写作主题六 活动邀请
——确定写作要点
（2022 新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写一封邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1.节目介绍；
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.开头冗余：无效信息干扰核心目的
本邀请信的开头应开门见山自我介绍，并简单说明写信目的。有些学生介绍过于详细，非必要背景会模糊写信意图。如：
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program Talk and Talk at our school broadcasting station.Our school broadcasting station is well received among the students， enriching our school lives.I’m writing to invite you to attend our program.
冗余点：中间对广播站的评价（well received ...lives）与邀请目的无关，导致开头拖沓。
2.时间表述：语法规范与礼貌协商失衡
①语法错误：介词冗余
at 9 am on the next Sunday→at 9 am next Sunday（美式英语）或 at 9 am on Sunday next week（英式英语）。
当时间名词被this/that/last/next/every修饰时，介词on/in/at需省略。
②语气生硬：单向规定而非协商
Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome.
该句隐含 “要求对方必须遵守” 的命令语气，违背邀请信的礼貌原则。
建议用委婉请求：We hope you can join us at 3 pm this Friday.Please let us know if this time suits you.
3.要点模糊：话题宽泛导致执行性缺失
节目介绍可概括，但访谈话题需具体可展开，避免抽象指令。如：
宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested in.
具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students’ communication skills in English.
——规范答题架构
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——诚挚相邀，传递热情
①（2025 石家庄市教学质量检测）I’m writing to invite you to join our Music Club’s upcoming musical appreciation session in the Music Hall at 2 pm this Saturday.
②（2025 东北三省教育教学联合体联考）I feel honoured to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the competition at 3 o’clock in the afternoon next Friday.On behalf of our school， I’m writing to invite you to participate.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——活动内容，详细安排
①Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
②（2025 东北三省教育教学联合体联考）As scheduled， the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building.Therefore， if it is convenient for you， how about meeting at the school gate at 2：45 on Friday afternoon？
③（2025 东北三省教育教学联合体联考）There is no doubt that you will be greatly impressed with the excellent skills of the players and have a better understanding of this sport.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期待接受邀请，早日回复
①I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
②（2025 石家庄市教学质量检测）I’d be grateful if you could confirm your attendance by Friday.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Caroline，
I’m Li Hua，the student who is in charge of the English programme Talk and Talk.I’m writing to invite you to attend our programme and be our honored guest.【自我介绍＋表明写信目的】
Focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers，our programme is committed to enhancing students’ understanding of domestic and international affairs.【节目介绍】 The topic of the coming show，which is scheduled to be held next Friday，is environmental protection in our daily life.【访谈时间和话题】 If you are available then，we are waiting for your coming.If not，please let me know so that we can make an adjustment.【询问时间是否合适】
I’d appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.【表达希望接受邀请】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2025 贵阳七校下学期联考）假定你是光明中学学生会主席张华，你校将举办校园艺术节，主题为“传统与新生（Tradition and Renewal）”。请你代表学生会给来自英国的交换生Bill写一封邀请信，邀请他来参加。内容包括：
（1）艺术节的举办时间和地点；
（2）活动的安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作主题六 活动邀请
勤演练
Dear Bill，
On behalf of the Students’ Union， I’m writing to invite you to the upcoming School Art Festival， whose theme is “Tradition and Renewal”.The details of the event are as follows.
The event is scheduled for next Thursday at the school auditorium.The opening ceremony begins at 2 pm with a welcome speech delivered by the headmaster.Then the audience can appreciate artworks ranging from awe－inspiring traditional paintings to ground－breaking installations and New Media artworks， after which you can even create your own innovative 3D sculptures on the spot!
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours，
Zhang Hua
3 / 3(共17张PPT)
写作主题六 活动邀请
——确定写作要点
（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and
Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写一封邮件邀请她做一次访
谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1. 开头冗余：无效信息干扰核心目的
本邀请信的开头应开门见山自我介绍，并简单说明写信目的。有些学
生介绍过于详细，非必要背景会模糊写信意图。如：
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program Talk and Talk at our school
broadcasting station.Our school broadcasting station is well received
among the students， enriching our school lives.I’m writing to invite
you to attend our program.
2. 时间表述：语法规范与礼貌协商失衡
①语法错误：介词冗余
at 9 am on the next Sunday→at 9 am next Sunday（美式英语）或 at 9 am
on Sunday next week（英式英语）。
当时间名词被this/that/last/next/every修饰时，介词on/in/at需省略。
冗余点：中间对广播站的评价（well received ...lives）与邀请目的无
关，导致开头拖沓。
②语气生硬：单向规定而非协商
Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome.
该句隐含 “要求对方必须遵守” 的命令语气，违背邀请信的礼貌
原则。
建议用委婉请求：We hope you can join us at 3 pm this Friday.Please let
us know if this time suits you.
3. 要点模糊：话题宽泛导致执行性缺失
节目介绍可概括，但访谈话题需具体可展开，避免抽象指令。如：
宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested
in.
具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese
students’ communication skills in English.
——规范答题架构
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真
挚，不要强人所难。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——诚挚相邀，传递热情
①（2025·石家庄市教学质量检测）I’m writing to invite you to join
our Music Club’s upcoming musical appreciation session in the Music
Hall at 2 pm this Saturday.
②（2025·东北三省教育教学联合体联考）I feel honoured to tell you
that our school badminton club will hold the competition at 3 o’clock in
the afternoon next Friday.On behalf of our school， I’m writing to
invite you to participate.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——活动内容，详细安排
①Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this
activity are as follows.
②（2025·东北三省教育教学联合体联考）As scheduled， the match
will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building.Therefore，
if it is convenient for you， how about meeting at the school gate at 2：
45 on Friday afternoon？
③（2025·东北三省教育教学联合体联考）There is no doubt that you
will be greatly impressed with the excellent skills of the players and have a
better understanding of this sport.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期待接受邀请，早日回复
①I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into
consideration.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
②（2025·石家庄市教学质量检测）I’d be grateful if you could
confirm your attendance by Friday.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Caroline，
I’m Li Hua，the student who is in charge of the English programme
Talk and Talk.I’m writing to invite you to attend our programme and be
our honored guest.【自我介绍＋表明写信目的】
Focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers，our programme is
committed to enhancing students’ understanding of domestic and
international affairs.【节目介绍】 The topic of the coming show，which
is scheduled to be held next Friday，is environmental protection in our
daily life.【访谈时间和话题】 If you are available then，we are waiting
for your coming.If not，please let me know so that we can make an
adjustment.【询问时间是否合适】
I’d appreciate it if you could take my invitation into
consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.【表达希望接
受邀请】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2025·贵阳七校下学期联考）假定你是光明中学学生会主席张
华，你校将举办校园艺术节，主题为“传统与新生（Tradition and
Renewal）”。请你代表学生会给来自英国的交换生Bill写一封邀请
信，邀请他来参加。内容包括：
（1）艺术节的举办时间和地点；
（2）活动的安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Bill，
On behalf of the Students’ Union， I’m writing to invite you to
the upcoming School Art Festival， whose theme is “Tradition and
Renewal”.The details of the event are as follows.
The event is scheduled for next Thursday at the school auditorium.
The opening ceremony begins at 2 pm with a welcome speech delivered by the headmaster.Then the audience can appreciate artworks ranging
from awe-inspiring traditional paintings to ground-breaking installations
and New Media artworks， after which you can even create your own innovative 3D sculptures on the spot！
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.
Looking forward to your attendance！
Yours，
Zhang Hua
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看
