写作主题七 事情告知
——确定写作要点
（2024 新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.未覆盖全部要点
题目明确要求包含 “完成的作品” 和 “感想”，部分学生可能仅描述作品（如 “画了一棵树”），但未具体说明作品内容（如树的环境、色彩特点等），或感想部分过于笼统（如 “很开心”），缺乏细节支撑（如自然如何激发灵感、与传统课堂的对比等）。
2.内容逻辑混乱
未按 “背景引入→作品描述→感想总结” 的逻辑展开，可能出现感想与作品脱节（如先谈感想再描述作品），或插入无关内容（如过度描写去公园的过程），导致结构松散。
——规范答题架构
告知信分为两类：一是告知某人有某事将要发生；二是回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——说明写信目的
①（2025 湖北省十一校第二次联考）I’m writing to share with you a popular Chinese movie I saw during the Spring Festival.I had the pleasure of watching a fantastic cartoon titled “Ne Zha 2”.
②I’m Li Hua， chairman of the Students’ Union.I’m writing to inform you of the school’s class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Day holiday.
③There will be a book－sharing activity and I’m writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——告知具体事项
①（2025 湖北省十一校第二次联考）In the morning， we’ll visit Guangfu Ancient City， where you can see well－preserved traditional architecture and experience ancient Chinese culture.
②（2025 湖北省十一校第二次联考）Then we’ll go to Handan Museum to learn more about the city’s 3，000－year history.
③（2025 湖北省十一校第二次联考）After lunch， we’ll enjoy the beautiful scenery at Congtai Park， a perfect place to relax.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达希望
①If you want to know detailed information/anything else， please don’t hesitate to contact me.
②（2025 湖北省十一校第二次联考）Please remember to wear comfortable walking shoes and bring a jacket as it might get cool in the evening.Looking forward to showing you around.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Chris，
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.【写信的目的】
We were asked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery，I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond，surrounded by blooming flowers.The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being bathed in nature not only sparked my creativity but also reduced my school pressure.I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.【介绍完成的作品】
In a word， it was not just an art class；it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.I do hope that you can join us in the next art outing class.【你的收获及感受；期盼回复】
Yours，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2025 辽宁省部分重点中学协作体模拟）假定你是李华，为了培养学生关爱他人、服务社会的意识，你校将于下周末举办一次走进社区实践活动。你希望你的交换生朋友Mike一起参加，请写信告知他。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）邀请体验。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作主题七 事情告知
勤演练
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a community－based practical activity next weekend， with the primary aim of cultivating students’ awareness of caring for others and serving society.
During the activity， we plan to pay a visit to the nursing home in the nearby neighbourhood.We’ll assist senior citizens with various daily chores， including cleaning their houses and buying groceries.Additionally， we’ve arranged some entertainment games， which can offer them a lot of happiness.
This is a great opportunity to make a great difference to the community and gain a better understanding of local life.I sincerely hope you can join us in this meaningful activity.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
3 / 3(共16张PPT)
写作主题七 事情告知
——确定写作要点
（2024·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上
了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容
包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last
Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1. 未覆盖全部要点
题目明确要求包含 “完成的作品” 和 “感想”，部分学生可能仅描
述作品（如 “画了一棵树”），但未具体说明作品内容（如树的环
境、色彩特点等），或感想部分过于笼统（如 “很开心”），缺乏细
节支撑（如自然如何激发灵感、与传统课堂的对比等）。
2. 内容逻辑混乱
未按 “背景引入→作品描述→感想总结” 的逻辑展开，可能出现感
想与作品脱节（如先谈感想再描述作品），或插入无关内容（如过度
描写去公园的过程），导致结构松散。
——规范答题架构
告知信分为两类：一是告知某人有某事将要发生；二是回复某人关于
某事的询问。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——说明写信目的
①（2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考）I’m writing to share with you
a popular Chinese movie I saw during the Spring Festival.I had the
pleasure of watching a fantastic cartoon titled “Ne Zha 2”.
②I’m Li Hua， chairman of the Students’ Union.I’m writing to
inform you of the school’s class schedule adjustment during the coming
Labor Day holiday.
③There will be a book-sharing activity and I’m writing to inform you
of some relevant details.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——告知具体事项
①（2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考）In the morning， we’ll visit
Guangfu Ancient City， where you can see well-preserved traditional
architecture and experience ancient Chinese culture.
②（2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考）Then we’ll go to Handan
Museum to learn more about the city’s 3，000-year history.
③（2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考）After lunch， we’ll enjoy the
beautiful scenery at Congtai Park， a perfect place to relax.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达希望
①If you want to know detailed information/anything else， please don’t
hesitate to contact me.
②（2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考）Please remember to wear
comfortable walking shoes and bring a jacket as it might get cool in the
evening.Looking forward to showing you around.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Chris，
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
【写信的目的】
We were asked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.
Inspired by the fantastic scenery，I decided to create a watercolor painting
of the small bridge over the park’s pond，surrounded by blooming
flowers.The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being bathed in
nature not only sparked my creativity but also reduced my school
pressure.I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.【介绍完成的作品】
In a word， it was not just an art class；it was a moment of
connection with nature that I truly cherished.I do hope that you can join us
in the next art outing class.【你的收获及感受；期盼回复】
Yours，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2025·辽宁省部分重点中学协作体模拟）假定你是李华，为了
培养学生关爱他人、服务社会的意识，你校将于下周末举办一次走进
社区实践活动。你希望你的交换生朋友Mike一起参加，请写信告知
他。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）邀请体验。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a community-
based practical activity next weekend， with the primary aim of
cultivating students’ awareness of caring for others and serving society.
During the activity， we plan to pay a visit to the nursing home in the
nearby neighbourhood.We’ll assist senior citizens with various daily
chores， including cleaning their houses and buying groceries.
Additionally， we’ve arranged some entertainment games，which
can offer them a lot of happiness.
This is a great opportunity to make a great difference to the
community and gain a better understanding of local life.I sincerely hope
you can join us in this meaningful activity.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
THANKS
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