2026届高考英语二轮复习：作文 用英语介绍历史人物 投稿 课件(共28张PPT)

(共28张PPT)
评讲应用文写作——投稿
2023 全国甲卷
A Historical Figure
Learning objectives:
1.理解并掌握中华优秀传统文化和社会主义先进文化;
2.用英语讲述中国古代和现代的故事，向世界展示
中华文明和体现中国精神的优秀文化;
3.传承并弘扬中华优秀传统文化，强化文化自信。
2023全国甲卷英语作文
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
你校举办以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位历史人物为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:
1.人物事迹;
2.意义;
3.启示。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step 1 审题 (4 elements)
1.文体
2.人称
3.时态
4.内容要点
—— 投稿
——第三人称为主，第一人称为辅
—— 一般过去时、一般现在时
第三人称介绍历史人物，第一人称叙述得到的启示；
——人物介绍、意义、启示
（夹续夹议）
Step 2 谋篇 (Structure)
Step 3 Choose a historical figure
Who
Most familiar
Most influential
Emperor
Qin Shihuang
Confucius
Li Bai
Step 3 Choose a historical figure
Zheng He
Yuan Longping
Lin Qiaozhi
Step 4. Basic knowledge of Confucius
Birthplace
When
Achievements
His influence
Qufu, Shangdong Province
the Spring and Autumn Period
global civilization
Major work:
Philosophy:
a scholar, philosopher and educator
peace; harmony; five virtues(仁义礼智信)
1. household
2. scholar
3. philosopher
4. conflict
5. peace
6.harmony
7. philosophy
8.countless
9.Confuciusnism
10. virtue
adj. 家喻户晓的
n.学者
Step 5.Vocabulary 词汇
n.哲学家
n.冲突
n.和平
n.和谐
n.哲学;哲学体系
adj.数不清的
n.儒家思想
n.美德
Step 6. Lexical Chunk 语块
1.春秋战国时期
2.处于交战状态
3专注于，集中于
4.仁义礼智信(B3U2 workbook)
5.对...有深刻的影响
6.全球文明
7.弘扬
8.为··做贡献
9.共同的未来
(be) at war
have a profound impact on
global civilization
the Spring and Autumn Period
Benevolence(Ren),Righteousness
(Yi),Propriety (Li),Wisdom(Zhi), and Fidelity(Xin),
focus on
carry forward
contribute to (doing) sth.
a shared future
Step 7 Sentence Pattern句型
2.There is no doubt that···毫无疑问
3. 部分倒装句：Not only ···，but also···
　　　　　　　
4. sb. firmly believed that···某人坚信，深信···
1.There be···有···
Step 8 Translation 翻译
在中国历史上有数不清的家喻户晓的历史人物，其中我想要介绍孔子
—— 一位学者，哲学家和教育家。
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
孔子出生于山东曲阜，生活在春秋时代。春秋时代，许多小国
处于交战状态。为了结束冲突，他发展了儒家思想，希望能带来和平与和谐。他的哲学专注于五种美德，包括仁、义、礼、智、信。
毫无疑问他的思想对全球文明有着深远的影响。我们不仅深受鼓舞，还坚信要弘扬儒家思想并且为建设共同的未来做贡献。
Group Work
Group 1
Group 2
Group 3
Group 4
Step 9 Polish the Sentences
句式升级
1、在中国历史上有数不清的家喻户晓的历史人物。
→用介词+whom引导的定语从句改写
Among them, I would like to introduce a historical figure——Confucius, a scholar,philosopher and educator.
他们当中，我想要介绍一位家喻户晓的历史人物——孔子，一位学者，哲学家和教育家。
There are countless household historical figures in Chinese history,among whom I would like to introduce a historical figure——Confucius, a scholar,philosopher and educator.
There are countless household historical figures in Chinese history.
2、孔子出生于山东曲阜，生活在春秋时代。
春秋时代，许多小国经常处于交战状态。
Born in Qufu,Shandong province,Confucius lived in the Spring and Autumn Period.
In the Spring and Autumn Period, many small states were often at war.
→用when引导的定语从句合成一句话
Born in Qufu Shandong Province, Confucius lived in the Spring and Autumn Period when many small states were often at war.
3、为了结束冲突，他发展了儒家思想。
他希望带来和平与和谐。
In order to end the conflicts,he developed Confucianism.
He hoped to bring peace and harmony.
In order to end the conflicts,he developed Confucianism,
hoping to bring peace and harmony.
→用v-ing做状语合成一句话
One Possiple Version
There are countless household historical figures in Chinese history, among whom I'd like to introduce Confucius, a scholar,philosopher and educator.
Born in Qufu, Shandong Province, Confucius lived in the Spring and Autumn Period when many small states were often at war. In order to end the conflicts, he developed Confucianism, hoping to bring peace and harmony.His philosophy focuses on five virtues, including Benevolence(Ren),Righteousness(Yi),Propriety(Li),Wisdom(Zhi)
and Fidelity(Xin).
There is no doubt that his ideas have a profound impact on global civilization.Not only are we deeply inspired,but also firmly believe that
we should carry forward Confuciusnism and contribute to building a shared future.
Critical Thinking
Would you like to be an educator like Confucius Why or why not
学生佳作
学生佳作
学生佳作
学生佳作
在中国历史上有数不清的家喻户晓的历史人物，其中我想要介绍袁隆平
——“杂交水稻之父”。（There be ..., the ''father of hybrid rice"）
There are countless household historical figures in Chinese history,
among whom I'd like to introduce Yuan Longping--- "the father of
hybrid rice".
Homework
Translation
1930年出生于北京，袁隆平生活于饥饿的年代。(Born in```, a time of hunger)
Born in 1930 in Beijing, Yuan Longping lived in a time of hunger.
他说，“我毕生的追求是让所有的人远离饥饿”，所以他选择去西南农院大学研究农业。(the Southwest Agriculture College)
He said,"My lifelong pursuit is to keep all the people away from hunger.",so he chose to study agriculture in the Southwest Agriculture College.
1953年毕业后，他致力于研究杂交水稻，去提高水稻的产量。(be devoted to, output)
After graduation in 1953, he was devoted to studying
the hybrid rice to raise the output of the rice.
经过他的不懈努力(intense effort)，最终培养出了第一株杂交水稻，大大提高了农民的产量。
Through his intense effort, he developed the first
hybrid rice , expanding the farmers' output greatly.
袁隆平不在乎名和利(celebrity and fame)。
他是多么伟大、无私奉献的科学家啊！(What a/an+ adj. +n. +主+谓！)
Yuan Longping cared little for celebrity or fame.
What a great, selfless and devoted scientist he was!
正是袁隆平这种好品质深深打动了我。（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
我想像袁隆平一样做一个勤劳的、对国家有贡献的人。
（hardworking，devoted）
It is his good qualities that deeply affected me.
I'd like to be a hardworking and devoted person like Yuan
Longping.
There are countless household historical figures in Chinese history,
among whom I'd like to introduce Yuan Longping--- "the father of
hybrid rice".
Born in 1930 in Beijing, Yuan Longping lived in a time of hunger.He said,"My lifelong pursuit is to keep all the people away from hunger.". After graduation in 1953, he was devoted to studying hybrid rice to raise the output of the rice.Through intense effort, he developed the first hybrid rice , expanding the output greatly.Yuan Longping cared little for celebrity or fame.What a great, selfless and devoted scientist he was!
It is his good qualities that deeply affected me.I'd like to be a
hardworking and devoted person like Yuan Longping.