(共26张PPT)
Unit 1
Reading for Writing
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Internet Addiction
网络上瘾
Bullying霸凌
Harmful Habit不良习惯
Lack of support from family
缺乏家人支持
Depression心情抑郁
Peer-Pressure
同伴压力
Teenagers may meet amounts of proplems inside and outside school.
Lead in
Lead in
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
ask parents or parents for help
向父母老师寻求帮助
write a letter to a professional adviser
talk to reliable friends
向可靠的朋友倾诉
Ask for advice on social media
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Write a letter of advice
写一封建议信
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice.
Pay attention to the necessary parts of a letter. (P18)
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Read for main idea and structure
This is a letter of .
Letter Strucure:
It has parts, they are: ___________________________________________________________________________
advice
five
date(日期), greeting(问候), body(主体), close(结束语) , signature(署名).
Activity1:Read and answer
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
Chen Lei plays ________________ too often
Chen Lei spends _______________ online.
2. What are Susan Luo's suggestions
computer games
too much time
1
2
1. Talking to his friend about his
behaviour
2. Encouraging his friend to try new
hobbies.
3. Disscuss the question together.
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Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason (s).
D. I think my advice will help.
Read for organisation
Read for language feature
I know what the problem is.
1. You wrote that you are very worried about(your friend)...
2. You think that ...
Other expressions
I’m glad/happy to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
文章开头
点明问题
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Read for language feature
B. I understand how you feel.
I understand quite well that you
are (anxious and feel terrible)...
Other expressions
1. I feel very sorry to hear/ know that ... 我很抱歉听说/知道……
2. I know you have trouble in... 我知道你有困难……
文章开头
表示理解
Read for language feature
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
Other expressions
1. I recommend that....+原因
2. I think you should...
3. Why not...
Here are some suggestions to help you.
1. It’s a good idea/choice to do sth.
2. You’d better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……
3.In my opinion, it is important for you to do... 在我看来,做..是很重要的……
文章主体段
提出建议
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Read for language feature
D. I think my advice will help.
I am sure he will listen to you,
since you are his good friend.
Other expressions
1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful.
3. I hope my advice is helpful to you.
表达愿望
文章结尾
点明问题
表示理解,告知写信目的
文章
开头
提出建议:
建议1+原因1
建议2+原因2
...
文章主体段
表达愿望
文章结尾
How to write a letter of advice
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Writing
Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
His parents won’t listen to him.
Always feels lonely
after school.
Too shy to talk to the girl he likes.
Suggestion:
Reason:
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
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Suggestion:
Reason:
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion:
Reason:
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
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Writing Time
Draft your letter according to the outline below.
Dear ,
How is everything going I am very sorry to hear that . I am writing to share some advice with you. My suggestions are as follows.
First, I think you should ,
because .
Second, I recommend that . Finally, why not Only in this way can you solve this problem.
I hope you will find my advice helpful. Best wishes for you!
Yours,
XXX
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①很抱歉知道你在...方面有些麻烦。
I am sorry to know you are having trouble (doing...)
②很高兴收到你就…征求我的建议的来信
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
③ 我的建议如下/这里有一些帮助你的建议。
My advice are as follows./Here are some tips to help you.
开头句式
主体:建议句式
①首先,为什么不... 你如果这样做的话,就会...
First(ly), why not ... If you do this, you can ...
②其次,你应该...那样,你会...
Second (ly)/What's more, you should /had better do ....That way, you will ...
③第三,...将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会...
Third(ly)/ In addition/Besides, it would be a good idea if... By doing this...
④最后但同等重要的是,我认为你可以...
Last but not least, I think it could be more beneficial if you could ... /It is also helpful/useful to do..., which will …
reason → convincing
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结尾句式
①我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
②我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你将会...
I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll ...
③如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。
I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.
④盼望你的早日回复。
Looking forward to your early reply.
Firstly,
First of all,
To begin with,
For one thing,
Secondly,
Besides,
Moreover,
What’s more,
Furthermore,
For another thing,
Finally,
At last,
In the end,
Last but not least,
To make the whole passage coherent
Linking words衔接词
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假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Lisa将于2025年作为一名交换生来中国访学,她来信向你咨询如何提高汉语水平,请你用英语给她回一封信,提出建议并说明理由。
要点提示:1. 交中国朋友 2. 听中文歌,看中国电影 3. 相互用中文通信
注意:1. 词数80字左右;
Dear Lisa,
How is everything going I am very glad to hear that . I am writing to share some advice with you. My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly, I think you should , because .
Secondlt, I recommend that . Finally, why not
I hope you will find my advice helpful. Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Lihua
Homework
Evaluation
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
The checklist
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