2026届高考英语二轮复习：2025年全国高考英语一卷读后续写课件(共24张PPT)

(共24张PPT)
高考英语读后续写教学 -
A Heated Gathering and a Cooled Relationship
Language knowledge: Learn to use important phrases like “count on,” “put myself in his shoes,” and “rather than.”
Writing skills: Practice continuing a story from a given first sentence. The story should be logical and full of emotion.
Emotional attitude: Learn the importance of family communication and empathy, and develop a positive way to resolve conflicts.
Learning objectives
Key Points and Difficulties
Use what you’ve learned to write a story that is logically reasonable and rich in language.
Think about how the characters feel, and make sure their feelings change in a way that seems real and believable.
Naturally use the phrases and sentence patterns you have learned in your story.
Show the characters’ thoughts and feelings clearly.
题目要求：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault.

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With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
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导入与回顾:
Q: Have you ever had a quarrel with your family members over a small thing
How did you solve it
人物: I(叙事者), my wife, my brother, Toby (the dog)
冲突: The author didn’t want the energetic dog Toby inside the house, which led to his brother leaving unhappily.
现状: Two months have passed without contact. I began to feel guilty, especially after considering his brother’s difficult situation (losing his wife, health issues).
短语闯关：你能填对吗？
1. My brother didn’t ____________ (出现) at my birthday party last night.
2. We need to _____________ (耗尽) all our time to prepare for the exam.
3. It’s important to ______________________________ (设身处地) others to understand their feelings.
4. I didn’t ___________ (预料到) so many people coming to the event.
5. The baby almost ___________ (撞倒) the glass of water.
6. After a long talk, we finally_________________ (修复关系). A sense of _________ (如释重负) washed over us.
7. He is a____________________ (形影不离的伙伴) to his grandfather.
show up
use up
put yourself in someone's shoes
count on
knocked over
patched things up
relief
constant companion
句型仿写 (1) -- ...rather than...
原句: Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. （最终，我哥哥决定离开，而不是强行争执。）
结构: 主语 + 决定/选择 + 做A rather than 做B
仿写示例:
最终，我决定向他道歉，而不是等他的电话。
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她选择把钱省下来买新自行车，而不是花在零食上。
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Eventually, I decided to apologize to him rather than wait for his call.
She chose to save her money for a new bike rather than spend it on snacks.
句型仿写 (2) --suggested... but... resisted, thinking...
原句: My wife suggested I (should) get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. (我妻子建议我联系我哥哥，但我拒绝了，心想他应该先打电话。)
结构: A建议B(应该)做……，但B拒绝了，心想……仿写示例:
我朋友建议我和她共用雨伞，但我拒绝了，心想我可以跑回家。
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我父亲建议我主修理科，但我拒绝了，心想我对艺术更感兴趣。
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My friend suggested I (should) share the umbrella with her, but I resisted, thinking I could run home quickly.
My father suggested I (should) major in science, but I resisted, thinking I was more interested in art.
句型仿写 (3) --Unexpectedly...
原句: Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. (出乎意料的是，晚饭后天气变了。开始下雨了，大家都进了屋里。)结构: 出乎意料地，在[某事件]后，[某事发生了]。开始[发生变化]并且[导致结果]。仿写示例:
出乎意料的是，我们离开电影院后，开始下起了倾盆大雨，我们不得不等出租车。_______________________________________________________________________
出乎意料的是，下半场后，我们最好的队员受伤了。我们队开始变得困难，并且输掉了比赛。
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Unexpectedly, after we left the cinema, it started to pour and we had to wait for a taxi.
Unexpectedly, after the first half, our best player got injured. It started to become difficult for our team and we lost the game.
情节发展与写作指导 -- 第一段续写分析 (Paragraph 1):
“I realized it was me who was at fault.”_________________________________
Q1: What exactly was his fault
Q2: How would he feel at this moment
Q3: What details can we add to show his guilt
replay the scene in his mind, the memory kept haunting him, realize Toby was the only family he had left.
He was insensitive, didn’t put himself in his brother’s shoes.
Guilty, regretful, ashamed.
情节发展与写作指导 -- 第二段续写分析 (Paragraph 2):
“With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.” ________________
Q1: How did he feel on his way to his brother’s house
Q2: What happened when the door opened Describe the brother’s expression and Toby’s reaction.
Q3: What did the narrator say to apologize
Q4: How did the brother react Did he forgive him
Nervous, worried, heart racing.
a look of surprise, Toby wagged his tail
say sorry from the bottom of my heart, admit my mistake.
soften his tone, invite me in, share a cup of tea.
范文赏析
I realized it was me who was at fault. The memory of that rainy night and my brother’s disappointed face kept haunting me. I had been so selfish and failed to put myself in his shoes. Toby was his constant companion who kept him going after his wife passed away. My pride had left him little choice but to leave. I knew I had to swallow my pride and make things right.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. My heart was racing as I knocked. He opened the door slowly, with a look of surprise. Toby was there, wagging his tail happily. “I’m sorry,” I said, handing him the biscuits. “I was wrong. I shouldn’t have forced the issue that day.” He stared at me for a second, then his face softened. “Come in,” he sighed. We sat down, shared the biscuits, and talked for a long time, finally patching things up.
写作任务与评价
1. 根据两段段首句和课堂讨论的提纲，进行完整的续写创作（约150词）。
2.同伴互评： 学生两人一组，交换作文，重点检查：
情节是否连贯合理？
是否使用了至少3个本课所学的核心短语或句型？
是否有生动的细节描写？
学生作业示例一
I realized it was me who was at fault. The thought that I had hurt my brother, who was already suffering from health issues and the loss of his wife, made me feel deeply ashamed. I replayed the awkward moment in my mind. I had only cared about the order of my house but ignored his feelings. Toby was not just a pet; he was my brother’s family and the one who kept him going. I decided to swallow my pride and take the first step to apologize.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. My heart was beating fast as I rang the bell. When he opened the door, he looked at me in silence, which made me more nervous. “I’m sorry,” I said, my voice trembling. “I was wrong. I should have put myself in your shoes.” Seeing the biscuits and my sincere apology, his serious expression finally softened. He invited me in, and we talked for a long time. Toby sat beside us, wagging his tail. The rift between us began to heal.
维度 原文 点评与分析 升级建议
语法与用词 全文无拼写与语法错误。 语言准确性高，时态统一，为流畅的阅读体验奠定了基础。 可在个别处使用更精确的词汇以增强表现力。
词汇运用 ...made me feel deeply ashamed. “deeply ashamed” 已能准确传达情感。 可使用 “overwhelmed with guilt” 来加深程度。
swallow my pride 习语使用恰当、地道。 无需修改。
the rift between us began to heal 比喻 (“rift”) 生动贴切，是高级表达的体现。 无需修改。
AI评价 Deepseek
维度 原文 点评与分析 升级建议
句式结构 The thought that I had hurt my brother... made me feel... 宾语从句使用正确，有效丰富了句子结构。 无需修改。
I had only cared about... but ignored... 并列连词使用得当，清晰地表达了内在的冲突与对比。 无需修改。
Seeing the biscuits..., his... expression... softened. 现在分词短语作状语，使动作衔接紧密，描写生动。 无需修改。
He invited me in, and we talked for a long time. 句子正确但略显平淡，有提升空间。 1. (使用现在分词表伴随结果) He invited me in, and we talked for a long time, finally clearing up the misunderstanding.
2. (使用独立主格丰富细节) He invited me in, with Toby sitting quietly beside us.
维度 原文 点评与分析 升级建议
逻辑与连贯 ...I arrived at my brother’s door. My heart was beating fast... 动作与心理描写的衔接自然流畅。 可增加一个过渡词，使紧张情绪的递进更明显：...I arrived at my brother’s door. My heart was beating fast, and with a deep breath, I rang the bell.
情感表达 ...he looked at me in silence, which made me more nervous. 通过环境和心理描写来烘托情感，手法成熟。 可以进一步描绘沉默的质感，如：...he looked at me in a heavy silence that seemed to amplify my anxiety.
学生作业示例二
I realized it was me who was at fault. I think I am too selfish. My brother feel very sad because his wife died. And I not let his dog in. Toby is very important to him. I want to say sorry to him. I decided to go to his house.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. I very nervous. I knock at the door. My brother open the door. He see me and don’t say anything. I give he the biscuits and say “I’m sorry.” Then he said “It’s okay.” We are happy.
AI评价 Deepseek
主要问题：时态混乱；主谓不一致；代词错误；词汇量有限，多为最基础的表达。未能有效使用课文中学到的核心短语。句子多为简单句，且多为“主谓宾”结构，显得单调、零散。缺乏连接词，逻辑不流畅。
评语: 文章仅能传达基本信息，在语言丰富性和表现力上严重不足。
原文 问题分析 升级表达
I realized it was me who was at fault. 语法正确但表达稍显口语化。 I realized that I was the one at fault.
I think I am too selfish. 表达直接，但“I think”减弱了忏悔的力度。 Looking back, I see how selfish I had been.
My brother feel very sad... 主谓不一致，应用第三人称单数。 My brother was grieving the loss of his wife...
And I not let his dog in. 严重语法错误，缺少助动词，时态不对。 ...yet I had refused to let his dog inside.
原文 问题分析 升级表达
Toby is very important to him. 表达简单，可以更生动。 Toby is a great comfort to him.
I want to say sorry to him. 表达口语化，不够正式。 I was determined to apologize to him.
I arrived at my brother’s door. 时态应为过去完成时，表示“到达”先于“敲门”。 I had arrived at my brother’s door.
I very nervous. 缺少谓语动词。 I was very nervous.
I knock at the door. 时态错误，应用过去时。 I knocked on the door.
My brother open the door. He see me... 动词未用过去式。 My brother opened the door. He saw me...
...and don’t say anything. 时态和助动词错误。 ...but didn’t say a word.
I give he the biscuits... 代词“he”应用宾格“him”；动词时态错误。 I handed him the biscuits...
We are happy. 时态应为过去时；表达过于简单。 We were both filled with relief and happiness.
评价维度 示例1 示例2
语言准确性 较高，几乎无错误 较低，多处基础语法错误
词汇丰富度 使用大量高级词汇和课文短语 词汇量有限，表达单一
句式多样性 运用从句、分词等复杂结构 全是简单句，且结构零散
整体效果 连贯、生动、有感染力 生硬、枯燥、缺乏表现力
Homework
1. 背诵8-10个本节课你认为最有用的短语。
2. 根据同学和老师的反馈，修改并润色你的续写，形成终稿。
Thank You!
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