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Reading for writing
A Festival Experience
Period
6
What festivals can you celebrate with your families and friends?
Free talk
The Spring Festival ...
Double Seventh Festival 七夕节(农历7月7日)
Mid-autumn Festival 中秋节(农历8月15日)
Double-ninth Festival 重阳节(农历9月9日)
National Day 国庆节(10月1日)
New Year's Eve 除夕(农历12月30日)
New Year's Day 元旦(1月1日)
The Spring Festival 春节(农历1月1日)
The Lantern Festival 元宵节(农历1月15日)
Arbor Day 植树节(3月12日)
QingMing Festival 清明节(4月5日)
May Day (5月1劳动节)
The Dragon Boat Festival 端午节(农历5月5日)
Review the names of them
one of the most important festivals in Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
Have you ever heard Naadam Festival
Lead-in
archery
horse racing
wrestling
What events are mentioned in the video
Naadam Festival
Pre-reading: Prediction
What is the text type of this article
A. Argumentation(议论文)
B. Exposition(说明文)
C. Narrative(记叙文)
From the title, we can guess that the text may be about _____________________________and the writer felt___________at it.
the writer’s Naadam experience
amazed
My Amazing Naadam Experience
Task 1: What festival did the author experience
Where, When and How long
Falls on the 4th day of the six month of the lunar calendar
In China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
Where
When
How long
what
Naadam Festival
Lasts 3 days
Fast reading
A. time order
B. space order
C. logic order
Task 2:In what order did the author write the passage
And how do you know that
Tip:
To make our article more organised, we can follow the time order when writing a passage.
first person
past tense
Task 3:Match the main idea with each part.
A. My experience and some activities
C. Brief introduction of Naadam Festival
B. My satisfaction with the experience
Part1(Para.1)
Part2(Para.2-4)
Part3(Para.5)
Before
During
After
Part1: Opening part
Part2: Body part
Part3: Closing part
Guess: What should be included in each part
Tip:
We can follow certain passage structure to make our writings more organised.
Structure
When
Feelings
Feelings
Activities
A brief summary
Who
Meaning
Name
Where
Let’s try :
春节在每年的农历一月初一,通常持续15天。
The Spring festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for 15 days.
Careful Reading
How did the writer express the date of the festival
Part1: Opening part
The festival falls on ( 第几 ) day of ( 第几 ) month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for ( 多少 ) days.
Where
When
Meaning
Name
Underline the sentences that describe the activities
Careful Reading
Part2: Body part
Let’s try :
1.有的人在装饰房子,有的人在准备食物,还有的人在放爆竹。
Some were the house, some were food, and others were firecrackers
2. 孩子们正在放烟花,挥舞着双臂。
The children were setting off fireworks, their arms.
Tip:
To make our article more vivid and attractive, we can describe some activities by using a group of actions.
waving
decorating
preparing
setting off
Activities
Who
How did the writer feel after the festival
Although , . Celebrating the Festival with my friends provides a valuable chance for us to enjoy as well as be proud of our customs. I’m looking forward to the coming of the next Spring Festival.
feeling tired
尽管感到很累,我还是极其高兴。和朋友们庆祝这个节日给我们提供了享受以及对自己的习俗感到自豪的宝贵机会,我期待即将到来的春节
I was extremely happy
Let’s try :
Part3: Closing part
Feelings
Careful Reading
exciting; amazing; moved; enjoyed;surprised; worried; tired; satisfied;can’t wait...
Underline the sentences or words that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
How did the writer express feelings and emotions for us
Tip:
To hold readers’ attention, we can add sensory details and our feelings to our articles
Careful Reading
Summary
How to write a festival experience
Write in { } parts (部分)
Tell events in { } order(顺序)
Add your{ }
Write in { }(人称);in{ } tense(时态)
3
past
time
feelings
Describe some interesting { }
activities
first person
Writing
As one of the most popular in China, the Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar.
Part1:
Topic sentence:
作为中国最受欢迎的传统节日之一,春节是在农历的1月1日。
traditional festivals
I still remember how my family celebrated the (节日) last year.
Part2 :
Part3:
我仍然记得我的家人去年是如何庆祝春节的。
节日的经历让我意识到家庭的重要性和激励我花更多的时间陪伴家人。
The festival experience the importance of family and inspired me to spend more time with my family.
made me realize
1. 描写节日时, 主要写出节日名称、节日的重要性、节日日期以及活动等。
2. 描写庆祝节日经历时, 主要描写活动和心情。
Share one of your festival experiences .
写作任务
Outline
The name of the festivals/celebation: .
1 The topic and my feelings
2 How I prepared for the festival
3 The festival activities
4 A summary of my festival experience
Make notes of your ideas in the table.
Main idea of each para Details Feelings
Writing
A Festival Experience:
Part 1. (Opening)
________Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on ______. It is a great time for us to __________.
Part 2. (Body)
I remember celebrating _______ with ____ this/ last year. We enjoyed a lot of activities. ____ (某段time), _____________(activity 1). _____(某段time), _______ (activity 2). _____ (某段时间time), _______(activity 3).
Part 3 (Closing)
It was a really _______ festival experience and I felt ______.
Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist
to give feedback on your partner's draft.
Is the writing well-organised
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragrpah
Does each paragraph include the necessary details
Does the writer describe his/her feelings and
emotions
Does the writer use the -ing form correctly in the
writing
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors
Let’s recommend and share excellent compositions
Showtime
Writing
The Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most popular traditional festivals in China, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. It is a great occasion for families to get together.
I still remember my family celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival last year. During the day, we prepared all the dishes for a great feast and bought several types of mooncakes. As darkness fell, all my family enjoyed the delicious mooncakes, various fruits and other tasty food while admiring the shining moon. Over dinner, we talked about what was going on with us recently.
The festival experience made me realize the importance of family and inspired me to spend more time with my family.
1. Search more information about Naadam festival to have better knowledge of it.
2.Polish your writing.
Homework
Homework
THANKS!