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Unit 5
Unit 5 A delicate world
Drafting a lecture
To read the passage and find out why Fanjing Mountain made it onto UNESCO World Heritage List
To draft a lecture about Fanjing Mountain
What do you know about Fanjing Mountain
Fanjing Mountain, which is 2,493 meters above sea level, is located in Tongren City, Guizhou Province. The scenery there is beyond description and there exists a variety of valuable plants and animals. Apart from the impressive scenery, Fanjing Mountain, one of the five most famous Buddhist holy sites, has a good number of temples in typical Chinese style. Thanks to its special features, it was placed on the World Heritage List in July, 2018.
Read the passage and answer the questions.
1. Where is Fanjing Mountain Why is it significant
Fanjing Mountain is located in Guizhou Province. It is significant because it represents one of the country’s great achievements in environmental protection.
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2. Why was Fanjing Mountain selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List
The main reason for its inclusion is its biological diversity, with approximately 50 endangered plant and animal species within its protected area.
演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。它可以用来交流思想、感情,表达主张、见解,也可以用来介绍自己的学习、工作情况和经验。演讲稿具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用,它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众,使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
演讲稿
开头:好的开头能够紧紧地抓住听众的注意力,为整场演讲的成功打下基础。常用的开头有点明主题、交代背景、提出问题等。
称呼:最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况,选用 Fellow students, Distinguished guests, Mr. Chairman, Honorable judges等。
演讲稿的结构多分称呼、开头、正文和结尾四个部分。
正文:
它是整篇演讲的主体,必须有重点、有层次。
由于演讲材料是通过口头表达的,为了便于听众理解,各段落应上下连贯,段与段之间有适当的过渡和呼应。
结尾:
它是演讲内容的收束,起着深化主题的作用。
结尾的方法有归纳法、引文法、反问法等。归纳法是概括一篇演讲的中心思想,总结强调主要观点;引文法则是引用名言警句,升华主题,留下思考;反问法是以问句引发听众思考和对演讲者观点的认同。此外,演讲稿的结尾也可以用感谢、展望、鼓舞等语句作结,使演讲能自然收束,给人留下深刻印象。
Complete the outline to organise your lecture draft based on the information in Activity 5. Do online research if necessary.
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Opening:
1) greeting
2) introduction to the topic: ______________________
Reason for selection: ____________________________ Other information: _____________________________ Conclusion: ___________________________________ Q&A
以精彩的开场来引起读者注意
Want to ... Please come to ...
... is nothing but interesting.
... the best ... you’ll ever have.
Would you like to ...
... is an interesting place to visit.
If you love ..., please pay a visit to ...
介绍地理位置
I'd like to introduce ... to you. It is China's first ..., which lies in ...
It's my great honour / pleasure to share information about ... with you, which is located in ... and is China's first ... as well.
..., ... meters above sea level, is located in ...
Located in ..., ... is ... meters above sea level.
… lies in ..., and it is ... meters above sea level.
具体介绍入选理由
Having existed for ... years, ... was discovered in ...
It is a good display of ...
Dating back ... years and found unexpectedly in ..., ... is regarded as ...
... species have been discovered here, providing ... for the study of ...
With... species collected so far, ... has offered ... for the study of ...
With the development of ..., more ... will be discovered.
Scientists are optimistic about discovering more ... in the near future.
说明申遗成功的意义
... was added to the World Heritage List in ..., filling the blank of China's ...
In ..., ... was declared a World Natural Heritage Site, ending China's lack of ...
总结陈述
I do believe a trip to ... would be a feast (盛宴) for your eyes.
There’s no doubt that a trip to ... will be a truly unforgettable experience.
Wish you a nice trip!
I do believe it’s well worth a visit.
Once you visit it, you will never forget it.
You’ll have a good time there, I promise you!
The Wonders of Fanjing Mountain
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm very happy to be here to give a short lecture.
Have you ever heard of Fanjing Mountain Or have you ever visited it If you haven't, you soon will! Fanjing Mountain lies in Tongren, Guizhou Province with an elevation of about 2,570 metres. It is the highest peak of the Wuling Mountain range in south-west China. Fanjing Mountain was added to the UNESCO World Heritage List in 2018.
Greeting
Introduction to the topic
The Fanjingshan Nature Reserve was established in 1978 and represents one of the country's greatest achievements in environmental protection. The rich biodiversity of the Wuling Mountain range is the principal reason for Fanjing Mountain's inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage prising the largest subtropical primeval beech forest, the region is home to 2,000 species of plants, such as the endangered Chinese dove tree. Endangered animal species that can be found on Fanjing Mountain and its surrounding mountain range include the Chinese giant salamander, forest musk deer and grey snub-nosed monkey.
Reasons for selection
Fanjing mountain is of course also renowned for the breathtaking views from its summit—or, more accurately “summits”, as there are three of these! And when night falls leaving this magnificent scenery in darkness, the Mushroom Stone, one of the many strange rock formations, is illuminated so that visitors can still marvel at the wonders of Fanjing Mountain.
All explains why Fanjing Mountain earned its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for your listening! Now, does anyone have any questions
Other information
Conclusion
Q & A
Remember to check your writing after you finish and exchange drafts between you and your partner. Pay attention to the following aspects:
□Punctuation
□Spelling
□Grammar
□Choice of words
□Style (formal/informal)
□Structure
Self-review
Peer review
What expressions do you use to avoid repetition
How can you improve your writing
What does your partner think of the structure of your writing
What suggestions does your partner give to improve your writing
Work in pairs. Make improvements to each other's lecture drafts and share them with the class.
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Now think about how well you understood the features of a lecture, and what you should pay attention to when drafting a lecture.
你校学生会将面向外国留学生举办一场有关世界自然遗产的小型专题讲座。作为主讲人之一,请你根据所给提示用英语写一篇讲座文稿,介绍于2013年被列入《世界遗产名录》(World Heritage List)的新疆天山(Xinjiang Tianshan)。
地理位置 新疆维吾尔自治区(Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region)
入选理由 1. 地貌(landform)类型丰富,自然景观优越;
2. 体现了新疆天山的生态演化过程;
3. 众多珍稀濒危物种的栖息地。
申遗成功的意义 1. 有利于新疆的快速发展;
2. 有利于保护这一人类共有的珍贵资源。
Good morning, everyone. It's my honour to deliver a lecture on Xinjiang Tianshan. It is located in Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region of China.
Either its varied landforms or superior landscape would be enough to justify its popularity among tourists. What's more, the ecosystem there presents an outstanding example of the ecological evolution process. Xinjiang Tianshan is moreover an important habitat for some rare and endangered species.
The adding of Xinjiang Tianshan to the World Heritage List in 2013 has accelerated the development of Xinjiang and offered better protection for this charming and valuable resource that belongs to all humankind.