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活动类作文写作
CONTENTS
目录
01
准备
02
第一段:概况
03
第二段:过程+亮点
04
第三段:感受
05
写作、批改、对照
06
总结与作业
准备
01
头脑风暴:Name a few school activites you like
English - speaking activities or competitions
book - reading competitions
sports meetings
Singing Competitions
school activities
What can you do in the activities
表达类
give a speech or give presentations展示
交流类
talk about...ask and answer questions
展示类
sing songs
运动类
do sports
play table tennis
play badminton
活动效果词块
精彩类描述
wonderful
meaningful
lively
创意类描述
creative
inspiring
教育类描述
educational
enlightening
富有启发的
难忘类描述
unforgetable
memorable
个人感受描述词块
意义类感受
meaningful
难忘类感受
unforgettable
激动类感受
thrilled激动的
愉悦类感受
delighted愉悦的
第一段:概况
02
概况
用定语从句来表达
一场英语演讲比赛被举行在学校大礼堂上周五下午。主题是“我梦想的职业”,它吸引了许多同学参加。
An English-speaking competition was held in our school hall last Friday afternoon. The theme was “My Dream Job”, which attracted many students to take part in.
第二段:过程+亮点
03
过程
参与人员
谁参加了
具体行为
做了什么
活动亮点
独特、精彩之处
过程
谁参加+做了什么?
每位同学都进行了简短却令人印象深刻的演讲。有的说想成为医生,有的梦想当科学家或音乐家。
Each student gave a short but impressive speech. Some talked about becoming doctors, and others dreamed of being scientists or musicians.
过程
有何亮点?
他们的想法富有创意,英语表达也很流利。评委和观众都对他们的表现赞不绝口。
Their ideas were creative and their English was fluent. The judges and audience were amazed by their performances.
第三段:个人感受
04
第三段:感受
学到
感受
学到+感受
学到
这次活动不仅提高了我的口语能力,也让我意识到,每个人都有值得追逐的梦想。
This activity not only helped me improve my speaking skills but also made me realize that everyone has a dream worth chasing.
学到+感受
感受
这是一段难忘又有意义的经历。
It was an unforgettable and meaningful experience.
活动类作文范文
05
范文 第一段
活动概况
An English-speaking competition was held in our school hall last Friday afternoon. The theme was “My Dream Job”, which attracted many students to take part in.
范文 第二段
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活动过程
Each student gave a short but impressive speech. Some talked about becoming doctors, and others dreamed of being scientists or musicians.
活动亮点
Their ideas were creative and their English was fluent. The judges and audience were amazed by their performances.
范文 第三段
个人感受
This activity not only helped me improve my speaking skills but also made me realize that everyone has a dream worth chasing. It was an unforgettable and meaningful experience.
范文中文翻译
1 上周五下午,学校在大礼堂举行了一场英语演讲比赛,
主题是“我梦想的职业”,吸引了许多同学参加。
2 每位同学都进行了简短却令人印象深刻的演讲。
有的说想成为医生,有的梦想当科学家或音乐家。他们的想法
富有创意,英语表达也很流利。评委和观众都对他们的表现
赞不绝口。
3 这次活动不仅提高了我的口语能力,也让我意识到,每个人
都有值得追逐的梦想。这是一段难忘又有意义的经历。
练习
06
写作 批改点评
写作
请写一篇报道类英语作文,介绍一次你校组织的英语活动,包括时间、地点、内容、感受等。
活动类作文总结
07
总结
概况
活动名称
时间
地点
主题
过程+亮点
谁参加
做了什么
亮点之处
感受
学到什么,
感受,
或期待。
Assignment
Help polish your partner’s composition.
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THE END
谢谢