写作主题八 短文投稿
——确定写作要点
（2024 1月浙江卷）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括：
1.介绍这项运动；
2.说明推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Stand Up and Exercise， Everybody!
——探究失分原因
1.未明确推荐运动或介绍模糊
题目要求 “推荐一项运动”，部分学生可能未点明具体运动名称（如仅泛泛谈 “课间运动”），或介绍时缺乏关键特征（如推荐 “跳绳” 却未说明其形式、器材等）。
I recommend a fun sport for break time.You can do it with friends.
（未说明运动名称及特点，信息无效）
2.理由空洞或牵强
理由缺乏针对性，如仅用 “有益健康”“有趣” 等笼统表述，未结合课间场景（如时间短、场地有限）分析。 如推荐 “篮球” 却未提及需要多人配合或场地限制，导致理由不具说服力。
普通理由：Running is good.It makes you healthy.
优化理由：Running requires no equipment and can be done quickly during breaks， effectively boosting energy for the next class.
——规范答题架构
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应新颖、有趣、实用等。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——点明目的
①（2025 河北省全国统一考试模拟）Last summer， I had the opportunity to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing， a place that has always fascinated me.
②（2025 辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Last Saturday， our school’s Green Club organized a meaningful volunteer activity at a local park， aiming to raise our awareness of environmental protection.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——介绍基本情况
①（2025 辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Twenty students participated in cleaning up litter and planting trees.Armed with gloves and trash bags， we worked in teams to collect scattered waste and sort recyclables.
②（2025 辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Additionally， we set up posters promoting eco－friendly lifestyles.
③（2025 河南省名校联盟冲刺）Together we visited places of interest in Australia and took part in many interesting activities at the camp.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——收获和感悟
①（2025 河北省全国统一考试模拟）It deepened my understanding and appreciation of the country’s rich heritage and made me proud to be part of such an ancient civilization.
②（2025 辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）I felt proud to take real action for our planet and realized everyone’s small efforts can make a big difference.
③（2025 辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）This experience deeply impressed me.Not only did we contribute to environmental protection， but we also learned the importance of teamwork.
——研读满分佳作
Stand Up and Exercise， Everybody!
Aiming to ensure the physical health of us students，I propose the effective exercise：“Stand Up and Stretch.”This simple routine involves standing up from your desk，stretching your arms，legs and back，and taking a few deep breaths.It’s a quick and easy way to relieve stress and improve your mood.【介绍推荐的运动】
This exercise is recommended for several reasons.To start with，it relieves back pain and stiffness from sitting too long.Moreover，it can improve your focus and concentration，making it easier to stay engaged in class.Last but not least， it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle，which is essential for overall wellbeing.【推荐理由】
It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.You’ll be glad if you give it a shot!【呼吁积极参与】
——冲击满分作文
（2025 烟台三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报发起以“Green Actions， Creative Solutions”为主题的校园环保创意征集活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍你的创意；
（2）预期产生的影响。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Green Actions， Creative Solutions
写作主题八 短文投稿
勤演练
Green Actions， Creative Solutions
To promote sustainability， I propose the Book Recycling Program， a project designed to transform waste into wonder!
As part of my program， I will place attractively decorated bins on campus to facilitate the collection of used books.Reusable books can go to our free book corner while damaged books can become materials for artworks， which will be exhibited monthly to highlight the creativity.
We can save piles of books through this simple solution yearly while raising students’ eco－awareness.By giving damaged books new life， we’ll build a greener and more creative campus.Join me in turning trash into treasure!
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写作主题八 短文投稿
——确定写作要点
（2024·1月浙江卷）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports
and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Stand Up and Exercise， Everybody！
——探究失分原因
1. 未明确推荐运动或介绍模糊
题目要求 “推荐一项运动”，部分学生可能未点明具体运动名称（如
仅泛泛谈 “课间运动”），或介绍时缺乏关键特征（如推荐 “跳
绳” 却未说明其形式、器材等）。
I recommend a fun sport for break time.You can do it with friends.
（未说明运动名称及特点，信息无效）
2. 理由空洞或牵强
理由缺乏针对性，如仅用 “有益健康”“有趣” 等笼统表述，未结
合课间场景（如时间短、场地有限）分析。 如推荐 “篮球” 却未提
及需要多人配合或场地限制，导致理由不具说服力。
普通理由：Running is good.It makes you healthy.
优化理由：Running requires no equipment and can be done quickly
during breaks， effectively boosting energy for the next class.
——规范答题架构
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应
新颖、有趣、实用等。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——点明目的
①（2025·河北省全国统一考试模拟）Last summer， I had the
opportunity to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing， a place that has
always fascinated me.
②（2025·辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Last Saturday， our school’s
Green Club organized a meaningful volunteer activity at a local park，
aiming to raise our awareness of environmental protection.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——介绍基本情况
①（2025·辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Twenty students participated in
cleaning up litter and planting trees.Armed with gloves and trash bags，
we worked in teams to collect scattered waste and sort recyclables.
②（2025·辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）Additionally， we set up posters
promoting eco-friendly lifestyles.
③（2025·河南省名校联盟冲刺）Together we visited places of
interest in Australia and took part in many interesting activities at the
camp.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——收获和感悟
①（2025·河北省全国统一考试模拟）It deepened my understanding
and appreciation of the country’s rich heritage and made me proud to be
part of such an ancient civilization.
②（2025·辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）I felt proud to take real action
for our planet and realized everyone’s small efforts can make a big
difference.
③（2025·辽宁省名校联盟模拟卷）This experience deeply impressed
me.Not only did we contribute to environmental protection， but we
also learned the importance of teamwork.
——研读满分佳作
Stand Up and Exercise， Everybody！
Aiming to ensure the physical health of us students，I propose the
effective exercise：“Stand Up and Stretch.”This simple routine
involves standing up from your desk，stretching your arms，legs and
back，and taking a few deep breaths.It’s a quick and easy way to relieve
stress and improve your mood.【介绍推荐的运动】
This exercise is recommended for several reasons.To start with，it
relieves back pain and stiffness from sitting too long.Moreover，it can
improve your focus and concentration，making it easier to stay engaged in
class.Last but not least， it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle，which
is essential for overall wellbeing.【推荐理由】
It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
You’ll be glad if you give it a shot！【呼吁积极参与】
——冲击满分作文
（2025·烟台三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报发起以“Green
Actions， Creative Solutions”为主题的校园环保创意征集活动。请你
写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍你的创意；
（2）预期产生的影响。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Green Actions， Creative Solutions
参考范文：
Green Actions， Creative Solutions
To promote sustainability， I propose the Book Recycling Program，
a project designed to transform waste into wonder！
As part of my program， I will place attractively decorated bins on
campus to facilitate the collection of used books.Reusable books can go to
our free book corner while damaged books can become materials for
artworks， which will be exhibited monthly to highlight the creativity.
We can save piles of books through this simple solution yearly while
raising students’ eco-awareness.By giving damaged books new life，
we’ll build a greener and more creative campus.Join me in turning trash
into treasure！
THANKS
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