热考话题二 人与自我——成长蜕变
2021年6月浙江卷通过个人薪水话题，强调个人成长和对劳动的认识。2022年新高考卷讲了大卫克服障碍，战胜自我，最终参加比赛的故事。2023年新课标卷讲了作者在老师的鼓励下参加写作比赛，最终获奖的故事。2024年1月浙江卷讲述把大目标分成若干个小目标，然后一个接一个地去解决问题。
一、谋好篇——续写情节安排
二、写好句——细节佳句积累
（一）成长前的烦恼
1.自我怀疑
As I walked into the classroom， my heart raced with nervousness （我因紧张心跳加速）.I couldn’t get rid of the feeling （无法摆脱这种感觉） that my classmates were judging me， and I struggled to find my place among them.Doubts and insecurities hovered in my mind （怀疑和不安全感在我的脑海中盘旋）， making it difficult for me to focus on anything else.The fear of rejection weighed heavily on my shoulders， causing me to doubt every decision I made （导致我对自己的每一个决定都产生怀疑）.
情节走向：走进教室，心跳加速→感到同学们在评判我→心中充满怀疑和不安全感→无法专注于其他事情→怀疑自己的每一个决定
2.负面情绪
I burst out of the door （冲出门）， tears streaming down my cheeks （眼泪顺着脸颊流淌）.Before Mom stopped me， I stormed into my room and slammed the door （砰地关上了门） behind me.I threw myself down on the bed （扑到床上） and my body was shaking with sobs （身子随着哭泣抖动） and buried my face in the pillow （用枕头蒙住脸）.
情节走向：我冲出门，泪流满面→冲进房间关上门→扑到床上哭起来
（二）成长中的蜕变
1.勇敢坚定促蜕变
To everyone’s joy， he reached the final line and ranked twentieth.It was no more important whether he won first place or not （他是否赢得第一名不再重要）.It was his bravery and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally （正是他的勇敢和坚定的信念最终使一些不同寻常的事情发生了）.He conquered his fears and broke the physical and mental barriers （突破了身心障碍） that had once held him back.
情节走向：他到达终点→是否赢得第一名不再重要→勇敢和坚定的信念让不同寻常的事情发生了→他克服了恐惧并突破了身心障碍
2.战胜恐惧促蜕变
The crowd watched in awe， their applause and cheer ringing through the hall （掌声和欢呼声响彻整个大厅）.Facing the overwhelming response （面对极其强烈的反应）， I knew that I had conquered my fears.Yes， the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing if we have belief in ourselves （相信自己） and never give up our dreams （永不放弃梦想）.
情节走向：人们鼓掌并欢呼→我战胜了自己的恐惧→相信自己，永不放弃梦想
3.积极心态促蜕变
Participating in this long－distance race posed a tremendous challenge （构成极大的挑战） for David.He understood that he needed to overcome not only his physical limitations but also the psychological fears that held him back.Nevertheless， he chose to confront these obstacles head－on （选择直面这些障碍） rather than shy away from them.He began to enjoy the challenge （开始享受这个挑战）， enjoying the opportunity to test his limits and prove to himself what he was truly capable of achieving.
情节走向：参加比赛是一个极大的挑战→需要克服身体和心理上的障碍→选择直面障碍→开始享受挑战
（三）成长后的感悟
1.Now， I am proud of what I look like and much happier， because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are （是你的个性决定你会成为什么样的人）.
2.Not until then did I realize that difficulties are an important part of life and that they can actually serve as valuable opportunities for growth and self－improvement （成为成长和自我提升的宝贵机会）.
3.The journey to success is not smooth （通往成功的道路不是平坦的）.It is full of challenges and difficulties， which we should be brave to face （我们应该勇敢面对）.As long as we don’t give up and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties， we will achieve our goals finally.
4.It’s never too late to go for your dreams （追逐你的梦想）.As long as you grasp every opportunity （抓住每个机会） and take full advantage of it， you will stand a chance to realize your dreams （实现你的梦想）.
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热考话题二 人与自我——成长蜕变
2021年6月浙江卷通过个人薪水话题，强调个人成长和对劳动的
认识。2022年新高考卷讲了大卫克服障碍，战胜自我，最终参加比赛
的故事。2023年新课标卷讲了作者在老师的鼓励下参加写作比赛，最
终获奖的故事。2024年1月浙江卷讲述把大目标分成若干个小目标，
然后一个接一个地去解决问题。
一、谋好篇——续写情节安排
二、写好句——细节佳句积累
（一）成长前的烦恼
1. 自我怀疑
As I walked into the classroom， my heart raced with nervousness （我
因紧张心跳加速）.I couldn’t get rid of the feeling （无法摆脱这种
感觉） that my classmates were judging me， and I struggled to find my
place among them.Doubts and insecurities hovered in my mind （怀疑
和不安全感在我的脑海中盘旋）， making it difficult for me to focus on
anything else.The fear of rejection weighed heavily on my shoulders，
causing me to doubt every decision I made （导致我对自己的每一个
决定都产生怀疑）.
情节走向：走进教室，心跳加速→感到同学们在评判我→心中充满怀
疑和不安全感→无法专注于其他事情→怀疑自己的每一个决定
2. 负面情绪
I burst out of the door （冲出门）， tears streaming down my cheeks
（眼泪顺着脸颊流淌）.Before Mom stopped me， I stormed into my
room and slammed the door （砰地关上了门） behind me.I threw
myself down on the bed （扑到床上） and my body was shaking with
sobs （身子随着哭泣抖动） and buried my face in the pillow （用枕头
蒙住脸）.
情节走向：我冲出门，泪流满面→冲进房间关上门→扑到床上哭起来
（二）成长中的蜕变
1. 勇敢坚定促蜕变
To everyone’s joy， he reached the final line and ranked twentieth.It
was no more important whether he won first place or not （他是否赢
得第一名不再重要）.It was his bravery and strong faith that could
make something unusual happen finally （正是他的勇敢和坚定的信念
最终使一些不同寻常的事情发生了）.He conquered his fears and broke
the physical and mental barriers （突破了身心障碍） that had once
held him back.
情节走向：他到达终点→是否赢得第一名不再重要→勇敢和坚定的信
念让不同寻常的事情发生了→他克服了恐惧并突破了身心障碍
2. 战胜恐惧促蜕变
The crowd watched in awe， their applause and cheer ringing through
the hall （掌声和欢呼声响彻整个大厅）.Facing the overwhelming
response （面对极其强烈的反应）， I knew that I had conquered my
fears.Yes， the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing if we have
belief in ourselves （相信自己） and never give up our dreams （永不
放弃梦想）.
情节走向：人们鼓掌并欢呼→我战胜了自己的恐惧→相信自己，永不
放弃梦想
3. 积极心态促蜕变
Participating in this long-distance race posed a tremendous challenge
（构成极大的挑战） for David.He understood that he needed to
overcome not only his physical limitations but also the psychological fears
that held him back.Nevertheless， he chose to confront these obstacles
head-on （选择直面这些障碍） rather than shy away from them.He
began to enjoy the challenge （开始享受这个挑战）， enjoying the
opportunity to test his limits and prove to himself what he was truly
capable of achieving.
情节走向：参加比赛是一个极大的挑战→需要克服身体和心理上的障
碍→选择直面障碍→开始享受挑战
（三）成长后的感悟
1. Now， I am proud of what I look like and much happier， because I
have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are （是
你的个性决定你会成为什么样的人）.
2. Not until then did I realize that difficulties are an important part of life
and that they can actually serve as valuable opportunities for growth
and self-improvement （成为成长和自我提升的宝贵机会）.
3. The journey to success is not smooth （通往成功的道路不是平坦
的）.It is full of challenges and difficulties， which we should be brave
to face （我们应该勇敢面对）.As long as we don’t give up and make
every effort to overcome all the difficulties， we will achieve our goals
finally.
4. It’s never too late to go for your dreams （追逐你的梦想）.As
long as you grasp every opportunity （抓住每个机会） and take full
advantage of it， you will stand a chance to realize your dreams （实现
你的梦想）.
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