写作主题九 演讲文稿
——确定写作要点
（2024 全国甲卷改编）英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇演讲稿。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
——探究失分原因
1.文章逻辑层次不清晰
①时间线混乱：介绍中国交通发展时，未按照古代、近代、现代的时间顺序展开，导致历史发展脉络模糊。
②内容混杂无分类：比如在描述铁路发展时，突然插入公路建设的例子，破坏了单一交通方式发展介绍的连贯性，听众无法系统地了解各类交通方式的发展历程。
2.结尾忽略与主题相照应
①草草收尾无升华：结尾只是简单陈述 “中国交通发展得很好”，没有将主题进行升华，无法给听众留下深刻印象。
②未体现未来展望：未能紧扣 “发展” 这一核心主题，无法展现中国交通不断前进的态势。
——规范答题架构
演讲稿通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿一般是议论文，在语言使用上一定要简洁明了、层次清晰并具有说服力。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——引出主题
①（2025 德州十校模拟）Good morning! Today， I’d like to share my experience in protecting our community environment.
②（2025 安徽省A10联盟模拟）Good morning， dear teachers and fellow students.I’m Li Hua.It’s my great honor to stand here and share with you how to stay motivated in school.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——陈述演讲主题
①（2025 德州十校模拟）Last weekend， I joined a volunteer team to clean up the park.Upon our arrival， we engaged in various activities.
②（2025 广州毕业班综合测试）Moreover， bookstores often serve as cultural hubs， hosting events and fostering community engagement.
③（2025 广州毕业班综合测试）What can’t be ignored is that digital reading brings us physical as well as psychological damages especially to the young.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——发出呼吁，表达感谢
①（2025 安徽省A10联盟模拟）Let’s keep our motivation alive and strive for a better tomorrow!
②（2025 德州十校模拟）Every little effort counts， and let’s take action to make our community a cleaner and greener place.Thanks for listening!
——研读满分佳作
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
I feel so honored to stand here to talk about the remarkable development of transport in China.As for the topic，we will explore three specific advancements：shared bicycles，new energy vehicles，and high－speed trains.【提出演讲的主题】
Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transport for short trips.Besides， China’s high－speed railway network has connected various cities effectively， greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development.Currently， new energy vehicles have entered our lives， helping reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science.Therefore， we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.【详细说明中国的交通发展状况及意义】
Thank you for listening!
——冲击满分作文
（2025 湖北省新高考信息卷）假定你是李华，你打算参加你校即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国故事” 的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍你要讲的中国故事；
（2）你喜欢它的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Good morning， everyone!
Thank you for your attention.
写作主题九 演讲文稿
勤演练
Good morning， everyone!
I’m honored to stand here for the “Telling Chinese Stories in English” speech contest.I’d like to share the classic tale of Ne Zha Conquers the Dragon King.
Ne Zha is a well－known character from the Chinese literary masterpiece Ne Zha Conquers the Dragon King.Ne Zha， a fearless young hero， is against the powerful Dragon King to protect his fellow people from floods.Despite facing overwhelming hardships， he never backs down.His courage and selflessness deeply moved me.
This story not only showcases traditional Chinese values but also reminds us that everyone can be a hero by standing up for justice.Let’s spread such inspiring stories to the world!
Thank you for your attention.
2 / 3(共16张PPT)
写作主题九 演讲文稿
——确定写作要点
（2024·全国甲卷改编）英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给
图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇演讲稿。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in
China.
——探究失分原因
1. 文章逻辑层次不清晰
①时间线混乱：介绍中国交通发展时，未按照古代、近代、现代的时
间顺序展开，导致历史发展脉络模糊。
②内容混杂无分类：比如在描述铁路发展时，突然插入公路建设的例
子，破坏了单一交通方式发展介绍的连贯性，听众无法系统地了解各
类交通方式的发展历程。
2. 结尾忽略与主题相照应
①草草收尾无升华：结尾只是简单陈述 “中国交通发展得很好”，没
有将主题进行升华，无法给听众留下深刻印象。
②未体现未来展望：未能紧扣 “发展” 这一核心主题，无法展现中
国交通不断前进的态势。
——规范答题架构
演讲稿通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿一般是议论
文，在语言使用上一定要简洁明了、层次清晰并具有说服力。具
体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——引出主题
①（2025·德州十校模拟）Good morning！ Today， I’d like to
share my experience in protecting our community environment.
②（2025·安徽省A10联盟模拟）Good morning， dear teachers and
fellow students.I’m Li Hua.It’s my great honor to stand here and
share with you how to stay motivated in school.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——陈述演讲主题
①（2025·德州十校模拟）Last weekend， I joined a volunteer team to
clean up the park.Upon our arrival， we engaged in various activities.
②（2025·广州毕业班综合测试）Moreover， bookstores often serve
as cultural hubs， hosting events and fostering community engagement.
③（2025·广州毕业班综合测试）What can’t be ignored is that
digital reading brings us physical as well as psychological damages
especially to the young.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——发出呼吁，表达感谢
①（2025·安徽省A10联盟模拟）Let’s keep our motivation alive and
strive for a better tomorrow！
②（2025·德州十校模拟）Every little effort counts， and let’s take
action to make our community a cleaner and greener place.Thanks for
listening！
——研读满分佳作
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in
China.
I feel so honored to stand here to talk about the remarkable
development of transport in China.As for the topic，we will explore three
specific advancements：shared bicycles，new energy vehicles，and high-
speed trains.【提出演讲的主题】
Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly
means of transport for short trips.Besides， China’s high-speed railway
network has connected various cities effectively， greatly saving travel
time and promoting economic development.Currently， new energy
vehicles have entered our lives， helping reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life
and showed the power of science.Therefore， we need to study hard and
make a contribution to the further development of transportation.【详细
说明中国的交通发展状况及意义】
Thank you for listening！
——冲击满分作文
（2025·湖北省新高考信息卷）假定你是李华，你打算参加你校
即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国故事” 的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演
讲稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍你要讲的中国故事；
（2）你喜欢它的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Good morning， everyone！
Thank you for your attention.
参考范文：
Good morning， everyone！
I’m honored to stand here for the “Telling Chinese Stories in
English” speech contest.I’d like to share the classic tale of Ne Zha
Conquers the Dragon King.
Ne Zha is a well-known character from the Chinese literary masterpiece Ne Zha Conquers the Dragon King.Ne Zha， a fearless young hero， is against the powerful Dragon King to protect his fellow people from floods.Despite facing overwhelming hardships， he never backs down.His courage and selflessness deeply moved me.
This story not only showcases traditional Chinese values but also
reminds us that everyone can be a hero by standing up for justice.Let’s
spread such inspiring stories to the world！
Thank you for your attention.
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看
