2026届高考英语二轮复习：情绪描写公式写好读后续写 课件(共15张PPT）
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如何通过构建情绪描写公式写好读后续写
策略支招
【情绪描写公式】
句式1：情绪的起因
To sb.‘s ＋情绪, sb. ... 令人......的是，......
句式2：情绪的后果
Out of+情绪，sb. ... 出于某种情绪，某人.....
句式3：情绪的把持
Sb. was overwhelmed/overcome/seized/consumed with/by＋情绪 某人深感......
句式4：情绪的溢出
Sb. was filled／charged／bursting with＋情绪. 某人充满了......
读后续写微技能指导：情绪描写的构建
策略支招
【情绪描写公式】
句式5：情绪的外露
Judging from sb's voice/ eyes/ expression/behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in+情绪.
从某人的声音／眼神／表情／行为判断，很明显某人陷入了.....之中。
句式6：情绪的变化
Sb‘s＋情绪1＋faded/drained away and was replaced with＋情绪2
某人的情绪1耗尽了，取而代之的是情绪2。
句式7：情绪的升腾
Sb. felt a great sense of＋情绪 welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
某人感到一股强烈的.....在内心升腾、奔涌。
读后续写微技能指导：情绪描写的构建
情绪描写公式1 情绪的起因
To sb.‘s ＋情绪, sb. ... 令人......的是，......
策略支招
令他们宽慰的是，他们的儿子安然无恙地回来了。
_______________, their son returned safe and sound.
To their relief
情绪描写公式2 情绪的后果
Out of+情绪，sb. ... 出于某种情绪，某人.....
策略支招
出于好奇，他们通过了通道。
___________________, they went through the tunnel.
Out of curiosity
情绪描写公式3 情绪的把持
Sb. was overwhelmed/overcome/seized/consumed with/by＋情绪 某人深感......
策略支招
我被一种强烈的恐怖占据内心，手心出汗。
_______________________ a strong sense of horror,
my palms sweating.
I was seized with/by
情绪描写公式4 情绪的溢出
Sb. was filled／charged／bursting with＋情绪. 某人充满了......
策略支招
看到这些，他怒不可遏。
Seeing this, he ____________________________________.
was filled/bursting with anger
情绪描写公式5 情绪的外露
Judging from sb's voice/ eyes/ expression/behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in+情绪. 从某人的声音／眼神／表情／行为判断，很明显某人陷入了.....之中。
策略支招
从Johnny的声音判断，很明显他陷入了悲伤之中。
_________________________________, it was evident that
he _________________________.
Judging from Johnny's voice
was trapped in sorrow
情绪描写公式6 情绪的变化
Sb‘s＋情绪1＋faded/drained away and was replaced with＋情绪2
某人的情绪1耗尽了，取而代之的是情绪2。
策略支招
他的忧虑耗尽了，取而代之的是兴奋和希望。
____________drained away, and was replaced with _______________________________.
excitement and expectation
His worry
情绪描写公式7 情绪的升腾
Sb. felt a great sense of＋情绪 welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
某人感到一股强烈的.....在内心升腾、奔涌。
策略支招
Wendy感到一股强烈的恐惧在她心中升腾、奔涌。
Wendy___________________________________________________________________________________.
felt a great sense of horror welling up in
her heart and surging through her
小试牛刀
1. 令人惊喜的是，在生日当天，她收到了来自远方朋友的礼物。
_________________, she received a gift from her friend who lives far away on her birthday.
2. 出于同情，这位老人给了路边乞讨的小姑娘一些零钱。
____________________, the old man gave some change to the little girl begging by the roadside.
3. 在这场重要的比赛获胜后，整个团队都深感兴奋，互相拥抱庆祝。
After winning this important competition, ______________________________________________ and hugged each other to celebrate.
4. 看着自己亲手栽种的花儿终于绽放，她心中充满了喜悦。
Looking at the flowers she had planted by herself finally bloom,_______________________.
情绪的起因
情绪的后果
情绪的把持
情绪的溢出
To her surprise
Out of sympathy
the whole team was seized with excitement
she was filled with joy
小试牛刀
5. 从他颤抖的声音和泛红的眼眶判断，很明显他陷入了深深的委屈之中。
Judging from his trembling voice and red eyes, _________________________________________
__________________.
6. 小女孩面对陌生人时的紧张慢慢耗尽了，取而代之的是对新朋友的好奇。
The little girl's ___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________.
7. Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒在她心中升腾、奔涌。
Jessica____________________________________________________________________________________.
情绪的外露
情绪的变化
情绪的升腾
felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her
nervousness when facing strangers drained away and was replaced
with curiosity about new friends
it was evident that he was trapped in
deep grievance
运用读后续写“情绪描写构建公式”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
(Leah 与母亲延续外婆音乐记忆 )
The next weekend, Mom baked chocolate cookies in the kitchen—Grandma’s recipe. ____________________, (令莉娅意外的是)she also found a vintage music box, which played their shared tune._______________________________________________________________________________.(从妈妈灿烂的笑容来看，很明显她正沉浸在喜悦之中) ____________________,(出于激动) Leah grabbed the sheet music, and they began to head to the old but familiar attic, ready to play. _________________________________________(莉娅心中满是暖意), recalling Grandma’s laughter.
As they played, ___________________________________________________________________________
(最初的激动渐渐褪去，取而代之的是平和的幸福感). The cookies’ aroma mixed with the music, filling the air. By the time they finished, ___________________________________________(母女俩都满心满足 ), knowing this little tradition would keep Grandma close forever.
实战运用
To Leah’s surprise
both were bursting with contentment
Judging from Mom’s bright smile, it was evident she was trapped in joy
Out of excitement
Leah was overwhelmed with warmth
the initial excitement faded away and was replaced with calm happiness
方法总结
总结：情绪描写作为连接原文与续写、作者与读者的“情感纽带”，不仅能让续写内容更具感染力，更能从根本上提升文本的完整性、逻辑性与思想深度。通过情绪描写，能展现人物隐藏的性格特质、内心世界，让原本可能“扁平”的角色变得有血有肉，更具记忆点。情绪描写通过“具象化细节”，将抽象的情感转化为读者可感知的“生理反应、动作、环境氛围”，打破“作者叙述”与“读者感受”的壁垒，让读者从“旁观者”变为“参与者”，产生深度共鸣，让读后续写既有“逻辑的骨架”，又有“情感的血肉”。
情绪的起因
情绪的后果
情绪的把持
情绪的溢出
情绪的外露
情绪的变化
情绪的升腾
Thank you!
如何通过构建情绪描写公式写好读后续写
策略支招
【情绪描写公式】
句式1：情绪的起因
To sb.‘s ＋情绪, sb. ... 令人......的是，......
句式2：情绪的后果
Out of+情绪，sb. ... 出于某种情绪，某人.....
句式3：情绪的把持
Sb. was overwhelmed/overcome/seized/consumed with/by＋情绪 某人深感......
句式4：情绪的溢出
Sb. was filled／charged／bursting with＋情绪. 某人充满了......
读后续写微技能指导：情绪描写的构建
策略支招
【情绪描写公式】
句式5：情绪的外露
Judging from sb's voice/ eyes/ expression/behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in+情绪.
从某人的声音／眼神／表情／行为判断，很明显某人陷入了.....之中。
句式6：情绪的变化
Sb‘s＋情绪1＋faded/drained away and was replaced with＋情绪2
某人的情绪1耗尽了，取而代之的是情绪2。
句式7：情绪的升腾
Sb. felt a great sense of＋情绪 welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
某人感到一股强烈的.....在内心升腾、奔涌。
读后续写微技能指导：情绪描写的构建
情绪描写公式1 情绪的起因
To sb.‘s ＋情绪, sb. ... 令人......的是，......
策略支招
令他们宽慰的是，他们的儿子安然无恙地回来了。
_______________, their son returned safe and sound.
To their relief
情绪描写公式2 情绪的后果
Out of+情绪，sb. ... 出于某种情绪，某人.....
策略支招
出于好奇，他们通过了通道。
___________________, they went through the tunnel.
Out of curiosity
情绪描写公式3 情绪的把持
Sb. was overwhelmed/overcome/seized/consumed with/by＋情绪 某人深感......
策略支招
我被一种强烈的恐怖占据内心，手心出汗。
_______________________ a strong sense of horror,
my palms sweating.
I was seized with/by
情绪描写公式4 情绪的溢出
Sb. was filled／charged／bursting with＋情绪. 某人充满了......
策略支招
看到这些，他怒不可遏。
Seeing this, he ____________________________________.
was filled/bursting with anger
情绪描写公式5 情绪的外露
Judging from sb's voice/ eyes/ expression/behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in+情绪. 从某人的声音／眼神／表情／行为判断，很明显某人陷入了.....之中。
策略支招
从Johnny的声音判断，很明显他陷入了悲伤之中。
_________________________________, it was evident that
he _________________________.
Judging from Johnny's voice
was trapped in sorrow
情绪描写公式6 情绪的变化
Sb‘s＋情绪1＋faded/drained away and was replaced with＋情绪2
某人的情绪1耗尽了，取而代之的是情绪2。
策略支招
他的忧虑耗尽了，取而代之的是兴奋和希望。
____________drained away, and was replaced with _______________________________.
excitement and expectation
His worry
情绪描写公式7 情绪的升腾
Sb. felt a great sense of＋情绪 welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
某人感到一股强烈的.....在内心升腾、奔涌。
策略支招
Wendy感到一股强烈的恐惧在她心中升腾、奔涌。
Wendy___________________________________________________________________________________.
felt a great sense of horror welling up in
her heart and surging through her
小试牛刀
1. 令人惊喜的是，在生日当天，她收到了来自远方朋友的礼物。
_________________, she received a gift from her friend who lives far away on her birthday.
2. 出于同情，这位老人给了路边乞讨的小姑娘一些零钱。
____________________, the old man gave some change to the little girl begging by the roadside.
3. 在这场重要的比赛获胜后，整个团队都深感兴奋，互相拥抱庆祝。
After winning this important competition, ______________________________________________ and hugged each other to celebrate.
4. 看着自己亲手栽种的花儿终于绽放，她心中充满了喜悦。
Looking at the flowers she had planted by herself finally bloom,_______________________.
情绪的起因
情绪的后果
情绪的把持
情绪的溢出
To her surprise
Out of sympathy
the whole team was seized with excitement
she was filled with joy
小试牛刀
5. 从他颤抖的声音和泛红的眼眶判断，很明显他陷入了深深的委屈之中。
Judging from his trembling voice and red eyes, _________________________________________
__________________.
6. 小女孩面对陌生人时的紧张慢慢耗尽了，取而代之的是对新朋友的好奇。
The little girl's ___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________.
7. Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒在她心中升腾、奔涌。
Jessica____________________________________________________________________________________.
情绪的外露
情绪的变化
情绪的升腾
felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her
nervousness when facing strangers drained away and was replaced
with curiosity about new friends
it was evident that he was trapped in
deep grievance
运用读后续写“情绪描写构建公式”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
(Leah 与母亲延续外婆音乐记忆 )
The next weekend, Mom baked chocolate cookies in the kitchen—Grandma’s recipe. ____________________, (令莉娅意外的是)she also found a vintage music box, which played their shared tune._______________________________________________________________________________.(从妈妈灿烂的笑容来看，很明显她正沉浸在喜悦之中) ____________________,(出于激动) Leah grabbed the sheet music, and they began to head to the old but familiar attic, ready to play. _________________________________________(莉娅心中满是暖意), recalling Grandma’s laughter.
As they played, ___________________________________________________________________________
(最初的激动渐渐褪去，取而代之的是平和的幸福感). The cookies’ aroma mixed with the music, filling the air. By the time they finished, ___________________________________________(母女俩都满心满足 ), knowing this little tradition would keep Grandma close forever.
实战运用
To Leah’s surprise
both were bursting with contentment
Judging from Mom’s bright smile, it was evident she was trapped in joy
Out of excitement
Leah was overwhelmed with warmth
the initial excitement faded away and was replaced with calm happiness
方法总结
总结：情绪描写作为连接原文与续写、作者与读者的“情感纽带”，不仅能让续写内容更具感染力，更能从根本上提升文本的完整性、逻辑性与思想深度。通过情绪描写，能展现人物隐藏的性格特质、内心世界，让原本可能“扁平”的角色变得有血有肉，更具记忆点。情绪描写通过“具象化细节”，将抽象的情感转化为读者可感知的“生理反应、动作、环境氛围”，打破“作者叙述”与“读者感受”的壁垒，让读者从“旁观者”变为“参与者”，产生深度共鸣，让读后续写既有“逻辑的骨架”，又有“情感的血肉”。
情绪的起因
情绪的后果
情绪的把持
情绪的溢出
情绪的外露
情绪的变化
情绪的升腾
Thank you!