指，而是泛指。]
3.Good
health
is
person’s
most
valuable
possession.________
【答案】person’s前加a　[这里的a表泛指。]
4.Maybe
you
could
come
during
a
winter
holidays.________
【答案】a→the　[此处的winter
holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。]
5.Suddenly，I
caug
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a
sight
of
my
English
teacher
in
the
crowd.________
【答案】去掉a　[catch
sight
of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见”。]
2.名词
名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
6.We
stopped
to
re
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for
a
while
and
to
drink
some
waters
from
a
stream.________
【答案】waters→water　[因“水”为物质名词，不可数。]
7.There
are
branch
library
in
many
villages.________
【答案】library→libraries　[因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。]
8.I
hope
that
you
t
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could
come
and
visit
us
some
times
soon.________
【答案】times→time　[some
time意为“某时”。]
9.They
were
eag
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to
know
everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
question.________
【答案】question→questions　[因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots
of。]
3.代词
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
10.David
pointed
to
a
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path
which
it
he
thought
would
probably
lead
to
a
village.________
【答案】去掉it　[因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。]
11.When
we
walked
to
the
car，Bill
smiled
and
shook
head.________
【答案】head前加his　[汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake
one’s
head。]
12.We
climb
ev
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only
in
America.They
have
been
to
Europe
many
times.________
【答案】They→We　[前后人称不一致。]
13.The
Smiths
did
his
best
to
make
me
feel
at
home.________
【答案】his→their　[因前面的the
Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。]
4.形容词与副词
形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。包括近义形容
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以-ly结尾的副词和不是以-ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词-ing形式和动词-ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a
bit，a
little，much，far，many，a
lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by
far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。
14.Last
Sunday，polic
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cars
hurried
to
the
taller
building
in
New
York.________
【答案】taller→tallest　[因从含义上看此处应是最高级。]
15.As
a
result，people
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the
modern
world
generally
live
much
more
longer
than
people
in
the
past.________
【答案】去掉more　[因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。]
5.介词与介词短语
短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，re
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ply，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory
over，advantage
over，respect
for，prize
for等。
16.Bill
insisted
in
staying
near
the
car.________
【答案】in→on　[insist
on为固定搭配。]
17.When
they
came
down，the
police
were
angry
to
them.________
【答案】to→with　[要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be
angry
with
sb。]
18.Most
people
can
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get
for
help
from
a
doctor
or
go
to
a
hospital
since
they
are
ill.________
【答案】去掉for　[因其前的get是及物动词。]
6.动词
除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。
19.Charles
and
Linda
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were
seeing
near
the
top
of
the
building.________
【答案】seeing→seen　[因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。]
20.Books
may
be
keep
for
four
weeks.________
【答案】keep→kept　[因此处要用被动语态。]
21....and
let
you
know
when
the
book
you
want
has
returned.________
【答案】returned前加been　[因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。]
22.Uncle
Ben
will
also
go
back
for
Christmas.________
【答案】go→come　[由句意可知。]
23.They
eager
to
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everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
questions.________
【答案】eager前加were　[因此处缺谓语动词。]
7.非谓语动词
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定式符号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
24.David
and
I
want
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go
off
to
find
help
but
Bill
insisted
on
staying
near
the
car.________
【答案】wanted后加to　[因为want后要接不定式。]
25....rather
than
go
into
the
forest
and
getting
lost.________
【答案】getting→get　[因为get与其前的go并列。]
26.Modern
peop
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know
more
about
health，have
better
food，and
to
live
in
clearer
surroundings.________
【答案】去掉live前的to　[因为live与其前的know，have并列。]
27....you
pay
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the
cost
of
send
a
postcard，the
librarian
will
write
to
you.________
【答案】send→sending　[因为介词后接动名词作宾语。]
（Ⅲ）
With
the
development
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people’s
living
condition,
more
and
more
people
possess
their
own
cars.
Some
of
us
think
it
is
good
to
own
a
car.
For
instance,
it’s
convenient,
fast
and
comfortable
means
of
transportation.
Moreover,
it
shows
that
people
are
becoming
richer
and
the
country
is
much
more
stronger.
It
also
made
relative
businesses
and
industries
develop
faster.
However,
others
have
different
opinions,
thinking
that
cars
give
up
waste
gases
and
pollute
the
environment
around.
Too
much
cars
will
have
some
bad
effects,
such
as
more
accidents
and
crowdedness.
Besides,
lack
parking
lots
is
another
big
problem.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
we
ought
to
think
careful
before
buying
cars.
As
if
we
have
cars,
we
may
use
it
less.
（Ⅳ）
Nowadays,
mobile
payme
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is
becoming
more
and
more
popular
with
our
shopping.
In
addition
to
pay
in
cash,
by
cheque
or
credit
card,
a
consumer
can
use
a
mobile
phone
to
pay
for
a
wide
range
of
services
and
goods.
Compared
with
those
traditional
mean,
mobile
payment
is
faster
and
more
convenient.
Besides,
it
can
be
used
at
any
given
time
or
place,
thus
save
much
time
and
energy.
Furthermore,
we
can’t
overlook
the
fact
it
must
be
operated
with
a
phone
and
a
network.
And
it
is
only
recently
which
the
technology
to
support
such
systems
has
become
wide
available.
It
will
be
arouse
public
concern
over
its
potential
risk,
such
as
the
account
security
and
other
unexpected
problems.
Technology
is
changing
its
life
rapidly,
so
we
should
get
ready
for
it.
（Ⅴ）
Patience
is
of
great
i
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in
our
daily
life.
Once
I
waited
a
bus
to
come
at
a
stop.
30
minutes
past,
but
no
bus
came.
Both
upset
and
annoyed,
I
decided
to
walk
on
feet.
But
no
sooner
had
I
left
when
the
bus
arrived.
I
thought
if
I
had
waited
for
one
more
minute,
I
would
have
caught
it.
If
I
chose
to
take
a
next
bus,
I
would
have
to
wait
for
other
30
minutes.
Only
then
do
I
realize
my
problem.
Being
impatient
will
possible
waste
all
the
effort
that
we
have
put
it
in.
Now
whenever
I
am
close
to
lose
my
patience,
I’ll
think
of
this
experience.
（Ⅵ）
Honesty
pl
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an
important
role
in
our
daily
life.
It
is
not
only
the
best
policies,
but
a
principle
of
dealing
with
affairs.
Take
the
friendship
for
example.
If
you
are
honest
man,
your
friends
will
be
honest
to
you
on
return.
When
you
are
sad,
he
will
comfort
you;
when
you
were
in
trouble,
they
will
help
you.
However,
if
you
are
a
dishonest
man,
and
your
friends
will
leave
you
alone
sooner
or
late.
What’s
worse,
you
will
be
looked
down
upon
by
them
and
regard
as
a
public
enemy.
In
short,
honesty
is
very
important
in
our
daily
life.
Honesty
is
absolute
essential
for
a
good
and
happy
life.
（Ⅶ）
Dear
Jack,
Welcome
to
my
s
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Upon
your
arrival,
there
will
be
a
party
for
you
organizing
by
my
classmates.
You
may
attend
to
English
classes
to
feel
a
differently
learning
style.
After
that,
you
can
go
to
your
host
family
that
you
can
experience
the
Chinese
way
of
life.
You
can
have
meals
together
chatting
about
whatever
interest
you.
The
host
family
will
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also
show
you
off
some
famous
scenic
spots.
You
can
see
people
selling
kites
everywhere
because
our
city
was
home
to
kites．There
are
varieties
of
kites
to
choose.
So
isn’t
that
a
good
idea
to
buy
some
for
your
friends
Write
to
me
unless
you
have
any
questions
about
the
schedule．
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案与解析】
（Ⅲ）
1.
condition
改为co
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nditions
考查名词。名词condition是可数名词，人们的生活条件有多种，所以使用复数形式conditions。
2.
it’s后加a
考查不定冠
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car”汽车这种交通方式，这是单数名词，所以使用不定冠词a修饰名词means
of
transportation。句意：汽车是一个方便、迅速并且很舒适的交通方式。
3.
much
more
删除more
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考查形容词比较级。本句中stronger已经是比较级的形式了，所以more是多余的。使用much修饰比较级。
4.
made改为makes
考查时态。本文是一篇议论文，讨论汽车的话题，全文都使用一般现在时，所以本句使用makes。
5.
up
改为off
考查固定搭配。动词短语give
off发出；give
up放弃；汽车发出废气并且污染了环境。
6.
much
改为many
考查
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )形容词。形容词many修饰可数名词复数，much修饰不可数名词。本句中的名词cars是可数名词复数修饰，所以使用many修饰cars。
7.
lack
改为lacking
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )考查动名词。本句中动名词短语lacking
parking
lots在句中作主语，谓语动词使用单数形式。
8.
careful
改为carefully
考查副词。本句中分词carefully做状语修饰动词think。
9.
As
改为Even
考查连词。连词短语even
if即使，尽管；引导让步状语从句。句意：尽管我们有汽车，我还是少用。
10.
it
改为them
考查代词。本句中代词them指代复数名词cars，而it指代上文的单数名词。
（Ⅳ）
【分析】
本文属于说明文，介绍了现在越来越流行的移动支付，并说明了这一支付方式的优点和缺点。
【解析】
1.
with—in
考查介词。介词i
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n在...方面；句意：现在，移动支付在购物中越来越流行。形容词短语be
popular
with...受...欢迎；该短语和上下文句意不搭配。
2.
pay—-payi
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考查动名词。介词短语in
addition
to....除...之外；其中to是介词，后面要接名词或者动名词做宾语，本句使用动名词短语paying
in
cash做该短语的宾语。
3.
mean---means
考
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )查名词。名词means方法，这是一个单复数同形名词；动词mean意为“意味着”。句意：和传统方法相比较，移动支付更迅速更方便。
4.
save—savi
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考查分词做状语。本句中现在分词短语saving
much
time
and
energy在句中做结果状语，表示正常的意料之中的结果。句意：而且移动支付可以在任何时间任何地方进行，结果可以节省很多时间和精力。
5.
Furthermore--however
考查副词。虽然移动支付很方便很迅速，但是我们不能忽视这个事实，它一定要在手机和网络上进行。所以就有了限制。上下文之间是转折关系，所以使用副词however连接上下文。
6.
fact---fact后加t
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考查同位语从句。同位语从句that
it
must
be
operated
with
a
phone
and
a
network.对名词fact进行解释说明。其中的连接词that充当连接作用，不能省略。
7.
which—that
考查
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recently。强调句型的基本结构为“It
is/was+被强调成分+that/who....”其中不能使用which这个词引导强调句型。
8.
wide—widely考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修
饰形容词、副词或动词，所以本句中使用副词
widely
修饰形容词
available。
9.去掉be
考查谓语动词。动词arouse引起，激发；在句中做
请语动词，所以be多余。
10.
its—our
考查代词。句意：技术正在迅速改变我们的生
活，我们应该乐意接受它。所以使用代词our指
代we，修饰life。
（Ⅴ）
【分析】本文中作者通过讲述自己等待公交车的事情，说明了耐心在我们生活中的重要作用。
【解析】
1.
waited后加for
动词wait是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语，需要在其后加介词for。
2.
past改为passed
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )介词past是不能充当谓语动词的，应该使用动词pass，本文叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去式passed。
3.
feet改为foot
本句是一个固定搭配on
foot步行；句意：又生气有难过，我决定步行前往。
4.
when改为than
本句是一个固定句式：no
sooner…than…一…就…；句意：我一离开公交车就到了。
5.
a改为the
本句中bus前面有next修饰，说明特指下一班公交车，所以要使用定冠词the表示特指。
6.
other改为ano
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ther
考查固定搭配。短语“another+数字”表示“再…又…”。句意：如果我选择乘坐下一班公交车，我就不得不再等30分钟。
7.
do改为did
本文叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以都使用的是过去式。
8.
possible改为po
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本句中使用副词possibly修饰谓语动词waste
all
the
effort。形容词possible通常充当定语或表语。
9.去掉it
本句是一个定语从句，先行词是all
the
effort，
在effort后面省略了关系代词that/w
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hich，that/which
在句中充当put
in的宾语而被省略了。所以这里的it是多余的。
10.lose改为losing考查动名词。本句中形容词短语be
close
to...接近其中的to是介词，后面要接动名词。
（Ⅵ）
【分析】
本文属于评论性短文，叙述了诚实在我们生活中的重要性，并呼吁我们要做一个诚信的人。
【解析】
1.
play
→plays
考
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )查主谓一致。本句的主语是honesty诚实，这是一个不可数名词同时也是抽象名词。做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式，所以本句使用plays。
2.
policies
→policy
考查名词单复数。形容词最高级的后面要使用单数形式，所以使用policy。
3.添加an(第四句)
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考查固定搭配。短语take
sth
for
an
example以...为例；以友谊为例，如果你是一个诚实的人，作为回报，你的朋友对你也很诚实。
4.
on
→in
考查固定短语。短语in
return作为回报；你对朋友很诚实，作为回报，你的朋友对你也会很诚实。
5.
he
→they
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考查代词。本句中they指代前句中的复数名词friends，句意：当你悲伤的时候，你的朋友们会安慰你。朋友们是复数形式，所以使用they指代复数名词。
6.
were
→are
考查时态。本文属于评论性短文，全文都使用了一般现在时，本句也应该使用一般现在时，所以把were改为are。
7.
删除your前and
考查句子
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )结构。前面半句中已经有了if，说明前半句是条件句，后面是主句，不需要再使用连词连接了。所以并列连词and是多余的。
8.
late
→later
考查固
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定搭配。短语sooner
or
later迟早；句意：如果你是一个不诚实的人，你的朋友们迟早会离开你的。
9.
regard
→regarded
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考查语态。本句中动词regard与句子主语you构成逻辑上的被动关系，所以使用过去
分词表示被动。句意：你会被他们看不起并被当成是公众敌人。
10.
absolute
→absol
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )utely
考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。所以本句中使
用副词absolutely修饰形容词essential。
（Ⅶ）
【分析】李华在信中告诉Jack来中国之后的学习和生活安排。
1.organizing→organized
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ).
考查动词形式。根据句中主语you和动词organize的关系以及by
my
classmates可知此处是被动形式，表示“被组织”，故organizing→organized.
2.attend后去掉to.
考查动词用法。attend“参加”是及物动词后面直接加宾语，此处指参加英语课，故attend后去掉to.
3.differently→d
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ifferent.
考查形容词。此处修饰名词learning
style要用形容词，指不同的学习风格，故differently→different.
4.that→where.
考查
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )定语从句。句中包含定语从句，先行词是host
family在定语从句中做状语，指在中国家庭感受中国式生活，要用关系副词where，故that→where.
5.interest→int
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erests.
考查动词形式。句中主语是whatever是单数形式动词也要用单数，故interest→interests.
6.off→around.考查固定短语。
show…around“带领某人参观”，此处指带领你参观景点，故off→around.
7.was→is.
考查时态。
全文是现在时，此处是客观事实要用现在时，故was→is.
8.choose后加from.
考查介词。此处指从各种风筝中选择，
故choose后加fom.
9.that→it.
考查形式主语。不定式to
buy
some
for
your
friends在句中是真正主语，用il做形式主语，故that—it.
10.unless→if/when.
考
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )查连词。句意：如果对时间表有问题写信给我冷有问题时写信给我。根据句意unless→if/when.
1.词法型错误
短文改错
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