写作主题一 进展咨询
——确定写作要点
（2025 全国二卷）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进度；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
Best wishes，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.交际礼仪与语气把控能力差而失分
本篇写作考查学生能否用礼貌、得体的语言与外教沟通，避免生硬或冒犯性表达，体现跨文化交际中的尊重意识。部分学生使用过于生硬的表达，如“Why haven’t you finished the article？”，忽略对外教的礼貌尊重，不符合邮件交际礼仪。
2.核心信息传递缺乏完整性而失分
检验是否能准确覆盖“询问文章进展”和“提醒交稿时间”两大核心任务，有的学生漏提“询问进展”或“提醒交稿时间”核心内容，或对交稿时间表达不明确，如：只说“Please submit it soon.”，未体现“提醒”的明确性， 因而失分。
3.逻辑衔接薄弱而失分
两部分内容缺乏自然过渡，如直接生硬拼接，显得突兀。
错误示例：How is your article？ The deadline is next week.Please send it.
分析：两句内容直接拼接，缺少过渡语（如“By the way”“Meanwhile”），行文生硬突兀。
——规范答题架构
咨询信，又称询问信，是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for the coming competition.So I’m writing to consult you about it.
②I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information concerning it.
③To fully enjoy our holiday， I am writing to make some inquiries about our travel arrangements.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——咨询用语
①I’d like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
②Could you be so kind as to inform me of the time arrangement of the sports meeting？
③If there is anything else that needs special attention， please inform me in advance at your convenience.
④As a foreign student， I am wondering if there are any special requirements or additional fees that I should be aware of.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期盼回复
①Your prompt response would be greatly appreciated.
②If possible， please reply to me at your earliest convenience.
③I would highly appreciate it if you could generously share with me your opinion.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Chris，
Thank you for agreeing to contribute to our school newspaper.We’re eager for your insights into Canadian sports.I am writing to check on the progress of your contribution.【感谢投稿，点明邮件目的】
I would like to remind you that the deadline for submitting the article is approaching.We would love to feature your article in our school newspaper as planned.Please send your piece to schoolnewspaper @ by June 16 if you have already completed it.Don’t hesitate to turn to me if you have any questions.I hold the firm belief that your expertise and rich experience will make the article both informative and interesting.【提醒交稿时间，表达坚定信心】
Thanks for your efforts. Looking forward to your reply.【感谢付出，期望回复】
Best wishes，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
假定你是李华，得知某国际学校将举办为期两周的“跨文化交流体验营”，想了解更多信息。请你给该校负责人写一封信，内容包括：
（1）体验营的报名截止日期；
（2）活动中是否有语言培训课程；
（3）费用包含哪些项目。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Principal，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作主题一 进展咨询
勤演练
Dear Principal，
I’m Li Hua， a senior high school student.I’ve heard about your two－week “Cross－cultural Exchange Camp” and am interested in joining it.I’m writing to ask for some information.I wonder about the deadline for registration.It’s also important for me to know if there are language training courses in the camp.Besides， I’d like to know what the fee covers.
I would be most grateful if you could spare the time to reply at your earliest convenience.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3 / 3(共16张PPT)
写作主题一 进展咨询
——确定写作要点
（2025·全国二卷）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个
月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内
容包括：
（1）询问进度；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
Best wishes，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1. 交际礼仪与语气把控能力差而失分
本篇写作考查学生能否用礼貌、得体的语言与外教沟通，避免生硬或
冒犯性表达，体现跨文化交际中的尊重意识。部分学生使用过于生硬
的表达，如“Why haven’t you finished the article？”，忽略对外教
的礼貌尊重，不符合邮件交际礼仪。
2. 核心信息传递缺乏完整性而失分
检验是否能准确覆盖“询问文章进展”和“提醒交稿时间”两大核心
任务，有的学生漏提“询问进展”或“提醒交稿时间”核心内容，或
对交稿时间表达不明确，如：只说“Please submit it soon.”，未体现
“提醒”的明确性， 因而失分。
3. 逻辑衔接薄弱而失分
两部分内容缺乏自然过渡，如直接生硬拼接，显得突兀。
错误示例：How is your article？ The deadline is next week.Please send
it.
分析：两句内容直接拼接，缺少过渡语（如“By theway”
“Meanwhile”），行文生硬突兀。
——规范答题架构
咨询信，又称询问信，是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面
的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for the coming
competition.So I’m writing to consult you about it.
②I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some
specific information concerning it.
③To fully enjoy our holiday， I am writing to make some inquiries
about our travel arrangements.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——咨询用语
①I’d like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether
accommodation is included.
②Could you be so kind as to inform me of the time arrangement of the
sports meeting？
③If there is anything else that needs special attention， please inform me
in advance at your convenience.
④As a foreign student， I am wondering if there are any special
requirements or additional fees that I should be aware of.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期盼回复
①Your prompt response would be greatly appreciated.
②If possible， please reply to me at your earliest convenience.
③I would highly appreciate it if you could generously share with me
your opinion.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Chris，
Thank you for agreeing to contribute to our school newspaper.We’re eager for your insights into Canadian sports.I am writing to check on the progress of your contribution.【感谢投稿，点明邮件目的】
I would like to remind you that the deadline for submitting the article
is approaching.We would love to feature your article in our school
newspaper as planned.Please send your piece to schoolnewspaper
@ by June 16 if you have already completed it.Don’t
hesitate to turn to me if you have any questions.I hold the firm belief that
your expertise and rich experience will make the article both informative
and interesting.【提醒交稿时间，表达坚定信心】
Thanks for your efforts. Looking forward to your reply.【感谢付
出，期望回复】
Best wishes，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
假定你是李华，得知某国际学校将举办为期两周的“跨文化
交流体验营”，想了解更多信息。请你给该校负责人写一封信，
内容包括：
（1）体验营的报名截止日期；
（2）活动中是否有语言培训课程；
（3）费用包含哪些项目。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Principal，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Principal，
I’m Li Hua， a senior high school student.I’ve heard about your
two-week “Cross-cultural Exchange Camp” and am interested in joining
it.I’m writing to ask for some information.I wonder about the deadline
for registration.It’s also important for me to know if there are language
training courses in the camp.Besides， I’d like to know what the fee
covers.
I would be most grateful if you could spare the time to reply at your
earliest convenience.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
THANKS
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